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those

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those 2013-10-01T04:49:31+00:00

Just a few things about the hardest diff.

[Feng]

Diff name relevance?
OD7 would be more suitable here.
00:35:746 (4,5) - Here, it looks like you're sacrificing rhythmic consistency with 00:31:967 (4,5) - and 00:33:856 (5,6) - just to have a rotational pattern. It would be nice if you managed to do both of these things together instead of just using 1/2 rhythms.
01:08:817 (1) - New combo is definitely unnecessary here. Also remove the new combos from all the other times you do this.
01:32:793 (6) - Starting here, not sure if sliderwhistle turned on was intentional, but I don't think it fits very well considering you don't do it for the previous phrases.
01:56:770 (3,4,5,6,7) - Would be cool if you changed this rhythm; reserving the 5 1/4 notes for the parts in the song where the artist sings (like 00:46:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:52:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) would make this more unique.
02:56:534 (1,2,3,4) - Unsounded here, perhaps you missed this section?

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2013-10-04T01:06:32+00:00

[Hard]
00:23:463 (1) - Please throw a finish on the start of this slider.
01:04:093 (2) - I don't feel that this finish is necessary. But then again, you seem to do this all throughout so its not that irking to have consistency.
02:03:384 (1) - Missing a finish at the end of this slider?

[Feng]
Eh? Combo 2 is inconsistent with the rest of the diffuculties.
02:02:203 (5) - Judging from the song, the finish should be on the repeat, not the head.
02:52:754 (1) - Like those said, you need to have hitsounds here man
03:01:730 (5) - You forgot a clap hereee
03:08:817 (2) - I personally think this will be cooler symmetrical to (1), but I guess thats up to you. You should definitely remove the finish from the head of this slider though.

>>Edit: Bubbled

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Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-10-04T20:03:37+00:00

Normal
00:55:116 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:57:478 (4) -
You can see this comparison on 02:01:258 (3) - as you don't have NC here and it is started on 02:03:620 (1) - as I suggested with 00:57:478 (4) -
02:12:123 (5) - unsnapped slider
02:19:682 (5) - unsnapped slider

Hard
00:31:022 (x) -
01:37:163 (x) -
would be nice if you can add a circle on both points I mentioned above. Starting a new phrase on later 1/2 beat(red) is not that good idea. It sounds a bit strange. It is ok if you want to keep it according to following to the vocal.
02:12:123 (6) - unsnapped slider
02:14:013 (5) - unsnapped slider
02:19:682 (6) - unsnapped slider
02:22:989 (8) - unsnapped slider

Feng
fine

I will rank it after fixing these

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-10-04T20:28:47+00:00

Congratulation for the first ranked map.

Suimya

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Suimya 2013-10-04T20:47:09+00:00

no answers from the creator, that made me laugh a bit lol

btw Gratz, and nice for first map owo/

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-10-05T00:09:31+00:00

工洗泥呀

zlfence

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Topic Starter

zlfence 2013-10-05T00:24:44+00:00

Thanks for everyone who used to help me a lot .
I get a lot Mod from others and it is really helpful.
I dont know what should i say now when my 1st beatmap Ranked.
It must be a good experience for me .
Thanks a lot for everyone.

Kayano

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Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-05T00:41:15+00:00

gratz..上面的modder中有好多熟悉的面孔啊

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-10-05T01:55:08+00:00

gratz
so quick
头像是tiny dungeon里的勇者女儿啊，老实说我觉得这游戏画风不咋的._.

zlfence

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