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Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
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22:49 AliomLoung: 你好^^
22:49 Zero__wind: 0.0 好
22:51 AliomLoung: 我想請你幫我MOD 不知道方不方便!!><
22:51 Zero__wind: np plz
22:51 *AliomLoung is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/277441 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)]
22:52 AliomLoung: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/105765
22:52 Zero__wind: ORZ不笑猫
22:52 AliomLoung: 這個才對0.0
22:52 AliomLoung: 摁QAQ
22:52 Zero__wind: 第一遍那个也是对的啊……
22:53 AliomLoung: 摁摁XD
22:53 Zero__wind: 你要irc？
22:54 AliomLoung: 摁
22:54 Zero__wind: 哦 等我找耳机
22:54 AliomLoung: 我還只是個菜鳥mapper><
22:54 Zero__wind: 嗯看出来了……
22:54 Zero__wind: 没事
22:55 Zero__wind: 好了
22:55 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/277526 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size) [Hard]]
22:56 AliomLoung: !!
22:56 Zero__wind: 呃不要鸡冻…我们慢慢来
22:57 Zero__wind: 首先你bg的尺寸是不符合要求的
22:57 AliomLoung: 摁bg(記下
22:57 AliomLoung: 1024x768 或800X600??
22:57 Zero__wind: 1024*768 或者1366*768是推荐的
22:57 Zero__wind: 800*600也可以 不过毕竟效果不太好
22:58 AliomLoung: 摁摁
22:58 Zero__wind: mp3没问题
22:58 AliomLoung: 偷來的= =
22:58 Zero__wind: 嗯`w`
22:59 Zero__wind: 然后是关于设定
22:59 AliomLoung: 我只知道有問題是音效....
22:59 Zero__wind: source和tags是没问题的
23:00 Zero__wind: 三维也没问题
23:00 Zero__wind: lead-in没设
23:00 Zero__wind: 在F4的audio选项卡的底下那个lead-in
23:01 Zero__wind: 像这种图从歌曲刚开始的地方就开始的情况 需要设lead-in来给玩家准备的时间
23:01 AliomLoung: 摁
23:01 Zero__wind: 像你这个离开头只有半秒左右的情况 最好把lead-in 拉到2那个位置
23:01 AliomLoung: 上次有人建議說不要用....
23:01 Zero__wind: 记得所有diff都要统一 包括guest I
23:02 Zero__wind: 那他是来坑爹的
23:02 Zero__wind: 你自己test过就知道了……
23:03 Zero__wind: 然后combo color也没有设=。= 嘛 可以选一些和bg搭配的颜色
23:03 Zero__wind: 这个自己看着办就好了
23:03 AliomLoung: diff .guest I?
23:03 AliomLoung: 顏色呀 ..
23:03 Zero__wind: 就是说lead-in 你所有难度的设定都要一致
23:03 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:04 Zero__wind: 那个别人给你做的Insane也要一致
23:04 Zero__wind: combo color也是
23:04 Zero__wind: 默认毕竟……不太合适的感觉
23:04 AliomLoung: 好的
23:05 Zero__wind: 然后是F4里面的design 把enable countown和letterbox during breaks都取消
23:05 Zero__wind: 所有难度都取消
23:05 Zero__wind: 这些设定所有难度都要统一
23:06 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:06 Zero__wind: 嗯好现在来看图
23:07 AliomLoung: 統一完畢!!
23:07 Zero__wind: 嗯 现在从Hard开始说
23:08 AliomLoung: 好的~~
23:09 Zero__wind: 00:11:842 - 这里之前
23:09 AliomLoung: 摁?
23:09 Zero__wind: 建议不加clap 因为音乐里没有适合的音
23:10 AliomLoung: 等下.....我重上傳一下...我這個記得上去取消掉了...
23:10 Zero__wind: 你把它之后的一些东西删掉 听音乐 比如 00:12:191 - , 00:12:889 - 这些地方都是有明显适合加clap的鼓音的
23:10 Zero__wind: 在这之前是没有的 所以建议就不加了
23:10 AliomLoung: 上次有些地方改玩忘了上傳...
23:11 Zero__wind: 可以现在传 我更新一下
23:11 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:12 Zero__wind: 00:00:680 (1) - 头上加个finish比较合适
23:12 AliomLoung: 好的
23:12 Zero__wind: 这种重音的地方
23:13 Zero__wind: 传得动么 传不动就算了 官网今天比较傲娇
23:14 AliomLoung: 可以 只有一點點而已
23:15 Zero__wind: 嗯 更新了
23:15 Zero__wind: 好 继续~
23:15 AliomLoung: p4
23:16 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:16 Zero__wind: 关于clap的事情 继续说完
23:17 AliomLoung: 好^^
23:17 Zero__wind: 那个鼓是从00:11:842 (1) - 这个地方才开始有的 你可以…唔 感受一下
23:17 Zero__wind: 从00:12:191 - 这条白线开始
23:18 AliomLoung: 我去拿一下耳機
23:18 Zero__wind: 这个地方加clap 然后隔一条白线 00:12:889 - 加一个clap
23:18 Zero__wind: 就是这样每隔一条白线加一个clap
23:18 AliomLoung: 摁
23:19 Zero__wind: 嗯记住了的话就自己改咯owo 你自己所有难度 都是这样
23:20 AliomLoung: 摁好的
23:20 Zero__wind: 听00:07:656 - 这里
23:21 Zero__wind: 这个是适合加finish的音
23:21 Zero__wind: 尤其非常像soft finish的效果
23:22 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:22 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3Mfre.jpg
23:22 Zero__wind: 但是如果不要normal的音效声音可能会太轻了 所以你可以这样
23:22 Zero__wind: 00:09:052 - 这个地方也是完全一样的
23:23 Zero__wind: 还有00:09:749 -
23:23 Zero__wind: 如果听不清音乐就先把那个地方的东西暂时删掉了听
23:24 AliomLoung: 哪個地方
23:24 Zero__wind: 就我上面发的那两个时间点咯
23:24 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:24 Zero__wind: 也都是适合加soft finish的
23:25 Zero__wind: 类似的地方自己去找;w;
23:25 AliomLoung: 好的
23:25 Zero__wind: finish是新人最容易漏掉的音效
23:25 AliomLoung: 音效不太會配xd
23:26 Zero__wind: clap和finish都给你讲明白了 自己耐心一点慢慢来就好了
23:26 Zero__wind: 然后说一下whistle
23:26 AliomLoung: 哨子我幾乎都在來回用= =
23:27 Zero__wind: 嗯 normal的whistle的话 怎么说呢 确实不太好讲 ORZ
23:27 Zero__wind: 最好是可以有规律地加 或者说是系统地加
23:27 Zero__wind: 不然一会儿突然冒出两声什么的 会有点奇怪
23:27 AliomLoung: 系統加?
23:28 Zero__wind: 就是指用whistle来打一个特定的节奏
23:28 Zero__wind: 这样的感觉
23:28 Zero__wind: 那个节奏要保持固定
23:28 AliomLoung: 了解!!
23:29 Zero__wind: 这个刚开始确实不太容易 你可以考虑先不要用whistle 或者怎么说 至少多看一些别人的图来体会一下…这样
23:29 Zero__wind: 这个就先不多说了
23:29 AliomLoung: 摁
23:30 Zero__wind: 00:07:133 (2,3,4) - 这个间距的连打在Hard里有点太难了
23:31 Zero__wind: 这样的连打都统一改成0.6的间距 就还不错
23:31 AliomLoung: 要怎麼改呢?
23:31 Zero__wind: 0.6的间距呀
23:31 Zero__wind: 你现在选择00:07:220 (3) -
23:32 Zero__wind: 你看右上角的地方不是有prev 1.25x next 1.20x么
23:32 AliomLoung: 選了
23:32 Zero__wind: 就是指它离前一个note是1.25倍滑条速度的间距 离后面的note是1.20倍 这样
23:32 Zero__wind: 这个间距太大了
23:33 Zero__wind: 你让00:07:133 (2,3,4) - 它们3个之间的间距缩小到0.60x 这样 就比较合适
23:33 Zero__wind: 你选中00:07:133 (2,3,4) -
23:33 Zero__wind: CTRL+SHIFT+S
23:33 Zero__wind: 然后在那个窗口里面选0.5x 就是间距减半
23:34 Zero__wind: 那个弹窗的左下 选sellection center
23:34 Zero__wind: 是表示改变间距之后你选中的第一个东西的位置不变
23:34 AliomLoung: 摁
23:35 Zero__wind: 如果选playfield center的话是指向中心按比例移动了
23:35 Zero__wind: 嘛 总之就是把它们3个的间距缩小一些…就是这个意思
23:36 Zero__wind: 00:11:842 (1) - 它的头上 这种新段落开始的地方加finish 是比较必要的
23:36 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:37 Zero__wind: 00:16:377 (1,2,3) - 这些相互之间产生关联的slider 弧度尽量保持一致性 会比较整洁美观
23:37 AliomLoung: 摁摁 以加1!
23:38 AliomLoung: 以換成00:17:075 (3) -
23:39 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3MfZ5.jpg 随便给你画个例子
23:39 Zero__wind: 当然你可以想一些更好的排列
23:40 Zero__wind: 00:26:842 (1,2) -
23:40 Zero__wind: 应该把NC挪到2上
23:40 Zero__wind: 00:27:889 (1,3) - 这里应该把NC挪到3上
23:40 Zero__wind: 从重音起NC是比较基础的一种方式
23:41 AliomLoung: 摁><
23:42 Zero__wind: 00:34:517 (6,7,1) - 这个地方要好好的叠起来呀…不要只叠两个
23:42 Zero__wind: 这样太难了
23:42 Zero__wind: 或者你让00:34:517 (6,7,1) - 之间相等间距也可以 还是保持0.6x
23:42 Zero__wind: 而且另外
23:42 Zero__wind: 这里加连打本来也不太合适呀=。=
23:43 Zero__wind: 你把它们删掉的话…音乐里面这个地方没有适合放3连的音效
23:43 AliomLoung: 摁摁
23:43 Zero__wind: 你子啊00:33:557 - 这里加个circle构成个三连还更名正言顺一些
23:43 Zero__wind: 这里本来就有个鼓的3连打
23:43 Zero__wind: 当然如果你要改的话就需要改一下排列
23:44 AliomLoung: 00:34:517 (6,7,1) - 剛剛這個地方
23:44 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3Mgbj.jpg
23:44 Zero__wind: 嗯
23:44 AliomLoung: 改成1個Slider會比較好嗎?
23:44 Zero__wind: 那个地方其实不适合放连打的
23:44 Zero__wind: 嗯
23:45 AliomLoung: 1/1的
23:45 Zero__wind: 1/2……
23:45 Zero__wind: 另外
23:45 AliomLoung: 00:34:866 - 這邊需要家note?
23:45 Zero__wind: 00:34:168 (5,1) - NC应该挪到5
23:46 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3MgfJ.jpg
23:46 Zero__wind: 这样 很好改啊
23:47 Zero__wind: 加NC的事情啊 你就看着时间轴上的长白线来加 这样是很简单而且很稳妥的
23:48 AliomLoung: 好的
23:48 Zero__wind: 比如00:28:586 (3) - 这里 800:30:331 (2) - ，00:32:773 (1) -
23:48 Zero__wind: 这样 在这些长白线的地方加
23:48 Zero__wind: 自己改
23:49 AliomLoung: 改襖了
23:49 Zero__wind: 00:53:703 (1,2) - 这种嵌套 离得太近了 不好看
23:49 Zero__wind: 分开一些
23:49 Zero__wind: 00:54:226 (2,1) - 这里又很莫名离太近
23:50 Zero__wind: 让00:54:924 (1) - 和00:54:226 (2,2) - 想等间距不是很好嘛
23:50 Zero__wind: 间距太大
23:50 Zero__wind: 01:14:110 (3,4,5) -
23:50 Zero__wind: 01:16:552 (3) - 这种的弧度太大了不好看
23:51 Zero__wind: Hard其他地方问题还不算很大
23:51 Zero__wind: 因为…那个 我被母亲大人勒令去洗澡=。=所以…你可以先自己改一下NC还有音效 还有我上面说的那些地方
23:51 AliomLoung: nc 音效..
23:51 Zero__wind: 慢慢来 不要着急0.0
23:52 AliomLoung: 好的xddd
23:52 AliomLoung: 00:54:924 (1) -
23:52 AliomLoung: 這邊都是用ctrl+shift+s去改嗎
00:15 Zero__wind: back :3 嗯？ 这个手动摆一下就好咯
00:16 AliomLoung: 我有讓他變速
00:16 AliomLoung: 變緩慢 但是間距有縮小= =
00:16 Zero__wind: 我知道
00:16 Zero__wind: 感觉贴着不太舒服
00:16 Zero__wind: 你根据你以前的间距相应调整一下就好了
00:17 Zero__wind: 比如你sv 1.0的时候用1.2x的间距 你这一段sv 0.75了 可以用1.5x的间距
00:18 AliomLoung: 摁摁了解
00:18 Zero__wind: 比如这样 http://puu.sh/3MhoE.jpg
00:25 AliomLoung: 好了
00:25 Zero__wind: 呃Hard还有什么问题么 或者说 我们接着说Normal
00:26 AliomLoung: 我看一下
00:26 AliomLoung: 我只想問一下排列這樣還可以嗎??
00:26 AliomLoung: 還是說有些不符合規定的??
00:27 Zero__wind: 没有unrankable 不过这已经是很底限的要求了
00:27 AliomLoung: 摁摁
00:27 Zero__wind: 嗯 再多吐槽一下
00:27 Zero__wind: 00:10:273 (4) -
00:28 Zero__wind: 这个的尾巴的位置太高了以至于它碰到了血条
00:28 Zero__wind: 于是乎你最好调整一下
00:28 AliomLoung: 好
00:29 Zero__wind: 当你在使用左半边 （横坐标不大于256）的时候 一定注意尽量避免让任何东西的纵坐标小于12
00:29 Zero__wind: 不然基本上会碰到血条的
00:29 AliomLoung: 好了 條好了^^
00:29 AliomLoung: 好的
00:30 Zero__wind: 这些都是新人注意不到的东西=。=因为他们作图一般都不test……
00:30 AliomLoung: 對了可以 一個地方家2個音效嗎或者?
00:30 Zero__wind: 00:18:645 (1) - 这个也是同样的问题
00:30 Zero__wind: 当然 如果合适的话
00:30 Zero__wind: 比如你想加在哪里？
00:31 AliomLoung: 我找一下
00:31 AliomLoung: 啊沒事 我看錯了= =
00:32 AliomLoung: 00:20:214 (1) - 剛剛有說 要隔一條白線 我這邊剛好像案到鼓聲finish..
00:32 Zero__wind: 00:50:738 - 这里建议加个circle
00:33 Zero__wind: 00:57:017 (2,1) - 这种不必要的覆盖尽量避免 不美观
00:33 AliomLoung: 摁剛剛條位子已經條好了^^
00:33 Zero__wind: 01:02:075 (1,2,3) - 这个blancket的间距也太近了 和00:53:703 (1,2) - 这里一样 分开一些会更好看
00:34 AliomLoung: 變速這邊我都條好了
00:34 AliomLoung: 距離該拉的都拉開了
00:34 Zero__wind: 01:04:168 (1,2,3) -
00:34 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3Mi1b.jpg
00:34 AliomLoung: 這邊??這樣配不好嗎??
00:34 Zero__wind: 不好看
00:35 Zero__wind: 嘛 其实我截图也没太修好
00:36 Zero__wind: 这种东西怎么摆呢 你看我截图 你要让01:03:819 (6) - 的尾巴 和01:04:168 (1) - 的头 和01:04:517 (2) - 的头 还有01:04:866 (3) - 成一个距离均匀的曲线 就比较好了
00:40 Zero__wind: 0.0
00:40 AliomLoung: !!
00:40 Zero__wind: 咦 刚才我也掉线了
00:40 Zero__wind: 这种东西怎么摆呢 你看我截图 你要让01:03:819 (6) - 的尾巴 和01:04:168 (1) - 的头 和01:04:517 (2) - 的头 还有01:04:866 (3) - 成一个距离均匀的曲线 就比较好了
00:40 Zero__wind: 这个地方=。=
00:41 Zero__wind: 我刚才那个截图你收到了吧
00:41 AliomLoung: 摁摁ˋ
00:41 AliomLoung: 收到了
00:42 Zero__wind: 01:05:563 (1,2) - 呃 还真有unrankable 刚才匆匆忙忙地没注意到
00:42 Zero__wind: 这2个slider unsnapped呀
00:42 AliomLoung: 摁 ??
00:42 Zero__wind: 长度不对 你没发现尾巴都没有压在时间轴的线上么
00:43 AliomLoung: 拉錯........
00:43 Zero__wind: 嗯
00:44 AliomLoung: 2個都是拉1/2?
00:46 Zero__wind: 嗯
00:47 Zero__wind: 01:05:825 - 这里可以加一个circle构成3连 如果你想
00:48 Zero__wind: 还有就是…01:05:563 (1,2) - finish不要加在滑条身上 这样加的话就头尾都有finish 你还连着加=。= ORZ 耳朵要炸了
00:49 AliomLoung: 摁摁 前面滑條有加的幾乎都刪光了
00:50 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3Mizv.jpg 可以搞个这样的东西
00:51 Zero__wind: 当然你可以画得比我好看一点=。= 我美死早……
00:51 AliomLoung: xd
00:52 Zero__wind: 那…Normal ?
00:53 AliomLoung: 用1.5x好像被ˋ拉開了
00:53 Zero__wind: 呃
00:53 Zero__wind: 连打就统一0.6x间距就好了
00:53 AliomLoung: 摁
00:54 Zero__wind: 改好没？
00:54 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/277441 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size) [Normal]]
00:56 AliomLoung: 好了
00:56 Zero__wind: 嗯好 那就说Normal了
00:57 Zero__wind: 三维的话 把AR改成5
00:57 Zero__wind: 是比较标准的设定
00:58 AliomLoung: 摁
00:58 Zero__wind: 和Hard一样的东西我就不讲了 你自己慢慢来 clap呀 finish呀 NC呀 这些东西
00:58 AliomLoung: 好
00:59 Zero__wind: 00:29:982 (4) - 这种不算长 又多次折返的滑条 在Easy和Normal里面是最好避免用的
01:00 Zero__wind: 因为新手没有足够的时间去反应到底需不需要再折返一次
01:00 Zero__wind: 如果是长一些的滑条 或者在高难度的话 倒还好
01:00 AliomLoung: 摁
01:01 Zero__wind: 让它少折返一次 加一个circle 或者改成2个slider 就好
01:01 Zero__wind: 排列需要相应地改一改 自己想想 这里很容易改的
01:01 Zero__wind: 因为00:28:935 (1) - 这里开始的位置是可以随意调的 所以后面的东西也很好调
01:02 AliomLoung: 摁摁
01:02 AliomLoung: 我改一下
01:02 Zero__wind: 嗯 不着急
01:02 Zero__wind: 00:40:273 (1) - 这个起拍的位置是不准的
01:02 Zero__wind: 应该从00:40:098 - 这里开始
01:03 AliomLoung: 00:32:773 (4) - 這個會太長嗎
01:03 Zero__wind: 没关系
01:03 AliomLoung: 摁
01:03 Zero__wind: 呃 其实还是确实有点长
01:03 Zero__wind: 在Easy出现可能会更好一些
01:03 Zero__wind: 在Normal的话 有点太简单
01:04 Zero__wind: 确实最好把它拆分一下
01:04 AliomLoung: 把他改成2個1/1會比較好嗎
01:05 Zero__wind: 可以
01:07 Zero__wind: 00:48:470 (1) - 这个spinner怎么说呢 开始和结束的地方都有点奇怪
01:08 Zero__wind: 你想用它来跟背景音乐的旋律音对吗？那我建议你让它从00:48:296 - 开始 然后到00:50:563 - 再结束
01:08 Zero__wind: 这样会比较自然
01:09 Zero__wind: 00:50:563 (1) - 这个改成从00:50:912 - 这里开始的一个1/1 slider
01:09 AliomLoung: 摁
01:09 Zero__wind: 这样可以兼顾到00:50:912 - 这里的重音
01:10 Zero__wind: 需要注意的是你00:50:912 - 这个地方起的那个1/1 slider 起点要尽量靠近中心 不一定要完全是中间 但是要靠近 不然就太难了
01:10 Zero__wind: 因为离前面的spinner只有一拍的间隔
01:11 Zero__wind: 诶等下 1/1 slider节奏不太好
01:11 AliomLoung: 摁改好了^^
01:11 Zero__wind: 应该用3/2 slider
01:12 AliomLoung: 100:50:912 (1) - 結束?
01:12 Zero__wind: 这个样子 http://puu.sh/3Mjix.jpg
01:13 AliomLoung: 我家電腦跑比較慢 所以圖可能會出現比較久 sor><
01:13 AliomLoung: 如果圖還沒出來就先改下一地方吧><
01:13 Zero__wind: 没事
01:14 Zero__wind: 我的意思就是00:50:912 - 这里开始的滑条 到00:51:435 - 再结束 00:51:610 (2) - 的时间点不变
01:14 Zero__wind: 这样节奏比较好
01:15 Zero__wind: 相似地 把00:53:703 (1) - 拉长到00:54:226 - 结束会更好
01:15 AliomLoung: 摁
01:16 Zero__wind: 其他的就还好了
01:16 Zero__wind: 间距没有乱摆 不错~
01:17 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/277440 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size) [Easy]]
01:18 Zero__wind: 00:34:691 (1) - 这个红线开始不太好 你就像00:28:935 (1) - 还有00:40:447 (1) - 这些地方一样模糊处理就好了
01:18 AliomLoung: 好的
01:18 Zero__wind: 让它从白线的重音开始
01:18 Zero__wind: 00:45:854 (1) - 这个也是
01:19 Zero__wind: 改了之后注意间距
01:19 Zero__wind: 00:52:133 (2,2) - 这两个我觉得没问题
01:19 Zero__wind: 只是不要像前面那样 红线起拍
01:20 Zero__wind: 01:17:424 (1) - 这个在01:18:121 - 这里结束会好一些吧
01:21 Zero__wind: 然后就没什么别的了 注意保持和间距 稳定NC 规律clap 不要漏finish 就OK
01:21 AliomLoung: 摁
01:21 Zero__wind: 那就先这样咯？
01:22 Zero__wind: 你有的可改咯 =。=
01:25 AliomLoung: 有
01:25 AliomLoung: 還在改當中
01:27 Zero__wind: 嗯~慢慢来吧 不着急
01:27 Zero__wind: 我去post了哈
01:27 AliomLoung: 好xd

加油`w`
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
作为新手图目测还不错:3
[IL]
哨子不要乱用，注意包好，有的地方可以空拍有的地方不可以空拍，多做几张图就能明白:3
00:33:557 - note
[Hard]
开始部分可以用用clap:3
00:00:680 (1) - 改成折返，ctrl+G，记得重新加音效:3
00:05:389 (3,4,5) - 从-.-变成.-- （.note -slider）
00:07:133 (2,3,4) - clap最好不要连续用
00:16:377 (1) - 拉得太急了不好看2 3同理，后面还有很多
00:42:191 (2) - 拖到合适的时间点按照3的approachcircle摆能好看很多，4 5同理，后面依旧很多，自己改，不一一指出了 前面也有不少
00:36:435 (2) - finish建议一拍内（两条白线之间）1个
01:25:098 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891333
[Normal]
01:02:075 (1,2,3) - 你猜我想说什么:3
[Easy]
有的滑条都缩成一团了:3
01:09:052 (1) - 比如这个……
注意美观:3
努力吧:3
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ts8zs wrote:

作为新手图目测还不错:3 Thank ><
[IL]
哨子不要乱用，注意包好，有的地方可以空拍有的地方不可以空拍，多做几张图就能明白:3
00:33:557 - note ok><
[Hard]
开始部分可以用用clap:3
00:00:680 (1) - 改成折返，ctrl+G，记得重新加音效:3 ok><
00:05:389 (3,4,5) - 从-.-变成.-- （.note -slider）ok><
00:07:133 (2,3,4) - clap最好不要连续用 ok><
00:16:377 (1) - 拉得太急了不好看2 3同理，后面还有很多 ><
00:42:191 (2) - 拖到合适的时间点按照3的approachcircle摆能好看很多，4 5同理，后面依旧很多，自己改，不一一指出了 前面也有不少><
00:36:435 (2) - finish建议一拍内（两条白线之间）1个 ok><
01:25:098 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891333 ok><
[Normal]
01:02:075 (1,2,3) - 你猜我想说什么:3 ok><
[Easy]
有的滑条都缩成一团了:3
01:09:052 (1) - 比如这个…… ><
注意美观:3
努力吧:3
Thank you ^^
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
HI~
IN-GAME request

建议将sliderside静音

[IL's Insane]
音效
这首歌用哨音感觉会毁歌 不建议常用
finsh音可以放在长白线上
音效的轻重要注意合BGM变化
KIAI中可以放2|4的clap

排列
建议弯拉条对应弯的移动连打
大跳的话要注意DS 不要过度
NC的话如果没有排列上的规律建议根据节拍小节更改
01:26:930 (8) - 没摆好

这个insane感觉不太会mod…提下大体的建议了


[Hard]
音效
00:06:261 (1) - 从开始到这里的建议音量调低些
试试KIAI部分2|4拍音效
finish同insane建议

排列
可以多设些梗 例如00:08:005 (2) 可以ctrl+G
再比如 00:19:168 (2) 可以和 00:18:121 (3) 的尾重合

总体建议是多加些梗 增加的图趣味（但是要慎用


[Normal]
音效建议看Hard

排列
01:06:261 (1) - 包含住(4)的尾


[MmC's Easy]
00:47:424 (2) - 可以延长至两拍
00:48:470 (1) - spinner从00:48:470 开始 到00:50:214 结束
01:14:633 (1,2,3) - 替换成一个长拉条（与前一致
01:27:889 (2) - easy尽量不重叠


[Beginner]
AR-2
00:05:912 (3) - Beginner最好不出现一分以上（包括一分
00:16:028 (3,1) - ^
00:45:680 (1,1) - ^
01:11:493 (3) - ^
01:16:377 (2) - ^
01:22:656 (3) - ^
01:26:145 (2) - ^
01:27:540 (2) - ^
00:38:354 (1) - 最多两次折返
00:50:912 (1) - 从00:50:912 开始,后面00:52:482 (2) - 从00:52:482 开始00:53:005 结束
00:56:493 (1,2) - 换做一个拉条


orz感觉看不出什么啊…提提建议了
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

yf_bmp wrote:

[MmC's Easy]
00:47:424 (2) - 可以延长至两拍 紅線有點不對拍, 不變動
00:48:470 (1) - spinner从00:48:470 开始 到00:50:214 结束 不了, 有點短
01:14:633 (1,2,3) - 替换成一个长拉条（与前一致 不了, 若之後還有提出會考慮看看
01:27:889 (2) - easy尽量不重叠 這個還好, 不改
都沒變動到, 但還是謝mod.
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

yf_bmp wrote:

HI~
IN-GAME request

建议将sliderside静音

[IL's Insane]
音效 ><OK
这首歌用哨音感觉会毁歌 不建议常用
finsh音可以放在长白线上
音效的轻重要注意合BGM变化
KIAI中可以放2|4的clap

排列
建议弯拉条对应弯的移动连打
大跳的话要注意DS 不要过度
NC的话如果没有排列上的规律建议根据节拍小节更改
01:26:930 (8) - 没摆好><OK

这个insane感觉不太会mod…提下大体的建议了


[Hard]
音效
00:06:261 (1) - 从开始到这里的建议音量调低些 OK
试试KIAI部分2|4拍音效
finish同insane建议

排列
可以多设些梗 例如00:08:005 (2) 可以ctrl+G
再比如 00:19:168 (2) 可以和 00:18:121 (3) 的尾重合
]

总体建议是多加些梗 增加的图趣味（但是要慎用
我覺得現在這樣就可以了!! 但我會試著嘗試看看的><


[Normal]
音效建议看Hard

排列
01:06:261 (1) - 包含住(4)的尾 ><OK

[Beginner]
AR-2 ><OK
00:05:912 (3) - Beginner最好不出现一分以上（包括一分 ><OK
00:16:028 (3,1) - ^ ><OK
00:45:680 (1,1) - ^ ><OK
01:11:493 (3) - ^ ><OK
01:16:377 (2) - ^ ><OK
01:22:656 (3) - ^ ><OK
01:26:145 (2) - ^ ><OK
01:27:540 (2) - ^ ><OK
00:38:354 (1) - 最多两次折返 ><OK
00:50:912 (1) - 从00:50:912 开始,后面00:52:482 (2) - 从00:52:482 开始00:53:005 结束 ><OK
00:56:493 (1,2) - 换做一个拉条 ><OK


orz感觉看不出什么啊…提提建议了
Thank you ^^
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623


req via ingame

General

  1. 把背景圖的png格式換成jpg格式 可以減少osz的file size
  2. Tags裡面的"- miomio chii -" 是一個人, 所以要把空格的都加" _ " , 即是" -_miomio_chii_- "
  3. Tags裡加個"op"

Beginner

  1. 花多點時間聽音樂, 會發現更多位置可以放finish, 例如 00:00:680 (1) 的開首, 00:07:656 (2) - , 00:11:842 (1) - 的開首 等等, 有空的話便把整幅圖細細看一遍便可以了;w;
  2. 00:38:354 (1) - Beginner的話, 個人覺得少點出現這種折返2次的滑條, 因為新手沒時間反應, 建議可以把它換成一條長的滑條, 延長至00:39:749 結束, 然後去掉NC, 滑條的形狀自己想, 像這樣 :
  3. 00:45:680 (1) - 這個放在 00:45:331 (3) 開始比較好, 跟一下拍子, 不然有違和感
  4. 00:47:424 (1) - 去掉這個NC, 感覺這裡沒什麼需要NC
  5. 01:24:226 (2) - 這裡跟白線會比較好, 畢竟前面用的一直是1/1, 這裡卻用了1/2, 一般來說被坑
  6. 01:26:493 (1) - 刪走NC

MmC's Easy

  1. 00:00:680 (1) - finish
  2. 00:06:261 (1) - ^
  3. 00:07:656 (2) - ^
  4. 00:11:842 (1) - ^
  5. 00:11:493 (1,1) - Easy的話新手應該看不了哪個才是第一個NC吧;w;
  6. 00:38:354 (1,2) - overlap了不好看
  7. 00:42:540 (1,2,1,2,3) - 好像放的太多notes, 可以把00:42:540 (1,2) 換成slider, 刪去NC
  8. 00:47:424 (2) - flow不好, 建議放在靠 00:46:028 (1) 的右邊
  9. 00:48:121 (1) - finish
  10. 00:50:912 (1) - 這段放不了claps的話改放whistle吧;w;
  11. 00:53:703 (3) - 這裡NC, 刪去00:54:924 (1) 的NC, 可以與你的NC pattern一致
  12. 00:56:493 (1) - Finish
  13. 01:09:052 (1,2) - ;w; 距離有點難讀
  14. 01:24:400 (1) - 刪去NC, NC在 01:25:796 (2)

Normal

  1. 同Beginner, 多放點finish
  2. 00:18:819 (3) - 這裡可以往左移一格, 把 00:18:470 (2) 包好點
  3. 00:44:284 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個可以放成正方形0 0
  4. 01:06:261 (1,2) - 不要overlap比較好看, 可以試試把 01:06:261 (1) - Ctrl H, Ctrl J 放去原位把 01:07:307 (2) 包住 :
    SPOILER
  5. 01:27:540 (3) - 把它把下一些?
    SPOILER

Hard

  1. 00:32:249 (4) - 放低一點與 00:31:377 (3) 做個blanket
    SPOILER
  2. 00:38:354 (4) - NC?
  3. 00:46:726 (5) - ^
  4. 00:49:517 (5) - ^
  5. 00:54:400 (2) - 同樣可以試試用 00:53:703 (1) 來包好它
  6. 01:01:726 (3) - 把它與 01:02:773 (3) 的開首 stack住?
  7. 01:13:063 (1) - 刪去這個的NC, 因為相同的地方你也沒有NC, 最好把它們的NC pattern一致點~
  8. 01:24:226 (1) - ^

IL's Insane

  • 感覺這個diff的排位有點亂, 像 00:40:098 (1,2,3,4) -, 這幾個滑條可以改一下形狀, 現在的有點單調
    跳的位置比較凌亂, 例如 00:33:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -, 玩的時候很坑 , 試試找點玩家試玩, 問一下他們的感覺也可以
  1. 00:05:563 (8) - 考慮這裡NC
  2. 00:20:912 (1) - ^
  3. 00:21:784 (9) - ^
  4. 00:06:610 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的跳放的不錯
  5. 00:30:156 (4,5,6) - 這裡突然換成單拍很怪, 不要跟vocal好一點
  6. 00:39:226 (8) - NC, 讓玩家知道這裡有跳
  7. 00:50:912 (6) - NC, 旋律換了
  8. 00:54:749 (6) - NC, 保持NC的pattern
  9. 01:11:319 (4) - Ctrl G吧, 前面一直跳, 這裡突然不跳會違和
  10. 01:15:331 (3,4) - 這裡的跳太大, 不太對音樂
  11. 01:27:017 (9) - 考慮NC
  12. 01:19:342 (2,3,4,5) - overmaped, 這裡應該用1/2做
    建議看一下ranked的圖怎樣放note, 不然幫不到你;w;

以上w~
加油
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

happy623 wrote:



req via ingame

General

  1. 把背景圖的png格式換成jpg格式 可以減少osz的file size
  2. Tags裡面的"- miomio chii -" 是一個人, 所以要把空格的都加" _ " , 即是" -_miomio_chii_- "
  3. Tags裡加個"op"

MmC's Easy

  1. 00:00:680 (1) - finish fixed
  2. 00:06:261 (1) - ^^
  3. 00:07:656 (2) - ^^
  4. 00:11:842 (1) - ^^
  5. 00:11:493 (1,1) - Easy的話新手應該看不了哪個才是第一個NC吧;w; remove NC
  6. 00:38:354 (1,2) - overlap了不好看 fixed
  7. 00:42:540 (1,2,1,2,3) - 好像放的太多notes, 可以把00:42:540 (1,2) 換成slider, 刪去NC fixed
  8. 00:47:424 (2) - flow不好, 建議放在靠 00:46:028 (1) 的右邊 fixed
  9. 00:48:121 (1) - finish fixed
  10. 00:50:912 (1) - 這後放不了claps的話改放whistle吧;w; 什麼意思?
  11. 00:53:703 (3) - 這裡NC, 刪去00:54:924 (1) 的NC, 可以與你的NC pattern一致 fixed
  12. 00:56:493 (1) - Finish fixed
  13. 01:09:052 (1,2) - ;w; 距離有點難讀 ˊ w ˋ ?
  14. 01:24:400 (1) - 刪去NC, NC在 01:25:796 (2)
fixed

以上w~
加油
感謝杏仁妹ˊ w ˋ ~

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Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

happy623 wrote:



req via ingame

General

  1. 把背景圖的png格式換成jpg格式 可以減少osz的file size fixed><
  2. Tags裡面的"- miomio chii -" 是一個人, 所以要把空格的都加" _ " , 即是" -_miomio_chii_- " fixed><
  3. Tags裡加個"op" fixed><

Beginner

  1. 花多點時間聽音樂, 會發現更多位置可以放finish, 例如 00:00:680 (1) 的開首, 00:07:656 (2) - , 00:11:842 (1) - 的開首 等等, 有空的話便把整幅圖細細看一遍便可以了;w; fixed><
  2. 00:38:354 (1) - Beginner的話, 個人覺得少點出現這種折返2次的滑條, 因為新手沒時間反應, 建議可以把它換成一條長的滑條, 延長至00:39:749 結束, 然後去掉NC, 滑條的形狀自己想, 像這樣 :
    fixed><
  3. 00:45:680 (1) - 這個放在 00:45:331 (3) 開始比較好, 跟一下拍子, 不然有違和感 fixed><
  4. 00:47:424 (1) - 去掉這個NC, 感覺這裡沒什麼需要NC fixed><
  5. 01:24:226 (2) - 這裡跟白線會比較好, 畢竟前面用的一直是1/1, 這裡卻用了1/2, 一般來說被坑 fixed><
  6. 01:26:493 (1) - 刪走NC fixed><


Normal

  1. 同Beginner, 多放點finish fixed><
  2. 00:18:819 (3) - 這裡可以往左移一格, 把 00:18:470 (2) 包好點 fixed><
  3. 00:44:284 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個可以放成正方形0 0 我覺得這邊這樣就可以了><
  4. 01:06:261 (1,2) - 不要overlap比較好看, 可以試試把 01:06:261 (1) - Ctrl H, Ctrl J 放去原位把 01:07:307 (2) 包住 :
    SPOILER
    fixed><
  5. 01:27:540 (3) - 把它把下一些?
    SPOILER
    這樣就好了不需要特別拉下一些>< Thank^^


Hard

  1. 00:32:249 (4) - 放低一點與 00:31:377 (3) 做個blanket
    SPOILER
    fixed><
  2. 00:38:354 (4) - NC? fixed><
  3. 00:46:726 (5) - ^ fixed><
  4. 00:49:517 (5) - ^ fixed><
  5. 00:54:400 (2) - 同樣可以試試用 00:53:703 (1) 來包好它 fixed><
  6. 01:01:726 (3) - 把它與 01:02:773 (3) 的開首 stack住? fixed><
  7. 01:13:063 (1) - 刪去這個的NC, 因為相同的地方你也沒有NC, 最好把它們的NC pattern一致點~ fixed><
  8. 01:24:226 (1) - ^ fixed><

以上w~
加油
Thank you ^^
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
From ingame:3
[Inner]
00:12:714 (60,61,62) - k kd
00:49:691 (342,343,344,345,346,347) - remove
>00:49:517 - d k d k
00:53:441 - k
01:16:726 - k
01:17:075 - k
感觉还有很大进步空间._.
用1.4或者1.6去掉变速
[Oni]
用1.4或者1.6去掉变速你看黄条 01:04:168 (245) - 都成什么样了._.
00:26:493 (91,92,93) - dkk
00:33:645 (128) - k
01:24:226 (114) - d
先这样._.
我去做muzu._.
Bitcoin
66 posts
Joined January 2011
Bitcoin

ts8zs wrote:

From ingame:3
all fixed, 感謝mod <(_ _)>
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
重新post了
Ts8zs' Muzukashii
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fantastic future.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 66261
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Fantastic future (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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Tags:opening op ItsLingers -_Miomio_Chii_- Awabiz
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Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu
[quote="happy623"]


IL's Insane

  • 感覺這個diff的排位有點亂, 像 00:40:098 (1,2,3,4) -, 這幾個滑條可以改一下形狀, 現在的有點單調
    跳的位置比較凌亂, 例如 00:33:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -, 玩的時候很坑 , 試試找點玩家試玩, 問一下他們的感覺也可以 fixed
  1. 00:05:563 (8) - 考慮這裡NC fixed
  2. 00:20:912 (1) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:21:784 (9) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:06:610 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的跳放的不錯 Thank ^^
  5. 00:30:156 (4,5,6) - 這裡突然換成單拍很怪, 不要跟vocal好一點 fixed
  6. 00:39:226 (8) - NC, 讓玩家知道這裡有跳 fixed
  7. 00:50:912 (6) - NC, 旋律換了 fixed
  8. 00:54:749 (6) - NC, 保持NC的pattern fixed
  9. 01:11:319 (4) - Ctrl G吧, 前面一直跳, 這裡突然不跳會違和 fixed
  10. 01:15:331 (3,4) - 這裡的跳太大, 不太對音樂 fixed
  11. 01:27:017 (9) - 考慮NC fixed
  12. 01:19:342 (2,3,4,5) - overmaped, 這裡應該用1/2做 fixed
    建議看一下ranked的圖怎樣放note, 不然幫不到你;w;

Thank ^^
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
只有一部分beatmap加入了视频op.avi。

[Beginner]
00:08:365 (3) - 前面那么慢的拍这里总感觉是突然变快不适应（尤其是那个音效）。
00:16:039 (3) - 缺一clap。
00:33:132 (4) - 建议加个slider
00:50:923 (1) - 这拍结束的地方没有歌词。
00:52:493 (2) - 这个可以换成和后面00:54:935 (2)一样的slider。
00:58:946 (1) - 这个可以拖长两拍。
感觉音效总体加的很乱，没有规律，节奏前后也没有规律（没有相似的节奏，摆放很随意）

[MmC's Easy]
00:06:272 (1,2) - 这两个音效不一样感觉有点便扭。
00:16:737 (4) - 建议在头头加上clap。
00:55:632 (3) - 尾巴加clap？
00:56:504 (1) - 太长，建议拆了。
01:07:667 (2) - 这拍节奏有点难以把握。
01:24:411 (3) - 十分建议拆。
01:25:807 (1) - 建议拆。

[Normal]
看起来没什么问题。

[Hard]
感觉篇难，HP可以小一点。
00:02:435 (3) - 建议把clap放在后拍。
00:07:144 (2,3,4) - 这个无厘头，建议删掉一个圈圈。

[IL's Insane]
懒得吐槽。

[Ts8zs' Taiko Muzukashii]
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
691,348.837209302326,4,1,0,70,1,0
00:11:145 (27) - 蓝？
00:39:749 (121) - 红？
00:45:854 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - 这个对Muzukashiii可能太难了。
00:47:424 (149) - 这个建议也是蓝。
01:05:389 (205) - 红？
01:26:493 (283,285) - 蓝？
resnap
总体感觉很乱。

[Awabiz's Oni]
Awabiz的谱也挺乱的，各种没规律。太鼓谱不是随便把红蓝堆砌的谱。
00:18:830 (55) - 建议加个红。
00:37:493 (147,148) - 建议加音符。
00:47:958 (191) - 建议蓝（因为后面有大红）。
00:55:632 (208,209) - 蓝红。
01:00:516 (226) - 加红？
01:03:830 (243) - 红？（因为有3连续蓝短音这里不好控制）
01:09:063 (18) - 蓝？
01:12:813 (42) - 蓝线没道理！
01:25:632 (122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - 这么多红一点节奏也没有是有多无趣？

[Awabiz's Inner Oni]
00:00:680 (2) - 不建议大圈。
00:11:504 (51) - 太鼓谱是不允许把大圈接在连音后面的。
00:29:121 (182,183,184,185,186,187) - （这4+2都是没有必要的）
00:46:039 (313) - 同理。
00:55:632 (370,371) - 蓝红？
00:56:243 (375,374) - 我智商出问题了么？。。
01:11:766 (42,43) - 没道理。
01:14:208 (60) - 完全没道理。
01:21:621 (120,121,122,123,124,126,125,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) - 这个受不了了，自己检查吧。

好图，好运。
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
只有一部分beatmap加入了视频op.avi。

[MmC's Easy]
00:06:272 (1,2) - 这两个音效不一样感觉有点便扭。　fixed
00:16:737 (4) - 建议在头头加上clap。有了whistle, 若再加上clap感覺有點怪怪的
00:55:632 (3) - 尾巴加clap？fixed
00:56:504 (1) - 太长，建议拆了。 不變動, 個人認為還好
01:07:667 (2) - 这拍节奏有点难以把握。移到紅線對voice, fixed
01:24:411 (3) - 十分建议拆。已拆, fixed
01:25:807 (1) - 建议拆。 不拆

好图，好运。
感謝mod !
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cubelrti
61 posts
Joined February 2012
cubelrti
Hi~
As your request

[General]
Seems fine~

[IL's Insane]
考虑一下减少音效声音大小？现在的听起来有点大
00:39:051 - unsnapped
00:02:784 (7) - 不是很flow 尝试改变下位置
00:20:923 (5,6,7,8,9) - 无意义的间距变化
00:21:795 - add a note 这里声音还是很明显的
00:21:621 (3,4,5,1) - 如果上面加了note 这里可以摆成一个规则图形或者五角星什么的...
00:27:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - 减少stream里面的折线
00:30:516 (6) - unrankable 把下一个slider的折返箭头档的严严实实=.=
00:38:714 (4,5,6,7) - 不仅仅unsnapped 这里跟的节奏不太对
00:39:237 (1,2,3,4) - 跳不好看 换个摆法
01:14:644 (1,2,3) - 好老的梗
01:18:132 (3) - ugly
01:19:353 (2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉非常莫名
01:27:377 - add a note
总体来说是rankable，但是给人老图的感觉很重，适当减少直线滑条的比例然后抄一抄最近的新图有助于提高你的map质量
(其实呢remap是个方法)
其实我不是很会提建议，最近才学着mod的...所以如果有错的话就多多包涵我如果说的不对的话，你tm来打我啊:3

[Hard]
00:06:272 (1) - 这里的whistle有点突然，要不就后面13白线都加上，要不就不加比较好
00:25:109 (4,1) - 滑条形状不喜欢:<换成弧线？
01:05:749 (7) - 考虑在01:05:923 - 就结束 然后滑条尾部增加一个clap
01:15:516 (2) - 这里看起来怪怪的 换成一个弧线就好（三点定弧 不需要这么多白点）
01:23:016 (1,3,4,7,1) - 我不能理解为什么突然间有混进来一些折角滑条
滑条成套使用比较合理，不要在整张图都是弧线的滑条里面突然出现折角，如果你像2012那样重复多次出现而且合曲的话就是例外
这个的建议也是和Insane差不多...我就不复读了

我不会太鼓

[Normal]
00:00:680 (1) - snap 头和尾都要
00:34:877 (1,2) - =.=滑条形状
00:45:865 (1) - =.=这首歌真的不适合放折角……毕竟这么小清新
01:02:086 (1,3) - =。=
还有我就不提了……
01:14:644 (1) - 不是很好看
其他看起来还不错

[Easy]
00:38:365 (1) - buhaokan 尝尝这个
136,104,38365,2,0,B|168:64|200:96|200:96|224:64|256:88|256:88|288:64|312:96|312:96|336:64|360:96|360:96|392:120,1,280
其他还不错

[Beginner]
00:28:946 (1,2,3) - 觉得跟vocal比较好？
00:45:342 (1,2) - oh why Orz
01:11:853 (1) - 略微有点不对称
fine~

万年骗星mod :P
Good luck~
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

cubelrti wrote:

Hi~
As your request

[General]
Seems fine~

[Easy]
00:38:365 (1) - buhaokan 尝尝这个
136,104,38365,2,0,B|168:64|200:96|200:96|224:64|256:88|256:88|288:64|312:96|312:96|336:64|360:96|360:96|392:120,1,280
良好提議, 採納, fixed
其他还不错 謝謝 :D

万年骗星mod :P
Good luck~
感謝mod !

edit : http://puu.sh/44zAj.rar
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[Ts8zs' Taiko Muzukashii]
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
691,348.837209302326,4,1,0,70,1,0
00:11:145 (27) - 蓝？no
00:39:749 (121) - 红？ no
00:45:854 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - 这个对Muzukashiii可能太难了。 233 我没加三连是我善良
00:47:424 (149) - 这个建议也是蓝。 这种重复感觉很蠢
01:05:389 (205) - 红？ 咚次(dk)达次(dk)切克闹(kdk) 233
01:26:493 (283,285) - 蓝？表现鼓连打 再换的话不合适._.
resnap ？check了下aimod没啥啊._.
总体感觉很乱。233

好图，好运。
Thx for mod
Ts8zs' Muzukashii
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 66261
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Title:Fantastic future (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Fantastic future (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:Ts8zs' Taiko Muzukashii
Source:Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags:opening op ItsLingers -_Miomio_Chii_- Awabiz Ts8zs
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Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
只有一部分beatmap加入了视频op.avi。 fixed

[Beginner]
00:08:365 (3) - 前面那么慢的拍这里总感觉是突然变快不适应（尤其是那个音效）。 fixed
00:16:039 (3) - 缺一clap。 fixed
00:33:132 (4) - 建议加个slider fixed
00:50:923 (1) - 这拍结束的地方没有歌词。fixed
00:52:493 (2) - 这个可以换成和后面00:54:935 (2)一样的slider。 fixed
00:58:946 (1) - 这个可以拖长两拍。 fixed
感觉音效总体加的很乱，没有规律，节奏前后也没有规律（没有相似的节奏，摆放很随意) 以fixed了^^

[Normal]
看起来没什么问题。 Thank mod ^^

[Hard]
感觉篇难，HP可以小一点。 fixed
00:02:435 (3) - 建议把clap放在后拍。 fixed
00:07:144 (2,3,4) - 这个无厘头，建议删掉一个圈圈。 改了感覺怪怪的 所以沒改><!!

好图，好运。
Thank you ^^
Bitcoin
66 posts
Joined January 2011
Bitcoin

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.
[Awabiz's Oni]
[Awabiz's Inner Oni]
all fixed, 感謝mod :)
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

cubelrti wrote:

Hi~
As your request

[General]
Seems fine~ Thank

[Hard]
00:06:272 (1) - 这里的whistle有点突然，要不就后面13白线都加上，要不就不加比较好 fixed
00:25:109 (4,1) - 滑条形状不喜欢:<换成弧线？ fixed
01:05:749 (7) - 考虑在01:05:923 - 就结束 然后滑条尾部增加一个clap 感覺不太好!! 沒改
01:15:516 (2) - 这里看起来怪怪的 换成一个弧线就好（三点定弧 不需要这么多白点）fixed
01:23:016 (1,3,4,7,1) - 我不能理解为什么突然间有混进来一些折角滑条 ...
滑条成套使用比较合理，不要在整张图都是弧线的滑条里面突然出现折角，如果你像2012那样重复多次出现而且合曲的话就是例外
这个的建议也是和Insane差不多...我就不复读了 ...

[Normal]
00:00:680 (1) - snap 头和尾都要 不好><
00:34:877 (1,2) - =.=滑条形状 不好><
00:45:865 (1) - =.=这首歌真的不适合放折角……毕竟这么小清新 不好><
01:02:086 (1,3) - =。= 不好><
还有我就不提了……
01:14:644 (1) - 不是很好看 不好><
其他看起来还不错 Thank

[Beginner]
00:28:946 (1,2,3) - 觉得跟vocal比较好？
00:45:342 (1,2) - oh why Orz fixed
01:11:853 (1) - 略微有点不对称 fixed
Beginner我已經重新調整過了^^
fine~ Thank

万年骗星mod :P
Good luck~
Thank you ^^
ax_pokl
ax_pokl

ts8zs wrote:

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[Ts8zs' Taiko Muzukashii]
话说我在导入这首歌的时候报错可能和你的源码有关，我文件夹里的源码和你这里贴的有点不一样。
Ts8zs' Muzukashii
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fantastic future.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 66261
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
Title:Fantastic future (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Fantastic future (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:Ts8zs' Taiko Muzukashii
Source:Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags:opening op ItsLingers -_Miomio_Chii_- Awabiz Ts8zs
BeatmapID:290319
BeatmapSetID:105765

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu
[quote="ax_pokl"]

我已經找出問題了^^ 貌似是圖片名稱有出現空白 - _這個3其中一個
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
EmPao
Hi~

Request from In-game PM

[General]

-Taiko Diff的Video要拿掉
-有關於"Clap"這個hitsound的放置點 在Normal,Hard&Insane Diff都有部分放錯拍

[Beginner]

00:03:481 (1) - 刪除尾巴的Clap,整段只有這有個clap感覺有點突兀
00:16:039 (3) - 尾巴漏一個Clap

後面有很多地方都忘記上Clap了,像是00:28:946 (1,2,3) 有加Clap但是後面都忘記加上或是放錯,請檢查一下

00:58:946 (1,1) - 由於是最簡單的diff,建議轉盤完後的第一個物件通常不要離轉盤中心太遠,不然對新手來說很困難

[MmC's Easy]

-忘記加上Video

00:40:458 (1,2,3) - 建議換個flow
00:50:923 (1) - 頭加Finish
00:53:016 (2) - 加Clap

後面有一些在Slidertick切換音效的綠線可是好像卻沒有音效的檔案(? 如果是的話要記得補上

[Normal]

00:00:680 (1) - Unsnapped slider
00:37:318 (2) - 刪whistle
00:45:691 - 加note

[Hard]

00:28:597 (1) - 頭加Finish
01:06:970 (3) - Ctrl+J? flow更好
00:33:481 (3) - 這裡有點變化,要不試試改變一下節奏? (http://puu.sh/49SzG.jpg)
00:48:830 (5) - whistle改成finish

[Insane]

00:19:353 (9) - repeat太多次,建議做點變化,打起來也較順
00:27:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - 真心覺得直角的1.0x串燒flow不好看,試試：(http://puu.sh/49T0n.jpg) ?
code:
176,192,27900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,27987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,28074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,328,28161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,28249,1,8,0:0:0:0:

這張圖的jump有一種隨機式的感覺,雖然不會太坑 但是打起來的flow沒有感覺很好o.o

例如說01:04:179 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ，打完串燒又要折返接下一個距離3.80x的滑條之類的...

-

That's all!

太久沒Mod, 沒有很深入的去Mod,如果Mod內容有誤 還請見諒~
整體上還不錯~
但一些細節和flow應該還有進步和待改善的空間

對於mod的內容有疑問或不清楚的地方可以in-gamePM我

加油~ :D

Good luck.
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

EmPao wrote:

Hi~

Request from In-game PM

[General]

-Taiko Diff的Video要拿掉
-有關於"Clap"這個hitsound的放置點 在Normal,Hard&Insane Diff都有部分放錯拍

[MmC's Easy]

-忘記加上Video AL請放上

00:40:458 (1,2,3) - 建議換個flow
00:50:923 (1) - 頭加Finish fixed
00:53:016 (2) - 加Clap fixed

後面有一些在Slidertick切換音效的綠線可是好像卻沒有音效的檔案(? 如果是的話要記得補上 咦怎會, 我有放soft-slidertick給她的說@@
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That's all!

太久沒Mod, 沒有很深入的去Mod,如果Mod內容有誤 還請見諒~
整體上還不錯~
但一些細節和flow應該還有進步和待改善的空間

對於mod的內容有疑問或不清楚的地方可以in-gamePM我

加油~ :D

Good luck.
感謝mod ~ :)

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