1. Hard (4,77 stars, 532 notes)
2. meiikyuu's Normal (2,63 stars, 219 notes)

Lissette wrote:

FictionJunction YUUKA <3333

[Hard]
00:01:882 (4) - shorten by 1/4 and add note at 00:02:355 - (just a little rhythm suggestions)
00:02:829 (1) - remove this slider and add a single note at 00:02:987 - (just a little rhythm suggestions)
00:10:566 - useless timing point
00:49:882 (1) - according to your combo pattern, maybe this shouldn't be in new combo? (I understand in some parts you broke your combo pattern to mark a change in spacing, but I think this one in particular doesn't need it)
01:02:513 (1) - same here
02:08:197 (1) - same
02:18:303 (1) - same
Love it! <3

Lissette wrote:

[meiikyuu's Normal]
00:18:934 (1) - weird place to put a spinner, it also make the next slider start awkwardly, since I think that next combo should start where the spinner is actually ending @.@
03:25:724 (1) - I think this should start 1/4 beat earlier, sounds better to me

Lizbeth wrote:

hi~

[Hard]
Great map, i loved it, I have one suggestion:
00:27:934 (4) - Delete circle.

Lizbeth wrote:

[meiikyuu's Normal]
00:18:934 (1) - I agree with Lissette, where the spinner ends is where the next combo should begin in my opinion. I suggest to remove the spinner and add instead a long slider from here: 00:18:776 - 00:20:197 -
00:48:619 (4) - considering how you placed the new combos, should this be a new combo?
01:53:671 (3,1) - I think you could rearrange this better, cuz i feel the next combo should start here: 01:54:303 -
02:24:619 (4) - shouldnt be a new combo here too ? I noticed your combos in the middle of the map turned a bit longer, is there a particular reason?
03:12:619 (4) - same as above
03:17:671 (4) - same
03:47:987 (3) - same

That s all, mapset is lovely, good luck dudes or dudettes~

14:59 Doomsday: But yeah, I did play that before. playing again reminded me of old Al-Azif / Alace maps in a good way
15:02 Doomsday: lemme know when you're free, and I'll go through the map
15:03 Kite: ready
15:03 Kite: :O
15:03 Doomsday: oh sweet
15:04 Doomsday: mmkay, I'll do insane first
15:04 Doomsday: (I'm a bit rusty so forgive me :v)
15:04 Kite: okay
15:05 Kite: just adress things that really bother you
15:06 Doomsday: actually, metadata first, since the normal has the Widescreen Support box checked, and Hard doesn't
15:06 Doomsday: I don't even know if that makes much difference. haha
15:06 Kite: no idea either
15:06 Kite: just gonna apply it
15:07 Doomsday: A'ight
15:07 Doomsday: Timing looks good too
15:08 Doomsday: on insane: 00:09:461 (3,1) - not sure about this antijump, think it might be worth having the spacing even between this and 00:10:724 (1) - ?
15:09 Kite: hm
15:09 Kite: mafiamaster pointed something like that out too, not sure tough i dont see it as much of a problem
15:10 Doomsday: I didn't have a problem playing it, nope. Just a style choice is all :p
15:10 Kite: ah okay
15:13 Doomsday: 02:49:250 (2,3,1) - Similar thing here, except with the jump.
15:14 Doomsday: Think it might work better with 1,2,3 moved up towards that new combo 1. again, no problems playing, just a style thing
15:14 Kite: i can move 3 to even it out
15:14 Doomsday: or that, fair enough
15:15 Doomsday: love the hitsounding at that section btw <3
15:18 Kite: just followed what was in the song
15:18 Kite: :P
15:18 Doomsday: True. what you added still sounds great though
15:18 Doomsday: :p
15:18 Doomsday: That's about it for insane. goooooood stuff
15:19 Kite: alright
15:19 Doomsday: I don't check for inconsistent hitsounds though, just general playability stuff
15:19 Doomsday: but it sounded like nothing was missing so
15:19 Kite: thats fine
15:19 Kite: i am confident with the hitsounding on the hard
15:21 Doomsday: okay, onto normal
15:25 Doomsday: 00:42:303 (3) - I think maybe instead of this repeat, perhaps removing the repeat, and adding a circle at 00:43:566 instead might work better?
15:25 Doomsday: (guest diff territory, but I'll post here in case you want to send it to meikyuu or something, or do it yourself :v
15:26 Kite: well i got permission to make changes
15:26 Kite: and she is busy most of the time
15:26 Kite: so idk
15:26 Kite: what you prefer
15:27 Doomsday: Might as well do it yourself then. I'll probably only say a couple of things anyway
15:29 Doomsday: 02:18:303 (2) - my symmetry obsession is going mental ;_;
15:29 Doomsday: not really an issue, but it's not perfectly symmetrical if that matters. hehe
15:30 Kite: i got disconnected
15:30 Kite: =(
15:30 Doomsday: aww
15:30 Doomsday: I'll /savelog it
15:30 Kite: okay
15:31 Doomsday: did you get my last msg about 02:18:303 (2) - 
15:31 Kite: no
15:31 Doomsday: Ahh
15:31 Kite: just that something is not symmetrical
15:31 Doomsday: Yeah, my symmetry obsession is going mad ;-;
15:32 Doomsday: not an issue, but if it is, it's not quite perfect :v
15:33 Doomsday: And that's about it
15:33 Kite: fixed it
15:33 Kite: i guess
15:33 Kite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1092796
15:34 Doomsday: Looks good
15:35 Doomsday: And yeah, it's nice
15:35 Doomsday: i'll push the log if you want it
15:36 Kite: just post it in the topic 
15:36 Kite: unless there is more things i missed
15:37 Doomsday: Yeah, might as well just post :v
15:37 Doomsday: Nah, that's all that bothered me
15:37 Doomsday: metadata / timing all looks good to me so
15:38 Doomsday: tags are a bit empty I guess, but
15:38 Kite: okay