sorry for the delay, here is the mod i promised a while back
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
your Normal and Hard have green lines delayed by 1ms, which is affecting volume and sv setups; please fix it so stuff like 00:34:046 (1) in hard are not broken[normalphobia]
00:30:046 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try a triangle formation here for better visuals:
00:57:379 (1) - curve this a bit left, the flow onto 00:58:046 (2) doesnt feel very natural
01:22:046 (3) - a little mazi but the blanket here can be a bit better
01:42:046 (5) - NC should be here instead to mark the start of new musical verse
01:48:713 (1) - make this like 01:44:713 (3) to capture the synth sound at 01:49:213, you can add a note at 01:50:046 instead
02:03:379 (1,2,3,4) - 1 and 3 are kind of in contact which is not very pleasant to look at, try a formation like this:
02:31:046 (3) - another nazi for blanket perfection
02:54:046 (3) - NC should be here, this is the down beat
03:22:713 (1) - there is a pretty dominant rhythm on the red line here, maybe make this into a repeat slider like 00:37:713 (2)
03:50:046 (1) - move the end up a little so it blankets 03:51:046 (2)
[hardphobia]
00:21:546 (1) - its best to take NC off here and put it at 00:22:379 (2) instead, i find that these repeat sliders with ambiguous repeats causes trouble with reading the next note, and NC helps with that somewhat. Also take off NC at 00:23:213 (1) if you do this
00:55:213 (4,1) - its pretty easy to read this as a 1/2 jump since the starts are fairly close to each other, maybe make 00:55:213 (4) into a repeat slider to cover the beat at 00:55:546 and have less ambiguity
01:30:213 (1) - NC is note really needed here, since the vocals are repetitive in rhythm; if anything put it at 01:30:713 (2) since there is a whisper vocal there
01:39:213 (6,1) - do a jump here, keeps it consistent with 01:39:879 (2,3) and so on
02:08:546 (1) - this uses normal finish, but 00:59:213 (1) uses soft finish, its best if you stick to one for consistency
02:19:213 (3,4) - how bout stack these two and center it on the y-axis? looks cooler to play imo
02:48:879 - add a note here or make 02:48:546 (4) a repeat slider, feels really empty here since there are both drums and vocals but nothing to cover it
03:20:546 (4,1) - same as 00:55:213 (4,1)
[insanephobia]
00:36:546 - should have a note here, the pause and the anti jump here is quite unnatural to play imo. stack it with 00:36:713 (1) seems a good idea
00:46:379 (2) - maybe a whistle on the start to capture the raised guitar pitch?
00:49:213 (3,5) - not stacked perfectly
01:04:046 (4,5) - i feel that if you arrange it like this it plays better:
01:09:879 (5) - use a soft sample on this, the normal hitnormal sounds kinda out of place here
01:39:379 (1,3) - a little nazi, the start of 3 is not perfectly stacked under 1's slider body
01:52:379 (2) - the background synth here is pretty loud and would be cool if you mapped it; you can arrange it to something like this:
02:19:213 (5) - similar to 01:09:879 (5)
02:50:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this stream can look a bit better, feels like its too much towards the right atm (you can try a straight line here going diagonally down)
03:00:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i'd suggest you use the create polygon tool to map this, can prevent things like 03:00:713 (1,7) from appearing
03:35:546 (2,3,4) - would be cool if you can center this on the y axis
Thats all i got, very nice mapset, have a star and good luck~
