First mod. Here we go! (for myself ahaha)
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01:02:547 - I think there should be another note here. If feels like there should be something there.
01:10:172 - That one spacebar double tap seems kind of weird. Try placing it at either 6th or 7th column. I think it won't stand out as much
01:30:547 - Add a note here. Maybe at 7th column.
01:37:797 - Add a double tap at 1st column.
01:41:797 - Same as before but at 7th column. (I checked the song using audacity and the beat starts 1 beat before, hence my advice of double tap start but I'm not sure how much it will be noticed while actually playing the song.)
01:50:547 - There's like a chimebell or whatever thing in the song. Maybe add like a mini staircase instead of straight beats.
02:23:547 to 02:34:547 - I think it's better if those 1/4 notes are 1 beat earlier. It's really fine either way but I'm just super picky lol.
02:43:547 to 02:47:047 - Since the holds already started from left in the previous few measures, try to start the holds from right and end at left this time.
03:09:547 (189547|1) - Change this to a double note. 4th column.
03:48:047 (228047|6) - You should change this to 5th column because you already emphasized the chime with 7th column hold. Along with the following 2 holds.
03:52:047 (232047|0) - Same reason as above.
04:47:547 (287547|2) - Intentional? I'm not sure. This looks kind of uncomfortable to hit.
05:31:047 to 05:33:047 - The holds are kind of weird because in the previous measures, they were half size and suddenly they're full size holds and nothing in the music has changed.
06:07:047 to 06:11:047 - I'm not quite sure how the holds go to. I think they go to the hi-hats, so I guess it's fine.
06:48:422 (408422|3) - I don't think the hold is necessary.
07:04:922 (424922|6,424922|0) - I would say change the 7th column note to 6th column and make it a hold that extends to 07:08:422.
If I don't explain why something should be there, it's probably because there is something in the song that REALLY needs to be on the map but isn't or is just dull without it,
Also I apologize if I'm being so picky at everything. I'm also a heavy ITG charter/modder and I really like to go in depth ahaha.
I don't think there was really any flaw with patterning. It was pretty much perfect imo.
Overall, you guys did a really good job on making this map go with the song. I can definitely see myself playing this numerous times in the future :3
P.S.
http://i.imgur.com/THalaDx.jpg