Hey, mod from my "non-japanese" Queue.
General- 01:12:006 - Why does the break start here. Move the break to the normal position, its really not needed and feels weird when playing.
Easy- I have to say, even tough you should use short combos on Easys, this is a bit too much of NC. Every 4th is fine, a max of 4-5 combo is ok, above is not.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078852 Remove the unneeded NCs.
01:21:808 (2,3) - Too far away from each other. They are almost 0,1x spacing more than the actual spacing away from each other. Please fix this.
01:01:313 (3) - , 01:30:422 (1) - , 02:26:263 (3) - Maybe you can spice this slider a little up. So much straight and symmetry here, too much. Make two curves into it to make it look a little more attractive to play and not so boring.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/107885502:13:194 (1,2,3,4) - You can spice this up as well. It's very bland at this part i have to say. So much straightness at once. Try this;
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078856Hard00:46:313 - , 01:40:966 - Tbh, i have to say, this pattern would rythmwise be better to play and also emphasizes the music better, the vocal you mapped to.
http://puu.sh/580R1.jpgNothing else, very nice!
Insane00:19:728 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:22:105 (1,2,3,4) - ,00:30:422 (1,2) - You need to fix this spacing up here. It's not right and plays weird, well it cant be played proper. Apart from being not symmetric;
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078862 this is the actuall spacing. You need to make this bigger or else its played the wrong way.
00:58:639 (5,6,7) - , 01:56:709 (1,2) - You should unstack these sliders. It feels very clustered and so glued on one spot. Spread it out a little to make it better playable. The other patterns that style play also better unstacked.
01:09:035 (1) - Very awesome (:
01:25:669 (1) - You should make a little space on the tail to make it more visible how to play. Vey clustered this slider too. Make this to improve it
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078864.
02:05:768 (3,4) - I'd say you remove these two and replace them with a 1/1 slider to fulfil the lyrcis 02:06:065 - . One by One by One ;3 Would emphasize the lyrics better and plays more cool.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078870 Ofc somehow you like.
02:09:629 (1) - , 02:12:006 (1) - Remove NC, every 4th is enough.
02:27:154 (3,1) - I dont like how you break the spacing here because of symmetry. Try to improve it a little with moving the long slider downwards. Unless its done on purpose, but then i wonder why.
02:40:818 (5,6,1) - The transition of these is bad, due to 2 straight sliders. The circle is very lost in there and out of place. Make the 5 slider curved to make it flow better so the circle doesnt play so odd.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078881 gives way better transition and flow.
You always prove that you can make a good map, mapped to the rythm properly when mapping symmetric. Very nice done!
嗯这里没必要
