HabiHolic wrote:

M4M from #modreqs~

[Beginner]

00:26:174 (1) - My suggestion, but why not replace them with normal hit sound? I want to keep the hitsound pattern as consistent as possible throughout the diffs. No change here
00:32:719 (2) - 00:30:537 (1) - What is the shape of the match and in parallel? Fixed shape to make it exactly fitting
00:49:083 (2) - suggestion ctrl + g Great! Works really well
02:04:356 (1) - why new combo? remove nc~ OK, I guess it works either way
03:09:810 (4) - NC? No change. I want to keep the line in one combo like I did before.

[Advanced]

00:07:083 (6) - NC OK
00:11:446 (6) - ^ OK
00:14:719 (4) - suggestion ctrl + g Nice Idea! Also applied to the later part!
01:01:628 (3) - spacing? Fixed
01:49:628 (2) - Hmm ... I think we need to slightly widen the distance Fixed
01:53:446 (1) - soft finish? I don't want to use soft finish for the calm part of this song. I'll keep it consistent across all difficulties.

[Challenging]

00:18:946 - add note? I can't since I follow the vocals with this combo.
02:14:856 (5) - suggestion ctrl + g I'd like to keep a symmetrical pattern here.
02:46:356 (3) - NC I don't see why? I think this combo is matching the build-up quite nicely

Good Map~ star +1~

TicClick wrote:

ok here is my fast review of a single diff
[Challenging]

1. 00:08:719 (1) - finish/whistle? ok added a soft whistle
2. 00:13:356 (2) - it should be a triplet it should be, yes. Anyway if you analyze the vocals here you'll see that the "you" is not very clear on the red or blue tick, instead it is somewhat stretched across. I think covering this part with the 1/4 into 1/2 slider is easier to get right when first playing this map and if the player doesn't know the song at all. It doesn't feel too out of place to bother me
3. 00:39:810 (3,4) - they should be placed further from each other and the previous note, just like you did with 02:28:083 (2,1) and 01:05:037 (7,1) for a better flow
4. 00:44:174 (3,4) -
5. 00:47:992 (1) -
6. 00:52:901 (3,4) - (ok you got this, please fix all the similar moments)
   for the above: I tried increasing the spacing for this pattern a bit. I don't feel like making it too jumpy benefits the flow of this part (because of the stacks and the accelerated movement for the later combos).
   
7. 01:11:719 (6) - make this a triplet and start spinner 1/4th beat later yep, works better

The storyboard doesn't have anything that is as strong as kiai fountains, not even a white flash all over the screen. There's just animation, and this is why I suggested (and I am gonna do this again) adding a couple of fountains. Please. ok, I added the fountains for the chorus and the doubled dubstep part

Xinely wrote:

ohai p3n, m4m here :3

• 
  General
  imo this map have less hitsound, try use this whistle http://puu.sh/4aT7g.wav ?
  this is minor about SB,i saw /CODE/
  I will ask CnF if he wants to change anything in the SB or not. Don't want to decide this for myself because the SB is working properly and I will only update the SB if CnF decides to make changes to it

• 
  Beginner
  00:09:810 (2) - have spacing issue here (0,86x) fixed...even if it is not noticable in playmode (CS3 is very forgiving if you map with grid snapping)
  00:32:719 (2) - move to 256,324 for make blanket? can't do that without messing up the symmetry pattern here. It is a nice idea though...I might try this if someone else complains about the long sliders
  01:11:992 (1) - add finish? oops, missed that one
  01:27:265 (1) - keep use 1,20x as previous like 01:25:083 (3) - good spot! seems I messed up the spacing when I rearranged some patterns here
  01:34:356 (4) - end in 01:34:901 - , due a drum in that time this combo is intended to be vocal follow and it matches the vocals right now
  01:51:265 (3,1) - nazi, you can make this stack perfectly ok
  01:59:992 (3) - spacing issue (0,86x) here not noticable in playmode, fixed anyway
  02:25:628 (3) - ^ ^
  02:33:810 (2) - ctrl+G? imo have better flow yes
  02:41:446 (1) - use 0,8x? due i saw when 1/1 you use 0,8 at spacing and 1/2 use 1,2 wow. How did this happen? How could I miss THAT? Thanks for pointing it out!
  02:45:810 (1) - keep use 1,20x as previous 02:43:628 (3) - fixed
  02:54:537 (1) - spacing issue (0,86x) here not noticable in playmode but fixed anyway
  03:01:083 (3) - ^ ^

• 
  Advanced
  00:08:174 (3) - nazi, better use 1,00x as previous ok
  00:14:719 (4,6) - make them stacked perfectly, i know just different 1 coordinate but i try see in testplay it's not stacked with perfect yes, fixed the stack
  00:17:174 - add note here? ok
  00:28:083 - ^ ok
  00:40:356 (4) - make symmetrical? http://puu.sh/4b8uA.jpg no, I want this slider to flow into the circle and form a curve with it
  00:58:628 (5) - spacing inconsistecy 0,94x here. imo try put in 388,132 for flow fixed spacing but kept the flow as it was
  01:03:265 (1) - ^ (1,07x) oops
  01:22:628 (1) - try use drum finish? I don't want to overdo it here. The soft whistle works pretty well imo
  01:41:174 (2) - spacing 0,93x? imo just use 1,00 better ok
  01:46:628 (4) - try use sampleset drum only? hmmm I tried but I can't see why it should fit better than the normal set
  01:51:537 (1) - try keep consistency 1,00x? since no reason why inconsistency spacing imo fixed
  02:32:719 (1,2) - stack with 02:30:537 (1) - more neat imo right, stacked properly
  03:10:628 (2) - spacing 0,94x here fixed
  03:14:174 (5) - so nazi, just NC to keep consistency /runs it is consistent with the part before the previous KIAI and a NC here doesn't really fit imo, because the vocals are from the same line and the beat pauses slightly before the buildup right before the KIAI. That is why I kept the downbeat inside this combo.
  03:20:446 (5) - no need use finish imo. just use in 03:20:719 - ok
  03:31:628 (5) - nazi, NC for consistency same reason as 2 above

• 
  Challenging
  00:23:992 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/4baBg.jpg ? that would work as well but I don't want to use circles on the 1/6 parts. I want to keep this map simple and accessible and that is why I used the 2x repeat slider here
  00:25:628 (5,1) - try http://puu.sh/4baGK.jpg? since imo kinda weird skip vocal in red tick vocals are not exactly on the red tick but are stretched out between red and blue. I think this slider does a good job of capturing the vocals without adding unnecessary complexity
  00:50:992 (1,1,1) - imo no need NC since the spacing is same the NC here is for the map-theme and not spacings
  01:08:446 (1,1,1) - same ^
  01:52:083 (8,9) - imo this is kinda weird rhythm , try http://puu.sh/4baS0.jpg ? I tried something similar but added the same star-pattern I used in the break part of the chorus. Hope this is better as before
  02:04:356 (5) - NC due SV change? yes. This was a NC before but I changed it a few mods earlier. You are the 3rd person that prefers the NC here so I will put it back
  nice diff <3 Thanks

Nice song, starred and Good Luck <3

Konei wrote:

[Challenging]

1. 01:52:083 (8) - This Slider doesn't really make much sense to me, there is no prominent tone on the blue tick but a rather strong one on the white, there is a tone on the blue tick aswell, but the main beat is on the white one so I'd advise to shorten it by 1/4 or do something so you get the tone on the white tick aswell. Changed it. I made a pattern similar to the symmetrical star pattern for the chorus breaks. I hope this works the way I intended because it is slightly more jumpy than everything else in the calm part
2. 01:56:856 (8) - I'd remove those drum sounds, they are inconsistent, to sudden and unfiting the music. I added them on the previous part as well to make it more consistent
3. 02:01:219 (7,8) - Hm, you use them here aswell. If that's so, you should add them on this part ( 01:52:083 (8) - ) aswell, to keep consistency. exactly
4. 02:04:356 (5) - SV change could be more clear if you added a NC, not needed tho since the notes before are circles, but you might consider. already fixed with previous mod
5. 02:10:628 (7) - I'd remove this finish, the music is not strong enough to bear the enduring tone and also it seems spammed with the following finish on the downbeat which will have a better emphasis if you removed this finish. If you remove it, remove it on the similar parts aswell. ok...it was a nice addition but a bit too loud. I can't do anything that fits with the standard hitsounds tho (and I don't want to add custom hitsounds)
6. 02:15:265 (6) - Your previous combos were all starting on the downbeat, why is this not? because of the pause. The NC has to start with the actual vocals to make this small break work
7. 02:21:674 - Don't really feel good ignoring this heavy beat, it's as strong as the one before so you could consider making 4 a Slider that ends here. yes and no. This part was really tricky to map "right". I wanted to follow the vocals and include the baseline at the same time. The problem with the vocals is, they start between the blue and the red tick so I couldn't map them with a seperate note. I had to use a slider to fade the baseline and the beginning of the lyrics or otherwise the beatpattern would be really confusing for people who don't know this song or haven't played this map a few times before. I really want to keep this map playable and enjoyable on the first play (without mods ). This right here is the best solution I could come up with that still keeps all my intentions and only drops one beat in a triplet.
8. 02:25:083 (4) - You could move this a bit to blanket 1 with it, would look more structured. but you wouldn't notice this in playmode. Still changed because it spreads the increasing jump distances a bit more evenly.
9. 02:29:446 (4) - Same but with 2.
10. 02:58:628 (1) - You could either try to make this shape more special to give it a creative touch, or at least make it a bit more curvy, it's strange to look at at the moment. it is only a 1/2 slider with a speed up that was slowly introduced by the previous kicksliders. I don't think making a special shape will work here. It is a tricky part on the first play and I don't want to make it any harder. I changed the shape only a bit to make a better curve from the previous to the following combo.

Xinely wrote:

General
this is minor about SB,i saw

Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,40628,21
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0
Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,129265,4
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,3272,0
Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,145356,10
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0
Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,199083,4
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,3272,0
Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,215174,10
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0

use Loop instead to minimize osb

Sprite,Foreground,TopCentre,"SB\l_red.png",320,100
 L,40628,21
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0
 L,129265,4
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,3272,0
 L,145356,10
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0
 L,199083,4
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,3272,0
 L,215174,10
  F,2,0,545,1,0
  F,0,545,1636,0

^ use that loop to for purple, blu, green, yellow, orange.

p3n wrote:

02:10:628 (7) - I'd remove this finish, the music is not strong enough to bear the enduring tone and also it seems spammed with the following finish on the downbeat which will have a better emphasis if you removed this finish. If you remove it, remove it on the similar parts aswell. ok...it was a nice addition but a bit too loud. I can't do anything that fits with the standard hitsounds tho (and I don't want to add custom hitsounds)