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Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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Topic Starter
ignorethis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月29日 at 12:08:33

Artist: Liverne
Title: Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: Cirno Crazy Jay v2b happy30 Lissette Lizbeth animask baka
BPM: 140
Filesize: 10530kb
Play Time: 06:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon (4.74 stars, 1101 notes)
Download: Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished. To BAT: If you want to bubble this map please manually move it to pending.

Many thanks to Crazy Jay's awesome SBing!

[note]Thumbnail of this map is wrong.
RemmyX25 Edit:Thumbnail should be fixed, redownload the osz for the correct background and osb fixes.

A full description could be found here.

viewtopic.php?f=53&t=14360&p=147873#p147873

00:00:000 - 00:27:652 Already mapped by myself.
00:27:652 - 01:25:938 Claimed by Crazy Jay, finished
01:25:938 - 02:17:366 Claimed by Lizbeth, finished
02:17:366 - 03:22:509 Claimed by v2b, finished.
03:22:509 - 04:17:366 Claimed by animask, finished
04:17:366 - 05:15:652 Mapped by myself.
05:15:652 - 06:13:938 Claimed by happy30, finished
06:13:938 - 06:55:111 Claimed by Lissette, finished.
Crazy Jay
Sleep Powder
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [animasks part].osu
Lissette
Finished, tell me if you want me to change something.... ^^

Cya!

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [Lissette].osu
Lizbeth
lukewarmholiday
MP3 isnt in the latest submission.

you need to do a full resubmit.
v2b
niedz
A_A
kioukiou
nice work.

star for you.
Jeffro
00:10:50 (1,2) - I don't this big slider overlap.
00:33:65 (2,3) - Transition between these 2 notes seem weird.
01:27:22 (1,2,3) - Soft whistle doesn't fit in here imo.
02:14:58 (7) - Make this slider a little longer ^^
03:22:72 (1,2) - These claps sound awkward in some way.
03:53:58 (3) - A note here could sound good? :)
04:02:58 (1,2,3,4) - I can't hear them hitsounds ;o Many people really dislike that and could throw them off. (And that happening in a marathon isn't a good idea XD)
04:15:65 (11,12) - ^
04:30:22 (3) - Remove whistle.
05:19:93 (3) - Don't like the claps on this slider in comparising to the song.
06:03:86 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like there's something missing here. Maybe a note or different hitsound on 4.
06:18:22 (3,4,5) - This sounds too good here imo. It sounds like spam in a silent part of the song.


Beautifull map. Starred!
happy30
some hitsounds on my part

05:15:65 (1) - Clap on end of the slider
05:17:36 (1) - add whistle on repeat
05:17:36 (1) - Clap on end of the slider
05:19:93 (3) - Clap on repeat & end of slider
05:20:79 (1) - On the start of this slider, change the clap to finish
05:20:79 (1) - Clap on end, remove whistle
05:22:08 (5) - clap here
05:23:79 (3) - ^
05:25:50 (9) - Clap on start of this slider
05:25:93 (1) - remove clap
05:36:86 (4) - remove clap on end
05:37:50 (5) - add clap
05:45:54 (6) - remove this note
05:46:29 (8) - 1/4 later
05:46:40 (9) - remove this note
06:04:08 (4) - remove finish
06:06:22 (2) - finish on start, remove whistle
06:07:08 (4) - remove finish
lukewarmholiday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Crazy Jay
SB Making >w< please wait
Topic Starter
ignorethis

lukewarmholiday wrote:

(¯◡◡¯·)b

Mind if I make an altered+extended version of my maps difficulty? :V
ok please~
Crazy Jay
SB Finished
I have send files to ignorethis
please waiting for his uploading.
Hanyuu
Yay FC ^^

star this map
Dangaard
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DaRRi
00:34:18 (3) - not cool, 1/4 forward

01:45:97 (1) - place somewhere else
01:51:22 (9) - new combo
01:59:79 (1,2) - beautify them

03:12:75 (5) - remove

03:24:86 (6,7) - make a long slider
03:27:00 (2) - why jump here?
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
03:52:72 (1) - ugly
03:52:72 (1,1) - why jump
03:53:36 (1,2,3,4) - bad readability
04:02:36 (13,1) - why jump

06:19:08 (5) - 1/4 longer
Cyclone
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
ignorethis

Cyclone wrote:

Song title is Beloved Tomboyish Girl (i don't care what it is in Japanese, we already have a ranked version of this song, let's keep it consistant please)

You might have known that changing names after uploading is very hard, and I don't see why should I use a English name for consistant. So unless another person asks me about the same problem, let's keep this name.

and the source makes no sense whatsoever. What the hell is Cradle? The source is supposed to say what anime/game/etc. the song has come from. If you were going for the album name, that would also be incorrect in this case(you have the correct name in the damn SB anyways)


ok fixed.
azuki
cool song.
suggestion only one thing.

06:30:866 (1) - why new combo? when i played, i was confused very much.
maybe new combo is 06:31:295 better.

awesome map.star!
Alace
cool job
the only thing bugging me is the clap sound
softclap doesn`t fit the song IMO
v2b`s part sounds the best
but it is too evil to ask you guys add many green lines

i think 4 solutions
A:use normalhit to replace soft clap
B:find another clap sound sample
C:get rid of claps use more softwhistles or finishs
D:ignore my post lol
I will do B for you guys

CJ`s part:i think clap is ok maybe lower the volume a bit
Lizbeth`s:plz don`t use claps in this part (too loud) you can also try to reduce the volume of soft-finish
V2b`s: perfect
animask:you oveused claps (even you lower the volume)
IGN`s:i like the part without softclap anyway your pattens sound very good
Happy30`s::pattens are good
Lissette:sounds good

Spacing is just fine
this map is totally playable

Forgve my lazy+nazi
Cyclone
Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
Lissette
Is looking good, nice SB :)
DaRRi
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
not changing this? i think will make more sense
Topic Starter
ignorethis

Cyclone wrote:

Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.
lukewarmholiday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone

ignorethis wrote:

Cyclone wrote:

Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.
No, that's a really bad reason. By that logic, you should never be uploading anything. Ever. Try again.
Topic Starter
ignorethis
ok cyclone you win i will change the name someday

btw it will be some time before i get my hand on this map again. school began. sorry guys.
Sure
I can't DL this map.
please upload again.
Gabi
fun :D
dkey
nice map =w=
Sleep Powder
Add everyone who mapped a part of the marathon in the tags.
Its important~
Also add lead in time
ACC
无条件应援⑨
Lizbeth
nice work with SB Crazy Jay :)
Dangaard
I already starred, but I want to thank you guys that this didn't turn out insane or unplayabe (which seems to be a problem on several collab maps :roll: ).
Maybe I should not have refused to join...
WyndII
Awesome collab!
I feel bad for Dangaard though :P
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