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Divinyls - I Touch Myself

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Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Jarby
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 22 September 2009 at 5:41:45 PM

Artist: Divinyls
Title: I Touch Myself
BPM: 109.4
Filesize: 5443kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Larto Touches Herself (4.53 stars, 302 notes)
  2. Spin's Normal (3.41 stars, 178 notes)
  3. Velocity of Group (4.46 stars, 297 notes)
Download: Divinyls - I Touch Myself
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Velocity of Group mappers: Jar, Rena, charlesisgay, Jar.
Last edited by Jarby , edited 24 times in total.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Nice map. Get that crap out the source.

00:32:42 (6) - Ew spacing
01:15:24 (2) - This note is all weird and confusing and ew
01:35:40 ( ) - Note here
01:18:65 (5) - Finish
01:23:95 (2) - Whistle on end
01:25:31 (3) - Aren't all those reverses overdoing it? Clap on third reverse and finish on end.
01:28:86 (5) - Whistle
01:30:22 (3) - Clap
01:30:76 (5) - Finish
01:32:40 (3) - Clap
01:32:95 (5) - Finish
01:35:40 ( ) - Note here
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
Here since the beginning
awp
1. Offset: 9,940ms BPM: 109.40
2. Offset: 28,541ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 28,596ms BPM: 109.15
4. Offset: 28,610ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 34,064ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
6. Offset: 34,337ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 36,519ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
8. Offset: 37,337ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 39,246ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
10. Offset: 47,283ms BPM: 109.60
11. Offset: 69,723ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
12. Offset: 69,860ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 82,315ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
14. Offset: 83,133ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
15. Offset: 83,404ms BPM: 109.75
16. Offset: 95,133ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
17. Offset: 95,433ms BPM: 109.35
18. Offset: 105,313ms BPM: 110.00
19. Offset: 116,222ms BPM: 109.60
20. Offset: 137,025ms BPM: 109.50
21. Offset: 153,465ms BPM: 109.15
22. Offset: 171,019ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
23. Offset: 171,039ms BPM: 109.40


eh sounds fine to me

also what devilry is this; this isn't what I copypasta'd out of notepad this is some fuckin' trippy shit
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
General: A few too many whistles imo. You don't need to put a whistle on every slider :X

00:25:61 (1,1) - Not sure what to say about these. They feel kinda awkward... I would just have the first spinner (shorter) and then put notes where the chorus starts, but it's your map XP
00:36:51 (1) - Also sound awkward.
00:37:33 (3) - Perhaps end a red tick earlier?
01:00:65 (1,3,4) - The overlap is ugly. Maybe put (1) and (2) angling down from the top right, with (3) stacked on top of where (4) starts.
01:07:47 (4,5) - Can't tell which one is the slider. For people like me with shitty computers that don't use snaking sliders, you REALLY can't tell which is which. Fix plz
01:13:74 (3,4,5) - Kinda the same thing here
01:14:83 (1,2) - Sounds off, but it may just be because the timing is off everywhere. Fix with awp's timings plz
01:22:31 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Clap spam bluhh
01:23:95 (2) - Can't see the slider under the previous stream
01:29:67 (1,2,3,4,5) - Yay star! <3 But it's a little off o_o Use grid snap on the tiniest grid and fix :3
02:48:49 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Lol?

Not bad so far. I can't wait to see what this looks like when finished. This song is sexy <3

*star*
Rena-chan
Rena-chan
Derekku's modding goes here, on my part.
Some of it didn't make much sense to me, though, so I let that be.
Feel free to take a look at that, JJJ, and see if you can make sense of it. X.x

Also, star'd for awesomeness.

Download: Divinyls - I Touch Myself (JarJarJacob) [Velocity of Group].osu
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Sourcerer
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Divinyls - I Touch Myself (JarJarJacob) [Velocity of Group].osu
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
PENIS MONSTERS FROM OUTTA SPACE

Download: Divinyls - I Touch Myself (JarJarJacob) [Larto touches himself].osu
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
velocity of group

0:28:587 : I hate this spinner.... it's so unpredictable and hard.....
0:34:093 - 0:37:253 : This speed up is stupid and unpredictable (add a SB warning at least :|
2:56:523 - 2:59:677 : ^

Larto touches herself

:)

Also why do you have a SB countdown at 2:48:58 (I don't get that)

This was a ok beatmap...Nothing too bad but nothing interesting maybe it's manly becuse of the song......
*star*
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Timing:
Offset: 9,940ms BPM: 109.40 This sections goes a bit late at the end, can you try to increase BPMs by a little?
Offset: 47,283ms BPM: 109.60 This one seems to be a bit late overall. Try to decrease offset (10/15 ms i think)?
Offset: 83,404ms BPM: 109.75 As above, but i think it's something like 5ms delay
Other scetions seem ok to me, anyway i'm not a big expert of multiple sections, these are just my impressions.

- Velocity of group
03:04:20 (1) - i'd end this one at 3:08:589. It's fine as it is, but it feels better imho
Why upside-down picture? xD

- Larto touches herself (?!)
02:27:70 (1) - missing whistle at the beginning?
03:06:39 (1) - doesn't end on white tick. Intentional?

What's with the SB? I kinda didn't get the point of that, but it made me giggle (totally unexpected xD), so it's ok ^^

Cool map and funny song, Star ^^
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
01:28:870 - Add that screen shakey SB thing here too, like you did at.. 00:34:093.
02:22:504 - ^
Song plays for like 30 seconds after the last note, so you have to hit skip. If this was intended then I see no problem.

Group
00:28:596 - I'm not a fan of this 2nd spinner. It's kinda tricky+short.
00:36:566 - This 2x BPM section's kinda harsh.

Lartoooo
Nothin much.

I giggled. I may or may not be forgetting something else I had in mind. Should use that other Background for more than a thumbnail, lol. T_T
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Larto touches herself (?!) lulz
02:27:70 (1) - missing whistle at the beginning? Uh, doesn't sound so great imho
03:06:39 (1) - doesn't end on white tick. Intentional? Yep, intentional. Sounds better.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Here's a normal difficulty. Change whatever you like, I don't care.

Download: Divinyls - I Touch Myself (JarJarJacob) [Spin's Normal].osu
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Heres my mod :)

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Spin's Normal]
00:39:31 (1) + 01:34:06 (1) + 02:27:70 (1) - Would it be possible to round these out a little more? The centres in these look squashed up.

No Problems Found :)

[Velocity of Group]
00:47:01 - Maybe a note here?
01:00:96 (2) - Maybe try putting this where 01:01:51 (4)'s slider end is?
01:09:72 (4) - The timing section here is very cruel, leaving players with no idea if the slider ends due to the muted sound... I like it ^^
01:14:38 (5) - Maybe a finish?

01:57:59 (4) - Maybe try reversing this
No Problems Found :)

[Larto Touches Herself] (Really, I had no idea it went down like THAT)
No Problems Found :)

Well, it seems I can't really find anything wrong with your map. Love the storyboard elements, but the 3,2,1,GO! seems out of place to me.

Oh well, still, an awesome beatmap, you've done a good job. Starred ^^
BanchoBot
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