Ohai
[Hard]
CS5 is the wrong choice. Change to CS4
00:17:314 (3) - Split to match lyrics.
00:18:814 - Start a 1/1 slider here to 00:19:314 - and place a circle here 00:19:564 -
00:25:314 (3) - Split to match lyrics
00:26:314 (5,6) - Same thing as above with the 1/1 slider
00:33:814 (5,6) - This looks ugly and plays bad as well. Try to give it a better flow and move the 1/1 slider further away or something
01:13:314 (3) - Blanket.
01:18:314 (6) - NC
01:29:814 (3,4,5,6) - This jumppattern doesnt fit anything here :C give it normal spacing and a curve or something
01:40:314 (1) - bad flow with the previous slider.
01:42:314 (11) - NC
01:42:314 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - .... this pattern is just horrible with the music and the general feeling of the song. Please change it.
01:50:314 (5) - Change the angle.
01:54:064 - Add circle for consistency
02:02:314 (5,6,7,8) - This mix of slidershapes looks weird. 1 = curved 2 = straight. go 1 1 2 2 or 2 2 1 1.
02:24:564 (1,2,3) - Please dont :C
02:32:064 - Add circle
[Normal]
-1 on HP
Not much to say here. But please go through the map and closely check your blankets.
Still some suggestions.
00:28:314 (1,2,3,4,1) -
00:33:314 (2,1) - I dont know about this overlap. like this maybe?
01:15:314 (2,1) - this is weird rhtythm wise because of the slider ending on the big white tick. change that so there is a sliderhead on the big white one.
02:30:314 (1,2) - Blanket or move further out to the right
02:36:314 (1) - Awww
[Easy]
00:25:314 (2) - NC here
Great mapset!!!
Pretty much ready for rank imo
Have some stars