Asphyxia wrote:

Just remembered this, sorry for the delay orz

General thoughts

1. There seems to be some inconsistencies in your kiai-times, check this: // It was fixed after Lissette's modding, to fit the rhythm of Easy.
   
   This

   
2. Clean otherwise

Hard

1. +1 HP? It would make the diff spread maybe a bit more equal and I don't think HP7 makes it too hard. // Sorry, I think it's too stressful to this kind of difficulty.
2. 00:06:240 (5) - This could be more fitting shape wise here, try this maybe? // I think it makes the distance too far.
   
   Example

   
   Just give it more curve so it fits better with your previous slider better
3. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - Honestly, I would prefer myself see a rhythm like this here instead. I think the current one fits also but anyway: // Sorry. Even it's a second demand, I want to keep it. The flow may break if I change the structure.
   
   Example

   
4. 01:22:054 (1) - I think this sliders curve is a bit... bleh. If you'd raise the redpoint more up, it'd fit much better, like this: // Umm didn't wanted a sharp shape here.
   
   Example

   
5. 02:34:380 (1,2,3,4) - Well, I think you could use some variety here and turn these into a 1/3 stream instead? // I think it will be too hard to catch the rhythm between 02:34:380, and I've never used 1/3 stream this diff. Want to be rather consistent :3
   
   Example

   
6. The difficulty was fine, I didn't get to point out that much because this is really weird and I'm not used to mod things like this but oh well xD

Normal

1. 00:44:845 (1,2) - The flow here isn't the perfect, just move (2) a bit more to the left, a bit like this: // Fixed
   
   Example

   
   (Remember to fix the spacing between next objects)
2. 01:47:170 (5,1) - If you could make a better blanket here? If it wasn't your intention then it's fine, obviously. // Umm Will keep it :3
3. Nice!

Easy

1. I'd -1 HP, it would make the difficulty spread more equal. // Fix
2. 00:47:635 (3) - Dat ds error, plz fix // ? I don't get it. Seems equal to me.
3. Perfect xD

Sorry for the short mod, I hope it helps even a bit. GL & Take that star~

1. since you did all the 3 diffs make sure to have consistent kiai trought the diffs

1. 01:53:914 (3,4) - what about a slider here to make the rhythm simpler to beginners

1. 00:25:542 (6) - and 01:25:077 (4) - dunno lol
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:17:403 (1) - why nc? i think is not needed here
3. 00:46:473 (1,2) - what about to change this to a reverse slider here?

1. naisu diff o3o

Lally wrote:

o3o

[General]

1. since you did all the 3 diffs make sure to have consistent kiai trought the diffs // Well I've changed from Lissette's mod, but I guess I'll just turn it back.

[Easy]

1. 01:53:914 (3,4) - what about a slider here to make the rhythm simpler to beginners // Agree, Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:25:542 (6) - and 01:25:077 (4) - dunno lol // ROFL AIBAT
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:17:403 (1) - why nc? i think is not needed here // cuz it's before the kiai.
3. 00:46:473 (1,2) - what about to change this to a reverse slider here? // I think current fits the music better.

[Hard]

1. naisu diff o3o

• 
  Where is you Insane diff?
  Why you do not add Kiai Time (4) stop in 01:48:100
  You can add a circle in time 00:18:100 or 00:18:333 (becuase in sound good)
  Add in tags: Elijah Wood and Ryan Reynolds (They is played for two Hollywood phonies) Andy Samberg (TLI member)

• 
  Nice~

• 
  00:17:403 (1): Are you Serious for new NC?

• 
  00:34:612 (6,7,8,9,10,11): NC
  01:17:519 - 01:17:868: You can add something

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai, I'm Chatting you for IRC Mod but you said is busy
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112733 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/146602



[General]

• 
  Where is you Insane diff? // I didn't think it's adequate to make an insane..
  Why you do not add Kiai Time (4) stop in 01:48:100 // Wanted to stop before drums.
  You can add a circle in time 00:18:100 or 00:18:333 (becuase in sound good) // True, but it's hard to fit the song cuz the lyric's timing is a bit weird.
  Add in tags: Elijah Wood and Ryan Reynolds (They is played for two Hollywood phonies) Andy Samberg (TLI member) // Adding.

[Easy]

• 
  Nice~

[Normal]

• 
  00:17:403 (1): Are you Serious for new NC? // Hmm wanted to keep, but it seems to be annoying for a second suggestion? fixed.

[Hard]

• 
  00:34:612 (6,7,8,9,10,11): NC // I think the combo is fine enough here.
  01:17:519 - 01:17:868: You can add something // Same answer as General.

Sorry for my Mod is bad
I think is Fast to Ranked (becuase you map is Perfect all)

Good Luck~

1. 01:00:659 (2) - 끝에 클랩
2. 01:09:961 (3) - 클lap

1. 노말이지만 그래도 틱레2개 좋을듯요
2. OD가 좀 높은거 같은데 -1어떠세요?
3. 01:09:496 (5) - 항상 피니시 쓰실땐 클랩도 같이 쓰셨는데 여기도 넣어주심이?
4. 01:32:287 (6) - 여기도 클랩

1. 틱레2 이즈 베스트 핏 디스 송
2. 00:02:519 (1,2) - 이건 1/3 스냅에 맞춰야주셔야 할꺼같아요
3. 00:13:449 (5) - 이건 1/1 슬라이더 보다는 1/2 슬라이더하나하고 노트 하나가 좀더 나은거 같아요
   
   익잼플

   
4. 00:32:752 (1,2,3) - 휘슬 넣으시는게 어때요? 생각보다 괜찮은데 (다른 부분도 똑같이 고려해주세요)
5. 02:32:287 (3) - 클랩 보단 피니시가 음악과 맞는듯해요
6. 02:34:147 (4) - 파란틱에 스냅 시키셔야해요
7. 02:34:380 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더들은 1/6보다 1/8틱에 스냅 시키니까 좀더 리듬에 맞는거 같은데 이게 bpm문제인지 오프셋 문제인지 아니면 진짜 리듬이 이런건지 좀 헷갈리네요
8. 02:35:368 (3) - 이것도

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M from my queue

[Easy]

1. 01:00:659 (2) - 끝에 클랩 // sp
2. 01:09:961 (3) - 클lap // boxer

[Normal]

1. 노말이지만 그래도 틱레2개 좋을듯요
2. OD가 좀 높은거 같은데 -1어떠세요? // 음 그러네요
3. 01:09:496 (5) - 항상 피니시 쓰실땐 클랩도 같이 쓰셨는데 여기도 넣어주심이? // 네
4. 01:32:287 (6) - 여기도 클랩 // 네

[Hard]

1. 틱레2 이즈 베스트 핏 디스 송 // 저도 그럴거 같긴 한데 이 노래에서는 틱 없는게 더 깔끔해서 나은거 같아요. 오히려 틱3이 더 음악에 맞지 않나요? lol
2. 00:02:519 (1,2) - 이건 1/3 스냅에 맞춰야주셔야 할꺼같아요 // 어라? 왜 1/4이 됐지;; 수정
3. 00:13:449 (5) - 이건 1/1 슬라이더 보다는 1/2 슬라이더하나하고 노트 하나가 좀더 나은거 같아요 // 아 내 블랭킷. 수정
   
   익잼플

   
4. 00:32:752 (1,2,3) - 휘슬 넣으시는게 어때요? 생각보다 괜찮은데 (다른 부분도 똑같이 고려해주세요) // 소프트 휘슬은 소리가 약해서 잘 안어울리는것 같습니다.
5. 02:32:287 (3) - 클랩 보단 피니시가 음악과 맞는듯해요 // 음,, 저는 좀 중간에 달라져서 이상했다는 느낌이 드네요. 음악에서 뚜렷한 차이를 보이지 않아서 연타들은 다 드럼-클랩으로 통일할 생각입니다.
6. 02:34:147 (4) - 파란틱에 스냅 시키셔야해요 // 네
7. 02:34:380 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더들은 1/6보다 1/8틱에 스냅 시키니까 좀더 리듬에 맞는거 같은데 이게 bpm문제인지 오프셋 문제인지 아니면 진짜 리듬이 이런건지 좀 헷갈리네요 // 1/12 시도해 봅니다.
8. 02:35:368 (3) - 이것도 // 이건 지금꺼가 맞는듯요.

아 한국어 편하다. 일단 타이밍 문제도 있고 당장 버블은 못드리겠어요, 클랩 소리가 좀 어긋나는거 같아서, 타이밍 잘잡는 모더한테 부탁하셔서 좀더 확실히 할 필요가 있을듯해요 // 북치기 박치기 스핀복서

Lissette wrote:

[General]
I think preview time at 47522 fits more because now you can't hear the word "Threw" complete // Oh.. the rap orz Fixed
00:26:243 - to be honest I don't think is necessary this fountain here, fits more if the kiai time keeps going until 00:32:755 - // Agreed. Removed the fountains.
00:56:010 - Same
01:25:778 - Same

[Hard]
02:34:150 (4) - End this at 02:34:305 - too keep consistency with the previous sliders // Fixed

[Normal]
01:50:662 (6) - how about if you shorten 1/2 beat and add a clap here 01:50:894 - on the slider end (remember to fix spacing) // I was thinking of fitting the lyrics, but maybe I was losing consistency on rhythm selection. Fixed.