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Sonnyc

Betsuto wrote:

[Easy]
01:47:170 (2)- haed of slider .. I recommend to use soft-hitfinish here // Umm it's a custom sound, and I don't it fits here nicely.
Perfect =[]=
sorry .. I can't find any pproblem in this diff

[Normal]
00:31:589 (3)- move this slider to middle of stage (x:368 y:184) // Fixed
00:42:752 (3,4)- make it more flow it's will be better // Fixed
00:52:287 (1)- can you put this slider over this note ? 00:50:193 (3)- // It doesn't affect in game imo.
01:08:100 (3)- make it more flow // This is fine imo.
01:36:938 (2)- make this slider for beautiful curve :P // Not sure about your intention. Improved shape anyways.
01:47:170 (5)- haed of slider .. I recommend to use soft-hitfinish here // Same as Easy.

[Hard]
00:25:542 (1)- I recommend to delete drum-hitclap this note // Sorry, I think it fits the song nicely.
00:55:310 (1)- ^
01:25:077 (1)- ^
01:24:380 (1)- delete a NC ? // Deleted
01:47:403 (1)- I recommend to delete drum-hitclap this note
01:50:891 (7)- I recommend replace the note at this time and add soft-hitclap here // Following the vocal here.
01:54:845 (1)- I recommend to delete drum-hitclap this note
01:58:566 (1)- ^
02:17:170 (1)- ^
02:32:054 (1)- ^

sorry ... your map is so Perfect ; w ;
I can't find more problem here

good luck go for rank ! >w<

Priti wrote:

Woopsy it's m4m
Sorry if the mod is too short, I really don't understand this type of mapping that well.
Some tips to curving 4 point sliders better (Pointed too many of these things in this mod):
  1. Adding a fifth point right at the center makes the whole curve change, most of the time for the best if it's currently too flat.
  2. Obviously, moving the second and third points further to their direction.
  3. Making a whole new curve and lying to everyone that it's the same one but curvier.

// Firstly, I want to point out the slider you are suggesting and what I'm currently using are different curve sliders. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1255562 As you can figure out in the photo, the are apparently different, and I want to use smooth slider for this one since I prefer 5 points or more sliders for longer sliders.

General
  1. Change the combo colors you unoriginal boob :---------) // Why D: (Does it feel too Natteke?)
  2. Lower the volume when you use the echoing clap sample, It's a bit too loud atm. // Idk I think it is not the loud :#


Hard
  1. 00:05:542 (4,5) - Strange looks, making 5 curvier so it turns into a blanket might be the safest thing to do. // This is a flow breaker, but ironically I feel it flows well.
  2. 00:09:263 (5) - Looks pretty awkward due to the rotation, try a different shape that is flatter? // I think this flows the best with (6).
  3. 00:12:287 (3) - Turn off grid snap and relocate this so it perfectly covers the tail of 1. // Fixed
  4. 00:36:007 (9) - Again, turn off grid snap so you can perfectly cover it. // Fixed
  5. 00:42:054 (3) - Looks a bit too flat, try a curvier curve.
  6. 01:06:240 (6) - Looks strange, try a flatter shape and rotate it a bit anti-clockwise. // Fixed abit.
  7. 01:26:705 (3) - Moar curvez
  8. 01:42:287 (5) - ^
  9. 02:07:170 (2) - Try to make the first half rounder so the blanket is nicer. // Done
  10. 02:26:473 (4) - Move 1 tick forward, follows the vocals much better and plays better // I think the current way sounds better..
  11. 02:30:193 (5) - Moar curvezzz


Normal
  1. 00:09:961 (5) - Looks awkward as fluff, Try to make it a bit less round and thus have the straight part a bit longer. // Fixed
  2. 00:12:287 (3) - This is almost as flat as a 9 year old white girl, make it curvier~ // I like 9 year-old girl.
  3. 00:13:682 (5) - ^
  4. 00:22:519 (1) - Put the last point a few grids higher, makes it look nicer imo. // Fixed
  5. 00:29:496 - Add a circle? // I think I've mapped mostly with instruments. Not adding for now
  6. 00:40:426 (6) - Move the third point a few grids to the right so its symmetrical or just closer to being. // Umm this part was changed in another way.
  7. 00:42:752 (3) - Adding a point between the first and the second could be nice to create a cool sideways moustache slider. // Created
  8. 00:46:473 (1,2) - Manually put 1 a grid down and to the right to prevent ugly Stack Leniency shananigans. // Maybe you were meaning (1) only? Well but I'd prefer how osu is.
  9. 00:47:403 (3,4) - Same but a grid up and to the right.
  10. 00:52:287 (1) - Too round imo, move the third point a bit more down and to the right. // Fixed
  11. 01:08:100 (3) - Moar and better angle curvezzz
  12. 01:45:310 (2,3) - Manually unstack because hurr durr stack leniency.
  13. 02:00:891 (3) - Try a symmetrical curve, this is a bit strange. // Fixed
  14. 02:02:984 (1) - Why not a simple 3-point? ._. // I don't know, I forgot ;_ Maybe I wanted a lenier flow.
  15. 02:13:217 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket. // This wasn't a blanket pattern, but fixed.
  16. 02:29:961 (2,3) - Manually unstack ksjdcnxknzx
  17. 02:31:124 (4,5) - ^


Easy
  1. 00:19:728 (2) - Are these whistles intentionally there? you didn't use them like that anywhere else. // 00:24:147 Yeah, it's intentional.
  2. 00:23:449 (2) - Symmetrical curve pls. // If you meant the fourth point, changed.
  3. 00:26:240 (1) - 2flat4life
  4. 00:33:914 (1) - Try to make the first half a bit less curvy, looks too round imo. // Fixed
  5. 01:52:752 (2) - Perfectly straight sliders give me a small heart attack, maybe rotate it a bit or just use a different shape? would look better imo. // Gave a small curve to save you.
  6. 02:23:449 (3) - Again, extremely flat curve, whyyyy
Thanks for modding guys :3
Asphyxia
Just remembered this, sorry for the delay orz

General thoughts
  1. There seems to be some inconsistencies in your kiai-times, check this:
  2. Clean otherwise

Hard
  1. +1 HP? It would make the diff spread maybe a bit more equal and I don't think HP7 makes it too hard.
  2. 00:06:240 (5) - This could be more fitting shape wise here, try this maybe?
    Just give it more curve so it fits better with your previous slider better
  3. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - Honestly, I would prefer myself see a rhythm like this here instead. I think the current one fits also but anyway:
  4. 01:22:054 (1) - I think this sliders curve is a bit... bleh. If you'd raise the redpoint more up, it'd fit much better, like this:
  5. 02:34:380 (1,2,3,4) - Well, I think you could use some variety here and turn these into a 1/3 stream instead?
  6. The difficulty was fine, I didn't get to point out that much because this is really weird and I'm not used to mod things like this but oh well xD

Normal
  1. 00:44:845 (1,2) - The flow here isn't the perfect, just move (2) a bit more to the left, a bit like this:
    (Remember to fix the spacing between next objects)
  2. 01:47:170 (5,1) - If you could make a better blanket here? If it wasn't your intention then it's fine, obviously.
  3. Nice!

Easy
  1. I'd -1 HP, it would make the difficulty spread more equal.
  2. 00:47:635 (3) - Dat ds error, plz fix
  3. Perfect xD

Sorry for the short mod, I hope it helps even a bit. GL & Take that star~ 8-)
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Asphyxia wrote:

Just remembered this, sorry for the delay orz

General thoughts
  1. There seems to be some inconsistencies in your kiai-times, check this: // It was fixed after Lissette's modding, to fit the rhythm of Easy.
  2. Clean otherwise

Hard
  1. +1 HP? It would make the diff spread maybe a bit more equal and I don't think HP7 makes it too hard. // Sorry, I think it's too stressful to this kind of difficulty.
  2. 00:06:240 (5) - This could be more fitting shape wise here, try this maybe? // I think it makes the distance too far.
    Just give it more curve so it fits better with your previous slider better
  3. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - Honestly, I would prefer myself see a rhythm like this here instead. I think the current one fits also but anyway: // Sorry. Even it's a second demand, I want to keep it. The flow may break if I change the structure.
  4. 01:22:054 (1) - I think this sliders curve is a bit... bleh. If you'd raise the redpoint more up, it'd fit much better, like this: // Umm didn't wanted a sharp shape here.
  5. 02:34:380 (1,2,3,4) - Well, I think you could use some variety here and turn these into a 1/3 stream instead? // I think it will be too hard to catch the rhythm between 02:34:380, and I've never used 1/3 stream this diff. Want to be rather consistent :3
  6. The difficulty was fine, I didn't get to point out that much because this is really weird and I'm not used to mod things like this but oh well xD

Normal
  1. 00:44:845 (1,2) - The flow here isn't the perfect, just move (2) a bit more to the left, a bit like this: // Fixed
    (Remember to fix the spacing between next objects)
  2. 01:47:170 (5,1) - If you could make a better blanket here? If it wasn't your intention then it's fine, obviously. // Umm Will keep it :3
  3. Nice!

Easy
  1. I'd -1 HP, it would make the difficulty spread more equal. // Fix
  2. 00:47:635 (3) - Dat ds error, plz fix // ? I don't get it. Seems equal to me.
  3. Perfect xD

Sorry for the short mod, I hope it helps even a bit. GL & Take that star~ 8-)
Thanks for modding ~
Lally
o3o

[General]
  1. since you did all the 3 diffs make sure to have consistent kiai trought the diffs


[Easy]
  1. 01:53:914 (3,4) - what about a slider here to make the rhythm simpler to beginners


[Normal]
  1. 00:25:542 (6) - and 01:25:077 (4) - dunno lol
  2. 00:17:403 (1) - why nc? i think is not needed here
  3. 00:46:473 (1,2) - what about to change this to a reverse slider here?


[Hard]
  1. naisu diff o3o
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Lally wrote:

o3o

[General]
  1. since you did all the 3 diffs make sure to have consistent kiai trought the diffs // Well I've changed from Lissette's mod, but I guess I'll just turn it back.


[Easy]
  1. 01:53:914 (3,4) - what about a slider here to make the rhythm simpler to beginners // Agree, Fixed


[Normal]
  1. 00:25:542 (6) - and 01:25:077 (4) - dunno lol // ROFL AIBAT
  2. 00:17:403 (1) - why nc? i think is not needed here // cuz it's before the kiai.
  3. 00:46:473 (1,2) - what about to change this to a reverse slider here? // I think current fits the music better.


[Hard]
  1. naisu diff o3o
Thanks~!
KittyAdventure
Hai, I'm Chatting you for IRC Mod but you said is busy :P
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112733 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/146602



[General]

  • Where is you Insane diff?
    Why you do not add Kiai Time (4) stop in 01:48:100
    You can add a circle in time 00:18:100 or 00:18:333 (becuase in sound good)
    Add in tags: Elijah Wood and Ryan Reynolds (They is played for two Hollywood phonies) Andy Samberg (TLI member)


[Easy]

  • Nice~


[Normal]

  • 00:17:403 (1): Are you Serious for new NC?


[Hard]

  • 00:34:612 (6,7,8,9,10,11): NC
    01:17:519 - 01:17:868: You can add something ;)


Sorry for my Mod is bad
I think is Fast to Ranked (becuase you map is Perfect all)

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai, I'm Chatting you for IRC Mod but you said is busy :P
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112733 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/146602



[General]

  • Where is you Insane diff? // I didn't think it's adequate to make an insane..
    Why you do not add Kiai Time (4) stop in 01:48:100 // Wanted to stop before drums.
    You can add a circle in time 00:18:100 or 00:18:333 (becuase in sound good) // True, but it's hard to fit the song cuz the lyric's timing is a bit weird.
    Add in tags: Elijah Wood and Ryan Reynolds (They is played for two Hollywood phonies) Andy Samberg (TLI member) // Adding.


[Easy]

  • Nice~


[Normal]

  • 00:17:403 (1): Are you Serious for new NC? // Hmm wanted to keep, but it seems to be annoying for a second suggestion? fixed.



[Hard]

  • 00:34:612 (6,7,8,9,10,11): NC // I think the combo is fine enough here.
    01:17:519 - 01:17:868: You can add something ;) // Same answer as General.


Sorry for my Mod is bad
I think is Fast to Ranked (becuase you map is Perfect all)

Good Luck~
Thanks :3
HelloSCV
as M4M from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 01:00:659 (2) - 끝에 클랩
  2. 01:09:961 (3) - 클lap


[Normal]
  1. 노말이지만 그래도 틱레2개 좋을듯요
  2. OD가 좀 높은거 같은데 -1어떠세요?
  3. 01:09:496 (5) - 항상 피니시 쓰실땐 클랩도 같이 쓰셨는데 여기도 넣어주심이?
  4. 01:32:287 (6) - 여기도 클랩


[Hard]
  1. 틱레2 이즈 베스트 핏 디스 송
  2. 00:02:519 (1,2) - 이건 1/3 스냅에 맞춰야주셔야 할꺼같아요
  3. 00:13:449 (5) - 이건 1/1 슬라이더 보다는 1/2 슬라이더하나하고 노트 하나가 좀더 나은거 같아요
  4. 00:32:752 (1,2,3) - 휘슬 넣으시는게 어때요? 생각보다 괜찮은데 (다른 부분도 똑같이 고려해주세요)
  5. 02:32:287 (3) - 클랩 보단 피니시가 음악과 맞는듯해요
  6. 02:34:147 (4) - 파란틱에 스냅 시키셔야해요
  7. 02:34:380 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더들은 1/6보다 1/8틱에 스냅 시키니까 좀더 리듬에 맞는거 같은데 이게 bpm문제인지 오프셋 문제인지 아니면 진짜 리듬이 이런건지 좀 헷갈리네요
  8. 02:35:368 (3) - 이것도


아 한국어 편하다. 일단 타이밍 문제도 있고 당장 버블은 못드리겠어요, 클랩 소리가 좀 어긋나는거 같아서, 타이밍 잘잡는 모더한테 부탁하셔서 좀더 확실히 할 필요가 있을듯해요
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 01:00:659 (2) - 끝에 클랩 // sp
  2. 01:09:961 (3) - 클lap // boxer


[Normal]
  1. 노말이지만 그래도 틱레2개 좋을듯요
  2. OD가 좀 높은거 같은데 -1어떠세요? // 음 그러네요
  3. 01:09:496 (5) - 항상 피니시 쓰실땐 클랩도 같이 쓰셨는데 여기도 넣어주심이? // 네
  4. 01:32:287 (6) - 여기도 클랩 // 네


[Hard]
  1. 틱레2 이즈 베스트 핏 디스 송 // 저도 그럴거 같긴 한데 이 노래에서는 틱 없는게 더 깔끔해서 나은거 같아요. 오히려 틱3이 더 음악에 맞지 않나요? lol
  2. 00:02:519 (1,2) - 이건 1/3 스냅에 맞춰야주셔야 할꺼같아요 // 어라? 왜 1/4이 됐지;; 수정
  3. 00:13:449 (5) - 이건 1/1 슬라이더 보다는 1/2 슬라이더하나하고 노트 하나가 좀더 나은거 같아요 // 아 내 블랭킷. 수정
  4. 00:32:752 (1,2,3) - 휘슬 넣으시는게 어때요? 생각보다 괜찮은데 (다른 부분도 똑같이 고려해주세요) // 소프트 휘슬은 소리가 약해서 잘 안어울리는것 같습니다.
  5. 02:32:287 (3) - 클랩 보단 피니시가 음악과 맞는듯해요 // 음,, 저는 좀 중간에 달라져서 이상했다는 느낌이 드네요. 음악에서 뚜렷한 차이를 보이지 않아서 연타들은 다 드럼-클랩으로 통일할 생각입니다.
  6. 02:34:147 (4) - 파란틱에 스냅 시키셔야해요 // 네
  7. 02:34:380 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더들은 1/6보다 1/8틱에 스냅 시키니까 좀더 리듬에 맞는거 같은데 이게 bpm문제인지 오프셋 문제인지 아니면 진짜 리듬이 이런건지 좀 헷갈리네요 // 1/12 시도해 봅니다.
  8. 02:35:368 (3) - 이것도 // 이건 지금꺼가 맞는듯요.


아 한국어 편하다. 일단 타이밍 문제도 있고 당장 버블은 못드리겠어요, 클랩 소리가 좀 어긋나는거 같아서, 타이밍 잘잡는 모더한테 부탁하셔서 좀더 확실히 할 필요가 있을듯해요 // 북치기 박치기 스핀복서
ㄳㄳ
HelloSCV
after fixing kiai time on Easy diff, it's good to go now, bubbled



I'M AN ADUUUUUUULT!!!!
Beige
Threw it on the grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrround!
Lissette
[General]
I think preview time at 47522 fits more because now you can't hear the word "Threw" complete
00:26:243 - to be honest I don't think is necessary this fountain here, fits more if the kiai time keeps going until 00:32:755 -
00:56:010 - Same
01:25:778 - Same

[Hard]
02:34:150 (4) - End this at 02:34:305 - too keep consistency with the previous sliders

[Normal]
01:50:662 (6) - how about if you shorten 1/2 beat and add a clap here 01:50:894 - on the slider end (remember to fix spacing)
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Lissette wrote:

[General]
I think preview time at 47522 fits more because now you can't hear the word "Threw" complete // Oh.. the rap orz Fixed
00:26:243 - to be honest I don't think is necessary this fountain here, fits more if the kiai time keeps going until 00:32:755 - // Agreed. Removed the fountains.
00:56:010 - Same
01:25:778 - Same

[Hard]
02:34:150 (4) - End this at 02:34:305 - too keep consistency with the previous sliders // Fixed

[Normal]
01:50:662 (6) - how about if you shorten 1/2 beat and add a clap here 01:50:894 - on the slider end (remember to fix spacing) // I was thinking of fitting the lyrics, but maybe I was losing consistency on rhythm selection. Fixed.
Thanks :33
Lissette
You forgot to remove the kiai fountains on Easy diff =p

Call me back when is ready, plz~
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Oops ;_; fixed now. Thanks lol
Lissette
Ranked~
BeatofIke
I RANKED IT ON THE GROUND!

....errr mean Congratulations! XD
Lari
랭크 축하드립니다.~ >ㅅ<
KittyAdventure
Gratzz! Sonnyc!!^^
Beige
이 맵 던져! ㅊㅋ 드려요~
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