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Sara - Qing An Jing De Wang Ji Wo

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lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Don't Give Me Kd
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:340 (1) - add whistle
  2. 00:55:795 (5) - add whistle or finish
  3. 01:53:613 (3) - 滑条尾巴换成soft
  4. 01:57:977 (4) - ^
  5. 02:05:340 - 漏音了，好不爽啊
然后你把NM的问题按照ar3的mod都改了，就可以找微风再来看这图了
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

lkx_Shore wrote:

Don't Give Me Kd
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:340 (1) - add whistle :)
  2. 00:55:795 (5) - add whistle or finish :)
  3. 01:53:613 (3) - 滑条尾巴换成soft :)
  4. 01:57:977 (4) - ^ :)
  5. 02:05:340 - 漏音了，好不爽啊 这个···
然后你把NM的问题按照ar3的mod都改了，就可以找微风再来看这图了 嗯 ;)
谢谢lkx ！
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
Joined October 2012
Neiji Razuiya
hi from my queue~

[Normal]
perfect and nice :3

[Hard]
same ^o^

[Shore]
01:14:750 (4) - add whitsle
01:16:795 (4) - ^
01:34:522 (7) - add NC
that's all :D
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

Neiji Razuiya wrote:

hi from my queue~

[Shore]
01:14:750 (4) - add whitsle
01:16:795 (4) - ^
01:34:522 (7) - add NC
that's all :D
Sorry,no change
cet你的insane呢？
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

Neiji Razuiya wrote:

hi from my queue~

[Normal]
perfect and nice :3

[Hard]
same ^o^

[Shore]
01:14:750 (4) - add whitsle
01:16:795 (4) - ^
01:34:522 (7) - add NC
that's all :D
Thank u !
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

lkx_Shore wrote:

Neiji Razuiya wrote:

hi from my queue~

[Shore]
01:14:750 (4) - add whitsle
01:16:795 (4) - ^
01:34:522 (7) - add NC
that's all :D
Sorry,no change
cet你的insane呢？
/-\ 删掉了，觉得做得不好
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

CET 6 wrote:

/-\ 删掉了，觉得做得不好
何必,不做最高难度有啥意思 :o
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

lkx_Shore wrote:

CET 6 wrote:

/-\ 删掉了，觉得做得不好
何必,不做最高难度有啥意思 :o
:P :P :P
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[SB]
Kiai的雪落得太欢快了吧，完全没有体现出悲伤的气氛。

[Normal]
感觉有点粗糙，直滑条太多了。低难度应该多加一些带形状的滑条避免单调。

[Hard]
00:59:613 (6,7) - 这里这个节奏，应该同样应用于01:03:977 (2,3,4,5)
SPOILER
01:06:159 (1,2) - spacing应和其他的一致，这里spacing指note之间的距离，不一定是移动距离。保持可视范围内所有间距一致，图整体看起来才整齐。
SPOILER
01:12:704 (5) - 不如做个形状，如
SPOILER
01:20:886 (5,6) - spacing
01:23:613 (1,2) - 01:32:340 (5) 这一段感觉spacing变小了
01:50:886 (2,3) - spacing
01:51:431 (3,4) - 建议节奏换成
SPOILER
01:54:977 (5,6,7) - 这些堆在一起看不出是什么形状

[Shore]
00:37:522 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里flow简直夫妻
01:52:250 (4) - ctrl+g 可能更好
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

popner wrote:

[Shore]
00:37:522 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里flow简直夫妻 是指间距太大么，我打着是没啥问题，不过还是改小了
01:52:250 (4) - ctrl+g 可能更好 fix
Thank you
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Title:Qing An Jing De Wang Ji Wo
TitleUnicode:请安静的忘记我
Artist:Sara
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Creator:CET 6
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Tags:Sara Sun Zi Han  lkx_Shore
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CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6
[SB]
Kiai的雪落得太欢快了吧，完全没有体现出悲伤的气氛。我想做的是大风雪的感觉···
[Normal]
感觉有点粗糙，直滑条太多了。低难度应该多加一些带形状的滑条避免单调。 好的 已修改[Hard]
00:59:613 (6,7) - 这里这个节奏，应该同样应用于01:03:977 (2,3,4,5) 这里跟了钢琴的vocal所以不一样
SPOILER
01:06:159 (1,2) - spacing应和其他的一致，这里spacing指note之间的距离，不一定是移动距离。保持可视范围内所有间距一致，图整体看起来才整齐。fix
SPOILER
01:12:704 (5) - 不如做个形状，如
SPOILER
好的
01:20:886 (5,6) - spacing
01:23:613 (1,2) - 01:32:340 (5) 这一段感觉spacing变小了
01:50:886 (2,3) - spacing
01:51:431 (3,4) - 建议节奏换成
fix
SPOILER
01:54:977 (5,6,7) - 这些堆在一起看不出是什么形状 这个···

谢谢泡泡！ :)
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
大风雪会直直地落下来么。。。

01:54:977 (5,6,7) - 这些堆在一起看不出是什么形状
最好不要overlap

另外，找人帮你检查一下排版(spacing一致性)，另外找些能让滑条不那么单调的建议；之后可以找我recheck。
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

popner wrote:

大风雪会直直地落下来么。。。 哈哈哈

01:54:977 (5,6,7) - 这些堆在一起看不出是什么形状
最好不要overlap 恩好的

另外，找人帮你检查一下排版(spacing一致性)，另外找些能让滑条不那么单调的建议；之后可以找我recheck。好的
谢谢泡泡 :)
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Normal]
00:33:431 (1) - 尾巴漏clap
00:34:522 (2) - add whistle
00:38:886 (1) - ^
01:23:613 (1) - 滑条尾巴add whistle
要是说多变点的话...最先想到的就是多点滑条（带红点）互相包好这个梗
或者是这种
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/972441
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/972443

[Hard]
00:21:431 (4,5) - 值得注意的是，想让两个滑条平行，最后的描点要放在滑条尾巴的圆心中间再进行对齐.这样才会真正平行
00:33:159 (2) - 叠好？要么就当滑条头是note然后0.1x叠，要么就完全重叠
00:39:159 (2) - ^
01:12:704 (5) - 中间两个描点偏左了
02:03:704 (4) - 滑条尾巴叠好？关掉gridsnap慢慢调

顺便我修了下我自己的diff
Diff
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Qing An Jing De Wang Ji Wo
TitleUnicode:请安静的忘记我
Artist:Sara
ArtistUnicode:Sara
Creator:CET 6
Version:Shore
Source:
Tags:Sara Sun Zi Han  lkx_Shore
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412,120,57704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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84,184,59613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,64,62068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Normal]
00:33:431 (1) - 尾巴漏clap 嗯嗯
00:34:522 (2) - add whistle
00:38:886 (1) - ^
01:23:613 (1) - 滑条尾巴add whistle 嗯好
要是说多变点的话...最先想到的就是多点滑条（带红点）互相包好这个梗
或者是这种
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/972441
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/972443

[Hard]
00:21:431 (4,5) - 值得注意的是，想让两个滑条平行，最后的描点要放在滑条尾巴的圆心中间再进行对齐.这样才会真正平行 不知道调好没
00:33:159 (2) - 叠好？要么就当滑条头是note然后0.1x叠，要么就完全重叠
00:39:159 (2) - ^
01:12:704 (5) - 中间两个描点偏左了
02:03:704 (4) - 滑条尾巴叠好？关掉gridsnap慢慢调
FIX 修改了好一些地方
谢谢lkx~ :)
popner
osu! Alumni
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popner
风雪可以多用几层元件，最上面一层最近所以最大，移动速度最快，后面逐渐变远变小，速度变慢；几层的移动方向不要相同，移动按斜线下来(甚至可以稍微加点弧线)。这样能营造立体的感觉。这方面可以去请教sherrie__fay。
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

popner wrote:

风雪可以多用几层元件，最上面一层最近所以最大，移动速度最快，后面逐渐变远变小，速度变慢；几层的移动方向不要相同，移动按斜线下来(甚至可以稍微加点弧线)。这样能营造立体的感觉。这方面可以去请教sherrie__fay。
GET√ 谢谢~
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

popner wrote:

风雪可以多用几层元件，最上面一层最近所以最大，移动速度最快，后面逐渐变远变小，速度变慢；几层的移动方向不要相同，移动按斜线下来(甚至可以稍微加点弧线)。这样能营造立体的感觉。这方面可以去请教sherrie__fay。
泡泡泡泡 我不想做雪花SB了/-\
popner
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谢谢泡泡~
Thanks a lot popner~
woshiguabi
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popner wrote:

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woshiguabi wrote:

popner wrote:

Jycool
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jyc-Binggan wrote:

请安静的忘记我
请安静的忘记我
sjoy
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哇泡了
接着找布里兹就RANK了吧 :)
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sjoy wrote:

哇泡了
接着找布里兹就RANK了吧 :)
:D :D
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mtbbsben wrote:

请安静的忘记我
请安静的忘记我
Breeze
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[Shore]
  1. 00:55:113 (2) - Add a clap here? There's a clap sound in music
  2. 00:55:522 (5) - Slider head, use soft clap instead of normal clap fit the music more imo
  3. 01:22:522 (2) - weird spacing, really. why not just put under the end of 01:21:977 (1)
  4. 01:27:977 (6) - Strange spacing, this one can be read correctly though
  5. 02:06:159 (3) - 55% clap sounds too low compare to previous 70%, keep here 70% won't hurt imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:53:750 - Add a spinner here, lasts 00:55:795 seems great
  2. 01:46:250 (1) - Too tell the truth, I feel this slow down slider meanless, although here's a long sound in music, but a sudden slow down slider could confuse players sometime
  3. 02:08:068 (1) - no finish here?
    为什么音效要这么特立独行，我已习惯了跟着音乐拍子的1-3clap，突然这么弄我还真不习惯，虽然倒也没什么错……
[Normal]
  1. Add a spinner here, lasts 00:55:795?
  2. 02:08:068 (1) - Finish?
    这难度音效感觉用得略少，当然如果你喜欢这么用那也可以，建议还是用更多的音效让打起来更有实感。
lkx_Shore
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Breeze wrote:

[Shore]
  1. 00:55:113 (2) - Add a clap here? There's a clap sound in music ok
  2. 00:55:522 (5) - Slider head, use soft clap instead of normal clap fit the music more imo fix
  3. 01:22:522 (2) - weird spacing, really. why not just put under the end of 01:21:977 (1) ok,I will put it on the head 01:21:977 (1
  4. 01:27:977 (6) - Strange spacing, this one can be read correctly though ok,change
  5. 02:06:159 (3) - 55% clap sounds too low compare to previous 70%, keep here 70% won't hurt imo change,but i use 55%~70%Volume
嗯....英语应该这样说没错吧?.....

Thank you

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16,96,112522,6,0,B|56:140|56:140|100:100|160:124,1,165,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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CET 6
365 posts
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Topic Starter
CET 6

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:750 - Add a spinner here, lasts 00:55:795 seems great added
  2. 01:46:250 (1) - Too tell the truth, I feel this slow down slider meanless, although here's a long sound in music, but a sudden slow down slider could confuse players sometime fixed
  3. 02:08:068 (1) - no finish here? added
    为什么音效要这么特立独行，我已习惯了跟着音乐拍子的1-3clap，突然这么弄我还真不习惯，虽然倒也没什么错……uh```im sad to hear that but i will keep it
[Normal]
  1. Add a spinner here, lasts 00:55:795? added
  2. 02:08:068 (1) - Finish? added
    这难度音效感觉用得略少，当然如果你喜欢这么用那也可以，建议还是用更多的音效让打起来更有实感。 i use soft-hitclap now ,hoping it sounds better
Thanks a lot Breeze~ :)
woshiguabi
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woshiguabi

好可怕的微风
好可怜的CET
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

woshiguabi wrote:


好可怕的微风
好可怜的CET
:P
Breeze
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Breeze

CET 6 wrote:

uh```im sad to hear that but i will keep it
这句是中性句，怎么加音效那是mapper自己的自由，我只是说我个人不是很习惯这种加法，你只要按照你自己喜欢的来就好，音效没有明确意义
的对错，只要合适，怎么加都可以

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CET 6
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CET 6

Breeze wrote:

CET 6 wrote:

uh```im sad to hear that but i will keep it
这句是中性句，怎么加音效那是mapper自己的自由，我只是说我个人不是很习惯这种加法，你只要按照你自己喜欢的来就好，音效没有明确意义
的对错，只要合适，怎么加都可以

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嗯嗯明白~谢谢Breeze~ :)
Nymph
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Nymph
SPOILER
20:44 CET 6: 好人妮妮
20:44 Nymph: 似乎知道你想說什麼
20:45 CET 6: 先知你好！
20:47 CET 6: yeah 谢谢妮妮！
20:47 Nymph: shore
20:47 Nymph: 01:33:977 (6) - 這個clap略奇怪
20:48 CET 6: 嗯好，可是这个是lkx做的
20:48 Nymph: 他不在線嗎
20:50 CET 6: 我叫一下他哦
20:50 CET 6: 他好像不在现在··不好意思啊
20:50 Nymph: hard
20:50 Nymph: 01:28:522 (3,4) -
20:50 Nymph: 這個建議分別再往2邊弄遠一點
20:50 CET 6: 好的
20:53 Nymph: 話說hard要不要考慮AR7啊
20:53 Nymph: 可能更好一點
20:53 CET 6: 我也觉得好像有点慢～嗯好我调下
20:54 Nymph: normal
20:55 Nymph: 00:20:340 (1) - 這裡我建議作為轉盤結尾欸 比單獨一個note要好一點
20:55 Nymph: 因為NOTE2是個重音 所以讓2作為開頭估計會更好
20:55 Nymph: 1這裡主要跟的是歌聲 當開頭的第一個note感覺略勉强了點 玩的不是很舒服
20:55 CET 6: 嗯对哦　好
20:57 Nymph: 00:57:431 (1,2) - 雖然可能不是什麽重點。。不過我不太建議這種快出屏幕的擺放 能不能想辦法稍微往右放置一下呢
20:58 CET 6: ！我也想到这个，只是这样间距会变小点不知会不会影响
20:59 Nymph: 稍微改一下各個位置唄
20:59 Nymph: 改著改著後面過渡到正常就可以了
20:59 CET 6: 嗯嗯，好的我调整一下～
21:00 Nymph: 沒了 就這些了
21:01 CET 6: 我有一个地方可以问下吗？
21:01 Nymph: 嗯？
21:01 CET 6: 00:36:704 (1) -
21:01 CET 6: 这里
21:02 CET 6: 01:50:886 (1) -
21:02 Nymph: 怎麼了
21:02 CET 6: 这两个地方节奏一样可是我摆的不一样，虽然音效弄成了一样的
21:02 Nymph: 又沒要求一定一樣
21:03 CET 6: 嗯好的～谢谢
21:03 Nymph: 對哦還有一個事忘了說 tags中間的空格刪減一下
21:03 Nymph: 放一個就好
21:03 Nymph: 我不太清楚空格太多會不會有異常..反正改一下更好
21:04 CET 6: zihan那吗？
21:04 Nymph: han和lkx
21:04 CET 6: 嗯好，那个sara要不要删除？
21:05 Nymph: 咦跟aritst一樣?那就删了
21:05 CET 6: artist里有了
21:05 CET 6: 嗯好~
21:05 Nymph: 改完喊我啊

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sjoy
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哇RANK了恭喜
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sjoy wrote:

哇RANK了恭喜
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
CET 6

Nymph wrote:

SPOILER
20:44 CET 6: 好人妮妮
20:44 Nymph: 似乎知道你想說什麼
20:45 CET 6: 先知你好！
20:47 CET 6: yeah 谢谢妮妮！
20:47 Nymph: shore
20:47 Nymph: 01:33:977 (6) - 這個clap略奇怪
20:48 CET 6: 嗯好，可是这个是lkx做的
20:48 Nymph: 他不在線嗎
20:50 CET 6: 我叫一下他哦
20:50 CET 6: 他好像不在现在··不好意思啊
20:50 Nymph: hard
20:50 Nymph: 01:28:522 (3,4) -
20:50 Nymph: 這個建議分別再往2邊弄遠一點
20:50 CET 6: 好的
20:53 Nymph: 話說hard要不要考慮AR7啊
20:53 Nymph: 可能更好一點
20:53 CET 6: 我也觉得好像有点慢～嗯好我调下
20:54 Nymph: normal
20:55 Nymph: 00:20:340 (1) - 這裡我建議作為轉盤結尾欸 比單獨一個note要好一點
20:55 Nymph: 因為NOTE2是個重音 所以讓2作為開頭估計會更好
20:55 Nymph: 1這裡主要跟的是歌聲 當開頭的第一個note感覺略勉强了點 玩的不是很舒服
20:55 CET 6: 嗯对哦　好
20:57 Nymph: 00:57:431 (1,2) - 雖然可能不是什麽重點。。不過我不太建議這種快出屏幕的擺放 能不能想辦法稍微往右放置一下呢
20:58 CET 6: ！我也想到这个，只是这样间距会变小点不知会不会影响
20:59 Nymph: 稍微改一下各個位置唄
20:59 Nymph: 改著改著後面過渡到正常就可以了
20:59 CET 6: 嗯嗯，好的我调整一下～
21:00 Nymph: 沒了 就這些了
21:01 CET 6: 我有一个地方可以问下吗？
21:01 Nymph: 嗯？
21:01 CET 6: 00:36:704 (1) -
21:01 CET 6: 这里
21:02 CET 6: 01:50:886 (1) -
21:02 Nymph: 怎麼了
21:02 CET 6: 这两个地方节奏一样可是我摆的不一样，虽然音效弄成了一样的
21:02 Nymph: 又沒要求一定一樣
21:03 CET 6: 嗯好的～谢谢
21:03 Nymph: 對哦還有一個事忘了說 tags中間的空格刪減一下
21:03 Nymph: 放一個就好
21:03 Nymph: 我不太清楚空格太多會不會有異常..反正改一下更好
21:04 CET 6: zihan那吗？
21:04 Nymph: han和lkx
21:04 CET 6: 嗯好，那个sara要不要删除？
21:05 Nymph: 咦跟aritst一樣?那就删了
21:05 CET 6: artist里有了
21:05 CET 6: 嗯好~
21:05 Nymph: 改完喊我啊

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谢谢妮妮 :)
CET 6
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CET 6

sjoy wrote:

哇RANK了恭喜
谢谢 ~
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