val0108 wrote:

go to rank

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  In the end of the video you can see: http://puu.sh/5qLIi.jpg
  So change the tags to "LeaF sak Coalenscent Breakcore t+mugen CHOiX To7"
  And maybe also add some tags like beatmania etc?

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  00:05:635 (3) - imo this stack ruins the jumpy speed that was set up by 00:05:366 (1,2,3) - . place the slider at 00:05:635 - and the circle at 00:05:905 -
  for example you can stack the circle on (5) if placed at 00:05:905 -
  00:17:743 (1,2,3,4) - It's not really possible to recognize the 1/4 music under that 1/4 stream, so you should better make the repeating slider longer and remove the 1/4 notes: http://puu.sh/5qKxm.jpg
  01:13:169 (1) - End point 1 grid up?
  01:27:564 (1,2) - It's a bit harsh to start a stream from a red tick, and there's no real loud sound that needs that emphasizement on this note. you should replace these two by a 1/4 slider to make this pattern a bit more readable
  01:30:523 (2) - This should be 1/6
  01:33:618 (1) - This should be 1/6 too
  02:01:062 (2) - You forgot one repeat

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  00:36:846 (2) - For the sake of readability, it's better not to stack them. Try this: http://puu.sh/5qL3R.jpg
  00:52:183 - Better place a circle there, it's the beginning of the 00:52:317 (6,7,8,1) - pattern
  01:06:712 (1) - This jump feels a bit unnatural since the distance until the next object is smaller than to the previous, but the rhythm until previous is smaller. (hope you got it xD) Well, place it closer to the previous one: http://puu.sh/5qLaD.jpg
  01:18:281 (4) - 1 grid down?
  01:20:703 (1,2,3) - Make this triple neater please, it looks odd. http://puu.sh/5qLdA.jpg

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  00:10:344 (3) - Even for Hyper, this feels like a jump. Maybe place it a bit farther? http://puu.sh/5qLj5.jpg
  01:02:138 - Add a note here. 01:02:272 (2) - this one alone feels out of place
  01:30:927 (3) - Two repeats was really unexpected, better remove one repeat and add a circle afterwards
  01:31:465 (1,2,3) - This pattern will be better if you make all these sliders not triples but 5-ples Like that: http://puu.sh/5qLqr.jpg
  If you're afraid that people might misread last slider as 5-ple too, replace it by triple with circles: http://puu.sh/5qLsK.jpg

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  01:52:183 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is a bit too hard for this diff. Replace 01:52:183 (2) - with a single slider from 01:52:183 to 01:52:452 - and make a slider from 01:53:259 to 01:53:662 -

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  01:24:470 (2,3,1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here, fix it.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

i feel 00:18:281 - 00:27:833 and 01:12:093 - 01:25:008 can add in more 1/4s or short sliders, the music feels more than the constant 1/2+triple 1/4s 0,0 - I don't like adding random triples if the song doesn't really support it and would just be overmapping which I don't like

and good map

grumd wrote:

Hallo.

— General

• 
  In the end of the video you can see: http://puu.sh/5qLIi.jpg
  So change the tags to "LeaF sak Coalenscent Breakcore t+mugen CHOiX To7"
  And maybe also add some tags like beatmania etc? - done

— Terror

• 
  00:05:635 (3) - imo this stack ruins the jumpy speed that was set up by 00:05:366 (1,2,3) - . place the slider at 00:05:635 - and the circle at 00:05:905 -
  for example you can stack the circle on (5) if placed at 00:05:905 - done
  00:17:743 (1,2,3,4) - It's not really possible to recognize the 1/4 music under that 1/4 stream, so you should better make the repeating slider longer and remove the 1/4 notes: http://puu.sh/5qKxm.jpg - also done
  01:13:169 (1) - End point 1 grid up? - dat nazi, done
  01:27:564 (1,2) - It's a bit harsh to start a stream from a red tick, and there's no real loud sound that needs that emphasizement on this note. you should replace these two by a 1/4 slider to make this pattern a bit more readable - no change here since its not really hard to read and the 1/4 slider before that makes it easier to play. Although I changed the 1/4 slider to a circle so I hope that makes it more easier to play
  01:30:523 (2) - This should be 1/6 - done
  01:33:618 (1) - This should be 1/6 too - ^
  02:01:062 (2) - You forgot one repeat - ouch, how did I miss that

— Another

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  00:36:846 (2) - For the sake of readability, it's better not to stack them. Try this: http://puu.sh/5qL3R.jpg - done
  00:52:183 - Better place a circle there, it's the beginning of the 00:52:317 (6,7,8,1) - pattern - done
  01:06:712 (1) - This jump feels a bit unnatural since the distance until the next object is smaller than to the previous, but the rhythm until previous is smaller. (hope you got it xD) Well, place it closer to the previous one: http://puu.sh/5qLaD.jpg - was just thinking of the same thing, done
  01:18:281 (4) - 1 grid down? - why not
  01:20:703 (1,2,3) - Make this triple neater please, it looks odd. http://puu.sh/5qLdA.jpg - fixed

— Hyper

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  00:10:344 (3) - Even for Hyper, this feels like a jump. Maybe place it a bit farther? http://puu.sh/5qLj5.jpg - increased the spacing, should be more readable
  01:02:138 - Add a note here. 01:02:272 (2) - this one alone feels out of place - done
  01:30:927 (3) - Two repeats was really unexpected, better remove one repeat and add a circle afterwards - done, I wonder if this will be too hard?
  01:31:465 (1,2,3) - This pattern will be better if you make all these sliders not triples but 5-ples Like that: http://puu.sh/5qLqr.jpg
  If you're afraid that people might misread last slider as 5-ple too, replace it by triple with circles: http://puu.sh/5qLsK.jpg - well I had to change this whole part and shift around things a bit, this should be fine now

— Standard

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  01:52:183 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is a bit too hard for this diff. Replace 01:52:183 (2) - with a single slider from 01:52:183 to 01:52:452 - and make a slider from 01:53:259 to 01:53:662 - done although I moved some objects around

— Beginner

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  01:24:470 (2,3,1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here, fix it. - fixed

Call me back after fixes.

val0108 wrote:

go to rank

Lanturn wrote:

Hurray for more Canadian made maps!

Grats on your first ranked mapset

nold_1702 wrote:

Fuck my ass please