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nano.RIPE - Gekka (Short Size)

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No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月12日 星期一 at 12:09:20

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Gekka (Short Size)
Source: Hataraku Maou-sama!
Tags: はたらく魔王さま! ending Flower -Umi- Umi 1PSA The Devil Is a Part-Timer!
BPM: 86
Filesize: 15282kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 1PSA's Normal (2.03 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Flower's Hard (2.62 stars, 190 notes)
  3. Insane (3.08 stars, 241 notes)
  4. Umi's Easy (1.39 stars, 94 notes)


Download: nano.RIPE - Gekka (Short Size)
Download: nano.RIPE - Gekka (Short Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#56

Easy - -Umi-
Normal - 1PSA
Hard - Flower
Umi
first ! 8-)

Can i make the easy ? >.</
- Tu -
nano.ripe <33
Topic Starter
No_Gu

-Umi- wrote:

first ! 8-)

Can i make the easy ? >.</
ok
Flower
done!
http://puu.sh/3OJCq.osu
音效基本直接复制你的了 有mod的话如果没有特殊情况就麻烦你来改了
Topic Starter
No_Gu
Umi
Finished !

> http://puu.sh/3QsJD/3f4189ccdb.rar with some custom hitsounds :3
1PSA
http://puu.sh/3WJzA.zip 做完了 :) 是不是有点太难了,需不需要remap
Topic Starter
No_Gu

1PSA wrote:

http://puu.sh/3WJzA.zip 做完了 :) 是不是有点太难了,需不需要remap
没啥问题 挺好的
1PSA
01:02:410 这里失误,弄了两条绿线,留S:C1的,S:C3的删掉,要不然hitfinish就出不来,抱歉,然后00:06:596这里音量加了些,http://puu.sh/3Xg7g.zip
ts8zs
这timing看起来……有点吓人
[Insane]
00:41:363 - note?
01:16:363 (1) - 有点歪
01:24:735 (5) - 左上一点
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[✿'s Hard]
00:02:734 (5) - 感觉可以柔和一些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918566
00:45:665 (2) - 应该拆成两个滑条
00:57:526 (4) - 感觉偏的方向反了?注重flow似乎也没什么大问题:3
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[1PSA's Normal]
01:19:154 (1) - not fit 2
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[Umi's Easy]
01:19:154 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918579
01:21:247 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918580
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
Sun Rainbow
M4M

求你换个BG行吗 好诡异
none~
00:00:990 (1,2) -
00:03:083 (3,2) -
01:23:689 (2,1) - Blanket
None
00:25:782 (4,5,1) -

再也挑不出什么东西
1PSA

Sun Rainbow wrote:

[box=1PSA's Normal]01:23:689 (2,1) - Blanket
我想说我这是做的正三角好吧包起来了,谢谢mod
[quote=“ts8zs”]01:19:154 (1) - not fit 2 没动你说哪个2
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ? 这看No_Gu的了[/quote]
谢谢mod

传了 http://puu.sh/3ZADD.zip
Topic Starter
No_Gu

ts8zs wrote:

这timing看起来……有点吓人其实这样还有不准的地方。。鼓手太蛋疼,我懒的再插红线修了。。
[Insane]
00:41:363 - note?其实确实应该加但是加完那边跳略大也不舒服
01:16:363 (1) - 有点歪k
01:24:735 (5) - 左上一点k
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?现在这好点

Sun Rainbow wrote:

00:25:782 (4,5,1) - 你仔细听听其实都有音
update
Umi

ts8zs wrote:

[Umi's Easy]
01:19:154 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918579 Fixed
01:21:247 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918580 No change
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ? ^

Sun Rainbow wrote:

00:00:990 (1,2) - don't really understand what u mean :/
00:03:083 (3,2) - no change to keep blanket 00:03:806 (1,3) -
Thx for mod.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Gekka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51133
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Gekka (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:月花 (TV Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Umi's Easy
Source:Hataraku Maou-sama!
Tags:はたらく魔王さま! ending Flower -Umi- 1PSA
BeatmapID:285698
BeatmapSetID:106595

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,850,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 128,255,255
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TrigonometrY
m4m from your queue

First of all:
http://puu.sh/bvZKJ/4d5b99d244.jpg

@Umi and 1PSA: make longer AudioLeadIn, current one doesn't give player any chance for preparing.

[Umi's Easy]
00:45:665 (3) - add finish to slider head like you did before 00:40:084 (1,3) -
00:45:665 (3) - 00:56:828 (1) - 01:07:991 (1) - same, there is cymbal sound. You may decrease volume to 30% for more soft sound
01:13:224 (4) - please don't skip that strong beat 01:13:572 - suggest to use next rhythm: http://puu.sh/bw0Lv/a6b34722e7.jpg and add finishes to head and ending of (5) slider or http://puu.sh/bw0OP/54e1e272ef.jpg if you prefer not to complicate rhythm.
00:40:084 (1,2,3) - it's not 1/2 rhythm, 00:40:607 - there is no sound unlike 00:40:665 - or 00:40:433 - so I earnestly propose to change this part. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/bw1js/6b5f676d85.jpg

[1PSA's Normal]
01:02:061 (6) - maybe remove slider? 01:01:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - this part is really difficult for Normal

[Flower's Hard]
HP Drain/OD +1, current values are too low for Hard
00:01:339 - missed beat? Suggest to add circle
00:26:131 - 00:44:270 - 00:45:317 - 01:04:851 - same

[Insane]
00:16:689 (2) - resnap it http://puu.sh/bw5Nq/141a32127b.jpg
00:16:340 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you break the flow on purpose, but it's played just bad. Could you improve it like this? http://puu.sh/bw4LN/711b357d9c.jpg http://puu.sh/bw4Nr/a8fb56e271.jpg
00:51:156 - add circle like you did there 00:06:538 (4) -
01:01:712 (3) - there is should be 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4: http://puu.sh/bw59z/bcab71010d.jpg
01:12:177 (1,2,3,4) - as I said above. My suggestions:

Anything else is perfect for me. Good luck!
koreapenguin
K.Penguin's m4m

General

  1. check AiMod, you can find some problems and fix :3
  2. haven't break times so uncheck plz :3
  3. lost AudioLeadIn in Umi and 1PSA
  4. how about add english title on tags?
    the devil is a part-timer overlord at work



Umi's Easy

  1. 00:03:806 (1) - about slider head on sound :3 how about add 'Additions : Drum and Whistle' hear to more good, and 00:03:806 - 00:06:247 - here how about just use 'Additions : Drum' becuz Drum set in basic hitnormal is noise
  2. 00:16:339 (1) - New combo here?
  3. 00:45:665 (3) - add finish on slider head , i can hear crash cymbal
  4. 00:47:759 (3) - same as ^, hear to slider end :3
  5. 00:56:828 (1) - you lost finish, umi san!
  6. 01:07:991 (1) - ^ 01:11:479 (1) - ^ 01:13:224 (4) - even slider end


nice diff umi >~<, about crash use soft finish it more better it's up to you :3


1PSA's Normal
  1. uncheck widescreen :3 http://puu.sh/bw4KE/bc4492cdda.png even letter box


lol nice norma, it fine to me :D can't find other thing, i think so just little bit many 1/3 :3 is hard to beginners little bit, they might be confuse on them


Flower's Hard
  1. 00:22:875 (4) - hitsound is wrong.. i can't hear Big DOOOM
  2. 00:26:363 (4) - even too, i guess it not miss? right, but i think so it lttile nosie just del is more better
  3. 01:01:712 (3) - http://puu.sh/bw5n8/b233bec241.jpg it hear to better :3


always make super nice map Flower san, give me a your maptalent. specially flow is good on your maps


Insane
  1. how about this http://puu.sh/bw5NC/685ea43e6a.png i think so introduction is little bit loud
  2. 00:16:689 (2) - unsnapu!! check Ai mod :3
  3. 00:49:156 (1) - how about New combo here? it would be easier to read :3
  4. 01:01:712 (3) - isn't 1/3?... look Flower's Hard :3 i think so it's 1/3 is right


also nice Insane, can't find problem an rhythm, flow, patterns to me :3 awesome lol


i hope understanding my english... i think my english is so bad super bad...


TAKE MY FIRST STAR!! WHeeeeeeeeeeeee /o/
kakifly
m4m ~

Umi's Easy

-nazi- if this 00:26:131 (1) - were to blanket with 00:27:526 (3) - you need to make a little adjustment to the slider body
- 00:47:759 (3) - this note ends on a strong downbeat imo; maybe you should change a rhythm a bit so a note starts on 00:48:456 ?
- 00:51:247 (1,3) - stack is off; recheck
easy is very nice; sorry i couldnt find much

1PSA's Normal

- try cs 3.5 for better diff spread? or ask umi to lower the cs in their easy
- 00:11:480 (4,1) - recheck blanket; its a bit off
- 00:13:922 (2,1) - ^
- 00:17:759 (1,3) - ^
- 00:22:293 (4,5) - ^
- 00:24:735 (4,5) - ^
- theres quite a few blankets in need of fixes; although these are mostly nazi blanket mods its best if you polished the diff to look nice; i'll try to point out most of them but be aware
- 00:40:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this 'string' of sliders is a bit long imo ; maybe have a 1/1 or short break in between? remove a slider or two that isnt as necessary
- 00:58:224 (5,6) - not sure if you intended to blanket these or not but the blanket is off
- 01:06:596 (5,6) - ^

Flower's Hard

- 00:00:990 (1) - shouldnt this be a 1/1 slider?
-00:03:806 (1,2) - imo i think these would work nicer as a repeat slider
- 00:06:131 (6,7) - make this a 1/3 slider? if you listen carefuly the sound on 7 is a bit more faint than 6
- 00:22:526 (2,3,4,5) - imo i dont think these circles work here; they dont match the music that well? since i replayed the part a few times and the circles just dont seem right, i would suggest a circle at 00:22:642 then a 2/3 slider at 00:22:991 ?
- 00:35:200 (5) - 00:35:898 (1) - avoid overlap mabe?
- 01:18:107 (4,1) - blanket?

Insane

-00:06:538 (4,1) - imo this random 1/6 note is a bit confusing especially when using hd
- 00:25:665 (4,5,6,7) - i dont see a point of this stream here? theres nothing really in the music to hint it
- 00:38:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think a few 1/3 sliders would work nicely here
- 00:48:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally dont like this overlap stream >o<
couldnt find much after the kiai; its pretty nice

good luck !
Low
M4M

[General]
- first timing section seems a bit early.
- there's inconsistencies in the timing sections for each diff.
- there's inconsistencies in the audioleadin for each diff. you also don't need it; it's auto calculated now


[Easy]
00:49:852 (5) - put it in a position so that it blankets with (4). looks a lot neater than what you currently have.
01:02:410 (1) - the end of this is unsnapped
01:07:991 (1) - use the very end of this slider's shape to blanket the next circle.
01:20:549 (1,2) - why not make (1) the same curve as (2) to create a blanket with the two sliders? it would look really cool imo

[Normal]
01:02:410 (1) - the end of this is unsnapped

[Hard]
00:57:177 (3) - flip horizontally and reverse. this is the shape you should have this, it flows much better to me.
01:01:712 (3) - add a repeat to the end of this to match the sound in the music.

[Insane]
- OD 7.5 maybe? it seems appropriate for an insane diff.
00:16:689 (2) - start of this slider is unsnapped
00:10:433 (4) - space this out more? it feels like i'm holding back to play this.

this is solid. GL
Aeonian Sonder
[Insane]
00:06:538 (4) - This is questionable.
00:07:294 (3) - Could you make this a soft-hitclap instead for the head? This is just for insurance of the hitsounds, because my normal-hitnormal is not default, and this might also be the same for other players.

00:39:968 (9,1) - I'm not sure if you'll do this, but make this on the same line are the previous circles.
01:01:712 (3) - Is this on purpose?

[Flower's Hard]
00:06:596 (1) - Same as the insane

[Easy]
00:10:782 (2) - Could you make this blanket the end of slider 1?

This is SO going to get ranked.
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