yo yo yo Bass! requested via pm~
[General]
Happy's diff has got audio lead-in 2000, you have to decide whether you want to make it constant, or delete it from happy's diff.
I like happy's way of using kiai, I'd consider it to make it consistent, to make it flashy
I checked aiBAT to you, it says you've got some things unsnapped. You better check it, I hope aiBAT didnd't have a bad day.
[Flask's Easy]
00:13:617 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:45:606 - snap to 00:45:618
00:01:264 (2) - Don't kill me, but this blanket doesn't look perfect, move the slider a tiny bit up.
00:08:323 (1) - I can't hear hitsounds at all at the begin, you should consider adding something at the slider start here. I suggest a finish, to make the NC a bit more powerful.
00:13:617 (1) - Uhm, dunno what you've done here, but snap it properly here, please.
00:15:141 (3,4,1) - Check the DS between them please, 0.87 0.92 and stuff like that is a rather big difference. I could see that very well.
00:16:665 (1,2,3) - If you look properly, you can see the DS fail here as well. Try to fix that, to make it symmetric I think you can slightly ignore DS. But 00:17:808 (2) - should definetly be in the middle.
00:36:475 (1) - Add a clap on the third slidertick for consistency
00:42:570 (1) - And a finish, for consistency's sake as well
00:50:951 (3) - You can leave it like this, but it feels wrong, and also sounds wrong to my ears. Try following the vocals more closely, because you've done that before as well - Using a red tick isn't a shame here, I suppose.
00:57:237 (2) - Blanket nazi again :3
00:57:808 (1) - And again, blanket. Just aesthetics, don't be lazy to fix them please.
01:03:141 (3) - The same problem as above here!
01:19:141 (1,1) - Why do you ignore blankets give them some love, because I suppose they should be better.
Rest seems fine
[Normal]
00:13:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is really hard, to put it at the begin. The newbie player gets stressed very easily, you should avoid the stacking here.
00:16:665 (1,2,3,4) - Although i think its fine here, because some time has already passed, and he got used to the 'faster' part.
00:22:760 (4,5,6,7) - Avoid these stackings? I don't know why they have a reason to be stacked tbh. Spacing out would make it also more exciting to play!
00:49:618 (5) - Try this placing once, I think it gives some variety and a rather nice direction change.
http://puu.sh/40alb.jpg
00:49:618 (5) - Also, NC, because the combo is really long for a normal o.o
00:51:713 (1) - Finish to emphasize his strong voice there.
The normal itselfs looks well done, but i'm not sure about the stackings, because they are really hard. I hope it's okay to reduce some of them.
Also: Go over your map again and try to set more NC's, when you have little gaps, because the Combos till 8 seem really long o.o
[wa's Hard]
Snapping 00:00:823 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:00:823 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:07:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:02:882 (3) - Adding a circle here would give everything a nice 1/3 flow, consider it
00:06:412 - Same here, same reason as above!
00:10:088 (1) - Move to 368 / 100 would make the blanket perfect and makes it more polsihed.
00:11:853 (1,2) - This destroys the 1/3 flow completely, 2 is just too harsh. Try to make a nice flowy slider here.
00:15:141 (1) - Ctrl + G here please. The reason is just that this is a hard diff, and the jump is really hard for a hard actually.
00:20:094 (2,3) - I love that rhythm o.o 00:21:237 (1,2) - why not using it here as well?
00:27:141 (4,1,2,3) - Try to stack this part properly, you can see what I mean if you're clicking on it - the stackings look unproperly made.
00:43:522 (5) - Consider adding some space between them, I like the way you've done it before.
00:45:618 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:14:570 (6) - I can definetly feel a NC here, consistency
01:25:808 (4) - Try again please, this is wrong. Make it 1 tick longer
I really like the kiai, it's well done!
[happy30's happyness]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:177 - snap to 00:18:189
00:19:701 - snap to 00:19:713
00:22:748 - snap to 00:22:760
00:27:510 - snap to 00:27:522
00:45:606 - snap to 00:45:618
01:11:510 - snap to 01:11:522
Testplay + my thoughts: I kinda like it, although if the begin feels more like a spamming to me. The kiai looks well done, and I like the flow you've created. I also don't understand the NC'ing 00:00:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - in this part here.
00:02:147 (6) - You didn't set a NC here, but 00:05:382 (1) - here you did, well, if you have reasons, why not, but I suggest making it more consistent.
My suggestions:
00:23:522 (1,2,3) - Is this unconsistent spacing on purpose? If not, fix it please~ I think it would look better.
00:26:951 (5) - I would like if you give this one a bit more space, what I mean is to move it down a bit more. 400 / 352 would be nice, since it's not offscreen.
00:30:951 (2,3,4) - This is one of the oddest parts in your map, I really don't understand this weird placing. Tbh, 00:30:379 (1,4) - this flow is weird as well. Let me give you suggestion: http://puu.sh/40aTq.jpg Something like this would be quite nice, because 00:29:427 (2,1) - would have a great flow!
01:04:474 (2) - Stack the slider end with 01:03:712 (11) - one? Would look pretty neat.
I like that diff, it has some really nice empahsizing parts. If you would rework the parts i've written above i'd be very glad to play that diff again :3 (a little point maybe: make the DS with the triplets proper, i pointed one out above for you)
[Insane]
Testplay: CS 4, cool and unsual. Play nicely most of the time! Maybe sometimes you have to improve some sliders! The spinners are very hard, i'd consider making them longer.
Snapping 00:04:242 (12) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:04:242 (12) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:04:463 (13) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:110 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:10:639 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:617 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:176 - Fix ALL snappings until here. It's wrong (sometimes). For example this one: 00:08:213 (3) -
My suggestions:
00:15:903 (9) - I don't like that long combos :c think about a NC please.
00:20:094 (2,3) - I really like that rhythm, you should it use more often, because I don't like 00:20:856 (4,5,6) - this one at all. It would give everything some more consistency as well.
00:24:284 (5) - NC because of slider art. (dat reason, ik)
00:29:427 (2) - A reverse slider doesn't sound good, if you listen closely to the vocals you'll figure out why i'm pointing it out. A reverse sounds very.. annoying.
00:35:332 - I would delete this one and add 00:35:237 - one here instead, .. consider it
00:37:998 (8) - NC because of emphaiszing the voice ab it more.
00:51:713 (1) - Yiou used 0.79 for the stream, this one is actually snapped to 0.90, fix that please.
00:53:237 (5) - NC, 15 IS WAY TOO LONG!
01:03:808 (12,1) - I liked the stream, but why is it suddenly going to the left? Try to fix that with a curveslider, or some other slider thing.
01:04:665 (3) - A blanket would fit pretty nice here, woudln't it?
01:18:379 (13) - Can you hear this oooh-OOOH? the OOOH starts at 13 here, so add a NC (too long as well)
01:25:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dat star, xD (well, I don't really like it, make it look nicer or make another pattern)
So, that's my mod o.o I'm sorry for my crappy reasons to my suggestions, but if I give a suggestion 'add a circle here' I say that because it's actually MY suggestion, so the reason would be because I like it, but w/e.. If you need further help, ask me <3
gl gl gl! ~
[General]
Happy's diff has got audio lead-in 2000, you have to decide whether you want to make it constant, or delete it from happy's diff.
I like happy's way of using kiai, I'd consider it to make it consistent, to make it flashy
I checked aiBAT to you, it says you've got some things unsnapped. You better check it, I hope aiBAT didnd't have a bad day.
[Flask's Easy]
00:13:617 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:45:606 - snap to 00:45:618
00:01:264 (2) - Don't kill me, but this blanket doesn't look perfect, move the slider a tiny bit up.
00:08:323 (1) - I can't hear hitsounds at all at the begin, you should consider adding something at the slider start here. I suggest a finish, to make the NC a bit more powerful.
00:13:617 (1) - Uhm, dunno what you've done here, but snap it properly here, please.
00:15:141 (3,4,1) - Check the DS between them please, 0.87 0.92 and stuff like that is a rather big difference. I could see that very well.
00:16:665 (1,2,3) - If you look properly, you can see the DS fail here as well. Try to fix that, to make it symmetric I think you can slightly ignore DS. But 00:17:808 (2) - should definetly be in the middle.
00:36:475 (1) - Add a clap on the third slidertick for consistency
00:42:570 (1) - And a finish, for consistency's sake as well
00:50:951 (3) - You can leave it like this, but it feels wrong, and also sounds wrong to my ears. Try following the vocals more closely, because you've done that before as well - Using a red tick isn't a shame here, I suppose.
00:57:237 (2) - Blanket nazi again :3
00:57:808 (1) - And again, blanket. Just aesthetics, don't be lazy to fix them please.
01:03:141 (3) - The same problem as above here!
01:19:141 (1,1) - Why do you ignore blankets give them some love, because I suppose they should be better.
Rest seems fine
[Normal]
00:13:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is really hard, to put it at the begin. The newbie player gets stressed very easily, you should avoid the stacking here.
00:16:665 (1,2,3,4) - Although i think its fine here, because some time has already passed, and he got used to the 'faster' part.
00:22:760 (4,5,6,7) - Avoid these stackings? I don't know why they have a reason to be stacked tbh. Spacing out would make it also more exciting to play!
00:49:618 (5) - Try this placing once, I think it gives some variety and a rather nice direction change.
http://puu.sh/40alb.jpg
00:49:618 (5) - Also, NC, because the combo is really long for a normal o.o
00:51:713 (1) - Finish to emphasize his strong voice there.
The normal itselfs looks well done, but i'm not sure about the stackings, because they are really hard. I hope it's okay to reduce some of them.
Also: Go over your map again and try to set more NC's, when you have little gaps, because the Combos till 8 seem really long o.o
[wa's Hard]
Snapping 00:00:823 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:00:823 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:07:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:02:882 (3) - Adding a circle here would give everything a nice 1/3 flow, consider it
00:06:412 - Same here, same reason as above!
00:10:088 (1) - Move to 368 / 100 would make the blanket perfect and makes it more polsihed.
00:11:853 (1,2) - This destroys the 1/3 flow completely, 2 is just too harsh. Try to make a nice flowy slider here.
00:15:141 (1) - Ctrl + G here please. The reason is just that this is a hard diff, and the jump is really hard for a hard actually.
00:20:094 (2,3) - I love that rhythm o.o 00:21:237 (1,2) - why not using it here as well?
00:27:141 (4,1,2,3) - Try to stack this part properly, you can see what I mean if you're clicking on it - the stackings look unproperly made.
00:43:522 (5) - Consider adding some space between them, I like the way you've done it before.
00:45:618 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:14:570 (6) - I can definetly feel a NC here, consistency
01:25:808 (4) - Try again please, this is wrong. Make it 1 tick longer
I really like the kiai, it's well done!
[happy30's happyness]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:177 - snap to 00:18:189
00:19:701 - snap to 00:19:713
00:22:748 - snap to 00:22:760
00:27:510 - snap to 00:27:522
00:45:606 - snap to 00:45:618
01:11:510 - snap to 01:11:522
Testplay + my thoughts: I kinda like it, although if the begin feels more like a spamming to me. The kiai looks well done, and I like the flow you've created. I also don't understand the NC'ing 00:00:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - in this part here.
00:02:147 (6) - You didn't set a NC here, but 00:05:382 (1) - here you did, well, if you have reasons, why not, but I suggest making it more consistent.
My suggestions:
00:23:522 (1,2,3) - Is this unconsistent spacing on purpose? If not, fix it please~ I think it would look better.
00:26:951 (5) - I would like if you give this one a bit more space, what I mean is to move it down a bit more. 400 / 352 would be nice, since it's not offscreen.
00:30:951 (2,3,4) - This is one of the oddest parts in your map, I really don't understand this weird placing. Tbh, 00:30:379 (1,4) - this flow is weird as well. Let me give you suggestion: http://puu.sh/40aTq.jpg Something like this would be quite nice, because 00:29:427 (2,1) - would have a great flow!
01:04:474 (2) - Stack the slider end with 01:03:712 (11) - one? Would look pretty neat.
I like that diff, it has some really nice empahsizing parts. If you would rework the parts i've written above i'd be very glad to play that diff again :3 (a little point maybe: make the DS with the triplets proper, i pointed one out above for you)
[Insane]
Testplay: CS 4, cool and unsual. Play nicely most of the time! Maybe sometimes you have to improve some sliders! The spinners are very hard, i'd consider making them longer.
Snapping 00:04:242 (12) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:04:242 (12) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:04:463 (13) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:110 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:10:639 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:617 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:176 - Fix ALL snappings until here. It's wrong (sometimes). For example this one: 00:08:213 (3) -
My suggestions:
00:15:903 (9) - I don't like that long combos :c think about a NC please.
00:20:094 (2,3) - I really like that rhythm, you should it use more often, because I don't like 00:20:856 (4,5,6) - this one at all. It would give everything some more consistency as well.
00:24:284 (5) - NC because of slider art. (dat reason, ik)
00:29:427 (2) - A reverse slider doesn't sound good, if you listen closely to the vocals you'll figure out why i'm pointing it out. A reverse sounds very.. annoying.
00:35:332 - I would delete this one and add 00:35:237 - one here instead, .. consider it
00:37:998 (8) - NC because of emphaiszing the voice ab it more.
00:51:713 (1) - Yiou used 0.79 for the stream, this one is actually snapped to 0.90, fix that please.
00:53:237 (5) - NC, 15 IS WAY TOO LONG!
01:03:808 (12,1) - I liked the stream, but why is it suddenly going to the left? Try to fix that with a curveslider, or some other slider thing.
01:04:665 (3) - A blanket would fit pretty nice here, woudln't it?
01:18:379 (13) - Can you hear this oooh-OOOH? the OOOH starts at 13 here, so add a NC (too long as well)
01:25:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dat star, xD (well, I don't really like it, make it look nicer or make another pattern)
So, that's my mod o.o I'm sorry for my crappy reasons to my suggestions, but if I give a suggestion 'add a circle here' I say that because it's actually MY suggestion, so the reason would be because I like it, but w/e.. If you need further help, ask me <3
gl gl gl! ~