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t+pazolite feat. Rizna - Distorted Lovesong [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
DuckRice_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-07-13 at 8:09:44 PM

Artist: t+pazolite feat. Rizna
Title: Distorted Lovesong
Tags: expew songs for x girlz hardcore tano*c
BPM: 240
Filesize: 11527kb
Play Time: 07:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. MADNESS COLLAB - 7Key (5 stars, 4000 notes)
Download: t+pazolite feat. Rizna - Distorted Lovesong
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Collab diff with ExPew
Koakuma_old
First mod. Here we go! (for myself ahaha)

From left to right - 1234567

01:02:547 - I think there should be another note here. If feels like there should be something there.
01:10:172 - That one spacebar double tap seems kind of weird. Try placing it at either 6th or 7th column. I think it won't stand out as much

01:30:547 - Add a note here. Maybe at 7th column.
01:37:797 - Add a double tap at 1st column.
01:41:797 - Same as before but at 7th column. (I checked the song using audacity and the beat starts 1 beat before, hence my advice of double tap start but I'm not sure how much it will be noticed while actually playing the song.)
01:50:547 - There's like a chimebell or whatever thing in the song. Maybe add like a mini staircase instead of straight beats.

02:23:547 to 02:34:547 - I think it's better if those 1/4 notes are 1 beat earlier. It's really fine either way but I'm just super picky lol.
02:43:547 to 02:47:047 - Since the holds already started from left in the previous few measures, try to start the holds from right and end at left this time.
03:09:547 (189547|1) - Change this to a double note. 4th column.

03:48:047 (228047|6) - You should change this to 5th column because you already emphasized the chime with 7th column hold. Along with the following 2 holds.
03:52:047 (232047|0) - Same reason as above.
04:47:547 (287547|2) - Intentional? I'm not sure. This looks kind of uncomfortable to hit.

05:31:047 to 05:33:047 - The holds are kind of weird because in the previous measures, they were half size and suddenly they're full size holds and nothing in the music has changed.
06:07:047 to 06:11:047 - I'm not quite sure how the holds go to. I think they go to the hi-hats, so I guess it's fine.

06:48:422 (408422|3) - I don't think the hold is necessary.
07:04:922 (424922|6,424922|0) - I would say change the 7th column note to 6th column and make it a hold that extends to 07:08:422.


If I don't explain why something should be there, it's probably because there is something in the song that REALLY needs to be on the map but isn't or is just dull without it,

Also I apologize if I'm being so picky at everything. I'm also a heavy ITG charter/modder and I really like to go in depth ahaha.

I don't think there was really any flaw with patterning. It was pretty much perfect imo.

Overall, you guys did a really good job on making this map go with the song. I can definitely see myself playing this numerous times in the future :3

P.S. http://i.imgur.com/THalaDx.jpg
Topic Starter
DuckRice_old
Finally back home and ready to fix :D
Only fixing my parts of the map.
I'll discuss the ending part (07:04:922 - End) with ExPew first.

Hazelnut53 wrote:

01:02:547 - I think there should be another note here. If feels like there should be something there. Fixed, and added another note at 01:03:547 to make it consistent
01:10:172 - That one spacebar double tap seems kind of weird. Try placing it at either 6th or 7th column. I think it won't stand out as much Fixed, switched to column 7

02:23:547 to 02:34:547 - I think it's better if those 1/4 notes are 1 beat earlier. It's really fine either way but I'm just super picky lol. I'll keep it as it is for now
02:43:547 to 02:47:047 - Since the holds already started from left in the previous few measures, try to start the holds from right and end at left this time. Oh, didn't notice that. Fixed.
03:09:547 (189547|1) - Change this to a double note. 4th column. Mm... I'll keep it as it is

05:31:047 to 05:33:047 - The holds are kind of weird because in the previous measures, they were half size and suddenly they're full size holds and nothing in the music has changed. Fixed, they're all half size now
06:07:047 to 06:11:047 - I'm not quite sure how the holds go to. I think they go to the hi-hats, so I guess it's fine.I think I put the holds there just to make it slightly challenging. I don't think I really had an instrument on mind when mapping that part. Keeping it, but I'll take a closer look nonetheless.
Thanks Hazel!
Koakuma_old
Also one more thing,

06:48:422 (408422|3) - I don't think the hold is necessary.
I think this is fine really. I think the hold fits that part. Ignore this.
ExPew

Hazelnut53 wrote:

First mod. Here we go! (for myself ahaha)

From left to right - 1234567

01:30:547 - Add a note here. Maybe at 7th column. -added
01:37:797 - Add a double tap at 1st column. - nope, but add on 2
01:41:797 - Same as before but at 7th column. (I checked the song using audacity and the beat starts 1 beat before, hence my advice of double tap start but I'm not sure how much it will be noticed while actually playing the song.) ^ on 6
01:50:547 - There's like a chimebell or whatever thing in the song. Maybe add like a mini staircase instead of straight beats. - renoted this part

03:48:047 (228047|6) - You should change this to 5th column because you already emphasized the chime with 7th column hold. Along with the following 2 holds. - moved
03:52:047 (232047|0) - Same reason as above. - rearranged all this part holds ( on left side )
04:47:547 (287547|2) - Intentional? I'm not sure. This looks kind of uncomfortable to hit. - renoted this measure part

07:04:922 (424922|6,424922|0) - I would say change the 7th column note to 6th column and make it a hold that extends to 07:08:422. i just change hold only
somepart found missing note, my mistake ;w;
Maiz94
ET D:
Luyuja
Not mad enought!wwww
I want to play Louis & ExPew Mania Force or Louis & ExPew Maniasaki
Topic Starter
DuckRice_old

Luyuja wrote:

Not mad enought!wwww
I want to play Louis & ExPew Mania Force or Louis & ExPew Maniasaki
Maybe someday, if I can get this diff approved first :3
Rumia-
02:23:422 - add
02:23:922 - add
02:24:422 (144422|2) - remove
02:35:047 to 02:37:047 - add hold at 1st collumn?
02:36:547 (156547|0) - move to 7th
02:40:047 - add(s)
02:40:547 - add
02:41:560 - add
02:44:047 - add at 7th
02:44:297 - ^
02:44:797 - add at 4th
02:45:547 - add
02:46:484 - add
02:46:609 - add
02:46:734 - add
02:48:297 - add
02:48:547 - add
02:48:797 - add
02:48:859 - add
02:48:922 - add
02:48:984 - add
02:49:547 - add
02:54:047 - add 1/1 hold
03:10:297 - ^
02:54:297 - add (hold maybe?) or jzu circle
02:58:984 (178984|4) - remove
03:00:797 - add at 7th
03:00:922 - ^
03:01:047 - ^
03:09:422 - ^
03:09:797 - ^
03:11:172 (191172|2,191422|2,191672|4,191922|4) - move to other collumn lol
03:12:922 (192922|6) - to 6th
03:14:047- add at 1st
03:14:297 - ^
03:14:422 - ^
03:14:547 - ^
03:14:672 - ^
03:14:797 - ^
03:18:047 - add at 5th
03:18:297 - ^
03:18:547 - ^
03:18:797 - add at 1st
03:20:047 at 2nd , the white line till here 03:20:793
03:22:047 to 03:23:047 the bass beat is strong enuf, + repeating + mirror make such boring pattern , - suggest follow the bass for this part
03:27:172 - add
03:27:297 - add
03:27:672 - add
03:29:172 - add
03:29:297 - add
03:29:673 - add
03:31:172 - add
03:31:297 - add
03:31:672 - add
03:33:172 - add
03:33:297 - add
03:33:672 - add
03:41:672 - add 1 more
03:55:047 - add hold till here 03:58:047 (suggestion)
03:58:859 - add
03:58:922 - add
03:58:984 - add
03:59:547 - add
03:59:797 - add
04:01:547 - add 1 more
04:03:484 - add
04:03:547 - add
04:03:609 - add
04:03:734 - add
04:03:797 - add
04:07:922 - add
04:42:234 - add
04:42:609 - add
04:42:734 - add
04:42:859 - add
05:34:297 - add
05:34:359 - add
05:34:422 - add
05:34:484 - add
05:34:609 - add
05:34:672 - add
05:34:734 - add
05:34:797 - add
06:29:609 - suggest follow the baby laughing lol~
06:58:109 - add
06:58:297 - add
06:58:359 - add
FGSky
fun map :D
DJNightmare


Fun map!~ :3
Do you have somebody appointed to do SB for this song? If not, I would like to do it :3
ExPew
will continue this project when louis is back
DJNightmare
If that is the case, is it okay if I and another user also collab? :3
Topic Starter
DuckRice_old

ExPew wrote:

will continue this project when louis is back
hi

I'm not quite ready to map or make changes to maps just yet x_x sorry!
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