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Jung Jun Hyuck - Nostale BGM in Act 5

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Sky WinGx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月4日 at 18:00:55

Artist: Jung Jun Hyuck
Title: Nostale BGM in Act 5
Source: Nostale
Tags: Game soundtrack RPG mmorpg
BPM: 200
Filesize: 1218kb
Play Time: 00:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 26 notes)
  2. Fire (5 stars, 138 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 106 notes)
  4. Normal (4.36 stars, 67 notes)


Download: Jung Jun Hyuck - Nostale BGM in Act 5
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ur..Here is my first beatmap.Hope you like this map~Is it a little bit short?
4/8/2013 update Easy
4/8/2013 update Normal
4/8/2013 update Hard
4/8/2013 update Fire
YunoFanatic
even if not osu!mania =,=

Generals:

Oh god i think that bg just gave me illness

Easy
-Why so many nc O.o pls delete all nc then call me back when finish
00:08:100 could just straighten it
00:21:300 - 00:22:500 dam dis slider delete dis and change an usual slider

Thats all because because i suggest remmaping hard and insane looks no rythm :) pls call me back when done!
Phoenipx
Hello, Phoenipx here for random mod

[General]
MP3 bitrate should be between 128kbps and 192kbps. Yours is 360kbps. If your having trouble with this, just PM me.
Change your background to 1024 x 768
Not sure but, is it "Jung Jun Hyuk?
Remove countdown
Remove "Nostale" because it is already in your title
Consider adding a Normal difficulty to balance?
Avoid toggling Kiai time for split seconds
Make sure that the song title is correct

[Easy]
Change slider multiplier to 0.7. Yours currently is 0.700000005960464. You can do this by editing your file with Notepad

[Fire]
00:00:900 (4) - Remove combo
00:01:500 (3) - Add combo
00:01:800 (1) - Remove combo
00:15:000 (1) - Remove combo

It's a pretty good for a first map but needs a lot of work, but as stated before in the previous mod, the rhythm is too monotonous. As "Fire" and "Hard" are harder difficulties, you should use more 1/4 notes Good luck with ranking.
Topic Starter
Sky WinGx

Phoenipx wrote:

Hello, Phoenipx here for random mod

[General]
MP3 bitrate should be between 128kbps and 192kbps. Yours is 360kbps. If your having trouble with this, just PM me.
Finished
Change your background to 1024 x 768
Finished
Not sure but, is it "Jung Jun Hyuk?
I don't know because I just get the song from the game datafile.I haven't change any song info on it.
I will try to correct it if I have found the more correctly info.

Remove countdown
Finished
Remove "Nostale" because it is already in your title
Finished
Consider adding a Normal difficulty to balance?
I will add Normal diff. then.I will post it after I finished. Finished.
Avoid toggling Kiai time for split seconds
Finished
Make sure that the song title is correct
The reason is the same with the problem in artist.But I have changed a better title.

[Easy]
Change slider multiplier to 0.7. Yours currently is 0.700000005960464. You can do this by editing your file with Notepad
Finished

[Fire]
00:00:900 (4) - Remove combo(Finished)
00:01:500 (3) - Add combo(Finished)
00:01:800 (1) - Remove combo(Finished)
00:15:000 (1) - Remove combo(Finished)

It's a pretty good for a first map but needs a lot of work, but as stated before in the previous mod, the rhythm is too monotonous. As "Fire" and "Hard" are harder difficulties, you should use more 1/4 notes Good luck with ranking.
I have added some 1/4 notes in both two diff..I will add more if I have inspiration XD.
I'm sorry about my suck English :( .Anyway,thank you for your modding. I'll try my best to make the map better :D
MeatloafCereal
From my queue

General
:arrow: Reduce sample volume to 85%(?), The hitsounds are overpowering the music especially at 1/4 notes... At the end of the spinners of every difficulty; reduce to >50% and use a soft hitsound
Easy
:arrow: All of them have don't seem to have a purpose

Normal
:arrow: 00:01:500 to 00:08:175
:arrow: 00:28:500
:arrow: 00:29:100
:arrow: 00:29:700 to 00:32:850

Hard
:arrow: 00:01:500 to 00:08:175
:arrow: 00:15:975
:arrow: 00:28:500 to 00:29:700
:arrow: 00:30:375 to 00:32:850

Fire
:arrow: All of these have no purpose

Remove these, they're just taking up space

Easy
00:21:300 (3,1) - you over complicated it with dots
00:24:900 (2) - Off centre but not really noticeable in play
00:29:100 (1) - Move it back 1 beat and let this spinner end at 00:30:30 (no need to reduce the volume here like how I said in the general section)

Fire
Bend some more sliders and tilt some in different angles. The patterns feel too square and sometimes doesn't feel natural or the flow isn't as nice
I changed 00:01:800 (2,3,4) to flow better
:arrow: 00:01:800 (2) - this slider would leave the person in a weird angle to go to the next, so i changed its direction
:arrow: 00:02:400 (3,4) - the loop feels better if the sliders are bent rather than in a straight line (also it is tilted because the arm is at an angle when a person plays, so tilts make it flow more naturally)

I will leave it up to you how you bend other patterns
Topic Starter
Sky WinGx

MeatloafCereal wrote:

From my queue

General
:arrow: Reduce sample volume to 85%(?), The hitsounds are overpowering the music especially at 1/4 notes... At the end of the spinners of every difficulty; reduce to >50% and use a soft hitsound(Finished.)
Easy
:arrow: All of them have don't seem to have a purpose(Finished.)

Normal
:arrow: 00:01:500 to 00:08:175(Finished.)
:arrow: 00:28:500 (Finished.)
:arrow: 00:29:100(Finished.)
:arrow: 00:29:700 to 00:32:850(Finished.)

Hard
:arrow: 00:01:500 to 00:08:175(Finished.)
:arrow: 00:15:975(Finished.)
:arrow: 00:28:500 to 00:29:700(Finished.)
:arrow: 00:30:375 to 00:32:850(Finished.)

Fire
:arrow: All of these have no purpose(Finished.)

Remove these, they're just taking up space
I'm sorry that because I make them in kiai mode before.And I forgot to delete it. :(

Easy
00:21:300 (3,1) - you over complicated it with dots(Finished.)
00:24:900 (2) - Off centre but not really noticeable in play(Finished.)
00:29:100 (1) - Move it back 1 beat and let this spinner end at 00:30:30 (no need to reduce the volume here like how I said in the general section)(Finished.)

Fire
Bend some more sliders and tilt some in different angles. The patterns feel too square and sometimes doesn't feel natural or the flow isn't as nice(Finished.)
I changed 00:01:800 (2,3,4) to flow better
:arrow: 00:01:800 (2) - this slider would leave the person in a weird angle to go to the next, so i changed its direction
:arrow: 00:02:400 (3,4) - the loop feels better if the sliders are bent rather than in a straight line (also it is tilted because the arm is at an angle when a person plays, so tilts make it flow more naturally)

I will leave it up to you how you bend other patterns
I'm sorry that I'm busy in study.So I correct it in long time.BTW,thank you for your suggestions :D
sheela
[General]
In the source, put the name of the game which is Nostale.
Add also in the tags: mmorpg

[Normal]
00:13:200 (4) - Don't stack it
00:16:800 (2) - ^
00:18:600 (5) - ^

Good Luck and star!
Topic Starter
Sky WinGx

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
In the source, put the name of the game which is Nostale.(Finished)
Add also in the tags: mmorpg(Finished)

[Normal]
00:13:200 (4) - Don't stack it(Finished)
00:16:800 (2) - ^(Finished)
00:18:600 (5) - ^(Finished)

Good Luck and star!
Thank you for your modding and your star :oops:
Koiyuki
From my queue of Normal mod

General
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似乎没有什么问题。

Easy
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问题倒是没有……就是排的有点难看,建议重新摆摆……

Normal
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少放遮挡,例如00:20:400 (4,5,6) - 00:28:500 (1,2,3) - 之类最好改掉
normal难度而已,ds调0.8~1.2左右开着做就行了

Hard
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00:00:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我可以吐槽为什么你这么懒么;w;
总觉得你的排列似乎很死,就是堆在一起的感觉……建议大胆点放三连(开着ds放啊怕啥)

Fire
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00:01:500 (1) - 移到x:132,y:288

至于排列是一样的问题,你看你的整幅图,,全都堆在当中一个地方,就觉得这图特压抑,放不开的感觉。

然后连打和三连都是和hard一样堆在一起,00:06:750 (1,2,3) - 以及00:08:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 等等,个别的堆在一起也没啥问题,整幅图的都堆在一起,至少我看起来不是很舒服。00:15:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 像这样的就不错啊-.-

00:28:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 最后这一大段建议不要绕圈,根据你的背景图摆会更好。

另外这个难度的绿线呢?调音量不用么?00:08:700 - 这段前面音量降低,后面的调高,00:15:300 - 再调高,00:16:100 - 降低,00:21:200 - 后面每一段渐渐升高。

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就这样,歌很霸气,所以我觉得你的图也要做的霸气一点~
Hope you will rank the map one day~
Shizuka-Nee
[general]
your hit circles aren't lined up. to make them line up, hold shift while moving a note. it should look like this
Do you see that thin grey line??? It helps you line your notes up so your beat map looks cleaner
Please go back to each difficulty and do this if you haven't already

[easy]
00:05:100 (1,2) - i don't like how these are placed. Consider moving them or maybe changing the slider form.
00:24:900 (2) - don't like the shape of this slider e.e
00:29:250 (1) - this spinner should start 00:29:100 - here

[normal]
00:19:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can't see the notes

[hard]
00:20:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - check spacing here for this shape definitely

[fire]
ok


again please check spacing for ALL objects. this map looks very uneven.

good luck :D
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