Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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17VA
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Davteezy
Bad in-game mod
01:27 Davteezy: still new to this
01:28 17VA: >?
01:31 Davteezy: at 00:43:523 on lv.9
01:31 Davteezy: the sound on that note is very soft
01:32 17VA: hm
01:32 Davteezy: you can only hear it if the music is loud
01:32 17VA: drum sound xD
01:32 Davteezy: wasnt it the bells?
01:33 17VA: 00:43:523 (43523|5) -
01:33 17VA: hm
01:33 17VA: it's Lv,8
01:33 17VA: redownload it?
01:33 Davteezy: right now?
01:33 *Davteezy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278049 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size)]
01:34 17VA: yes
01:34 *17VA is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278048 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Lv.8]]
01:34 Davteezy: ohh
01:34 Davteezy: let me see again
01:37 Davteezy: 00:59:425
01:37 Davteezy: is that strings?
01:37 17VA: k
01:38 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONt1.jpg
01:40 Davteezy: what the note on [2] 01:04:670
01:41 17VA: hmm
01:41 17VA: lol
01:41 17VA: move to 7?
01:42 17VA: or 1...
01:43 17VA: ok 1.
01:43 Davteezy: oh that the drum
01:44 Davteezy: timpani
01:44 Davteezy: i would remove it
01:44 Davteezy: main focus is on the vocals
01:45 17VA: timpani?
01:45 17VA: o
01:46 17VA: hmm
01:46 17VA: make it focus the vocal?
01:46 17VA: ok
01:46 Davteezy: yea
01:46 17VA: okay
01:46 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONE3.jpg much better
01:49 Davteezy: at 01:17:621
01:49 Davteezy: something like this?
01:49 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034854
01:49 Davteezy: or make the single at 01:18:277 at [5]
01:49 17VA: okay
01:50 Davteezy: is suppose to be norm diff?
01:51 17VA: yes
01:51 Davteezy: i think its fine
01:52 Davteezy: okay on lv 17
01:53 Davteezy: 00:00:736
01:53 Davteezy: i think it happens on 00:00:791
01:53 17VA: hmm
01:54 17VA: 791?
01:54 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034868
01:55 17VA: hmm
01:55 17VA: little slow
01:56 Davteezy: its optional
01:57 17VA: lol this http://puu.sh/4ONTD.png
01:57 Davteezy: 3 notes for a vocal?
01:57 Davteezy: 00:38:113
01:57 Davteezy: original sheet?
01:58 17VA: vocal = piano
01:58 17VA: yes
01:58 17VA: a
01:58 17VA: vocal + piano
01:58 Davteezy: aaaa
01:58 Davteezy: oh i heard it
01:58 Davteezy: okay
01:58 Davteezy: piano so soft
02:00 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034876 @01:06:966?
02:01 17VA: oka
02:01 17VA: y
02:01 Davteezy: that it
02:01 17VA: o
02:01 17VA: hmm
02:01 17VA: 01:07:293 (67293|4,67457|4) -
02:01 17VA: here
02:02 17VA: vocal is a same tone..
02:02 Davteezy: not really
02:02 17VA: yes
02:02 17VA: little
02:02 Davteezy: at 01:06:966 and 01:07:457 are the same vocals
02:02 Davteezy: ?!!?
02:02 Davteezy: that just me being picky
02:03 17VA: lol
02:03 Davteezy: make hp drain easier?
02:04 17VA: http://puu.sh/4OO2a.png
02:04 Davteezy: like lv.8 = hp6 lv.17= 7 and lv24. 8
02:04 17VA: hmm
02:04 17VA: I wanna keep 8
02:04 17VA: and 24 9
02:04 Davteezy: okay
02:04 17VA: like o2jam hard lv drain
02:04 Davteezy: hp 10
02:04 Davteezy: www
02:04 17VA: wwwwww
02:04 17VA: no drain
02:06 Davteezy: okay the last lv24
02:06 Davteezy: 00:44:998
02:07 Davteezy: add more emphasis near the end?
02:07 17VA: k
02:07 17VA: hmm
02:08 17VA: difficult..
02:08 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034885
02:08 Davteezy: hahahaha
02:08 Davteezy: orz
02:08 17VA: looks asdhaklsdj;
02:09 Davteezy: 1 more time at 00:47:621
02:09 Davteezy: h4h4hh4
02:09 17VA: sdjlfa
02:09 17VA: looks awkward
02:09 Davteezy: fhiuwehfuwie
02:10 Davteezy: lv 40 pattern
02:10 Davteezy: w
02:10 Davteezy: 01:09:097
02:10 Davteezy: connect ln?
02:10 17VA: ?
02:10 17VA: lol
02:11 17VA: because of vocals
02:11 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034889
02:11 17VA: my case is much better imo
02:12 17VA: vocal o.o
02:12 Davteezy: hm..
02:12 Davteezy: actualy it sounds more like this
02:12 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034892
02:13 17VA: hmm
02:13 17VA: 01:09:261 (69261|5) - high tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:425 (69425|3) - low tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:588 (69588|4) - middle tone
02:14 17VA: no changed
02:14 Davteezy: okay
02:14 Davteezy: i think that all of it
02:15 17VA: post it
02:15 Davteezy: maybe bump the level up?
02:15 17VA: xD
02:15 Davteezy: lv25?
02:15 17VA: I think 24
02:15 17VA: so easy
02:15 Davteezy: kk
02:15 17VA: just memorize some parts
02:15 Davteezy: lolol
02:15 Davteezy: harder than v3
02:15 *Davteezy run
02:16 17VA: xD
02:16 Davteezy: okay that all
02:17 Davteezy: ill post now
woc2006
Artist Unicode: 藍井エイル

Generally avoid too many simultaneously press (more than 2 note) in a row in Lv.8, the rest parts are good.
Topic Starter
17VA
all fixed
Raging Bull
crossing field!

Oh wait wrong op.
Topic Starter
17VA
lol you can check it my the other beatmap.
woc2006
bubble fixed
Topic Starter
17VA
Thanks ;w;
ljqandylee
[Lv.26]
00:25:490 (25490|5,25490|2) - Remain one of them is enough
00:36:064 (36064|6,36228|6) - Delete, they are improper here
00:38:113 (38113|5) - Reduce the key amount here, or increase the key amount of 00:38:277
01:04:670 ~ 01:05:162 - No 1/8 sound here, overmapped
01:08:933 (68933|6) - End at 01:09:179 or 01:09:261
01:09:261 (69261|5) - End at 01:09:425
01:09:425 (69425|3) - End at 01:09:588
01:15:162 ~ 01:15:654 - No 1/8 sound here, overmapped

[Lv.17]
I think it's better to make this diff a bit easier, by reducing some multi-keys or by other ways. Now this diff is much nearer to LV.26 and has a big gap with LV.8, or you can make a diff between them XD
00:25:490 (25490|5,25490|2) - Remain one of them is enough

[LV.8]
01:04:507 - Add a note
01:04:507 (64507|1) - Begin from 01:04:834
Topic Starter
17VA
applied.
Limit Removal
I've been waiting for an Aoi Eir song to have a mania map since forever 8-). It's not much, but here's my mod:

[General]
Hitsounds should not be at 0%. The players will have a hard time listening to how late or early their presses are

[Lv.8]
00:15:654 - (15654|2,3) is better off as (15654|3,4)
00:16:310 - Consequently, (16310|3,4) should be changed to (16310|2,3)
00:49:425 - The pattern will look better with (49425|2,5) instead of (49425|1,5)

[Lv.17]
00:49:425 ~ 00:52:048 Stick with mapping the piano as notes, no need to switch to sliders.

[Lv.24]
I'm not well-versed in hard 7K maps, so I don't think I can mod this properly.
Topic Starter
17VA

Limit Removal wrote:

I've been waiting for an Aoi Eir song to have a mania map since forever 8-). It's not much, but here's my mod:

[General]
Hitsounds should not be at 0%. The players will have a hard time listening to how late or early their presses are

- its okay because this mapset wasn't hitsounded.

[Lv.8]
00:15:654 - (15654|2,3) is better off as (15654|3,4) - nope.. http://puu.sh/55z2X.png compare with 00:15:982 (15982|5,16310|2,16310|3) - this notes.
00:16:310 - Consequently, (16310|3,4) should be changed to (16310|2,3) ^
00:49:425 - The pattern will look better with (49425|2,5) instead of (49425|1,5) strong beats so I place it 1st column.

[Lv.17]
00:49:425 ~ 00:52:048 Stick with mapping the piano as notes, no need to switch to sliders.

Vocal notes. not fixed.

[Lv.24]
I'm not well-versed in hard 7K maps, so I don't think I can mod this properly.
no changes. thanks
Charles445
[Lv.8]
00:00:736 (736|2,982|1,1392|6) - I think removing these three would make the intro a lot easier to read / play. These holds are on a weird beat.
Topic Starter
17VA
ok, fixed
Charles445
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HabiHolic
축하합니다~!
PyaKura
Gratz 17VA !!! :)
Nyquill
This map is dope (thats a good thing)
indyinyou
Gratz
Oyatsu
SAO 2013 again!! :D
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