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  00:05:175 (1,2) - blanket
  00:35:857 (3,1) - place em under each other?
  00:36:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it goe like http://puu.sh/okD4q/db587a00b2.jpg so the 00:37:391 (1) - fits into the flow
  00:37:903 (4) - make it a bit curvy like the following ones
  00:46:937 (6,1) - blanket
  00:50:687 (2,3,4,5,6) -try to make this an even pentagon with shift+ctrl+d
  01:59:380 (2,1) - make em same spacing as 01:58:357 (1,2) -
  02:49:408 (3) - try x=120 and y=148
  02:50:005 (6) - son't overlap it with the slider like move it more to the right
  03:15:232 (5,6) - blanket
  04:03:300 (4) - try making it not so curvy like the one before
  04:12:334 (1,3) - blanket
  04:45:403 (3) - make this a mirrored copy of 04:44:721 (1) - like this perhaps http://puu.sh/okDZh/47c5369654.jpg
  05:16:084 (1,2) - overlap like try playing it on 05:15:914 (2) - again
  05:29:380 (4) - put it directly under the end of 05:28:357 (1) -
  05:29:721 (1,2,3,4) - blanket?
  06:10:630 (1) - make this a bit lower so the start of it fits into the stream
  06:14:891 (1,2) - blanket?
  06:15:062 (2) - perhaps ctrl+g?
  06:20:175 (1,2,3) - blanket
  
  couldn't find much more (° ω°)

Yukiyo wrote:

m4m here o/

I'll try my best (I'm not that good of a modder/mapper)

Marathon

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  00:05:175 (1,2) - blanket
  00:35:857 (3,1) - place em under each other?
  00:36:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it goe like http://puu.sh/okD4q/db587a00b2.jpg so the 00:37:391 (1) - fits into the flow i was going into clockwise flow. fixed other note instead
  00:37:903 (4) - make it a bit curvy like the following ones this one is intentional. force change of flow
  00:46:937 (6,1) - blanket
  00:50:687 (2,3,4,5,6) -try to make this an even pentagon with shift+ctrl+d yea, got a lot of complaint on this. but this is intentional, jump and antijump pentagin
  01:59:380 (2,1) - make em same spacing as 01:58:357 (1,2) -
  02:49:408 (3) - try x=120 and y=148
  02:50:005 (6) - son't overlap it with the slider like move it more to the right
  03:15:232 (5,6) - blanket
  04:03:300 (4) - try making it not so curvy like the one before
  04:12:334 (1,3) - blanket
  04:45:403 (3) - make this a mirrored copy of 04:44:721 (1) - like this perhaps http://puu.sh/okDZh/47c5369654.jpg
  05:16:084 (1,2) - overlap like try playing it on 05:15:914 (2) - again
  05:29:380 (4) - put it directly under the end of 05:28:357 (1) -
  05:29:721 (1,2,3,4) - blanket?
  06:10:630 (1) - make this a bit lower so the start of it fits into the stream
  06:14:891 (1,2) - blanket?
  06:15:062 (2) - perhaps ctrl+g? going vertical zigzag jump pattern
  06:20:175 (1,2,3) - blanket
  
  couldn't find much more (° ω°)

Good Luck on ranking

-Yukiyo

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

Ok so. This is my mod, if you disagree with something just ignore it.

Also the storyboard is nice, i didnt notice it before cuz i had video, and sb off so yeah XD sorry bout that. Anything more than plain black bg is distracting me and i am always turning it off so don't take my opinion about sb/ bg/ video distractedness so serious.

First thing is length of the sliders in the beginning. Imo they should be shorter. For example i would make this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5007189 slider like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5007195
It's not that big of a deal but i felt a bit uncomfortable when playing it.

Second thing is placement. I would not go outside the box. And i don't mean the thinking but the playing area. U C, if i don't see the whole circle when playing, i'm confused, and i start to think, why is this circle slightly outside the playing area. And i lose my focus XD So yeah, nothing major again but your map is very good and if i wanna make a mod i need to look at even smallest things

Third thing is jumps. I said that there are some jumps that are a bit too big and i'm gonna point them out now.
05:20:516 (3) -
05:46:596 (6) -
05:47:278 (4) -
05:47:278 (4) - maybe do a little curve there to make this stream more accessable and to reduce the jump lenght
06:26:312 (3,4) - those to are a bit weir placed for me. It's a rectange, i would make a square or sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5007406
also snap this 06:26:653 (5) - to this 06:25:630 (1) -
02:25:119 (6) - this jump might be too big

Ok that's it. I hope i helped at least a bit and good luck on future mapping Cheers.

Narcissu wrote:

i think the sbload …… maybe cannot save

[Aeon]

1. 00:03:812 (1,2,3,4) - follow the music …… should be an even number, like → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080196 tried to get it as much consistency possible
   
2. 00:07:221 (7) - a note better, sound like voice stopped → http://puu.sh/oGJTM/a898d74dbb.jpg fixed
   
3. 00:07:732 - and add note here ↑↑↑ fixed
   
4. 00:07:903 - popular …… add click when downbeat → http://puu.sh/oGK6l/98aaef3243.jpg fixed
   
5. 00:08:584 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - sound like 2+4, 00:08:584 (3,4) - should different with 00:09:266 (5,6,7,8) - tried to get it as much consistency possible
   
   
6. 00:11:312 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above , sound like 2+2, like → tried to get it as much consistency possible
   
   
7. 00:14:721 (5,6,7,8) - 00:16:766 (3,4,5,6) - what ? fine ?? fixed
   
8. same as above …… add click when downbeat will …… more feeling ? SV*1.4 here → http://puu.sh/oGKnc/6ef6edb14e.jpg wait eh where is this
   
   
9. 00:26:482 (4,5,6) - i think soft-sampleset enough …… neednot 5% noted, will change if others said it too
   
10. 00:33:982 (1,2) - same as above …… note better ?? noted, will change if others said it too
    
11. 00:35:175 (1) - jump here emphasize downbeat better ? look good, but it just doesnt work, idk. might change it later
    
12. 00:44:721 (1) - a bit long …… try 2 slider ? small break lol
    
13. 00:45:744 (1,2) - stack than 00:46:084 (3) - more feeling ? hard to read when i stacked it.
    
14. 01:11:994 (1) - 01:44:039 (1) - same as above, 2/4 slider better ?

small break lol

fun map kukuku, a bit casual ……