Hi, my opinions:
Easy:00:40:389 (2) - this should start sooner (and get repositioned)
something like this maybe?:
i remaped this part01:57:466 (1,2,3) - i don't see why these are not clones
-first i was like - "patterns should be more ugly, cos its evolution"... but its osu! ok i clone them .03:11:546 (3) - add something before this note (when the lyrics take off)
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Normal:00:21:334 (1,2) - adding another hit circle between 1 and 2 plays better
- circle added00:29:470 (4,5,6,1) - starting 5 half a beat sooner and ending a bit sooner feels better
try this and play it:
SPOILER6 and 1 are at the same location on the grid
hm - added circle between sliders00:53:450 (2,3) - starting the slider half a beat earlier (on the white line) plays better, or add an extra hit circle before it starts, also moving 3 the same way so its kinda like this:
SPOILERAlso try to put 2 and 4 on the same y-coordinate, same goes for the start and end of the slider
added circle before and after, remapped - mb it become harder...01:08:223 (3) - add a note after this slider on the red line
01:09:936 (4) - Same as above
01:11:862 (6) - Same as above
Your hit sounds here are following the distorted guitar, so it's quite "rude" to ignore prominent notes in the song and not map them
i desided not to add them because its normal - it may become to hard (i can change my mind if you ask me agan )02:56:773 (2,3) - Feels off-beat
-remapped03:25:007 (5) - try putting it on the next white line
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Hard:00:13:413 (1) - Put a note on the white line after this slider, the drum sound is so present here -
circle added00:14:911 (1) - same
circle added00:16:624 (4) - same
-remapped a litle00:21:334 (1,2) - this feels so off-beat, a slider here might be better -
offbeat? because i placed it on red tics, slider - ok00:29:898 (1) - double the length and start right after the previous combo, i find it illogical to have no hit objects when he emphatises part of the lyrics
- added repiter slider00:38:463 (6) - 00:38:891 (1) - 00:40:604 (5) - 00:44:457 (1) - 00:45:742 (2) - Same as the first 3 comments
-added some circles SPOILERYou might think i'm just filling every gap in your song, but no, most of it is fine (like here 00:56:875 (2) - or here 00:58:374 (5) - ) It's just when the music "asks" for it, you know what i mean
eah - i dont now why i not added those damn circles by myself)01:04:155 (5) -
done01:06:510 (4) - same as 1st comment
-done01:17:429 (4,5) - This looks kinda ugly, i'm sorry. Tip: If you're going to try to end two consecutive sliders at the same point but distance snapping won't allow it, either do something else, or make it a(n) (anti-)jump, It's hard diff., people should be able to handle it.
-remapped01:23:210 (3) - add a hit circle on the red line before this note
-added02:56:773 (3,4) - These two notes seem out of place, you lose the "flow/momentum" you got going here
-remaped03:17:540 (5) - same as first comment
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Insane:This feels more like a hard+ than a true insane
-but it long and have some drain )01:00:087 (4,1,1) - I think this shape is just a bad idea
-changed01:35:628 (1,2) - Thats one nasty anti-jump, but it should be fine, unless another mod makes the same comment
i hate it, but its fun i think..02:48:637 (2,3,4) - consider making this a stream
-no, i think 3 repiters is better than many circles out of blue03:17:755 (2,3) - add a hit circle between these two[/quote]
-added, replaced slider