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Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Yasora , edited 14 times in total.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi Yasora ^^

You got me online ! Let's mod !!!

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on general issues.

[normalphobia]
01:57:877 (1) - This slider is too near from prior one. I broke combo here first time. Make spacing more intuitive like http://puu.sh/3LvAx.jpg
02:06:044 (1) - Make the blanket nicer by moving the 2nd node to x:412 y:212 and the 3rd node to x:412 y:284.
02:35:377 (1) - Make it more parallel like http://puu.sh/3LvIz.jpg
02:44:710 (1) - Move 2nd dot by 1 grid up to a nicer blanket.

[hardphobia]
♥ Nice diff

[insanephobia]
:?: 00:31:877 (6) - why not stack it with (5) slider?
03:15:210 (5) - Why not make it like this → http://puu.sh/3Lx0V.jpg ← ?

[neophobia]
:?: 00:31:877 (6) - Why not stack it with (5) slider, like the 00:30:710 (3,4) ?
03:46:544 (2) - Ctrl-G? to better and (a bit more) challenging flow

That's it ^^

Well made maps, you're pro mapper !

GOOD LUCK ranking soon !!!

Att.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
almost fixed all~
thanks for mod and star /o/
MeatloafCereal
78 posts
Joined April 2012
MeatloafCereal
From my queue
Tiny mod

Normalphobia

00:15:377 (3) - The slider doesn't feel right, try:
00:39:710 - a note here? the silence here threw me off
01:55:377 (1) - move the end back 1/2 to the red tick
01:57:044 (2) - move up 1/2 to the red tick
02:46:044 (3,4) - remove the circle and move the slider back 1 beat (replacing the circle)

Hardphobia

00:13:877 (7,1) - remove circle (7) and make it so that the slider has a reverse arrow on the red tick,like:
00:22:377 (2,3,4) - go for Circle->Circle->Slider instead
00:32:544 (4) - clicking on the red tick feels clunky

Insanephobia looks fine to me and Neophobia is too hard for me
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some
thank you~
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
From #modreqs

[General]
  1. Your current difficulty naming convention is a little confusing. I think "normal" "hard" "insane" "neophobia" works better then having phobia at the end of each name, but your choice.
  2. You need a difficlty with exactly 3 or below stars for this set to be rankable. Lower the difficulty of your normalphobia or map an esayphobia.
  3. Disable letter-boxing during breaks on all difficulties. It crops your image badly.
  4. Remove "N" from tags. You need atleast 3 characters to weild useful results when searching tags.
  5. End your third Kiai time at 02:08:377 - to be consistant with 00:59:044 -
  6. On noephobia, personally I would map through this break from 03:26:044 - to 03:35:377 - considering this is the hardest difficutly you don't really need to keep this part unmapped.

[neophobia]
  1. OD+1 to keep consistancy with insanephobia.
  2. 00:11:710 - Add whistle.
  3. 00:12:377 (4,1) - Better to switch new combo between these notes.
  4. 00:47:877 (1) - Better to remove reverse on this slider to match the music. It has more effect then following the vocal at this point in the song.
  5. 00:51:210 (5,1) - Switch new combo between these two notes.
  6. From 00:54:544 - to 00:57:210 - you can make all red snapped notes soft sampletset to further match the music. Again from 01:05:044 - to 01:08:210 - & 02:03:710 - to 02:06:544 - & etc...
  7. 01:09:877 (5) - Delete this note for more impact for the pause.
  8. 02:08:544 - Meant to be soft hit finish.
  9. 02:19:460 (1) - Ends at an awkward point. Extend or shorten and add a hitsound or make silence to 05% volume on soft.
  10. 02:59:544 - Volume 65%. 03:00:710 - Volume 70%. 03:01:877 (8) - Clap?
  11. 03:51:377 (1) - Start this slider at 03:51:210 - and end at 03:51:877 - or 03:51:710 -

[insanephobia]
  1. 00:14:044 (1,2) - Switch new combo between these two slider or refer to your neophobia.
  2. 00:48:044 (1) - Should start at 00:47:877 - instead.
  3. 01:09:877 (5) - Same as the neophobia. Delete this note.
  4. 01:33:210 (7,8) - Such a big jump doesn't really suit music here. Maybe rethink it?
  5. 01:56:544 (1) - Remove new combo, 01:57:210 (3) - Add new combo.
  6. 02:08:544 - Meant to be soft hit finish.
  7. 02:19:460 (1) - Same as neophobia.
  8. 02:30:044 (1,2) - Stack slider ends perfectly.
  9. 03:51:377 (1) - Same as neophobia. Needs to start at 03:51:210 - as there is no sound at 03:51:377 - for the slider to start from.

[hardphobia]
  1. 01:09:877 (4) - New combo?
  2. 02:19:460 (1) - End at 02:21:044 - instead.
  3. 02:59:544 - Volume 65%. 03:00:710 - Volume 70%.

[normalphobia]
  1. AR-1
  2. 02:19:377 (1) - Too short for easiest difficulty in the set. I suggest to remove it.
  3. 02:59:544 - Volume 65%. 03:00:710 - Volume 70%.

:3
goodluck~>w<//
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
almost fixed all
very useful~
thanks a lot xD!
kogasa_old_1
123 posts
Joined July 2011
kogasa_old_1
Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-No tags?
-No source?

normalphobia
00:32:377 (5) - Seems too short, Perhaps would be better if made longer to fit the vocals
00:37:710 (2) - A NC might be better here
02:04:710 (3,4) - Placement is weird

hardphobia
00:32:044 (3) - Doesn't make much sense to be that far here
03:17:710 (4,1) - Awkward

insanephobbia
00:11:379 (1) - Unsnapped slider
00:16:544 (6) - Really seems as if it should be further here
00:49:377 (4) - Distance doesn't feel necessary here
01:25:544 (6,7,8) - Weird pattern, maybe move 8?
03:14:710 (4) - Distance doesn't feel necessary
03:24:127 (3) - Feels as if it repeats too many times

neophobia
01:09:210 (3) - Placement doesn't make sense ??
01:14:628 (4) - Unsnapped circle
03:22:710 (4) - Awkward

Yeah, really not much. Sorry I couldn't help.
Great map, good luck! :)
kogasa_old_1
123 posts
Joined July 2011
kogasa_old_1
Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-No tags?
-No source?

normalphobia
00:32:377 (5) - Seems too short, Perhaps would be better if made longer to fit the vocals
00:37:710 (2) - A NC might be better here
02:04:710 (3,4) - Placement is weird

hardphobia
00:32:044 (3) - Doesn't make much sense to be that far here
03:17:710 (4,1) - Awkward

insanephobbia
00:11:379 (1) - Unsnapped slider
00:16:544 (6) - Really seems as if it should be further here
00:49:377 (4) - Distance doesn't feel necessary here
01:25:544 (6,7,8) - Weird pattern, maybe move 8?
03:14:710 (4) - Distance doesn't feel necessary
03:24:127 (3) - Feels as if it repeats too many times

neophobia
01:09:210 (3) - Placement doesn't make sense ??
01:14:628 (4) - Unsnapped circle
03:22:710 (4) - Awkward

Yeah, really not much. Sorry I couldn't help.
Great map, good luck! :)
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
it's me or it's double post o.o
anyway thanks for mod~
kogasa_old_1
123 posts
Joined July 2011
kogasa_old_1
That's weird, after I checked it only showed up once... :?

Sorry!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Hi from my queue

General
you need a diff called Melophobia xD

Neophobia
00:13:710 (1) - this NC is weird, because you split the vocal "attention" up with it. move the NC to 00:14:044 (2) - would be much raesonable
00:21:210 (6) - just maybe CTRL+G
00:24:044 (8) - the clap on head is redundant
00:24:710 (1,2,3) - I think the flow is a little bit unconfortable, take a look at this
00:30:544 (2) - sure I know that you stacked it, but I don't think it plays well, it's too close to 1 while too far from 3, I think placing it at around (168,368) would be better
00:49:544 (4,5,1) - I'm not really fond of the flow here, maybe place 5 where 4 currently lies and move 4 to (24,368) or somewhere like that
00:57:210 (3,4,5,1) - I've got nothing against 2-->3-->4 , but somehow considering 1's direction, I'm not so satisfied with the flow from 5 to 1, only a suggestion http://puu.sh/3P79H.jpg . hope you can think of a better one
01:13:710 (4,1) - oops 0.0 maybe stack 4 at 01:14:710 (5) - 's tail
01:25:877 (5) - why don't you stack it at 01:26:377 (2) - 's head or place it at (332,68) to apply a better flow
01:37:877 (1) - don't let its end cross 01:37:377 (3) - 's body, move 01:37:377 (3) - to (204,316) will work
01:59:210 (1) - I think this plays much better
02:07:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer bigger jumps at this strong point, maybe a trapezoid like this

Insanephobia
00:13:210 (6) - as you're following vocal, why not stack ome more circle at 00:13:210 - and start this slider later (shorten to a 1/2 slider)
00:47:877 (6,1) - swap NC would make more sense ?
01:09:377 (4) - consider to CTRL+G ?
01:12:377 (4,5,1) - eh... what is this =.= I think sellecting 4 and 5 and CTRL+G will work, or consider to try this
01:14:377 (5,6,7) - I think this tripple is wrong set according to the music, I suppose 01:14:460 (6) - should be at 01:14:627 - and stack the tripple on 01:14:710 (8) - 's head
02:35:377 (7,1) - swap NC?
03:38:544 (3) - I think it doesn't need to be so twisted
03:46:710 (2,4) - why not place them togeter at (72,228)

Hardphobia
02:49:710 (3) - clap seems wrong
nothing wrong

Normalphobia
nice diff, nothing critical found

That's all
good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
that was useful~
thanks for mod!

lol
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Hi from my Queue.

[normalphobia]

  1. 00:15:377 (3) - Maybe move the tail to the same line (y324) as the beginning ?
  2. 00:21:377 (3) - Better blanket for (2)'s end, move (3) tail a bit up.
  3. 00:42:044 (3) - Red anchor for this slider is not really good for easy/normal, because it transfers the start to the middle, (more visible when you are playing), just consider this.
  4. 00:52:044 (3) - Too much curved.
  5. 01:22:044 (3) - Better blanket for (2), move the tail 1 or 2 grid left (grid level4)
  6. 01:59:377 (1) - Why don't to move the tail to the same line as the beginning ? (y92)
  7. 03:35:377 (1) - Maybe make a curve with this slider ?
  8. 03:42:044 (3) - Better blanket for (2)
[hardphobia]

  1. why don't to use OD6 ?
  2. 00:27:044 (3) - Move slider's end to x176 y288 to make it parallel with (1)
  3. 00:27:877 (2) - Ajust a bit the distance.
  4. 00:35:044 (3,4) - - I think that it's better :
  5. 00:43:044 (4) - Too much curved, make a better blanket for (3)'s end.
  6. 00:47:877 (3) - Align the slider's end with (1,2)
  7. 00:56:877 (4) - A bit strange, make the slider like this ? :
    SPOILER
  8. 01:03:877 (3) - Better blanket for (2)
  9. 01:26:544 (2,3) - Ajust a bit the distance here.
  10. 01:28:710 (1) - Move the tail 1 grid down (grid level4)
  11. 02:19:377 (4) - NC
  12. 02:35:044 (3,4,1) - Align.
  13. 03:36:544 (4) - better blanket for (3)'s end
  14. 03:37:044 (1) - Maybe make a curve with this slider ?
[insanephobia]

  1. Why don't to use OD7 ?
  2. 00:11:710 (2) - Too much curved, better blanket for (1)'s end.
  3. 00:12:544 (1) - Ajust a bit the slider for a better blanket for (2)
  4. 00:15:710 (2,3,4) - Align ?
  5. 00:19:377 (1) - Why don't to use ctrl+g here ?
  6. 00:22:044 (1,2,3,4) - why don't to do something like this ?
    SPOILER
  7. 00:32:044 (7) - Ajust a bit for a better blanket for (8)
  8. 00:32:710 (1) - NC ?
  9. 00:40:544 (1) - ajust a bit the curve for (2)
  10. 00:49:377 (4) - Ajust a bit, for (5)
  11. 01:16:044 (3) - Move the tail to x444 y192
  12. 01:37:210 (2,3,4) - maybe align these objets ? (slider in direction of 4)
  13. 02:01:044 (2) - in direction of (1) ? move to x56 y92
  14. 02:09:210 (3,4) - CTRL+G ?
  15. 03:14:710 (4) - Arrange the curve for (5)
  16. 03:35:877 (3,4) - Ajust the distance here.
[neophobia]

  1. Maybe use OD8 ?
  2. 00:22:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit ugly, try to arrage this pattern (square)
  3. 00:32:710 (9) - Maybe NC ?
  4. 00:34:544 (2) - too much curved for (3), better blanket.
  5. 00:44:710 (4) - Better blanket for (3)'s end
  6. 01:02:544 (3) - why don't to use ctrl+g here, and here : 01:03:210 (1) ?
  7. 01:11:210 (1) - move a bit on the right.
  8. 01:57:627 (4,5,6) - Arrange the curve of this stream
  9. 02:15:710 (2) - you can make a curve with this slider
  10. 02:19:377 (6) - Maybe NC ?
  11. 03:23:210 (9) - Align slider's end with (7,8)
  12. 03:23:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Arrange the curve of this stream
  13. 03:41:377 (3,4) - move (3) to x392 y196
Well, funny mapset :)
Good Luck ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some
thanks a lot~
CrazyErrorMan
110 posts
Joined February 2013
CrazyErrorMan
==Normalphobia==
I would add more circles between
00:54:710 and
00:56:710
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623


as your request
Mostly nazi XD

General

  1. incosistency in letterbox during breaks in neophobia diff
  2. Consider adding some tags?

normalphobia

  1. 01:04:710 (1,2,3,4) - a square is not placed perfectly
  2. 01:26:044 (1) - move the red anchor to the slider tick seems fit with the music
  3. 01:36:710 (1) - move last anchor 1 grid right to make perfect blanket
  4. 01:42:044 (5) - NC here instead of 01:43:377 (1) ?
  5. 02:02:044 (1) - use the slider from 02:01:044 (2) and make them symmetric?
  6. 02:13:710 (4) - put it like this flows better imo :
    SPOILER
  7. 02:43:377 (2) - make it louder? Its a bit hard to hear :?
  8. 02:46:044 (3) - ^
  9. 03:44:377 (2) - last anchor 1 grid right to make it parallel with 03:43:377 (1) ?
  10. 03:51:377 (3) - NC here, since you have NC here in other diffs

hardphobia

  1. 00:14:044 (1) - blanket
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:710 (3) - put it like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:36:377 (7) - make it a line to 01:36:710 (1)
    SPOILER

insanephobia

  1. 01:13:210 (2) - this better?
    SPOILER
  2. 01:30:710 (5) - NC better imo
  3. 02:01:877 (5) - last anchor 1 grid up for blanket
  4. 02:44:544 (5) - soft finish is better for me :?
  5. 03:15:210 (5) - I think here is fit for a finish

neophobia

  1. 00:16:544 (5) - NC here instead of 00:16:710 (1) ? It can notice players for a jump
  2. 01:35:210 (1) - it isnt blanket enough imo, try to move the red anchor some grid up? and copy paste to 01:35:877 (3)
  3. 01:39:377 (1) - finish at the tail
  4. 01:48:210 (6) - NC here instead of 01:48:377 (1) -
  5. 02:44:544 (1) - same as insane diff, put a soft finish instead?
  6. 03:01:377 (5) - NC? :D

thats all I can find 8-)
Good Luck!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Do you have. . .

Easyphobia?

huehueheuheuehuehueheuheuehueheuheuheueheuehuehuehue
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

CDFA wrote:

Do you have. . .

Easyphobia?

huehueheuheuehuehueheuheuehueheuheuheueheuehuehuehue
I'm lazy to make it and normal seems already easier XD

anyway thanks a lot for mod CrazyErrorMan and happy623!

SPOILER

happy623 wrote:

as your request
Mostly nazi XD

General

  1. incosistency in letterbox during breaks in neophobia diff
  2. Consider adding some tags? no idea for this ;A;
[/notice]

normalphobia

  1. 01:04:710 (1,2,3,4) - a square is not placed perfectly
  2. 01:26:044 (1) - move the red anchor to the slider tick seems fit with the music
  3. 01:36:710 (1) - move last anchor 1 grid right to make perfect blanket
  4. 01:42:044 (5) - NC here instead of 01:43:377 (1) ? seems more fit if nc in (1) cuz they looks separated pattern..
  5. 02:02:044 (1) - use the slider from 02:01:044 (2) and make them symmetric?
  6. 02:13:710 (4) - put it like this flows better imo :
  7. 02:43:377 (2) - make it louder? Its a bit hard to hear :? I think this is enough to hear.. but I will think again soon
  8. 02:46:044 (3) - ^
  9. 03:44:377 (2) - last anchor 1 grid right to make it parallel with 03:43:377 (1) ?
  10. 03:51:377 (3) - NC here, since you have NC here in other diffs

hardphobia

  1. 00:14:044 (1) - blanket
  2. 00:37:710 (3) - put it like this? different speed with (1), so I keep (3) more close w/ (2)
  3. 01:36:377 (7) - make it a line to 01:36:710 (1)

insanephobia

  1. 01:13:210 (2) - this better?
  2. 01:30:710 (5) - NC better imo too short combo if I do this
  3. 02:01:877 (5) - last anchor 1 grid up for blanket
  4. 02:44:544 (5) - soft finish is better for me :? nope, too loud for me :''(
  5. 03:15:210 (5) - I think here is fit for a finish

neophobia

  1. 00:16:544 (5) - NC here instead of 00:16:710 (1) ? It can notice players for a jump
  2. 01:35:210 (1) - it isnt blanket enough imo, try to move the red anchor some grid up? and copy paste to 01:35:877 (3)
  3. 01:39:377 (1) - finish at the tail uh.. keep consistent with other diff
  4. 01:48:210 (6) - NC here instead of 01:48:377 (1) -
  5. 02:44:544 (1) - same as insane diff, put a soft finish instead? same xD
  6. 03:01:377 (5) - NC? :D no~
thats all I can find 8-)
Good Luck!
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Yasora

[normalphobia]

00:22:710 (2) - Add to Circle

00:25:044 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:47:044 (4) - Delete

00:48:210 (5) - Add to Circle

03:51:210 (3) - ^

03:51:377 (4) - Delete

[hardphobia]

01:35:210 (4) - x336 y212 More Good

03:51:377 (1) - Delete

[insanephobia]

No problem ...

[neophobia]

00:47:877 (1) - No NC

00:48:377 (2) - Add to Circle

03:51:377 (1) - Delete
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some~
thanks for mod :3
Kareov
349 posts
Joined July 2013
Kareov
[Easy]
00:52:710 (4) - Remove NC
00:54:044 (1) - Nc
00:54:710 (2) - Remove NC
No problem BUT. TOO EASY
[Hard]
Looks good.
But maybe OD:6?
01:56:544 (4) - remove nc
02:07:210 (4) - ^
02:08:544 (1,2,3) - well,spac problem

03:47:544 (5) - REMOVE NC
03:50:044 (5) - ^

[Insane]
Oh fuckin' good.
maybe too easy

[2nd Insane]
what the hell!

BTW I LIKE YOUR AVATAR/spoiler]

[spoiler]You will gain 1 kudosu for this post if it is deemed as helpful by the map's creator.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some
thank you~
haruuu <3
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Ayu
Request from ~splorg~ modding queue. Please reply to the mod with what you did and did not change, and why.

normalphobia

  • 00:21:377 (3) - Slider end is too close to (2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/911809
    00:36:710 (1) - Should me moved 1 grid down to fix the blanket
    00:42:044 (3) - The slider doesn't really look alright, the middle point seems to be too close. http://puu.sh/3VhK7.jpg
    00:50:044 (1) - Form of the slider doesn't quite fit with 00:48:544 (1) -
    00:52:044 (3) - Should be coated around (2).
    01:02:377 (2) - Like before, slider should be fixed here.
    01:26:044 (1) - The form doesn't really fit here because of the music and of the previous slider.
    01:32:044 (2) - Why don't you blanket this around (1)'s slider end?
    01:55:044 (4) - Should be moved 1 grid to the left to fix the tiny spacing error.
    02:31:044 (3) - Slider end is too close.

hardphobia

  • 00:13:377 (6) - Slider form doesn't look good, should either be just straight or an arc/blanket.
    00:19:294 (1) - Should be coated around (2) better.

insanephobia

  • 00:39:710 (2) - Should copy (1) here, seems like you did with (4) so why not here?
    00:48:544 (1) - This blanket needs fixing.
    01:27:210 (5) - Would look so much better as a blanket.
    02:01:877 (5) - Blanket needs fixing, end is too far away.

neophobia

  • In all honesty, I skipped to mod this difficulty. Why? Because I didn't know if you were actually aiming for a map with quality. The whole mapset in general lacks decent quality and just looks like someone rushing trough the editor, just so he could get another map of himself ranked. To be honest, I don't really want to call this a good map, rather a bad map. Technically it's okay, but even the extra difficulty could be way more improved flow-wise. If you want more of my help, contact me in IRC and I will continue my mod with you over chat.
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