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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 20 settembre 2013 at 17:01:47

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: PSI-missing (TV Size)
Source: To Aru Majutsu No Index
Tags: opening Kamijou Touma Mikoto Misaka J.C. Staff とある魔術の禁書目録(インデックス toaru Nemis
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15686kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,77 stars, 207 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 303 notes)
  3. Nemis (3,25 stars, 103 notes)


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To Aru Majutsu No Index 1st op
Needs mod :D
posted
[Normal]
http://puu.sh/3Ek26.osu major changes to rhythm
[Hard]
This diff is ok imho, i would just make it a bit harder adding some jumps (maybe between the short sliders)
[Baka]
Maybe OD 8 is too much with all these spaced streams, i would go for 7

00:19:134 (5,6,7,8) - this stream is ugly, i remade it like this http://puu.sh/3EgV9.jpg
code:
136,212,19134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,151,19249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,99,19364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,127,19480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
posted

Sephibro wrote:

[Hard]
This diff is ok imho, i would just make it a bit harder adding some jumps (maybe between the short sliders)I will take a look on this
[Baka]
Maybe OD 8 is too much with all these spaced streams, i would go for 7 Nope, atm i won't change the od

00:19:134 (5,6,7,8) - this stream is ugly, i remade it like this http://puu.sh/3EgV9.jpg I've made some changes to make those stream more flowing
code:
136,212,19134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,151,19249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,99,19364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,127,19480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
posted
Okay, here I am.

[General]
  1. Apri Song Setup e metti come Artist: 川田まみ e tieni Kawada Mami come Romanised e il titolo dovrebbe essere PSI-missing, according to http://vgmdb.net/album/34691
  2. Come tags metti opening Kamijou Touma Mikoto Misaka J.C. Staff とある魔術の禁書目録(インデックス toaru Nemis


[Baka]

  • Non vedo così tanto il bisogno di chiamarla Baka, rinominala in Insane <.<
    Mancano gli hitsounds D: Su questo non posso dare tanto una mano, prova a copiarli dalla diff di Nemis con il programma di grumd e poi aggiungerci qualcosa
    HP-2, OD-1, AR-1

  1. 00:07:826 (2,3,4) - Per quanto sia bello esteticamente, sovrapporre la fine degli slider non è bellissimo da giocare
  2. 00:09:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Assolutamente no, riferito a tutta la mappa. Ti do due consigli: 1) quando puoi stackali 2) Se non li stacki usa il distance snap 0.5 solo per gli streams. In questo caso ti consiglio il secondo :p
  3. 00:16:249 (2) - Rimuovi e stacka 00:16:365 (3,4) - al 5
  4. 00:17:057 (6) - New combo
  5. 00:37:019 (4,5,6,7,8) - Non vedo il bisogno di questo stream
  6. 00:28:134 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  7. 01:13:365 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10) - Nemmeno di questo

    Torno quando hai tolto l'overmap che c'è, controlla bene e falla più facile, inoltre ti consiglio di non usare slider troppo curvi (a mio parere) come 01:00:211 (1) - , fai solo una curva leggera. E ricordati degli hitsounds anche per la Hard :p


Torno quando hai fixato un po' o/
posted

Leader wrote:

Okay, here I am.

[General]
  1. Apri Song Setup e metti come Artist: 川田まみ e tieni Kawada Mami come Romanised e il titolo dovrebbe essere PSI-missing, according to http://vgmdb.net/album/34691
  2. Come tags metti opening Kamijou Touma Mikoto Misaka J.C. Staff とある魔術の禁書目録(インデックス toaru Nemis
Fixed

[Baka]

  • Non vedo così tanto il bisogno di chiamarla Baka, rinominala in Insane <.<
    Mancano gli hitsounds D: Su questo non posso dare tanto una mano, prova a copiarli dalla diff di Nemis con il programma di grumd e poi aggiungerci qualcosa
    HP-2, OD-1, AR-1Fixed

  1. 00:07:826 (2,3,4) - Per quanto sia bello esteticamente, sovrapporre la fine degli slider non è bellissimo da giocarePer ora lascio così
  2. 00:09:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Assolutamente no, riferito a tutta la mappa. Ti do due consigli: 1) quando puoi stackali 2) Se non li stacki usa il distance snap 0.5 solo per gli streams. In questo caso ti consiglio il secondo :pFixed
  3. 00:16:249 (2) - Rimuovi e stacka 00:16:365 (3,4) - al 5Fixed
  4. 00:17:057 (6) - New comboFixed
  5. 00:37:019 (4,5,6,7,8) - Non vedo il bisogno di questo streamSostituito
  6. 00:28:134 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
  7. 01:13:365 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10) - Nemmeno di questo^

    Torno quando hai tolto l'overmap che c'è, controlla bene e falla più facile, inoltre ti consiglio di non usare slider troppo curvi (a mio parere) come 01:00:211 (1) - , fai solo una curva leggera. E ricordati degli hitsounds anche per la Hard :p


Torno quando hai fixato un po' o/
posted
Hi! Random mod:

[Nemis:]
The approach rate for Normal is too low. The usual speed should be at least 5.
It's the only diff without a Letterbox during breaks. And why does this diff not have countdown enabled? o.o
01:01:826 - Remove whistle, sounds like the odd one out.

[Hard:]
Your first spinner at 00:03:557 starts on a blue tick...nothing really wrong with that, it's just rather odd.
00:39:672 - Spinner doesn't' fit at this part of the song.
00:51:672 - Add a finish to the spinner
00:53:519 - Add a finish to the head of the slider.
00:55:365 - Add finish or whistle to this hit circle.
01:02:980 - clap
01:03:442 - ^
01:03:903 - ^
01:04:365 - ^
01:05:980 - Add finish to the tail of slider.
01:10:134 - Missing a note here.

[Insane:]
00:03:557 - same odd timing with the spinner.
01:24:326 - Stream doesn't fit here.
00:49:826 - add finish to the spinner
00:53:519 - add finish to hit circle.
00:55:365 - Finish or whistle to the head of slider
01:06:442 - ^
01:10:134 - finish or whistle at the tail of the slider

Overall, good job with the flow and timing! :D However, you may need to revise some general errors in your map. And try adding more hit sound effects to your Hard/Insane mode!

Hope this helps! :)
posted

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi! Random mod:

[Nemis:]
The [be1]approach rate[/be1] for Normal is too low. The usual speed should be at least 5.
It's the only diff without a [be1]Letterbox during breaks[/be1]. And why does this diff not have countdown enabled? o.o
01:01:826 - Remove whistle, sounds like the odd one out. Fixed

[Hard:]
Your first spinner at 00:03:557 starts on a blue tick...nothing really wrong with that, it's just rather odd.
00:39:672 - Spinner doesn't' fit at this part of the song. Fixed
00:51:672 - Add a finish to the spinner Fixed
00:53:519 - Add a finish to the head of the slider.Fixed
00:55:365 - Add finish or whistle to this hit circle.Fixed
01:02:980 - clapFixed
01:03:442 - ^Fixed
01:03:903 - ^Fixed
01:04:365 - ^Fixed
01:05:980 - Add finish to the tail of slider.Fixed
01:10:134 - Missing a note here.Fixed

[Insane:]
00:03:557 - same odd timing with the spinner.Atm i won't change the spinner
01:24:326 - Stream doesn't fit here.Fixed
00:49:826 - add finish to the spinnerFixed
00:53:519 - add finish to hit circle.Fixed
00:55:365 - Finish or whistle to the head of sliderFixed
01:06:442 - ^Fixed
01:10:134 - finish or whistle at the tail of the sliderFixed

Overall, good job with the flow and timing! :D However, you may need to revise some general errors in your map. And try adding more hit sound effects to your Hard/Insane mode!

[color=#0000FFe1]Hope this helps! :)[/colore1]
Thanks for your help ^^
posted
Ecco qua il paninaro °^°

[Nemis:]
Non moddo normal quindi qui lascio blank :D
Comunque, non è meglio chiamarla "Nemis normal" o qualcosa del genere? Non è proprio chiarissimo la difficoltà della mappa se si guarda il nome...


[Hard:]

00:14:865 (2) - Toglilo, non segue la musica.
00:23:519 (8) - Non so se è necessario metterlo fuori dal triangolo, ma spostarlo a y:72 lo centra con gli altri.
00:38:749 (4,5,6,7) - Cambierei questo

In questo per seguire meglio la musica

00:53:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Non è un po' troppo complicato per una hard?
01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^

[Insane:]

00:03:557 (1) - Perchè parte su 1/4 e non su 1/1?
00:15:557 (5) - Toglierei anche qui questo.
00:15:442 (4,5,6) - Cambierei questo

In questo

Per seguire meglio la musica
00:25:596 (1,2) - Non vorrei rovinare il jump, ma qui il cerchio fra 1 e 2 ci deve essere.
01:19:365 (4,5) - ^


Done it~

Mi sono divertito a giocarla ( mi piacciono un sacco le stream >160 )
And here it is:

posted
Hi~from PM
Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue
[General]
  • All diffs’ KIAI time MUST be the same EXCEPT Guest diff ,please check Hard and Insane
    Add “Nemis” to Tags of Hard and Insane
    Unchecked Letterbox during breaktime and countdown in Hard and Insane.
    Title :“TV Size” not “TV size”

    Lead-in = 2000 in all diffs
[Insane]
[list:1337]
Maybe using tiny grid size is better
00:03:557 (1) –spinner should be start at 00:03:672 –and end at 00:05:057
00:05:057 -Regular hexagon seems better
00:08:288 (3) –make it the same flow with 00:07:365 (1,2,3,4) –
00:09:903 (1,2) –spacing is too short
00:13:134 (4,5,6,7) –keep the same spacing
00:14:980 (2,3,4) –I think this break the flow
00:16:134 –add note?
00:16:480 (2) –this overmap
00:38:980 (5,6) –remove these,and add a circle at 00:39:096 –
00:39:788 (9) –There is no drum in the music,so this overmap
00:42:442 (1,2,3) –keep the same spacing
00:44:519 (2,3) –remove these and add a circle at 00:44:634 –
00:52:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Don’t over map;w;!
00:53:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -^
00:53:519 (1) –remove finish and add whistle
01:00:211 (1) –be away from 00:59:980 (9) –
01:01:134 (2) –move to 01:01:134 (2) –
Hitsounds are too less ,you can add more finish and clap.
[Hard]

  • 00:03:557 (1) –same as Insane
    00:05:519 (1,2) –Do you think the spacing is too long?
    00:06:557 (3,4,5,6,7) –Please don’t use streams in Hard diff
    00:14:865 (2) –remove note
    00:14:980 (3,4) –Using copy/paste and Ctrl+shift+R is better~
    00:16:365 (1,2,3,4) –Don’t jump in hard diff
    01:00:442 –add note
    01:12:442 (6) –end at 01:12:903 and add note at 01:13:134 –
[ Nemis]

  • 00:37:596 –you can follow the drum in music
    Suggestions:
    00:41:519 (2) –I suggest you start the slider at 00:41:288 and add a circle at 00:41:980 to folliw the drum in music
    00:59:057 (1) –Add finish on head

    01:15:211 (3,4,5,1) -–Why changed the spacing? I think it’s to hard for normal player to play when there isn’t an easy diff
    01:20:288 (5,1) -^


Good luck~
posted

Panino103 wrote:

Ecco qua il paninaro °^°

[Nemis:]
Non moddo normal quindi qui lascio blank :D
Comunque, non è meglio chiamarla "Nemis normal" o qualcosa del genere? Non è proprio chiarissimo la difficoltà della mappa se si guarda il nome...


[Hard:]

00:14:865 (2) - Toglilo, non segue la musica.
00:23:519 (8) - Non so se è necessario metterlo fuori dal triangolo, ma spostarlo a y:72 lo centra con gli altri.
00:38:749 (4,5,6,7) - Cambierei questo

In questo per seguire meglio la musica

00:53:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Non è un po' troppo complicato per una hard? Nope
01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ Nope

[Insane:]

00:03:557 (1) - Perchè parte su 1/4 e non su 1/1?
00:15:557 (5) - Toglierei anche qui questo.
00:15:442 (4,5,6) - Cambierei questo

In questo

Per seguire meglio la musica
00:25:596 (1,2) - Non vorrei rovinare il jump, ma qui il cerchio fra 1 e 2 ci deve essere.
01:19:365 (4,5) - ^ Nope, sta bene anche senza


Done it~

Mi sono divertito a giocarla ( mi piacciono un sacco le stream >160 )
And here it is:

Dove non ho contestato vuol dire che ho effettuato i cambiamenti, grazie dell'aiuto ^^
posted

Fycho wrote:

Hi~from PM
Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue
[General]
  • All diffs’ KIAI time MUST be the same EXCEPT Guest diff ,please check Hard and Insane
    Add “Nemis” to Tags of Hard and Insane
    Unchecked Letterbox during breaktime and countdown in Hard and Insane. Done
    Title :“TV Size” not “TV size” Done
    [/color]
    Lead-in = 2000 in all diffs
[Insane]
[list:1337]
Maybe using tiny grid size is better
00:03:557 (1) –spinner should be start at 00:03:672 –and end at 00:05:057 Done
00:05:057 -Regular hexagon seems better Nope,atm i won't change the pattern
00:08:288 (3) –make it the same flow with 00:07:365 (1,2,3,4) – Done
00:09:903 (1,2) –spacing is too short Atm i won't change it but i will look in future
00:13:134 (4,5,6,7) –keep the same spacing Done
00:14:980 (2,3,4) –I think this break the flow Nope
00:16:134 –add note? Done
00:16:480 (2) –this overmap Removed
00:38:980 (5,6) –remove these,and add a circle at 00:39:096 – Nope
00:39:788 (9) –There is no drum in the music,so this overmap Removed
00:42:442 (1,2,3) –keep the same spacing Done
00:44:519 (2,3) –remove these and add a circle at 00:44:634 – Nope
00:52:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Don’t over map;w;! Changed pattern
00:53:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -^ Changed pattern
00:53:519 (1) –remove finish and add whistle Done
01:00:211 (1) –be away from 00:59:980 (9) – Done
01:01:134 (2) –move to 01:01:134 (2) – ?
Hitsounds are too less ,you can add more finish and clap.
[Hard]

  • 00:03:557 (1) –same as Insane Done
    00:05:519 (1,2) –Do you think the spacing is too long? Fixed
    00:06:557 (3,4,5,6,7) –Please don’t use streams in Hard diff Nope, atm i won't change them
    00:14:865 (2) –remove note Done
    00:14:980 (3,4) –Using copy/paste and Ctrl+shift+R is better~
    00:16:365 (1,2,3,4) –Don’t jump in hard diff Fixed
    01:00:442 –add note Done
    01:12:442 (6) –end at 01:12:903 and add note at 01:13:134 – Done
[ Nemis]

  • 00:37:596 –you can follow the drum in music
    Suggestions:
    00:41:519 (2) –I suggest you start the slider at 00:41:288 and add a circle at 00:41:980 to folliw the drum in music
    00:59:057 (1) –Add finish on head

    01:15:211 (3,4,5,1) -–Why changed the spacing? I think it’s to hard for normal player to play when there isn’t an easy diff
    01:20:288 (5,1) -^
    No changes for the normal


Good luck~
Thanks for your help ^^
posted
Non ho trovato molto :o

[Hard]
00:38:749 (4) - Devi farlo più corto di un quarto, questo slider,
00:39:903 (5) - e quindi sposta questo sulla destra dello slider o magari stackalo sul reverse

01:17:288 (1) - Fai partire lo spinner mezzo beat più tardi e riempi il vuoto con un altro hitcircle

01:26:749 (1) - Non sembra che lo spinner debba finire un quarto di beat prima?

[Insane]
00:06:442 (5,6,7,8) - Magari fai questo pezzo come hai fatto nella Hard?

00:53:057 (5) - un bel CTRL+G ci starebbe bene

01:27:442 (1) - Anche qui come in Hard, non dovrebbe finire prima?

[Nemis]
01:28:134 (6) - Ok ce l'ho su col finale, a me sembra che la canzone finisca sempre sul tick blu


Au revoir o/
posted

Pagno wrote:

Non ho trovato molto :o

[Hard]
00:38:749 (4) - Devi farlo più corto di un quarto, questo slider, Fatto
00:39:903 (5) - e quindi sposta questo sulla destra dello slider o magari stackalo sul reverse Stackato a fine slide

01:17:288 (1) - Fai partire lo spinner mezzo beat più tardi e riempi il vuoto con un altro hitcircle Fatto

01:26:749 (1) - Non sembra che lo spinner debba finire un quarto di beat prima? Nope

[Insane]
00:06:442 (5,6,7,8) - Magari fai questo pezzo come hai fatto nella Hard? Nope

00:53:057 (5) - un bel CTRL+G ci starebbe bene Fatto

01:27:442 (1) - Anche qui come in Hard, non dovrebbe finire prima? Nope

[Nemis]
01:28:134 (6) - Ok ce l'ho su col finale, a me sembra che la canzone finisca sempre sul tick blu


Au revoir o/
posted
[Insane]

00:03:672 (1) - Sampleset: Normal

Histsound Piccolo consiglio, mettili tutti dove senti il rullante i clap: 00:10:365 (2) (fine) , 00:11:057 (6) (fine) , 00:11:980 (1) (fine) e così via

00:14:519 (7,5) - Stack
00:32:980 (7,9) - ^

che ne pensi di fare così?

00:33:903 (9,10) -



Poi sistema il resto

00:35:980 (7,1,2,3) - bruttino questo il 7 non è bello da vedere lì

da 00:36:442 a 00:38:057 il ritmo forse è meglio se lo fai così



00:46:134 (1,2,3) - Puoi anche attaccarli



01:02:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - allargali gradualmente

01:10:596 (1,2,3,4) - mi pare non si possano rankare slider messi così ripetuti
01:17:980 (1,2,3,4) - ^

01:12:672 (2,4) - Allontana un po 1 e stackali con la fine di 4

[Hard]

00:03:672 (1) - Sampleset: normal
01:17:519 (1) - ^

00:06:557 (3,4,5,6) - eviterei questi "stream" in una hard

00:42:211 (2) - Non si copre la freccia

(non è hitsoundata tutta la musica)
^segui i consigli per la insane

01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Forse confondono un po stackate così


Un po spoglia la mod >.< , impara un po di più a seguire il ritmo e a tentarti cose che non seguono sempre lo stesso schema ^^
posted

Pizza Kun wrote:

[Insane]

00:03:672 (1) - Sampleset: Normal Fatto

Histsound Piccolo consiglio, mettili tutti dove senti il rullante i clap: 00:10:365 (2) (fine) , 00:11:057 (6) (fine) , 00:11:980 (1) (fine) e così via Ci lavorerò

00:14:519 (7,5) - Stack Ok
00:32:980 (7,9) - ^ Ok

che ne pensi di fare così? Per ora no

00:33:903 (9,10) -



Poi sistema il resto

00:35:980 (7,1,2,3) - bruttino questo il 7 non è bello da vedere lì Stackato sul 5

da 00:36:442 a 00:38:057 il ritmo forse è meglio se lo fai così Fatto



00:46:134 (1,2,3) - Puoi anche attaccarli Fatto



01:02:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - allargali gradualmente Ok

01:10:596 (1,2,3,4) - mi pare non si possano rankare slider messi così ripetuti Cambiato quel pezzo
01:17:980 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Cambierò in seguito

01:12:672 (2,4) - Allontana un po 1 e stackali con la fine di 4 Ok

[Hard]

00:03:672 (1) - Sampleset: normal Ok
01:17:519 (1) - ^

00:06:557 (3,4,5,6) - eviterei questi "stream" in una hard Tolti

00:42:211 (2) - Non si copre la freccia Ctrl+G

(non è hitsoundata tutta la musica)
^segui i consigli per la insane Hitsounderò anche la hard

01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Forse confondono un po stackate così Nope per ora restano così


Un po spoglia la mod >.< , impara un po di più a seguire il ritmo e a tentarti cose che non seguono sempre lo stesso schema ^^
Thanks <3
posted
mod as requested

general

you need a 3 star rating difficulty to your mapset be rankeable, i think your normal is easy enough, so just reduce its od by 1
inconsistency in combo colors
inconsistency in tags (add nemis to all difficulty tags)
your video has audio track, use this video instead http://puu.sh/3S31N.avi

nemis

01:15:672 (4,5) - big difference in spacing. as its the easiest difficulty of the mapset, is good to keep the gameplay without those traps i prefer you use a smaller value, like 1.3x~1.4x

nice normal !

hard

00:15:442 (3,4) - try to keep your slider curves sharper
00:16:826 (3,4) - move this a bit to the left, there a big difference in the previous / next jump. and its a bit unfitting imo
00:18:211 (1,2,3) - curve this stream, will look a bit better
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't think this stream is necessary, keep in mind the difficulty spread. i think there is a big difference between hard and normal
00:27:672 - i prefer you start the 1/4 stream here where the guitar rhythm changes
00:47:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i always get some misses on this stream. its a bit overmapped indeed. consider removing 4 and 6
00:55:826 (1,2,3,4) - thats so irregular. give them a consistent shape or unstack
00:59:634 (4,5,6,7,8) - i prefer you just follow vocal and drums here
01:26:749 (1) - spinner end on blue tick, thats where the song really ends

insane

00:05:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make this more symmetric
00:07:365 (1,2,3,4) - too irregular, choose one of this sliders and line its slider end to the center of the screen then copy replace the others and ctrl > or crtl < do this for all this sliders
00:15:211 (3,4,5) - feels a bit forced to me, consider re arranging this pattern
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - those jumps are a bit random made, and why you stopped to follow vocal and to use sliders?
00:26:288 (5,6,7,8,9) - steam sounds / feels bad here, try to make this pattern less complex
00:48:442 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as i said in hard
00:52:826 (4,5,1) - this jumps are a bit disgusting to play, i don't really think they fit the song
00:59:403 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to make this part simple as the song.
01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4) - i think this does not fits your general mapping style at all
01:11:980 (4,1) - strange transition

lots of unfitting streams and random placed jumps but its really fun to play :)

several good mods for hard and insane and this will be ready

good luck
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pimpG wrote:

mod as requested

general

you need a 3 star rating difficulty to your mapset be rankeable, i think your normal is easy enough, so just reduce its od by 1 Done
inconsistency in combo colors I will change them
inconsistency in tags (add nemis to all difficulty tags) Done
your video has audio track, use this video instead http://puu.sh/3S31N.avi My video hasn't got audio. i've just checked it

nemis

01:15:672 (4,5) - big difference in spacing. as its the easiest difficulty of the mapset, is good to keep the gameplay without those traps i prefer you use a smaller value, like 1.3x~1.4x I think i won't change anything in normal

nice normal !

hard

00:15:442 (3,4) - try to keep your slider curves sharper Done
00:16:826 (3,4) - move this a bit to the left, there a big difference in the previous / next jump. and its a bit unfitting imo Done
00:18:211 (1,2,3) - curve this stream, will look a bit better Done
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't think this stream is necessary, keep in mind the difficulty spread. i think there is a big difference between hard and normal Removed
00:27:672 - i prefer you start the 1/4 stream here where the guitar rhythm changes Atm i leave it as it is
00:47:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i always get some misses on this stream. its a bit overmapped indeed. consider removing 4 and 6 Removed
00:55:826 (1,2,3,4) - thats so irregular. give them a consistent shape or unstack Unstacked
00:59:634 (4,5,6,7,8) - i prefer you just follow vocal and drums here Nope
01:26:749 (1) - spinner end on blue tick, thats where the song really ends Done

insane

00:05:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make this more symmetric Nope
00:07:365 (1,2,3,4) - too irregular, choose one of this sliders and line its slider end to the center of the screen then copy replace the others and ctrl > or crtl < do this for all this sliders Atm no but i will probably change them
00:15:211 (3,4,5) - feels a bit forced to me, consider re arranging this pattern ^
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - those jumps are a bit random made, and why you stopped to follow vocal and to use sliders? Changed a bit
00:26:288 (5,6,7,8,9) - steam sounds / feels bad here, try to make this pattern less complex Done
00:48:442 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as i said in hard I think this part is good for an insane
00:52:826 (4,5,1) - this jumps are a bit disgusting to play, i don't really think they fit the song Changed
00:59:403 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to make this part simple as the song. Atm no change here
01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
01:08:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4) - i think this does not fits your general mapping style at all Changed a bit
01:11:980 (4,1) - strange transition Fixed

lots of unfitting streams and random placed jumps but its really fun to play :)

several good mods for hard and insane and this will be ready

good luck
Thanks for your help ^^
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your video has muted audio track. the point of not using a video with audio is to make the download size smaller, so it does not matters if the audio is muted or its normal. we just have to remove it.

proof: http://puu.sh/3SHgI.png
proof 2: http://puu.sh/3SHig.png (see the speakers icons, even if you don't hear sound, there is an audio track on the video)
proof 3: if your video had not audio included, the speakers would be displayed like that http://puu.sh/3SHjM.png

just take the video i sent you, it did not lose quality, i just removed the muted audio track
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random mod :>

Nemis

Niente da dire, bel lavoro!


Hard

00:07:134 (5) - Penso che starebbe meglio così http://puu.sh/4hulh/fa81b4d66f.jpg
00:24:442 (3,4,5,6) - Non mi piace molto, sembra "disordinato", prova così http://puu.sh/4huT1/32f5797184.jpg
00:28:134 (7) - é abbastanza brutto da vedere, io farei così http://puu.sh/4hv4c/fe135a7d5b.jpg
01:05:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - così sarebbe più ordinato imo http://puu.sh/4hvxB/98957ae260.jpg
01:07:596 (4,5,6) - ruotato di 15° mi sembra meglio :> http://puu.sh/4hvJi/f49ef1808d.jpg
01:09:442 (4,5,6,1) - ^
01:14:749 (6) - così sarebbe meglio da vedere imo http://puu.sh/4hvRq/b954274c9a.jpg

Insane

00:52:134 (1,2,3) - non mi piace la struttura di questi, io farei così http://puu.sh/4hw9k/051015a0f6.jpg

In generale, cerca di rendere i jumps come questi ( 01:14:057 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ) più "uniformi", magari creando triangoli e quadrati.

Carina da giocare, comunque :D
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ThEBonzi wrote:

random mod :>

Nemis

Niente da dire, bel lavoro!


Hard

00:07:134 (5) - Penso che starebbe meglio così http://puu.sh/4hulh/fa81b4d66f.jpg Modificato
00:24:442 (3,4,5,6) - Non mi piace molto, sembra "disordinato", prova così http://puu.sh/4huT1/32f5797184.jpg Sì, meglio come dici tu lol
00:28:134 (7) - é abbastanza brutto da vedere, io farei così http://puu.sh/4hv4c/fe135a7d5b.jpg Modificato
01:05:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - così sarebbe più ordinato imo http://puu.sh/4hvxB/98957ae260.jpg Modificato
01:07:596 (4,5,6) - ruotato di 15° mi sembra meglio :> http://puu.sh/4hvJi/f49ef1808d.jpg Per ora li ruoto ma non sono convinto
01:09:442 (4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
01:14:749 (6) - così sarebbe meglio da vedere imo http://puu.sh/4hvRq/b954274c9a.jpg Blankettato meglio

Insane

00:52:134 (1,2,3) - non mi piace la struttura di questi, io farei così http://puu.sh/4hw9k/051015a0f6.jpg Modificati

In generale, cerca di rendere i jumps come questi ( 01:14:057 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ) più "uniformi", magari creando triangoli e quadrati.

Carina da giocare, comunque :D
Il bpm e l'ar non sono alti quindi posso anche cambiare un pò ed evitare i soliti square o triangoli quindi per ora lascio i jump come sono xD
Grazie della mod :D
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