1. tagに "私がモテないのはどう考えてもお前らが悪い!" いれといてください

1. 00:07:198 (1) - i feel kinda empty about hit sound, it is better to put it 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a clap here.so you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part from 00:07:198 - to 00:12:873 -

1. HP Drain rate -1.it is a little difficult for beginners imo.
2. 00:08:008 - ,00:08:819 - clap. Same as easy diff.

1. 00:17:535 (3) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance like this image.
   
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2. 00:26:556 (7) - remove a whistle. please check your previous part.00:09:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so it would fit well with this kind of music.
3. 00:40:441 (5,6) - i prefer to put these notes :> 00:43:887 (2,3) - ,00:47:130 (2,3) -
4. 01:06:590 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: feels like unnatural jump in this part. so how about remaking here like this ? will be more interesting imo :3
   
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alacat wrote:

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[General]

1. tagに "私がモテないのはどう考えてもお前らが悪い!" いれといてください

[Easy]

1. 00:07:198 (1) - i feel kinda empty about hit sound, it is better to put it 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a clap here.so you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part from 00:07:198 - to 00:12:873 -

[Normal]

1. HP Drain rate -1.it is a little difficult for beginners imo.
2. 00:08:008 - ,00:08:819 - clap. Same as easy diff.

[Insane]

1. 00:17:535 (3) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance like this image.
   
   img

   
2. 00:26:556 (7) - remove a whistle. please check your previous part.00:09:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so it would fit well with this kind of music.
3. 00:40:441 (5,6) - i prefer to put these notes :> 00:43:887 (2,3) - ,00:47:130 (2,3) -
4. 01:06:590 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: feels like unnatural jump in this part. so how about remaking here like this ? will be more interesting imo :3
   
   img

   

that's all i got. whenever you're ready, call me back for recheck.