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Konomi Suzuki n' Kiba of Akiba - Watamote (TV Size)

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Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 19 de marzo de 2014 at 17:50:51

Artist: Konomi Suzuki n' Kiba of Akiba
Title: Watamote (TV Size)
Source: Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui!
Tags: opening Yuuki_Katsuki
BPM: 200
Filesize: 13873kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,06 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 359 notes)
  4. Normal (4,13 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Konomi Suzuki n' Kiba of Akiba - Watamote (TV Size)
Download: Konomi Suzuki n' Kiba of Akiba - Watamote (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Watamote Opening
Thank's to WhiteRunner for BGs
Mod request!! Please!! QnQ
"It's not my fault that im not popular!"
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Thankyou modders, you make me happy ♥

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­[_Chichinya_]
10crystalmask01
happy623
Tagre
TheVileOne
Raisa12
Last edited by Arroz , edited 30 times in total.
Akimari_old
26 posts
Joined April 2013
Akimari_old
This is literally THE only Watamote beatmap that has all the beats actually in place and is actually PLAYABLE.

My only complain really is the lack of Easy at the moment, since if I was in the position of a newer player, Normal would be quite hard for me.

Other then that, very, very good job. I look forward to seeing this ranked one day.
YKingstoN
12 posts
Joined February 2013
YKingstoN
I hope this map gets ranked.
ImPico
1 post
Joined March 2013
ImPico
Can't get passed the beginning on Insane, but that's my fault, not that map's. All in all, I hope to this get ranked! It's very good.
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz
I will improve Normal and get Insane better, thankyou all ^^
WhiteRunner
2 posts
Joined June 2013
WhiteRunner
Use the video i gave to you, ill think ill look better. :roll:
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz
Still in progress WhiteRunner uwu
WhiteRunner
2 posts
Joined June 2013
WhiteRunner
Use dis. *u*
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Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

WhiteRunner wrote:

Use dis. *u*
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Thankyou for the BG uwu
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena
Just saying, the Insane's BG is kinda, bad quality. and even if that pic was high quality, it wouldn't really be a good map BG anyways ><"
Shinsekai-
1,314 posts
Joined November 2012
Shinsekai-
Mmm... para empesar:

[HD]

SPOILER
-puedes hacer esto es opcional tal vez le brinde algo de dificultad o puedes ponerla como el NM haci de pequeñas xD [spoilerbox]
-Inserta un break time aqui (opcional/recomendado)
SPOILER
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[NM]

-Como dije anterior mente inserta un break
SPOILER
[spoilerbox]

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[EZ]
-Podrias hacer esto para que pege con la linea del ritmo
SPOILER
-Inserta un Break aqui
SPOILER
-Tambien puedes agregar una nota aqui
SPOILER
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espero que te sirva mi mod ^^
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

CreamLegit wrote:

Just saying, the Insane's BG is kinda, bad quality. and even if that pic was high quality, it wouldn't really be a good map BG anyways ><"
Thanks, i will change it ^^
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

Mmm... para empesar:

[HD]

SPOILER
-puedes hacer esto es opcional tal vez le brinde algo de dificultad o puedes ponerla como el NM haci de pequeñas xD [spoilerbox]
-Inserta un break time aqui (opcional/recomendado)
SPOILER
Se ve mejor ahora, gracias
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[NM]

-Como dije anterior mente inserta un break Se ve mejor ahora, gracias, otra vez~
SPOILER
[spoilerbox]

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[EZ]
-Podrias hacer esto para que pege con la linea del ritmo Se escucha mejor ahora n-n
SPOILER
-Inserta un Break aqui Se ve mejor ahora, gracias, denuevo
SPOILER
-Tambien puedes agregar una nota aqui Ahora llena un poco el vacío ~
SPOILER
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espero que te sirva mi mod ^^
Gracias por la ayuda n-n
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
hi o3o random mod!

[Easy]
  1. Woah, AR and HP Drain Rate should be 3 o.o
    OD can be 3 or 2.
00:01:218 - 00:04:518 Try this rhythm?

00:05:868 (1) - Add finish
00:09:318 (4,1) - Check the DS.
00:10:518 (2) - Add finish to the tail.
00:14:418 (1) - ^
00:21:018 (5) - NC
00:37:218 (1,1) - Ehh these two look badly overlapped o.o
00:45:318 (1,1) - Add finish, and remove their NC's it's not necessary.
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish to the head.
01:03:618 (5) - NC
01:15:618 (5) - ^
01:22:818 (5) - ^
01:23:868 (1) - Remove NC, and add finish?

Needs hitsounds, and the rhythm could use a little work.

[Normal]
  1. AR -1
*Stares at background*....I don't think the BG is well... appropriate.
00:04:518 (5,1) - Less than 10 ms apart.
  1. Why make the DS 0.8? These objects clearly look to crowded together! >.< convert back to 1.0 please.
00:15:618 (1) - Add finish
00:22:818 (8) - NC
00:25:218 (1) - Add finish
00:37:068 -?
Sounds better imo.
00:42:018 (1) - Add finish on the entire slider.
00:45:018 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:56:418 - Missing a beat. Either ad another reverse on 00:55:518 (6) - or place a note here.
01:00:318 (3) - Looks well... I think there's a better way to make this slider :S
01:03:918 (5) - NC
01:10:668 (5) - ^
01:22:518 (5) - NC
01:23:868 (1) - Remove NC, like the previous. It isn't necessary.

Fix spacing, and it should look better.

[Hard]
00:27:468 (6) - NC?
00:42:018 (1,2) - Add finish
00:48:318 (5) - NC
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:03:768 (6) - NC
01:16:968 (6) - ^

Definitely looks better then your previous diffs :)

[Insane]
00:34:818 (8) - Could use the default soft-finish
00:42:018 (6,7) - Add finish
00:50:793 - ?

00:51:468 (1) - Add finish to the head.
01:15:318 (1) - Remove NC

Sorry I'm not so good with modding Insane diffs :(

Hope this helps~! :)
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

10crystalmask01 wrote:

hi o3o random mod! Hiiii~

[Easy]
  1. Woah, AR and HP Drain Rate should be 3 o.o thanks, i forgot that
    OD can be 3 or 2.
00:01:218 - 00:04:518 Try this rhythm?

00:05:868 (1) - Add finish
00:09:318 (4,1) - Check the DS.
00:10:518 (2) - Add finish to the tail.
00:14:418 (1) - ^
00:21:018 (5) - NC
00:37:218 (1,1) - Ehh these two look badly overlapped o.o I don't know how to fix it but i made something...
00:45:318 (1,1) - Add finish, and remove their NC's it's not necessary.
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish to the head.
01:03:618 (5) - NC
01:15:618 (5) - ^
01:22:818 (5) - ^
01:23:868 (1) - Remove NC, and add finish? Yeah... i forgot that is easy...

Needs hitsounds, and the rhythm could use a little work.
Thanks for your mod n-n
idk where to get hitsounds u.u
[Normal]
  1. AR -1
*Stares at background*....I don't think the BG is well... appropriate. Im still searching for BG's...
00:04:518 (5,1) - Less than 10 ms apart.
  1. Why make the DS 0.8? These objects clearly look to crowded together! >.< convert back to 1.0 please.
:3
00:15:618 (1) - Add finish
00:22:818 (8) - NC
00:25:218 (1) - Add finish
00:37:068 -?
Sounds better imo. Sounds better.
00:42:018 (1) - Add finish on the entire slider.
00:45:018 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:56:418 - Missing a beat. Either ad another reverse on 00:55:518 (6) - or place a note here.
01:00:318 (3) - Looks well... I think there's a better way to make this slider :S
01:03:918 (5) - NC
01:10:668 (5) - ^
01:22:518 (5) - NC
01:23:868 (1) - Remove NC, like the previous. It isn't necessary.

Fix spacing, and it should look better.
I fixed spacing and made some changues, thanks~

[Hard]
00:27:468 (6) - NC?
00:42:018 (1,2) - Add finish
00:48:318 (5) - NC
00:51:468 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:03:768 (6) - NC
01:16:968 (6) - ^

Definitely looks better then your previous diffs :) Thanks n-n im not too good for low diffs uwuU

[Insane]
00:34:818 (8) - Could use the default soft-finish I was thinking about it, thanks~
00:42:018 (6,7) - Add finish
00:50:793 - ? Now it's more funny... i think...

00:51:468 (1) - Add finish to the head.
01:15:318 (1) - Remove NC

Sorry I'm not so good with modding Insane diffs :(
Don't wory, i know it is hard to do n-n

Hope this helps~! :)
Helps very much, thanks for your modding ♥
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01

Yuuki Katsuki wrote:

Thanks for your mod n-n
idk where to get hitsounds u.u
Do you mean you don't know how to add hitsounds on a certain part of a slider?

If so...
If so, just simply double click on one of the slider's points on the timeline.
For example, when I said
00:10:518 (2) - Add finish to the tail.

-You can do this by simply double-clicking on the tail of the slider on the timeline like this:

You'll know it's been selected once it's been highlighted in red. Then, add the finish and your done! :3
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Yuuki Katsuki wrote:

Thanks for your mod n-n
idk where to get hitsounds u.u
Do you mean you don't know how to add hitsounds on a certain part of a slider?

If so...
If so, just simply double click on one of the slider's points on the timeline.
For example, when I said
00:10:518 (2) - Add finish to the tail.

-You can do this by simply double-clicking on the tail of the slider on the timeline like this:

You'll know it's been selected once it's been highlighted in red. Then, add the finish and your done! :3
I thought you were talking about custom hitsounds, my fail -w-U
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
Sorry for long wait!

here's my mod :

General

  1. Make sure ur background pics sized correct (4:3 / 16:9)
  2. These pics are not being used, you should remove them from folder, or it affect the file size much
  3. watamote___kuroki_tomoko__lineart_gif__by_michaelmejia-d6il79b.png can be converted into jpeg format, it can reduce the file size too!
  4. remove Widescreen Storyboard because you didnt do any storyboarding
  5. Source isnt a correct form, it should be Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui!, change it and put "Watamote" into tags and delete "Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui!" in tags
  6. Consider adding "opening" in tags~

Easy

  1. OD < AR is better for Easy diff, you may use OD 2 or 3 instead
  2. 00:02:568 (2) - you chose to reverse at 00:02:943 -, but there is no any drums. It should be at 00:03:018 -, btw it maybe too hard for Easy, I suggest you drag a long slider from 00:02:568 and end up at 00:03:318 - just miss the drum hit is okay imo
  3. 00:10:518 (2) - you may add a finish at it tail, it looks fit for me :D
  4. 00:10:218 (1) - remove this NC and NC at 00:11:118 (3) , plus the finish at the tail looks weird, remove it and put finish at 00:13:218 (1) instead?
  5. 00:32:418 (3,4,5) - I guess its a bit hard to catch the beat, If I were you, I would try this rhythm :
  6. 00:42:018 (1) - add a finish here, you may heard a finish in the music
  7. 00:44:718 (1) - same as above beat issues, I understand you want to make it easier, but I guess this rhythm might be better :
  8. 00:56:718 (1) - extend this slider until 00:57:318 -, I prefer you use 1/1 at this kiai all the time, or it will be very difficult to get the beat for this song
  9. 01:01:518 (1) - I guess it looks better if you put it here :
    SPOILER
  10. 01:04:218 (2,3,4) - you may unstack these or it will be so hard to read for newbies
  11. 01:06:018 (1,1) - they are overlapped, move 01:08:268 (1) some grid up to avoid the overlapping?
  12. 01:13:218 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm ?
  13. 01:18:018 (1,1) - remember do not place notes or sliders so close to the end of the spinner, Newbies would not have time to recover and find their cursor especially you are mapping a high BPM song, you should end 01:18:018 (1) at 01:19:818 -, to leave a white tick :D
  14. 01:20:418 (1,2,3,4) - arrangement looks not really good for me, if I were you , I would place it like this : (dont forget to resnap the following notes if you change it 8-)
    SPOILER
  15. I know that this song is really hard to map a Easy xD, try to find more modders and get more opinions on this diff!

Normal

  1. From Aimod, please fix all these 4 issues :
  2. 00:06:018 (1) - You mapped this part in Easy, why not map this part as well? it would be more fun! :)
  3. 00:23:868 (4) - start it at 00:23:718 - , change to 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor isnt great for here, players are already suited with the 1/1 in this part and the melody isnt changed, they will get a miss if you use 1/2, you may end this slider at 00:24:918 too! Try to put more white ticks in this part! :D
  4. 00:32:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer using this rhythm :
  5. 00:37:068 (1) - Actually this part until 00:42:018 should be use 1/3 Beat Snap Divisor, 00:37:068 (1,2) is not placed correctly
  6. 00:37:818 (3,1,2) - overlapped, put here instead?
    SPOILER
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/983381
  7. 00:42:918 (1) - start this spinner at 00:42:018 -, and end it up at 00:44:268 - Its much better than leaving space within that little break
  8. 01:00:318 (3) - avoid this kind of sliders in Easy or Normal, its too hard for newbies or new players to read
  9. 01:05:418 - add notes at the following 2 white ticks, feels empty if you undermap here :? :
    SPOILER
  10. 01:08:268 (1,2) - make sure the ds consist with 01:08:868 (2,3,4) -
  11. 01:22:218 (4) - NC here instead of 01:22:518 (1) - ? Also , rearrange the placement like this looks neater for me :
    SPOILER

Hard

  • 00:06:018 (1) - Same as Normal, you should map this break too
  1. 00:13:968 (4,5) - blanket issue :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:668 (3,4,5,6) - how about this ? :
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:718 (2,3) - idk if you like to separate it :
    SPOILER
  4. 00:37:068 to 00:42:018 -, you may need to remap this part by using 1/3 Beat Snap Disivor, Try to refer to some 1/3 song like this and learn to put notes in 1/3 part, hope its help!
  5. 01:16:368 (3) - you may NC here, Since you did NC at 01:16:968 (1)
  6. 01:17:568 (4) - ^
  7. 01:17:868 (1) - I suggest you put a note here and place it like 01:16:968 (1,2,3) - , start this spinner at 01:18:018 (1) isnt feel bad!

Insane

  1. 00:02:568 (4,5) - I guess it will be better if you combine these two into one slider :)
  2. 00:12:168 (1) - try to stack it with 00:11:718 (4) -'s tail
  3. 00:24:018 (6) - NC it ?
  4. 00:27:768 (2,3) - stack the tail
  5. 00:28:743 (5) - remove this note? Its overmapped imo, there is no drum hit or other instruments
  6. 00:37:068 (1) - same as Hard, you should remapped it with 1/3
  7. 00:42:018 (6) - I suggest you add a green line here and increase the volume, with normal sampleset :D
  8. 00:42:918 (1) - you should end this spinner at 00:44:268
  9. 00:45:468 (4) - how about NC here?
  10. 00:47:193 (1,2) - you should move 00:47:418 (2) -'s tail away from 00:47:193 (1) - , because it's reverse sign was hidden by 00:47:193 (1) - , Idk if it is rankable or not
  11. 00:50:268 (8) - unsnapped object
  12. 01:06:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - hmm, I try to use 25% to hear this part, the actual rhythm should be this :

I hope those help :(
Dont Give up!!
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

happy623 wrote:

Sorry for long wait!

here's my mod :

General

  1. Make sure ur background pics sized correct (4:3 / 16:9)
  2. These pics are not being used, you should remove them from folder, or it affect the file size much
  3. watamote___kuroki_tomoko__lineart_gif__by_michaelmejia-d6il79b.png can be converted into jpeg format, it can reduce the file size too!
  4. remove Widescreen Storyboard because you didnt do any storyboarding
  5. Source isnt a correct form, it should be Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui!, change it and put "Watamote" into tags and delete "Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaete mo Omaera ga Warui!" in tags
  6. Consider adding "opening" in tags~

Easy

  1. OD < AR is better for Easy diff, you may use OD 2 or 3 instead
  2. 00:02:568 (2) - you chose to reverse at 00:02:943 -, but there is no any drums. It should be at 00:03:018 -, btw it maybe too hard for Easy, I suggest you drag a long slider from 00:02:568 and end up at 00:03:318 - just miss the drum hit is okay imo
  3. 00:10:518 (2) - you may add a finish at it tail, it looks fit for me :D
  4. 00:10:218 (1) - remove this NC and NC at 00:11:118 (3) , plus the finish at the tail looks weird, remove it and put finish at 00:13:218 (1) instead?
  5. 00:32:418 (3,4,5) - I guess its a bit hard to catch the beat, If I were you, I would try this rhythm :
  6. 00:42:018 (1) - add a finish here, you may heard a finish in the music
  7. 00:44:718 (1) - same as above beat issues, I understand you want to make it easier, but I guess this rhythm might be better :
  8. 00:56:718 (1) - extend this slider until 00:57:318 -, I prefer you use 1/1 at this kiai all the time, or it will be very difficult to get the beat for this song
  9. 01:01:518 (1) - I guess it looks better if you put it here :
    SPOILER
  10. 01:04:218 (2,3,4) - you may unstack these or it will be so hard to read for newbies
  11. 01:06:018 (1,1) - they are overlapped, move 01:08:268 (1) some grid up to avoid the overlapping?
  12. 01:13:218 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm ?
  13. 01:18:018 (1,1) - remember do not place notes or sliders so close to the end of the spinner, Newbies would not have time to recover and find their cursor especially you are mapping a high BPM song, you should end 01:18:018 (1) at 01:19:818 -, to leave a white tick :D
  14. 01:20:418 (1,2,3,4) - arrangement looks not really good for me, if I were you , I would place it like this : (dont forget to resnap the following notes if you change it 8-)
    SPOILER
  15. I know that this song is really hard to map a Easy xD, try to find more modders and get more opinions on this diff!



Normal

  1. From Aimod, please fix all these 4 issues :
  2. 00:06:018 (1) - You mapped this part in Easy, why not map this part as well? it would be more fun! :)
  3. 00:23:868 (4) - start it at 00:23:718 - , change to 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor isnt great for here, players are already suited with the 1/1 in this part and the melody isnt changed, they will get a miss if you use 1/2, you may end this slider at 00:24:918 too! Try to put more white ticks in this part! :D
  4. 00:32:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer using this rhythm :
  5. 00:37:068 (1) - Actually this part until 00:42:018 should be use 1/3 Beat Snap Divisor, 00:37:068 (1,2) is not placed correctly
  6. 00:37:818 (3,1,2) - overlapped, put here instead?
    SPOILER
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/983381
  7. 00:42:918 (1) - start this spinner at 00:42:018 -, and end it up at 00:44:268 - Its much better than leaving space within that little break
  8. 01:00:318 (3) - avoid this kind of sliders in Easy or Normal, its too hard for newbies or new players to read
  9. 01:05:418 - add notes at the following 2 white ticks, feels empty if you undermap here :? :
    SPOILER
  10. 01:08:268 (1,2) - make sure the ds consist with 01:08:868 (2,3,4) -
  11. 01:22:218 (4) - NC here instead of 01:22:518 (1) - ? Also , rearrange the placement like this looks neater for me :
    SPOILER

Thanks for mod, im not good at easy and normal n-nU

Hard

  • 00:06:018 (1) - Same as Normal, you should map this break too
  1. 00:13:968 (4,5) - blanket issue :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:668 (3,4,5,6) - how about this ? :
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:718 (2,3) - idk if you like to separate it :
    SPOILER
  4. 00:37:068 to 00:42:018 -, you may need to remap this part by using 1/3 Beat Snap Disivor, Try to refer to some 1/3 song like this and learn to put notes in 1/3 part, hope its help!
  5. 01:16:368 (3) - you may NC here, Since you did NC at 01:16:968 (1)
  6. 01:17:568 (4) - ^
  7. 01:17:868 (1) - I suggest you put a note here and place it like 01:16:968 (1,2,3) - , start this spinner at 01:18:018 (1) isnt feel bad!

Thanks n-n

Insane

  1. 00:02:568 (4,5) - I guess it will be better if you combine these two into one slider :) Doesn't fits to my style...
  2. 00:12:168 (1) - try to stack it with 00:11:718 (4) -'s tail i thought it was stacked... stack!
  3. 00:24:018 (6) - NC it
  4. 00:27:768 (2,3) - stack the tail
  5. 00:28:743 (5) - remove this note? Its overmapped imo, there is no drum hit or other instruments
  6. 00:37:068 (1) - same as Hard, you should remapped it with 1/3 All diffs with the same problem unuU
  7. 00:42:018 (6) - I suggest you add a green line here and increase the volume, with normal sampleset :D
  8. 00:42:918 (1) - you should end this spinner at 00:44:268
  9. 00:45:468 (4) - how about NC here?
  10. 00:47:193 (1,2) - you should move 00:47:418 (2) -'s tail away from 00:47:193 (1) - , because it's reverse sign was hidden by 00:47:193 (1) - , Idk if it is rankable or not
  11. 00:50:268 (8) - unsnapped object
  12. 01:06:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - hmm, I try to use 25% to hear this part, the actual rhythm should be this :
It sounds bad... :c
I hope those help :(
Dont Give up!!

Thanks for modding n-n!
Zare
1,512 posts
Joined March 2012
Zare

Yuuki Katsuki wrote:

Doesn't fits to my style...
The25thBaam_old
1 post
Joined August 2013
The25thBaam_old
Far best Watamote here.
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

The25thBaam wrote:

Far best Watamote here.
Thank you very much nwn
ArcusCosinus
173 posts
Joined December 2012
ArcusCosinus
Hi OwO
random mod

[Easy]

00:05:868 (1, 2) - ctrl+g and reposition
00:55:218 - add circle x=272 y=40
01:07:668 - ctrl+g

[Normal]

01:00:318 (3) - extend this slider to 01:01:218
01:15:618 - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/4NsIL.jpg
01:23:418 (5, 6) - change these circles to slider like http://puu.sh/4NsVL.jpg

[Hard]
This diff is a little weird for me o.O
00:13:668 - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/4Nt2D.jpg
01:13:218 (1) - replace last repeat with a circle

[Insane]
Amazing diff omg *o*
but
00:34:818 - would be break here?
01:06:018 - why this rhythm? can be more intuitive. please remap this.

And that's all :)
Hope it will be helpful
btw. maybe m4m?
t/148844
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
modreqs works sometimes!

Easy

00:03:618 (3) - not centered around previous object. Moving to 312 117 fixes this.
00:16:218 (1) - How about a fancier slider? http://puu.sh/4NC6F.jpg
00:30:918 (2,3) - Turn grid snap off and make this spacing closer to 1.00. It's weird being so close.
00:37:068 (1) - That overlap can be avoided. I suggest designing this so that the ends of the sliders are both equidistant. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032060 Coordinates 1: 351 238 2: 211 263 3: 171 128
00:47:118 (1) - I suggest getting it to more uniformly wrap around the previous object. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032068
Coordinates: 1: 372 65 2: 306 29 3: 184 112 (stacks perfectly on the blue slider)
00:58:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to space these more evenly with grid snap off.
01:01:818 (2,3,4,1) - better if spacing was similar here. Do the same as above.
01:20:418 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't symmetrical.
01:22:818 (1,2,3) - 1.00 to be consistent with previous shape?

Normal

00:03:618 (4) - Perhaps curve in the other direction? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032091 This contrasts better IMO.
00:15:918 (2) - Avoid touching the lifebar with objects.
00:48:318 (1) - Have this follow the same pattern as the previous combo? Notice the spacing is shifted differently.
00:48:918 (2,1,2) - Should make this 1.00 for better flow and look.
01:08:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - alternating the slider gaps is strange looking the way you have it. The spacing would have to be broken in the middle, but you can have the gap change in the middle instead of at the bottom of the sliders. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032107
01:15:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally this feels crowded to me. you could make a symmetry pattern here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032111

Hard

00:07:818 (4,5) - Space similarly to 1,2. Note, slider doesn't play as nice as slider note IMO.
00:16:668 (3,4) - Please fix this blanket. It's ugly.
00:21:768 (4,5,6) - How about this instead? http://puu.sh/4NFn3.jpg
00:37:118 (1) - The normal has this note at a different place in the timeline.
00:37:818 (3,1) - Avoid overlapping here.
00:48:618 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make perfectly straight?
01:20:418 (1,2) - align better?

Insane

00:15:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this. The flow is really weird. some things to note, 00:16:218 (5) - should be at 203 156 to be properly centered with the next slider. The triple's spacing can be cleaned up. I don't like the triple. I think it flows nicer with a slider at 00:15:918 - . Perhaps replace?
00:17:418 (7) - move to where 5 is.
00:28:818 (5,6) - Make 1.10 here. You can move the rest of the yellow combo to fix.
00:46:668 (4) - might be unrankable. You're not supposed to have a slider with tight slider ball movements.
eh im going to stop modding this difficulty. Good luck on this map!
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

Tagre wrote:

Hi OwO
random mod

[Easy]

00:05:868 (1, 2) - ctrl+g and reposition
00:55:218 - add circle x=272 y=40
01:07:668 - ctrl+g

[Normal]

01:00:318 (3) - extend this slider to 01:01:218
01:15:618 - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/4NsIL.jpg
01:23:418 (5, 6) - change these circles to slider like http://puu.sh/4NsVL.jpg Looks so bad...

[Hard]
This diff is a little weird for me o.O
00:13:668 - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/4Nt2D.jpg
01:13:218 (1) - replace last repeat with a circle

[Insane]
Amazing diff omg *o*
but
00:34:818 - would be break here?
01:06:018 - why this rhythm? can be more intuitive. please remap this. Because it follow the guitar triplets and it sounds and looks cool for me... i don't know how to remap that... it looks weird when i remap it, please help...

And that's all :)
Hope it will be helpful
btw. maybe m4m?
t/148844
Thanks for modding, a little short... and... weird... but thanks, i will mod it later ~
Arroz
91 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Arroz

TheVileOne wrote:

modreqs works sometimes!

Easy

00:03:618 (3) - not centered around previous object. Moving to 312 117 fixes this.
00:16:218 (1) - How about a fancier slider? http://puu.sh/4NC6F.jpg
00:30:918 (2,3) - Turn grid snap off and make this spacing closer to 1.00. It's weird being so close.
00:37:068 (1) - That overlap can be avoided. I suggest designing this so that the ends of the sliders are both equidistant. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032060 Coordinates 1: 351 238 2: 211 263 3: 171 128
00:47:118 (1) - I suggest getting it to more uniformly wrap around the previous object. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032068
Coordinates: 1: 372 65 2: 306 29 3: 184 112 (stacks perfectly on the blue slider)
00:58:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to space these more evenly with grid snap off.
01:01:818 (2,3,4,1) - better if spacing was similar here. Do the same as above.
01:20:418 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't symmetrical.
01:22:818 (1,2,3) - 1.00 to be consistent with previous shape?

Normal

00:03:618 (4) - Perhaps curve in the other direction? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032091 This contrasts better IMO.
00:15:918 (2) - Avoid touching the lifebar with objects.
00:48:318 (1) - Have this follow the same pattern as the previous combo? Notice the spacing is shifted differently.
00:48:918 (2,1,2) - Should make this 1.00 for better flow and look.
01:08:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - alternating the slider gaps is strange looking the way you have it. The spacing would have to be broken in the middle, but you can have the gap change in the middle instead of at the bottom of the sliders. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032107
01:15:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally this feels crowded to me. you could make a symmetry pattern here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032111

Hard

00:07:818 (4,5) - Space similarly to 1,2. Note, slider doesn't play as nice as slider note IMO.
00:16:668 (3,4) - Please fix this blanket. It's ugly.
00:21:768 (4,5,6) - How about this instead? http://puu.sh/4NFn3.jpg
00:37:118 (1) - The normal has this note at a different place in the timeline.
00:37:818 (3,1) - Avoid overlapping here.
00:48:618 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make perfectly straight?
01:20:418 (1,2) - align better?

Insane

00:15:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this. The flow is really weird. some things to note, 00:16:218 (5) - should be at 203 156 to be properly centered with the next slider. The triple's spacing can be cleaned up. I don't like the triple. I think it flows nicer with a slider at 00:15:918 - . Perhaps replace?
00:17:418 (7) - move to where 5 is.
00:28:818 (5,6) - Make 1.10 here. You can move the rest of the yellow combo to fix.
00:46:668 (4) - might be unrankable. You're not supposed to have a slider with tight slider ball movements.
eh im going to stop modding this difficulty. What... but there are many ranked maps with this kind of slider D: Good luck on this map!
Thanks for moding...~!
khancerberus
7 posts
Joined July 2012
khancerberus
esta muy buena, deberian de rankearla
kanocchi
325 posts
Joined February 2013
kanocchi

koichi_taku wrote:

esta muy buena, deberian de rankearla
I Agree!
Raisa12
330 posts
Joined January 2013
Raisa12
Hello ~
mention only a few small things

[Easy]
00:09:318 (3,4,5) -try this as well http://puu.sh/7qGqX.jpg
00:19:218 (4) - move x: 191 y:233
01:18:018 (1) - spiner end this here 01:20:418
01:21:018 - try this?

it will sound better

[Hard]
00:34:218 - try this?

00:40:118 (3) -not believe that this slider is better done here? 00:40:818 (Following vowel)

luck with this ;)
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