Oh hi, from BMT modding queue
[EX]
This EX isn't that hard I can even fc this XD
00:04:484 (4) - This should be rather curved so as to match 00:04:040 (3) -
00:11:596 (2,3,4) - idk is that just for me or what...this spacing looks bad imo
00:21:373 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:818 (2) - NC?
00:23:151 (1) - Remove NC?
00:23:596 (3) - NC?
Sometimes you're trying to NC according to pattern but it might mess up the NC imo... ;w; i think it is better for you to NC every 4 or 8 1/1 and pattern you want to emphasize
00:25:373 (1) - I would suggest removing the third slider point, the blanketing doesn't fit
01:09:818 (1,1,1) -THIS IS AWESOME01:22:855 (1) - Use soft sampleset? It sounds kinda awkward to me...QWQ
01:24:040 (1,1,1) - YESYESYESYESGood map!
[Another]
Diffname "Sakata's Another" confuses me as I thought that it was made by you, Mako! lol
I would suggest changing it to Susilo's Another.
00:04:040 (1,2) - Improve the blanket? Same as the next copy&pasted pattern
00:08:484 (4) - The slider tail has overlapped on 00:07:596 (2) - and I personally thinks that it doesn't looks good
00:08:484 (4,5,6) - Make them a perfect triangle?
00:11:151 - you chose to add clap on downbeat and it sounds bad to me. Maybe you can follow the hitsound start from here 00:18:262 -
00:11:151 (1,2) - Flow can be improved.
00:30:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It looks kinda untidy<_< imo
00:32:484 (1,2,3) - you should decrease the spacing here as the music seemed to slow down here
00:37:373 (5) - I would suggest changing shape of 00:37:818 (6) - and blanket the tail of (6) instead of sliderbody
00:48:484 (3,4) - It differs from the previous two pattern. I have no idea why you used a smaller spacing here D: you should keep the spacing constant here imo
00:55:596 (5,6) - Why don't making them symmetrical? It looks pretty good
01:10:707 (5,6) - the flow here isn't that good ;w; 01:11:151 (6) - Ctrl+G?
01:14:707 (1) - Remove NC?
01:16:484 (6,1) - Okay. One of the thing which I mainly focus on this kiai. The flow of this pattern is pretty bad as this anti-jump is quite flow-killing. I understand that you want to make a little pause here but it seems that overlapping them sounds better to me. Same kind of pattern could be fixed as well.
01:22:484 (8) - NC? So as to stress this BIG JUMP
01:36:262 (7) - imo you shouldn't use a slider here as it ends at the downbeat, and it is not good QWQ
01:39:151 (3,5,1) - Make the spacing between them constant?
01:44:262 (6,7) - they are too close D:
01:48:929 (3,4,5,6) - mmm this pattern can be improved so as to improve the tidiness of this pattern。
I have to leave now ;w; I would continue the mod tommorow!*mark*[Hyper]
00:18:040 (6,1) - Make the jump smaller to improve diff spread (Optional, it works well in fact)
01:06:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is not a perfect star ;w;
omg that kiai it is way too hard for hyper. It is ever harder than the one in another
dat spacing QWQ....
01:49:818 (3,4) - omg that is way too hard for hyper
This diff isn't bad at all. What I concern is that it is way too difficult lol
[Normal]
01:00:929 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Same as the next copy&pasted pattern
01:09:818 (1,2,3) - Make them into perfect triangle?
01:38:262 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
01:40:040 (3) - oooo the shape can be improved
That's all! Good luck~