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Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.)

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Gero
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Topic Starter
Gero
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 30 de julio de 2013 at 06:35:33 p.m.

Artist: Duca
Title: Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.)
Source: Cafe Sourire
Tags: Andrea osuplayer111 Sekai-nyan カフェ・スーリル Game Eroge Visual Novel Opening Hentai Moe Smile Collab Collaboration Sekai
BPM: 119
Filesize: 16492kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.85 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 240 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 317 notes)
  4. Normal (3.05 stars, 127 notes)
  5. Sekai's Hard (4.81 stars, 264 notes)
Download: Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.)
Download: Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset
Easy By Gero
Normal By Gero
Hard By Gero & Andrea
Hard By Sekai-nyan
Insane By Gero
Last edited by Gero , edited 60 times in total.
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
SPOILER
DUCAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

First <3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero

-Cloudchaser wrote:

SPOILER
DUCAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

First <3

Tyyy ♥ Thanks baka cloud for the star :3!
-Sapphire_old
-Sapphire_old
DUCAAAAA !
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
yay ><. Good luck! Gero-san ^^
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
nice map^^
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
Thanks to all ♥ =3
[Yue]
1,643 posts
Joined January 2011
[Yue]
Porque cuando subes un map todo el mundo comenta pero cuando otra persona sube un mapa (yo) nadie dice nada ;ww;
Yo te dire porque!
porque eres pro Gerin :<
Lost The Lights
566 posts
Joined December 2011
Lost The Lights
Hola
Mod
[Easy]
00:53:840 (2) - No crees que quedaría mejor así?
SPOILER
01:07:453 - Un circle ahí no vendría mal

[Normal]
00:07:201 - Esto quedaría mejor así:
00:34:176 (3) - Así?
00:39:218 (4) - Es aburrido para una normal, repites muchas veces sliders así, intenta algo así:
00:54:848 (4) - ^ Intenta esto:
01:06:697 - Nota?
01:07:957 (4) - Asi?

[Hard]
01:23:083 (4) - Asi? (No intentes streams de mas de 3 en una hard)

[Insane]
00:00:899 (1) - Empezamos mal. Haz esto:
00:02:915 (2) - Esto quedaría mejor
00:10:983 (1,2) - ABURRIDOOOOOOO. Intenta otra cosa.
00:15:899 - No cortes el stream, queda mejor si lo haces seguido (Si lo haces, no le pongas hitsound al circle)
00:28:251 - Nota?
00:30:016 - ^
00:33:546 - ^
00:34:050 - ^
00:40:983 - Intenta no dejar espacios como este
00:57:369 (1,2,3) - Aburrido.
00:59:764 - Nota
01:01:025 - ^
01:19:932 - ^
01:26:235 - ^
01:36:445 (4) - Algo así estaría mejor (5 y 6 con clap)

Eso es todo.
Suerte Gero.
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hola
Mod
[Easy]
00:53:840 (2) - No crees que quedaría mejor así? No me gusta
SPOILER
01:07:453 - Un circle ahí no vendría mal fixed

[Normal]
00:07:201 - Esto quedaría mejor así: NO! mapear en ticks azules en normal? o.o
00:34:176 (3) - Así? prefiero mantenerlo como esta
00:39:218 (4) - Es aburrido para una normal, repites muchas veces sliders así, intenta algo así: No, me gustan mis patrones
00:54:848 (4) - ^ Intenta esto:
01:06:697 - Nota? Fixed
01:07:957 (4) - Asi?

[Hard]
01:23:083 (4) - Asi? (No intentes streams de mas de 3 en una hard) un stream no hace daño en una hard :P

[Insane]
00:00:899 (1) - Empezamos mal. Haz esto: es el inicio obviamente no quiero empezar a poner notas dificiles.
00:02:915 (2) - Esto quedaría mejor
00:10:983 (1,2) - ABURRIDOOOOOOO. Intenta otra cosa. Ami me gustan estos patrones realmente, no cambios lo siento
00:15:899 - No cortes el stream, queda mejor si lo haces seguido (Si lo haces, no le pongas hitsound al circle) Fixed
00:28:251 - Nota? innecesaria imo
00:30:016 - ^ ^
00:33:546 - ^ ^
00:34:050 - ^ ^
00:40:983 - Intenta no dejar espacios como este Si agrego una nota ahi siento que quedaria muy overmapped :/
00:57:369 (1,2,3) - Aburrido. ^ lo que dije arriba de mis patrones
00:59:764 - Nota fixed
01:01:025 - ^ ^
01:19:932 - ^ ^
01:26:235 - ^ ^
01:36:445 (4) - Algo así estaría mejor (5 y 6 con clap) fixed

Eso es todo.
Suerte Gero.
Gracias por el Mod :)
raulmax319
43 posts
Joined November 2012
raulmax319
Hi, from #modreqs

General
____________________________________________________
Resolution your background - 1023x767 and must be 1024x768. Please Fix!

My opinion to Easy
_____________________________________________________

DRAIN +1
OD +1

01:07:453 - Please add a circle with whistle

just it

Normal
_____________________________________________________

Circle size -1 (it's for beginners with hr) Fix!

00:06:697 - I really need to press something here

all clear

Hard
_____________________________________________________

Drain -1
OD -1
fell good yeah

00:00:899 - if you like try change this part to this, I preferred to use this rhythm
SPOILER
00:04:680 - Add a circle here or switch the 00:04:428 (5) - to a 1/2 slider
00:56:109 (2) - Ctrl+G here
01:01:151 (4) - NC here
01:01:403 (1) - Remove this NC

Insane
_____________________________________________________

00:20:941 - add a note here
00:29:512 - ^
00:40:983 - Add a circle this part is perfect for a triplet, also add clap
00:41:109 - ^
00:41:235 (1) - add clap
00:57:243 - Add a circle, clap to good fingers flow
01:05:184 (9) - NC
01:05:436 (1) - Remove this NC
01:09:218 (4,5) - please add Clap
01:27:369 (6) - I need to press something here c:
01:31:529 - Add circle here! clap also

is it!
_______________________________

Good map you do c:

Good Luck!
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero

raulmax319 wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

General
____________________________________________________
Resolution your background - 1023x767 and must be 1024x768. Please Fix!

My opinion to Easy
_____________________________________________________

DRAIN +1
OD +1

01:07:453 - Please add a circle with whistle

just it

Normal
_____________________________________________________

Circle size -1 (it's for beginners with hr) Fix!

00:06:697 - I really need to press something here

all clear

Hard
_____________________________________________________

Drain -1
OD -1
fell good yeah

00:00:899 - if you like try change this part to this, I preferred to use this rhythm
SPOILER
00:04:680 - Add a circle here or switch the 00:04:428 (5) - to a 1/2 slider
00:56:109 (2) - Ctrl+G here
01:01:151 (4) - NC here
01:01:403 (1) - Remove this NC

Insane
_____________________________________________________

00:20:941 - add a note here
00:29:512 - ^
00:40:983 - Add a circle this part is perfect for a triplet, also add clap
00:41:109 - ^
00:41:235 (1) - add clap
00:57:243 - Add a circle, clap to good fingers flow
01:05:184 (9) - NC
01:05:436 (1) - Remove this NC
01:09:218 (4,5) - please add Clap
01:27:369 (6) - I need to press something here c:
01:31:529 - Add circle here! clap also

is it!
_______________________________

Good map you do c:

Good Luck!
All Fixed! Thank You ♥ Updated~
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
HI~ Gero easy :D

General:
  1. Add atleast 1 sec of audioleadin the start of the diffs is so sudden

Insane:
  1. HP 8 is so evil the note density is low so I hihgly suggest you to go with HP 7
  2. AR9 dont fit with this map since the bpm is so slow and you dont have big jumps on it go AR8?
  3. OD -1 too since i dont think 8 gonna fit this 7 is best for me
  4. 00:00:899 whistle dont empathize well the start of the song maybe add a finish I think starting the song with a strong sound is better imo
  5. 00:05:436 I dont feel music here maybe remove it? or convert they 00:05:310 (3,4) - in 1/4 slider
  6. 00:07:831 spinner should start here cuz you are following the vocals who start on 00:07:705
  7. 00:09:344 start on offbeat after a spinner is weird also you are ignoring the 3/4 rhythm here 00:09:218 I suggest you to add a circle here 00:09:218 making a nice triplet 00:09:218 (1,2,3) - gonna fit better the song
  8. 00:09:722 this slider dont fit the song very well cuz it have to finish on 00:09:974 this rhythm fit better:
    SPOILER
  9. 00:11:739 (2) - NAZI 1 grid down to be symetrical with previos slider 00:10:983
  10. 00:14:008 (1,2) - hidden circles under slider tail is bad for game play imo better unstack they like you did on 00:23:083 (1,2) -
  11. 00:15:772 remove finish clap is enought to empathize this if not add finish on this 00:15:520 (2,3) - too they have same sound in music but i preffer just the claps on they three
  12. 00:17:411 add circle here you should know why ;)
  13. 00:19:806 (4,5) - I really dont like how thwy look maybe make 5 a curved slider gonna look alot better
  14. 00:20:814 (6,1) - should be a triplet here o.o actually feel so empty 00:20:941 <---
  15. 00:21:445 add somethink here baka idk why you ignore the 3/4 rhythm everywhere xD
  16. 00:22:075 remove this whistle? nothing in the music support it the sound at that point is so low making the whistle sound os bad imo better add the whistle on the tail that is the place cuz support the whiste
  17. 00:25:100 convert it in 1/2 slider cuz i feel a little sound here 00:25:352 gonna be better for gameplay
  18. 00:29:512 add a circle here baka orz
  19. 00:30:520 this one sound so overmapped .-.better remove it
  20. 00:31:025 you overmap the previous sound but you ignore the 3/4 here baka -.-
  21. 00:33:041 - 00:40:983 - 00:41:109 - 00:42:117 - 00:45:142 - 00:56:739 some place when you ignore the music too
  22. 00:42:243 same as 00:09:722
  23. 00:55:352 (1,2) - NAZI stack they perfect hahahahaha
  24. 01:06:823 ignoring music? u should map this part like you did on 01:05:688 (2,3,4) -
  25. 01:14:512 ctrl G better flow
  26. 01:22:579 remove new combo is not needed here the jumps are readables 100% wthout it
  27. 01:39:596 the spinner should start here same reason as 00:07:831
  28. the diff is nice but some places you ignore the music :/ but other are fines :3

Hard:
  1. HP 6 plz this is just a hard diff
  2. AR 8 dont fit this diff orz plz go AR 7
  3. OD 7 NAH go OD 6 for better diff spread
  4. 00:00:899 same as Insane
  5. 00:02:663 (2,3) - this stack break the flow of the song imo better unstack they I suggest you to move 00:02:663 (2) to x:155 y:284 making a nice triangle who make a nice flow with the song
  6. 00:04:680 ignoring the vocals? add somethink here since vocals are the first who players follow when they play so I dont see why you ignore this xD better map it baka
  7. 00:07:957 same as i told you in insane spinner should start on 00:07:831
  8. 00:29:890 ctrl G making a fun jump pattern :3
  9. 00:39:218 (1,2) - this is so hard for this diff better try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  10. 00:39:974 the pattern you use here is not good for a hard diff since that stream are hard for a hard diff hahaha why you dont try some kick slider like you did on previous maybe this:
    SPOILER
  11. 00:57:621 (2,3) - eh why are 2 and 3 stacked and 1 and 4 unstacked? this is confuse orz better unstack they keeping the flow of the song
  12. 01:01:403 remove new combo and add the new combo here 01:01:151 since the new music start there make alot more sense
  13. 01:06:193 (3,4) - unstack since im not a fan of stack notes they break the flow of the map imo
  14. 01:12:999 convert it in 1/2 slider so this place dont feel empty like actually is
  15. 01:16:529 (4,5,6) - convert they in a repeat slider since the previous and next single tap mae it hard for some players
  16. 01:23:083 try this cuz this a hard diff this pattern get alot more sense:
    SPOILER
  17. 01:36:193 ctrl g make this more fun since a hard without jumps is bored imo
  18. 01:39:722 same as insane spinner should start on 01:39:596 follwing properly the music

Normal:
  1. 00:00:880 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
  2. 00:00:880 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end)
  3. 00:00:880 Same as Insane about finish
  4. 00:05:941 2 grid up for be symetrical with previous symilar slider
  5. 00:07:705 t he spinner should start here with the ¨neeee¨ and map the previous part maybe another long slider dont be lazy
  6. 00:19:806 map this vocal too ._. newbies play always following vocals if you dont add this they gonna be sad orz
  7. 00:39:218 so sexy o.o
  8. 00:42:243 1 grid down hahaha i love nazis thing ahhahahaaha
  9. 00:54:596 (3) - convert they 2 in 1/2 slider gonna be more easy and fun for newbies baka also nice next ass slider
  10. 01:03:924 (4,5,6) - same as above
  11. 01:10:478 (2,3,4) - ^
  12. 01:14:260 stop ignoring vocals in a normal diff you baka :/
  13. 01:39:722 eh same as other diffs spinner should start on 01:39:596 -_-

Easy:
  1. 00:07:705 start the spinner here or 00:07:327 cuz it make sense with the vocals but you actually place i dont know what are you following orz
  2. 01:07:453 atleast add a circle here feel so empty baka
  3. 01:39:722 eh same as other diffs spinner should start on 01:39:596

Well thats all I guess ;) GL
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Did some irc mod <3

good map overall, good job Gero =w=

yaoi irc mod =w=
04:59 Gero: noob insane </3
04:59 Sekai-nyan: :I
04:59 Gero: D:?
04:59 Sekai-nyan: let's see
04:59 Gero: :c
04:59 Gero: okay o3o
05:00 Sekai-nyan: insane
05:00 Sekai-nyan: od -1
05:00 Sekai-nyan: is better
05:01 Gero: fixed
05:01 Gero: o3o
05:01 Sekai-nyan: and 00:05:310 (3) - this note
05:01 Sekai-nyan: would sound better if it's in here
05:01 Sekai-nyan: 00:05:058 -
05:02 Sekai-nyan: not good now ;w;
05:02 Gero: 00:05:058 -  here ? 
05:02 Sekai-nyan: yeah
05:02 Sekai-nyan: it's good there
05:03 Gero: okay
05:03 Gero: o3o
05:03 Gero: fixed
05:03 Sekai-nyan: 00:06:193 (1,2,3) - sudden jumps
05:03 Sekai-nyan: is a bit confusing here
05:03 Sekai-nyan: so less DS maybe better?
05:05 Sekai-nyan: 00:12:495 (3,4,1) - ^
05:06 Sekai-nyan: 00:21:067 (1) - make this slider curved it'll look better imo..
05:06 Gero: fixed ^
05:07 Sekai-nyan: everything?
05:07 Gero: on jumps , only a little bit closer
05:07 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:07 Sekai-nyan: 00:25:352 (2) - add note here
05:07 Sekai-nyan: sounds off without note o.o
05:09 Gero: fixed
05:09 Gero: o3o
05:09 Sekai-nyan: 00:29:134 (1) - move this note to x:460 y:248 ?
05:10 Sekai-nyan: the jump is random here ;w;
05:10 Sekai-nyan: 00:31:151 (1) - add finish but no whistle 
05:10 Sekai-nyan: sounds better
05:11 Sekai-nyan: 00:41:235 (1) - ^ but slider's start
05:12 Sekai-nyan: 00:43:251 (1) - ^
05:13 Gero:  all fixed
05:13 Sekai-nyan: 01:14:512 (5) - ctrl+g?
05:13 Sekai-nyan: plays better
05:14 Gero: fixed o3o
05:14 Sekai-nyan: umm that's it for insane
05:15 Sekai-nyan: let's see hard
05:15 Gero: o3o
05:15 Gero: K
05:15 Sekai-nyan: od -1 again
05:15 Sekai-nyan: baka =3=
05:15 Gero: fixed 
05:15 Gero: i'm baka ;W;
05:16 Sekai-nyan: 00:25:100 (5) - 
05:16 Sekai-nyan: finish here
05:16 Sekai-nyan: but no whistle
05:17 Gero: fixed
05:17 Gero: o3o
05:18 Sekai-nyan: 00:49:302 (1,2) - 
05:18 Sekai-nyan: remove those notes
05:18 Sekai-nyan: and make slider ...
05:18 Sekai-nyan: plays better 
05:19 Gero: I think it's okay  >< no changes o3o
05:19 Sekai-nyan: orz ok =3=
05:20 Gero: =3=
05:20 Sekai-nyan: 01:06:949 (1,2) - 
05:20 Sekai-nyan: switch nc?
05:20 Gero: fixed
05:21 Sekai-nyan: nice hard <3
05:21 Sekai-nyan: i liked it o.o
05:21 Gero: O:!
05:21 Gero: thanks <3
05:22 Sekai-nyan: hp -1 in normal
05:22 Gero: fixed o3o
05:23 Sekai-nyan: 00:06:697 (4,5) - 
05:23 Sekai-nyan: this normal 
05:23 Sekai-nyan: so make those slider 
05:23 Sekai-nyan: ;w;
05:23 Gero: okay slider x'D
05:24 Gero: fixed o3o
05:25 Sekai-nyan: 00:11:739 (3) - 
05:25 Sekai-nyan: missing note here
05:25 Sekai-nyan: sounds weird without it :c
05:25 Gero: 00:11:739 -  note here? 
05:25 Gero: oki o3o
05:26 Gero: fixed
05:26 Sekai-nyan: 00:24:848 (5) - 
05:26 Sekai-nyan: here too
05:27 Gero: fixed \o3o/
05:28 Sekai-nyan: 01:16:025 (4) - shorten this slider
05:28 Sekai-nyan: and add note at
05:28 Sekai-nyan: 01:16:781 -
05:29 Sekai-nyan: and 01:17:033 -
05:29 Gero: fixed
05:29 Gero: o3o
05:30 Sekai-nyan: 01:39:470 (3) - move this note to x:200 y:56
05:30 Sekai-nyan: looks better imo ;w;
05:31 Gero: fixed
05:31 Gero: o3o
05:31 Sekai-nyan: ok easy: od + hp -1
05:32 Gero: fixed
05:32 Gero: o3o
05:33 Sekai-nyan: nothing else
05:33 Sekai-nyan: good easy <3
05:33 Gero: i'm pro \:'P/
05:33 Gero: ok no :<
05:33 Gero: <3
05:33 Sekai-nyan: =w=
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
Updated~

Thanks for the mods Yaoi Natsu & Yurikai :3!
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
Despues de un largo rato, hice el mod xd
[Easy]
General:
Nothing for here~

Patterns:
00:03:924 Este silencio suena feo, porque no pruebas con otro patrón? te juro que suena feo me salio medio mariposon xd
00:04:932 (1,3) Los finales miran hacia abajo, y la siguiente nota esta arriba..
00:07:453 (1) Hmm.. Este spin debería empezar antes.. o3o 00:07:201 <-- ahí digo que empieza bien, porque le das tiempo para terminar la nota, y suena mejor que donde lo tenías
00:09:470 Viejo, esto no suena bien, como que na que ver el ritmo o3o, tal vez así suene mejor... http://puu.sh/3DUSL.jpg El resto lo haces tu porque no soy tu perkin xD. (El resto del encaje óóéétýý)
00:14:512 (1,2) Decídete, Punto rojo o punto blanco
00:23:588 (3,1,2) Siento que matas el flow aquí, porque tiene que doblar de forma recta, y el slider no ayuda al cursor.. Creo que deberías hacer una pequeña curva en la punta del slider, como para ayudar al cursor.. imo
00:27:117 (3) Arregla la blanket... El #3 Punto debe ir en x:136 y:232 :3, o como encuentres que quede mejor
00:28:630 (4) la nota no esta donde debe, si quieres que este debajo debe ir en x:81 y:313
00:29:638 (1,2) Y el flow (?, digo que el (2) lo cambies por el (3), y el (3) Por el (2) Grandes pensadores... para que mejore el flow :3
00:33:167 (1) Podrías hacer una blanket al 00:35:184 (3), que la curva del 1 le haga blanket al circulo del (3) :3
00:38:714 (3) La linea recta se ve feo o3o, Sería mejor que hagas algo así http://puu.sh/3DVfD.jpg Luego el 00:40:226 (4) lo dejas en x:52 y:196 y en la punta haces una curva para que sigas el flow
00:47:285 (3) mejor déjala en x:172 y:132 para que siga mejor el flow :3, si haces esto el 00:49:302 (1) debe quedar en x:92 y:192 y la distancia seguirá bien :3
00:49:806 (2,4) Te lo dije en la mañana y te lo vuelvo a decir...arregla tus blankets >.<, xD, se ven feítas, pone el tiempo en 00:50:941 y guíate por el anillo de (2) para armar las blankets :3
00:55:352 (3) La Curva esta feíta e.e, mejor déjala más recta, (Pero no recta completa)
01:05:941 (2) Si le estas haciendo blanket a (1) arreglarla porque esta mal echa xD 01:05:058 <-- pone el tiempo ahí y te guías o3o
01:11:991 (4,1) Tu flow no me convence, esta mal hechito xd, el cambio es feo, porque no le haces una curva para que arregle? :3
01:17:537 (1,3) Otra vez, la primera punta va hacia la derecha, pero la siguiente nota esta hacia la izquierda
01:22:579 (2) como en (1) hiciste una curva creo que aquí también debería ir una curva... se ve mejor. imo
01:23:588 (3) este debería estar en x:228 y:224 para que siga mejor el flow y no tengas que cambiar el siguiente slider

Hitsounds:
00:25:100 (1) Podrías ir un Finish, pero con un volumen bajo o3o
00:55:352 (3) Creo que no va bien el whistle en la reversa :3

[Normal]
General:
Nothing for here~

Patterns:
00:04:932 (1,3) Es un normal pero aún así debe ir un flow normal o3o, creo que debes arreglar el flow para que esas puntas vallan hacia el circle, no el circle a los sliders xd
00:06:697 (4,5) 1 solo slider quedaría mejor, para que sea más fácil, y si no quieres mueve los círculos porque no siguen el flow, algo así http://puu.sh/3DWbw.jpg
00:19:050 (3,5) Con las puntas hacia abajo quedan mejor, siguen mejor el flow. imo
00:23:588 (3,4) el (4) esta mal hubicado, porque el (3) deja sin espacio a nada! podrías hacer algo así :3
Codigo
58,160,21571,6,0,L|118:197,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,264,22579,2,0,P|72:310|130:313,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,260,23588,2,0,P|275:263|316:309,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,364,24596,2,0,L|352:160,1,240
288,72,26109,2,0,B|220:56|176:100,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,27117,2,0,P|85:161|76:68,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,29134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
eso esta bien, si quieres puedes hacerles algunos cambios, pero eso deja bien el flow~
00:37:201 (1,2,3) eso queda mejor, más facil :3 http://puu.sh/3DWvB.jpg
00:49:302 (1) hace que este circulo sea un slider que dure hasta 00:50:310, Suena muchisimo mejor.
00:54:344 (2,3,4) Esto suena mal, prueba con otro patrón no te daré ejemplo porque me da paja
00:57:369 (1,2,3) Flow feo >.< el (3) esta recto, así que se ve feo ;w;
00:59:890 (5) el #2 punto que valla en x:292 y:292 y el 4# punto que valla en x:200 y:372, así se ve mejor e.e, queda más marcada la "S" si es que querías hacer una "S"
01:03:924 (4,5) Reemplazarlo por un slider, para que sea más fácil :3
01:10:478 (2,3) ^
01:16:025 (4,5,6) has que esto sea más arriba, para que 01:17:537 (1) este más arriba y así el (2) este bien con el flow

Hitsounds:
00:25:100 (1) Podrías ir un Finish, pero con un volumen bajo o3o
00:55:352 (3) Creo que no va bien el whistle en la reversa :3
01:20:310 (2) Saca el finish :3

[Hard]
General:
Nothing for here~

Patterns:
00:01:277 (2,3) Reemplazarlo por un slider, se ve moar moe y es más facil, como para un Hard
00:06:949 (3) Muevelo para que el (2) le haga blanket
00:09:470 (1) hace un slider cerro, no es necesario esa forma, en donde va despues se ve bien, aquí solo hace un cerrito :3
00:25:604 (1) el slider debería terminar un tick más adelante, en 00:25:983
00:36:193 (4) Esta blanket esta mal echa, pone el tiempo en 00:36:067 y guíate por el anillo amarillo para hacer la blanket
01:19:554 (1,2) Intento fallido de blankter pls, arreglalo para que se vea como una kawaii blanket o3o

Hitsounds:
Nothing For Here~

Eso es todo amigos! Bastante bien tu Insane, igual se le pueden arreglar cosas, pero de momento se ve bien (:
Igual en el hard de Baka-nyan

Mira, solo porque me caes bien te voy a regalar una de mis estrellas!
:D Chao cotito
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nvrsebas
129 posts
Joined August 2012
nvrsebas
Mierda no se te puede hacer un mod sin que caiga otro lol , cuando termines el de tomy me llamas y te hago IRC

EDIT: aqui el mod mas inservible de todos los tiempos c:



SPOILER
IRC:2013-07-18 21:09 Gero: solo dale a opciones
2013-07-18 21:09 Gero: flojo y guarda el chat
2013-07-18 21:09 shankishiro: yaya
2013-07-18 21:09 shankishiro: empieso
2013-07-18 21:09 Gero: por que diff empiezas?
2013-07-18 21:09 shankishiro: tiro riro riro tiro riii
2013-07-18 21:09 shankishiro: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/275042 Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.) [Easy]]
2013-07-18 21:10 Gero: oki
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: 00:14:008 (1) -
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: desmarca nc
2013-07-18 21:11 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: 00:14:512 (5) - nc
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: tu mira luego y dime
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: e.e
2013-07-18 21:11 Gero: bueno
2013-07-18 21:11 shankishiro: 00:17:033 (1) - desmarca
2013-07-18 21:11 Gero: fxed xD
2013-07-18 21:12 shankishiro: 00:17:537 (2) - marca
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: NO
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: NOOOO
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: ahi no
2013-07-18 21:12 shankishiro: y ya quedo mas consistente c
2013-07-18 21:12 shankishiro: c:
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: el finish es el guia
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: ahi cambia con la musica no cambios
2013-07-18 21:12 Gero: sorry
2013-07-18 21:12 shankishiro: plaf
2013-07-18 21:13 Gero: despues de tu mod
2013-07-18 21:13 Gero: buscare BAT
2013-07-18 21:14 shankishiro: 01:38:462 (2) - la siento algo rara esa nota
2013-07-18 21:14 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:14 Gero: de hecho sigue muy bien el ritmo
2013-07-18 21:14 shankishiro: pero esta como rara
2013-07-18 21:14 shankishiro: solo digo
2013-07-18 21:15 Gero: nadie ha dicho na
2013-07-18 21:15 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: YO SI :B
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: fijate
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: esta como rara
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: un nuevito
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: se apuraria a darle click
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: :B:B:B:B:
2013-07-18 21:15 Gero: no lo cambiare
2013-07-18 21:15 Gero: sigue muy bien el ritmo es algo irrelevante imo
2013-07-18 21:15 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:15 shankishiro: yo no te discuto el ritmo , te discuto la lectura
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: es muy facil de leer
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: lol
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: tiene su distance snap correcto
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: igual igual
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: esta rara
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: <.<
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: no cambios
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: sigue
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/275044 Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.) [Normal]]
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: 00:05:941 (3,4) -
2013-07-18 21:16 shankishiro: hacia el centro (?
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:16 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:17 Gero: dejalo que es el final y luego viene un spin
2013-07-18 21:17 Gero: realmente mapear solo en el centro es super aburrido imo
2013-07-18 21:17 shankishiro: por eso mismo
2013-07-18 21:17 shankishiro: pero
2013-07-18 21:17 shankishiro: para que esta la insane y la hard ?c:
2013-07-18 21:17 Gero: mi estilo es asi
2013-07-18 21:17 Gero: no voy a cambiarlo xD
2013-07-18 21:18 shankishiro: 00:09:470 (1) -
2013-07-18 21:18 shankishiro: esta como fea?
2013-07-18 21:18 shankishiro: hasla curva :<
2013-07-18 21:18 Gero: ._. Dale CTRL + H
2013-07-18 21:18 Gero: es perfectamente simetrica
2013-07-18 21:18 Gero: y no
2013-07-18 21:18 Gero: si la hago curva mis siguentes patrones quedaran mal
2013-07-18 21:18 Gero: no cambios
2013-07-18 21:19 shankishiro: 00:43:756 (3) -
2013-07-18 21:19 shankishiro: curva
2013-07-18 21:19 shankishiro: LOL
2013-07-18 21:19 shankishiro: XD
2013-07-18 21:20 Gero: No
2013-07-18 21:20 shankishiro: bueno :c
2013-07-18 21:20 Gero: tu quieres todo el mapa con curvas o que?
2013-07-18 21:20 Gero: .-:
2013-07-18 21:20 shankishiro: es que
2013-07-18 21:20 shankishiro: esa si queda fea
2013-07-18 21:20 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: 00:54:848 (4) - esa nota
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: queda rara en el sentido de que si sigue tu ritmo etc etc
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: pero igual
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: la siento rara
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: xD
2013-07-18 21:21 Gero: es normal
2013-07-18 21:21 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:21 Gero: no voy a agregar 1/2 everywhere
2013-07-18 21:21 Gero: recuerdas
2013-07-18 21:21 shankishiro: sisi
2013-07-18 21:22 Gero: lally no encontro na
2013-07-18 21:22 Gero: en mi mapa xD
2013-07-18 21:23 shankishiro: 01:39:470 (3) -
2013-07-18 21:23 shankishiro: el spiner
2013-07-18 21:23 shankishiro: no deveria comenzar en esa nota? owo
2013-07-18 21:25 shankishiro: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/275043 Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: porque es un beat
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: fuerte y debe ser marcado
2013-07-18 21:26 shankishiro: esta hard
2013-07-18 21:26 shankishiro: es collab
2013-07-18 21:26 shankishiro: supongo
2013-07-18 21:26 shankishiro: que deveria de modearla en la pagina no?
2013-07-18 21:26 shankishiro: :c
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: no enserio(?
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: no me engañas xD
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:26 Gero: de hecho modeala que yo hago cambios
2013-07-18 21:27 Gero: pero que le vas a encontrar a andrea nada po
2013-07-18 21:27 shankishiro: 00:24:722 - si agrega una nota ahi quedaria exquisito , ya que seguiria la voz
2013-07-18 21:28 shankishiro: le estas hablando no? ._.
2013-07-18 21:30 shankishiro: gero?
2013-07-18 21:31 Gero: eh?
2013-07-18 21:31 shankishiro: leiste lo ultimo? .-.
2013-07-18 21:31 Gero: si
2013-07-18 21:31 Gero: o.o
2013-07-18 21:31 Gero: te dije que suena espantoso
2013-07-18 21:31 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:31 shankishiro: ah
2013-07-18 21:31 shankishiro: oka
2013-07-18 21:31 shankishiro: sigo
2013-07-18 21:33 shankishiro: 00:48:293 (2,3,4,5) -
2013-07-18 21:33 shankishiro: esta algo aburrido ?
2013-07-18 21:33 shankishiro: jumps jumps (?
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: oki
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: no
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: deja mis patrones
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: e.e
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: para eso esta insane
2013-07-18 21:34 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:34 shankishiro: pero
2013-07-18 21:35 shankishiro: unos jumps cortitos no quedarian mal
2013-07-18 21:35 shankishiro: harian las cosas interesantes para los farmeros con dt :x
2013-07-18 21:35 Gero: ya tiene anteriormente
2013-07-18 21:35 Gero: asi que nu o3o deja eso que se ve bonis
2013-07-18 21:35 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:35 shankishiro: la sekai la modeo? D:
2013-07-18 21:35 shankishiro: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/275387 Duca - Kokoro No Tane (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
2013-07-18 21:35 shankishiro: tarde
2013-07-18 21:36 Gero: la de sekai editas tu post
2013-07-18 21:36 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:36 Gero: dale a la insane
2013-07-18 21:37 shankishiro: 00:53:840 (2) -
2013-07-18 21:37 shankishiro: a la mierda el flow?
2013-07-18 21:37 Gero: O_O
2013-07-18 21:37 Gero: tiene flow
2013-07-18 21:37 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:37 shankishiro: PUFF
2013-07-18 21:37 shankishiro: SI SE NOTA
2013-07-18 21:37 Gero: juegala
2013-07-18 21:37 shankishiro: A LEGUAS XD
2013-07-18 21:38 Gero: pues no me creas lol
2013-07-18 21:38 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:39 shankishiro: ya
2013-07-18 21:39 shankishiro: c:
2013-07-18 21:39 shankishiro: esta todo mas que perfecto
2013-07-18 21:39 Gero: postea pls
2013-07-18 21:39 Gero: :3
2013-07-18 21:39 shankishiro: capas los tag's source's e inconsistencias en las lineas
2013-07-18 21:39 shankishiro: pero para eso estan los bat's (?
2013-07-18 21:39 Gero: inconsistencia
2013-07-18 21:39 Gero: ?
2013-07-18 21:39 Gero: como?
2013-07-18 21:40 shankishiro: nada nada deja
2013-07-18 21:40 shankishiro: xD
2013-07-18 21:40 Gero: ahorita lo corrijo
2013-07-18 21:40 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:40 shankishiro: aver la de sekai
2013-07-18 21:40 shankishiro: que correjiras ?
2013-07-18 21:40 shankishiro: fixeaste algo en este mod? ._.
2013-07-18 21:42 Gero: en cual?
2013-07-18 21:42 Gero: en el tuyo?
2013-07-18 21:42 Gero: si easy y hard
2013-07-18 21:42 Gero: y los tags
2013-07-18 21:44 shankishiro: como pongo el texto en spoiler? XD
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: el texto'
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: cual texto?
2013-07-18 21:45 shankishiro: el del irc
2013-07-18 21:45 shankishiro: .-.
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: en box
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: xD
2013-07-18 21:45 shankishiro: como
2013-07-18 21:45 shankishiro: e.e
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: y en el = de las primeras llaves
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: IRC MOD
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: el texto en codigo
2013-07-18 21:45 Gero: y luego seleccionas


Sekai's Hard:

More late i modding this :D
Last edited by nvrsebas , edited 1 time in total.
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi lazy Gero :3

Easy

  1. 00:15:520 (2) The blanket with (2) looks strange as that (1) is straight and 2 , circular slider, flows and looks bad in my opinion. In conclusion you should make (2) as (1) only than rotated
    SPOILER
  2. 00:21:067 (5) The NewCombo should be here , because it feels strange stop putting New Combos of slowdowns. Also , if you put a NewCombo here, you should also
    do so here 00:25:604 (2) , Because it's the same sound, you choose
  3. 00:31:151 (2) I think you should remove the Finish the beginning of the slider, it feels totally unnecessary.
  4. 00:33:167 (1) If you do the above, put a Finish in the beginning of the slider here
  5. 00:53:840 (2) This slider flows much better if it is pointing up. Make better tracking of cursor
    SPOILER
  6. 01:22:579 (2) Add a Finish to this circle too in the beginning , if you listen to the song here, you will hear a sound similar to finish, so that sounds good with hitsound
  7. 01:37:705 (1) Following your patterns of New Combos , You should delete this New combo because you change every two slowdowns, and here you did after just one. So for consistency delete this NC
Normal

  1. 00:06:697 (4) This slider should be to down, flows totally better :P I love a good flow <3 xD
    I love a good flow
  2. 00:15:520 (4) You put the hitsounds wrong in this slider, I think you heard wrong . Beginning : clap , Reverse arrow : clap too Tail of slider : Finish , it's correct
  3. 00:54:848 (4)
  4. You're ignoring one important slowdown ofmusic. This slider should finish in 00:55:352 and you should add a circle in 00:55:856
  5. 01:10:983 (4) Same as above u.u
  6. 01:29:134 (3) Move the last sliderpoint to x:252 y:104 for that it is well aligned with (4) . Don't forget , fix the spacing
Hard

  1. 00:07:957 (1) I think that this slider is very short for me . I don't know , it's just my opinion
  2. 00:01:277 (2) I feel totally unnecessary this circle, honestly what are you following with this circle?
  3. 00:18:041 (3) I would like that this slider is pointing down, sincerely flows and plays very well
    SPOILER
  4. 00:20:814 (5) Ctrl+G to this slider , honestly flows much better :)
  5. 00:40:983 (x) In my opinion you are forgetting to put a circle here. Well, you decide whether to put it or not, it is not very necessary
Oh well , great mapset . Good luck to both with this project :)
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
m4m desu ~


  • General
    00:00:899 - use this finish http://puu.sh/3DWLe.wav ? (apply to all diff if you follow)
    remove "game" in tags, since genre will be Video Game?
    audio lead in 2000?
    01:23:588 - kiai end in here?


  • Easy
    00:05:941 (2) - 256,196? it's better flow imo
    00:07:453 - add note here and spin in 00:07:705 - ? "me" start in red tick so i think better if you start spin in red tick
    00:15:016 - if you agree with my suggestion finish in general, add that finish in here? (apply all diff if you follow)
    00:29:134 (5) - ^
    00:17:033 - volume 50 / 60%?
    00:58:882 (3,4) - try http://puu.sh/3DXAs.jpg ? it's not good skip stanza when stanza have vocal
    01:03:924 (4) - try http://puu.sh/3DXEO.jpg ? 01:04:428 - have high vocal, also add finish in slider's head if you follow
    01:11:991 (4) - 44,124? to make it little branket, if yes fix spacing after this slider
    01:15:520 (3,4) - try http://puu.sh/3DXSc.jpg for follow vocal?
    01:34:680 (3) - copy paste from 2 and rotate -45 degree? http://puu.sh/3DXZg.jpg
    01:35:688 (1) - finish?


  • Normal
    unsnapped object, check AiMod http://puu.sh/3DY6u.png
    00:01:655 (2) - spacing issue (0.84x)
    00:19:050 (3,4,5) - try http://puu.sh/3DYe9.jpg for follow vocal?
    00:36:697 (5) - 220,144?
    01:04:176 (5) - remove finish here and add in 01:04:428 (6) - 's head?
    01:09:470 (1) - 428,92 for straight with 01:08:462 (6) - ? due 01:07:957 (5,7) - straight, so keep consistency imo
    01:10:983 (4) - nazi. 288,260?
    01:13:504 - finish?
    01:17:537 (1) - ^


  • Hard
    HP-1? HP 7?! you want kill players?! OAO
    00:05:941 (3) - you are not make diagonal line with after this note so 116,172?
    00:16:403 (3) - ctrl+G to make jump?
    00:17:789 (2) - 144,140 for better flow?
    00:34:932 (1) - spacing issue here (1,04x)
    00:48:546 (3) - remove finish?
    00:49:302 (1) - hyper nazi, different 1 x coordinate with 00:48:546 (3) -
    00:51:319 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/3DYPP.jpg ?
    00:54:596 (4) - ctrl+J put in 180,64? better flow imo xD
    00:57:747 - add note?
    01:07:453 (1,2) - same as 00:51:319 (1,2) -
    01:10:478 (1) - remove NC? i don't see any reason why nc in here



  • Insane
    00:14:008 (1,2) - stacked perfectly?
    00:29:134 (1) - finish?
    00:30:520 (6) - use 0,6x same as 00:29:512 (3) - ?
    00:39:596 - add note?
    00:48:546 (3) - remove finish?
    01:14:512 (5) - 464,280?
    01:25:604 (1) - end in 01:25:983 - and then 01:26:109 - add note?
    pretty cute nice moe kawaii diff

that's all, good luck bakagero <3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Go Gero! o3o
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Here is your m4m. NOTE: I'm on the laptop and I have massive lag, so I can't playtest maps, so maybe I can be wrong about somthing, sorry

Easy

00:14:512 (1,2) - I'd give them the same shape
00:17:537 (2,3) - Move the whole pattern to 152|282, then adjust spacing

Normal

00:49:806 (2,3) - They should have the same shape, he pattern will look better

Hard

00:31:529 (5,6) - Make a better blanket
01:12:243 (2) - Why so straight? Make it curved

Sekai's Hard

00:06:949 (1,2) - i don't like how it sounds, I'd use another rhythm
00:14:008 (8) - Make it symmetrical
00:31:655 (3,4,5) - Try to put whistles in the end of (3) and on (5), remove the acutal ones

Insane

00:17:915 (4,5) - The voice starts here 00:17:915 - I suggest to make an unique slider with these, because it sounds really bad...
00:19:806 (4) - Remove the whistle from hte end, it sounds bad! Put it on 00:20:310 (5) -'s beginning
00:38:462 (1) - Move to 392|128 for symmetry
00:42:243 (4) - Remove whistle from the end
00:43:251 (1) - The same. Note: usually hitsounds on blue ticks sound bad
00:55:352 (1) - Remove whistle from the end
01:01:403 (1) - ^
01:05:814 (5,6) - Same as 00:17:915 (4,5)
01:07:453 (1) - On the repeat: put clap instead of whistle
01:11:487 (1) - Remove whistle from the end
01:17:537 (1) - ^
01:31:655 (5) - ^
01:33:672 (1,2) - Remove whistles from hte repeats

________________________

Nothing else, if I were a BAT I'd bubble this, I don't see big problems, anyway good luck! :P
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks for modding guys :3

http://puu.sh/3EqAv.osu

Fixed some stuff
[Yue]
1,643 posts
Joined January 2011
[Yue]
No espere encontrar nada y tampoco encontre nada~

Easy:
01:33:672 (2,3) - siento que (3) esta un poco pegado a (2) y de cierta forma no me gusta. Que tal algo asi?
SPOILER

Todo el mundo ya te hizo mod asi que.. no hay nada malo con tu mapa u.u

Ranked ♥

Edit: no me des kudos por esto :S
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
Thanks for the mods guys!

I edit my post tomorrow on changes!

Updated~
GENDER BLENDER
38 posts
Joined July 2012
GENDER BLENDER
m4m~ :)
Insane
General:
HP Drain +1, AR +1.
Map:
Just some suggestions, pardon me if I am wrong. :)
00:52:327 (3) - Place a beat right after this, maybe like a jump? And make a blanket, like this: http://i.imgur.com/Uiizd4V.png Or maybe place the new beat at the midpoint.
00:53:714 - ^ , add a beat at the midpoint~
01:12:873 - ^ , add a note~ either blanket or midpoint :o
01:27:495 (7) - Move a beat before, like:

01:33:546 (6) - Maybe delete this beat; but it sounds great anyway~
The other difficulties look fine to me, but you might consider the AR of Hard difficulty. :)
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero

Potla wrote:

m4m~ :) O/
Insane
General:
HP Drain +1, AR +1. the diff is balanced, no changes!
Map:
Just some suggestions, pardon me if I am wrong. :) don't worry :P
00:52:327 (3) - Place a beat right after this, maybe like a jump? And make a blanket, like this: http://i.imgur.com/Uiizd4V.png Or maybe place the new beat at the midpoint. if I add a note there would overmap
00:53:714 - ^ , add a beat at the midpoint~ ^
01:12:873 - ^ , add a note~ either blanket or midpoint :o this is nice but prefer to keep it like this
01:27:495 (7) - Move a beat before, like:

01:33:546 (6) - Maybe delete this beat; but it sounds great anyway~ Nope! is better than flowing stream
The other difficulties look fine to me, but you might consider the AR of Hard difficulty. :)

Thanks for the mod :3
Luna-
811 posts
Joined June 2012
Luna-
Noob mod (~^▽^)~

[General]
Source: Cafe Sourire http://vndb.org/v4985
Quizas agregar"Smile" a tags? (Sourire en frances significa smile :B)

[Easy]

00:14:008 (4) - Comienza el NC desde aqui?
00:21:067 (5) - ^
00:22:579 (2,3) - sliders cruzados? no creo que sea una buena idea, en realidad no me gusta tanto para una easy :/ has algo con ellos
00:29:134 (5) igual que 00:14:008 (4) -
01:19:050 (3,4) no siento bien el ritmo que siguen estos sliders, quedaria mejor algo asi : http://puu.sh/3ET8O.jpg , o para no arruinar la simetria del primero algo asi: http://puu.sh/3ETaE.jpg

[Normal]

CS -1? creo que es mejor para una normal
01:38:462 - este espacio creo que es algo confuso, yo agregaria un circle ahi

[Hard]

00:16:403 (3) - ctrl + g
00:30:899 (4,5) - el espacio entre ellas se siente algo confuso :/ pero aun asi me gusta como suena. Solo como nota :P
00:40:604 (5) - elimina esta circle?
01:04:806 (7) - ^

[Sekai's Hard]

Nothing to say~ I really like it :3

[Insane]

00:03:924 (1,2) - Cambialos por un slider? demaciados circles es aburrido xP y creo que queda mejor con la musica
00:16:025 (1) - Quita NC
00:20:310 (5) - ctrl + g, creo que es mas divertido 8-)
00:55:856 (2) - ^

eso es todo :B
Suerte!
Gero
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Topic Starter
Gero

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Noob mod (~^▽^)~ ~o3o~

[General]
Source: Cafe Sourire http://vndb.org/v4985 Fixed
Quizas agregar"Smile" a tags? (Sourire en frances significa smile :B) Fixed

[Easy]

00:14:008 (4) - Comienza el NC desde aqui? Fixed
00:21:067 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:22:579 (2,3) - sliders cruzados? no creo que sea una buena idea, en realidad no me gusta tanto para una easy :/ has algo con ellos en realidad no es mucho problema imo es perfectamente leible, no cambios
00:29:134 (5) igual que 00:14:008 (4) - ^
01:19:050 (3,4) no siento bien el ritmo que siguen estos sliders, quedaria mejor algo asi : http://puu.sh/3ET8O.jpg , o para no arruinar la simetria del primero algo asi: http://puu.sh/3ETaE.jpg yo creo que esta bien, realmente estoy siguiendo un ritmo constante, aqui

[Normal]

CS -1? creo que es mejor para una normal nah xD que sea dificil la normal
01:38:462 - este espacio creo que es algo confuso, yo agregaria un circle ahi no me convence esto, realmente para personas sin experiencia, les resultaria dificil darle a una nota ahi

[Hard]

00:16:403 (3) - ctrl + g Fixed
00:30:899 (4,5) - el espacio entre ellas se siente algo confuso :/ pero aun asi me gusta como suena. Solo como nota :P suena bien xD
00:40:604 (5) - elimina esta circle? prefiero que el pequeño "stream" sea corrido, ya que si lo cortamos seria confuso imo
01:04:806 (7) - ^ ^

[Sekai's Hard]

Nothing to say~ I really like it :3
I agree ^
[Insane]

00:03:924 (1,2) - Cambialos por un slider? demaciados circles es aburrido xP y creo que queda mejor con la musica neh neh xD esta bien asi, pero creo que lo tomare en cuenta, necesito mas opiniones acerca de esto
00:16:025 (1) - Quita NC Fixed
00:20:310 (5) - ctrl + g, creo que es mas divertido 8-) ala pero es un poco raro , no cambios
00:55:856 (2) - ^ ^

eso es todo :B
Suerte!
Muchas Gracias <3~ Updated!
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Hi, CL is it you!!! pls take my free mod

[General]

maybe don't put the 'mapset' in a spoilerbox, it might confuse some People, like me

[Insane]

i'll go on tomorrow xD want to sleep now u.u
alanwz
6 posts
Joined February 2013
alanwz
Hi, this is my first mod ever, so apologies in advance if I mess up or end up doing it wrong. I'm also new to mapping so...
Eeto... anooo... It looks really nice already. I don't really have much to say, so I'll just make nazi observations/suggestions. Good work!

Easy

00:00:899 - Finish start seems kinda rough... Maybe remove the finish? Purely opinion

Normal

00:00:899 - Same as easy, I don't really like starting with that finish. I think it's nice if the first finish sound comes at the end of the spinner.
01:38:462 - Imo, you should put something on this red tick. Maybe move the (2) reverse slider to this red tick and re-space out the (3) on the last beat? If you do change the (2) to the red tick, I'd also add finish to the start of the (2). I like the sound of that way better.

Hard
I'm not too sure how the collab thing works, but maybe name the difficulty "Collab" even though it's seen in the sb? Not sure.
00:00:899 - Finish start makes me sad :(
00:02:411 - The NC here happens in the middle of the phrase... I don't think you should NC here. I'd NC at 00:02:915
01:23:588 (1) - I don't really like how the stream leads into the slider /: If you do decide to change it, either change the stream angle, or the slider angle. If you change the slider angle make sure the (3) slider in the following combo/phrase is changed symmetrically :)


Sekai-nyan's Hard

00:06:949 (1) - Maybe not make this NC? Your previous combo was 9 long, and since this phrase and the previous phrase are very similar, making a NC here is splitting the phrasing that you designated in the previous combo. Or maybe in easier words, parallel phrases = parallel phrasing/combo
00:33:672 (3,4,5) - The (3) and the (5) aren't exactly symmetrical, so maybe move a few grid spaces on either one?
00:37:201 (1) - You use this slider 5? times throughout the map, and I think the one at this time is slightly different from the rest. Very nazi, but maybe make it the same as the others?
01:34:680-01:37:453 - In the previous phrase/combo you were using a lot of finish for creating rhythms, but then suddenly stopped using it during this time, which left me feeling like something was missing... Maybe add a finish on 01:35:688 (3) and the end of slider (6) at 01:37:201? Or wherever else you see fit. I am very new to this stuff, so please pardon me if I'm misunderstanding.

Insane

00:00:899 - purely preference on my disagreement with the finish start.
00:02:411 - Once again, I disagree with the NC here in the middle of the phrase.
00:32:411 (2) - The spacing from (1) to (2) and (2) to (3) is larger than the previous spacing. The (2) doesn't seem to need any emphasis by making it have slightly larger spacing... I'm not sure about this at all, but it stood out to me.
00:38:462 - I wouldn't put NC here. You're in the middle of a pattern and phrase; I'd put the NC at 00:39:218
01:01:151 (5,6,1) - Not too sure, but when I was testing, I wanted the 5,6,1 to follow the trail of the previous slider. I'm not the best at playing, so my play preferences are probably not all that trustworthy. I'd fix it by changing the (4) slider slightly and fitting the 5,6,1 to follow the trail of the (4), so that the spacing is still the same between (4) and (5)
01:17:537 (1) - Make slider parallel to (3) and change (2) slightly in accordance with (1)


That's all~ Good luck, and yay for duca!
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
hi Gero :3! here is your m4m

[General]
  1. collaband Sekai to the tags
[Easy]
really nice diff o.o
  1. 01:36:193 (2) - make this slider like: // looks softer and better
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 01:20:310 (2) - remove finish
[Hard]
  • Gero:
  1. 00:48:546 (3) - remove finish
    Andrea
  2. 01:23:588 (1,2,3) - do a perfect blanket here for this 2 sliders
[Sekai]
  1. nothing to say ;_;
[Insane]
  1. 01:24:092 (2) - [nazi]stack this one with [/nazi] 01:25:604 (1) -
useless mod ;____; meeeeeh really nice mapset have a star o3o/*
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero

Lally wrote:

hi Gero :3! here is your m4m

[General]
  1. collaband Sekai to the tags
Fixed

[Easy]
really nice diff o.o
  1. 01:36:193 (2) - make this slider like: // looks softer and better Fixed
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 01:20:310 (2) - remove finish
Neh!

[Hard]
  • Gero:
  1. 00:48:546 (3) - remove finish Neh
    Andrea
  2. 01:23:588 (1,2,3) - do a perfect blanket here for this 2 sliders
Fixed

[Insane]
  1. 01:24:092 (2) - [nazi]stack this one with [/nazi] 01:25:604 (1) - No o3o
useless mod ;____; meeeeeh really nice mapset have a star o3o/*
Thanks for the mod Moe lally <3~

Updated~
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Holi :v

Modeando pq su mapa se ve bonito y en Inglés pq si :v

All here are rhythm suggestions, all of your diffs have nice aesthetics, unless I point something :P

[Insane]

This diff has many rhythm flaws ;~; Sorry for being a bit rude, but I want this be a nice mapset and I focused more on this because I really loved the song :<

00:00:899 (1) - You could do this a 1/2 slider with one repeat to follow the vocals, which are dominant in this part.
00:02:915 (2) - This isn't following vocals correctly and sounds weird, make a 3/4 slider with one repeat
00:04:176 (2) - Move this 1/4 beat later, fits better with the windy instrument.
00:05:058 (2) - Remove this, overmapping is not always good.
00:05:436 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat earlier, matches nicely with vocals.
00:10:983 (1,2) - Very nice symmetry, but a note in 00:11:361 would sounds nice.
00:14:008 (1) - I suggest to shorten this to the red tick and add a note in the now empty blue tick.
00:15:016 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. Well, you may hear some stuff in the ones I'll say you to delete, but it really plays and sounds very bad imo. Delete 00:15:899 (5,3).
00:19:050 (1) - Extend this to the next blue tick, obviously, delete the circle.
00:21:949 (3) - I'd use a 3/4 slider instead this circle and slider, fits better imo.
00:30:520 (6) - Remove this, there's nothing in the music :I
00:41:991 - I'd use a tiny 1/4 stream here of 5 notes here, fits very nice with the bass, if you don't want to put the stream, then keep following the vocals and extend 00:42:243 (4) to the white tick.
00:46:277 (3) - A 1/4 triple would fit here.
00:48:420 (2) - I think it's better to remove this.
00:49:680 - I feel like a note is missing here.
00:50:688 - ^
00:52:705 - ^
00:53:748 - ^ For vocals
00:57:369 (1) - Please, for vocals.

01:09:848 - A note is missing here for vocals.
01:22:831 - A stream please~ (5 notes in 1/4)
01:23:588 (1) - Extend to the next blue tick.
01:27:243 (6,7) - Remove the claps here, sounds a bit ankward.

[Bakai's Hard]
00:04:932 (1) - Shorten this by 1/4 beat and move the next circle to 00:05:310, to follow vocals better.
00:06:193 - I'd put a note here for vocals.
00:07:453 (2) - Move this to 00:07:705 and delete 00:08:209 (3), for vocals.
00:09:722 (4) - Remove the clap here, sounds weird.
00:14:890 (2) - I'd delete this, sounds a bit dense for the instrument I think you're following.
00:16:277 (6) - Move this 1/4 beat earlier, matches better with drums.
00:39:722 - Fits better the bass.

00:47:285 - Follow correctly the drums.

01:37:705 - Similar as above

Also I noticed some spots where I don't know if you're mapping vocals or the instruments, but I won't point those >.<

[Hard]
I could barely see the names in the SB while playing, maybe it's just me.
Gero:
00:05:436 (2) - I suggest to begin this in the previous blue tick, to fit better with vocals.
01:09:848 - Add a circle for vocals.
01:19:554 (1) - Maybe shorten this by 1/4 beat, to follow the bass.
01:21:571 (1) - Shorten by 1/2 and put a circle in 01:22:075, this sounds a bit weird, as drums are being ignored in one spot.
Andrea:
00:26:109 (2) - How about removing this and putting a circle in 00:26:361? By this way the rhythm will be consistent with previous ones.
00:28:125 (5) - Similar as above
00:30:142 (2) - ^
00:53:714 - Add a circle here to follow vocals better.


[Normal]
Increase HP by 1, this provides a better spread (2 > 4 > 6 > 7) :v
00:07:201 (1) - This feels a bit weird while playing, please put some notes instead this spinner :<

[Easy]
00:07:453 (1) - As in Normal
01:23:588 (1) - NC :v

Eso seria todo de mi parte baka Gero. Rank after you applied my mod pls *runs*
Gero
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Gero
Updated~

Thanks :3
Mythiax
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Mythiax
IRC mod here.

Yaoi mod for Yaoi mapper
2:11 Zeroarg: entrá a editor
02:11 Zeroarg: o3o
02:12 Gero: entro
02:12 Gero: o3o
02:13 Zeroarg: 00:47:285 (3) - 
02:13 Zeroarg: porque no lo pones en blanket
02:13 Zeroarg: con
02:13 Zeroarg: 00:45:772 (2) - 
02:13 Zeroarg: ?
02:13 Gero: no :/ xD seria muy repetitivo 
02:13 Gero: en el mapa
02:13 Zeroarg: lo siento muy a la deriva
02:13 Zeroarg: ahi suelto
02:13 Gero: ya que lo use en otras diff tambien
02:14 Zeroarg: o sino
02:14 Zeroarg: hacelo con curva quizás
02:14 Zeroarg: recto y ahi suelto qcyo
02:14 Gero: prefiero que no xD me gusta como esta ahi
02:21 Zeroarg: bueno
02:21 Zeroarg: a ver
02:22 Zeroarg: la easy no tiene mas nada
02:22 Gero: entonces pasamos a normal?
02:22 Gero: o3o
02:22 Zeroarg: asip
02:22 Zeroarg: sip*
02:22 Gero: oki
02:24 Zeroarg: porqué esta Andrea en los tags o.o?
02:24 Gero: porque hicimos collab
02:24 Gero: o.o
02:24 Gero: en hard
02:25 Zeroarg: ah
02:25 Zeroarg: CS - 1 en el normal :<
02:25 Gero: NO
02:25 Gero: :X
02:25 Zeroarg: CS 4 es de mala persona
02:25 Gero: pero se ve tan bien ;w;
02:25 Zeroarg: y aparte no me gusta como queda
02:25 Zeroarg: se siente feo con CS4
02:25 Zeroarg: lo hace un normal + imo
02:28 Gero: oki
02:28 Gero: fixed
02:31 Gero: estas vivo? XD
02:31 Zeroarg: si o.o
02:31 Zeroarg: estaba escuchando
02:31 Gero: ah oki
02:31 Gero: xD
02:31 Zeroarg: acá
02:31 Zeroarg: 01:38:462 - 
02:32 Zeroarg: hay sonido mas fuerte ahí
02:32 Zeroarg: que en 01:38:714 - 
02:32 Zeroarg: poné un cirle en el tick rojo vacío
02:32 Zeroarg: y move el slider con repeat
02:32 Zeroarg: al tick rojo que sigue
02:32 Zeroarg: sigue mucho mejor el ritmo
02:34 Gero: fixed
02:35 Zeroarg: bueno creo que nada mas :<
02:35 Zeroarg: porque tan bien hecho todo :c
02:35 Gero: porque quiero rankear por lo menos uno u.u
02:49 Zeroarg: voy a hablar con el baka de Andrea después
02:49 Zeroarg: 01:28:882 (5,6,7) - 
02:49 Zeroarg: no escucho nada que justifique ese triple
02:49 Gero: que pasa con esas notas?
02:49 Gero: o:
02:49 Gero: tienes razon2:51 Zeroarg: bueno
02:51 Zeroarg: solo eso en el hard
02:51 Gero: el triplete?
02:51 Gero: si andrea dice algo
02:51 Gero: me avisas para quitarlas o dejarlas
02:52 Zeroarg: sisi
02:52 Zeroarg: despues le digo
02:52 Gero: okidoki
02:52 Gero: o3o
02:53 Zeroarg: A Sekai le moddeo yo en pm
02:53 Zeroarg: a ver tu insane02:56 Zeroarg: revisemos a ver
02:56 Gero: okay 
02:56 Gero: me dices donde debo de eliminar
02:57 Gero: algunos me dijero agrega aqui 
02:57 Gero: y aqui y aqui
02:57 Gero: nada de quitar XD
02:59 Zeroarg:  00:25:352 (2) - esa
02:59 Zeroarg: se siente mejor
02:59 Gero: sin esa?
02:59 Zeroarg: si dejas la del blue tick solamente
02:59 Zeroarg: si
02:59 Gero: no arreglo el spacing o si?
02:59 Zeroarg: es muy poco
03:00 Zeroarg: si queres move (1)
03:00 Gero: espera
03:00 Zeroarg: pero no cambia mucho que digamos
03:00 Gero: escucha el fondo
03:00 Gero: se escucha algo ahi
03:00 Gero: como un "pss"
03:00 Gero: o un "tsk"
03:00 Zeroarg: en si se escucha
03:00 Zeroarg: pero imo
03:00 Zeroarg: juega mejor dejando ese tick libre
03:00 Zeroarg: y siguiendo vocales con el blue tick
03:00 Gero: no hay problema entocnes si lo quito
03:00 Gero: xD
03:01 Gero: listo fixed03:10 Zeroarg: gero
03:10 *Zeroarg is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/275387 Duca - Kokoro No Tane [Insane]]
03:10 Zeroarg: no la overmappeaste
03:10 Zeroarg: sos un mapper ninja
03:10 Gero: no?
03:10 Zeroarg: porque está todo siguiendo la musica de fondo
03:10 Gero: falle solo una nota?
03:10 Zeroarg: aunque no lo sentía
03:10 Zeroarg: que tampoco fallaste
03:10 Zeroarg: porque hay sonidi
03:10 Zeroarg: o
03:10 Zeroarg: solo que juega mejor sin esa nota imo
03:10 Gero: pero la elimine o.o
03:11 Gero: oki o3o
03:11 Gero: ya le di actualziar
03:11 Zeroarg: bueno
03:11 Gero: publica el IRC
03:11 Gero: o3o
03:11 Gero: porfavor
03:11 Zeroarg: oki =w=
Gero
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Updated~

Thanks a lot for the mods!
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