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Subkulture feat. Klayton of Celldweller - Erasus [Osu|Taiko|

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XinCrin

Mercurial wrote:

Muy lindo todo muy hermoso.

¿Y la bubble, pibe?
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hello eru... bc nobody want to rank you shitly map, i will make a mod. ty for your time n.n

[Easy]
Your symmetry stinks. checks all the sliders so that they are symmetrical (as explained Gero) orz, okay
02:15:030 (3) - http://puu.sh/byeaP/6322240fc7.jpg try it. hey, nice idea. done

[normal]
same like easy... stupid maper <_< D:

[hard]
woaaaa.... 00:24:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why this shit not have hitsounds... lazy <_< lol, fix

[insane]
00:29:030 (1) - okay, this will be rankable, but QAT will unrank this, be assured of that. ... i hate the system okay, you are right... fix... i made a simple an bored slider.
00:41:530 (7,1) - spacing between is no readable... try it: http://puu.sh/bycvv/e43707c092.jpg have more jumps, so. mm.. ok, i will try.
01:36:863 (3,4,5,6) - spacing is not consistent... idiot. X.x fix
02:18:947 (7,1) - wtf, this is not readable... add spacing . mm.. o..k..
02:19:363 (3,7) - and... 1.8x is a bit extreme... btw. done u.u
03:30:530 (3) - this is evil, but... nahh, is fine. o.o MWAHAHAHAHHAHA
03:50:697 (4,5) - make like 03:48:863 (2,3,4) - .__. fix
03:54:697 (5) - are you idiot??, this is unplayable... play your stupid map, nub.... ù_ú, try it: http://puu.sh/byeR5/500c105384.jpg ;__; fix.. im sorry, really >_<
Thank you for mod ;)

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Hey, pls... why anybody noticeme for rank this?? :/
riffy
Let's see if I can help you with that.

[General]
  1. Add Erase Us to the tags. After listening to the song so many times, you should already know why. :P
  2. I still think that tags DotA2 DotaCinema are not related to the song and should be removed. Think about it again, please.
  3. try to find a more matching set of colours? Your current ones look really weird with the BG and are too bright.
    Example

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 152,146,92
    Combo2 : 145,140,162
    Combo3 : 188,187,141
    Combo4 : 192,192,192
    Combo5 : 126,135,152
  4. 03:07:697 - mabe we could have a second break here. For such a long song it would be a good idea. Please, condiser that at least for Easy and Normal.
[Easy]
  1. As there are some quite long gaps, lowering HP by 0,5 or 1 might be necessary. Also, you can reduce OD due to changeable/tricky rhythm in some parts like 02:01:697.
  2. 00:27:697 (3,5) - May be a bit tricky for beginners. (5) appears right after you hit (3) and it does not look well, in my opinion. Try something like this to solve the problem.
    Note: if you want the pattern to be symmetrical, it may require some harder work, but it is also possible.
  3. 00:37:030 (2) - I would remov the whistle as it hardly fits with the song and it does not really emphasize anything.
    Note: same applies for the rest of the diffs. Do not forget to do it if you want to keep consistency!
  4. 00:40:363 (1,1) - this is too early after the spinner. You should provide more time for beginners to recover, this is really important.
    Note: see this thread for more details.
  5. 00:49:697 (2,3) - minor - (3)'s tail is too close to the previous hitobject, some beginners may mistakenly hi the tail. Try to place it somewhere else to prevent any problems.
  6. 01:17:697 (1) - minor - I'd say that one red nod would be more than enough. With the second point the slider looks unnatural and feels broken. I'd say that something like may solve the problem. You're absolutely free to reject this suggesstion if you like the curent shape.
  7. 02:45:697 - a whistle here (tail of the slider) would fit perfectly, while 02:46:697 - here it sounds really random. Same applies for all diffs and I really can't see any reason why you did it. :(
  8. 03:07:697 - 03:08:363 - useless green lines make osu confused, mind removing them?
  9. 03:25:030 (4,1) - minor - both (4) and (1) are very close to (3). Some beginners may miss (4) and click (1) by mistake. Can we make the pattern more obvious to prevent any misunderstanding? Example.
    Note: 03:30:363 (3,1) - same here, I guess.

    It looks a bit untidy, it may have some tricky patterns. But it is fine in general, don't worry. :)
[Normal]
  1. AR looks too fast. Your SV is quite normal and DS is not really big, so AR6 does not work well here, try 5 or at least 5,5.
  2. 00:08:030 (1) - the noise ends in the middle of the slider (00:08:363) and because of this, the whole slider sounds weird.Why don't you try something like this to match better with the music? :)
  3. 00:11:863 (3,4,5,1) - the movement here is vrey uncommon for Normals and looks unnatural. We can use something else to make the pattern neater. And while we are here, a slider would work better here. Example
  4. 00:17:197 (2,3,4,5) - minor -the transitions look messy and the pattern itself is not really "logical". Just try to use something like flow to make it look neater. a rough example.
  5. 00:29:030 (4,1) - minor - try to move (1)'s tail somewhere else. Players may mistakenly hit it and it does not flow well for a Normal diff.
    Note: this suggestion is based on my understanding of Normal diffs, though. Therefore, you're absolutely free to reject this suggestion if you like your current pattern.
  6. 00:34:363 (5,1) - minor - the overlap is hardly visible in game, but it's visible. Why don't we re-arrange the pattern a bit to avoid it? Example
  7. 00:40:697 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. You really should leave at least 2/1 empty space. See the thread I've linked above or ask me directly if you have any questions.
  8. 01:06:030 (3,2) - does not look readable enough. The next slider appears too early. You can easily avoid this stack and keep the pattern cool. Example.
    Note: kinda similar thing happens to 01:11:030 (3,5) - but this time it is not that serious and you're free to keep it if you want to.
  9. 02:25:030 (2,1) - personally, I think that this kind of pattern does not flow good and you can have something better here. see this example.
  10. 02:44:197 (2,3) - I don't really agree with your rhythm here. why don't you try to stick to the vocals here? It'd be much easier to play. Example
    Note: 02:49:363 - kinda similar thing. This pattern sounds cool and works with the music and vocals well, give it a try!
  11. 02:59:030 (1) - the slider's path is not really readable and the amunt of repeats is too high. 2nd, 3rd and so on repeats are hardly readable as reverse-arrows appear too fast and players aren't ready for such silder. A slider like this would do great, I guess.
  12. 03:23:697 - both drums and vocals are quite strong here, mind placing a circle at this beat? Same happens to 03:24:697 - and a few more patterns. Just check the diff once again and you'll be able to spot them.
  13. 03:25:697 (1,2,1) - the reverse-arrow on 03:28:363 (1) - is a bit overlapped with the previous slider, so it might cause you some troubles. To prevent misunderstanding and make pattern more readable, try to re-arrange the pattern in order to avoid the overlap.

    It can use a bit more work on rhythm and appearance can use more work. It's a Normal diff and the song is agressive and intense, making pattrns more difficult won't hurt, I am sure.
[Inyus' Hard]
  1. 01:04:697 (2) - it sounds very different from the previous slider. Try to place a new combo here to follow the music?
  2. 01:35:030 (1) - don't you find this spinner a bit too short? It's a 180 BPM Hard and having just 1000ms to react to the spinner and to spin it is not really enough, in my opinion.
  3. 01:59:697 - as the 1/4 sound goes on here, I'd try to add another slider like 01:59:030 (4) - or do something different here. Example1 // example2
  4. 02:52:363 (3,4) - minor - the transition can get slightly better. Example. I've seen a very similar pattern more than once, so, care to fix them all, please!
  5. 03:20:030 (6) - minor - I doubt that you intended to break your symmetry here. Restore the original pattern? I thnk it was this thing.

    The last kiai was great, I liked it. Apart from a couple of minor improvements in flow, there is not too much to impove in this diff. As I said long time ago, the diff is awesome!
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:447 - there is no beat at this point, but you have a repeat of the slider at this point. Why? An opposite thing happens to 00:06:780 - while there is an audible 1/4 beat, you decide to ignore it. In fact, there're some more.
    1. 00:07:613 - ignored.
    2. 00:08:280 - overmapped
    3. 00:14:947 (3) - overmapped
    4. And so on.
    Note: we can go through the diff and look for them together, if you feel like you need that or you can do this yourself. I am quite sure that you can do it yourself, but if you need help, just mpoke me.
  2. 00:09:697 (1,2,3,4) - the jumps feel forced. I'd start with Normal DS and gradually increase DS on this pattern to represent the way how volume ghoes higher.
  3. 00:14:530 (5,1) - does this x2,0 DS here really fit? I don't think so, to be honest. I'd rather keep consistent DS for this pattern.
    Note: 00:15:363 (1,2) - similar thing. The 1/2>1/4 stack is quite tricky and does not really work here.
  4. 00:43:530 (2,3,4) - 00:44:863 (2,3,4,5) - I do not really like the idea of compressed 1/4s here. As they slowdown the cursor a bit, it sorta breaks the flow and does not seem pleasant to play. Try to keep the 1/4s spaced normally, so, the cursor will have consistent moving and kiai will get more epic.
    Note: it's kinda hard to exaplain how and why you should do this, but if you try to do it and test the kiai yourself, I am sure that you'll see that it really plays great. ;_;
  5. 00:54:863 (6,1) - you've lost a little jump here, haven't you? It might fit with the pattern and with the music.
  6. 01:04:197 (6,1,2) - whoa, this is a big too change, do't you agree? Try an 1/1 stack to end the previous pattern and start with little 1/1 jumps afterwards to keep the flow? Example.
  7. 01:25:697 (1,2,3) - a very similar with the suggestion above, the spacing changes look really weird. Having 01:25:697 (1,2) - stacked seems like a better idea, at least to me.
  8. 01:47:697 (4) - you don't really need this new combo, I think. It conflicts with your comboing and seems a bit out of place here.
  9. 01:54:613 (8,1) - minor - according to your pattern you should use x1,15 DS here, which means that there still will be a little overlap. Example.
  10. 02:01:030 (4,5) - does this jump really match with the music? It feels randomly placed, to be honest. Maybe, having a jump from (1) to (2) would represent the vocals better? Try it.
  11. 02:06:197 (4,5,6) -minor - inconsistent spacing here. It is noticeable in game and it makes the diff look untidy. :(
  12. 02:57:530 (3,1) - the jumps that don't match with the music, again. i am sure that you know that jumps are supposed to stress some aspects of the diff, rather than keep players stressed. ;_; Try to avoid the jump here and be careful with the jumps in this part in general.
  13. 03:04:363 (1) - just a circle would do perfect here. The slider is overrmapped and is not necessary at all.
    Note: 03:06:363 (1,1) - same?
  14. 03:05:030 (1,1,1) - these NCs give extra and unnecessary HP. Please, remove the NCs to keeep the gameplay balanced and challenging enough.
  15. 03:23:363 (1,2,3) - 03:25:030 (10,11,12,13) - you use different spacing values for 1/4s in the same combo. It looks inconsistent and does not reallyrerpresent anything in the music. It happens a few more times, so, pay attention to your 1/4s!

    The diff needs more work, I think. Some patterns sound off, some jumps are exaggerated or even random, at least they are random to me. You really should pay some attention to consistency, too!
You can work on your rhythm more and fix the placement, as well. Once you do it, I felt like hitsounds were quite inconsistent, so I suggest to get someone to check them. You did a good job and I understand how hard it is for you, but I am also sure that you can make it even better.

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Best of luck!
Nyukai
Another Bakari's mod? So pro, lol.

Going to check it asap~
Gero

XinCrin wrote:

Muy lindo todo muy hermoso.

¿Y la bubble, pibe?
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
Hi. Sorry for the delay ... This mod many changes involved did not want to do xD!

-Bakari- wrote:

Let's see if I can help you with that. very very thx bakari... really appreciate a lot >__<

[General]
  1. Add Erase Us to the tags. After listening to the song so many times, you should already know why. :P yeah. apply
  2. I still think that tags DotA2 DotaCinema are not related to the song and should be removed. Think about it again, please. Tags are a means search. Having it does no wrong, also really think this is not abuse, and that have an indirect relationship.
  3. try to find a more matching set of colours? Your current ones look really weird with the BG and are too bright. oh, really sorry, i dont like this color set :/ is true that they are not very close to the BG, but that is my intention. In addition, the BG colors are very opaque. I think bright colors look better.
    Example

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 152,146,92
    Combo2 : 145,140,162
    Combo3 : 188,187,141
    Combo4 : 192,192,192
    Combo5 : 126,135,152
  4. 03:07:697 - mabe we could have a second break here. For such a long song it would be a good idea. Please, condiser that at least for Easy and Normal. i dont agree, the spinner is the map's soul hehehe
[Easy]
  1. As there are some quite long gaps, lowering HP by 0,5 or 1 might be necessary. Also, you can reduce OD due to changeable/tricky rhythm in some parts like 02:01:697. HP no chaned, OD=1
  2. 00:27:697 (3,5) - May be a bit tricky for beginners. (5) appears right after you hit (3) and it does not look well, in my opinion. Try something like this to solve the problem. done
    Note: if you want the pattern to be symmetrical, it may require some harder work, but it is also possible.
  3. 00:37:030 (2) - I would remov the whistle as it hardly fits with the song and it does not really emphasize anything.
    Note: same applies for the rest of the diffs. Do not forget to do it if you want to keep consistency! mm... i dont agree, is not as I hope it is.
  4. 00:40:363 (1,1) - this is too early after the spinner. You should provide more time for beginners to recover, this is really important.
    Note: see this thread for more details. ORZ... Garveeeeennn. Fix.
  5. 00:49:697 (2,3) - minor - (3)'s tail is too close to the previous hitobject, some beginners may mistakenly hi the tail. Try to place it somewhere else to prevent any problems. fix
  6. 01:17:697 (1) - minor - I'd say that one red nod would be more than enough. With the second point the slider looks unnatural and feels broken. I'd say that something like may solve the problem. You're absolutely free to reject this suggesstion if you like the curent shape. fix
  7. 02:45:697 - a whistle here (tail of the slider) would fit perfectly, while 02:46:697 - here it sounds really random. Same applies for all diffs and I really can't see any reason why you did it. :( same before, is not as I hope it is. Your sugestion is good, but i want emphasis where are wistles.
  8. 03:07:697 - 03:08:363 - useless green lines make osu confused, mind removing them? Fix in all my maps
  9. 03:25:030 (4,1) - minor - both (4) and (1) are very close to (3). Some beginners may miss (4) and click (1) by mistake. Can we make the pattern more obvious to prevent any misunderstanding? Example. Done
    Note: 03:30:363 (3,1) - same here, I guess. and done ;)

    It looks a bit untidy, it may have some tricky patterns. But it is fine in general, don't worry. :)
yey!

[Normal]
  1. AR looks too fast. Your SV is quite normal and DS is not really big, so AR6 does not work well here, try 5 or at least 5,5. 5.5
  2. 00:08:030 (1) - the noise ends in the middle of the slider (00:08:363) and because of this, the whole slider sounds weird.Why don't you try something like this to match better with the music? :) no changes here. i want a "mute" efect, so, is fine for me.
  3. 00:11:863 (3,4,5,1) - the movement here is vrey uncommon for Normals and looks unnatural. We can use something else to make the pattern neater. And while we are here, a slider would work better here. Example I know it's not common, but I honestly think it is acceptable to a normal level.
  4. 00:17:197 (2,3,4,5) - minor -the transitions look messy and the pattern itself is not really "logical". Just try to use something like flow to make it look neater. a rough example. I moved it a little, but not much.
  5. 00:29:030 (4,1) - minor - try to move (1)'s tail somewhere else. Players may mistakenly hit it and it does not flow well for a Normal diff.
    Note: this suggestion is based on my understanding of Normal diffs, though. Therefore, you're absolutely free to reject this suggestion if you like your current pattern. reject ^^ hehe
  6. 00:34:363 (5,1) - minor - the overlap is hardly visible in game, but it's visible. Why don't we re-arrange the pattern a bit to avoid it? Example hummm.... o.. k...
  7. 00:40:697 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. You really should leave at least 2/1 empty space. See the thread I've linked above or ask me directly if you have any questions. Gaaarrrveeeenn >_<, Done.
  8. 01:06:030 (3,2) - does not look readable enough. The next slider appears too early. You can easily avoid this stack and keep the pattern cool. Example. orz, i understand the pont (idont agree), but ok, fix
    Note: kinda similar thing happens to 01:11:030 (3,5) - but this time it is not that serious and you're free to keep it if you want to.
  9. 02:25:030 (2,1) - personally, I think that this kind of pattern does not flow good and you can have something better here. see this example. mm.. no changed.
  10. 02:44:197 (2,3) - I don't really agree with your rhythm here. why don't you try to stick to the vocals here? It'd be much easier to play. Example
    Note: 02:49:363 - kinda similar thing. This pattern sounds cool and works with the music and vocals well, give it a try! i know the vocals ar easier for play, but drums I feel this did not difficult. btw, noob testplayers no failed here
  11. 02:59:030 (1) - the slider's path is not really readable and the amunt of repeats is too high. 2nd, 3rd and so on repeats are hardly readable as reverse-arrows appear too fast and players aren't ready for such silder. A slider like this would do great, I guess.
  12. 03:23:697 - both drums and vocals are quite strong here, mind placing a circle at this beat? Same happens to 03:24:697 - and a few more patterns. Just check the diff once again and you'll be able to spot them. bc im following the "Electronic piano" here. no changed.
  13. 03:25:697 (1,2,1) - the reverse-arrow on 03:28:363 (1) - is a bit overlapped with the previous slider, so it might cause you some troubles. To prevent misunderstanding and make pattern more readable, try to re-arrange the pattern in order to avoid the overlap.
    I change all
    It can use a bit more work on rhythm and appearance can use more work. It's a Normal diff and the song is agressive and intense, making pattrns more difficult won't hurt, I am sure.
hehehe


[Insane]
  1. 00:06:447 - there is no beat at this point, but you have a repeat of the slider at this point. Why? An opposite thing happens to 00:06:780 - while there is an audible 1/4 beat, you decide to ignore it. In fact, there're some more.
    1. 00:07:613 - ignored.
    2. 00:08:280 - overmapped
    3. 00:14:947 (3) - overmapped
    4. And so on.
    Note: we can go through the diff and look for them together, if you feel like you need that or you can do this yourself. I am quite sure that you can do it yourself, but if you need help, just mpoke me.
    I imprive all rhythms
  2. 00:09:697 (1,2,3,4) - the jumps feel forced. I'd start with Normal DS and gradually increase DS on this pattern to represent the way how volume ghoes higher. Dake's Blame.
  3. 00:14:530 (5,1) - does this x2,0 DS here really fit? I don't think so, to be honest. I'd rather keep consistent DS for this pattern.
    Note: 00:15:363 (1,2) - similar thing. The 1/2>1/4 stack is quite tricky and does not really work here. Changed a bit.
  4. 00:43:530 (2,3,4) - 00:44:863 (2,3,4,5) - I do not really like the idea of compressed 1/4s here. As they slowdown the cursor a bit, it sorta breaks the flow and does not seem pleasant to play. Try to keep the 1/4s spaced normally, so, the cursor will have consistent moving and kiai will get more epic.
    Note: it's kinda hard to exaplain how and why you should do this, but if you try to do it and test the kiai yourself, I am sure that you'll see that it really plays great. ;_; I understand. But there are some triples that I wanted to leave as they are, just because I want to "slow" flow. :)
  5. 00:54:863 (6,1) - you've lost a little jump here, haven't you? It might fit with the pattern and with the music. humm... i try something
  6. 01:04:197 (6,1,2) - whoa, this is a big too change, do't you agree? Try an 1/1 stack to end the previous pattern and start with little 1/1 jumps afterwards to keep the flow? Example. sorry, i really like this anti-jump xD
  7. 01:25:697 (1,2,3) - a very similar with the suggestion above, the spacing changes look really weird. Having 01:25:697 (1,2) - stacked seems like a better idea, at least to me. but it is quite readable. imo
  8. 01:47:697 (4) - you don't really need this new combo, I think. It conflicts with your comboing and seems a bit out of place here. fix
  9. 01:54:613 (8,1) - minor - according to your pattern you should use x1,15 DS here, which means that there still will be a little overlap. Example. fix
  10. 02:01:030 (4,5) - does this jump really match with the music? It feels randomly placed, to be honest. Maybe, having a jump from (1) to (2) would represent the vocals better? Try it. the jump is in "wake ___ up"... i think is fine.
  11. 02:06:197 (4,5,6) -minor - inconsistent spacing here. It is noticeable in game and it makes the diff look untidy. :( This is not minor... xD remap u.u
  12. 02:57:530 (3,1) - the jumps that don't match with the music, again. i am sure that you know that jumps are supposed to stress some aspects of the diff, rather than keep players stressed. ;_; Try to avoid the jump here and be careful with the jumps in this part in general. I would call it, concentrates. not stressed
  13. 03:04:363 (1) - just a circle would do perfect here. The slider is overrmapped and is not necessary at all. .____________________. fix
    Note: 03:06:363 (1,1) - same? ^
  14. 03:05:030 (1,1,1) - these NCs give extra and unnecessary HP. Please, remove the NCs to keeep the gameplay balanced and challenging enough. Not changes here... bc with HR this too dificult. see in: p/3308016 autoplay with NC and without NC
  15. 03:23:363 (1,2,3) - 03:25:030 (10,11,12,13) - you use different spacing values for 1/4s in the same combo. It looks inconsistent and does not reallyrerpresent anything in the music. It happens a few more times, so, pay attention to your 1/4s! fix

    The diff needs more work, I think. Some patterns sound off, some jumps are exaggerated or even random, at least they are random to me. You really should pay some attention to consistency, too!
You can work on your rhythm more and fix the placement, as well. Once you do it, I felt like hitsounds were quite inconsistent, so I suggest to get someone to check them. You did a good job and I understand how hard it is for you, but I am also sure that you can make it even better.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
uffff... all update...

PD: inyus... cambiaste alguna cosa??
xtrem3x
IRC Log sobre diff Insane
14:24 xtrem3x: 01:31:030 hasta 01:33:697 <<< no debiste cambiar el ritmo de eso
14:25 ErunamoJAZZ: oh!
14:25 ErunamoJAZZ: ya..
14:25 ErunamoJAZZ: si, es unc ambio a 1/3
14:25 ErunamoJAZZ: :S
14:26 xtrem3x: antes si se podia agarrar bien eso, orita lo traté y me sali de borda
14:26 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
14:26 ErunamoJAZZ: creo que algo esta malo
14:26 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a mirarlo con calma.. en un ratico
14:48 ErunamoJAZZ: Efectivamente
14:48 ErunamoJAZZ: estaban mal snapeados
14:48 ErunamoJAZZ: tanto el insane como el hard
14:48 ErunamoJAZZ: (casualmente el normal estaba bien, y el easy que no sigue ese ritmo)
14:48 xtrem3x: lol
14:49 xtrem3x: ps al menos ya lo viste
14:49 xtrem3x: me debes medio kudo (aja claro XD)
14:50 ErunamoJAZZ: jamás hubiera visto ese error, en standard es inperceptible
14:50 xtrem3x: por eso te digo, veme en taiko y sabrás si hay otro error
14:50 ErunamoJAZZ: actualiza
14:56 xtrem3x: dejando de lado la impresicion que tengo ya está
14:56 ErunamoJAZZ: :D
14:56 ErunamoJAZZ: muchisimas gracias n.n
14:57 xtrem3x: son arreglos que no necesitan kudo
14:57 ErunamoJAZZ: con esto ya tengo la seguridad de que está listo para rank
14:57 ErunamoJAZZ: oye, descubriste un error tipo unrank
14:57 xtrem3x: ?
14:58 xtrem3x: y no modeo standard
14:58 ErunamoJAZZ: igual postea, que necito mods, y eso cuenta como uno


Mini Mod en Inyus Hard

01:33:575 - el slider es correcto pero termina 1/8 o 1/12 mas tarde de la barra de beat lo cual en taiko quedaria

k k | D << y no unida la D (Nota roja grande) con la barra de division de beat
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
Very thanks xtrem3x!!!.
Fix unsnaped 1/3 sliders in 01:31:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (Insane and Hard).
Nyukai

-Bakari- wrote:

[Inyus' Hard]
  1. 01:04:697 (2) - it sounds very different from the previous slider. Try to place a new combo here to follow the music? NC is already on stanza. So, I consider unnecesary a NC here.
  2. 01:35:030 (1) - don't you find this spinner a bit too short? It's a 180 BPM Hard and having just 1000ms to react to the spinner and to spin it is not really enough, in my opinion. Okay, tried something different.
  3. 01:59:697 - as the 1/4 sound goes on here, I'd try to add another slider like 01:59:030 (4) - or do something different here. Wanted to add a little pause. Doesn't sound bad imo.Example1 // example2
  4. 02:52:363 (3,4) - minor - the transition can get slightly better. Example. I've seen a very similar pattern more than once, so, care to fix them all, please! Well, I did something different, I couldn't do your example since that will be breaking DS. And thanks, I'll take care.
  5. 03:20:030 (6) - minor - I doubt that you intended to break your symmetry here. Restore the original pattern? I thnk it was this thing. Okay xD

    The last kiai was great, I liked it. Apart from a couple of minor improvements in flow, there is not too much to impove in this diff. As I said long time ago, the diff is awesome!
Sorry for the delay =w=

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320,216,177363,2,0,P|320:260|400:316,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,256,177863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,180,178030,2,0,P|440:128|388:56,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,56,178530,2,0,L|260:112,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,179030,6,2,B|256:284|256:284|384:196,1,280,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,180030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,40,180363,2,0,L|24:176,2,140,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,181363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,40,181697,2,0,L|488:176,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,308,182363,6,0,L|392:324,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,182697,2,0,B|240:320|240:320|156:280,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,183363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,183697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,183863,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,184030,2,0,B|272:64|272:64|326:89,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,236,184697,6,0,L|418:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,185030,2,0,L|321:321,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,256,185363,2,0,L|190:321,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,185697,2,0,L|93:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,186030,2,0,L|93:95,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,36,186363,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,36,187030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187197,12,0,197697,0:0:0:0:
220,44,198030,6,0,L|187:105,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,44,198363,2,0,L|324:105,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,198697,2,0,L|256:240,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,199030,2,0,P|324:288|404:220,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,151,199530,2,0,P|348:104|280:96,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,200030,2,0,L|240:196,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,200530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,288,200697,2,0,L|284:368,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,350,201030,2,0,L|188:288,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,256,201363,2,0,L|116:176,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,201697,2,0,P|116:104|232:88,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,62,202197,2,0,P|361:51|396:108,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,184,202697,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,252,202863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,203030,6,0,P|244:276|140:332,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,364,203530,2,0,L|40:220,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,150,204030,2,0,L|96:20,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,16,204530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,204697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,52,204863,2,0,P|316:84|404:148,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,205363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,236,205530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,205697,6,0,B|264:268|240:288|240:288|172:288,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,206363,2,0,B|264:116|240:96|240:96|172:96,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,207030,6,0,L|356:192,2,280,2|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,268,208530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,208697,2,0,P|144:324|196:356,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,209030,2,0,P|304:340|344:252,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,209530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,119,209697,2,0,P|325:56|260:44,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,210197,2,0,L|108:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,60,210697,2,0,L|68:220,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,276,211197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,211363,2,0,P|164:332|204:296,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,317,212030,2,0,P|353:333|388:332,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,212363,6,0,L|464:176,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,116,212863,2,0,P|432:116|340:172,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,213363,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,228,213530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,169,213697,6,0,P|116:125|48:116,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,214197,2,0,P|48:220|128:316,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,308,214697,2,0,P|256:308|348:352,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,215197,2,0,L|524:224,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,152,215697,2,0,L|396:76,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,76,216197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,216363,6,0,P|212:120|128:56,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,217030,2,0,P|212:264|128:328,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217697,12,0,218697,0:0:0:0:
100,196,219030,6,0,P|132:196|172:160,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,219363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,120,219447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,219530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,219697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,175,219863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,272,220363,6,0,L|352:332,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,351,220697,2,0,L|288:300,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,221030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,221197,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,104,221363,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,28,221530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,221697,6,0,L|128:120,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,222197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222530,2,0,L|384:120,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,168,222863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,223030,6,0,P|400:244|284:312,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,223530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,291,223697,2,0,P|152:253|84:244,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
28,192,224197,1,2,0:2:0:0:
88,144,224363,6,0,L|77:74,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,224697,2,0,L|153:70,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,196,225030,2,0,L|200:284,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,196,225363,2,0,L|312:284,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,140,225697,6,0,L|358:70,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,226030,2,0,L|504:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,226363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,332,226530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,332,226697,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,268,226863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,227030,6,0,L|256:144,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,227363,2,0,L|292:72,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227863,2,0,L|180:132,1,70,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228363,6,0,P|148:244|216:316,1,140,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,376,228863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,313,229030,2,0,P|355:267|364:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,229697,6,0,P|140:120|228:200,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,173,230197,2,0,P|347:127|416:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,164,230697,2,0,B|480:236|480:236|416:304,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,231197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,231363,2,0,P|248:316|136:264,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,172,232030,6,0,P|92:172|176:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,232530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,232697,2,0,L|256:200,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,233197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,56,233363,2,0,P|396:56|440:24,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,32,233697,2,0,P|512:68|444:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,231,234197,2,0,P|502:283|512:352,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,351,234697,2,0,P|406:330|372:328,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,235030,6,0,P|264:312|168:240,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,235530,2,0,P|140:148|244:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,103,236030,2,0,P|357:122|372:188,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,236530,2,0,L|336:340,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,237030,2,0,P|168:232|120:236,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,152,237363,2,0,P|176:150|208:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,237697,6,0,P|288:76|392:156,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,238363,2,0,P|288:308|392:228,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,239030,2,0,P|245:118|211:111,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,192,239363,2,0,L|212:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,243,239697,2,0,P|245:265|211:272,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,343,240030,2,0,P|272:337|300:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
272,244,240363,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,72,242363,1,2,2:0:0:0:
396,72,243030,5,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,243113,12,0,249697,0:0:0:0:
CSLM
mmmm....
star... suerte :D
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
Gracias xD

Ayer tuve problemas actualizando el mapa por un error con el BSS.
En la noche actualizo, y también quedo pendiente del check de inyus (me dijo que lo haría el findesemana n.n).
Nyukai
He reproducido varias veces (25% playback rate) ese slider. Según mi oído coincide bien, no sé cuál es el problema.
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

Inyuschan wrote:

He reproducido varias veces (25% playback rate) ese slider. Según mi oído coincide bien, no sé cuál es el problema.
El problema básicamente es que se viene de una sección de 1/3, y luego al final exitendes esto terminandolo a 1/4 (ok, puede que me equivoque, no estoy en mi casa ahora para fijarme :P ). Creo que la voz sí se extiende más allá del tick blanco de inicio de compas, pero, si fueramos consistentes, sí debería acabar en ese tick.

Si ves el mapa en modo taiko, creo que comprenderás mejor la cuestión :3
Nyukai
Dead D:
CSLM
rip star in vane D:
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
Updated.

I fix a geen line unsnaped in ENH, and improve all insane, have not random jumps now.


I really hope any BAT will helpme to rank this map. Really Very Thank for support this >_<!
Okoratu
oh it's alive again, great to see this back~
Gero
I'll take care of this one o/
DeletedUser_4329079
That long spinner is arm-breaking :D
Prancer
I've been waiting for this for a long time. Come on.
pkhg
Holaa o/ I suck at modding

[General]
No seria mejor el preview point aqui 01:36:363v - ? no se, yo digo nomas :v
02:09:363 - No le veo mucho sentido al kiai aqui, pero seguro tendras una razon :D
03:07:197 (1) - De veras podrias considerar incluso borrar este spinner, un break aqui seria mejor :3

[Easy]
Intenta con CS3, no hay mucha diferencia de dificultad y al menos para mi se ve mejor con CS3 >.<

03:09:030 (1) - muy dificil, pon un break mejor
04:03:363 (1) - no se tu pero para mi seria mejor que terminara aqui 04:08:363 - si lo haces aplicalo al normal igual :3

[Normal]

01:27:697 (2) - este slider puede ser mas hermoso :3
01:39:030 (4) - toca la barra de HP y se ve mejor asi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333493
02:16:363 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333503 mas bonito :3
02:17:697 (3) - este igual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333508
02:19:030 (5) - este esta bien pero podria ser mejor :D
02:50:363 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333521
02:59:030 (1) - esto puede ser muy confuso, sobre todo para los novatos. normalmente uno espera solo una vuelta
03:08:363 (1) - lo veo muy dificil para una normal, vendria mejor un break, que dices? :3
03:17:697 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333526
04:03:363 (1) - muy largo, podrias acortarlo un poco o borrarlo :3

[Inyus' Hard]

No me gusta mucho la simetria pero te quedo genial, hubiera sido perfecto sin el copy+paste. Ignorando eso, muy buen mapa Inyus, me encantan los Hard de este tipo :3

03:07:197 (1) - este spinner me molesta en todas las diffs :/

[Insane]
Como te habia dicho, es imposible pasar esta diff con HR a menos que puedas spinnear a 477 lo cual es unrankeable. HP 6 parece perfecto pero considerando que el auto saca siempre SS te recomiendo buscar algun testplay con HR :3

00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - no te parece muy dificil x.x sobre todo con HR
00:44:863 (2) - Nadie espera mas de una vuelta, puede ser algo confuso
00:50:197 (1,2,3) - Trata de ser consistente con el spacing de los streams, si es posible trata de hacerlos todos como este 00:51:530 (3,4,5) - si hay algo que no me gusta son los streams separados :/
01:13:030 (6) - Alejalo un poco del 01:13:363 (1) - cosa de que no se toquen
01:17:030 (6,7) - ^
01:27:697 (1) - Yo pondria este por aqui http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333629 x:365 y:258 mas o menos
01:40:197 (5) - Te parece http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333637 No me gusta mucho stackeado en el (4)
01:44:697 (2,3,4) - Puede ser medio complicado dalrle al (3)
01:54:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Yo igual he hecho esto varias veces pero no va muy bien aqui (si, yo tambien termino arreglando esto siempre :c), mejor que esten todos a x0,7
01:59:030 (4) - Este casi no se nota, trata de ubicarlo donde sea mas visible
03:06:197 (2) - Ponle NC a ese tambien :3
03:33:030 (3,4,5) - Reduce el spacing plz
03:39:030 (1) - Demasiado lejos del 03:38:947 (4) - ubicalo como si fuera un circulo mas del stream, a x0.9 mas o menos

Eso es todo, buen map y buena suerte \:3/
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

pkhg wrote:

Holaa o/ I suck at modding

[General]
No seria mejor el preview point aqui 01:36:363v - ? no se, yo digo nomas :v nahh, ahí ya es muy intenso, me gusta más en el otro porque se siente como sube.
02:09:363 - No le veo mucho sentido al kiai aqui, pero seguro tendras una razon :D por el insane xD
03:07:197 (1) - De veras podrias considerar incluso borrar este spinner, un break aqui seria mejor :3 lo siento, ese spiner es el alma del mapa

[Easy]
Intenta con CS3, no hay mucha diferencia de dificultad y al menos para mi se ve mejor con CS3 >.< nahh, espacié especialmente para CS2, si, son muy grandes, pero lo prefiero así. Mas pequeños no dejaría a los little noobs experimentar con HR, y es parte de lo que quiero con esto.

03:09:030 (1) - muy dificil, pon un break mejor mm.. realmente pienso que el espacio antes y después que le dejé es suficiente.
04:03:363 (1) - no se tu pero para mi seria mejor que terminara aqui 04:08:363 - si lo haces aplicalo al normal igual :3 ay, no lo sé... en parte tienes razón, pero no sé si sea buena idea conciderando que todas las diffs está terminando en el mismo sitio... orz. De aquí a que lo revice un bat lo pensaré.

[Normal]

01:27:697 (2) - este slider puede ser mas hermoso :3 hecho >:3
01:39:030 (4) - toca la barra de HP y se ve mejor asi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333493 No lo toca :3 http://puu.sh/dr4N2/d268525640.jpg , además, no cambia mucho.
02:16:363 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333503 mas bonito :3 meh, muy nazi, pero bueno xD
02:17:697 (3) - este igual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333508 done
02:19:030 (5) - este esta bien pero podria ser mejor :D done
02:50:363 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333521 done
02:59:030 (1) - esto puede ser muy confuso, sobre todo para los novatos. normalmente uno espera solo una vuelta Los testplays con noobs me mostraron que solo uno de 7 se equivoca ahí.
03:08:363 (1) - lo veo muy dificil para una normal, vendria mejor un break, que dices? :3 lo mismo que en general xD
03:17:697 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333526 :/, done
04:03:363 (1) - muy largo, podrias acortarlo un poco o borrarlo :3 Lo mismo que en easy.. voy a pensarlo


[Insane]
Como te habia dicho, es imposible pasar esta diff con HR a menos que puedas spinnear a 477 lo cual es unrankeable. HP 6 parece perfecto pero considerando que el auto saca siempre SS te recomiendo buscar algun testplay con HR :3

00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - no te parece muy dificil x.x sobre todo con HR, nope xD. y conste que también lo he jugado con HR.
00:44:863 (2) - Nadie espera mas de una vuelta, puede ser algo confuso mm.. no lo creo, no es un patron dificil de leer, a menos que juegues sin dormir y en modo automático (?) xD
00:50:197 (1,2,3) - Trata de ser consistente con el spacing de los streams, si es posible trata de hacerlos todos como este 00:51:530 (3,4,5) - si hay algo que no me gusta son los streams separados :/ La mayoría estan más juntos, este en particular (y el triple anterior) no los hice más juntos fue para no dañar el efecto de "aceleración" que da el spacing que les sigue... no se sentía muy natural así que por eso decidí espaciarlo más.
01:13:030 (6) - Alejalo un poco del 01:13:363 (1) - cosa de que no se toquen done
01:17:030 (6,7) - ^ Aquí no estoy deacuerdo.
01:27:697 (1) - Yo pondria este por aqui http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333629 x:365 y:258 mas o menos no, quiero dejarlo en 4.0x
01:40:197 (5) - Te parece http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2333637 No me gusta mucho stackeado en el (4) Decidí cambiarlo todo xD, dime si lo sientes mejor.
01:44:697 (2,3,4) - Puede ser medio complicado dalrle al (3) Cosa de lectura.
01:54:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Yo igual he hecho esto varias veces pero no va muy bien aqui (si, yo tambien termino arreglando esto siempre :c), mejor que esten todos a x0,7 De los testplays que he pedido, nadie ha perdido combo aquí... como comienza bastante pequeño, no es realmente dificil (excepto con HR tal vez xD), realmente no lo quier cambiar :(
01:59:030 (4) - Este casi no se nota, trata de ubicarlo donde sea mas visible Así es como se ve en el juego http://puu.sh/dr8Yd/bfbdfdc1c7.jpg, realmente no sé donde poder moverlo, ya que si lo hago más cerca del final del slider, queda entonces demasiado lejos del stream, y si lo pongo más hacia arriba, se hace muchisimo más dificil pegarle, sin mencionar que quedaría por fuera del flow... de verdad no sé, creo que que la mejor alternativa es tal y como esta ahora.
03:06:197 (2) - Ponle NC a ese tambien :3 lel, creo que no... ya me los critican mucho (aun cuando trato de salvar a los HR players con esto xD)
03:33:030 (3,4,5) - Reduce el spacing plz ups, entre 2 y 3 no estaba a 1.0x. Fixed
03:39:030 (1) - Demasiado lejos del 03:38:947 (4) - ubicalo como si fuera un circulo mas del stream, a x0.9 mas o menos hice... algo así xD

Eso es todo, buen map y buena suerte \:3/
Muchisimas gracias por tu mod, de verdad, muchisimas gracias ^^
BerryJellyXD
Easy seems kind of long for new players to start so maybe add some breaks between:
1.25:697
1.36:363
and on :
3.07:030
3:17:697
Other then that looks like a ranked one already,

Normal actually looks fine to me iff you got a sense of rythm.

Hard looks ok pretty good its only that out of the 8 streams placed like 4 are placed ina row near the end.
I think people wont like it to play like 3 minutes to then fail near the end and having to play the song all over again.

Insane:im not touching this as im kind of new as a mod. (and i just suck to much in osu to even make that yet.)

CTB: same story i only mod osu maps cos i play those as i have no idea how a CTB map even should look.

I hope this is usefull,
And i hope even more that this will be ranked because i think people will love to play it.
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
SPOILER

JellyberryXD wrote:

Easy seems kind of long for new players to start so maybe add some breaks between:
1.25:697
1.36:363
and on :
3.07:030
3:17:697
Other then that looks like a ranked one already,

Normal actually looks fine to me iff you got a sense of rythm.

Hard looks ok pretty good its only that out of the 8 streams placed like 4 are placed ina row near the end.
I think people wont like it to play like 3 minutes to then fail near the end and having to play the song all over again.

Insane:im not touching this as im kind of new as a mod. (and i just suck to much in osu to even make that yet.)

CTB: same story i only mod osu maps cos i play those as i have no idea how a CTB map even should look.

I hope this is usefull,
And i hope even more that this will be ranked because i think people will love to play it.
Very thanks for see the mapset.
I thinnk slow secctions where you suggest breaks in easy, are not necessary, as the map is slow, and it gives enough space to pick up the "pace".
Gero
Vale, como te prometí hace días, aquí esta el tan esperado recheck.

General

  1. Dentro de tu carpeta hay un .osb que prácticamente esta inutilizado ya que no hay un storyboard de por medio, así que lo ideal seria que lo removieras de ahí.
Easy

OD +1 para mantener equilibrados los settings.

  1. 00:07:697 (2,1) - Voy a ser un poco nazi pero creo que el blanket entre ambos objetos no es muy estético para ser honesto, que opinas de mover esto a X: 344 Y: 252? se ve mucho mejor imo.
  2. 00:24:363 (2,3) - El ritmo aca es bastante extraño y no encaja del todo bien con la canción ya que hay un sonido que esta ignorando en 00:24:697 - así que una solución rápida seria eliminar ambas notas y remplazarlas por un slider 1/1, para así evitar cambios bruscos respecto al ritmo.
  3. 00:25:363 (1,2) - Lo mismo para estos, algo como esto seria bastante mejor y por mucho es mas así evitamos usar un ritmo muy complejo y disminuimos el star rating.
  4. 00:29:030 (5) - Que opinas sobre usar CTRL + G a este slider para mejorar un poco el flujo? ya que la dirección en la que se encuentra ahora mismo es bastante extraña a mi parecer. (No te preocupes no hay rompimiento de spacing)
  5. 01:07:030 (3) - Me parece que haz olvidado añadir un new combo, ya que este es bastante largo en comparación a los demás.
  6. 01:16:363 (2) - Se que tu intención de hacer un blanket con 1 es buena pero en lo personal prefiero no romper el spacing por nada en dificultades fáciles así que coloca 2 al lugar que le corresponde.
  7. 01:19:030 (3) - ¿Por que no hacer lo mismo que acá 00:56:363 (1) - x)? me refiero al añadir un punto rojo en medio del slider, ya que ahora mismo ese se ve bastante mal hablando estéticamente, es una cosa mejor así que eres libre de ignorarlo.
  8. 01:31:030 (1) - Considera la posibilidad de añadir un finish aquí ya que la voz en esta parte es bastante fuerte, es mas lo haz añadido en las demás dificultades así que ¿por que no?
  9. 01:57:697 (1) - Sampleset normal acompañado de un addition soft y whistle?
  10. 02:03:030 (3) - Estoy bastante seguro que el new combo debería de ir aquí ya que el cambio de lírica es bastante evidente obviamente si haces esto recuerda eliminarlo de aca 02:04:863 (1) - x) y por ultimo añadir uno en 02:05:697 - x) para que el patrón de combos este mas equilibrado.
  11. 02:13:697 (1,2,3) - Mueve esto un grid a la derecha para que este bien centrado en la cuadricula de igual manera seria 100 % simétrico.
  12. 02:21:697 (1,2) - Te recomendaría aumentar un poco el spacing entre ambos objetos ya que están demasiado cerca y puede genera un poco de confusión ya que puede entenderse que el ritmo esta mas aproximado de lo que en realidad se encuentra, usa un spacing mas elevado, así como hiciste acá 01:25:697 (1,2) -x) creo que con eso seria suficiente.
  13. 03:04:363 (1,2) - Lo mismo sobre el spacing, un consejo que te doy es que para tus futuros mapas no cambies de 1.0 a 1.1 en dificultades fáciles, mantén una igual desde un principio para evitar confusiones y malos entendidos, por ahora ya lo hiciste así en toda la dificultad pero tengo en cuenta por favor.
  14. 02:57:030 (4,5) - Para ser honesto preferiría no usar patrones que tengan la misma dirección ya que para los jugadores que no son muy experimentados esto puede crearles un conflicto así que una solución rápida seria hacer lo mismo que acá 02:51:697 (4,5) - x)
  15. 03:15:363 - Añade un break manual acá, es demasiado el tiempo de espera al transcurrir a la siguiente nota.
  16. 03:29:030 (1,2,3) - El corte de flujo aqui es bastante extraño a mi parecer, que hay sobre realizar algo como esto para evitarlo? (03:34:030 (1,2,3,4) - así como aquí ya que el ritmo en el kiai es constante)
  17. 04:00:363 (1) - Procura no usar notas ocultas de este tipo, intenta mover esta nota a otro lugar por favor.
  18. 04:02:363 (2) - Olvidaste añadir un whistle en la cola del slider? creo que si ya que en la Insane lo haz añadido.
Normal

AR 5.5 no encaja para nada y menos teniendo un BPM un tanto elevado, considera usar 5 en lugar.

  1. 00:05:697 (1,2,3) - Creo que ritmos complejos al iniciar una dificultad normal no es el todo correcto a mi parecer, así que opto por eliminar esto y hacer algo menos complicado acá, intenta esto tal vez?
  2. 00:08:030 (1) - Hmm... que estas siguiendo exactamente aqui? creeme que suena un tanto raro, es mas el new combo deberia de ir en 00:08:363 - x) no antes asi que esto a mi parecer crea un tanto de inconsistencia, considera eliminar esto y añadir una nota en 00:08:030 -x) obviamente con un slider 1/1 de aqui 00:08:363 - hasta aca 00:08:697 - x)
  3. 00:10:363 - El sampleset no debería de ser drum?
  4. 00:29:030 (4,1) - Te recomendaría evitar flows y sliders de este tipo en normales, ya que puede ser un tanto confuso para jugadores no experimentados.
  5. 00:45:697 (1) - Una cosa insignificante pero, por que usar mas de 3 puntos blancos si en realidad puedes usar la opción default de los sliders circulares.
  6. 01:03:030 (1,1) - No hay suficiente tiempo de recuperación después de un spinner así que te recomiendo eliminar esta nota 01:05:030 (1) - para evitar cualquier inconveniente y tal.
  7. 01:35:030 (1,1) - Lo mismo.
  8. 01:57:697 (1,1) - ^
  9. 01:13:030 (1,2,3) - Este patrón no es realmente ideal para una normal, intenta hacer algo diferente, tal vez esto podría ayudar de alguna manera.
  10. 01:11:697 (5,1) - A propósito el espaciamiento entre ambas notas no es el indicado ya que la diferencia es de 1 tick así que evita hacer este tipo de cosas en tus futuros mapas.
  11. 01:15:030 (1,2) - El ritmo es extraño ya que no sigue del todo las líricas, haz algo como esto en su lugar.
  12. 01:37:697 (2) - Se que esto sigue la voz pero aun así haces un corte demasiado brusco por lo que te recomendaría extender esto al siguiente tick blanco.
  13. 01:39:030 (4,5) - Evita cualquier tipo de stacks de este tipo en normales por favor, anyways si fuera 1/2 el stack todavía estaría bien pero es 1/1 así que no veo mucho problema.
  14. 01:51:030 (3,4) - Igual que el anterior.
  15. 02:07:030 (4,5) - ^
  16. 02:22:363 (1) - Elimina esta nota por la misma razón de el tiempo que tiene que haber entre un spinner y la siguiente nota en las dificultades mas faciles.
  17. 02:59:030 (1) - No soy muy fan de este tipo de sliders en normales, pero supongo que esta bien, si @Kenterz lo menciona también deberías de considerar cambiarlo.
  18. 03:19:530 (4) - Que hay sobre eliminar esta nota y extender el anterior slider por un tick? realmente así evitas algunos tipos de cortes en el flujo de las notas osea no esta mal pero podría mejorarse un poco evitando seguir la voz siempre.
  19. 03:37:697 (1,1) - Lo mismo sobre los spinners.
  20. 03:44:030 - Considera añadir una nota aquí, ya que se siente un poco vació sin nada que clickear aquí y de igual manera considera no hacer el mismo patrón que tienes ahí ya que se ve un tanto extraño y raro a mi parecer.
Inyus' Hard

HP + 2 para mantener equilibrada la diff respecto al OD.

  1. 00:16:363 - Considera añadir una nota aquí para evitar cortar el flujo, es mas estoy bastante seguro que el combo debería de ir aquí en vez del siguiente tick rojo, puedes hacer algo como esto para evitar hacer algún movimiento de notas.
  2. 00:31:863 (2) - Para ser honesto siento que CTRL + G fluiría mucho mejor hablando simétricamente claro, deberías considerarlo.
  3. 00:53:030 (5,6) - Una cosa menor pero podrías mejorar el blanket entre ambos objectos? realmente no se ven del todo bien, lo mismo aplica para las partes que son copy paste.
  4. 02:07:197 (2,3,4) - Creo que esto no encaja del todo bien, hablando en cuestión de estética claro, que opinas sobre hacer algo como esto en lugar de mantener este patrón?
Insane

  1. 00:09:197 (6,7) - Me parece un tanto extraño el corte de flujo en esta parte ya que en las demás partes que son similares a esta usaste un ritmo constante.
  2. 00:11:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - Intenta mejorar un poco la estética de esto, unos buenos blankets aquí no estaría nada mal.
  3. 00:15:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lo siento pero desde que hice testplay me di cuenta que esta parte tiene el spacing demasiado reducido lo cual puede llegar a ser un tanto incomodo para jugarlo y también el stack leniency no ayuda en absoluto, te recomiendo que consideres usar algún otro patrón aquí por favor.
  4. 00:16:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lo mismo sobre el spacing, c'mon Eru... es una Insane, intenta hacer algo mas creativo en esta parte.
  5. 00:26:030 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Este stream lo encuentro bastante incomodo de jugar ya que l momento de mover el cursor se siente un poco forzado, tal vez solo sea yo, pero aunque sea mejora un poco la forma de ambos ya que se ven un poco feos sin ofender.
  6. 00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Estoy de acuerdo con Kenterz la forma del stream es extraña y un poco incomoda de jugar, un stream mas circular o algo por el estilo podria ser mejor que la forma que usas actualmente.
  7. 00:55:530 (3,4,5) - Que opinas sobre cambiar esos whistles softs por uno normales? realmente suenan bastante random ya que crean una inconsistencia respecto a los hitsounds.
  8. 01:04:363 (1,2,3) - He preguntado a varios BATs y llegamos a la conclusión de que este spacing es un poco difícil de leer ya que anteriormente usaste uno elevado en ritmos de 1/2 y para ser honesto esto puede llegar a confundir al jugador pensado que es algún ritmo 1/2 pero 1/1 para nada.
  9. 01:06:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - En serio.. todavía no capto la idea de usar un spacing tan pero tan pero tan.. pequeño en Insane, créeme que esto al hacer testplay se juega muy mal, considera aumentar el spacing en partes como estas.
  10. 01:12:030 (3) - CTRL+G para mejorar un poco el flujo ya que un slider que valla hacia la misma dirección puede ser un poco monótono e incomodo de jugar.
  11. 01:13:363 (1,2,3) - Vale esto no esta del todo mal pero aun así, creo que seria mejor si hicieras CTRL + G a los dos siguientes sliders para que quede algo como esto y fluya como kicks sliders en lugar de un salto forzado como el que tienes actualmente.
  12. 01:27:197 (4,1) - El spacing entre ambos es demasiado elevado y parece ser que sin ninguna razón aparente y claro que en comparación con el anterior patrón 01:25:697 (1,2) - x) crea cierta confusión.
  13. 01:47:363 (2) - Random soft clap? seria bastante mejor si lo cambiaras a el sampleset default (normal) ya que suena mucho mejor en mi opinión.
  14. 01:58:697 (3,4) - No.. solo no.. un salto así repentino es demasiado difícil de leer y digerir cuando lo juegas la primera vez, estoy bastante seguro que muchos players van a fallar esta parte en repetidas ocasiones y en especial por el siguiente stream y por la forma del stream que tampoco ayuda en absoluto.
  15. 02:00:197 (13,1) - Aumenta el spacing de 1 para evitar confusiones ya que parece que fuera parte del stream de tan cerca que esta del final del mismo.
  16. 02:02:197 (1,2,1,2) - ♥
  17. 02:04:697 - Considera añadir una nota acá ya que el sonido es bastante constante y en comparación a las demás partes este sonido no lo haz ignorado.
  18. 02:10:697 (4) - Que te parece sobre mover este slider a X: 164 Y: 70 para que el spacing sea proporcional respecto 02:09:363 (1,2) - y de igual manera lo sea para 3 & 4, y para ser honesto en mi opinión fluye bastante mejor de esta manera.
  19. 02:20:030 (8,1) - La verdad preferiría que consideraras mapear esto en vez de colocar un spinner aquí ya que se ve un tanto extraño que el ritmo siga constante y solo hayas colocado algo así.
  20. 02:45:030 (4) - Personalmente me gustaría que este slider lo finalizaras en el anterior tick ya que es donde se produce de alguna manera el sonido mas fuerte que es la voz y donde se encuentra ahora no hay ningún sonido bastante fuerte o algo para tomarlo en cuenta.
  21. 02:52:363 (1,2) - Otra vez.. vamos con lo mismo de los spacings, procura arreglar esto de alguna forma por favor.
  22. 03:03:697 (5) - Añade un repeat aquí para mantener la consistencia con 02:57:030 (2) - ya que es bastante extraño que no lo hayas hecho aquí puesto que tiene el mismo ritmo.
  23. 03:26:363 (5) - Que te parece sobre añadir un new combo en este circulo para que sea un poco mas fácil de leer que hay un cambio de flujo en esta parte.
  24. 03:37:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - No es por nada pero un stream con una forma así después de un spinner es bastante incomodo para jugar, te recomiendo cambies esto por un stream circular o algo menos agresivo que esto.
  25. 04:00:363 (7) - Un new combo para la consistencia con las demás dificultades.

    That's all, yo realmente no recomendaría remapear ya que aunque sea bastante vieja la dificultad esta muy bien estructurada, consigue unos cuantos mods y se libre de llamarme cuando gustes.
AruOtta
Hello, as requested (sorry for late ;w;)

Easy


[Rythm]
00:26:363 (2) - I suggest to make it a slider which last 1 white tick and add a circle at 00:27:030 since this beat should be clickable, because there's the song which changes, the beat is a bit emphasized, and it'll follow the pattern you made with 00:36:030 (1,2,1).
00:32:363 - This beat should also be clickable for the same reasons, then I suggest to add a reverse for 00:31:363 (2), delete (3) and add a circle at 00:32:363.
00:45:697 (1) - I don't really agree with these sliders, you miss many beats which can be played. If you want to follow the beat you followed for 00:44:363 (1), you should try this pattern :
SPOILER
[img]http://puu.sh/dK8uP.jpg/img]
00:49:030 (1,2) - Here the pattern is the same as the slider 00:44:363 (1) but with more reverses. And since add more than 1 reverse for a slider isn't good, I suggest to try this pattern :
00:51:030 (1) - It's the same thing for this slider. There's no reason to add it, you should follow the music foreground, and there's also the problem for 00:54:363 (1,2,3), so I suggest to try this :
It's same for the whole kiai time, so here are the next pattern's rythm (that you really should follow) :
01:09:030 (6) - Since the beat at 01:09:697 is emphasized and should really be clickable, I suggest to make this slider a slider which last 1 white tick and add a circle at 01:09:697.
01:11:030 - You missed a beat here, and it's a problem I think since it's quite emphasized (and also there's a beat from the voice here, even if it's really hard to be noticable). You should add a reverse for 01:10:363 (1) I think.
01:13:030 - Here this beat must be played imo, there's an emphasized beat from the voice. I suggest to stack it with 01:14:697 (2), it could create a good pattern with 01:13:363 (1).
01:25:697 (1,2) - You should try to make these 2 circles a slider, because I think beginners are going to have problems to understand when to click (2). You can also use a slider velocity multiplier of x0,5, then the slider will not be giant.
01:28:363 (1,2) - Same thing, try to make a sldier which go from (1) to (2)'s head.
01:36:363 - Since this beat is very emphasized on the song, I think you must add something cilckable here.
01:43:030 - Here you're missing a beat. I suggest to make 01:42:697 (4) ends here and add a circle at 01:43:363.
01:46:363 (3,4) - Here you can make 1 slider with these 2 circles, it'll decrease the difficulty a bit, since (4) isn't needed to be clickable.
01:52:363 - I suggest to make this one clickable, try to delete the reverse of 01:51:697 (2) and add a circle at 01:52:363
02:02:197 (2) - I really think this slider could be a problem for beginners. I suggest to make it a 3/2 slider starting at 02:01:697. It'll skip the beat from the voice at 02:02:530 but it'll follow a beat at 02:02:697.
02:04:863 (1) - Same thing as above
02:21:697 (1,2) - I suggest to make it a slider (with maybe a lower slider velocity)
02:29:697 - I don't really get why the break starts here, it doesn't needs to start specifically somewhere.
02:46:363 (4) - This slider could finish at 02:47:030, there's no reason to make it ends at 02:46:697.
02:51:697 (4) - ^
02:57:030 (4) - ^
03:17:697 - There's exactly the same problems in this kiai than in the kiai at 00:43:030 (except there's some voice, so some rythms will be justified)
04:00:363 (1,2) - You could maybe make a slider from (1) to (2)'s head and add a circle on (2)'s tail ? It'd be easier for beginners to understand the rythm I think.

[Hitsounds]
There's not a lot of hitsounds on this diff, you should try to add more I think.

00:32:030 (3) - I don't think the finish here is needed, it's when the song changes, but it changes on a slow part, and there's no finish on the song, so you should remove it I think.
00:48:363 - There's no reason to have a clap here, it's not following any thing. You should maybe add a finish instead I think since it's on a big white tick.
00:53:697 - ^
00:59:030 - ^
01:05:030 (1) - There's a whistle here, but it's not repeated on the following patterns, so it's a bit sad, you should add more whistle after this one I think.
01:19:030 - There's a whistle here, but there's no whistle at 01:16:363 (2), and that's a problem. I suggest to add or remove a whistle.
01:21:030 - You should delete the clap here, it doesn't fit with the 2 previous ones because it's a soft hitclap, and the song doesn't fit for a clap here.
01:23:697 - ^
01:46:697 - You can remove the whistle I think, there's no beat to follow with it.
02:17:030 - The clap isn't needed here, like for 01:21:030.
02:19:697 - ^
02:46:697 - This whistle is also not needed since it doesn't follow any beat on the song.
02:48:030 - ^
02:52:030 - ^
02:53:363 - ^
02:57:363 - ^
02:58:697 - ^
03:23:030 - Same as in the first kiai time, these claps are not justified, you should remove them.
03:28:363 - ^
03:33:697 - ^
03:53:363 (2,4) - Maybe you can make all this part with these 2 claps as a pattern ? Since this part needs hitsounds.

[Placements]
00:08:363 (1) - You should move it 3 grids up to make a perfect blanket with 00:07:697 (2).
00:37:697 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is quite strange... It seems like you wanted to make something like a star pattern without the 5th circle, but it doesn't really fits, it's quite ugly =/ I suggest to move (4) around x332|y248, it'll looks cleaner.
00:55:697 (3) - I suggest maybe a curved slider with its movement going to 00:56:363 (1) to increase the flow :
01:07:030 (3,5) - You can try to improve this blanket, and it'll decrease (5)'s curve to make it looks like (3)'s one.
01:19:030 (3) - The first curve of this wave slider looks very ugly, I suggest to change the construction, try something like this maybe (and maybe you can improve the blanket with (2)) :
01:39:030 (3,1) - Maybe you can blanket here ? It could be prettier :3
02:19:030 (1) - This slider makes a very ugly pattern because it's not parallel to 02:17:697 (2) and 02:16:363 (1). You should try to make it parallel, or to make it not "looking like parallel" like you did, it'll looks cleaner I think.
02:59:030 (1) - I think the red anchor on the slidertick of this slider is useless, it could be prettier without it, the curve will be better I think.
03:51:030 (2,3) - You can maybe try to make a blanket here ? :
03:57:363 (5,1) - ^

Normal


[Rythm]
00:05:697 (1,2,3) - The circle on the red tick could be a problem for players, it's quite hard to guess the rythm is about the kinds of clap on the song, so I suggest to make it easier, like with a slider ? :
00:14:030 (2,3) - I think these kinds of pattern could be too hard for Normal players, I suggest to make it a 1/1 slider instead, it should be easier.
00:15:363 (2,3) - I think it could be better to only have a 1/1 slider, the actual rythm it makes is quite strange
00:16:697 (1,2,4,5) - Use 1/1 sliders instead to make it easier
00:19:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is really too hard for a Normal, it looks like a Hard diff... You can try to make an easier pattern, like this one maybe :
00:36:030 - I think it should be better if you do like the pattern at 00:25:030 (1,2), since it's the same rythm.
00:43:530 (1) - I think it's not really good to make this slider starts on a red tick and ignore 00:43:030. I think it's okay if you make the slider starting at 00:43:030 (with a reverse), 1 white tick of separation is playable for a Normal diff.
00:47:697 (3) - This circle isn't snapped well, it should be on the previous red tick. I think you should make a slider starting at 00:47:030 and ending at 00:47:530 (maybe with a reverse), then it'd be easier for the player than just a circle on the red tick.
00:48:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is quite strange, mainly because of the huge separations between the sliders. I think you should try to avoid that, maybe by adding sliders instead ? Like on this exemple :
00:54:197 (1,3) - They are hard for Normal players on red ticks, you should add some 3/2 sliders. Try to remove 00:52:363 (3)'s reverse and add a circle at 00:53:363 ; then you'll be able to add the 3/2 sliders with a reverse at 00:53:697 and 00:55:030 :
00:59:363 (3,4,1,2,1) - The separation between these sliders is too big, it's gonna be a problem for players I think. You should maybe try to add sliders :
01:08:197 (3,4) - Maybe you could make a slider instead for the start of the little part on the red ticks maybe ? It'd be easier.
01:11:697 (5,1) - There's a problem about the distance snap, it looks like there's 1 tick of separation, but there's 2 ticks, it's kind of problematic. You should try to add a circle between them (on the white tick), I suggest around x188|y304.
01:13:863 (2) - This circle on a red tick is hard to play in my opinion ;w; You should really add a 3/2 silder I think.
01:15:030 (1,1) - Add two 1/1 sliders instead ? It could make the player sliderbreak since it's a bit hard for a Normal.
01:19:363 (4,5,6) - Maybe a bit hard ;_;
01:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to add more 3/2 sliders with reverses I think
02:02:197 (3,4) - Same as in the Easy diff, these sliders on red ticks are problematics.
02:09:197 (3,1) - Try to add a slider instead, it's too complicated for beginners at the moment. You can also try to add a slider between 02:09:363 (1,2) because (2) is on a red tick, so it's kind of hard.
02:15:863 (2,3) - Still the problems with the red ticks... Try this maybe :
02:29:697 - This breaks shouldn't starts here, there's no reason to do it, actually it should start anywhere
02:43:030 (1,2,3) - At the moment with the distance snap, it looks like there's 1 tick between (1) - (2) and (2) - (3) ;___;
02:46:863 (2) - Still the problem with the red ticks ;_;
02:49:530 (2) - ^
02:59:030 (1) - The reverses doesn't correspond to anything, just use a long slider.
03:19:530 (4,1) - The long separation which is problematic can be fixed by adding a slider, then it'd do something like this :
03:23:530 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
03:34:030 (2,3,4,1) - It's a bit hard in my opinion, I suggest to only have a slider from 03:34:530 to 03:34:697 (because there's no emphasized beat at 03:34:863)
03:44:030 - It feels quite empty without a circle here, that's the only time there's a separation that last 2 ticks ;w;
03:50:197 (1,2,3,4) - The problem about the red ticks ;___;
03:55:363 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

[Hitsounds]
01:20:030 - clap missing

Same as in the Easy diff, you shouild try to add more hitsounds, and have pattern for the whole maps, not having rarely a whistle and anything else =/

[Placements]
00:15:863 (4,2) - You could try to have a blanket here, it could make an interesting pattern
00:45:697 (1,2) - There's some problems about this blanekt. First, the slider is really strange, you should try to change the construction for this, then the curve will be okay for the blanket. And after that, try to move the circle 1 grid up to make the blanket perfect.
00:51:030 (1,3) - These 2 sliders haven't got the same shape. I suggest to delete (1), copy/paste (3) and move it at (1)'s place, then they will be same shape (I suggest to choose (3) because its shape it perfect for the blanket with 00:52:030 (2))
01:20:697 (1,3) - Little overlap =/
01:24:697 (4) - This slider's shape isn't symmetrical with the red anchor, it should be like this :
01:37:030 (1,2) - You could try to make a blanket with (2) and (1)'s head ? Exemple :
01:39:030 (4) - This slider's curve is a bit ugly, the construction points aren't placed well, you should try this :
01:51:030 (3) - You should increase this slider's curve to make it looks as curved as the 2 other sliders of the pattern 01:49:697 (1,2)
02:17:697 (3) - This slider's curve also isn't perfect =/

Inyus' Hard


[Rythm]
00:09:697 (5) - This slider doesn't follow anything from the song, I suggest to add a spinner instead
00:16:363 - You should add a note here, since there's a beat you didn't play. And also it'll not makes the distance between 00:16:030 (4,1) looking like 1/2 beat instead of 1/1 beat.
00:25:863 - You missed an emphasized beat here, and that's quite problematic ;_; You shoul try this pattern which follow the song better imo :
00:44:030 (3,4,5,1) - The rythm could be improved. Since there's an emphasized beat at 00:44:030, 00:44:363 ,00:44:863, 00:45:363 and 00:45:697, you should try this pattern :
01:03:030 (1) - You should try to map here instead of having a giant slider with a reverse on the emphasized beats, it makes them not cilckable =/
01:11:947 - You didn't map this beat from the sibg D:
01:15:030 - There's only 1 triplet you mapped on this part, you should maybe map more of them (not all circles (it'd be too hard then), but maybe 1/4 sliders with a reverse ?)
02:11:030 - ^
01:33:475 (6) - This slider isn't snapped well, it should ends at 01:33:697 (because the voice's rythm isn't good here)
01:36:363 - You really should maybe try to follow the voice too instead of making a copy/paste of the previous kiai....
02:04:530 (6) - You should try to make the beats on the reverse and on the tail clickable like you made for 02:02:197 (7,8), it'd fits good in my opinion since the rythm of the voice changes a bit.
03:07:197 (1) - This spinner makes 03:17:697, but there's a very emphasized beat here, so you really should/must play it. You should try to ends the spinner at 03:17:363 since there's a beat here, it's better to makes the spinners ends on a low volume beat in my opinion, because the whole spinner is on a low volume part.
03:27:030 (1) - As I said previously, you should try to map here instead of adding these big sliders, it's useless and it breaks the "flow" since there's a long part when you just follow the slider and don't click anything.

[Hitsounds]

00:06:697 - This whistle seems not following anything in my opinion, you should remove it.
00:12:697 - Here you're starting to add whistles, but why didn't you add them at 00:11:030 - 00:12:697 ?
00:43:030 - 00:45:697 You should also add whistle on these parts for the kiai times, then it'd be logical.
01:36:363 - Same for this kiai time.
03:17:697 - Same also for this kiai time (only the first part and 03:49:697)
01:09:197 (7,8) - I don't get why there's a clap on them, it just doesn't follow anything o.o

[Placements]

01:16:863 (2,3) -This overlap don't really fit, I suggest to curve (3) and make a blanket for exemple.
02:12:863 (2,3) - This overlap is also bad, you should try to curve (3) and blanket.
02:49:363 (3,5) - You should probably use the same slider's shape for these 2 sliders, then it'd make a kind of symmetry

Insane


[Rythm]
00:45:280 (4) - This circle is overmapped since it's not following the song, so you MUST delete it
01:36:530 - You should maybe add a circle here maybe ?
01:44:280 (5) - This is also overmapped.
02:04:697 - You missed an important beat here
02:29:697 - Still this useless break's start...
03:23:447 (2) - Overmapped ;_;
03:24:447 (7) - ^
03:25:280 (13) - ^
03:34:113 (2,7) - ^
03:54:447 (3,7) - ^

[Hitsounds]
Nothing to say ~

[Placements]
Placements are a bit strange in this diff. Sometimes there's a the same distance snap but suddenly it changes to another distance snap without any reason, like for 00:13:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2), 00:15:363 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1), 00:17:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:20:197 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7).

00:17:197 (5,1) - The distance snap doesn't correspond to the one between 00:16:697 (1,2,3,4,5). And maybe you could try this ? (it'll make a good flow) :
00:26:530 (9,10,11,12,13) - This stream could be improved (about the shape)
00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream's shape is also very strange, you should make it with 1 curved slider (or maybe 2)
00:51:863 (6,7,1) - This pattern is quite unreadable since the circle is under (6) and with the approachcircle it's quite impossible to guess it's under the silder. You really should move it, maybe around x224|y32 ?
01:27:197 (4,1) - WTF, why is there a jump here, there's no reason to do it and it's the first and only time you do this o.o
01:39:697 (4,6) - I suggest to have the same shape for these 2 sliders
02:43:030 - I think the distance snap should be the same when there's a slow part.
03:46:530 (5) - The slider's shape is very... yeah... It could be improve a lot =/

I think this diff lacks of quality... There's just few patterns, many sliders are quite randomly placed, and there's some overmapped notes. Also the distance snap is very strange ;w;
I'd suggest to remap it, but you can do what you want :3

I hope this was helpful <3
Good luck \:D/
Nyukai
Gero

Gero wrote:

Inyus' Hard

HP + 2 para mantener equilibrada la diff respecto al OD. Prefiero reducir el OD un poco aunque aumentaré el HP un poco también.

  1. 00:16:363 - Considera añadir una nota aquí para evitar cortar el flujo, es mas estoy bastante seguro que el combo debería de ir aquí en vez del siguiente tick rojo, puedes hacer algo como esto para evitar hacer algún movimiento de notas. Hice algo similar.
  2. 00:31:863 (2) - Para ser honesto siento que CTRL + G fluiría mucho mejor hablando simétricamente claro, deberías considerarlo. Hecho.
  3. 00:53:030 (5,6) - Una cosa menor pero podrías mejorar el blanket entre ambos objectos? realmente no se ven del todo bien, lo mismo aplica para las partes que son copy paste. Hm, pero no planeaba un blanket.
  4. 02:07:197 (2,3,4) - Creo que esto no encaja del todo bien, hablando en cuestión de estética claro, que opinas sobre hacer algo como esto en lugar de mantener este patrón? Hice otra cosa que al menos para mí es mejor.

Kenterz

Kenterz wrote:

Inyus' Hard


[Rythm]
00:09:697 (5) - This slider doesn't follow anything from the song, I suggest to add a spinner instead It's fine for me.
00:16:363 - You should add a note here, since there's a beat you didn't play. And also it'll not makes the distance between 00:16:030 (4,1) looking like 1/2 beat instead of 1/1 beat. Already done because Gero's mod :3
00:25:863 - You missed an emphasized beat here, and that's quite problematic ;_; You shoul try this pattern which follow the song better imo It's fine for me, it's not too important at least for a Hard...
00:44:030 (3,4,5,1) - The rythm could be improved. Since there's an emphasized beat at 00:44:030, 00:44:363 ,00:44:863, 00:45:363 and 00:45:697, you should try this pattern I think you are trying to make me follow more rhythm, which I don't agree with. Due the BPM I prefer to make an "easier" Hard
01:03:030 (1) - You should try to map here instead of having a giant slider with a reverse on the emphasized beats, it makes them not cilckable Something similar as before, I prefer the actual rhythm.
01:11:947 - You didn't map this beat from the sibg D: Well I prefer to not follow vocals here.
01:15:030 - There's only 1 triplet you mapped on this part, you should maybe map more of them (not all circles (it'd be too hard then), but maybe 1/4 sliders with a reverse ?) Sure.
02:11:030 - ^ Same.
01:33:475 (6) - This slider isn't snapped well, it should ends at 01:33:697 (because the voice's rythm isn't good here) Snapped in a different way, I got the correct rhythm I think.
01:36:363 - You really should maybe try to follow the voice too instead of making a copy/paste of the previous kiai.... Nah, I prefer to keep it as it is.
02:04:530 (6) - You should try to make the beats on the reverse and on the tail clickable like you made for 02:02:197 (7,8), it'd fits good in my opinion since the rythm of the voice changes a bit. I didn't want to repeat the same. I think it's good adding more variety.
03:07:197 (1) - This spinner makes 03:17:697, but there's a very emphasized beat here, so you really should/must play it. You should try to ends the spinner at 03:17:363 since there's a beat here, it's better to makes the spinners ends on a low volume beat in my opinion, because the whole spinner is on a low volume part. Sure.
03:27:030 (1) - As I said previously, you should try to map here instead of adding these big sliders, it's useless and it breaks the "flow" since there's a long part when you just follow the slider and don't click anything. I don't think flow is broken here :3u

[Hitsounds]

00:06:697 - This whistle seems not following anything in my opinion, you should remove it.
00:12:697 - Here you're starting to add whistles, but why didn't you add them at 00:11:030 - 00:12:697 ?
00:43:030 - 00:45:697 You should also add whistle on these parts for the kiai times, then it'd be logical.
01:36:363 - Same for this kiai time.
03:17:697 - Same also for this kiai time (only the first part and 03:49:697)
01:09:197 (7,8) - I don't get why there's a clap on them, it just doesn't follow anything o.o

Hitsounds are up to Eru.

[Placements]

01:16:863 (2,3) -This overlap don't really fit, I suggest to curve (3) and make a blanket for exemple. Done.
02:12:863 (2,3) - This overlap is also bad, you should try to curve (3) and blanket. Done.
02:49:363 (3,5) - You should probably use the same slider's shape for these 2 sliders, then it'd make a kind of symmetry Both are curve sliders, it shouldn't be a big problem :3

Thank you guys, I hope you keep in mind this was made more than 1 year ago xD I changed some stuff on my own btw ~

Anyways @Eru poke me if you leave me remapping the last part... I think would be nice remapping it, I'd do my best...

desu
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348,140,225697,6,0,L|358:70,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,226030,2,0,L|504:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,226363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,332,226530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,332,226697,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,268,226863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,227030,6,0,L|256:144,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,227363,2,0,L|292:72,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227863,2,0,L|180:132,1,70,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228363,6,0,P|148:244|216:316,1,140,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,376,228863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,313,229030,2,0,P|355:267|364:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,229697,6,0,P|140:120|228:200,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,173,230197,2,0,P|347:127|416:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,164,230697,2,0,B|480:236|480:236|416:304,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,231197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,231363,2,0,P|248:316|136:264,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,172,232030,6,0,P|92:172|176:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,232530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,232697,2,0,L|256:200,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,233197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,56,233363,2,0,P|396:56|440:24,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,32,233697,2,0,P|512:68|444:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,231,234197,2,0,P|502:283|512:352,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,351,234697,2,0,P|406:330|372:328,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,235030,6,0,P|264:312|168:240,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,235530,2,0,P|140:148|244:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,103,236030,2,0,P|357:122|372:188,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,236530,2,0,L|336:340,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,237030,2,0,P|168:232|120:236,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,152,237363,2,0,P|176:150|208:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,237697,6,0,P|288:76|392:156,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,238363,2,0,P|288:308|392:228,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,239030,2,0,P|245:118|211:111,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,192,239363,2,0,L|212:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,243,239697,2,0,P|245:265|211:272,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,343,240030,2,0,P|272:337|300:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
272,244,240363,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,72,242363,1,2,2:0:0:0:
396,72,243030,5,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,243113,12,0,249697,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
ufff, okay, 5 days, but all updated.

Responce soon ~_~

EDIT1:


EDIT2:
okay, is time.

Easy

Okay, here I applied most suggestions. Respect to rhythm, Kenterz was right that was wasting it on kiai, so I decided to map differently some sections. Bc this, some patters was changed (like 00:29:030 (4,1,2) - ). I think is better now.
In 01:25:697 (1,2) - and 02:21:697 (1,2) - , i dont agree with make a slider, i understand the spacing is different, but bc snaptime, i think is fine. Btw, noobs test players dont fail here.
in slow section (02:43:030 - to 03:07:030 - ), the rhythm and hitsounds are like i feel is more intuitive. dont changed here, except the strange slider in 02:59:030 (1) - xD
In 03:58:030 (1) - , i change the shape (alien desu (?)) hahaha. Dont overlap now.


This was my first easy (one year ago xD), so i learned many stuffs until now. Im happy with this diff :3

NOTE: im a bit afraid about Kenterz suggestion in 01:12:363 (3,4) - ... yeah, is cool, but will be bad idea in a easy??? idk...


Normal

I remap many section in this. Now many patterns white-red-white Ticks was simplified. but, not all...
00:48:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - by example, imo, is easy to read. And the music help here bc this is following the melody (and not only the drums). Others patterns not as this, was changed.
"Why man!, this is wrong!!", i dont think, if you see a normal like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/274881&m=0 have many rhythms like this map, so, As I did now, I think it's simple/intuitive enough for what I expect in a normal.

Respect 01:40:363 (5) - , Gero, in https://osu.ppy.sh/b/434620 TicClick use this pattern (in 02:34:697 (3,4) - )... the long slider help to be ready for the click. Dont worry :D
Respect to snap time spinner-next note. For normals minimum is 1/2 compass... and I turned it. (dont worry, im pretty sure about it ;) )

02:59:030 (1) - sorry... really sorry, i dont like change it bc i really love this slider ;w; The slider is fine to read (I saw very many noobs test plays, people do not lose combo there).
03:44:030 - no note here. Sorry u.u (i really dont want to replacement this patter... is.. nice)



the diff was simplified, I was too lazy to remap, but well... I think now is much better. :)

Hard

I spoke with inyus about 1/3 slider in 01:33:475 (6) - , and fixed the snap.
And applied hitsounds suggestions.


Insane

Remapped a third time oooh man... this take many time, but well xD
I applied almost all suggestions. Very very thanks, I am grateful guys >_<!!

00:11:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - Gero, idont move this bc sliders are flowing where i want.
00:16:197 (5) - i hope this spacing will be fine :/
00:26:530 (9,10,11,12,13) - remade.
00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same here, -> http://puu.sh/e2jn1/7b75917d8e.jpg
00:44:863 (2,3,4) - fixed!
00:51:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kenterz suggestion here was hard to play.. so... i made something different.
01:04:363 (1,2) - stacked... is more easily for read now.
01:13:363 (1,2,3) - sorry Gero, idont like your suggestion ._.
01:27:697 (1) - OKAY, spaced to 1.23x*2= 2.46x.... Im not happy with this... 4.0x feels good for me, buuut well... u.u
01:44:197 (4,5,1) - Kenterz, im following the voice... the triple is fine and intuitive imo.
01:57:697 (1,2,3,4) - Gero!!, i made Ctrl+G to sliders... (4) dont have jump now. (Why not done this before??! idk xDD.. the oooold map looked like this http://puu.sh/e2l4H/6a80507f54.jpg )
02:00:030 (11) - hey, look it, is cool and easy :D (ty chinese mapper for this idea hahaha)
02:04:697 (10) - dat DT combo braker ;)
03:04:697 (2,3,4,5,6) - Changed NC spam, bc i down HP drain to 6.
03:25:030 (9,10,11,12) - Kenterz, i dont delete this stream bc is following voice.
03:26:363 (5) - No nc here bc a previous mod. i think skin arrows help with readability here.
03:34:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - bc delete some notes, i remap this section.
03:36:447 (1) - shortened spinner... now player have more time for be ready.
03:54:197 (2,3,4,5) - Is it fine???


and... okay!, I hope the quality is better now... this was my 3th map, and i know is not "kawaii", someone else could do better, but in my eyes, it's a fun map, It has taken me many hours in the past year, and the learned too.

Be assured that my next maps going to be better lol
DeletedUser_4329079
My mini mod;

[Insane]

01:51:697 - Yo creo que este stream es bastante feo, ¿por que no lo pruebas con algo como esto? Mientras juegas se ve mucho mejor así.
03:07:197 - En serio, ya se que te lo han dicho por ahí antes pero el spinner es demasiado largo (10 segundos O.o). Intenta ponerle notas lentas a los sonidos de fondo o añade un descanso.

Por lo demás el mapa está bastante bien :)
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

Default wrote:

My mini mod;

[Insane]

01:51:697 - Yo creo que este stream es bastante feo, ¿por que no lo pruebas con algo como esto? Mientras juegas se ve mucho mejor así. mm... lo aplicaría si no fuera por que no me gusta cómo se siente... osea, esa parte siendo un stream circular no la siento agradabe.. es difetente a por ejemplo 01:54:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - , donde la voz hace que el stream se sienta bien siendo redondo... es dificil de explicar xD
03:07:197 - En serio, ya se que te lo han dicho por ahí antes pero el spinner es demasiado largo (10 segundos O.o). Intenta ponerle notas lentas a los sonidos de fondo o añade un descanso. The spinner is the soul of the beatmap. Sorry.

Por lo demás el mapa está bastante bien :)
Muchas gracias por mirar el mapa, de verdad te lo agradesco :D
pkhg
its me again owo/

[Kurokami's Rain]

01:25:697 - unnecesary greenline
idk how to mod ctb so that's all :3

[Insane]

00:15:363 (1) - quitale el nc ya que esta parte es similar a esta 00:18:030 (3) - y aca no lo usaste
00:39:030 (6) - puedes poner un nc ya que la mayoria del tiempo pones un nc en cada stanza, for consistency imo
00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,a1,2,3,4,5) - nc en cada white tick, no es necesario pero para mi se ve feo que las notas lleguen a 10+ combo y esta fue la unica forma que se me ocurrio para "arreglarlo" (ademas hiciste eso aqui 03:37:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - :P )
00:43:030 (1) - mueve el ultimo nodo mas a la derecha, para que no overlapee con el stream anterior
00:45:363 (5) - borra el finish
00:46:863 (4) - en un insane no es tan divertido o "challenging" clickear 1/2 stacks, prueba stackeandolo en 00:47:530 (2) - crea un pequeño jump :3
00:55:780 (4) - innecesario imo
01:03:030 (1,2) - swap nc
01:08:197 (1,1) - quitale el nc a alguno de esos
01:29:030 (1) - no necesita el nc :P
01:35:113 (1) - puedes terminar el spinner aca 01:35:697 - se siente raro que skippearas ese beat (el auto saca bonus en el spinner asi que imagino que no hay problema)
01:51:197 (1) - dale ctrl+h, ctrl+j y lo mueves a x208 y176 se ve mejor asi imo
03:07:697 - greenline innecesaria
03:26:363 (1) - nc para "marcar" el pattern, ayuda un poco a leerlo mejor imo
03:37:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - revisa todo el stream, casi todas las notas no estan snappeadas

[Inyus' Hard]

01:19:947 - greenline innecesaria
01:20:447 - ^
01:34:697 (1) - lo mismo que el insane y puedes poner un slider 1/4 con 2 repeats aqui 01:36:030 - para cubrir el stream
01:47:363 (3) - soft-clap intencional? de todas maneras funcionan mejor las normal :3
01:52:363 (1) - ^ on tail
02:25:863 - mueve el break aqui 02:27:030 - Ya sabes, se ve genial :3
02:29:697 - greenline innecesaria
02:59:030 (1) - hazlo simetrico, el segundo nodo a x256 y288 y el tercero a x368 y204
03:07:697 - greenline innecesaria
03:17:697 (1,2) - el (1) esta muy cerca del (2), puede hacer pensar a los players que estan a 1/2 y no a 1/1, por lo que recomiendo un nc en el (2) (algo similar hiciste al principio del map 00:05:697 (1,1) - )
03:43:697 (3) - soft clap? D:
03:47:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - muchos finish x.x
04:02:363 (2,1) - swap nc o ponle tambien al (2) (like eru's insane :P)

[Normal]

01:31:030 - greenline :P
01:33:697 - greenline
04:02:363 (2) - cambia el sampleset del cuerpo del slider a soft, es molesto el normal. Ah, y ponle un whistle al final (cola, tail, lo que sea) ya que lo hiciste en el easy e insane :P

[Easy]

01:31:030 - greenline
01:33:697 - greenline
02:00:363 - ^
02:07:030 (2) - mueve el segundo nodo un grid a la derecha y el ultimo a x488 y116 para que no overlapee con el slider anterior

Eso es todo, suerte con la burbujita =w=
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

pkhg wrote:

its me again owo/

[Kurokami's Rain]

01:25:697 - unnecesary greenline ok, fixed for me, This line was before break. (send msg to kurokami about this).
idk how to mod ctb so that's all :3

[Insane]

00:15:363 (1) - quitale el nc ya que esta parte es similar a esta 00:18:030 (3) - y aca no lo usaste done
00:39:030 (6) - puedes poner un nc ya que la mayoria del tiempo pones un nc en cada stanza, for consistency imo done
00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,a1,2,3,4,5) - nc en cada white tick, no es necesario pero para mi se ve feo que las notas lleguen a 10+ combo y esta fue la unica forma que se me ocurrio para "arreglarlo" (ademas hiciste eso aqui 03:37:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - :P ) mm.. no, definitivamente no me gusta. En el otro es por el tema de la "recuperación" en el HP bar, pero aquí no es necesario, siento que está bien como está.
00:43:030 (1) - mueve el ultimo nodo mas a la derecha, para que no overlapee con el stream anterior done
00:45:363 (5) - borra el finish ups... gracias!!!
00:46:863 (4) - en un insane no es tan divertido o "challenging" clickear 1/2 stacks, prueba stackeandolo en 00:47:530 (2) - crea un pequeño jump :3 ... ok, hice algo.
00:55:780 (4) - innecesario imo im not agree.
01:03:030 (1,2) - swap nc ok, y cambiado en 01:04:363 - para que quede más consistente.
01:08:197 (1,1) - quitale el nc a alguno de esos lo puse en el tick principal, como venía haciendolo. (la verdad no me acuerdo por qué los había puesto así).
01:29:030 (1) - no necesita el nc :P fix
01:35:113 (1) - puedes terminar el spinner aca 01:35:697 - se siente raro que skippearas ese beat (el auto saca bonus en el spinner asi que imagino que no hay problema) ok, me parece buena idea.
01:51:197 (1) - dale ctrl+h, ctrl+j y lo mueves a x208 y176 se ve mejor asi imo mm... no, me gusta como está ahora.
03:07:697 - greenline innecesaria fix
03:26:363 (1) - nc para "marcar" el pattern, ayuda un poco a leerlo mejor imo asdasd, ok xD
03:37:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - revisa todo el stream, casi todas las notas no estan snappeadas El stream fue hecho con la herramienta de Slider to Stream, realmente no creo necesario mover nada de ahí, y aunque el spicing no quedó igual (no tengo idea de por qué), tampoco es mayor cosa.

[Inyus' Hard]

Fixed hitsounds and greenlines!!!, Inyus, responde tu el resto.
01:19:947 - greenline innecesaria
01:20:447 - ^
01:47:363 (3) - soft-clap intencional? de todas maneras funcionan mejor las normal :3
01:52:363 (1) - ^ on tail
02:29:697 - greenline innecesaria
03:07:697 - greenline innecesaria
03:43:697 (3) - soft clap? D:
03:47:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - muchos finish x.x

[Normal]

All done!!
01:31:030 - greenline :P
01:33:697 - greenline
04:02:363 (2) - cambia el sampleset del cuerpo del slider a soft, es molesto el normal. Ah, y ponle un whistle al final (cola, tail, lo que sea) ya que lo hiciste en el easy e insane :P

[Easy]
All done!!!!
01:31:030 - greenline
01:33:697 - greenline
02:00:363 - ^
02:07:030 (2) - mueve el segundo nodo un grid a la derecha y el ultimo a x488 y116 para que no overlapee con el slider anterior

Eso es todo, suerte con la burbujita =w=
Note: new kudo bc ctb mod.

Muchas gracias pkhg... :D
Pho
Lazyness-alert, sry that this comes so late (and I'm still not finished) =.=

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. I'm not sure about these smaller kiai sections at 01:13:363 - 02:09:363 - , they feel kind of unnecessary to me. Having increased volume is enough emphasis for the background instruments.
  2. For some reason, I still got an .osb-file in my set, I suppose it's deleted already?
[Easy]
  1. OD+0.5/1
  2. I feel the NCs sometimes too short and there are some inconsistencies throughout the map. For example, compare the NC on your first kiai and 2nd kiai, the latter has longer combo's than the first one. It might be good if you recheck NCs again and mb go with NC after every 4 stanzas instead of 2.
  3. 00:08:363 (1) - Push 2 grids up for nice blanket
  4. 00:08:363 (1) - delete NC. Or set NC at 00:13:697 (3) -
  5. 00:23:030 (1,2) - Delete NC on 1, NC on 2. Also delete NC at 00:25:363 (1) -
    Some other misplaced NCs: 00:32:363 (3,1) - 00:35:030 (5,1) - 00:35:030 (4,1) - (optional) 01:04:363 (3,1) - End of kiai time here.
  6. Places you should delete NC: 01:28:363 (1) - 03:01:030 (1) -
  7. 00:52:363 (2) - Curve less for better flow
  8. 01:19:030 (3) - You could try this for better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/eV7xh/db3183194e.jpg
  9. 01:20:363 (1) - Make it straight for consistency in slidershapes for upcoming section?
  10. 01:46:363 (3) - Whistle on sliderbody.
  11. 01:49:030 (3) - Switch with circle+slider and set whistle on the sliderbody, it feels more consistent than just having whistle on reversearrow
  12. 01:52:697 - There should be a note here too since otherwise this combo would be easier too play than 01:40:363 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  13. 02:12:363 (2,1) - Transition could be smoother by moving 1 more to the left.
  14. 03:20:363 (1) - Might be just me, but it feels strange that the 3rd kiai became weaker in terms of beat placement comparing to the first two kiai's as you only placed long 4/1 beat backsliders here. Might wanna refine the rhythm here, but this might be just personal impression.
  15. 03:56:697 (4,5,1) - Visual distances look off, make them equal.
[Normal]
  1. 1.2xDS makes it look so dispersed ;-;
  2. The map has a lot of polarity issues (switching from red to white tick polarity and vice versa), try to at least reduce some to make it more comfortable for newer players to play. Here are the prime examples that seems to occur throughout the map including suggestions for fixes:
    1. 00:12:363 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/eVc75/27f3ee3de2.jpg
    2. 00:14:530 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/eVcgx/c43caa3a77.jpg
    3. 00:17:197 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/eVczj/6cdb281d68.jpg Similar: 00:18:530 (5,1) -
    4. 00:48:697 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/eVcSL/1ba8f1627b.jpg Similar: 00:59:363 (3,4) -
    5. 00:49:697 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/eVcXL/83e2d06b16.jpg Similar: 01:00:363 (1,2) -
    6. 01:13:030 (1,2,3) - 02:48:363 (1,2,3) - These are optional since they follow music pretty good, but they aren't very player-friendly.
    7. Remaining issues: 01:42:030 (2,3,4,5) - 02:04:030 (3,4) - 03:23:530 (2,3,4,5) - 03:55:363 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. NC: 01:39:030 (4) - 02:19:030 (5) -
  4. Delete NC: 00:15:030 (1) - 00:45:697 (1) - 01:00:363 (1) - 01:16:363 (1) - 02:12:363 (1) - 02:15:030 (1) -
  5. NC on wrong positions: 00:57:697 (1,2) - 01:12:697 (6,1) - 00:13:363 (1,2) -02:55:697 (1,2) - 03:35:030 (1,3) -
  6. 00:29:030 (4,1) - This is technically a jump, you should avoid that.
  7. 00:36:030 (1,2) - I don't really expect a stack at this place, unstack.
  8. 00:53:697 (1) - Slider works better here.
  9. 01:15:530 (2,2) - Would be really good if these don't overlap so you do not confuse newer players.
  10. 02:59:030 (1) - Uh yeah, this is a no-go in Normals I have to say unfortunately xD
  11. This could need more refinement in terms of rhythm.
[Inyus' Hard]
  1. I smell much copy-pasta.
  2. 00:53:030 (5,6) - 01:46:363 (5,6) - 03:59:697 (5,6) - Parallel?
  3. 00:53:863 (2,3) - I don't see a reason why this is stacked. If you want consistency here, then stack 00:53:697 (1,2,3) - or don't stack at all.
  4. 00:56:697 (2,3,4,5) - Just for some variation, you could do this in the first kiai: http://puu.sh/eVhgr/d1011c17db.jpg
  5. 01:59:030 (4) - Why do you suddenly stop following the drums, this feels wrong. ALso, 01:59:113 - there's no drum beat here. Following rhythm is suggested: http://puu.sh/eVhT7/521492bc0d.jpg
  6. Delete NC: 00:31:530 (1) - 01:03:030 (1) - 01:16:363 (1) - 01:56:363 (1) - 02:08:363 (1) - 03:27:030 (1) - 03:32:363 (1) - 04:03:030 (1) -
  7. NC on wrong positions: 00:36:030 (4,1) - 00:44:697 (5,1) - 01:38:697 (1,2) - 03:52:030 (1,2) -
  8. Fine diff, but it has too much repetitive patterns for my taste (I think you just copied and ctrl+j'd the 1st kiai on 2nd kiai ;-;).
[Insane]
  1. AR9.3 would be good for such a fast-paced song.
  2. NC: 00:12:363 (4) -
  3. 00:16:030 (6,7) - These are pretty close to each other.
  4. Rest will come later, sry =.=
The Easy/Normal diff need some finetunes imo. I'll watch over your Insane later. Song is pretty cool :)
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

Pho wrote:

Lazyness-alert, sry that this comes so late (and I'm still not finished) =.= lol, dont worry

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. I'm not sure about these smaller kiai sections at 01:13:363 - 02:09:363 - , they feel kind of unnecessary to me. Having increased volume is enough emphasis for the background instruments. i really think are fine, bc intence music here.
  2. For some reason, I still got an .osb-file in my set, I suppose it's deleted already? lol, redownload (?)
[Easy]
  1. OD+0.5/1 +1... ups :P
  2. I feel the NCs sometimes too short and there are some inconsistencies throughout the map. For example, compare the NC on your first kiai and 2nd kiai, the latter has longer combo's than the first one. It might be good if you recheck NCs again and mb go with NC after every 4 stanzas instead of 2. im very bad with nc ;w; thanks!, i apply most NC suggestions :3
  3. 00:08:363 (1) - Push 2 grids up for nice blanket done
  4. 00:08:363 (1) - delete NC. Or set NC at 00:13:697 (3) -
  5. 00:23:030 (1,2) - Delete NC on 1, NC on 2. Also delete NC at 00:25:363 (1) -
    Some other misplaced NCs: 00:32:363 (3,1) - 00:35:030 (5,1) - 00:35:030 (4,1) - (optional) 01:04:363 (3,1) - End of kiai time here.
  6. Places you should delete NC: 01:28:363 (1) - 03:01:030 (1) -
  7. 00:52:363 (2) - Curve less for better flow ok
  8. 01:19:030 (3) - You could try this for better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/eV7xh/db3183194e.jpg hey, good idea
  9. 01:20:363 (1) - Make it straight for consistency in slidershapes for upcoming section? not changed
  10. 01:46:363 (3) - Whistle on sliderbody. mm. oks
  11. 01:49:030 (3) - Switch with circle+slider and set whistle on the sliderbody, it feels more consistent than just having whistle on reversearrow you are right
  12. 01:52:697 - There should be a note here too since otherwise this combo would be easier too play than 01:40:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - mm.. im not agree u.u
  13. 02:12:363 (2,1) - Transition could be smoother by moving 1 more to the left. is fine like is.
  14. 03:20:363 (1) - Might be just me, but it feels strange that the 3rd kiai became weaker in terms of beat placement comparing to the first two kiai's as you only placed long 4/1 beat backsliders here. Might wanna refine the rhythm here, but this might be just personal impression. the song is long, i think it is better.
  15. 03:56:697 (4,5,1) - Visual distances look off, make them equal. done
[Normal]
  1. 1.2xDS makes it look so dispersed ;-;
  2. The map has a lot of polarity issues (switching from red to white tick polarity and vice versa), try to at least reduce some to make it more comfortable for newer players to play. Here are the prime examples that seems to occur throughout the map including suggestions for fixes:
    • ------
    1. 00:12:363 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/eVc75/27f3ee3de2.jpg ok
    2. 00:14:530 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/eVcgx/c43caa3a77.jpg ok
    3. 00:17:197 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/eVczj/6cdb281d68.jpg Similar: 00:18:530 (5,1) - ok
    4. 00:48:697 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/eVcSL/1ba8f1627b.jpg Similar: 00:59:363 (3,4) - no
    5. 00:49:697 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/eVcXL/83e2d06b16.jpg Similar: 01:00:363 (1,2) - no
    6. 01:13:030 (1,2,3) - 02:48:363 (1,2,3) - These are optional since they follow music pretty good, but they aren't very player-friendly. hehehe, no
    7. Remaining issues: 01:42:030 (2,3,4,5) - 02:04:030 (3,4) - 03:23:530 (2,3,4,5) - 03:55:363 (1,2,3,4) - No
  3. NC: 01:39:030 (4) - 02:19:030 (5) - ok~
  4. Delete NC: 00:15:030 (1) - 00:45:697 (1) - 01:00:363 (1) - 01:16:363 (1) - 02:12:363 (1) - 02:15:030 (1) - ok~
  5. NC on wrong positions: 00:57:697 (1,2) - 01:12:697 (6,1) - 00:13:363 (1,2) -02:55:697 (1,2) - 03:35:030 (1,3) - most
  6. 00:29:030 (4,1) - This is technically a jump, you should avoid that. mm.. ok... i close it a bit.
  7. 00:36:030 (1,2) - I don't really expect a stack at this place, unstack. :/ ok
  8. 00:53:697 (1) - Slider works better here. ^
  9. 01:15:530 (2,2) - Would be really good if these don't overlap so you do not confuse newer players. but flow is fine. i really think is adequate.
  10. 02:59:030 (1) - Uh yeah, this is a no-go in Normals I have to say unfortunately xD testplay show that they can play it. Dont worry
  11. This could need more refinement in terms of rhythm.
Respect to rhythm in normal. I dont want to change it in kiai (except to end). I know and understand about polarity, but I feel it are intuitive to play, and testplays show me that casual normal players will play it fine, btw, very thanks :D

i will check it in 20h~, really, very thanks!!!!!
Nyukai
Uguu sorry for the delay, I'll try to apply stuff tomorrow, I'm a bit busy this week ;w;
Secretpipe
I need to take a glance at this Eru !!

Don't hesitate to spam me XD
Gero
Get more mods @Erunamo and call me back for recheck, I'm still waiting for you.
Nyukai
Not mentioned means fixed.

pkhg wrote:

[Inyus' Hard]

01:19:947 - greenline innecesaria
01:20:447 - ^
01:34:697 (1) - lo mismo que el insane y puedes poner un slider 1/4 con 2 repeats aqui 01:36:030 - para cubrir el stream Prefiero el spinner aquí.
01:47:363 (3) - soft-clap intencional? de todas maneras funcionan mejor las normal :3
01:52:363 (1) - ^ on tail
02:25:863 - mueve el break aqui 02:27:030 - Ya sabes, se ve genial :3 Baka Eru que olvidó fixear eso.
02:29:697 - greenline innecesaria
02:59:030 (1) - hazlo simetrico, el segundo nodo a x256 y288 y el tercero a x368 y204 ... Tu sugerencia lo hace menos simétrico todavía.
03:07:697 - greenline innecesaria
03:17:697 (1,2) - el (1) esta muy cerca del (2), puede hacer pensar a los players que estan a 1/2 y no a 1/1, por lo que recomiendo un nc en el (2) (algo similar hiciste al principio del map 00:05:697 (1,1) - ) Realmente es que el spacing estaba mal, así que fixed.
03:43:697 (3) - soft clap? D:
03:47:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - muchos finish x.x
04:02:363 (2,1) - swap nc o ponle tambien al (2) (like eru's insane :P) Mis NCs están bien, que cambie él los suyos (?)

Pho wrote:

[Inyus' Hard]
  1. I smell much copy-pasta.
  2. 00:53:030 (5,6) - 01:46:363 (5,6) - 03:59:697 (5,6) - Parallel? I prefer current pattern o.o
  3. 00:53:863 (2,3) - I don't see a reason why this is stacked. If you want consistency here, then stack 00:53:697 (1,2,3) - or don't stack at all.
  4. 00:56:697 (2,3,4,5) - Just for some variation, you could do this in the first kiai: http://puu.sh/eVhgr/d1011c17db.jpg
  5. 01:59:030 (4) - Why do you suddenly stop following the drums, this feels wrong. ALso, 01:59:113 - there's no drum beat here. Following rhythm is suggested: http://puu.sh/eVhT7/521492bc0d.jpg I was not following just drums, I think is correctly snapped. Sounds good because the next music is kinda lower. Anyways if someone else says the same I'll check it properly.
  6. Delete NC: 00:31:530 (1) - 01:03:030 (1) - 01:16:363 (1) - 01:56:363 (1) - 02:08:363 (1) - 03:27:030 (1) - 03:32:363 (1) - 04:03:030 (1) -
  7. NC on wrong positions: 00:36:030 (4,1) - 00:44:697 (5,1) - 01:38:697 (1,2) - 03:52:030 (1,2) - Rechecked all (I mean ALL) NCs and fixed some of yours~
  8. Fine diff, but it has too much repetitive patterns for my taste (I think you just copied and ctrl+j'd the 1st kiai on 2nd kiai ;-;). Some of them. It was made looong time ago, I was kinda a newbie player :3u
uguu
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240,340,139530,1,8,0:3:0:0:
316,340,139697,2,0,P|340:340|384:244,1,140,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,140197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,133,140363,2,0,P|379:67|316:43,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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448,332,141530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,332,141697,6,0,P|336:296|116:296,1,280,4|2,0:1|0:2,0:0:0:0:
372,52,143030,2,0,P|336:88|116:88,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
420,192,144363,5,4,0:1:0:0:
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256,192,152363,12,2,157697,0:0:0:0:
256,80,158030,6,0,P|296:80|380:152,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,192,158530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,246,158697,2,0,P|324:294|256:304,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,40,160697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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420,264,161363,2,0,P|420:296|332:352,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,162030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,188,162363,2,0,L|132:132,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,162697,2,0,P|224:80|324:24,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,88,163363,6,0,L|496:164,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,283,163697,2,0,L|452:220,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,156,164030,2,0,L|376:220,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,284,164363,2,0,P|292:312|200:312,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,164863,2,0,L|100:224,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,165363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,245,165697,6,0,L|384:312,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,92,166363,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,56,166530,2,0,P|300:56|200:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,167030,2,0,B|160:232|160:232|112:292,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,167697,2,0,L|256:264,2,70,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,288,168363,6,0,B|352:232|352:232|352:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,84,169030,2,0,L|144:116,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,148,169363,2,0,P|64:176|64:280,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,332,170030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,328,170363,2,0,P|392:304|392:196,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,170863,2,0,L|320:68,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,171363,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,171697,2,0,L|181:84,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,172363,2,0,P|172:320|224:328,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,316,172697,2,0,P|328:316|396:248,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,173197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
394,130,173363,2,0,P|351:77|284:68,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,68,174030,6,0,P|96:108|96:216,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,264,174530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,320,174697,2,0,P|232:320|312:264,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,192,175363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,109,175697,2,0,P|248:68|180:64,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,216,176363,6,0,P|192:260|112:316,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,177197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,177363,2,0,P|320:260|400:316,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,256,177863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,180,178030,2,0,P|440:128|388:56,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,56,178530,2,0,L|260:112,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,179030,6,2,B|256:288|256:288|384:196,1,280,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,180030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,40,180363,2,0,L|24:176,2,140,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,181363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,40,181697,2,0,L|488:176,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,308,182363,6,0,L|392:324,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,182697,2,0,B|240:320|240:320|156:280,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,183363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,183697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,183863,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,184030,2,0,B|272:64|272:64|326:89,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,236,184697,6,0,L|418:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,185030,2,0,L|321:321,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,256,185363,2,0,L|190:321,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,185697,2,0,L|93:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,186030,2,0,L|93:95,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,36,186363,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,36,187030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187197,12,0,197363,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197697,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,44,198030,2,0,L|187:105,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,44,198363,2,0,L|324:105,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,198697,2,0,L|256:240,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,199030,2,0,P|324:288|404:220,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,151,199530,2,0,P|348:104|280:96,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,200030,2,0,L|240:196,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,200530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,288,200697,2,0,L|284:368,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,350,201030,2,0,L|188:288,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,256,201363,2,0,L|116:176,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,201697,2,0,P|116:104|232:88,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,62,202197,2,0,P|361:51|396:108,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,184,202697,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,252,202863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,203030,6,0,P|244:276|140:332,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,364,203530,2,0,L|40:220,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,150,204030,2,0,L|96:20,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,16,204530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,204697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,52,204863,2,0,P|316:84|404:148,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,205363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,236,205530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,205697,6,0,B|264:268|240:288|240:288|172:288,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,206363,2,0,B|264:116|240:96|240:96|172:96,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,207030,6,0,L|356:192,2,280,2|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,268,208530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,208697,2,0,P|144:324|196:356,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,209030,2,0,P|304:340|344:252,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,209530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,119,209697,2,0,P|325:56|260:44,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,210197,2,0,L|108:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,60,210697,2,0,L|68:220,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,276,211197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,211363,2,0,P|164:332|204:296,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,211863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,317,212030,2,0,P|353:333|388:332,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,212363,2,0,L|464:176,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,116,212863,2,0,P|432:116|340:172,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,213363,2,0,B|256:237|256:237|212:220,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,169,213697,6,0,P|116:125|48:116,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,214197,2,0,P|48:220|128:316,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,308,214697,2,0,P|256:308|348:352,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,215197,2,0,L|524:224,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,152,215697,2,0,L|396:76,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,76,216197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,216363,6,0,P|212:120|128:56,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,217030,2,0,P|212:264|128:328,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217697,12,0,218697,0:0:0:0:
100,196,219030,6,0,P|132:196|172:160,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,219363,2,0,L|200:80,2,35,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,219697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,175,219863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,220197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,272,220363,6,0,L|352:332,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,351,220697,2,0,L|288:300,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,221030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,221197,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,104,221363,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,28,221530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,221697,6,0,L|128:120,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,222197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,222530,2,0,L|384:120,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,168,222863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,223030,2,0,P|400:244|284:312,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,223530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,291,223697,2,0,P|152:253|84:244,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
28,192,224197,1,2,0:2:0:0:
88,144,224363,6,0,L|77:74,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,224697,2,0,L|153:70,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,196,225030,2,0,L|200:284,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,196,225363,2,0,L|312:284,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,140,225697,2,0,L|358:70,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,226030,2,0,L|504:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,226363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,332,226530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,332,226697,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,268,226863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,227030,6,0,L|256:144,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,227363,2,0,L|292:72,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,73,227863,2,0,L|180:132,1,70,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,228363,2,0,P|148:244|216:316,1,140,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,376,228863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,313,229030,2,0,P|355:267|364:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,229697,6,0,P|140:120|228:200,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,173,230197,2,0,P|347:127|416:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,164,230697,2,0,B|480:236|480:236|416:304,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,231197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,231363,2,0,P|248:316|136:264,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,172,232030,6,0,P|92:172|176:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,232530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,232697,2,0,L|256:200,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,233197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,56,233363,2,0,P|396:56|440:24,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,32,233697,2,0,P|512:68|444:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,231,234197,2,0,P|502:283|512:352,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,351,234697,2,0,P|406:330|372:328,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,235030,6,0,P|264:312|168:240,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,235530,2,0,P|140:148|244:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,103,236030,2,0,P|357:122|372:188,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,236530,2,0,L|336:340,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,237030,2,0,P|168:232|120:236,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,152,237363,2,0,P|176:150|208:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,237697,6,0,P|288:76|392:156,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,238363,2,0,P|288:308|392:228,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,239030,2,0,P|245:118|211:111,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,192,239363,2,0,L|212:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,243,239697,2,0,P|245:265|211:272,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,343,240030,2,0,P|272:337|300:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
356,260,240363,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,72,242363,1,2,2:0:0:0:
396,72,243030,5,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,243113,12,0,249697,0:0:0:0:
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