zhelzonas13 wrote:

the map is still corrupt even though i DL it in the direct link that you've provided.. please fix it.. thanks

hitsuyayuto wrote:

why i cant download when i click link 'If File is corrupted, download from here'?

ts8zs wrote:

[Wan's Hard]
00:22:855 (4) - Blanket Fixed
00:24:955 (5) - BlanketFixed
00:36:655 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/898966 move 3rd and 4th point try make more smooth Fixed
01:17:905 (7) - Blanket Fixed
01:24:505 (1) - Ctrl+J nope.. I want to keep it

ts8zs wrote:

No Matter How I Look at It, It’s You Guys' Fault I’m Not Popular!
[Insane]
00:04:705 (2,3) - 建议左右颠倒 現在的也可以=w=
00:08:305 (3,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/898947 不. . 打算跟前面的擺放一樣
00:09:205 (2) - Ctrl+G okay w
01:07:105 (2) - 这里没法读 想留. .再看看其他modder怎麼說. .
仔细看了下
１　　２
　３　４
　　５　６
这能读？
01:15:805 (1,2) - 建议仿照上面的滑条:3 本來打算的;w; 不過後來覺得不好跳
01:21:955 (4) - 跳应该在41之间而不是34之间 okay~
01:24:505 (1) - 这里应该是个朝下的趋势 改了

[Normal]
00:54:505 (4) - Blanket fixed

Goodluck

aabc271 wrote:

Edit : Um... Maybe I was late ? The taiko diffs are deleted or what ?
Both diffs are actually ready for rank, so I think you should keep them...?

aabc271 wrote:

Edit : Um... Maybe I was late ? The taiko diffs are deleted or what ?
Both diffs are actually ready for rank, so I think you should keep them...?

The spoilerbox below is my mod

SPOILER

As requested by happy623, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[ TK's Oni]

Diff looks clean. See the box below for suggested patterns :3

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:04:255 (12,15) - Add finishes ? ( Comparing with (9,11) which include finish, this part's heavy beats seem to be ignored if no finishes are added here ) - ok.

00:09:655 ( 54~56 ) - ooo ( kkk sounds quite odd for me because the music is quite similar to (35~42), which has ddd at the same part. Using ddd can keep the hitsound consistency better ) - i felt "ddd is a little weird". so try kdd.

00:11:305 ( 69 ) Red note ? ( The music seems to be quite low-pitched here so D sounds less standing out. Also this is to keep consistent with 34, which is D in similar music part ) - ok. why i used K....

01:17:605 ( 517~519 ) - o o o ? ( Comparing with k d k, d k k fits the rising pitch better. This also makes a gradual difference with (510,511,512) (d d k) ) - keep now.

01:22:105 ( 547 ) - Blue note ? ( It's clear that 547 has a higher vocal pitch than (545,546), so you may consider K here so that it becomes d d K, which probably fits the music better ) - ok.

01:24:205 ( 564,565 ) - O O ? ( (563,564,565) are like low-high-low in terms of vocal. See if you want to use D K D to fit the music. Yes I can hear the background sound so I guess that's your reasoning. Suggestion only ) - some fixed :3

Overall nice map :3
Good job on using the streams properly to show the insanity of the vocal and music

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[ TK's Muzukashii]

Again no issues found. Below are the suggested patterns ~

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

01:00:355 ( 249,250 ) - o o ? ( Consider the rising vocal here, d k could be a better choice to fit the music ? ) - ok.

01:00:805 ( 251,252,253 ) - o o o ? ( This is to fit the low-high-low vocal. imo this is a good choice to fit the music in this case ) - keep :3

01:11:305 ( 302,303,304 ) - o o o ? ( I'd prefer dkk x4 rather than ddk dkk x2, since the latter will make ddk repeat 5 times, which is less intuitive for players to understand this is a special pattern )
01:12:505 ( 308,309,310 ) - ^ - interesting suggestion!!

01:18:355 ( 338 ) - Blue note ? ( It's quite clear that 338 has a higher pitch than 337. d k K seems to be more fitting than d d K ) - i want to emphasize 01:18:505 (339)

01:22:105 ( 356 ) - Blue note ? ( Again, higher pitch than 355 obviously ) - ok.

01:24:205 ( 367,368 ) - O O ? ( 367K : Higher pitch than 366, so d K. 368D : See if you wanna follow the vocal or the backgroud music more ) - some fixed!

Also nice map :3

Note patterns are the highlights of this diff. They do fit the song well ~

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Both oni and muzu are well-mapped and should be ready to rank

TKSalt is indeed a pro mapper ><

Star and good luck ~

Regou wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

~

oscartutu wrote:

渣mod路過

17:45 oscartutu: too hard
17:45 oscartutu: crazy insane
17:46 happy623: DX
17:46 happy623: me D
17:50 oscartutu: 00:34:780 (1,2,3,4,5) -
17:50 oscartutu: 點整家
17:50 happy623: 1/3
17:50 happy623: ;w;
17:51 happy623: 5整衰左DX
17:52 oscartutu: m00:37:180 (4) - 呢個可以放係藍線?
17:52 happy623: 我開1/3整;w;
17:52 happy623: 呢段
17:53 oscartutu: okummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
18:02 happy623: upload先;w;
18:02 oscartutu: 00:35:155 (5) -
18:02 happy623: 5555
18:02 happy623: 改左
18:02 oscartutu: @@
18:03 oscartutu: 等update先
18:03 happy623: ;w; up唔到
18:03 happy623: 重onhu3
18:03 happy623: 先
18:03 oscartutu: @@
18:06 happy623: ok (Y)
18:08 oscartutu: 太鼓點mod?
18:08 happy623: 5g
18:08 happy623: me都係搵人mod DX
18:09 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/282488 Suzuki Konomi n' Kiba of Akiba - Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui (TV Size) [Insane]]
18:09 happy623: 人地個版都好正DX
18:10 oscartutu: 00:05:905 (1,2,3,4) -
18:10 oscartutu: 呢個位D silder 轉下方向?
18:10 oscartutu: 刺激D?
18:11 happy623: ;w;唔太明
18:11 oscartutu: ;w;;ww;w;w;
18:11 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/3SCIB.jpg
18:12 happy623: no na DX
18:12 happy623: too hard
18:12 happy623: http://i.imgur.com/4EGGtnb.jpg me諗住咁樣click
18:12 oscartutu: 還點都咁鬼畜啦,不如再鬼畜D
18:13 oscartutu: XD
18:13 happy623: ;W;
18:13 happy623: 我是善良的
18:14 oscartutu: wwwwwwwwwwwww
18:17 oscartutu: 00:37:155 (4) -
18:18 oscartutu: 1/3 放前一個音
18:19 happy623: 00:37:455 (5) - 呢度都放?
18:19 oscartutu: ?
18:20 oscartutu: 01:23:605 (2) - 加個note?
18:20 oscartutu: 00:37:255 (4) - >00:37:155 (4) -
18:21 happy623: 另外 00:37:455 (5) - me都加左;w;
18:21 happy623: 好似好d
18:21 oscartutu: 加左D ?00:37:555 (5) -
18:21 oscartutu: oic
18:22 oscartutu: 00:47:755 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - 呢個位好恐佈
18:22 happy623: 變左短slider
18:22 happy623: XD
18:22 happy623: 玩到=ok (y)
18:24 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/3SD0Z.jpg
18:25 happy623: DX
18:25 oscartutu: 咁放?好睇D?
18:25 happy623: 唔太鐘意DX
18:26 oscartutu: 真係insane
18:26 happy623: 01:23:605 - 好似冇鼓
18:26 happy623: DX
18:27 oscartutu: 連著會好打D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
18:27 happy623: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
18:27 oscartutu: 我覺得^
18:27 oscartutu: XD
18:27 oscartutu: 分開左會打晒全部100
18:27 happy623: ok w
18:28 oscartutu: ok thanks
18:28 oscartutu: <3
18:28 happy623: 可唔可以其他diff都mod埋;w;
18:28 oscartutu: 正打算
18:28 happy623: thanks (y)
18:28 happy623: ٩( ᐛ )و
18:28 oscartutu: insane我都冇野mod到出黎
18:28 happy623: mod到(y)
18:29 oscartutu: wanwan個hard就po forum la 不過呢個hard都唔似hard
18:29 oscartutu: 似insane
18:29 happy623: 5555
18:29 oscartutu: DX
18:29 happy623: DX 可以同佢講有d難
18:30 oscartutu: Guest diff既diff 通常難D (吾吾
18:30 happy623: 555
18:30 oscartutu: 話太難人地好難做 DX
18:31 happy623: DX之前撚哥個Ends都係太難
18:31 happy623: remap左
18:31 oscartutu: which map?
18:31 happy623: 兔仔
18:31 happy623: blackhole
18:31 oscartutu: oic
18:32 oscartutu: 有冇backup 俾我玩 ;D
18:32 happy623: no DX
18:38 oscartutu: 唔知佢有冇呢 @@
18:38 happy623: he出trip
18:38 happy623: DX
18:38 oscartutu: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
18:38 oscartutu: nvm t.t
18:38 happy623: ;w;
18:39 happy623: irc可唔可以你save ;w; me重on左唔記得save
18:39 oscartutu: 唔要kd都得啦
18:40 happy623: Hard (?
18:40 oscartutu: 不過我想知,一張圖要rank好似要 唔知幾多粒星星
18:40 oscartutu: 仲要唔知幾多個人mod過
18:41 happy623: 睇d BAT
18:41 oscartutu: saved
18:41 happy623: 佢地d rules唔同
18:41 happy623: DX
18:43 oscartutu: 點算wan個diff我又唔知點改
18:43 happy623: ;w;
18:43 happy623: 睇多幾次
18:43 happy623: 就搵到(?
18:44 oscartutu: 睇左幾次玩左幾次,除左有D位可以改easy D之外,就冇野改了
18:44 happy623: 咁都算有野講na ;w;
18:45 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2476726
18:45 happy623: 第一次打咁多野;w;b
18:46 oscartutu: wow,佢句句都有應你
18:46 oscartutu: 好認真@@
18:46 oscartutu: !
18:46 happy623: ;wwwww;
18:46 oscartutu: 00:42:655 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - wanhard 得呢道?
18:47 happy623: 個人覺得 00:37:255 (5,6,7,8) -
18:47 happy623: 好難XD
18:47 oscartutu: yes
18:48 happy623: 01:24:505 (1) -
18:48 oscartutu: no idea 唔知講唔講好
18:49 happy623: 好似未搞;w;
18:49 happy623: 講住先(?
18:56 oscartutu: sh*t
18:56 happy623: !?
18:56 oscartutu: normal我都冇野想改
18:56 oscartutu: 點算
18:56 happy623: its okay (y) (?
18:58 oscartutu: 有啦
18:58 happy623: DX
18:58 oscartutu: bpm200的話 health drain改做4?
18:58 oscartutu: OD可以上調?
18:59 happy623: nooo
18:59 happy623: 好鬼畜
18:59 oscartutu: wtf lol xD
18:59 happy623: (y)
19:01 oscartutu: 01:21:055 (1) - !!!! (發問模式
19:01 oscartutu: 後面果3條線,!!!!!!
19:01 happy623: ;w;?
19:02 oscartutu: 作用?
19:02 happy623: 噴泉一下~
19:02 happy623: 玩個時可以可以見到
19:02 oscartutu: oic 受教 (學習模式
19:02 happy623: 不過唔可以連續用太多;w;
19:02 happy623: unrankable
19:07 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/3SE4n.jpg
19:07 oscartutu: 00:12:955 (1,2,3,4) -
19:07 oscartutu: easy
19:07 oscartutu: ...........
19:08 happy623: ;w;!?
19:08 oscartutu: 太鬼?
19:08 oscartutu: 畜?
19:08 oscartutu: 會太難麼?
19:08 happy623: 55
19:08 oscartutu: 1,2個ok掛.......................
19:08 oscartutu: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
19:09 happy623: DX
19:09 happy623: too hard
19:09 oscartutu: 00:42:655 (1,2) - 你自己都有 ..<.<
19:09 happy623: XD 我都覺難
19:10 oscartutu: 警察叔叔就是這個人.png
19:11 happy623: ٩( ᐛ )و
19:11 oscartutu: lol
19:11 oscartutu: 好啦我又冇野改了
19:13 happy623: 咁我up (?
19:13 oscartutu: 係咪因為個名太長
19:13 happy623: 55
19:13 happy623: 呀皮搞緊
19:13 oscartutu: so 用官方download corrupted
19:13 oscartutu: lol
19:13 happy623: 555555
19:14 oscartutu: 鈴木把聲好正,好性感,好引人
19:14 happy623: up ba ne
19:14 happy623: up na me *
19:14 happy623: ;w;
19:15 happy623: 首歌好正(y)
19:15 oscartutu: up na me?
19:15 happy623: upload
19:15 oscartutu: okokok
19:18 happy623: done~
18:51 oscartutu: hi wanwan
18:52 *oscartutu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278192 Suzuki Konomi & Kiba of Akiba - Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui (TV Size) [Wan's Hard]]
18:52 oscartutu: 00:36:655 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -
18:52 On_WanWan: 0.0
18:52 oscartutu: 00:42:655 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
18:52 oscartutu: 純碎講下,上面2個可能有D難 @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
18:53 oscartutu: 試下改易D ;pp
18:53 On_WanWan: 改返易d先XD
18:53 oscartutu: ok thanks
18:53 On_WanWan: 我講thanks先岩-0-
18:53 oscartutu: 成張map我都有睇,真係冇野好改 ;p
18:54 oscartutu: <<<<<<<noob
18:54 On_WanWan: haha no la
19:11 On_WanWan: http://puu.sh/3SE5q.osu try:3
19:17 oscartutu: sorry
19:17 oscartutu: late
19:17 On_WanWan: nvm
19:18 oscartutu: ok
19:22 oscartutu: okay done tried
19:23 On_WanWan: 得唔得0.0
19:23 oscartutu: hard黎講,的確係會難左D,不過應該冇問題
19:24 oscartutu: 我DT唔到 ;D
19:24 On_WanWan: 55 轉左1/3果到係幾難xd
19:25 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/3SEtU.jpg 中間過度難左D 睇graph既話
19:27 oscartutu: 加油good luck
19:28 On_WanWan: Thanks for Modヽ(*´∀`)ﾉ updated

YKingstoN wrote:

After I renamed the beatmaps so I could play them, they show up as "Not submited" to me.

Irreversible wrote:

i can't open it, even with the link above o_o

Momochikun wrote:

Hi Hi..
As Requested ~
I don't know Suzuki-san could make such a scary voice lol..
xD

[General]
-The Kiai within all diff is not same.. consider make it consistent It is okay for guest diff :<
-Many snakewtf sliders .For ranked maps IMO better a simple curved slider

Not really

[Insane]
00:02:305 (2) - Better blanket it changed a bit
00:25:255 (1,2,3,4) - This anti jump is broken the flow, use spacing instead try to Ctrl G and make a further distance
00:28:555 (2) - Ctrl + G ? no, keep consistency
00:30:955 (1) - Delete NC.. you don't use a NC here 00:18:655 (1,2,3) though.. okay
00:47:755 (2,3,4,5) - This is confusing me.. sure its okay imo
00:53:155 (7) - Finish at tail okay for these three
00:54:505 (7) - ^
00:56:905 (1) - Finish at the start
00:56:905 (1,2) - Better swap NC.. the watamote vocal is start here k
01:08:005 (2) - Better use spacing.. it's overlap well I made it ctrl H instead
01:21:505 (1,2) - Swap NC ~ ;w; confusing in jumping I think

[Normal]
00:17:455 (3) - Reduce the curved ok...;_;
00:25:255 (1) - Why NC ? keep it

Need more work..
GL ~

Irreversible wrote:

[Wan's Insane hard]

Irreversible wrote:

hi pm mod request, o: Finally i managed it to dl xD

[General]

I suggest following settings:

Easy: OD 2, AR 3, HP 2
Normal: OD 4, AR 5, HP 4
Insane: OD 7, AR 9, OD 7 fixed B)

HARD: Audio-Leadin is different to the other difficulties, fix all to 0.5 seconds! okay owob

[Easy]


00:06:805 - I don't really approve this slider here, it sounds very odd, especially for an Easy diff, could be very frustrating for newbie players. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/3VfGO.jpg 00:06:955 - Circle, 00:07:255 - Slider start, 00:07:705 - Slider end. I think you should fix that!

00:08:155 - Same for this section, http://puu.sh/3VfJT.jpg, my suggestion has 1/2 in it, but still, I think it sounds better than the current one, and a beginner can catch this easier than the current version.
00:31:855 (3,4,1) - Just something nazi, can you manage to get a triangle pattern here? I prefer this to the current version, because it, i thinnk is, supposed to be a triangle.
00:33:055 - A rhythm suggestion again, try to reverse 00:33:055 (1) - this slider, and add 00:34:255 - a circle here. It follows the guitar in the background really well, the lyrics are too complex for easy!
00:42:655 (1) - Reversing this one isn't a good idea, because you don't lead in the next long vocal, which is quite important imo. So don't reverse it, at the end it should look like this: http://puu.sh/3VfTe.jpg
00:52:405 (3,4) - What are you following with these two exactly?

Well, really nice sliderart you've got it, but the rhythm is more or less a mess.. It would be a good idea to follow the suggestions above, and go over your diff again, and if you think something looks a bit odd, immediately change it, to improve the overall rhythm. (sometimes it sounds really odd to my ears :s) All fixed here, really great suggestion XD the diff is improved much now!

[Normal]

00:05:155 (2) - Can you explain me this not-hitsound? xD I think it's the same as before, so add normal, I suppose
00:06:805 (1) - Rhythm suggestion again, it's a bit messed up as well 00:06:805 (1,2) - delete these two, 00:06:955 - add a circle, and add a slider from 00:07:255 - to 00:07:555 - !
00:08:005 (7,8,9) - If you fixed ^, apply the same to here! at the end, it should look like this, and the rhythm is much more clean now.

00:09:205 (1) - This sounds off again, I'm sure you can find a better position, try to get some ideas from the suggestions above hope its okay now OwO
00:11:605 (1) - I think the main mistake you've made is, that you start most of your sliders on the red tick, which isn't really a good idea, whether in normal nor easy. Try to get an easy beat, while you place the sliders on the white ticks, and some circles on the red ticks!
00:21:955 (2) - Delete this one,00:21:805 - add a circle here though! Sounsd better, because it fits the lyrics much better. 00:22:105 - Don't forget to add a circle here, it will make everything even better.
00:16:255 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Really nice rhythm here! As you can see, you placed most things on the WHITE ticks, what is very important and a good idea here! Try to make it as perfect as here. okay!
00:43:105 (2) - Nazi - it would look neater if you rotate it by around 10° Don't forget to replace!
00:47:605 (2) - Red tick again, fix please, same reasons.

The Kiai: The first part of the kiai is quite messed up again, whereas you use a totally different rhythm in the second half. It should definetly stay the same! You used many red ticks again in the first part! Try to clean it up yourself first, and call me back to give you some further ideas, if it didn't improve. But i'm sure it will. remapped!! o/
01:09:505 (2,2,2,2) - I think reversed mini sliders fit better than these ones, don't you think so?
01:13:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This might be a bit hard for a normal, but it's your decision! It's good mapped so, if you are fine with it, leave it :3 I left it here, hope its okay xD

Same as easy, the rhythm is a bit messed up sometimes, but i'm sure you can improve it with the suggestions above, but it's not bad, it has good ideas! But I can understand it, the song is a bit complicated to map. The rest are fixed as well owo

[Insane]

00:03:055 (4,5) - If you could make a nicer looking blanket between these two (the triplet and the first angle in the slider) I would be very pleased okey (´ω`)
00:05:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure if this is my headset, but how I currently hear it, this stream is somehow too early. Check it please, if it's alright with you leave it, as I said, i'm not sure. (my headset is ---) well I heard some drums here ;w;
00:08:005 (2,3,1) - Move this whole thing a bit to the left (1-2 grids), so you get the rhythm you create a bit easier. done~
00:09:805 (2,3) - I see what you wanted to make here, but things like this aren't really enjoyable. I suggest CTRL + G, to make a straight line, which is also funny! nice xD
00:11:305 (6) - stack with 00:09:955 (3) - ? Just some nazi. I moved the little streams a bit right too~
00:18:655 (1,2,3) - good job, ereally cool! <3!!
00:25:255 (1,2,3,4) - and again, I love you. Antijumps are soooo kawaiii~ if someone mods it, leave it, LEAVE IT xDD LOL xDD
00:28:255 (1,2,3) - I don't know how you feel, but the flow is really broken here, for no reason actually. Flowbreaking can be good sometimes, but not here. Try to get a nicerlooking pattern here! You can always ask me for suggestions, but sometimes i want to let the mapper try first. changed flow in 00:28:255 (1,2)
00:31:855 - What about delete this circle? To create some tension. The players will be stressed, but they have to stop here then. >.0 goooood
00:32:005 (5) - If you apply ^, stack this one with 00:32:155 (6) - ! I changed 00:31:555 (4) - shape toooo
00:39:855 (5,6) - Well, one rhythm issue, here it is. This sounds really bad. In 1/3 parts in every kind of song, flow is very important, so you should keep it, wheter you do it with placing, or the rhythm itself. I tried to remap this part, hope it works!
01:20:905 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it even more difficult? XD ;w; Crazy, but I like <3
This looks reaaally cool, especially the kiai, I love the jumps. Gooood job ! :3 thanks!! <3

Take my star, and if you need more help, don't hesitate to ask me for some further suggestions! hueee~ gooood luck!

Momochikun wrote:

Irreversible wrote:

[Wan's Insane hard]

LOL

Momochikun wrote:

[Wan's Hard]
00:05:305 (1) - Better use normal finish at this spinner Fixed
00:27:805 - Add note that stacked with (6) maybe ? I prefer to keep here empty
00:36:655 (4,5,6) - the first hard diff in my modding history that use such a big spacing on a blue > white tick Remapped this part
00:37:855 (1) - This slider end is off from the beat.. unrankable^, It's in 1/3 so didn't off beat here
00:39:655 (5,6) - ^
01:04:255 - Add note here and delete NC 01:04:405 (1) here.. it's downbeat I prefer to keep here empty
01:24:505 (1) - This slider is off beat too.. unrankableFixed the end to blue tick

Irreversible wrote:

[Wan's Insane hard]
00:14:305 (2) - If you want to make something difficult here, stack this 00:14:905 (2) - to this one, but don't leave it as it currently is, the spacing is too confusing for a hard in my opinion. My suggestion should be okay though. Fixed
00:21:805 (2) - You can improve that blanket, just take the last white point and move it a bit downwards. Fixed
00:26:605 (2) - mhh, blanket again. just aesthetics. Fixed
00:35:455 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks nice, but doesn't follow the background nor the lyrics at all. Remapped this part, follow the lyrics XD
00:59:455 (1) - This is not perfectly stacked ingame, looks a bit unpolished, fix it please! Changed some sliders here
01:00:205 (2) - Because ^ is not stacked, this looks like it's too close to 1. So you should fix it ^
01:03:055 (6) - I feel a NC here, because he changes his voice. Fixed
01:07:705 (5) - This is definetly too close to 3. It looks not very nice ingame due that! Please move it a bit to the right.Fixed

No rhythm fails at all, because for a hard diff it's okay to map like this. The jumps are very nice and easy to get, what is very good! I really recommend you to fix those nazi stuff, to make your diff really look polished. Good job!Thank you :>!!!

Papysh wrote:

Hi, Papysh here

Easy

1. 00:10:105 (1) - 1 down plz okay
2. 00:16:255 (1) - A little bit up XD nooo since I have to blanket with 00:17:455 (2)
3. 00:17:455 (2) - Move sec grey square in this slider by 1 and the red square by 2 (dont know how its called lol ;-; xD well I think its blanket enough
4. 01:02:455 (2) - Maybe make it look better with 01:00:355 (2) - okayyy, moved a bit down
5. 01:18:505 (1) - The first red square 1 right so it can make better blanket ? D: okay! nice one
   
   
   as its mapped well i couldnt mod without nazi mod

I cant find any issues at other diffs ;-;
no kd needed for that post ~star

misk703 wrote:

It's so good and exciting map!!!!!

Foreverends wrote:

打倒巨人吧孩子(被拖走

happy623 wrote:

Foreverends wrote:

打倒巨人吧孩子(被拖走

恭喜呀撚突破新一頁

1. Clear

1. 00:14:305 (1,2,3) - it's weird placement imo. 00:14:305 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and 00:14:605 (3) - move to x:436 y:140. i like this jump pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:15:130 (1) - hmm why you set this spinner end here? i think that spinner end is 00:15:955 - better.
   
3. 00:18:055 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't like this notes. flow is bad for me. In particular, why that notes are big jumps? -> 00:18:355 (3,4,1) - I was hard to play it so.
   
4. 00:25:405 (2,3,4) - Add NC all notes? For the sake of clarity to the players.
   
5. 00:32:455 (7) - NC
   
6. 00:32:530 (1) - remove NC
   
7. 00:40:055 (3,4) - i think that empty after (4)slider. and weird timing. like this rhythm?
   
   
8. 00:48:880 - you are follow guitar sound this part, so add note here.
   
9. 01:15:805 (1) - this note hidden by 01:15:205 (1) - slider. so move to notes like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Need more mods this diff.

1. 00:05:155 - soft-hitfinish is not fit. try use normal-hitfinish.
   
2. 00:14:455 (1) - remove slider repeat. more match the song.
   
   really beautiful Hard. i like it.

1. 00:21:055 (1,2) - a little hard this rhythm. if you are follow the vocal this part, try this.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:255 (4,1) - hard read this stack, and weird rhythm. use white line like a Hard diff or use 1/3 like a Insane diff.
   
3. 00:46:105 (2) - slider end is 00:46:855 - better for me.
   
   I stopped the mod here.
   

Guy wrote:

Hi! request from forum PM

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear

[Insane]

1. 00:14:305 (1,2,3) - it's weird placement imo. 00:14:305 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and 00:14:605 (3) - move to x:436 y:140. i like this jump pattern xD I like this too
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:15:130 (1) - hmm why you set this spinner end here? i think that spinner end is 00:15:955 - better. okey
   
3. 00:18:055 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't like this notes. flow is bad for me. In particular, why that notes are big jumps? -> 00:18:355 (3,4,1) - I was hard to play it so. okay, I made it no jumps in 00:18:055 (1,2,3,4)
   
4. 00:25:405 (2,3,4) - Add NC all notes? For the sake of clarity to the players. some modders told me it is better without NC in all notes, btw I try it ;w;
   
5. 00:32:455 (7) - NC fixed for this 2
   
6. 00:32:530 (1) - remove NC
   
7. 00:40:055 (3,4) - i think that empty after (4)slider. and weird timing. like this rhythm? okay ;w; Im really bad in 1/3
   
   
8. 00:48:880 - you are follow guitar sound this part, so add note here. okay
   
9. 01:15:805 (1) - this note hidden by 01:15:205 (1) - slider. so move to notes like this. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Need more mods this diff. ;w; okay I will find someone to mod it

[Normal]

1. 00:21:055 (1,2) - a little hard this rhythm. if you are follow the vocal this part, try this. okay
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:255 (4,1) - hard read this stack, and weird rhythm. use white line like a Hard diff or use 1/3 like a Insane diff. unstacked and used 1/3 here
   
3. 00:46:105 (2) - slider end is 00:46:855 - better for me. done
   
   I stopped the mod here.

sorry, it is difficult to Mod this map.
i hope that this map is ranked.
Good luck

Guy wrote:

[Wan's Hard]

1. 00:05:155 - soft-hitfinish is not fit. try use normal-hitfinish. Fixed
   
2. 00:14:455 (1) - remove slider repeat. more match the song. I prefer to keep it ;w;
   
   really beautiful Hard. i like it.

1. 00:52:405 (3) - 不NC么
2. 个人觉得有些slider包的不太好00:04:255 (1) - 00:18:655 (1) -

1. 00:41:755 (1) - 最中间的那个红点往右移一个会不会比较好
2. 00:55:555 (2,3) - 感觉没包好
3. 01:19:855 (1) - 这样左右对称，这是代码
   
   代码

   388,232,79855,6,0,B|316:232|316:232|256:264|196:232|196:232|124:232,1,270,2|4,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:09:505 (3,1,2) - 可不可以把2移动一下，做个正三角形？
2. 01:21:955 (4) - 故意错开的？
3. 01:23:755 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉没有正好包住2，可以试试这样？
   
   代码

   176,232,83755,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   232,156,83905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   320,184,84055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   320,276,84205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   236,304,84505,5,6,0:0:0:0:

1PSA wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:52:405 (3) - 不NC么 好的
2. 个人觉得有些slider包的不太好00:04:255 (1) - 00:18:655 (1) - 試試再包了一下

[Normal]

1. 00:41:755 (1) - 最中间的那个红点往右移一个会不会比较好 很好ww
2. 00:55:555 (2,3) - 感觉没包好 okay
3. 01:19:855 (1) - 这样左右对称，这是代码 代碼謝謝
   
   代码

   388,232,79855,6,0,B|316:232|316:232|256:264|196:232|196:232|124:232,1,270,2|4,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

1. 00:09:505 (3,1,2) - 可不可以把2移动一下，做个正三角形？這個不了. . 想把00:09:655 (1,2,3) - 做個直線
2. 01:21:955 (4) - 故意错开的？恩, 不過也NC了一下易懂一點
3. 01:23:755 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉没有正好包住2，可以试试这样？謝;w;!!
   
   代码

   176,232,83755,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   232,156,83905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   320,184,84055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   320,276,84205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   236,304,84505,5,6,0:0:0:0:

新人脑残mod，可随意忽略