MgerSy wrote:

4K db hard :
01:00:537 (60537|1) - 这个有点阴，建议跟01:00:584 (60584|2) - 反过来。

其他基本看不出有什么问题

Spy wrote:

Hello!from mod request

[victorica's Normal]
00:30:584 (30584|1) - 貌似沒音? 这里有音
00:47:647 - 這裡有長音，比較適合拉長條。 这边原来我也想啦条子的。。但是想来想去还是决定用拍砖了。
01:25:147 (85147|0,85209|1,85272|2) - 以Normal來說的話我不建議階梯。。stress 这边不用阶梯的话有点不知道怎么写了
[victorica's Hard]
00:11:553 (11553|3) - 這一個好像有點陰險。。放心 BPM80 不要紧的 （雾


其他的都很好。加油

richardfeder wrote:

骗kd骗kd~
mania模式的一些mod,只是参考意见哦w

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db‘s 4k HD
00:04:147 (4147|1) - 拉长到00:04:615 - ,同时00:04:522 (4522|2) - 缩短到00:04:615 -开始fixed

00:09:397 (9397|1,9490|2,9584|3,9772|2,9865|1,9959|0) - 那个,这里怎么跟你说呢,这里提琴只有四个音高,不是六个www不知道怎么贴图解释怨念实际应该是四个长条,每个长条都跟00:09:959 (9959|0) - 一样是四分之一timing,这里拉六个肯定是不对的希望db考虑一下 这边我在50%听的时候 我感觉音色是和我谱的一样的。所以我还是觉得不改了

00:24:397 (24397|3) - 加一个notefixed
00:25:147 (25147|1) - ^fixed
既然你00:25:897 -和00:26:647 -这两个重音都是双note的话就不要留例外了吧wwwfixed

00:27:772 (27772|2,27772|3) - 那个...这里不用放两个吧...? 我觉得这里应该和00:27:959 (27959|1) - 一样放一个(都不是重拍),倒是00:28:147 -考虑一下放两个wwfixed

00:41:647 (41647|1) - 挪到3...? 右手有点寂寞~fixed

01:00:022 (60022|0) - 好黑啊XD这个给右手吧fixed

其他感觉没什么违和了XD加油rank!

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi M4M from your queue

general

- it's still in WIP move it to pending
- you should find a whistle who fit the guitar at beginning, it really need something here
- opening instead of OP in tags
- it's 猫物語 not 猫物语
- also we can now put the original name in source so you can put "猫物語" in source and move "nekomonogatari" in tags but not obligatory Okay
- 00:12:959 - any reason for this kiai time ? '-' not really neededwell,for its fountain

Easy

- 00:08:647 (3,4) - delete, then 00:07:147 (1,2) - copy/paste for symmetry ? well，adjust
- 00:12:397 (3) - in this way, increase the flowconsidered

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- 00:19:897 (1,2,3) - i prefer like, better flow imo not bad

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- 00:37:147 (1) - finishok
- 01:08:647 (1) - finish on tail ok
- 01:10:897 (1) - move to x:31y:192^
- 01:19:147 (4) - finish^
- 01:22:147 (1) - whistle on tail^
- 01:23:647 (2) - whistle on head/reverse/tail^

Normal

- 00:04:147 (1,2) - nazi but the center of those sliders is not really on the Y axis >.<....
- 00:12:397 (4) - in this way for a better flow ok

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- 00:29:647 (3) - same issu about flowhum...no change

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- 00:37:147 (2) - finish on head
- 00:52:147 (2) - a straight slider hereok

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- 00:58:897 (2,3) - what about this rythm ?not bad , but I'll not change it

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- 01:00:397 - also you're using a whistle in your easy diff so you be one here too i guess
- 01:08:647 (1) - finish on endok
- 01:19:147 (2) - ^ on head^
- 01:22:522 (2) - whistle head and tail ?
- 01:23:647 (1) - whistle tail

?

Hard

- 00:01:147 (1,2) - you should not overlap them kinda ugly imo deliberate
- 00:29:647 (1,2) - use DS 0,8 same as the next note Fixed
- 00:37:147 (1) - finish on head ok
- 00:59:647 (5) - whistle instead of clap on tail^
- 01:18:772 (1) - finish on tail^
well it's a diff is nice, but a bit overmapper imo, i mean there is lot of triplet who doesn't follow the song, like:
- 00:20:272 (3,4,5) -
- 00:23:647 (2,3,4) - a little...no problem~
- and many more

thX for mod~and star
and that's all for me good luck for rank :3
have a star o/

1. Some of the background images you used are of size 882*662. I wonder if these can be consistent as those 1024*768.
2. 猫物語 黑 in the tag can be removed since it duplicates with that in source.
3. The first really short kiai time is quite unnecessary imo. It is just the beginning of lyrics and nothing special.

1. 00:10:147 (1) - this slider fails to capture the guitar sound there at 00:10:897. I treat the previous sliders' pattern following the guitar, so I expect the same technique is being applied here. Try to change the shape of the slider or makes it like this:
   
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2. 00:42:397 (6) - the shape of this seems not aesthetic, maybe copy 00:41:647 (5) or as below?
   
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1. One important point is there are too many SV changes. In most of the cases, Normal is not recommended to have SV change. If there is, only two alternating SV values would be found in most cases. For example, 0.75x and 1.0x. Therefore, I wonder if your Normal diff is too harsh for newbies and difficult for them to notice there SV changes though the BPM is really low.
   
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2. 00:10:147 (1) - I think the position and also coordinates of nodes of this slider can be improved. Try to make a blanket with the previous slider like this:
   
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3. 00:14:647 (2,1) - This flow is a bit weird imo. Try this?
   
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1. Same as Normal, I don't think such frequent changes in SV can be acceptable in an EASY difficulty. Try make them consistent and same SV is far enough to express the music gracefully for this song.
   
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KevinKang wrote:

hi~虽然很想mod另一首初音的,但是那首真的已经很棒了
[Easy]
00:07:147 (1,4) - 这两个note感觉坐在同一水平线上更好,或者干脆00:08:647 (3) - 下调一点,那样整体上比较美观 ok
00:25:897 (1) - 其实也无关紧要,我不知道你这里有没有包住前一个note的想法,毕竟你的blanket都很棒
[Normal]
00:10:147 (1) - 从这里开始用鼓的音效并不是太好吧,我建议把鼓的音效放到00:11:272 (4) - 这个是要有鼓声的 因为是一个长滑条的开始
01:08:647 (1) - 最后那个finish希望能减点音量ok
01:13:897 (3) - 好像忘记加clap了。。是呢
[Hard]
00:34:147 (3,4) - 一个是257一个是258（看来我真的有强迫症）
00:40:709 (3) - 这个note我比较纠结,我不知道加上还是拿掉好 将歌词的转音map上了
01:25:147 (1) - 最后的转盘为什么跟其他难度不一样加了个whistlefixed
非常棒的op跟图>.<

Kazey wrote:

From Mod4Mod !

Can't mod mania'difficulties, sorry.

[General]
Switch off Letterbox during breaks, you don't have. (Song Setup =>Design)OK~

[Easy]
01:26:647 : Move the green tick properly please. (Actually: 01:26:653)you are so attentive
Just perfect to me.

[Normal]
00:27:772 (1) : Remove NC.
01:16:897 : Try this pattern, yours is too loud to me. considering
01:26:647 : Same as Easy.

[Hard]
00:22:147 (1,2,3,4) : These jumps are too weird. Re-make this more beautiful, or change totally.(Spacing)ok
00:40:522 (2,3) : Maybe change this, I prefer. changed some
01:09:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : The sound is strange, try to remake.but howT T
01:20:647 (5,6,7) : Maybe move this patter like this. More beautiful lollol
01:26:647 : Same as other difficulties.orz

That's good, nice skin! Hope you get this rank!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from your m4m queue.

[General]

1. Some of the background images you used are of size 882*662. I wonder if these can be consistent as those 1024*768.
2. 猫物語 黑 in the tag can be removed since it duplicates with that in source.ok
3. The first really short kiai time is quite unnecessary imo. It is just the beginning of lyrics and nothing special.喷泉

[Hard]

1. 00:10:147 (1) - this slider fails to capture the guitar sound there at 00:10:897. I treat the previous sliders' pattern following the guitar, so I expect the same technique is being applied here. Try to change the shape of the slider or makes it like this:do some changes
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:397 (6) - the shape of this seems not aesthetic, maybe copy 00:41:647 (5) or as below? do some changes here
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. One important point is there are too many SV changes. In most of the cases, Normal is not recommended to have SV change. If there is, only two alternating SV values would be found in most cases. For example, 0.75x and 1.0x. Therefore, I wonder if your Normal diff is too harsh for newbies and difficult for them to notice there SV changes though the BPM is really low.just some sv changes at the beginning,and spacing looks no problem
   
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2. 00:10:147 (1) - I think the position and also coordinates of nodes of this slider can be improved. Try to make a blanket with the previous slider like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:647 (2,1) - This flow is a bit weird imo. Try this? awesome
   
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[Easy]

1. Same as Normal, I don't think such frequent changes in SV can be acceptable in an EASY difficulty. Try make them consistent and same SV is far enough to express the music gracefully for this song.^
   
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Generally, a pretty good mapset!! Good luck for ranking

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your mania GD charts ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diffs)

victorica's Normal

Inside :3

00:15:022 (15022|1) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable here according to your pattern, make this transition smoother

00:21:022 (21022|1,21772|2) - switch positions of these notes to 2nd and 1st columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play this pattern with three notes in 1st and 2nd columns

00:22:522 - why there's no note? add one to 3rd column according to the song

00:27:772 (27772|0) - move this one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable transition with your next going note here

00:42:022 (42022|1) - and this one I suggest you to move to 2nd column too, it's more suitable position for it according to your previous double notes

00:48:022 - missed note? add one to 2nd or 1st column here according to the songmeans vocal

00:56:272 (56272|0) - to 3rd column please, it'll be more comfortable to play here rather than three notes in a row

fixed
victorica's Hard

Inside :3

OD +1 firstly, 7 OD not enough to make your chart "Hard", so add one point.

00:03:397 (3397|3) - I recommend you to move this note to 1st column, it'll be more suitable here with holding LN

00:11:553 (11553|3,11647|1) - move these notes to 1st and 2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable stream here with open chord in the end

00:12:772 (12772|0) - move these one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable pattern coz you placed previously many notes in one column

00:31:897 (31897|2) - I suggest you to open this chord and move this note to 3rd column, it's more suitable position for it

00:46:522 (46522|0,47272|0) - delete these notes, these chords are overmapped now, accent only strong beat with two notesthese double notes means vocal

01:04:897 (64897|1,64897|3) - turn these LNs into single notes, there's no need to place LNs according to the sound, use this rule for next going LNs if such kind too

01:16:147 (76147|1) - more this one to 0 column, it's more comfortable position for this note here

01:20:647 (80647|1) - I suggest you to move this note to 3rd column to avoid unnecessary double noting in 1st column

fixed
General

Inside :3

Kiai: there are no any kiai part in your charts, I suggest you to add one:

From 01:01:193 to 01:20:647 - accentable part like chorus, you can accent it
________________________

AiMod: turn off the Letterbox in mania diffs.

Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your mania GD charts ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diffs)

victorica's Normal

Inside :3

00:15:022 (15022|1) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable here according to your pattern, make this transition smoother

00:21:022 (21022|1,21772|2) - switch positions of these notes to 2nd and 1st columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play this pattern with three notes in 1st and 2nd columns

00:22:522 - why there's no note? add one to 3rd column according to the song

00:27:772 (27772|0) - move this one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable transition with your next going note here

00:42:022 (42022|1) - and this one I suggest you to move to 2nd column too, it's more suitable position for it according to your previous double notes

00:48:022 - missed note? add one to 2nd or 1st column here according to the song

00:56:272 (56272|0) - to 3rd column please, it'll be more comfortable to play here rather than three notes in a row

victorica's Hard

Inside :3

OD +1 firstly, 7 OD not enough to make your chart "Hard", so add one point.

00:03:397 (3397|3) - I recommend you to move this note to 1st column, it'll be more suitable here with holding LN

00:11:553 (11553|3,11647|1) - move these notes to 1st and 2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable stream here with open chord in the end

00:12:772 (12772|0) - move these one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable pattern coz you placed previously many notes in one column

00:31:897 (31897|2) - I suggest you to open this chord and move this note to 3rd column, it's more suitable position for it

00:46:522 (46522|0,47272|0) - delete these notes, these chords are overmapped now, accent only strong beat with two notes

01:04:897 (64897|1,64897|3) - turn these LNs into single notes, there's no need to place LNs according to the sound, use this rule for next going LNs if such kind too

01:16:147 (76147|1) - more this one to 0 column, it's more comfortable position for this note here

01:20:647 (80647|1) - I suggest you to move this note to 3rd column to avoid unnecessary double noting in 1st column

General

Inside :3

Kiai: there are no any kiai part in your charts, I suggest you to add one:

From 01:01:193 to 01:20:647 - accentable part like chorus, you can accent it
________________________

AiMod: turn off the Letterbox in mania diffs.

Good luck :3/

HDFL wrote:

这么久了还在做！支持下
可惜没有kudosu可射了

Swayzo wrote:

Mania Normal:
00:20:272 Add a note
00:46:897 ^
00:23:647 Extend hold 4
00:47:647 Turn note 1 into a hold note that is a beat long
Change OD > 7

Mania Hard:
00:04:959 Change hold 1 so it is a beat long
00:06:647 shift the first 2 notes over to 4
01:03:459 remove 1
01:19:584 move 3 over so it starts at 01:19:709
01:21:959 remove 4 and 3
01:25:897 remove 1