Xivaxi wrote:

Hi~! From my M4M

[Hard]
00:13:304 (10,1) - This pattern looks a little strange. Either move them closer together to bring out the parallel lines, or move the end point of 1 closer to 10's start to switch to a rays pattern Done

00:14:869 (3) - Make a little more curved *try to tie it in with one of the patterns before/after it stronger (blanket would be easiest, but you can try some mirroring or something) I'm not sure. I'll leave it as is for now, but I'll consider it
00:56:869 (2) - Add note Nope
01:25:564 (2,3) - Make these parallel with 01:24:260 (7,1) Ok
01:26:608 (4,5) - Add 4 onto the parallel line made above, and use 5 to cap off a triangle - I think this makes for a more interesting pattern, the one before didn't really seem "tied in" with anything else Actually, 01:26:869 (5) was placed there as a start of a following square shape. Not sure if it was noticeable. However, I do like this idea so I'll arrange the notes accordingly.

01:27:391 (6,7) - These can optionally create a triangle with 5 from before I'm actually going to keep them as is, since the stream at the end completes the square. Forming these notes to make a triangle kind of ruins the purpose of it.


[Easy]
A-actually it's a normal...
00:15:130 (2) - Either make this slider perfectly straight, or give it a more obvious pattern - right now it looks kind of like a mistake. Even something slight like this I think would make it cleaner Yeah, you're right. Fixed.

00:20:086 (3) - 1st point x:348 y:108, 2nd point x:256 y:57, 3rd point x:163 y:108 oh, thanks. That helps
00:26:347 (6,7,8) - Make it something like this (but keep your NC there). Distance on next notes will have to be adjusted Works nicely. But I'm actually going to change my NC here.
00:31:043 (1) - Make a second point at x:242 y:281, move 3rd point to x:246 y:313, this ties it in more with 00:32:086 (3) - this slider's shape No thanks
00:38:869 (1) - 2nd point x:24 y:101, 3rd point x:57 y:161, then copy this shape, mirror it and use it for 00:39:651 (2) - gives a more fluid shape and blankets a little cleaner Right you are

Nice, clean and relaxing map, GJ

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~!!
from my queue >w</

[Normal]
00:09:651(1) one grid right Why?
00:10:173(2,3) try this Ok
00:22:695(1) one grid right again, why?
00:31:043(1) turn the rotary at this slider until it's make a line with 00:31:825(2) No thanks. Doesn't seem necessary.
00:40:434(3) one grid left please Don't really see the point to that
00:57:651(3) bend as same as 00:58:695(5)? or opposite No
01:01:825(6) try this~ Flipping the slider doesn't exactly seem relevant to me, as it doesn't make much of a difference anyhow
01:10:173(4) move this slider's tail to 1.00 distance Ok
01:13:825(4) one grid up ^
01:14:347(6) this? just think it'll looks better :3 If it makes a blanket, then sure
01:29:086(1) let spin tail not hitsound? No, if you listen to the background, you can hear the cymbals being hit

[Hard]
00:12:521(9) more bend please,try to surround 00:11:738(6) perfect Ok
00:13:304(10,1) parallel? No. I think this pattern is ok, but if it's brought up again, I'll change it
00:25:043(6) x200 y200 Fixed
00:27:912(4) x384 y180 make a triangle :3 it's most stack 00:27:130(2).. Ok
00:38:086(6,7) make a straight line? Nope o3o
00:52:564(2) delete? No
00:55:564(1) x328 y156 to make a triangle Ok
01:08:086(1) one grid up No
01:08:869(2,3,4,5) try to make a square It already is
01:11:738(1) not surround 01:11:478(9) perfect Doesn't matter
01:29:086(1) same as Normal Nope

that all~
i like this song

Good Luck!!

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey Mod from my Queus

General

• • seem fine

Normal

• • 00:36:260 - may add a Note here? Already did

Hard

• • 00:09:651 (1) - remove NC here and add on the next one Yeah, ok. Seems better.
  • 00:12:521 (9) - move it to x 204 y 96 to make it symmetrically No

dat noob mod... I have nothing more to say tho
good luck with get it ranked >< its ok and thank you

onepiece314 wrote:

Here is the mod I owe You
I don't know how to the do that box thing that modders do so yeah...
Overall this map seems perfect. I can't really find anything wrong with it(sorry )so i modded what i could
[NORMAL]
At 01:08:086- I consider you match your 1 with your 3. Since 1 has a sharp edge and 3 is curved Ok.
At 01:11:217- Throughout the song you seemed to match all of the middle points with the middle ticks so I guess you should continue that. So put the middle point on x:336 y:304 Although moving the middle point to the tick doesn't really matter consistency wise, I did it anyway
At 01:23:736- put the middle point on x:152 y:268 ^
At 01:26:869- put the middle point on x:256 y:244 ^
thats all for this diff
[HARD]
At 00:23:738- The way 4 overlaps 5 doesnt look very prettyIt's supposed to be that way because of the blanket, and I think it looks fine.
At 00:40:956- the way 5 overlaps 6 isnt pretty I consider flipping 6 No. It's almost like the explanation above, I think the overlap looks fine.
thats all for this diff
I think this map is very well done great job Ill check this map every day to see if ill find anything nyapuibye >W<