ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]喂 乃在好好mod么> <?明明是hard
00:07:147 (1,2,3,4) - 这么看不太容易看出来什么，咱们换个姿势方法 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899734 好猥琐> < 这里咱的sv是有变化的timing里面可以看出来
00:13:147 (1) - 摆到和上一个4对称的位置？好
00:39:397 (6) - Blanket ？？？没有包好么？
01:00:397 (6) - 和1对称？从读图顺序来看这样没有问题pass掉
01:03:397 (1,2,3) - 放到上一个弧3的中心？不要> <好丑
01:04:147 (1) - Ctrl+J 后面不用变 这样有overlap不好
看到这里感觉你停顿点没掌握好停顿点？这张图是温柔图啊
01:06:397 (3) - 放在2的中心
?01:06:772 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899741 太乱了
01:25:147 (1) - 延长1/2 好
[Normal]
00:20:272 (2) - Blanket ??是没包好么？
00:28:522 (2) - ^ ？？
00:37:147 (2) - ^ ??
以及很多:3 难道都没包好？0 0
01:25:147 (1) - 延长1/2
[Easy]
被催着睡觉……记得叫我来Edit……看起来没什么大问题:3
01:22:147 (1,2) - 这个弧角度太大了 Fixed

Fycho wrote:

hi~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]

• 
  BG图片真够诱惑的;w; NSFW，如有说的人多的话就换了吧Q.Q....咦 这只是蕾丝呀 应该没问题的吧>v<
  我个人觉得BPM是160.按照四拍子的曲子，强弱次强弱。。。而大部分歌曲是2拍子所以有误差。。。。最好请教香蕉一下
  TV Size，那个S一定要大写好的
  Leadin=1500足够了，本身有1秒多的等待时间别3000了呜 问了好多人才弄懂这个> < 嗯呢 已修改
  KIAI time建议00:13:147 –我觉得这里开始最佳，01:07:334 –这个绿线移到01:07:147 如何？01:07:522 –这个绿线移到01:10:147 如何？ 唔 咱看看Q.Q
  TAGS里。猫物语的语应该是繁体我记得。。。黑和OP之间加空格，考虑加羽川翼，MONACA, meg rock，shaft进tags里好的

以上要改的话全难度都要改

[hard]

• 
  HP不要这么高嘛。。。。嫌星数不够加大节奏密度-1了
  AR-1这个强烈推荐。。一开始的确是ar7 但是低bpm的歌曲ar偏低连打是打不好的呀 先保留一下吧
  00:09:397 (4,1) –碰到一起不怎么好看的说 嗯 移开了一点点
  00:22:522 (4) –离3远点，前面的1.2.3距离都差不多好 移开了一点点
  00:33:397 (1,2,3,4) –貌似是随手摆的？使用复制粘贴然后水平垂直翻转工具会好看许多这样距离一样有些怪怪的耶 也保留一下
  00:42:397 (6,1) –反flow？？
  00:34:897 (1) –这个可以换成1个note+clap，然后紧接转盘这里如果这样后面的红线也是circle合适了 也保留惹> <
  00:40:147 (1) –whistle？fixed
  00:52:147 (1) -^fixed
  00:01:147 (1) –尾whistle
  00:01:147 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) –滑条尾可以加soft的默认whistle的音效 好的

[normal]

• 
  开头几个滑条既然用5%音效来减少滑条中间的tick音还不如用空白音效来自定义tick音，省去绿线的麻烦因为有了滑条无声了 tick的无声不能有> <
  00:43:897 (3) –太下面，超屏幕了，建议上移Fixed
  00:53:647 (4) –略下了，上移点fixed

[easy]

• 
  00:03:584 -00:03:959 –这两根绿线没有任何作用请删除，类似的自己检查吧唔 好> <
  00:19:897 (1) –下弯？保持良好flow咱害怕叠起来才这样摆的 应该没问题的QvQ
  01:03:022 –add note？这里remap了一下
  01:03:397 (1,2) –stack对新手太难^

goodluck

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 m4m from my queue
诶呀 本来还说等个2kd呢 算了 太懒不好QvQ

General
为何感觉kiai从00:37:147 - 到01:01:147 - 比较好 嗯 这里很多人提出来了> < 适当做了更改
DC1的自定义音效的添加和使用…个人感觉其实效果不很适合

Hard
00:07:147 (1,2,3,4) - 它们头上如果有default的soft whistle应该不错 好
00:09:397 (4,1) - 可以避免overlap嗯 已修改
00:18:772 (3) - whistle多余 不好听 去掉了
00:20:647 (5,2) - 一定要接触？Fixed
00:26:647 (2) - 感觉太靠右了打着舒服 虽然是慢歌可能影响不大吧 http://puu.sh/3Uh2a.jpg 可能不太好看=。= 看起来不错 不过这里可以保留
00:37:147 (1) - 这里开始感觉应该开阔一些，增大空间利用率 00:37:147 (1,2) - 这样的结构太过于紧凑了 好分来了一些
00:44:647 (4) - 虽然这里你一直是按0.8x摆的 但是这实在是显得太近了=。= 嗯^
00:49:147 (1,2) - ^ 不多说^
01:02:272 (3) - 头上finish很合适 那个音确实不是从这里起的 但是加在这里很合适 finish没有加在尾巴上 但在头上都加上了
01:05:272 (2,4) - 2的尾巴 4的头上 都应该finish会比较好
01:18:772 (1) - 尾巴finish
01:21:397 - 呃 为了在一个莫名的位置结束kiai种根草…真是…其实我应该这么说 你应该在这根线就把音效什么的调好 下一根线就可以删掉了呀

Normal
finish都参照上面
01:08:647 (1) - 建议从01:06:959 - 就起 前面那slider换成一个circle 现在的spinner还是太短了 尝试了这样做 但是发现中途有一个非常重的clap 保留一下吧> <

Easy
还是那些finish 没啥别的好挑的

That's all
Good luck

woc2006 wrote:

加油，争取rank

17VA wrote:

victorica's hd

change the keyamount... 7 -> 4

11t wrote:

Hello!

[Easy]

00:59:647 (3,4) - The amount of overlap here is somewhat unsettling. Maybe use 0.80x distance snap for these notes instead? It won't be numerically consistent with the rest of your map (1.10x all around), but I guarantee you that players won't notice the difference, except that your map will look nicer.
01:04:147 (2,3,4,5) - ^ but when it will be changed ，someone also would point it out...
00:10:147 (1,2,3) - Here, it wasn't so much of an issue, but if you decide to change the above, don't forget to change this part too, for consistency.

[Normal]

No issues here! Your arrangement is very beautiful!

[Hard]

Drain Rate: consider decreasing. DR7 is awfully high for a slow-paced map like this; you've got a lot of NCs to compensate but when the rate of NCs slows down (like at the first Kiai section), the rate of HP recovery can be extremely slow.OK,low down to OD6 but AR and HP dose not change

00:09:397 (4,1) - These two are sort of just awkwardly touching. Space them out a bit more.OK Fixed
00:50:647 (5,6) - ^ hum....But how to change it
00:39:397 (6) - Move slightly to the right to blanket (3,4,5) better. Sorry if this is a bit nitpicky, but your other blankets are so perfect, I thought I should point these out.ok
00:46:147 (1) - Move slightly up and to the right to blanket (5) better.ok

[General]

Your mapping is very clean and organized, and the flow is logical and easy to read. Overall, these are relaxing and enjoyable maps to play through, great job!Thank you ~
and thank you for your mod~

diamdiam wrote:

victorica's Normal:
01:22:147 (82147|1) - move to 3 or 4

victorica's Hard:
00:06:912 (6912|0) -

00:11:459 (11459|3,11553|2) -

01:22:022 (82022|3,82053|2,82084|1,82147|3) -

Simple_Star wrote:

Victorica's Normal
OD6
01:06:772 - 建议去掉1个Notefixed
01:14:647 - 加1个Notefixed
01:25:147 - 感觉有些微妙··但是窝想不出有更好的排列了(意义不明)咱也觉的这样最好了。

Vicorica's Hard

00:07:053 (7053|2,7147|2) - 嗯..这边的连点..有些微妙 不过没什么问题
00:11:459 (11459|2) - 右移1格fixed
00:11:553 (11553|3) - 左移1格fixed

很好的谱子. Standard模式也做得很好 加油

MgerSy wrote:

4K db hard :
01:00:537 (60537|1) - 这个有点阴，建议跟01:00:584 (60584|2) - 反过来。

其他基本看不出有什么问题

Spy wrote:

Hello!from mod request

[victorica's Normal]
00:30:584 (30584|1) - 貌似沒音? 这里有音
00:47:647 - 這裡有長音，比較適合拉長條。 这边原来我也想啦条子的。。但是想来想去还是决定用拍砖了。
01:25:147 (85147|0,85209|1,85272|2) - 以Normal來說的話我不建議階梯。。stress 这边不用阶梯的话有点不知道怎么写了
[victorica's Hard]
00:11:553 (11553|3) - 這一個好像有點陰險。。放心 BPM80 不要紧的 （雾


其他的都很好。加油

richardfeder wrote:

骗kd骗kd~
mania模式的一些mod,只是参考意见哦w

SPOILER

db‘s 4k HD
00:04:147 (4147|1) - 拉长到00:04:615 - ,同时00:04:522 (4522|2) - 缩短到00:04:615 -开始fixed

00:09:397 (9397|1,9490|2,9584|3,9772|2,9865|1,9959|0) - 那个,这里怎么跟你说呢,这里提琴只有四个音高,不是六个www不知道怎么贴图解释怨念实际应该是四个长条,每个长条都跟00:09:959 (9959|0) - 一样是四分之一timing,这里拉六个肯定是不对的希望db考虑一下 这边我在50%听的时候 我感觉音色是和我谱的一样的。所以我还是觉得不改了

00:24:397 (24397|3) - 加一个notefixed
00:25:147 (25147|1) - ^fixed
既然你00:25:897 -和00:26:647 -这两个重音都是双note的话就不要留例外了吧wwwfixed

00:27:772 (27772|2,27772|3) - 那个...这里不用放两个吧...? 我觉得这里应该和00:27:959 (27959|1) - 一样放一个(都不是重拍),倒是00:28:147 -考虑一下放两个wwfixed

00:41:647 (41647|1) - 挪到3...? 右手有点寂寞~fixed

01:00:022 (60022|0) - 好黑啊XD这个给右手吧fixed

其他感觉没什么违和了XD加油rank!

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi M4M from your queue

general

- it's still in WIP move it to pending
- you should find a whistle who fit the guitar at beginning, it really need something here
- opening instead of OP in tags
- it's 猫物語 not 猫物语
- also we can now put the original name in source so you can put "猫物語" in source and move "nekomonogatari" in tags but not obligatory Okay
- 00:12:959 - any reason for this kiai time ? '-' not really neededwell,for its fountain

Easy

- 00:08:647 (3,4) - delete, then 00:07:147 (1,2) - copy/paste for symmetry ? well，adjust
- 00:12:397 (3) - in this way, increase the flowconsidered

SPOILER

- 00:19:897 (1,2,3) - i prefer like, better flow imo not bad

SPOILER

- 00:37:147 (1) - finishok
- 01:08:647 (1) - finish on tail ok
- 01:10:897 (1) - move to x:31y:192^
- 01:19:147 (4) - finish^
- 01:22:147 (1) - whistle on tail^
- 01:23:647 (2) - whistle on head/reverse/tail^

Normal

- 00:04:147 (1,2) - nazi but the center of those sliders is not really on the Y axis >.<....
- 00:12:397 (4) - in this way for a better flow ok

SPOILER

- 00:29:647 (3) - same issu about flowhum...no change

SPOILER

- 00:37:147 (2) - finish on head
- 00:52:147 (2) - a straight slider hereok

SPOILER

- 00:58:897 (2,3) - what about this rythm ?not bad , but I'll not change it

SPOILER

- 01:00:397 - also you're using a whistle in your easy diff so you be one here too i guess
- 01:08:647 (1) - finish on endok
- 01:19:147 (2) - ^ on head^
- 01:22:522 (2) - whistle head and tail ?
- 01:23:647 (1) - whistle tail

?

Hard

- 00:01:147 (1,2) - you should not overlap them kinda ugly imo deliberate
- 00:29:647 (1,2) - use DS 0,8 same as the next note Fixed
- 00:37:147 (1) - finish on head ok
- 00:59:647 (5) - whistle instead of clap on tail^
- 01:18:772 (1) - finish on tail^
well it's a diff is nice, but a bit overmapper imo, i mean there is lot of triplet who doesn't follow the song, like:
- 00:20:272 (3,4,5) -
- 00:23:647 (2,3,4) - a little...no problem~
- and many more

thX for mod~and star
and that's all for me good luck for rank :3
have a star o/

1. Some of the background images you used are of size 882*662. I wonder if these can be consistent as those 1024*768.
2. 猫物語 黑 in the tag can be removed since it duplicates with that in source.
3. The first really short kiai time is quite unnecessary imo. It is just the beginning of lyrics and nothing special.

1. 00:10:147 (1) - this slider fails to capture the guitar sound there at 00:10:897. I treat the previous sliders' pattern following the guitar, so I expect the same technique is being applied here. Try to change the shape of the slider or makes it like this:
   
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2. 00:42:397 (6) - the shape of this seems not aesthetic, maybe copy 00:41:647 (5) or as below?
   
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1. One important point is there are too many SV changes. In most of the cases, Normal is not recommended to have SV change. If there is, only two alternating SV values would be found in most cases. For example, 0.75x and 1.0x. Therefore, I wonder if your Normal diff is too harsh for newbies and difficult for them to notice there SV changes though the BPM is really low.
   
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2. 00:10:147 (1) - I think the position and also coordinates of nodes of this slider can be improved. Try to make a blanket with the previous slider like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:647 (2,1) - This flow is a bit weird imo. Try this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Same as Normal, I don't think such frequent changes in SV can be acceptable in an EASY difficulty. Try make them consistent and same SV is far enough to express the music gracefully for this song.
   
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KevinKang wrote:

hi~虽然很想mod另一首初音的,但是那首真的已经很棒了
[Easy]
00:07:147 (1,4) - 这两个note感觉坐在同一水平线上更好,或者干脆00:08:647 (3) - 下调一点,那样整体上比较美观 ok
00:25:897 (1) - 其实也无关紧要,我不知道你这里有没有包住前一个note的想法,毕竟你的blanket都很棒
[Normal]
00:10:147 (1) - 从这里开始用鼓的音效并不是太好吧,我建议把鼓的音效放到00:11:272 (4) - 这个是要有鼓声的 因为是一个长滑条的开始
01:08:647 (1) - 最后那个finish希望能减点音量ok
01:13:897 (3) - 好像忘记加clap了。。是呢
[Hard]
00:34:147 (3,4) - 一个是257一个是258（看来我真的有强迫症）
00:40:709 (3) - 这个note我比较纠结,我不知道加上还是拿掉好 将歌词的转音map上了
01:25:147 (1) - 最后的转盘为什么跟其他难度不一样加了个whistlefixed
非常棒的op跟图>.<

Kazey wrote:

From Mod4Mod !

Can't mod mania'difficulties, sorry.

[General]
Switch off Letterbox during breaks, you don't have. (Song Setup =>Design)OK~

[Easy]
01:26:647 : Move the green tick properly please. (Actually: 01:26:653)you are so attentive
Just perfect to me.

[Normal]
00:27:772 (1) : Remove NC.
01:16:897 : Try this pattern, yours is too loud to me. considering
01:26:647 : Same as Easy.

[Hard]
00:22:147 (1,2,3,4) : These jumps are too weird. Re-make this more beautiful, or change totally.(Spacing)ok
00:40:522 (2,3) : Maybe change this, I prefer. changed some
01:09:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : The sound is strange, try to remake.but howT T
01:20:647 (5,6,7) : Maybe move this patter like this. More beautiful lollol
01:26:647 : Same as other difficulties.orz

That's good, nice skin! Hope you get this rank!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from your m4m queue.

[General]

1. Some of the background images you used are of size 882*662. I wonder if these can be consistent as those 1024*768.
2. 猫物語 黑 in the tag can be removed since it duplicates with that in source.ok
3. The first really short kiai time is quite unnecessary imo. It is just the beginning of lyrics and nothing special.喷泉

[Hard]

1. 00:10:147 (1) - this slider fails to capture the guitar sound there at 00:10:897. I treat the previous sliders' pattern following the guitar, so I expect the same technique is being applied here. Try to change the shape of the slider or makes it like this:do some changes
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:397 (6) - the shape of this seems not aesthetic, maybe copy 00:41:647 (5) or as below? do some changes here
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. One important point is there are too many SV changes. In most of the cases, Normal is not recommended to have SV change. If there is, only two alternating SV values would be found in most cases. For example, 0.75x and 1.0x. Therefore, I wonder if your Normal diff is too harsh for newbies and difficult for them to notice there SV changes though the BPM is really low.just some sv changes at the beginning,and spacing looks no problem
   
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2. 00:10:147 (1) - I think the position and also coordinates of nodes of this slider can be improved. Try to make a blanket with the previous slider like this:
   
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3. 00:14:647 (2,1) - This flow is a bit weird imo. Try this? awesome
   
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. Same as Normal, I don't think such frequent changes in SV can be acceptable in an EASY difficulty. Try make them consistent and same SV is far enough to express the music gracefully for this song.^
   
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Generally, a pretty good mapset!! Good luck for ranking