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Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size)

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Andrea
[Timing]

BPM ok. Offset 735.

[Normal]

00:38:00 (5) - Move it here : 00:37:83 (5) And fix spacing.
00:51:49 (2) - Sounds bad. Try to change it.
01:22:74 (2) - ^

[Zodi's Hard]

00:31:26 (1) - Unrankable slider.
00:36:23 (2) - New combo.
01:07:83 (6) - ^

[Insane]

00:53:18 (11) - New combo.
01:28:24 (1) - Start this here -> 01:28:422 Follow more the song.

I love the anime and the song. Starred!
HarryOrunitia
[Normal]
00:06:41 (3) - I would move this 2/4 later, or maybe add another beat there.
00:08:90 (4) - Move the ending point of this slider 1 square down with grid 3

[Zodi's Hard]
This diff is full of alignment errors, inconsistent spacing and ugly sliders. I suggest rape to remap some parts at least.
00:15:81 (6) - Ugly slider, you could make it look shorter by adding a repeat if you like it.
00:33:74 (1) - I would delete this beat
00:42:62 (1) - ^
00:47:94 (1,2,3,4) - Even if probably done on purpose, this spacing is unintuitive
00:51:49 (5) - This looks ugly, and it should end 2/4 earlier or later
01:17:41 (1) - New combo?

[Insane]
Nothing wrong with this diff, and I love it!


Also, my attempt at fixing your storyboard:
4,3,1,"credits.png",172,377
M,0,17860,21321,190,375,172,377
F,0,17860,18481,0,1
S,0,17860,21321,1.78848,0.684
F,0,18481,24872,1,1
F,0,24872,28812,1,0
Use it only if you like it D:

And of course, Starred :3
Starrodkirby86
I know this song! :V

[Normal]:
Straightforward, good, works for a beginner.

[Zodi's Hard]:
I don't know if having the Yumiko credits thing would work for this difficulty, since this one is actually made by Zodiark.
I can always help changing it around if you'd like.
00:49:36 (7) - Finish at end?
01:01:26 (2) - Finish here?
01:10:13 (5) - Remove whistle at beginning and whistle on slide trail, then add a whistle on the slider end?
01:06:94 (3) - 1 down on Grid Level 3.
01:23:98 (5) - New combo. (To rid the inconsistent spacing)

[Insane]:
00:48:48 (1) - Shorten spinner by 1/2?
00:49:54 (1) - Move spinner 1/2 back?


Star *w*

If you want me to help you with the credits thing, the whole Zodi's Hard or whatever, please tell me on #rape #italian.
Topic Starter
Yumiko
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Skyripper
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Starrodkirby86
Download this and extract it into your song folder.

The contents:
Zodiark's banner
The .osb
[Insane]
[Normal]
[Zodi's Hard]

There shouldn't be any changes in hitobjects or of the like. Make a double check though.

Also, you should put Shakugan no Shana in the tags or source. :)

Download: extract-in-songfolder.zip
Topic Starter
Yumiko
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Skyripper
bubbled.

consider +1 overall difficulty and 2 slider tick rate on Insane

if you decide to do that, I'll rebubble it, since the bubble will be nerfed.
Topic Starter
Yumiko

Skyripper wrote:

bubbled.

consider +1 overall difficulty and 2 slider tick rate on Insane

if you decide to do that, I'll rebubble it, since the bubble will be nerfed.
First, thanks so much for the bubble ^^ And...i tried to change the overall and the tick rate like you said, but i like better to do not change them, but thanks again for the suggestions :D
Alace
offset:+5ms
resnap all notes
<Hard> (you don`t really need to change)
01:23:10 (1,2,3,4) - i don`t think this is a good place for jumps (really confusing)

That`s all


EDIT: i set a jump in hard`s last part
usually i set jumps with heavy vocals or heavy BGM it`s more easy to follow
This is a basic jump style
btw don`t copy the picture`s patten XD

rebubbled

Topic Starter
Yumiko
Thanks Alace ^^
MetaSlash
I love this song *O*
niedz
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Luxary
A Star for you <3
Echo
Can you fix the slider 00:51:50 (5) in Hard? The repeat is facing the wrong way because of an extra node.

Besides that, everything else looks fine to me.

Give me a PM or something if you update this, since it'll bounce back to star and vanish into page 2 and beyond :P

Armin
Good job, star! ^^
Echo
I just noticed this in Hard as well

00:44:40 (6) - there are actually 3 nodes under the red node of this slider. Can you delete the red nodes? They're making the slider stutter when sliding out (if you have snaking sliders on).

Again, PM me :)
Echo
Rebubble
Topic Starter
Yumiko
Thanks Echo ^^
Alace
Here we go
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