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DJ Okawari - Flower Dance [OsuMania|Osu]

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Luyuja
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月8日 at 16:29:01

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Flower Dance
Source: Kaleidoscope
Tags: shaoshengss
BPM: 78.6
Filesize: 8405kb
Play Time: 04:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (2.77 stars, 1389 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (4.76 stars, 2377 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (1.73 stars, 851 notes)
  4. ShaoHard (4.44 stars, 414 notes)
  5. ShaoInsane (4.76 stars, 658 notes)
  6. ShaoNormal (3.22 stars, 300 notes)
Download: DJ Okawari - Flower Dance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for shaoshengss`s BG and GD
2/5 updated:fixed some problem in ShaoHard
2/5 updated:change ShaoHard to ShaoInsane
2/5 updated:Add hitsounds for ManiaDiff.
2/6 updated:Change hitsound of Shao`s diff
2/8 updated:Chnage hitsound of Maniadif-f If you dled before 2014/2/8,pls REDL this map
Lieselotte
沙发~~
chonicle
Hey add keysound for this song plz.
Spy
前排卡位
richardfeder
先膜拜鲈鱼大诗人!!!
非常好听的歌,铺面别具匠心,打起来好爽~
下面是我作为一个新手玩家的一些建议=w=

【Normal】
:idea: 02:21:780 开始到02:40:980 鲈鱼哥做的是面条,而散点则是从02:40:980 以后开始摆放,但是小提琴真正听得到拉长的声音是从02:31:380 开始的,加入旋律则是02:40:980 ,这使得02:21:780 就开始的面条有些意义不明,因为02:21:780 实际上只听得到小提琴十分短促的声音,旋律还在钢琴上,我不太清楚这个时候的面条模仿的究竟是什么乐器,所以我想鲈鱼哥能不能考虑将铺面02:21:780 到 02:40:980 做成单点,02:40:980 到03:09:780 做成面条呢,这样打的时候感觉条理会更加清晰 :D

03:10:080 (190080|1) - 开始的6个note组成了两个小阶梯,希望鲈鱼哥能把这6个note都往下移一小格,及第一个阶梯的开始从03:10:080 (190080|1) - 移到03:09:930 (189930|1) - , 第二个阶梯的开始从03:10:680 (190680|2) - 移到03:10:530 (190530|2) - 这是因为我听出来是这个样子的,希望鲈鱼哥也能去听一下 :D

02:55:830 (175830|2) - 如果鲈鱼哥不打算在02:40:980 到03:09:780 做成面条的话请务必把这个note删掉,这里没有音

03:30:780 为了保证旋律的连贯性,这里加一个note吧

【Hard】
好人性的hard,泪流满面啊!!良心, 要是以后hard都做成这样或者小星姐那样就好了XD

00:06:345 (6345|4) - 鲈鱼哥你把这个note(以及后面三个)放在4上而00:03:325 (3325|3) - 这个note(以及后面三个)放在3上,但是其实他们的音高都是一样的=w=我看了下原谱,我建议鲈鱼哥你把从00:03:325 到00:23:573 的这些note都统一放到4上,这样排音高比较合理,而且轨道能完全跟五线谱重合 ><

00:36:030 (36030|2) - 这里其实没有音,建议将这个删掉,而00:37:680 是有音的, 这里补上吧 :D

00:55:080 这里是一个小节末尾的音, 其实放不放都可以XD 我建议放在00:55:080 (55080|1) - 点一下

00:58:080 (58080|2) - 和00:58:230 (58230|2) - 这两个并不是同音反复, 00:58:080 (58080|2) -和00:58:380 (58380|4) - 的音高是相同的, 而00:58:230 (58230|2) - 则其实是音阶的开始,所以建议把00:58:080 (58080|2) -放到4, 00:58:230 (58230|2) - 放到3

*01:55:680 (115680|0) - 这个放到1吧,音高的原因我认为放到1好XD

02:12:180 这里是小节开头的一个重音啊>< 建议加个note

02:26:430 (146430|1) - 和02:26:430 (146430|5) - 这里虽然左手有音但是右手旋律上这里是空的,我觉得这两个没有放的必要

03:34:080 (214080|2) - 和03:34:230 (214230|2) - 修改建议同00:58:080 (58080|2) - 和00:58:230 (58230|2) - :)

03:43:680 (223680|0) - 这个放到1吧,道理同*项

03:47:130 (227130|3) - 好像没有这个音啊 :?

03:53:280 (233280|1) - 这个放到2吧,道理同*项

【Insane】
这个先拖着,in后面好难T T 我先看看别人怎么mod的...

先到这,最后高呼鲈鱼大诗人
justhow0615
哈囉,鱸魚哥,我來幫你的Insane難度做一點MOD了~

以下是MOD的部分


因為前面這邊01:05:730 (65730|1) - 有個Note,

所以我在打到這邊的時候很容易預期01:15:330 - 這邊應該也會有一個,但是這邊沒有

以小玩家的角度會希望能加一個note在這邊 (只是建議)



01:57:180 - 加一個note讓它的鍵數和01:55:980 - 這邊一樣

01:58:680 - 加一個note

02:49:980 - 這邊我有聽到一聲鼓聲,可以加一個note

02:50:280 - 這邊有一個琴聲,不知道這邊沒有note是不是為了有舒緩的氛圍w

03:31:080 - ^

04:05:208 - 這邊有明顯的鋼琴合聲,可以加一個note

04:16:172 - ^



鱸魚哥的FD做的真的很棒,Kiai Time下的好

長條也是,不論是一開始對琴聲的長條還是後面對小提琴的長條,都讓我把Flower Dance這首曲子聽的更透徹

一定要Rank!
Entozer
Mod request in-game.

Insane
00:05:234 - Missing piano note?
00:08:159 - ^
00:10:408 - ^
00:11:158 - ^
00:14:180 - ^
00:16:421 - ^
00:17:195 - ^
00:19:430 - ^
00:20:194 - ^
00:22:421 - ^

00:38:880 - ^
00:39:180 - ^
00:39:480 - ^

00:47:730 (47730|5) - delete
00:48:030 (48030|5) - delete (or the other note)

00:51:630 (51630|3) - delete

Maybe you can rearrange the notes from 00:50:580 (50580|2) - to 00:51:780 (51780|4) - ? They feel odd when being played (the stairs)

00:53:880 (53880|2) - Maybe you can move this one lane to the left?

00:56:130 (56130|2) - delete
00:56:430 (56430|4) - ^

00:56:730 - add note
00:56:880 - add note (if the other note is not patterned to that piano)
00:57:030 - add note

00:57:780 (57780|1) - delete
00:57:930 - add note

00:58:080 (58080|3) - Move one lane to the right?
00:58:830 (58830|2) - move to 00:58:830 (58830|4) -

00:59:880 (59880|3) - move one lane to the left

--Optional--
01:05:730 (65730|1) - move to 01:05:680 (65680|1) - (1/6 timing)
01:05:880 (65880|3) - move to 01:05:830 (65830|3) - (1/12)
01:06:030 (66030|6) - move to 01:05:980 (65980|6) - (1/12)
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01:05:580 (65580|5) - add note?

01:06:817 (66817|6) - move to 01:06:780 (66780|6) - (1/4)

01:15:330 (75330|3) - add note
01:15:480 (75480|3) - move one lane to the right

--Optional--
01:24:930 (84930|1) - move to 01:24:880 (84880|1) - (1/6 timing)
01:25:080 (85080|2) - move to 01:25:030 (85030|2) - (1/12 timing)
01:25:230 (85230|3) - move to 01:25:180 (85180|3) - (1/12 timing)
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01:25:080 (85080|5) - delete

01:26:017 (86017|5) - move to 01:25:980 (85980|5) - (1/4)

01:49:230 (109230|1) - delete

01:50:730 (110730|2) - add note?

01:53:130 (113130|0) - add note?

01:54:030 (114030|5) - delete?
01:54:180 (114180|0) - delete?

01:54:930 (114930|5) - add?
01:55:080 (115080|6) - ^
01:55:230 (115230|5) - ^

01:55:530 - add note

01:56:130 (116130|2) - delete
01:56:280 (116280|3) - move one lane to the left
01:56:430 (116430|2) - delete

01:57:480 (117480|1) - move to 01:57:480 (117480|4) -
01:57:630 (117630|3) - move to 01:57:630 (117630|5) -
01:57:780 (117780|5) - move to 01:57:780 (117780|4) -

02:01:080 (121080|0) - change starting point to 02:01:380 (121380|0) - ?

02:23:880 (143880|2) - delete
02:23:280 (143280|2) - move one lane to the left
02:23:580 (143580|3) - move one lane to the left and extend until 02:24:180 -

02:51:780 (171780|5) - end at 02:52:230 - (blue tick)
02:52:380 (172380|0) - start at 02:52:230 (172230|0) - end at 02:52:680 - (red tick)

02:56:580 (176580|6) - end at 02:57:030 - (blue tick)
02:57:180 (177180|0) - start at 02:57:030 (177030|0) - end at 02:57:480 - (red tick)

03:01:380 (181380|0) - end at blue tick
03:01:980 (181980|2) - start at blue tick (move someplace else) - end at 03:02:280 - (red tick)

03:06:180 (186180|6) - end at blue tick
03:06:780 (186780|0) - start at blue end at red

03:16:380 (196380|3) - delete?

03:27:630 (207630|0) - delete

03:32:730 - add note?
03:32:880 - ^
03:33:030 - ^
03:33:180 - ^
03:33:480 - ^

03:44:430 (224430|5) - delete?

03:53:580 - I think there's something missing in this part...
--
03:53:430 (233430|3) - delete?
03:53:580 (233580|3) - add?
03:53:730 (233730|4) - add?


03:46:830 (226830|2) - delete

Hard
00:36:030 (36030|2) - delete

01:49:230 (109230|1) - delete

02:12:180 (132180|5) - add note?

02:26:430 (146430|5) - delete?

02:52:380 (172380|2) - move to 02:52:230 (172230|2) - end at 02:52:680 -

02:56:580 (176580|5) - end at blue tick
02:57:180 (177180|2) - move to 02:57:030 (177030|2) - end at 02:57:480 -

03:01:380 (181380|5) - end at blue tick
03:01:980 (181980|1) - start at blue tick - end at red tick

03:06:180 (186180|5) - end at blue tick
03:06:780 (186780|1) - start at blue tick end at red tick

03:42:180 (222180|5) - delete

03:42:930 - add note
03:43:080 - add note

03:43:680 - add note

normal
00:05:234 (5234|4) - add note?
00:08:159 (8159|4) - ^
00:11:173 (11173|4) - ^
00:14:180 (14180|4) - ^
00:17:195 (17195|4) - ^
00:20:194 (20194|4) -

00:46:680 (46680|3) - move to 00:46:680 (46680|6) - ?
00:46:980 (46980|4) - add?
00:47:880 (47880|1) - delete?

00:52:830 (52830|1) - add?

01:45:480 (105480|1) - delete?

01:50:430 (110430|1) - add?

02:30:480 (150480|4) - end at red tick? @ 02:31:080 -
02:30:780 (150780|2) - start at 02:31:080 - (red tick)

02:55:830 (175830|2) - delete?
02:55:980 - add note?

02:59:130 (179130|0) - add note?

03:30:780 (210780|3) - add note?

03:49:980 (229980|1) - delete?
03:50:580 (230580|0) - ^

I need to recheck after if you apply my mod
Topic Starter
Luyuja

Entozer wrote:

Mod request in-game.

Insane
00:05:234 - Missing piano note?There is single piano note in here.http://puu.sh/3RRdk.jpg.
00:08:159 - ^^
00:10:408 - ^^
00:11:158 - ^^
00:14:180 - ^^
00:16:421 - ^^
00:17:195 - ^^
00:19:430 - ^^
00:20:194 - ^^
00:22:421 - ^^

00:38:880 - ^Fixed
00:39:180 - ^Fixed
00:39:480 - ^Fixed

00:47:730 (47730|5) - deleteFixed
00:48:030 (48030|5) - delete (or the other note)Fixed,deleted

00:51:630 (51630|3) - deletenope,there are two piano notes here

Maybe you can rearrange the notes from 00:50:580 (50580|2) - to 00:51:780 (51780|4) - ? They feel odd when being played (the stairs)Fixed

00:53:880 (53880|2) - Maybe you can move this one lane to the left?Fixed

00:56:130 (56130|2) - deleteNope
00:56:430 (56430|4) - ^Nope

00:56:730 - add noteFixed
00:56:880 - add note (if the other note is not patterned to that piano)Nope
00:57:030 - add noteFixed

00:57:780 (57780|1) - deleteFixed
00:57:930 - add noteFixed

00:58:080 (58080|3) - Move one lane to the right?Fixed
00:58:830 (58830|2) - move to 00:58:830 (58830|4) - Nope,I moved to 6 and move 00:58:980 (58980|5) - to 4

00:59:880 (59880|3) - move one lane to the leftNope

--Optional--
01:05:730 (65730|1) - move to 01:05:680 (65680|1) - (1/6 timing)Fixed
01:05:880 (65880|3) - move to 01:05:830 (65830|3) - (1/12)Fixed
01:06:030 (66030|6) - move to 01:05:980 (65980|6) - (1/12)Fixed
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01:05:580 (65580|5) - add note?Fixed

01:06:817 (66817|6) - move to 01:06:780 (66780|6) - (1/4)Fixed

01:15:330 (75330|3) - add noteFixed
01:15:480 (75480|3) - move one lane to the rightNope

--Optional--
01:24:930 (84930|1) - move to 01:24:880 (84880|1) - (1/6 timing)Fixed
01:25:080 (85080|2) - move to 01:25:030 (85030|2) - (1/12 timing)Fixed
01:25:230 (85230|3) - move to 01:25:180 (85180|3) - (1/12 timing)Fixed
--------------

01:25:080 (85080|5) - deleteFixed

01:26:017 (86017|5) - move to 01:25:980 (85980|5) - (1/4)Um?

01:49:230 (109230|1) - deleteNope

01:50:730 (110730|2) - add note?Fixed

01:53:130 (113130|0) - add note?Fixed

01:54:030 (114030|5) - delete?Nope
01:54:180 (114180|0) - delete?Nope

01:54:930 (114930|5) - add?Fixed
01:55:080 (115080|6) - ^Nope
01:55:230 (115230|5) - ^Fixed

01:55:530 - add noteFixed

01:56:130 (116130|2) - deletenope,there are double piano notes here
01:56:280 (116280|3) - move one lane to the leftNope
01:56:430 (116430|2) - deleteNope,for double piano notes

01:57:480 (117480|1) - move to 01:57:480 (117480|4) - Fixed
01:57:630 (117630|3) - move to 01:57:630 (117630|5) - Fixed
01:57:780 (117780|5) - move to 01:57:780 (117780|4) - Fixed

02:01:080 (121080|0) - change starting point to 02:01:380 (121380|0) - ?Fixed

02:23:880 (143880|2) - deleteNope,piano note here
02:23:280 (143280|2) - move one lane to the leftNope
02:23:580 (143580|3) - move one lane to the left and extend until 02:24:180 - Nope

02:51:780 (171780|5) - end at 02:52:230 - (blue tick)Fixed
02:52:380 (172380|0) - start at 02:52:230 (172230|0) - end at 02:52:680 - (red tick)Fixed

02:56:580 (176580|6) - end at 02:57:030 - (blue tick)Fixed
02:57:180 (177180|0) - start at 02:57:030 (177030|0) - end at 02:57:480 - (red tick)Fixed

03:01:380 (181380|0) - end at blue tickFixed
03:01:980 (181980|2) - start at blue tick (move someplace else) - end at 03:02:280 - (red tick)Fixed

03:06:180 (186180|6) - end at blue tickFixed
03:06:780 (186780|0) - start at blue end at redFixed

03:16:380 (196380|3) - delete?Moved to 5

03:27:630 (207630|0) - deleteNope,It`s really exist a piano note

03:32:730 - add note?Fixed
03:32:880 - ^Fixed
03:33:030 - ^Fixed
03:33:180 - ^Fixed
03:33:480 - ^Fixed

03:44:430 (224430|5) - delete?nope

03:53:580 - I think there's something missing in this part...You`are right.
--
03:53:430 (233430|3) - delete?Nope
03:53:580 (233580|3) - add?Fixed
03:53:730 (233730|4) - add?Fixed


03:46:830 (226830|2) - deleteNope

Hard
00:36:030 (36030|2) - deleteNope

01:49:230 (109230|1) - deleteNope

02:12:180 (132180|5) - add note?Fixed

02:26:430 (146430|5) - delete?Fixed

02:52:380 (172380|2) - move to 02:52:230 (172230|2) - end at 02:52:680 - Fixed

02:56:580 (176580|5) - end at blue tickFixed
02:57:180 (177180|2) - move to 02:57:030 (177030|2) - end at 02:57:480 - Fixed

03:01:380 (181380|5) - end at blue tickFixed
03:01:980 (181980|1) - start at blue tick - end at red tickFixed

03:06:180 (186180|5) - end at blue tickFixed
03:06:780 (186780|1) - start at blue tick end at red tickFixed

03:42:180 (222180|5) - deleteFixed

03:42:930 - add noteFixed
03:43:080 - add noteNope

03:43:680 - add noteFixed

normal
00:05:234 (5234|4) - add note?Nope ,Just 1 note in left hand.http://puu.sh/3RRdk.jpg
00:08:159 (8159|4) - ^^
00:11:173 (11173|4) - ^^
00:14:180 (14180|4) - ^^
00:17:195 (17195|4) - ^^
00:20:194 (20194|4) - ^

00:46:680 (46680|3) - move to 00:46:680 (46680|6) - ?Fixed
00:46:980 (46980|4) - add?Fixed
00:47:880 (47880|1) - delete?Fixed

00:52:830 (52830|1) - add?Nope,I think it`s a little hard for NM

01:45:480 (105480|1) - delete?Fixed

01:50:430 (110430|1) - add?^^

02:30:480 (150480|4) - end at red tick? @ 02:31:080 -Fixed
02:30:780 (150780|2) - start at 02:31:080 - (red tick)Fixed

02:55:830 (175830|2) - delete?Nope,piano note here
02:55:980 - add note?Nope

02:59:130 (179130|0) - add note?Fixed

03:30:780 (210780|3) - add note?Fixed

03:49:980 (229980|1) - delete?Fixed
03:50:580 (230580|0) - ^Fixed

I need to recheck after if you apply my mod
Hi,completed.
A serious mod~Thanks for great help for my map.
Topic Starter
Luyuja

justhow0615 wrote:

哈囉,鱸魚哥,我來幫你的Insane難度做一點MOD了~

以下是MOD的部分


因為前面這邊01:05:730 (65730|1) - 有個Note,

所以我在打到這邊的時候很容易預期01:15:330 - 這邊應該也會有一個,但是這邊沒有

以小玩家的角度會希望能加一個note在這邊 (只是建議)Fixed,其实这里我音的位置放错了,Entozer提出来了^^



01:57:180 - 加一個note讓它的鍵數和01:55:980 - 這邊一樣Fixed

01:58:680 - 加一個noteFixed

02:49:980 - 這邊我有聽到一聲鼓聲,可以加一個noteFixed

02:50:280 - 這邊有一個琴聲,不知道這邊沒有note是不是為了有舒緩的氛圍w不好意思,是我的疏漏

03:31:080 - ^Fixed

04:05:208 - 這邊有明顯的鋼琴合聲,可以加一個noteFixed

04:16:172 - ^Fixed



鱸魚哥的FD做的真的很棒,Kiai Time下的好

長條也是,不論是一開始對琴聲的長條還是後面對小提琴的長條,都讓我把Flower Dance這首曲子聽的更透徹

一定要Rank!
谢谢家豪哥!
Topic Starter
Luyuja

richardfeder wrote:

先膜拜鲈鱼大诗人!!!
非常好听的歌,铺面别具匠心,打起来好爽~
下面是我作为一个新手玩家的一些建议=w=

【Normal】
:idea: 02:21:780 开始到02:40:980 鲈鱼哥做的是面条,而散点则是从02:40:980 以后开始摆放,但是小提琴真正听得到拉长的声音是从02:31:380 开始的,加入旋律则是02:40:980 ,这使得02:21:780 就开始的面条有些意义不明,因为02:21:780 实际上只听得到小提琴十分短促的声音,旋律还在钢琴上,我不太清楚这个时候的面条模仿的究竟是什么乐器,所以我想鲈鱼哥能不能考虑将铺面02:21:780 到 02:40:980 做成单点,02:40:980 到03:09:780 做成面条呢,这样打的时候感觉条理会更加清晰 :D这个,实际上每个音都可以做成面条,因为每个音都有时长,但是从谱面上考虑的话,按照你这样的做法会让后半段全程8分音的节奏,这样可能玩起来乐趣不大,而且这样做,会让normal整个diff没有主旋律的部分。

03:10:080 (190080|1) - 开始的6个note组成了两个小阶梯,希望鲈鱼哥能把这6个note都往下移一小格,及第一个阶梯的开始从03:10:080 (190080|1) - 移到03:09:930 (189930|1) - , 第二个阶梯的开始从03:10:680 (190680|2) - 移到03:10:530 (190530|2) - 这是因为我听出来是这个样子的,希望鲈鱼哥也能去听一下 :D我懂,这里这样摆是对的,在HARD和INSANE我都把全部主旋律的音摆出来了,normal这样摆就难了,即使是100的bpm,长时间16分音对新手来说很难

02:55:830 (175830|2) - 如果鲈鱼哥不打算在02:40:980 到03:09:780 做成面条的话请务必把这个note删掉,这里没有音Fixed

03:30:780 为了保证旋律的连贯性,这里加一个note吧Fixed

【Hard】
好人性的hard,泪流满面啊!!良心, 要是以后hard都做成这样或者小星姐那样就好了XD可不要向我学习了,这歌做不出很难的样子,我当初的目的就是把谱做成能享受弹钢琴的感觉,同时又能轻松打完谱面

00:06:345 (6345|4) - 鲈鱼哥你把这个note(以及后面三个)放在4上而00:03:325 (3325|3) - 这个note(以及后面三个)放在3上,但是其实他们的音高都是一样的=w=我看了下原谱,我建议鲈鱼哥你把从00:03:325 到00:23:573 的这些note都统一放到4上,这样排音高比较合理,而且轨道能完全跟五线谱重合 ><前面两个修改了。虽然要保持一样,但是谱面重复太多是会减少乐趣的

00:36:030 (36030|2) - 这里其实没有音,建议将这个删掉,而00:37:680 是有音的, 这里补上吧 :D Fixed

00:55:080 这里是一个小节末尾的音, 其实放不放都可以XD 我建议放在00:55:080 (55080|1) - 点一下这个我没放,因为这一段并没有map左手的部分,实际上是右手+鼓点(去掉Hi-Hat)

00:58:080 (58080|2) - 和00:58:230 (58230|2) - 这两个并不是同音反复, 00:58:080 (58080|2) -和00:58:380 (58380|4) - 的音高是相同的, 而00:58:230 (58230|2) - 则其实是音阶的开始,所以建议把00:58:080 (58080|2) -放到4, 00:58:230 (58230|2) - 放到3Fixed,感谢你的认真,我没有仔细对照钢琴谱了;w;只是听了几遍

*01:55:680 (115680|0) - 这个放到1吧,音高的原因我认为放到1好XDFixed

02:12:180 这里是小节开头的一个重音啊>< 建议加个note这里这里我只map了右手

02:26:430 (146430|1) - 和02:26:430 (146430|5) - 这里虽然左手有音但是右手旋律上这里是空的,我觉得这两个没有放的必要You r right

03:34:080 (214080|2) - 和03:34:230 (214230|2) - 修改建议同00:58:080 (58080|2) - 和00:58:230 (58230|2) - :) 其实我觉得这个有点争议,因为我听了好几遍 都是有重复,也许是左右手重复了这个音?

03:43:680 (223680|0) - 这个放到1吧,道理同*项Fixed

03:47:130 (227130|3) - 好像没有这个音啊 :? Fixed

03:53:280 (233280|1) - 这个放到2吧,道理同*项 待定

【Insane】
这个先拖着,in后面好难T T 我先看看别人怎么mod的...

先到这,最后高呼鲈鱼大诗人
先说声抱歉,因为一开始没有看到这层楼T_TEntozer和家豪哥的mod修改完后我就去打lol了。感谢这么认真的mod,
Hanyuu
Normal:

00:26:580 (26580|3) - Add a note on this beat its the actual start and you should map it even if you put the notes later for a different pattern.
01:05:580 (65580|3) - Add note
01:10:980 (70980|0) - This note seems too apart from the next ones. 01:09:780 - Change the pattern to this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905783
01:20:580 (80580|2,80880|0) - move both 1 column to the right maybe?
01:31:380 (91380|0) - Move column 5
01:53:430 (113430|3) - I think this is not good, better do either all of the piano notes here, but this would be too many jacks for normal or just dont do it. I suggest remove this note. Or just add the note at 01:53:730 - and put those 5 notes in an easy way to play.
02:00:180 - Maybe you want to renote this pattern to a more outstanding way as the previous, like in symmetry. To give this measure a bit more weight and make it look like the finish and start of the next thing a bit more.
02:19:380 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905811 try this
03:30:180 - Add notes? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905819
03:40:380 - Add note column 5
03:42:480 (222480|6) - Move column 4
03:43:380 (223380|3,223680|2,223980|3,224280|5) - better make those notes a stair towards the right, or move 03:43:980 (223980|3) - to column 5
03:50:280 (230280|2,230430|1) - Move both 1 column left
04:01:380 (241380|4) -move this note to column 6
04:14:419 (254419|5) - ^ 7
04:17:536 (257536|6) - end at 04:19:094 - still reverbing but this note looks really too long

apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending

Hard:

00:23:868 - Add note?
00:26:580 (26580|4) - Move column 6. looks too similar to the other notes
00:55:830 (55830|3) - Whats this? cant identify it in the pattern :s
Suggesting to adding notes to this here: 00:56:130 - and 00:56:430 -
01:04:942 (64942|4) - Add note 01:24:142 -
01:32:880 (92880|1) - Move column5
01:48:330 - Add note column3
02:01:380 (121380|4,121980|0) - both notes better more to the right
02:20:580 (140580|4) - Move column 6
02:25:380 (145380|5) - Move column 4
02:25:980 (145980|3) - Move column 6
02:27:630 (147630|3) - Move column 5
02:28:380 (148380|5) - Move column 4
02:31:380 - Add note, column 4
02:35:730 (155730|0,155880|4) - change places?
02:36:180 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905885 a pattern similar to this here?
02:42:780 (162780|1,162780|0) - change places
02:43:080 (163080|4) - move column 4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905889
02:43:380 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905894 i changed notes around here a bit~ it looks better to me this way and is on match with the next measure.
02:47:580 (167580|2) - move column 4
02:49:080 (169080|3,169380|4) - change places
02:51:780 (171780|5,172230|2) - bug in pattern starting here. 02:52:230 (172230|2) - this note must start on beat
03:14:580 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905907 suggestion
03:18:480 (198480|3) - delete?
03:58:980 - You should add more notes here until 04:00:180 - to give this a finish and a change in notes according to the song
04:15:977 (255977|4,256172|5) - move column 3 and 5?



apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending
Topic Starter
Luyuja

Hanyuu wrote:

Normal:

00:26:580 (26580|3) - Add a note on this beat its the actual start and you should map it even if you put the notes later for a different pattern.Fixed
01:05:580 (65580|3) - Add noteFixed
01:10:980 (70980|0) - This note seems too apart from the next ones. 01:09:780 - Change the pattern to this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905783Fixed
01:20:580 (80580|2,80880|0) - move both 1 column to the right maybe?Fixed
01:31:380 (91380|0) - Move column 5Fixed
01:53:430 (113430|3) - I think this is not good, better do either all of the piano notes here, but this would be too many jacks for normal or just dont do it. I suggest remove this note. Or just add the note at 01:53:730 - and put those 5 notes in an easy way to play.Considering remove this jack
02:00:180 - Maybe you want to renote this pattern to a more outstanding way as the previous, like in symmetry. To give this measure a bit more weight and make it look like the finish and start of the next thing a bit more.Fixed
02:19:380 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905811 try thisFixed
03:30:180 - Add notes? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905819Fixed
03:40:380 - Add note column 5Fixed
03:42:480 (222480|6) - Move column 4Nope
03:43:380 (223380|3,223680|2,223980|3,224280|5) - better make those notes a stair towards the right, or move 03:43:980 (223980|3) - to column 5Fixed
03:50:280 (230280|2,230430|1) - Move both 1 column leftFixed
04:01:380 (241380|4) -move this note to column 6Fixed
04:14:419 (254419|5) - ^ 7Fixed
04:17:536 (257536|6) - end at 04:19:094 - still reverbing but this note looks really too long

apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending

Hard:

00:23:868 - Add note?Nope,looks strange
00:26:580 (26580|4) - Move column 6. looks too similar to the other notesNope,I moved 00:26:880 (26880|2) - to column 2
00:55:830 (55830|3) - Whats this? cant identify it in the pattern :s
Suggesting to adding notes to this here: 00:56:130 - and 00:56:430 - Fixed
01:04:942 (64942|4) - Add note 01:24:142 - Nope
01:32:880 (92880|1) - Move column5Nope
01:48:330 - Add note column3Fixed
02:01:380 (121380|4,121980|0) - both notes better more to the rightFixed
02:20:580 (140580|4) - Move column 6Fixed
02:25:380 (145380|5) - Move column 4Nope
02:25:980 (145980|3) - Move column 6nope
02:27:630 (147630|3) - Move column 5Fixed
02:28:380 (148380|5) - Move column 4Nope,for suit piano
02:31:380 - Add note, column 4nope,no piano note here
02:35:730 (155730|0,155880|4) - change places?I think It`s good here..
02:36:180 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905885 a pattern similar to this here?Not apply this pattern,for suit piano pitch
02:42:780 (162780|1,162780|0) - change placesFixed
02:43:080 (163080|4) - move column 4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905889Fixed
02:43:380 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905894 i changed notes around here a bit~ it looks better to me this way and is on match with the next measure.It`s hard when I holding 2 and press 1
02:47:580 (167580|2) - move column 4nope ,for suit piano pitch
02:49:080 (169080|3,169380|4) - change placesFixed
02:51:780 (171780|5,172230|2) - bug in pattern starting here. 02:52:230 (172230|2) - this note must start on beatbut it sounds start at blue tick...
03:14:580 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905907 suggestionfixed
03:18:480 (198480|3) - delete?it`s kick note
03:58:980 - You should add more notes here until 04:00:180 - to give this a finish and a change in notes according to the songBut i dong`t know what notes should i map...
04:15:977 (255977|4,256172|5) - move column 3 and 5?Fixed



apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending
Thanks for moding
Hanyuu
03:58:980 - You should add more notes here until 04:00:180 - to give this a finish and a change in notes according to the songBut i dong`t know what notes should i map...
Here try this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/907918 added some drum notes and i think it plays good
richardfeder
把最后一个难度的补上,只是一些供参考的建议=w=
【Insane】
00:38:280 (38280|1) - 去掉,无音

00:55:530 右手有音但是鲈鱼哥应该选择性的忽视了,我建议将00:55:380 的三个调整到2,4,6而00:55:680 的三个调整到1,3,5, 同时让00:55:530 (55530|0) 放在空出来的0上.01:52:980 开始同理. 只是建议:D

01:52:680 (112680|0) - 弱起,加一个在最左边点一下?

01:55:530 (115530|3) - 挪到0, 同时01:55:680 (115680|0) - 和01:55:680 (115680|2) - 挪到1和3

*02:45:930 (165930|1) - 这里没有音XD

02:55:530 (175530|0) - 同*

02:55:830 (175830|2) - 同*

03:02:730 (182730|0) - 加一个左手? 这一段铺面挺空的, 但是我怕这里加了左手之后后面几条蓝线怎么办...03:03:030 这里没有左手还好说,03:03:330 之后的六条蓝线都有左手, 位置跟面条冲突T T 我只是考虑了这里添加左手的可能性,毕竟这一段比较空的, 这里还是留给鲈鱼哥考虑 :D

03:05:130 (185130|1) - 同*

03:46:830 (226830|2) - 同*

实在是不好意思,后面面条的那一段超出了我的实力范围我没有办法帮忙,还请见谅 :D
最后高呼鲈鱼大诗人~
很棒的图,一定要rank!Wonderful map and it deserves to be ranked one day~
Lieselotte
Normal

这个难度做的有点不太好,节奏变化不大,建议重新再做下,低难度最好做主旋律,没必要刻意降低难度

00:10:406 - add a note here

00:22:421 (22421|6) - ^

00:23:966 (23966|1) - 放错位置了,00:23:868 - 从这里开始

00:28:080 (28080|2,29280|3,29880|3) - 删掉

00:30:480 (30480|4,31080|4) - ^

00:29:430 - add a note here

00:30:030 - ^

00:32:880 - 这里写1/6吧,没什么好顾虑的,旋律至上

00:36:180 - add a note here

00:37:680 (37680|2) - 删

00:39:480 - add a note here

Hard

00:23:966 - 同样的问题,NOTE放错位置……

00:47:280 - 删一个NOTE

00:49:680 - ^

00:54:480 - ^

下面好多和上面一样的,我就不写了- -

最近不怎么想Mod键型了,感觉特别累,估计是Mod老外的图Mod的快吐了~~ :(

就让我偷会懒吧>.>

Insane

OD→8

难度做的有点不美观,其他的没什么大问题

另外,BG很赞~~ :D
Topic Starter
Luyuja

richardfeder wrote:

把最后一个难度的补上,只是一些供参考的建议=w=
【Insane】
00:38:280 (38280|1) - 去掉,无音金耳朵就决定是你了

00:55:530 右手有音但是鲈鱼哥应该选择性的忽视了,我建议将00:55:380 的三个调整到2,4,6而00:55:680 的三个调整到1,3,5, 同时让00:55:530 (55530|0) 放在空出来的0上.01:52:980 开始同理. 只是建议:D目前好像就是这样啊,难道你mod的时候我改过你又没更新

01:52:680 (112680|0) - 弱起,加一个在最左边点一下?这里习惯性的摆3个了,前后文对应

01:55:530 (115530|3) - 挪到0, 同时01:55:680 (115680|0) - 和01:55:680 (115680|2) - 挪到1和3得想想后文怎么摆吧
*02:45:930 (165930|1) - 这里没有音XDFixed

02:55:530 (175530|0) - 同*Fixed

02:55:830 (175830|2) - 同*Fixed

03:02:730 (182730|0) - 加一个左手? 这一段铺面挺空的, 但是我怕这里加了左手之后后面几条蓝线怎么办...03:03:030 这里没有左手还好说,03:03:330 之后的六条蓝线都有左手, 位置跟面条冲突T T 我只是考虑了这里添加左手的可能性,毕竟这一段比较空的, 这里还是留给鲈鱼哥考虑 :D 这里是个梗啦,考虑换一下梗的摆法

03:05:130 (185130|1) - 同*Fixed

03:46:830 (226830|2) - 同*这里有音

实在是不好意思,后面面条的那一段超出了我的实力范围我没有办法帮忙,还请见谅 :D
最后高呼鲈鱼大诗人~
很棒的图,一定要rank!Wonderful map and it deserves to be ranked one day~
谢谢加料
Topic Starter
Luyuja

Hanyuu wrote:

03:58:980 - You should add more notes here until 04:00:180 - to give this a finish and a change in notes according to the songBut i dong`t know what notes should i map...
Here try this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/907918 added some drum notes and i think it plays good
/.\it·s quite hard for Hard diff
Topic Starter
Luyuja

Lieselotte wrote:

Normal

这个难度做的有点不太好,节奏变化不大,建议重新再做下,低难度最好做主旋律,没必要刻意降低难度其实呢,我也考虑过这个问题,但是这样就跟Hard有点重复了

00:10:406 - add a note herenope,只是map钢琴低音部分的音

00:22:421 (22421|6) - ^^

00:23:966 (23966|1) - 放错位置了,00:23:868 - 从这里开始考虑中

00:28:080 (28080|2,29280|3,29880|3) - 删掉左手部分都有音啊。。

00:30:480 (30480|4,31080|4) - ^^

00:29:430 - add a note here我没有map主旋律啦。。

00:30:030 - ^都是左手的旋律

00:32:880 - 这里写1/6吧,没什么好顾虑的,旋律至上都是左手的旋律

00:36:180 - add a note here都是左手的旋律

00:37:680 (37680|2) - 删都是左手的旋律

00:39:480 - add a note here都是左手的旋律

Hard

00:23:966 - 同样的问题,NOTE放错位置……Fixed

00:47:280 - 删一个NOTEFixed

00:49:680 - ^

00:54:480 - ^

下面好多和上面一样的,我就不写了- -

最近不怎么想Mod键型了,感觉特别累,估计是Mod老外的图Mod的快吐了~~ :(

就让我偷会懒吧>.>

Insane

OD→8

难度做的有点不美观,其他的没什么大问题

另外,BG很赞~~ :D
感谢纳米姐mod,BG是霜子找的;w;
asd123iii
Hi~鱸魚哥 以下是我的一些建議

主要是鋼琴和弦的部分

[Insane]

00:23:966 (23966|1,23966|5,24015|2,24064|4,24113|6) - 應該要擺跟Hard一樣的時間

00:27:817 (27817|2) - 移到 00:27:742 - (1/16)

00:36:217 (36217|2) - 移到 00:36:130 - (1/12)

01:04:942 (64942|2) - 移到 01:04:930 - (1/12) , 01:04:880 - 也有一個 要不要放都可

01:06:817 (66817|6) - 感覺可以刪掉或移回 01:06:780 - 我覺得這裡鋼琴是一起的

01:16:417 (76417|6) - 移到 01:16:380 - 理由同上

01:24:105 (84105|1) - 移到 01:24:080 - (1/12)

01:24:142 (84142|3) - 移到 01:24:130 - (1/12)

01:58:980 (118980|6,119130|5) - 各往左移一格 01:58:980 (118980|6,119280|5,119580|5) - 這三個同音

02:59:617 (179617|6,179617|1) - 裝飾音在 02:59:530 這裡(1/12)

03:18:817 (198817|3,198855|4) - 開1/12移到線上

03:37:380 (217380|6,217680|5) - 同01:58:980

[Hard]

00:28:417 (28417|2) - 移到 00:28:342 -

01:04:905 (64905|1,64942|3) - 類似Insane 看你要放一個還兩個都可以

01:24:105 (84105|1,84142|3) - 同Insane

01:58:980 (118980|5,119280|3) - 同Insane 不移也可

03:37:380 (217380|6,217680|5) - 同Insane

[Normal]

00:35:580 (35580|4) - 移到中間 與00:34:680 (34680|3) - 同音

00:35:880 (35880|5) - 可以右移或維持原樣

00:52:830 - 第二排加一顆?

01:31:380 (91380|4) - 移到第二排?

01:50:430 - 第二排加一顆?

這譜必須RANK :D
Topic Starter
Luyuja

asd123iii wrote:

Hi~鱸魚哥 以下是我的一些建議

主要是鋼琴和弦的部分

[Insane]

00:23:966 (23966|1,23966|5,24015|2,24064|4,24113|6) - 應該要擺跟Hard一樣的時間Fixed

00:27:817 (27817|2) - 移到 00:27:742 - (1/16)Fixed

00:36:217 (36217|2) - 移到 00:36:130 - (1/12) Fixed

01:04:942 (64942|2) - 移到 01:04:930 - (1/12) , 01:04:880 - 也有一個 要不要放都可Fixed

01:06:817 (66817|6) - 感覺可以刪掉或移回 01:06:780 - 我覺得這裡鋼琴是一起的Fixed

01:16:417 (76417|6) - 移到 01:16:380 - 理由同上Fixed

01:24:105 (84105|1) - 移到 01:24:080 - (1/12)Fixed

01:24:142 (84142|3) - 移到 01:24:130 - (1/12)Fixed

01:58:980 (118980|6,119130|5) - 各往左移一格 01:58:980 (118980|6,119280|5,119580|5) - 這三個同音Fixed

02:59:617 (179617|6,179617|1) - 裝飾音在 02:59:530 這裡(1/12)Fixed

03:18:817 (198817|3,198855|4) - 開1/12移到線上Fixed

03:37:380 (217380|6,217680|5) - 同01:58:980Fixed

[Hard]

00:28:417 (28417|2) - 移到 00:28:342 - Fixed

01:04:905 (64905|1,64942|3) - 類似Insane 看你要放一個還兩個都可以Fixed

01:24:105 (84105|1,84142|3) - 同InsaneFixed

01:58:980 (118980|5,119280|3) - 同Insane 不移也可Fixed

03:37:380 (217380|6,217680|5) - 同InsaneFixed

[Normal]

00:35:580 (35580|4) - 移到中間 與00:34:680 (34680|3) - 同音Fixed

00:35:880 (35880|5) - 可以右移或維持原樣维持原样了,左手音音高有不同

00:52:830 - 第二排加一顆?有考虑过,不过对normal来说难了

01:31:380 (91380|4) - 移到第二排?Fixed

01:50:430 - 第二排加一顆?有考虑过,不过对normal来说难了

這譜必須RANK :D
多谢mod!修正了不少听音位置错误!
Roxas
You need at least 2 standard diffs, one of them should be under 3 stars difficulty!
By the way, I'll mod this as soon as possible. :)
Topic Starter
Luyuja

Roxas wrote:

You need at least 2 standard diffs, one of them should be under 3 stars difficulty!
By the way, I'll mod this as soon as possible. :)
Add a normal standard diff,but it`s 4 stars.I`m going to call the mapper fix it
Lieselotte
Star :P
Koiyuki
又对应一个贴吧id wwwwwww
先马克吧 我今天摸了三张图要死了 明天跑亲戚家 如果后天你还要mod的话我再来
Irie Miyuki
as shaoshengss's request, standard only

妈的先占位 我还欠债没还 先star一个 么么哒
S o a p
from 贴吧
[General]
BG好看但是跟歌曲不搭,我觉得这首歌应该用清新点的BG 但是这张BG整体颜色感觉好黑=。=
音效你用的也不合曲,soft-sliderslide这个完全可以用消音的,soft-hitclap2和soft-hitwhistle2配这首曲子也不好听,LKS主页上不是有音效包吗

[Insane]
note都缩在一起……整张map看起来很丑,你真的有必要把note放得那么紧吗?
还有红线开始的时候5%是闹哪样啊lol 30%足矣,00:38:580 - 这里的60%把我吓尿
00:26:580 (1,2) - 神间距
00:27:780 (5) - 整张map充斥着这种失败的blanket正确的blanket00:28:980 (1,2,3) - 还有这种不明的overlapped..00:40:980 (1) - http://puu.sh/6Kp3K.jpg ^
00:57:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我还以为是你的音效结果一看根本是歌曲本身的,请问你的音效呢?
01:18:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - 这种五边形摆得也挫了,shift+ctrl+D拯救你01:47:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 这梗摆得极不美观,滑条弧度不一致,note和slider完全不对齐
02:00:180 (5) - NC
02:51:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这连戳。。
03:02:130 - 漏一个是什么心态
03:04:980 (1) - 滑条尾在白线上
03:32:730 (6,7,8) - 不要三连啊,后面都不要
03:43:080 (1,2) - 这俩是奇形种啊
03:48:480 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 吵
03:50:580 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1) - 这后面都啥 偷懒也不能这样偷吧

[Normal]
跟HARD一样的问题,丑

我怀疑这张图你就随便一摆,你是不是忽略了OSU还有这个东西
如果不remap的话估计离rank还有很长很长很长很长很长很长的路要走
Multivac

S o a p wrote:

from 贴吧
[General]
BG好看但是跟歌曲不搭,我觉得这首歌应该用清新点的BG 但是这张BG整体颜色感觉好黑=。=
音效你用的也不合曲,soft-sliderslide这个完全可以用消音的,soft-hitclap2和soft-hitwhistle2配这首曲子也不好听,LKS主页上不是有音效包吗其实我根本就没有音效包这种东西

[Insane]
note都缩在一起……整张map看起来很丑,你真的有必要把note放得那么紧吗?他就是这么个东西
还有红线开始的时候5%是闹哪样啊lol 30%足矣,00:38:580 - 这里的60%把我吓尿
00:26:580 (1,2) - 神间距说得对,不改
00:27:780 (5) - 整张map充斥着这种失败的blanket说得对,作为blanket的确足够失败
正确的blanket00:28:980 (1,2,3) - 还有这种不明的overlapped..
/
说得对,但这个扔这里也不会困扰到谁
00:40:980 (1) - http://puu.sh/6Kp3K.jpg ^
00:57:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我还以为是你的音效结果一看根本是歌曲本身的,请问你的音效呢?木有
01:18:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - 这种五边形摆得也挫了,shift+ctrl+D拯救你……01:47:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 这梗摆得极不美观,滑条弧度不一致,note和slider完全不对齐
02:00:180 (5) - NC
02:51:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这连戳。。这个不改
03:02:130 - 漏一个是什么心态
03:04:980 (1) - 滑条尾在白线上
03:32:730 (6,7,8) - 不要三连啊,后面都不要咦应该没有了啊请及时update
03:43:080 (1,2) - 这俩是奇形种啊淦,拼只蝴蝶玩也不行啊;w;
03:48:480 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 吵
03:50:580 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1) - 这后面都啥 偷懒也不能这样偷吧。这也算偷懒的一种吧这么不爽的话我改改好了

[Normal]
跟HARD一样的问题,丑人长得丑出来卖的确影响心情

我怀疑这张图你就随便一摆,你是不是忽略了OSU还有这个东西
如果不remap的话估计离rank还有很长很长很长很长很长很长的路要走
当时候只要切掉我的GD鲈鱼哥又是一条好汉
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