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Shoji Meguro - Subete no Hitono Tamashiino Tatakai

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Melt
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Topic Starter
Melt
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月26日 星期六 at 9:35:16

Artist: Shoji Meguro
Title: Subete no Hitono Tamashiino Tatakai
Source: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3
Tags: Aniplex smt fes
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5552kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.48 stars, 236 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 397 notes)
  3. Normal (2.78 stars, 190 notes)
Download: Shoji Meguro - Subete no Hitono Tamashiino Tatakai
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Bungaku Shounen
114 posts
Joined May 2013
Bungaku Shounen
SF
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:

SF
拍
timing help:
bpm 150 offset 502
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
hihi
Enako Rin
Enako Rin
♪(o=゜▽゜)人(゜▽゜=o)♪
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
[General]
  1. offset - 8
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:638 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 01:41:238 - 冗余的时间线
  3. 02:42:038 - 冗余的时间线
  4. 00:01:288 (3) - 加clap
  5. 00:13:288 (1) - 后面两个圈加clap
  6. 00:14:888 (3) - 第二个圈加whistle
  7. 00:17:688 (2) - 加whistle
  8. 00:19:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish,后两个圈加clap
  9. 00:20:488 (2) - 第一个圈加clap
  10. 00:21:288 (3,4,5,6) - 加clap
  11. 00:27:688 (3) - 最后一个圈加clap
  12. 00:30:888 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  13. 00:34:088 (3) - 最后一个圈加clap
  14. 00:37:288 (5) - 最后一个圈加clap
  15. 00:38:888 (1) - 加finish
  16. 00:40:488 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  17. 00:43:688 (2) - 最后一个圈加clap;移动到(217, 217)
  18. 00:46:888 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  19. 01:42:888 (1) - 加finish
  20. 02:08:488 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
  21. 02:34:888 (2) - 加clap
  22. 02:36:488 (5) - 第一个圈加clap
  23. 02:38:088 (3) - 第一个圈加clap
  24. 02:40:488 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
  25. 02:42:888 (4) - 第一个圈加clap
  26. 02:44:488 (3) - 第一个圈加clap
  27. 02:46:088 (6) - 第一个圈加clap
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:288 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
  2. 00:26:088 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
  3. 00:49:488 (3) - new combo？
  4. 01:04:488 (1) - Ctrl + G？
  5. 02:13:288 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳应该缩小一些
  6. 02:21:388 (1) - 长于6秒的spinner不推荐
[Insane]
  1. 我在考虑AR是不是该-1，这个比hard难很多
  2. 00:55:688 (4) - new combo
  3. 00:56:488 (7) - new combo
Hard和Insane的音效照着Normal的节奏来改吧，我懒得一比就不一个一个写出来了

日妈妹儿贴姥爷的图越来越神了 摸起来力不从心
星星射起
----------
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
服气

看能不能随便写点送sp

[Insane]
00:56:488 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 总觉得不NC数字好像有点大 不好看
01:02:888 (5) - ^
01:52:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 来研究下这四组四方最舒服的跳法
我感觉是
粉色 ： 5 -> 6 , 6 -> 7, 7->8, 8->5
红色 ： 2<->4 , 5<->8. 6<->7

02:11:288 (9,1) - 这之间的1/4音不跟了吗？

[Normal]
00:42:088 (1) - 感觉就这两个偶数折返的啊w干脆也改成单折加note的结构？
02:08:488 (1) - ^
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
  1. 貌似有些綠線忘記snap了
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. 00:05:638 - 這條線沒用到
  2. 01:30:088 - 到 01:33:288 - 音量有點太小聲 :?
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 01:30:088 - 到 01:33:288 - 20%真的有點小聲
  2. 01:33:288 - break ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 00:56:488 (7) - NC ?
  2. 01:03:688 (9) - NC ?
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
抱歉我只能摸到這些,
祝你早日rank ! ;)
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
Weiren
[General]
  1. offset - 8 这个还是一如既往的等bat来233，我拿不准
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:638 - 冗余的时间线 fixed
  2. 01:41:238 - 冗余的时间线 fixed
  3. 02:42:038 - 冗余的时间线 fixed
  4. 00:01:288 (3) - 加clap
  5. 00:13:288 (1) - 后面两个圈加clap
  6. 00:14:888 (3) - 第二个圈加whistle
  7. 00:17:688 (2) - 加whistle
  8. 00:19:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish,后两个圈加clap
  9. 00:20:488 (2) - 第一个圈加clap
  10. 00:21:288 (3,4,5,6) - 加clap
  11. 00:27:688 (3) - 最后一个圈加clap
  12. 00:30:888 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  13. 00:34:088 (3) - 最后一个圈加clap
  14. 00:37:288 (5) - 最后一个圈加clap
  15. 00:38:888 (1) - 加finish
  16. 00:40:488 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  17. 00:43:688 (2) - 最后一个圈加clap;移动到(217, 217)
  18. 00:46:888 (4) - 最后一个圈加clap
  19. 01:42:888 (1) - 加finish
  20. 02:08:488 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
  21. 02:34:888 (2) - 加clap
  22. 02:36:488 (5) - 第一个圈加clap
  23. 02:38:088 (3) - 第一个圈加clap
  24. 02:40:488 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
  25. 02:42:888 (4) - 第一个圈加clap
  26. 02:44:488 (3) - 第一个圈加clap
  27. 02:46:088 (6) - 第一个圈加clap
    fin基本都加上了，感觉低难度用fin渲染一下还不错，clap加了一些，最后那一段我觉得不用太多音效就没加
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:288 (1) - 第一个圈加finish fixed
  2. 00:26:088 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish fixed
  3. 00:49:488 (3) - new combo？
  4. 01:04:488 (1) - Ctrl + G？
  5. 02:13:288 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳应该缩小一些 实际上我感觉这就是这个diff唯一的难点了，即便是dt也是一样
  6. 02:21:388 (1) - 长于6秒的spinner不推荐
[Insane]
  1. 我在考虑AR是不是该-1，这个比hard难很多 其实ar8就全是dt了
  2. 00:55:688 (4) - new combo 按小节加的 暂时没改
  3. 00:56:488 (7) - new combo
Hard和Insane的音效照着Normal的节奏来改吧，我懒得一比就不一个一个写出来了

日妈妹儿贴姥爷的图越来越神了 摸起来力不从心
星星射起
----------
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Zweib
服气

看能不能随便写点送sp

[Insane]
00:56:488 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 总觉得不NC数字好像有点大 不好看
01:02:888 (5) - ^ 按小节加的，暂时没动
01:52:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 来研究下这四组四方最舒服的跳法
我感觉是
粉色 ： 5 -> 6 , 6 -> 7, 7->8, 8->5
红色 ： 2<->4 , 5<->8. 6<->7 好评，改掉了两处

02:11:288 (9,1) - 这之间的1/4音不跟了吗？ 相同的地方都是这么处理的

[Normal]
00:42:088 (1) - 感觉就这两个偶数折返的啊w干脆也改成单折加note的结构？ 我懒o3o
02:08:488 (1) - ^

Miomio Chii
Hi, here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
  1. 貌似有些綠線忘記snap了 大部分是下在1/8黄线上的，个人习惯
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. 00:05:638 - 這條線沒用到 fixed
  2. 01:30:088 - 到 01:33:288 - 音量有點太小聲 :? 加了5%
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 01:30:088 - 到 01:33:288 - 20%真的有點小聲 加了5%
  2. 01:33:288 - break ? 感觉这里没必要
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 00:56:488 (7) - NC ?
  2. 01:03:688 (9) - NC ? 按小节下的，暂时没动
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
抱歉我只能摸到這些,
祝你早日rank ! ;)
thanks :3

Thanks for modding!
Graphite Edge
107 posts
Joined April 2011
Graphite Edge
Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My M4M as requested :3

* Should be fixed
* Suggestion only
* General Comment


[normal]
* Beat snap divisor 1/8 change to 1/4 (any 1/8 notes were used)
*00:00:888 - try something like this here:
*00:00:888 (2) - delete
*00:01:288 (3) - delete
*Add a slider from 00:00:888 - to 00:01:288
*00:22:888 (1) - delete
*00:23:688 (2) - delete
*00:22:888 - Add a slider 00:23:688 - slider ends here

[hard]
*00:20:288 (2,3,4,5) - Try this pattern here:
SPOILER
*00:48:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feel a bit empty, and dont looks like a break part, can be improved instrumental is enough for a few more notes and new pattern

[insane]
*00:20:288 (4,5,1) - try this :
SPOILER
*00:20:288 (4) - NC here
*02:00:488 (1,2) - Move to 363;349
*02:00:888 (3,4) - ^ 145;349

GL!
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Graph1te Edge wrote:

Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My M4M as requested :3

* Should be fixed
* Suggestion only
* General Comment


[normal]
* Beat snap divisor 1/8 change to 1/4 (any 1/8 notes were used) i put some green line in it，anyway，fixed
*00:00:888 - try something like this here:
*00:00:888 (2) - delete
*00:01:288 (3) - delete
*Add a slider from 00:00:888 - to 00:01:288
*00:22:888 (1) - delete
*00:23:688 (2) - delete
*00:22:888 - Add a slider 00:23:688 - slider ends here
those changes will make the difficulty of this diff <2.76 stars，but i wanna keep it

[hard]
*00:20:288 (2,3,4,5) - Try this pattern here:
SPOILER
changed a little in my way
*00:48:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feel a bit empty, and dont looks like a break part, can be improved instrumental is enough for a few more notes and new pattern i think its fit the music here

[insane]
*00:20:288 (4,5,1) - try this :
SPOILER
its ok
*00:20:288 (4) - NC here
*02:00:488 (1,2) - Move to 363;349
*02:00:888 (3,4) - ^ 145;349 reduced a little distance

GL!
Thanks for modding！
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
[General]

  • 妹尔特> <
    A well Done Mapset,just some suggestions for you.Maybe a different view can give you some different idea.
[Insane]

  • 02:01:088 (4,1) - A horriable distance between two patterns.

    02:08:088 (8) -
    SPOILER

    02:09:488 (2) - try ctrl+g

    00:42:888 (3,4) - I'd prefer to put them here.
    SPOILER

    02:15:488 (2) - Add a note here,imo.
    SPOILER

    最后是个毒瘤建议：所有遮挡的note都放到slider开头(......
    不能赞更多
[Hard]

  • 01:48:888 (7) - A bit too far.
    01:51:688 (8) - Strange here,try to put it like this.
    SPOILER
    01:04:888 (2) - ctrl+g too? cuz other patterns do so.
[Normal]

  • Nice.
Looking forward to its RANK! GoLuc star.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

N E K O wrote:

[General]

  • 妹尔特> <
    A well Done Mapset,just some suggestions for you.Maybe a different view can give you some different idea.
[Insane]

  • 02:01:088 (4,1) - A horriable distance between two patterns. 为了照顾对称，就牺牲掉了orz

    02:08:088 (8) -
    SPOILER

    02:09:488 (2) - try ctrl+g

    00:42:888 (3,4) - I'd prefer to put them here.
    SPOILER
    稍稍往右边移动了一点

    02:15:488 (2) - Add a note here,imo.
    SPOILER
    感觉原来这个就不错

    最后是个毒瘤建议：所有遮挡的note都放到slider开头(......
    不能赞更多 好主意，改了一点
[Hard]

  • 01:48:888 (7) - A bit too far. 其实跳都是2.6 ;w;
    01:51:688 (8) - Strange here,try to put it like this.
    SPOILER
    fixed
    01:04:888 (2) - ctrl+g too? cuz other patterns do so. fixed,还调整了下1的位置
[Normal]

  • Nice.
Looking forward to its RANK! GoLuc star.
Thank you for your help :3
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Tidek
Hey, from my queue.

Good mapset overall, i will just give few sugestions.

Insane
  1. 00:18:088 (3) - http://puu.sh/4d4eE.jpg ? You can accent that little beat by adding circle since is no guitar there. 4-slider can be longer
  2. 00:19:688 (1,2,3) - higher DS? These sounds are strong and its ideal accent to make jumps
  3. 00:27:888 - You missed one sound in guitar, here is addable circle/slider, best option is to add circle here 00:27:688 and shorter slider here 00:27:888 (stacked or not), the same:
    here 00:30:888 (4)
    here 00:34:088 (7)
    here 00:37:288 (7)
    here 00:40:488 (4)
    here 00:43:688 (5)
    and here 00:46:888 (6)
  4. 00:29:288 (1) - too many reverses for me
  5. 01:07:288 (8) - delete slider and add circle? (u focused to make sliders on piano sounds) http://puu.sh/4d4GH.jpg looks better if we talking about rhythm
  6. 02:01:288 (1,2) - ctrl + g?
  7. 02:01:288 (1,2) - ^
  8. 02:11:588 - Just saying that here is addable circle. But u will have to resnap notes, so up to u.

Hard
  1. 00:17:288 (2) - move to 00:17:088 and make longer slider
  2. 01:51:288 (7,8,9) - not too many stacks here?

    Nothing to say more, rhythm in that diff is correct, maybe more circles on that part? 00:26:088 - 00:48:088 its full of sliders

Normal
  1. 00:22:888 (1,2,3,4) - Do similar like u did on hard diff
  2. 01:58:088 (4) - 2 circles instead of that slider?
    Like in hard, diff is fine.

GL
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Tidek wrote:

Hey, from my queue.

Good mapset overall, i will just give few sugestions.

Insane
  1. 00:18:088 (3) - http://puu.sh/4d4eE.jpg ? You can accent that little beat by adding circle since is no guitar there. 4-slider can be longer
  2. 00:19:688 (1,2,3) - higher DS? These sounds are strong and its ideal accent to make jumps good idea
  3. 00:27:888 - You missed one sound in guitar, here is addable circle/slider, best option is to add circle here 00:27:688 and shorter slider here 00:27:888 (stacked or not), the same:
    here 00:30:888 (4)
    here 00:34:088 (7)
    here 00:37:288 (7)
    here 00:40:488 (4)
    here 00:43:688 (5)
    and here 00:46:888 (6)
    i think the rhythm is fine for me，and its may too difficult if i put many note here
  4. 00:29:288 (1) - too many reverses for me i think its ok in a insane diff
  5. 01:07:288 (8) - delete slider and add circle? (u focused to make sliders on piano sounds) http://puu.sh/4d4GH.jpg looks better if we talking about rhythm
  6. 02:01:288 (1,2) - ctrl + g?
  7. 02:01:288 (1,2) - ^ finally i decide to reduce the distance between the objects
  8. 02:11:588 - Just saying that here is addable circle. But u will have to resnap notes, so up to u.

Hard
  1. 00:17:288 (2) - move to 00:17:088 and make longer slider its ok for me
  2. 01:51:288 (7,8,9) - not too many stacks here? fixed

    Nothing to say more, rhythm in that diff is correct, maybe more circles on that part? 00:26:088 - 00:48:088 its full of sliders

Normal
  1. 00:22:888 (1,2,3,4) - Do similar like u did on hard diff
  2. 01:58:088 (4) - 2 circles instead of that slider?
    Like in hard, diff is fine.

GL
thanks for modding :3
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Hi, NM from my modding queue.

General:
~

Normal:
~00:39:688 (3) - It's touching the HP bar, move it down a bit.
~02:39:688 (6) - Move this down to align with 02:39:288 (5) for better flow.
~02:41:688 (2) - Move this 1 grid to the left and down for better flow.

Hard:
~00:00:488 - 00:22:488 - This part seems to be in 1.4x spacing. Why not just keep everything consistent at 1.2x spacing since you didn't further increase spacing in Kiai.
~01:10:888 (8) - Space this instead? To go with the flow.
~01:39:688 (3) - NC.
~01:45:288 (6) - Dun stack with 01:45:088 (5) . Doesn't go with the flow.
~02:13:288 (4,5,6,7) - Try to make these spaced out evenly.

Try to consider your spacings properly as some parts make the map awkward, especially that u've used large spacing for the intro and ending. Think about Kiai, since it's the only part without its own individual spacing.

Insane:
~00:56:488 (7) - NC.
~00:57:288 (5,6,7,8) - Try to make proper square jumps. As a square's sides are equal, so should the distances be equal. Therefore I suggest to space them by 2x. Something like this --> http://puu.sh/4fwSf.jpg
~01:02:888 (5) - NC.
~01:12:488 (5) - Try to stack it's end to 01:10:888 (1) .
~01:35:688 (8) - Space this further to emphasis it's coming later.
~01:39:688 (3) - NC like in the last diff.
~01:54:088 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this square jump suddenly bigger then the other? 0.o Try to keep consistent.
~02:06:988 (1) - It's overlapping and players can't see the slider. Move it to avoid overlap and also add NC.
~02:00:688 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't really follow the flow here. Why not keep consistent with this pattern? 02:13:288 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

Well, that's all from me ^^ Good luck!
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi, NM from my modding queue.

General:
~

Normal:
~00:39:688 (3) - It's touching the HP bar, move it down a bit.
~02:39:688 (6) - Move this down to align with 02:39:288 (5) for better flow. fixed
~02:41:688 (2) - Move this 1 grid to the left and down for better flow. fixed

Hard:
~00:00:488 - 00:22:488 - This part seems to be in 1.4x spacing. Why not just keep everything consistent at 1.2x spacing since you didn't further increase spacing in Kiai. because i use 0.75x in this part and then larger bpmx in the follows,so i just want to keep the spacing looks same.
~01:10:888 (8) - Space this instead? To go with the flow. fixed
~01:39:688 (3) - NC.
~01:45:288 (6) - Dun stack with 01:45:088 (5) . Doesn't go with the flow. its fine for me0.0
~02:13:288 (4,5,6,7) - Try to make these spaced out evenly.

Try to consider your spacings properly as some parts make the map awkward, especially that u've used large spacing for the intro and ending. Think about Kiai, since it's the only part without its own individual spacing.changed the ending part's distance to 1.4

Insane:
~00:56:488 (7) - NC.
~00:57:288 (5,6,7,8) - Try to make proper square jumps. As a square's sides are equal, so should the distances be equal. Therefore I suggest to space them by 2x. Something like this --> http://puu.sh/4fwSf.jpg i think there are a little changes in music
~01:02:888 (5) - NC.
~01:12:488 (5) - Try to stack it's end to 01:10:888 (1) .
~01:35:688 (8) - Space this further to emphasis it's coming later.
~01:39:688 (3) - NC like in the last diff.
~01:54:088 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this square jump suddenly bigger then the other? 0.o Try to keep consistent.i follow the vocal here
~02:06:988 (1) - It's overlapping and players can't see the slider. Move it to avoid overlap and also add NC.changed a litte,but i think its ok since this is a insane diff
~02:00:688 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't really follow the flow here. Why not keep consistent with this pattern? 02:13:288 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

Well, that's all from me ^^ Good luck!
Thanks for modding :3
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
K，说好的mod，好喜欢这首歌啊……
如果我觉得有必要改的地方，我会用*标注出来

Normal
AR变成4
00:49:488 (3,4,5,6,1) -
试试这种节奏排布吧
01:16:888 加一个note
01:46:088 (1) - normal finish 音效
01:50:888 (4) - 头部 normal finish 音效
01:52:488 (1) - 头部 soft clap 音效，尾部 whistle
01:53:288 (2) - 换成whistle音效
01:55:288 (6) - normal finish音效
后面一段也可以试着加一些音效啦，下面几条关于音效的建议可能有点重复，选择性的看看吧
01:55:688 (1) - soft finish
01:58:888 (1) - normal finish
02:02:088 (1,2) - 也许可以考虑滑条身体加上音效
02:07:688 (4) - 头尾都加drum whistle音效
02:46:088 (6) - 试试加两个音效渐弱的绿线？

Hard
01:33:288 (5,1) - 这中间的部分发挥空间还是蛮大的，不一定非得空这么多
比如01:34:488~01:35:688 加四个中间空一分拍的note是可以的
02:46:088 (4) - 改成一个note和一个单折返的二分拍滑条
Generally，good map~

Insane
主要是关于适当overmap的意见，弄完之后会有种似乎换了400cc血的感觉，不喜欢的话直接忽视掉就可以了
00:05:088 加个note
00:06:088 (5) - 改成一个note，然后在00:06:288加个二连
或者00:06:488 (6) - 改成一个三连
00:11:488 - 加一个note
00:11:688 (2) - 改成一个三连
00:17:888 这里加一个二连
*00:22:888 (2,3,4,5) - 不考虑摆一个规整一些的形状么？
00:33:988 加个note
00:37:188 加个note
00:39:988 加个note……
00:48:388 继续加note……
00:48:888 (2,3,4,5) - 其实这里可以考虑滑条身体加上normal whistle的音效，就是那个长哨音
01:09:088 这里加个二连
01:21:588 加note有惊喜，01:27:988也是
01:38:488 和 01:38:888 继续加note
01:41:888 加个二连
01:55:188 继续加note
01:55:588 依然加note
02:01:988 还是加note
02:11:588 这个note是完全得看各位大大的眼色了……但是我觉得十分合适！
Over~
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Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

K，说好的mod，好喜欢这首歌啊……
如果我觉得有必要改的地方，我会用*标注出来

Normal
AR变成4
00:49:488 (3,4,5,6,1) -
试试这种节奏排布吧
感觉原来那个还行
01:16:888 加一个note 好
01:46:088 (1) - normal finish 音效
01:50:888 (4) - 头部 normal finish 音效
01:52:488 (1) - 头部 soft clap 音效，尾部 whistle
01:53:288 (2) - 换成whistle音效
01:55:288 (6) - normal finish音效
后面一段也可以试着加一些音效啦，下面几条关于音效的建议可能有点重复，选择性的看看吧
01:55:688 (1) - soft finish
01:58:888 (1) - normal finish
02:02:088 (1,2) - 也许可以考虑滑条身体加上音效
02:07:688 (4) - 头尾都加drum whistle音效
02:46:088 (6) - 试试加两个音效渐弱的绿线？好
音效这边的话其实大部分你说用normal fin的地方我都有用drum垫了一下，其实个人觉得这个曲子的话不需要用
像drum whistle和normal fin这种比较重的音效，所以只是在一些地方稍微加了点whistle和soft fin，还有些地方调
整了下音量。

Hard
01:33:288 (5,1) - 这中间的部分发挥空间还是蛮大的，不一定非得空这么多 这么一说还真是，加了一个note
比如01:34:488~01:35:688 加四个中间空一分拍的note是可以的
02:46:088 (4) - 改成一个note和一个单折返的二分拍滑条 最后这点因为和insane一样的节奏所以不想再改难了
Generally，good map~

Insane
主要是关于适当overmap的意见，弄完之后会有种似乎换了400cc血的感觉，不喜欢的话直接忽视掉就可以了
00:05:088 加个note
00:06:088 (5) - 改成一个note，然后在00:06:288加个二连
或者00:06:488 (6) - 改成一个三连
00:11:488 - 加一个note
00:11:688 (2) - 改成一个三连
00:17:888 这里加一个二连
*00:22:888 (2,3,4,5) - 不考虑摆一个规整一些的形状么？
00:33:988 加个note
00:37:188 加个note
00:39:988 加个note……
00:48:388 继续加note……
00:48:888 (2,3,4,5) - 其实这里可以考虑滑条身体加上normal whistle的音效，就是那个长哨音
01:09:088 这里加个二连
01:21:588 加note有惊喜，01:27:988也是
01:38:488 和 01:38:888 继续加note
01:41:888 加个二连
01:55:188 继续加note
01:55:588 依然加note
02:01:988 还是加note
02:11:588 这个note是完全得看各位大大的眼色了……但是我觉得十分合适！

其实我也觉得上面有好些地方都很不错，按照这个思路如果能重新加个diff的话应该感觉会很好，不过可能是我一开始做这图的定位跟你的思路有些差距吧，一开始我就没打算把这图弄的太难，因此基本上节奏都是跟着音乐下的，所以上面的建议都改得不多，Anyway,added some notes,fixed some nc errors and changed some distance. Thanks a lot for your help :3
Thanks for modding :3
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi，Melt。Extra mod req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Combo 5 感覺偏黑，關背景會看不到外圈，講一下而已。

[Normal] 很正常沒什麼問題。

02:02:088 (1) - 怎麼突然冒出一個whistle聲? 要不要去掉。

[Hard]

00:46:888 (2) - 稍微往左邊移一點，blanket下面的滑條尾?
02:11:688 (1) - 104 48?


[Insane]

00:22:088 (8) - 272 96? 移到這邊應該比較好讀連打，也跟下面成個三角形。

00:29:288 (1) -
後面是一個折返，這邊兩個，我想應該能換成一個跟後面折返做個整體(如果要做，先Ctrl+g，再取消折返一次，滑條尾端再放個note(或放其他地方)如何?)

00:33:288 (3,4) - Ctrl+g互換, flow不錯。
00:33:688 (5) - 感覺應該能跟34相對稱，移上面點?
00:35:888 (2) - 疊到滑條尾上?
00:37:888 (8) - 7到8有點扭，我想應該可以放在00:36:488 (5) 的滑條尾 或 00:38:488 (9) 的滑條尾。
00:39:288 (1) - Ctrl+g?
00:41:088 (5) - 疊到00:41:688 (6) 滑條尾上?
00:55:288 (2,5) - 這兩個全選移到148 126， 做個四邊形梗?
01:48:888 (6) - 這會不會太下面?
02:07:688 (7) - Ctrl +g?
02:10:088 (5) - 怎不跟下面來個平行?

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.(我覺得這修改完你可以找妮妮要泡啦..何不試試看? 都很順。)
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

smallboat wrote:

Hi，Melt。Extra mod req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Combo 5 感覺偏黑，關背景會看不到外圈，講一下而已。

[Normal] 很正常沒什麼問題。

02:02:088 (1) - 怎麼突然冒出一個whistle聲? 要不要去掉。 fixed

[Hard]

00:46:888 (2) - 稍微往左邊移一點，blanket下面的滑條尾? fixed
02:11:688 (1) - 104 48?


[Insane]

00:22:088 (8) - 272 96? 移到這邊應該比較好讀連打，也跟下面成個三角形。

00:29:288 (1) -
後面是一個折返，這邊兩個，我想應該能換成一個跟後面折返做個整體(如果要做，先Ctrl+g，再取消折返一次，滑條尾端再放個note(或放其他地方)如何?) 后面漏一个note是为了配合后面一组小跳

00:33:288 (3,4) - Ctrl+g互換, flow不錯。
00:33:688 (5) - 感覺應該能跟34相對稱，移上面點? 把4挪了一点
00:35:888 (2) - 疊到滑條尾上?
00:37:888 (8) - 7到8有點扭，我想應該可以放在00:36:488 (5) 的滑條尾 或 00:38:488 (9) 的滑條尾。 这4个slider做的是一个形状，虽然flow有点别扭吧
00:39:288 (1) - Ctrl+g?
00:41:088 (5) - 疊到00:41:688 (6) 滑條尾上?
00:55:288 (2,5) - 這兩個全選移到148 126， 做個四邊形梗? 这个是3个3个一组
01:48:888 (6) - 這會不會太下面? test了一下感觉没问题
02:07:688 (7) - Ctrl +g? 好
02:10:088 (5) - 怎不跟下面來個平行?

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.(我覺得這修改完你可以找妮妮要泡啦..何不試試看? 都很順。)
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
thx for modding~
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