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Shano feat. 40mP - Sanpo Michi

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Momochikun
Hai ~
sry for late :3
As requested.. :roll:




I just mod until 2 min length per diff, sorry ;_;

[General]
I feel the offset is a bit too late, try to + 10 or 20 ms.. or just ask some timing pro to check this.
[sheela901 Normal]
00:22:037 (1) - The finish here seems too loud, try to reducing the volume or remove it would be better
00:22:537 (2) - Reverse slider on blue tick seems weird for beginner, i recommend not to use it except for special conditions
00:31:287 (2) - Try to rotate this slider around 40 degrees and make it symmetrical with (1), i think it'll make a beautiful flow
00:33:037 (2) - Same as above
00:35:287 (4) - Maybe separate this slider to 3 circle ? it's better to follow the vocal, but if you think it's too hard. Just let it be
00:39:287 (2) - Slider seems break consistency, better use same slider like before so you can use clap in the red tick as your rhytm
00:40:287 - Add NC'ed note here ? the vocal start here though]
00:42:037 (2) - Swap the clap to the start of slider (3)
00:51:287 (4,1) - Blanket it better, it looks ugly IMO
00:57:287 (3,3) - This is normal diff, better don't use manual stack. Just use auto stack
01:00:037 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider for new vocal
01:02:787 (2,2) - Nazi.. the Blue slider 2 still visible when the red slider appeared, for beginner it will make them confused
01:17:537 (1) - Remove spinner and just use slider, short length spinner it just too hard and make the beginners tired
01:22:787 (3) - Wrong finish.. just delete it
01:35:787 (4) - Make it straight withe the slider before ? it'll make a better flow
01:38:787 (4) - 2 grid up to be linear with slider (3)

You use 1,50 spacing for this normal.. it's too big for a mapset without easy, at least try to reduce it to 1,3 / 1,2 or less. The rhythm also is unpredictable in this diff, for normal. I recommend using same rhytm and please make it measured so it's enjoyable for beginner. The hitsound play also looks random.At least trying to use 1-8 or 16 rhytm clap in white tick. And for the slider, ometime it follow the vocal, but sometime it follow the music, To be more easier slider better end in the same colour tick as they started, except for some special conditions like vocal and music that significant or special sound. Try to make it at least predictable by the player.
[Hard]
00:20:037 (1) - Finish at start of this slider, it's pretty important to use this in the first note of map
00:22:662 (6) - Delete this ? the music doesn't ask you for a triplet
00:22:787 (7) - Clap in the slider tail ? for the rhytm. You probably forget it
00:25:537 (4) - Clap.. same reason as before
00:36:037 (9,1) - The long white tick is at (9), so Reverse the NC. Because the new vocal and the new phase also started from (9)
00:55:287 (6,1) - Bad flow IMO.. try to make the reverse slider vertical just like you used before
01:00:037 (1) - Finish on this note for new vocal
01:06:287 - Hard diff, use your creativity to combination triplet and kick slider to emphasizing the drum voice please :p
01:08:037 (1) - Finish on this note for downbeat and ofc for the start of the chorus
01:19:787 - Use 1/1 slider from here for the vocal, and just add a note here 01:19:537

The NC rhytm in the diff seems random IMO, try to use NC every 2 long white tick. I Seen many missing claps in this diff, pointing them all will be difficult for me. just re-check your 1/8 clap rhytm. and i sense some repetition for this diff, it will just make the modder and the player bored for that, try to use same rhytm but difference pattern and slider so it'll make it a little bit funnier than before.

You'll really need more practicing before ready to go~ :)
Shizuka-Nee
sry kinda late . but here the mod you asked for

[general]
Did this come from an anime? if so ,please put the title in your source

[normal]
01:10:037 (3) - remove the whistle. ughh e.e
01:17:537 (1) - very bad place to put a spinner. replace with hit objects instead
02:02:787 (2) - move this here 02:03:037 -
02:15:287 (2) - this slider could look alot better
the kiai time shoudl start here 02:48:037 - instead of here 02:47:287 -
03:30:037 (2) - remove this whistle. sounds very random
04:05:787 (3) - ^
04:11:287 (3) - This slider should end here 04:12:037 -

[Hard]
00:33:787 (5) - NC
01:01:787 (5) - ^
01:12:037 (7) - ^
01:36:787 (5) - ^
02:04:287 (7) - ^
02:14:037 (6) - ^
02:20:037 (7) - ^
02:25:787 (5) - ^
02:36:037 (6) - ^
02:42:537 (7) - ^
02:52:037 (10) - ^
02:54:037 (1) - delete NC
02:55:537 (3) - NC
03:04:537 (11) - ^
03:16:037 (9) - ^
03:24:787 (9) - ^
03:27:037 (1) - Delete NC
03:27:787 (2) - NC
03:59:537 (5) - ^
04:04:787 (5) - ^

Good Luck ^v^
sheela
Thanks for your mod~
osu file format v12

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264,84,152787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,156,153037,6,0,B|264:179|264:211|264:211|264:239|304:259,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,200,153787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,260,154037,2,0,P|424:220|404:160,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,155537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,344,156037,2,0,P|48:332|32:264,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,248,156787,2,0,P|116:200|120:132,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,157787,2,0,P|304:28|348:60,3,120
340,124,159537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,172,159787,2,0,L|236:232,1,60
284,280,160287,2,8,P|320:276|352:300,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,161037,2,0,P|156:288|144:180,1,180
264,12,162537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,64,162787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,163287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,163787,2,0,P|415:320|296:295,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,300,165037,6,0,P|168:328|56:284,1,180
148,176,166287,2,8,P|228:144|280:156,1,120
324,236,167287,2,0,L|308:332,1,90.0000034332277
380,312,168037,6,0,P|424:284|440:256,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,240,168787,2,8,P|320:220|276:160,1,120
340,132,169537,2,0,L|396:72,1,60
312,72,170037,2,0,P|268:20|224:40,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,171537,2,0,L|240:284,1,60
192,312,172037,6,8,P|224:364|288:344,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,288,172787,2,0,P|220:236|156:256,1,120
76,132,173787,2,0,P|92:72|196:56,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,132,175537,6,0,P|180:176|180:260,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,304,176287,2,8,P|200:320|252:264,1,120
296,220,177037,2,0,L|332:156,1,60
236,52,177787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,236,178537,6,0,P|184:264|300:232,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,179787,2,0,P|392:76|460:196,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,252,181037,6,0,P|404:336|332:296,1,180
316,244,182037,1,4,0:0:0:0:
188,308,182537,1,4,0:0:0:0:
84,212,183037,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,76,183537,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184037,12,0,186037,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198037,12,0,200037,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,201037,2,0,P|300:112|244:80,1,90.0000034332277,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,201787,2,0,L|176:156,1,45.0000017166138
96,264,202537,2,0,P|104:316|188:324,1,135.000005149841,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,204037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,56,204787,2,0,P|364:24|280:32,1,135.000005149841
192,128,206037,2,0,P|164:180|160:208,1,67.5000025749207
188,288,206787,2,0,P|212:308|268:288,1,90.0000034332277
384,228,207787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,208037,2,0,P|356:140|288:140,1,90.0000034332277,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,104,208787,2,0,P|188:116|184:164,1,90.0000034332277
224,272,209787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,272,210037,2,0,P|288:312|240:340,1,90.0000034332277,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,332,210787,2,0,P|129:327|101:307,1,90.0000034332277
104,172,211787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,212037,2,4,L|212:108,1,45.0000017166138
256,156,212537,2,2,L|296:128,1,45.0000017166138
348,168,213037,2,4,L|388:136,1,45.0000017166138
444,108,213537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213787,12,0,215787,0:0:0:0:
216,232,216037,6,0,P|200:204|192:172,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,156,216787,2,0,P|256:132|260:104,1,60
240,68,217537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,68,218037,2,0,P|120:48|76:72,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,200,219537,6,0,L|108:232,1,30,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,220037,2,0,P|184:260|208:248,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,220787,2,0,P|225:200|265:204,1,60
320,276,221787,2,0,P|388:348|412:308,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,268,223537,6,0,L|428:236,1,30
424,196,224037,2,8,L|400:164,1,30
384,132,224537,2,0,P|368:92|384:76,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,225287,2,0,P|320:32|276:64,1,90
252,148,226537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,160,226787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,227287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,227787,12,0,228787,0:0:0:0:
352,116,229037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,229287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,236,229787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,308,230287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,248,230787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,288,231287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,96,232037,6,0,P|124:80|176:32,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,108,232787,2,0,P|156:156|176:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,244,233537,2,0,P|280:240|344:192,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,92,234537,2,0,L|484:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,44,235537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,72,235787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,236037,2,0,P|116:140|168:184,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,236787,2,0,P|280:200|284:268,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,237787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,238287,2,0,L|44:156,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,56,239537,6,0,L|296:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,240037,2,0,P|404:12|444:80,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,128,240787,2,0,L|392:208,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,241287,2,0,P|400:288|312:252,1,180
208,152,242537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
140,132,242787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,276,243287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,243787,2,0,P|324:248|252:208,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,244787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,180,245037,2,0,L|188:136,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,245787,2,0,P|288:28|228:4,1,120
88,40,246787,2,4,P|48:104|52:152,1,120
256,192,247787,12,0,248787,0:0:0:0:
212,236,249037,6,0,P|256:248|292:236,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,249787,2,0,P|120:176|140:84,2,120,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,251287,2,0,P|312:48|352:124,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,105,266037,6,0,B|172:56|124:40|72:56|0:108|0:144|0:176|256:372|256:372|516:180|516:148|516:112|472:40|416:32|360:40|308:104,1,1140,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,272037,12,0,276037,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sorarei
nope , its original music work
Shizuka-Nee
lol ok. just making sure ;3
Graphite Edge
Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My M4M as requested :3

Red - Should be fixed
Blue - highly suggested
None - Suggest and general comments

[sheela901's Normal]
01:22:037 - ~ 01:23:787 - Spinner maybe?
01:35:787 (4) - Move to 440;200

[hard]
A bit too crowd at the center of the playfield

To be honest didnt find any issue to mod here, well im still noob modder, but this diff looks fine to me, i can fc it and follow the rhytm with the

patterns with no problem. Well just a few suggestions:
00:24:287 (1,2,3) - Try a stream like pattern instead of triplet like maybe?
00:26:287 - ^
00:32:287 - ^
00:42:787 - ^
02:06:787 - ^
02:12:287 - ^


GL with the map! :3
10crystalmask01
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[General]
  1. 01:08:037 - 01:40:037 Kai time should be here too! >.<

[sheela901's Normal]
  1. OD -1?
  2. This for your clap hitsound pattern?
  3. hmm I also suggest increasing the DS to 1.4 instead, so that the overlaps don't look crowded.
    eg. 01:00:037 (1,2) -

00:22:537 (2) - remove clap on the reverse.
00:26:537 (1) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:27:287 (2) - Remove that clap on the tail.
00:43:287 (4) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:52:037 (1) - You should try adding drum-clap to both the head and tail to match the music drums :3 Just Adjust the settings to this when adding the finish hitsound:

00:54:037 (1) - ^
00:56:037 (1) - ^
00:58:037 (1) - ^
00:52:787 (2,3,4) - Change their default hit sound to Drum by adjusting their setting to this:
Sounds better imo.
00:54:787 (2,3,4) - ^
00:56:787 (2,3,4) - ^
01:08:037 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:11:537 - Add a note?
01:38:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
01:46:287 (2) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:58:037 (1) - Remove clap on the head.
02:16:037 (1) - Change claps to drum-clap. Look back at 00:52:037 (1) inf you unsure how to.
02:18:037 (1) - ^
02:20:037 (1) - ^
02:22:037 (1) - ^
02:16:787 (2,3,4) - Change default hitsound to drum (look back at 00:52:787 (2,3,4) )
02:18:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:20:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:24:037 (1) - Change clap on the head to a finish.
02:29:787 (5) - Add finish to the head.
02:43:787 (4,1) - These two could be similar in shape, you could form a symmetry here! :)
02:48:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:04:037 (1) - Should end at 03:05:537 with a finish ^^
03:39:537 (5) - Just use a simple note here instead, that mini slider doesn't look nice.
03:52:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:56:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
04:00:787 (3) - ^

Your mapping skills are improving a lot sheela901! ^^

[Hard]
00:22:037 (5) - NC (New combo)
00:26:037 (6) - ^
00:30:037 (5) - ^
00:32:537 (3) - A simple curved slider would look better here.
00:33:787 (5) - NC
00:37:787 (4) - ^
00:42:537 (5) - ^
00:46:037 (5) - ^
00:50:037 (6) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - And the head of 00:52:287 (2) - should have drum-claps on their heads instead, to match the drums in the music. Just change the setting to this:

00:54:037 (4,5) - ^
00:56:037 (1,2) - ^
00:58:037 (4,5) - ^
01:01:787 (5) - NC
01:06:537 - Add a note for that finish.
01:12:037 (7) - NC
01:18:037 (5) - ^
01:36:787 (5) - ^
01:38:506 - ^
01:42:037 (1) - Add finish.
02:02:537 (5) - NC
02:04:287 - ^
02:06:037 - ^
02:10:037 (5) - ^
02:14:037 (6) - ^
02:16:037 (1,2) - Change the claps to drum-claps.
02:18:037 (4,5) - ^
02:20:037 (7) - ^ And NC
02:22:037 (10,11) - ^
02:24:037 (1) - Add finish.
02:25:787 (5) - NC
02:36:037 (6) - ^
02:42:537 (7) - ^
02:51:537 (8) - ^
02:58:037 (7) - ^
03:01:787 (5) - ^
03:04:537 (11) - ^
03:16:037 (9) - ^
03:24:037 (8) - ^
03:59:537 (5) - ^
04:04:787 (5) - ^
04:06:787 (10) - ^
04:10:287 (5) - ^

Looks okay, just the inconsistent combos that's bugging me! >.<

Hope this helps~!
Topic Starter
Sorarei

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[General]
  1. 01:08:037 - 01:40:037 Kai time should be here too! >.<

[sheela901's Normal]
  1. OD -1?
  2. This for your clap hitsound pattern?
  3. hmm I also suggest increasing the DS to 1.4 instead, so that the overlaps don't look crowded.
    eg. 01:00:037 (1,2) -

00:22:537 (2) - remove clap on the reverse.
00:26:537 (1) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:27:287 (2) - Remove that clap on the tail.
00:43:287 (4) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:52:037 (1) - You should try adding drum-clap to both the head and tail to match the music drums :3 Just Adjust the settings to this when adding the finish hitsound:

00:54:037 (1) - ^
00:56:037 (1) - ^
00:58:037 (1) - ^
00:52:787 (2,3,4) - Change their default hit sound to Drum by adjusting their setting to this:
Sounds better imo.
00:54:787 (2,3,4) - ^
00:56:787 (2,3,4) - ^
01:08:037 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:11:537 - Add a note?
01:38:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
01:46:287 (2) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:58:037 (1) - Remove clap on the head.
02:16:037 (1) - Change claps to drum-clap. Look back at 00:52:037 (1) inf you unsure how to.
02:18:037 (1) - ^
02:20:037 (1) - ^
02:22:037 (1) - ^
02:16:787 (2,3,4) - Change default hitsound to drum (look back at 00:52:787 (2,3,4) )
02:18:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:20:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:24:037 (1) - Change clap on the head to a finish.
02:29:787 (5) - Add finish to the head.
02:43:787 (4,1) - These two could be similar in shape, you could form a symmetry here! :)
02:48:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:04:037 (1) - Should end at 03:05:537 with a finish ^^
03:39:537 (5) - Just use a simple note here instead, that mini slider doesn't look nice.
03:52:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:56:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
04:00:787 (3) - ^

Your mapping skills are improving a lot sheela901! ^^

[Hard]
00:22:037 (5) - NC (New combo)
00:26:037 (6) - ^
00:30:037 (5) - ^
00:32:537 (3) - A simple curved slider would look better here.
00:33:787 (5) - NC
00:37:787 (4) - ^
00:42:537 (5) - ^
00:46:037 (5) - ^
00:50:037 (6) - ^
00:52:037 (1) - And the head of 00:52:287 (2) - should have drum-claps on their heads instead, to match the drums in the music. Just change the setting to this:

00:54:037 (4,5) - ^
00:56:037 (1,2) - ^
00:58:037 (4,5) - ^
01:01:787 (5) - NC
01:06:537 - Add a note for that finish.
01:12:037 (7) - NC
01:18:037 (5) - ^
01:36:787 (5) - ^
01:38:506 - ^
01:42:037 (1) - Add finish.
02:02:537 (5) - NC
02:04:287 - ^
02:06:037 - ^
02:10:037 (5) - ^
02:14:037 (6) - ^
02:16:037 (1,2) - Change the claps to drum-claps.
02:18:037 (4,5) - ^
02:20:037 (7) - ^ And NC
02:22:037 (10,11) - ^
02:24:037 (1) - Add finish.
02:25:787 (5) - NC
02:36:037 (6) - ^
02:42:537 (7) - ^
02:51:537 (8) - ^
02:58:037 (7) - ^
03:01:787 (5) - ^
03:04:537 (11) - ^
03:16:037 (9) - ^
03:24:037 (8) - ^
03:59:537 (5) - ^
04:04:787 (5) - ^
04:06:787 (10) - ^
04:10:287 (5) - ^

Looks okay, just the inconsistent combos that's bugging me! >.<

Hope this helps~!
I'm not changing all about NC but fixed other that , thanks !
sheela

Graphite Edge wrote:

Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My M4M as requested :3

Red - Should be fixed
Blue - highly suggested
None - Suggest and general comments

[sheela901's Normal]
01:22:037 - ~ 01:23:787 - Spinner maybe?
01:35:787 (4) - Move to 440;200
Fixed~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[notice][General]
  1. 01:08:037 - 01:40:037 Kai time should be here too! >.<

[sheela901's Normal]
  1. OD -1?
  2. This for your clap hitsound pattern?
  3. hmm I also suggest increasing the DS to 1.4 instead, so that the overlaps don't look crowded.
    eg. 01:00:037 (1,2) -

00:22:537 (2) - remove clap on the reverse.
00:26:537 (1) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:27:287 (2) - Remove that clap on the tail.
00:43:287 (4) - Remove clap on the tail.
00:52:037 (1) - You should try adding drum-clap to both the head and tail to match the music drums :3 Just Adjust the settings to this when adding the finish hitsound:

00:54:037 (1) - ^
00:56:037 (1) - ^
00:58:037 (1) - ^
00:52:787 (2,3,4) - Change their default hit sound to Drum by adjusting their setting to this:
Sounds better imo.
00:54:787 (2,3,4) - ^
00:56:787 (2,3,4) - ^
01:08:037 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:11:537 - Add a note?
01:38:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
01:46:287 (2) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:58:037 (1) - Remove clap on the head.
02:16:037 (1) - Change claps to drum-clap. Look back at 00:52:037 (1) inf you unsure how to.
02:18:037 (1) - ^
02:20:037 (1) - ^
02:22:037 (1) - ^
02:16:787 (2,3,4) - Change default hitsound to drum (look back at 00:52:787 (2,3,4) )
02:18:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:20:787 (2,3,4) - ^
02:24:037 (1) - Change clap on the head to a finish.
02:29:787 (5) - Add finish to the head.
02:43:787 (4,1) - These two could be similar in shape, you could form a symmetry here! :)
02:48:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:04:037 (1) - Should end at 03:05:537 with a finish ^^
03:39:537 (5) - Just use a simple note here instead, that mini slider doesn't look nice.
03:52:037 (1) - Add finish to the head.
03:56:787 (4) - Remove clap on the head.
04:00:787 (3) - ^
Fixed~ Thanks~
[Seraphin]
I've quit modding for a bit, sorry.
I modded a bit of the normal before I quit.

00:20:537 (2) - Do something more like http://puu.sh/4xzp1.jpg, I think it's kinda awkward to play as it is

I will finish the mod when I return. orz
No kudosu since this isn't a complete mod
ZLOdeuka-
Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

Offset 2048 (do not forget Rasnap all notes and +11 green section)
Your map need 3 difficulty. ie need a third. diff which is less than 3 star - [Easy]
● take break and Kiai time the same in all the diff:
Kiai time arrange it so:
01:08:037 - start kiai - 01:22:037 finish
01:24:037 - start kiai - 01:40:037 finish
02:32:037 - start kiai - 02:46:037 finish
02:48:037 - start kiai - 03:04:037 finish
03:36:037 - start kiai - 03:36:162 finish
03:52:037 - start kiai - 04:12:037 finish
Break time
01:44:037 to 01:52:037 (or 02:00:037)
03:36:037 to 03:48:037
do so everywhere.the quality of your map at once will be better

● color combo is different, for Hard they are not installed.
I advise you to make colors as(all diff):
[Colours]
Combo1 : 185,255,255
Combo2 : 202,255,202
Combo3 : 255,255,191

● untick Letterbox during breaks http://puu.sh/4z02v.jpg

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[sheela901's Normal]

● 00:20:537 (2) - finish slider here 00:21:537 (beat of the music sounds here)
● 00:22:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:22:537 (2) - remove return. and finish slider here 00:23:537
● 00:24:287 (1) - delete slider. and 00:24:037 start here slider - finish here 00:24:537 (new combo)
● 00:25:287 (2) - move here 00:25:037
● 00:26:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:26:537 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:27:287 (2) - move here 00:27:537
● 00:28:287 (1) - move here 00:28:537
● 00:29:287 (2) - move here 00:29:037
● 00:28:787 (x) - add circle
● 00:30:287 (1) - delete and 00:30:037 start slider - finish here 00:31:037 (new combo)
● 00:31:287 (3) - move here 00:31:537 and 00:31:287 add circle
● 00:32:787 (x) - add circle
● 00:32:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:36:287 (2) - delete and 00:36:287 add circle . 00:36:537 start slider and finish here 00:37:037
● 00:38:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:38:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:38:287 (1) - delete and 00:38:537 start slider, finish here 00:39:037
● 00:39:287 (7) - move here 00:39:537
● 00:43:287 (4) - move here 00:43:537 and here 00:43:037 add circle
● 00:45:287 (2) - move here 00:45:037
● 00:46:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:48:037 (x) - ^
● 01:06:537 (1) - it is difficult for Normal. replace the slider
● 01:10:037 (3) - finish here 01:11:287 and 01:11:787 add circle
● 01:17:537 (3) - move here 01:17:787 finish here 01:18:537 and 01:17:537 add circle
● 01:20:787 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:35:787 (4) - finish here 01:36:537
● 01:44:287 (1) - move here 01:44:037
● 01:45:537 (x) - add circle
● 01:46:287 (3) - move here 01:46:037
● 01:48:537 (1,2) - they do not look very nice. please do so they do not touch each other
● 01:50:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:50:287 (1) - move here 01:50:037
● 01:53:287 (2) - move here 01:53:037 and 01:54:037 add circle
● 01:54:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:55:287 (2) - move here 01:55:037 and 01:56:037 add circle
● 02:00:787 (2) - move here 02:01:037 and 02:00:787 add circle
● 02:02:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 02:03:787 (1) - ^
● 02:04:537 (2) - new combo
● 02:33:037 (1,2,3) - make two identical and symmetrical slider.because it looks bad
● 02:41:037 (4) - finish here 02:42:037
● 03:04:037 (1) - finish spinner here 03:05:537
● 03:47:787 (1) - replace spinner to slider
● 04:31:537 (x) - add circle

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Hard]

● 00:24:037 (8,1,9) - - here no new combo? 00:28:037 (1) - and here is a new combo? the same rhythm. Try to choose one position. or remove the new combo on a large white tick or place.
● 00:25:537 (4) - add Clap
● 00:42:537 (5) - ^
● 01:12:037 (7) - new combo
● 01:14:037 (9) - swap them. 01:14:287 (10) - move here 01:14:037. and circle 01:14:037 move here 01:15:287
● 03:58:037 (3,4) - ^
● 01:30:037 (3,4) - ^
● 01:18:037 (5) - add Clap
● 01:37:787 (8) - new combo
● 02:04:287 (7) - ^
● 02:20:037 (7) - ^
● 02:36:037 (6) - ^
● 02:52:037 (10) - ^
● 02:54:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 02:56:287 (4) - new combo
● 03:04:037 (10) - ^
● 03:16:037 (9) - ^

●Please carefully arrange the new combos. it affects gameplay. Try to put it if changing the rhythm or on large white ticks (but if it will allow music)
03:28:037 (3) - new combo. for example here, it should be mandatory. because the same spacings and the rhythm changed.feel?I will not write to you about the new combo. if you can contact me personally for this

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hard and Normal end one location.

Nice song~ Good luck!
Topic Starter
Sorarei

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

Offset 2060 (do not forget Rasnap all notes and +23 green section)
Your map need 3 difficulty. ie need a third. diff which is less than 3 star - [Easy]
● take break and Kiai time the same in all the diff:
Kiai time arrange it so:
01:08:037 - start kiai - 01:22:037 finish
01:24:037 - start kiai - 01:40:037 finish
02:32:037 - start kiai - 02:46:037 finish
02:48:037 - start kiai - 03:04:037 finish
03:36:037 - start kiai - 03:36:162 finish
03:52:037 - start kiai - 04:12:037 finish
Break time
01:44:037 to 01:52:037 (or 02:00:037)
03:36:037 to 03:48:037
do so everywhere.the quality of your map at once will be better

● color combo is different, for Hard they are not installed.
I advise you to make colors as(all diff):
[Colours]
Combo1 : 185,255,255
Combo2 : 202,255,202
Combo3 : 255,255,191

● untick Letterbox during breaks http://puu.sh/4z02v.jpg

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[sheela901's Normal]

● 00:20:537 (2) - finish slider here 00:21:537 (beat of the music sounds here)
● 00:22:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:22:537 (2) - remove return. and finish slider here 00:23:537
● 00:24:287 (1) - delete slider. and 00:24:037 start here slider - finish here 00:24:537 (new combo)
● 00:25:287 (2) - move here 00:25:037
● 00:26:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:26:537 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:27:287 (2) - move here 00:27:537
● 00:28:287 (1) - move here 00:28:537
● 00:29:287 (2) - move here 00:29:037
● 00:28:787 (x) - add circle
● 00:30:287 (1) - delete and 00:30:037 start slider - finish here 00:31:037 (new combo)
● 00:31:287 (3) - move here 00:31:537 and 00:31:287 add circle
● 00:32:787 (x) - add circle
● 00:32:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:36:287 (2) - delete and 00:36:287 add circle . 00:36:537 start slider and finish here 00:37:037
● 00:38:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:38:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 00:38:287 (1) - delete and 00:38:537 start slider, finish here 00:39:037
● 00:39:287 (7) - move here 00:39:537
● 00:43:287 (4) - move here 00:43:537 and here 00:43:037 add circle
● 00:45:287 (2) - move here 00:45:037
● 00:46:037 (x) - add circle
● 00:48:037 (x) - ^
● 01:06:537 (1) - it is difficult for Normal. replace the slider
● 01:10:037 (3) - finish here 01:11:287 and 01:11:787 add circle
● 01:17:537 (3) - move here 01:17:787 finish here 01:18:537 and 01:17:537 add circle
● 01:20:787 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:35:787 (4) - finish here 01:36:537
● 01:44:287 (1) - move here 01:44:037
● 01:45:537 (x) - add circle
● 01:46:287 (3) - move here 01:46:037
● 01:48:537 (1,2) - they do not look very nice. please do so they do not touch each other
● 01:50:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:50:287 (1) - move here 01:50:037
● 01:53:287 (2) - move here 01:53:037 and 01:54:037 add circle
● 01:54:287 (1) - remove new combo
● 01:55:287 (2) - move here 01:55:037 and 01:56:037 add circle
● 02:00:787 (2) - move here 02:01:037 and 02:00:787 add circle
● 02:02:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 02:03:787 (1) - ^
● 02:04:537 (2) - new combo
● 02:33:037 (1,2,3) - make two identical and symmetrical slider.because it looks bad
● 02:41:037 (4) - finish here 02:42:037
● 03:04:037 (1) - finish spinner here 03:05:537
● 03:47:787 (1) - replace spinner to slider
● 04:31:537 (x) - add circle

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Hard]

● 00:24:037 (8,1,9) - - here no new combo? 00:28:037 (1) - and here is a new combo? the same rhythm. Try to choose one position. or remove the new combo on a large white tick or place.
● 00:25:537 (4) - add Clap
● 00:42:537 (5) - ^
● 01:12:037 (7) - new combo
● 01:14:037 (9) - swap them. 01:14:287 (10) - move here 01:14:037. and circle 01:14:037 move here 01:15:287 you mean like this ? http://puu.sh/4z1sx
● 03:58:037 (3,4) - ^
● 01:30:037 (3,4) - ^
● 01:18:037 (5) - add Clap
● 01:37:787 (8) - new combo
● 02:04:287 (7) - ^
● 02:20:037 (7) - ^
● 02:36:037 (6) - ^
● 02:52:037 (10) - ^
● 02:54:037 (1) - remove new combo
● 02:56:287 (4) - new combo
● 03:04:037 (10) - ^
● 03:16:037 (9) - ^

●Please carefully arrange the new combos. it affects gameplay. Try to put it if changing the rhythm or on large white ticks (but if it will allow music)
03:28:037 (3) - new combo. for example here, it should be mandatory. because the same spacings and the rhythm changed.feel?I will not write to you about the new combo. if you can contact me personally for this

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hard and Normal end one location.

Nice song~ Good luck!
almost all fixed
if i do the kiai time it will be show to Aimod problem , and break time still thinking
sheela
Thanks for the mod~ All fixed I think.
ZLOdeuka-
sorry, Offset 2048 (do not forget Rasnap all notes and +11 green section)

you changed the background. change the color of new combo

[Colours]
Combo1 : 168,168,255
Combo2 : 255,155,155
Combo3 : 255,255,191
lupcha
Hi, mod from my queue! ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ You were a bit too late with your request, but since I like the song and there are only two Diffs to mod I decided to give it a look!

General

  1. Why aren't the two first Kiai times starting at 01:08:048 (1) and 02:32:048 (1) already?
  2. Everything else looks fine!

sheela901's Normal

  1. Your clap pattern seems a bit random to me. I think 13 clap would be a good pattern for your map. This means you add a clap at every first and third small white line. For example, in the beginning your claps would be here:
  2. 00:20:548 (2) – add a clap at head & tail
  3. 00:22:549 (4) - ^ head & tail
  4. 00:24:048 (1) - ^ tail
  5. 00:25:049 (2) - ^ tail
  6. 00:26:548 (4) - ^ head
  7. 00:27:548 (5) - ^ head
  8. 00:28:549 (1) - ^ head
  9. 00:29:548 (2) - ^ head
  10. 00:30:298 (1) - ^ repeat
  11. 00:31:048 (2) - ^ repeat
  12. 00:32:299 (1) - ^ tail
  13. 00:33:048 (2) - ^ tail
    Okay, enough with the claps, hopefully this is understandable!
  14. 00:22:049 (4) – I would move this a little to avoid the little overlap with (2).
  15. 00:24:049 (1) – flip the slider vertically for a better flow. And I think it would look better to make it less curvy (you could copy-paste (2)).
  16. 00:28:549 (1) – flip the slider horizontally and rotate it a little to make the flow better.
  17. 00:29:549 (2,1,2) – doesn't sound that good to me. Maybe try something like this?
  18. 00:34:049 (1) - 00:36:049 (1) – This part is kinda hard. Maybe change (5) and (6) into a slider to make it a tad easier.
  19. 00:37:299 (3) – this slider kinda sounds awkward at this place. I guess it's because you would expect a note before it. Try this instead?
  20. 00:42:299 (3) – I think this slider doesn't fit that good here. I would have another suggestion for this part. ~
  21. 00:47:299 (2) – sounds a bit awkward again. I would move it to 00:47:048 (2).
  22. 00:49:048 (2) - ^ move it to 00:49:048 (2).
  23. 01:00:799 (2) – sounds again a bit weird at the red ticks. I would lengthen it to the small white tick - you'd have to make another pattern then tho.
  24. 01:00:799 (2,1) – ugly overlap. S;
  25. 01:02:799 (2) – and same thing again, lengthen it to the white tick?
  26. 01:06:549 (4,1) – hm, I'm not a huge fan of jumps in the Easy/Normal Diff, but I guess this isn't soo bad …
  27. 01:17:799 (4) – flip it horizontally to avoid the small overlap with (3) and to improve the flow a bit more.
  28. 01:21:298 (5) – I would make this slider shorter and add a repeat or make it shorter and add a circle after that. Fits better imo.
  29. 01:24:049 (1) - Why is the Kiai time missing here ?-?
  30. 01:28:049 (1) – copy-paste (2) to make it look nicer.
  31. 01:28:799 (2) – and again, I would lengthen this to the white tick.
  32. 01:29:799 (3) – I would shorten this to the white tick.
  33. 01:37:799 (3,4) – I would lengthen them both to the white tick. ~
  34. 01:44:049 (1,2) – why the overlap? ;w;
  35. 01:49:298 (2) – I think a long slider would fit here more (because of the long-drawn-out “shiii”). Maybe make something like this?
  36. 01:53:049 (2) – Make it look less curvy.
  37. 01:56:299 (1,2) – feels a bit awkward, I would move them both to the white ticks.
  38. 02:00:799 (2,3) – I guess this should work as a blanket, but I don't think it looks that good with the DS. I would do it like in the picture tomake it look less cramped.
  39. 02:02:049 (4) – would flip this to create a better flow. If you decide to change the placement of your notes like above ^ you could just do it like this. You'd have to move the other notes after that, too.
  40. 02:03:799 (6,1) – and again, doesn't really look nice or like a blanket so I would move them like in the picture.
  41. 02:07:049 (3) – I would try to avoid short sliders with more than one repeat in a Normal Diff.
  42. 02:07:049 (3,1) – aaand, try to avoid this overlap too. ;s
  43. 02:09:049 (2,3) - doesn't look that good to me again, I wouldn't try to make a blanket here.
  44. 02:12:549 (2) - 02:15:298 (2) – you could improve the look here again. Copy-paste (2) so that all the sliders look the same and move them like in the picture maybe? ((3) and (2) are stacked).
  45. 02:24:799 (2) – I would lengthen this to the white tick.
  46. 02:26:799 (2) - ^
  47. 02:37:799 (4) – hmm, not so sure about this slider. I guess it's long enough and the SV isn't that fast … so the second repeat should be okay? Still, consider doing here maybe something else. ~
  48. 02:43:799 (4) – shorten this slider to the white tick.
  49. 02:44:798 (5) – and add a note here?
  50. 02:45:049 (6) – shorten this slider to the white tick and add a repeat? Sounds better imo. And maybe add a NC. ~
  51. 02:46:299 (7) – wouldn't start this slider here. Move it to the next white tick?
  52. 02:46:548 (7,8) – spacing ?-?
  53. 02:47:299 (8,2) – try to avoid this overlap. And the part after this looks a bit messy to me, too. 02:49:549 (3,4) – little overlap again. 02:51:549 (5,2) – overlap. 02:52:049 (1,2) – doesn't work that good as a blanket.
  54. 02:55:548 (4) - 02:57:049 (6) – would change this part like in the picture, sounds better imo.
  55. 02:58:549 (1) – shorten it to the white tick and add a repeat?
  56. 03:22:549 (4) – lengthen it to the white tick.
  57. 03:36:048 (1) – whistles would sound much better than claps here imo (they're way too loud for this part). I would remove them all and add whistles instead.
  58. 03:36:048 (1) – add whistle at the tail.
  59. 03:37:549 (3) - ^
  60. 03:38:049 (4) - lengthen it to the white tick.
  61. 03:39:549 (1) – add whistle.
  62. 03:40:048 (3) - ^ at the tail.
  63. 03:41:799 (5) – shorten it to the white tick. And I think the Finish is a bit too loud, make a green line and decrease the volume to ~ 45% and increase it after it again.
  64. 03:43:548 (1) – add whistle add the head.
  65. 03:44:548 (3) – ^ at the tail.
  66. 03:46:548 (1) - ^
  67. 04:09:049 (1) – the slider is a bit too soon after the spinner. I would at least leave four ticks between them. Actually, the spinner should end at the previous white tick, but this would be a little TOO short so you could maybe just change the spinner into a long slider.

Some of your patterns look a bit cramped and your flow could be improved too, but this should be fixed in no time with a little work!

For now I modded only the Normal Diff, the mod for the Hard Diff will come a bit later (tomorrow or Monday), hope that's okay! (`・ω・´)
Okay, and here come's the Hard Diff Mod! ~

Hard

  1. 00:37:798 (4) - would change this into a circle + slider so that the downbeat can be hit by the player (it's currently on the repeat).
  2. 00:39:548 (7) - ^ but into a slider + circle.
  3. 00:42:048 (4,6) – small overlap, maybe try to stack the end of (6) with (4).
  4. 00:44:298 (2) – I think this would flow better it you would rotate it a bit.
  5. 00:52:048 (1) - 00:55:298 (6), 00:56:048 (1) - 00:59:298 (6) – I think it's a bit boring to play the same thing two times in a row even if it fits. ;s It would already help if you would just position the second pattern a bit differently … but honestly, I would change it a bit (for example the two short sliders).
  6. 01:12:048 (1) – not a huge fan of this straight slider. Maybe change it like in the picture, a blanket with (2) would be possible then, too.
  7. 01:15:548 (1) - 01:16:298 (2) – Maybe consider changing this part like in the picture so that the downbeat can be hit by the player, plays better imo. And add a Finish at 01:16:048 maybe (the downbeat).
  8. 01:21:798 (4) – and again, maybe change this into a circle + slider so that the downbeat can be hit by the player (it's currently on the repeat).
  9. 01:37:798 (8) – ^ circle + slider.
  10. 01:44:298 - I think you could map this break. owo
  11. 02:16:048 (1) - 02:19:298 (6), 02:20:048 (1) - 02:23:298 (6) – same thing as before, I wouldn't leave this exactly the same. Make some little changes so that the player can see something new. You could change the shape of the long slider too, it would already be a little improvement!
  12. 02:37:548 (3) – slider + circle?
  13. 02:39:548 (1) - ^
  14. 02:40:548 (3) – move to x:224 y:48 so that's in the same line as (2)?
  15. 02:55:548 (5) – slider + circle?
  16. 03:01:798 (5) – cirlce + slider?
  17. 03:24:048 (8) – you have a quite long combo here, NC?
  18. 03:52:048 (1) - 04:11:548 (8) - well, I said this already: There's nothing really wrong with copying some (!) parts, but I would HIGHLY suggest to change at least a few things in this last kiai time to make it a bit more special. ~ Also, you could increase your volume here a bit, too.
  19. 03:59:298 (4,5) – I guess this is some kind of mistake? … well, ugly overlap!
  20. 03:59:548 (7) – slider + circle? I think a short slider with a repeat would fit here quite nicely too! You'd have to remove the circle at 04:00:298 (5) tho.
  21. 04:05:798 (8) – cirlce + slider? And put a NC here (or at the slider if you decide to do this) since the combo is quite long?
  22. 04:09:548 (4) – slider + circle?
  23. 04:08:048 (13,2) – small overlap.
  24. Also, I think it's kind of … strange? that the Hard ends earlier than the Normal (even if it's a GD). I think you could remove this mapped part in the Normal or map it in Hard, too, to make it more consistent.

Well, I don't have any big problems with this Diff, it's quite nicely mapped! I just think you could try to change some of your patterns so that there's a bit more variety. I mean you only have two Diffs in your set so it wouldn't hurt to make it a tad more interesting.
I hope I could help and good luck with your map! (*^▽^*)
sheela
Thanks for the mod.
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sanpo Michi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68037
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 102787
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sanpo Michi
TitleUnicode:さんぽみち
Artist:Shano feat. 40mP
ArtistUnicode:シャノ feat. 40mP
Creator:Reikosaka
Version:sheela901's Normal
Source:
Tags:sheela901 Couple wedding of chano and 40meterp
BeatmapID:285287
BeatmapSetID:106378

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:1

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Combo2 : 224,27,27
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260,44,235549,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,72,235799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,236049,2,0,P|116:140|168:184,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,236799,2,0,P|280:200|284:268,1,120
168,324,237799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,238299,2,0,L|44:156,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,56,239549,6,0,L|296:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,240049,2,0,P|404:12|444:80,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,128,240799,2,0,L|392:208,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,241299,2,0,P|400:288|312:252,1,180
208,152,242549,5,8,0:0:0:0:
140,132,242799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,276,243299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,243799,2,0,P|324:248|252:208,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,244799,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,180,245049,2,0,L|188:136,1,60
312,76,245799,2,0,P|288:28|228:4,1,120
88,40,246799,2,0,P|48:104|52:152,1,120
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344,92,251299,2,0,P|396:28|436:104,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,105,266049,6,0,B|172:56|124:40|72:56|0:108|0:144|0:176|256:372|256:372|516:180|516:148|516:112|472:40|416:32|360:40|308:104,1,1140
256,192,271549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,272049,12,6,276049,0:0:0:0:
Nines
Hi! You're third on my queue :)
Cute song :)

[sheela901's Normal]
I would sort out the 'Letterbox issue' with the beatmapper. Don't mind the 'requires 1 easy/normal' (unless it's TRULY necessary these days)

This was the first thing I wanted to mention, just because it's the first thing I felt like I needed to mention after playing through this difficulty.

at 01:52:923 the spacing is too far RELATIVE to the rest of the notes that have the same rhythm. Being that this was the only 'jump' like itself, it seemed random. I did in fact, sliderbreak this note as I was playing (being a relaxing song and all, I expected no 'jumps'). And, to account for my terrible mistake :P, I ended up rushing this circle 01:54:048.

For a Normal diff, the space between this spinner end 02:31:798 and the next slider 02:32:048 is too small. Consider moving the spinner end back to here 02:31:548

Same here with this spinner 03:35:798. It doesn't sound bad if you move it back here 03:35:548. The amount of time I had to recover from the spinner made me anticipate the short slider, meaning it makes it look faster than it actually is.

I felt like the spinner 04:07:798 was fine because the the slider was going the same direction as the spin.

I think the FINAL spinner should end here 04:37:548

[Hard]
I notice that your combos are quite long, Being a hard at this speed, it's okay for the combos to be short too.
Examples: Consider new combos here:
00:22:048
00:30:048
02:10:048
02:14:048
02:42:548
03:24:048 definitely here
etc. (I'll leave it up to you to judge more spots for new combos)

Face this 00:35:298 reverse slider so that it ends facing the next note. Because of the pace of the song, it gets a little confusing. (or I'm just a noob xD)

Same idea with slider 00:44:298 EXCEPT, rather than facing it directly to the next note, you could point it upwards like this


01:15:298-01:15:548 That's quite a jump there. Relative to the rest of the song, at least.

In this space, you could throw in another spinner. 02:30:985

and here 03:34:735 and here 03:51:048

Good luck with your map!
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