updated!
thanks!YunoFanatic wrote:
m4m D:irc2013-08-22 14:44 YunoFanatic: tamul
2013-08-22 14:44 YunoFanatic: m4m
2013-08-22 14:44 YunoFanatic: i mod you irc
2013-08-22 14:44 YunoFanatic: oi
2013-08-22 14:45 YunoFanatic: TAMUL!
2013-08-22 14:45 TaMul: hmm
2013-08-22 14:45 TaMul: ok
2013-08-22 14:45 TaMul: yesyes
2013-08-22 14:45 YunoFanatic: ok wait wait gonna dl your map
2013-08-22 14:47 YunoFanatic: Ok for easy
2013-08-22 14:48 YunoFanatic: 00:03:501- you could make this better since you did not make any blanket for this
2013-08-22 14:48 YunoFanatic: 00:03:501
2013-08-22 14:49 TaMul: hmm
2013-08-22 14:49 TaMul: for example how?
2013-08-22 14:50 YunoFanatic: wait
2013-08-22 14:52 YunoFanatic: http://puu.sh/47Txv.png
2013-08-22 14:52 YunoFanatic: try this slider
2013-08-22 14:52 TaMul: you mean this slider is little strange?
2013-08-22 14:52 TaMul: 00:03:501 (1) -
2013-08-22 14:52 YunoFanatic: yep
2013-08-22 14:53 YunoFanatic: because the lower part of the slider is meant to be a blanket and you didnt you it after all
2013-08-22 14:53 TaMul: hmm think about that
2013-08-22 14:53 YunoFanatic: use*
2013-08-22 14:54 YunoFanatic: 00:11:403 (3) - move a little bit and find the good spot for blanket
2013-08-22 14:54 YunoFanatic: my suggestion is x:388 y:220
2013-08-22 14:56 YunoFanatic: 01:16:086 (3)- wont you think just blanket this with'
2013-08-22 14:56 YunoFanatic: 01:14:915 (2)- ? because the next is a spinner
2013-08-22 14:57 TaMul: 00:11:403 (2) - no change
2013-08-22 14:57 TaMul: because distance
2013-08-22 14:59 YunoFanatic: for blanketing picture in
2013-08-22 14:59 YunoFanatic: 01:16:086 (3)-
2013-08-22 14:59 YunoFanatic: http://puu.sh/47TKa.png
2013-08-22 14:59 YunoFanatic: dun easy
2013-08-22 15:01 YunoFanatic: normal
2013-08-22 15:01 TaMul: wait
2013-08-22 15:02 TaMul: ok go
2013-08-22 15:03 YunoFanatic: 00:31:891 (3)- make this closer imo http://puu.sh/47TQ7.png
2013-08-22 15:04 YunoFanatic: 00:53:985 (6)- suggestion you can nc here and delete nc on 00:54:281 (1)-
2013-08-22 15:04 TaMul: ok
2013-08-22 15:05 YunoFanatic: normal dun
2013-08-22 15:05 TaMul: yeap
2013-08-22 15:06 YunoFanatic: incase of my poor mod ill just shoot a star when dis is dun
2013-08-22 15:06 YunoFanatic: hard moid
2013-08-22 15:08 YunoFanatic: 00:01:159 (1)- maybe dont bend too much of this slider try this instead http://puu.sh/47TYY.png if your gonna go with this slider copy this slder and past it on 00
2013-08-22 15:09 YunoFanatic: 00:03:062 (5)- which you need to ctrl when you pasted
2013-08-22 15:10 TaMul: ok
2013-08-22 15:11 YunoFanatic: im done modding :3 ill just shoot star for the insane and poor mood D:
2013-08-22 15:11 TaMul: no,good mod
2013-08-22 15:11 TaMul: thanks
2013-08-22 15:12 YunoFanatic: but seriously your blanket is too good D: and insane is pretty much rankable
incase of my poor mod ill just shoot a star as said
my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/102307 since my poor mod and my star isnt good enough just mod 3 diff which is easy,hard and insane =w= gomene
thanks for modding!! ╭( ・ㅂ・ )وqoot8123 wrote:
Request by TaMul via In-game~
Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommond
Black : just suggestion
[General]
- none~
[ Muzukashii][ Oni]
- 00:18:135 (79) - although this k doesn't impact this song ,but i suggest you change to d due to the vocal's pitch between 00:20:476 (90,91) - and 00:18:135 (79,80) - are different - agree.
- 00:36:867 (166) - same as above - ^
- 00:31:598 (141,142,143,144) - these notes completely used k here ,but i think 00:32:184 (143) - can use d to inflect 00:29:842 (133,134,135) - - ok.
- the vocal 00:47:988 - is more clear than 00:48:135 - and these two place also have drum sound,so i suggest put note on 00:47:988 - which has vocal and drum sound
- if you fixed the previous one,please change 00:48:574 (219) - to d to strengthen d on 00:47:988 - - some fixed!
- 01:03:647 - try to add k need more exciting~ - ok.
- 01:21:354 (131) -because of the bpm , the slider is harder than other songs and you put a note on 01:21:940 (132) - it really make players have trouble to play high speed slider with the big note ,so slider end on 01:21:940 - is better - agree. nice :3c
Both Taiko diffs are awesome,and Oni plays so exciting ~XD
- 00:18:135 (105) - same as muzu - ok.
- 00:56:476 (5,6) - is the vocal's accent and 00:56:769 (7) - should be as powerful as 00:56:184 (2) - so 00:56:842 - need add note as 00:57:940 (18,19,20,21,22) - - some fixed.
- 01:11:915 (123) - move to 01:11:769 - to inflect this pattern 01:12:574 (130,131,132,133,134) - - ok.
Good Luck~
thanks almost fixed without avoiding overlap.RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:37:452 (4,1) - uniform DS to x1.0
- 01:12:281 (2) - start at 01:11:988
[Hard]
- 00:29:549- add a note
[Insane]
- 00:03:940 (2) - move to x:216 y:200
- 00:56:184 (1,2,3) - How about the following rhythm?
- 01:11:257 (1) - rotete 5 degree anti-clockwise
- 01:13:452 (2,1) - it is better to avoid stack
it is good to change SV at some kind of part, I think
- 00:11:549 (6,2) - avoid overlap
~Good Luck~
mod not fix.but A lot of slider is nice advice. thanksDX5536 wrote:
M4M I guese
[Easy]
00:35:403 Newbies will miss right here. How about you change to something like this
00:46:818 (1,2) - Something like this will be easier for newbies, i hope
I would reconsider about the amount of the sliders, I mean too many slider is quite hard with FL and newbies only learn slider holding, not tapping.
[Normal]
Can you add more circles? [Same points as Easy]
[Hard]
Here too?
[Insane]
I'm not an insane+ high bpm player so i won't say anything here.
Your map is pretty nice well you are a pro after all, but pls add more circle, too many sliders kills osu! (Rhythm is just a click away) D:
all fixed! thankswcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket
[General]
I'll check timing tomorrow, it seems a bit off to me
[Easy]
I suggest AR+1
00:31:891 - missed a clap?
00:46:525 - ^
[Normal]
00:37:891 - shouldn't this section be S:C1? the current sounds odd imo(remember to remove the following useless section if you fixed this)
00:52:671 - add clap? maybe turn the volume down a bit, sounds better imo
00:54:574 - I'd like to add some sounds in this tick cuz there's heavy drums in the songs at here, but the slidertick in S:C2 sounds too loud here, you can add it and turn down the volume a bit
01:11:110 - missed clap?
01:16:964 - ^
I strongly suggest to map some patterns instead of the 3 spinners at the song's ending, spinners don't fit the song too much at that part, which has many heavy durms
[Hard]
HD+1? it's a bit low as a Hard diff imo
00:05:549 - I strongly suggest to add a circle instead, and rpeat the slider 1 time less. a circle should be clicked, the action fit the heavy beat in the song
01:12:867 (1,2,3) - this repeat sliders sound too loud imo, try to turn the volume down a bit?
01:16:232 (1,2) - ctrl+g on this 2 notes? flow can be a bit better(remember to fix the hitsounds too if you fixed this)
01:21:647 - add/ change to clap here? sounds better imo
same suggestion as Normal in the end
[Insane]
00:05:549 - same as Hard here
01:12:281 - missed clap?
nice map, I'll be back(I'm a bit wondering why you haven't ranked maps)
ono san arigatou!!!!OnosakiHito wrote:
Requested Taiko Mod
[ Muzukashii]SPOILERGeneral
One problem in the whole Muzukashii: There are just a few rest moments available which are important. I will suggest some.
01:21:940 - Expanding this kiai up to the end would be no problem and recommendable in my opinion.
Notes
00:09:940 (43) - K ? 00:10:232 (44,45) - here you have finisher as well and at 00:14:037 (63) - . Maybe delete 00:09:793 (42) - So the finisher is easier to hit. - no. lose the momentum of this => 00:09:793 (42) but, changed some pattern.
00:13:306 (58) - Yes, the note fits, but to keep it more simple in the Muzukashii you could change it to kat. Fits to high pitch as well. - del.
00:17:549 (76) - If you would change this to don, 00:18:281 (80) - this note would be more emphasized. - agree.
00:19:013 (83,84) - Rest Moment: You could delete these notes. - ok.
00:21:354 (94,95) - ^ - ^
00:22:232 (98) - don ? Emphasizing upcoming kats and fits to vocal "no". - ^
00:26:037 (115,116) - Rest Moment: You could delete these notes. - ^
00:35:110 - At this point you could keep it for now without breaks, like emphasizing the whole section in this way. - i see. thanks.
00:36:281 (163) - don ? Emphasizing note at 00:37:306 (168) - - ok.
00:47:842 (216,217,218) - I think having this http://puu.sh/4rQzG.jpg fits better to the vocal. - d kk!
00:51:208 (228) - Deleting this would be not a bad idea. Yes, you mapped to vocal really much, but at 00:51:793 you didn't, so it would fit in this way. - well, indeed. :3c
00:52:671 (232) - D ? For better alternating way. - ok.
00:53:110 (234) - kat ? To simplify the pattern. - i like the pattern of now!! :3
01:00:281~01:01:598 - I think this fits better: http://puu.sh/4rR2t.jpg
Fine so far, but try next time to make it a bit more easy. This hits nearly level Oni due to complex and alternating patterns and less rest moments.
[ Oni]SPOILERGeneral
01:21:940 - Expanding this kiai up to the end would be no problem and recommendable in my opinion.
Notes
00:15:647 (89,90,91,92) - I don't think this 1/6 is really needed. Consider deleting it. - express the feeling of galloping(?) well, del.
00:34:671 (201,202,203) - ddk ? Sounds nice and has the mirror effect. - mirror effect is good. but i want to keep fit the snare.
00:52:964~00:54:720 - http://puu.sh/4rSzw.jpg ? - cool!!
01:12:208 (128) - I think deleting this note might be better. - ok.
01:03:208 (57,60) - (01:03:208, 01:03:793) D for both notes? You had one at 01:04:379 (63) - as well. - nice sounds.
00:52:671 (304) - Maybe D ? Sounds maybe nicer in a alternating way. - ok. same as muzu.
00:59:988~01:01:745 - How about this http://puu.sh/4rSra.jpg ? - uuuu keep the now!
That's it. The Muzukashii is a bit hard, but I won't stop the ranking process here since it is after all nice mapped. Just keep it a bit easier next time.
The Oni is okay, though there are many 1/4 patterns. Still, it is rankable and interesting to play.
Call me back after you are done.
thank you for mod~!Rakuen wrote:
( =`・ω・´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[Easy]
00:28:671 (5) - This is strange, try Ctrl+G
00:53:842 (3) - Try not to stack with 00:55:013 (1) - , hard to read the tail of 00:55:013 (1) -
[Normal]
00:25:306 - Add circle
[Hard]
00:41:696 (7) - Replace this with a circle here 00:41:842 -
00:47:257 - Add circle (Beat is stopped)
00:58:379 - Add a circle below 00:58:525 (3) - cuz spacing is too close (Flow is slowed down suddenly)
01:05:257 (5) - Stack it perfectly with Grid Snap off (hold shift or toggle by T)
[Insane]
00:05:549 (1) - Place this circle at the right of 00:05:257 (2) -
00:48:135 (4,5,6) - Make it upside down (Ctrl+J something)
01:22:818 (3,4) - Swap timing for better flow
hm.OnosakiHito wrote:
Hm, one last thing in Muzukashii:
00:19:013 -
00:21:354 -
00:25:745 -
I think it wasn't a good idea from me to suggest having breaks here, what do you think TK...?
The parts are too much connected together, so having such breaks doesn't feel so good as I thought before.
This time I give it a go without many breaks. Just think about it the next time.
thanks mod~sheela901 wrote:
[Easy]
00:25:159 (1) - Maybe move the red little square to x:316 y:248 so it could be align to the head of 00:23:403 (3) ? Fixed
00:39:208 (3) - Maybe add a finish at the tail? Fixed
01:00:867 (3) - Add a new combo?
01:07:891 (4) - ^ Think about NC suggestion. pass
[Normal]
00:28:379 (2) - It kind of touch the bar. i move little down it!
00:33:940 (6) - At the tail, add a finish? Fixed!
01:04:818 (2) - I think it's better to move it to 01:04:964 .no,pass
01:19:598 (1) - Move the red little square to x:272 y:132. Fixed!
[Insane]
00:37:306 (1) - Move the little red square to x:200 y:180.Fixed!
[Hard]
01:16:232 (1,2) - Try Ctrl+G for a flow. no, already did in first mapping.
Good Luck!
all fixed! thanks!wcx19911123 wrote:
no kd
[Easy]
01:03:208 - finish
[Normal]
01:05:549 - finish
01:21:940 - 01:27:940 - I hope you can use the same hitsounds as Easy diff in this part, Easy diff sounds better to me
[Hard]
00:06:135 - clap
01:21:940 - 01:27:940 - same as Normal here, Insane diff
nice slidertick using, but lack of an overall sense of hitsounds between different difficulties
jsut call me back then
no! your mod good! not bad! thanks!Rakuen wrote:
grats!
I love this song, hope it's ranked faster
hope my recent mods weren't too bad (you didn't mention what's modded ;w;)
>.o)b