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posted
Hi ~ from PM >w<

d = small don
以下省略

[general]
音源の音量小さいのう;;

[Oni]

  • OD+1 か+2がいいと思いますねぇ
  1. 00:18:988 (2) - change d
  2. 01:08:804 (2) -  → 01:08:647 (2) -
  3. 01:15:988 (1) - change k


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:857 (2) - del
    00:19:778 (1,2) - change K (?
  2. 00:44:252 add k


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:18:199 (2) - → 00:18:831 (3) - (?


[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:936 (3) - → 00:11:094 (3) -


頑張れぇええ>w<//
posted

Cihyaa wrote:

Hi ~ from PM >w<

d = small don
以下省略

[general]
音源の音量小さいのう;;

[Oni]

  • OD+1 か+2がいいと思いますねぇ ODは上げたくないです ;w;
  1. 00:18:988 (2) - change d
  2. 01:08:804 (2) -  → 01:08:647 (2) -
  3. 01:15:988 (1) - change k


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:857 (2) - del
    00:19:778 (1,2) - change K (?
  2. 00:44:252 add k


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:18:199 (2) - → 00:18:831 (3) - (?


[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:936 (3) - → 00:11:094 (3) -


頑張れぇええ>w<//
頑張ります >w<//
thanks for mod :3
posted
So my thoughts about Oni:

00:51:435 (2,3) - I find this five-circle-Stream not that good here. You could try to move (3) at 00:51:831 that you have k kkd k D. How about this? And then I find that you should chane (2) to d since the Voice is too deep to make k here.
01:23:725 (1) - k gives here and much more impressive play feeling here.

And that's all. You really make great Onis. :3 Do not KD that.
posted

Stefan wrote:

So my thoughts about Oni:

00:51:435 (2,3) - I find this five-circle-Stream not that good here. You could try to move (3) at 00:51:831 that you have k kkd k D. How about this? And then I find that you should chane (2) to d since the Voice is too deep to make k here. 00:51:357 - sound starts here kkkkd is fine
01:23:725 (1) - k gives here and much more impressive play feeling here. ok

And that's all. You really make great Onis. :3 Do not KD that.
thanks for mod :3
posted
Mod Req ~

= don
= katsu
= big done
= big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation
* = ~~


[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:17:252 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - 統括しよう~
  2. 01:26:252 - このエンディング、とくに大音符じゃなくてもいいと思います
  3. 01:05:094 ~ 01:05:726 - 気合いなくても?


[Oni]
  1. 00:12:120 - 連打
  2. 00:21:673 - エンドっぽいので、00:21:199 - など?
  3. 00:23:410 - なんか入りそうです
  4. 00:24:514 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - ムズカシイみたいでちょっと単調かも
  5. 00:27:831 - この辺連打が入るのでは?
  6. 00:21:673 ~ 00:31:778 が 00:31:778 ~ 00:39:357 と比べると大分がらんとしてませんか?
  7. 00:36:199 - いらないのでは?
  8. 00:51:356 (2,3,4,5,1) - ? これいれたいなら、00:51:831 ここにもノートあった方が自然そうです
  9. 01:23:726 -


以上になります~
ではランク頑張ってね~ :)
そして誘われなくて悲しいです (´-ェ-`)シュンシュン
posted

0gre wrote:

Mod Req ~

= don
= katsu
= big done
= big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation
* = ~~


[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:17:252 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - 統括しよう~ ノート繋げすぎてたので減らしました
  2. 01:26:252 - このエンディング、とくに大音符じゃなくてもいいと思います ここは終わりなのでほしいです
  3. 01:05:094 ~ 01:05:726 - 気合いなくても?


[Oni]
  1. 00:12:120 - 連打
  2. 00:21:673 - エンドっぽいので、00:21:199 - など?
  3. 00:23:410 - なんか入りそうです
  4. 00:24:514 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - ムズカシイみたいでちょっと単調かも わざと控えめにしてます
  5. 00:27:831 - この辺連打が入るのでは?
  6. 00:21:673 ~ 00:31:778 が 00:31:778 ~ 00:39:357 と比べると大分がらんとしてませんか? 前半はなるべく連打を入れずおとなしめにしてます
  7. 00:36:199 - いらないのでは?nice
  8. 00:51:356 (2,3,4,5,1) - ? これいれたいなら、00:51:831 ここにもノートあった方が自然そうです
  9. 01:23:726 - さっき modでkにしたばっかなんだけどな..ww fixed


以上になります~
ではランク頑張ってね~ :)
そして誘われなくて悲しいです (´-ェ-`)シュンシュン
最近INしてないから誘えませんでした..
thanks for mod~ :3
posted
♪(゚▽^*)ノ⌒
posted

qoot8123 wrote:

♪(゚▽^*)ノ⌒
thanks >w<
posted
Hi moe Rey, here's the mod that you requested for~ :3

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:05:154 (2) - this note sounds really off-beat, move it to 00:05:073

    [Futsuu]
  2. 00:05:154 (2) - this note sounds really off beat, move it to 00:05:073
  3. 00:26:726 (1) - i think this note is not really needed, delete it ?
  4. 00:54:831 (2,3) - I suggest moving (2) to 00:54:989 and (3) to 00:55:305 to match the vocals
  5. 01:16:936 (1) - kat (?)

    [Muzukashii]
  6. 00:30:989 (2) - don? the bass is low here

    [Oni]
  7. 00:30:988 (2) - i suggest changing this to don because the bass in the music is low here
  8. 00:38:172 (2) - this note seems kinda unnecessary, how about deleting it?
  9. 00:41:409 (1) - kat? vocal's pitch is slightly high
  10. 01:16:935 (3) - ^


That's all I can find owo
Good luck! ~
posted

Jerry wrote:

Hi moe Rey, here's the mod that you requested for~ :3

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:05:154 (2) - this note sounds really off-beat, move it to 00:05:073 i made easy

    [Futsuu]
  2. 00:05:154 (2) - this note sounds really off beat, move it to 00:05:073 this is Futsuu diff, i made ​​easy
  3. 00:26:726 (1) - i think this note is not really needed, delete it ? i follow the vocal
  4. 00:54:831 (2,3) - I suggest moving (2) to 00:54:989 and (3) to 00:55:305 to match the vocals ok
  5. 01:16:936 (1) - kat (?) no

    [Muzukashii]
  6. 00:30:989 (2) - don? the bass is low here there is a clap sound here


    [Oni]
  7. 00:30:988 (2) - i suggest changing this to don because the bass in the music is low here 00:30:830 (1,2) - clap sound is heard
  8. 00:38:172 (2) - this note seems kinda unnecessary, how about deleting it? keep a long note
  9. 00:41:409 (1) - kat? vocal's pitch is slightly high i follow the drumbeat
  10. 01:16:935 (3) - ^ consider it


That's all I can find owo
Good luck! ~
thanks for mod and star >w<//
posted
Hello Reyshel, modding as requested~

  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:17:726 - Something is missing here. Add a note here.

    [Futsuu]
  2. Clear~

    [Muzukashii]
  3. 00:27:831 (2) - d here. A d d k k d d k doesn't really fit here imo.
  4. 00:27:989 (1) - delete note, it will go well if you did^
  5. 01:12:199 (1) - D on this downbeat sounds fitting.

    [Oni]
  6. 01:12:199 (1) - same as Muzu


That's all~
Nice mapset, good luck! :)
posted

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello Reyshel, modding as requested~

  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:17:726 - Something is missing here. Add a note here.

    [Futsuu]
  2. Clear~

    [Muzukashii]
  3. 00:27:831 (2) - d here. A d d k k d d k doesn't really fit here imo.
  4. 00:27:989 (1) - delete note, it will go well if you did^
  5. 01:12:199 (1) - D on this downbeat sounds fitting.

    [Oni]
  6. 01:12:199 (1) - same as Muzu


That's all~
Nice mapset, good luck! :)
thanks for mod :3
posted
from PM 本当におそくなりました._.;;ゴメンナサイ
すべて提案程度です/./

[general]
フォーラムを見てると序盤のオフセットずれについての指摘があったので考えてみました。
Change Timing offset 3894, BPM:186.800

[Kantan]
01:17:726 - add d 他の人も指摘あったとこでごめんなさい でも流れでほしいです。

[Futsuu]
00:33:357 (4) - k 00:35:883 (1)同様の音が聞こえるため。 後部への流れで形作りの配置だとは思うのでパターン重視なら無視で。

[Muzukahii]
looks clear ;w;

[Oni]
00:18:988 (2,3) - dd 前後の近いパターンの部分でdddになっているのと、バックに音がない部分での詰めなのでkだと流れをとってたたきやすくはありますが音が浮いている気がしました。

’ω`)n good luck~
posted

MidSoul wrote:

from PM 本当におそくなりました._.;;ゴメンナサイ
すべて提案程度です/./

[general]
フォーラムを見てると序盤のオフセットずれについての指摘があったので考えてみました。
Change Timing offset 3894, BPM:186.800

[Kantan]
01:17:726 - add d 他の人も指摘あったとこでごめんなさい でも流れでほしいです。 Kantanにこのリズムは難しいと思います ;w;

[Futsuu]
00:33:357 (4) - k 00:35:883 (1)同様の音が聞こえるため。 後部への流れで形作りの配置だとは思うのでパターン重視なら無視で。

[Muzukahii]
looks clear ;w;

[Oni]
00:18:988 (2,3) - dd 前後の近いパターンの部分でdddになっているのと、バックに音がない部分での詰めなのでkだと流れをとってたたきやすくはありますが音が浮いている気がしました。 nice >< fixed

’ω`)n good luck~
thanks for mod and star~~!! >w<//
posted
Hi ReySHeL, here comes a mod as requested~

[Kantan]

Perfect~

[Futsuu]

01:21:357 (2,1,2) d d k ?

[Muzukashii]

00:31:462 (1,1,2,1) d k k d ? can fit the guitar sound imo
00:53:094 d ?
00:56:410 (1,2,1,2) k d k d ?
01:03:199 d ?
01:06:989 ^

[Oni]

00:31:620 k ? same as Muzu
Nicely mapped :)
posted

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi ReySHeL, here comes a mod as requested~

[Kantan]

Perfect~

[Futsuu]

01:21:357 (2,1,2) d d k ? change to k k d k d

[Muzukashii]

00:31:462 (1,1,2,1) d k k d ? can fit the guitar sound imo
00:53:094 d ?
00:56:410 (1,2,1,2) k d k d ?
01:03:199 d ?
01:06:989 ^

[Oni]

00:31:620 k ? same as Muzu nice! >< fixed
Nicely mapped :)
thanks for mod >ω<//
posted
Hi, I'm じく. Sorry for the late mod since your request. ごめんなさい >.<

All are only suggestions, no need to force change if not specially mentioned.

[Overall]
Combo colour? wwww

[Kantan]
The whole thing is perfect (I think it is a rather difficult Kantan?) ! And I have a suggestion for the start and the end of the kiai time
Start: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/903476 . This looks tidier and matches the music(1st and 3rd note of the sentence to be stronger)
Kiai end: 01:17:051 (2) - move to 01:17:209 (2) -

[Futsuu]
Start: Same as Kantan
00:16:104 (2) - Remove or move to 00:15:946 (2) or 00:16:419 (2) . I think it is very difficult to switch from red line notes to a white line note in a short time.
01:17:209 (2) - add a d or remove 01:17:051 (1) . It is difficult to catch that note without guiding imo.
Everything looks great!

[Muzukashii]
Start: Same as (ry, can add some more to your preference :D
Nice, but may be too difficult for a Muzukashii, for the frequent 1/4 in the middle of a 1/2 stream and the long 1/2 streams. Feeling good though w.

[Oni]
Start: (ry
00:18:946 (1,1) - K D?
A little bit random but OK!
posted

Jikson[m9] wrote:

Hi, I'm じく. Sorry for the late mod since your request. ごめんなさい >.<

All are only suggestions, no need to force change if not specially mentioned.

[Overall]
Combo colour? wwww

[Kantan]
The whole thing is perfect (I think it is a rather difficult Kantan?) ! And I have a suggestion for the start and the end of the kiai time
Start: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/903476 . This looks tidier and matches the music(1st and 3rd note of the sentence to be stronger)
Kiai end: 01:17:051 (2) - move to 01:17:209 (2) -

[Futsuu]
Start: Same as Kantan
00:16:104 (2) - Remove or move to 00:15:946 (2) or 00:16:419 (2) . I think it is very difficult to switch from red line notes to a white line note in a short time.
01:17:209 (2) - add a d or remove 01:17:051 (1) . It is difficult to catch that note without guiding imo.
Everything looks great!

[Muzukashii]
Start: Same as (ry, can add some more to your preference :D
Nice, but may be too difficult for a Muzukashii, for the frequent 1/4 in the middle of a 1/2 stream and the long 1/2 streams. Feeling good though w.

[Oni]
Start: (ry
00:18:946 (1,1) - K D?
A little bit random but OK!
少し前にoffset変えたのでJikson[m9]さんのリンクと少しずれてました ._.
Muzukashiiを少し簡単にしました
thanks for mod~
posted
From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
:!: Three pages and no one mentioned Haruna Luna's name in Japanese should be 春奈るな?
:!:Timing: Single 190BPM section from 3989.
:idea: Diverging sources exists on whether there should be a colon among "Monogatari Series: Second Season".
:idea: Move background image ~25 pixels down
:idea:Personally despise Kantan and Futsuu having slower HS if the song is not exceptionally fast (like 225+ BPM)
:idea: Do for the modders: do not use flashy combo colors in a Taiko map. It will not be reflected anyway.
:!: A bad use of large notes across all difficulties. The utility of the large note is to emphasize heavier notes and keystone parts of the music, not as an opening strike. You have basically reverted the whole idea. More below.

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Kantan
:idea: A little too hefty than the typical Kantan.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (1) and 00:21:673 (1) and 00:41:883 (1) and 00:51:989 (1) and 01:02:094 (3) and 01:09:673 (1) and 01:12:199 (1) and 01:19:778 (1)
00:20:252 (2) - Make this large and the legacy is enough for 00:21:041 (3) to be removed
00:30:515 (1,2) - Background not significant enough to guarantee notes in Kantan
00:40:620 (1,2) - Large for emphasis
00:50:726 (2,3) - Large for emphasis
00:51:989~ and 01:02:094~ - Consider this if you are OK with 1-beat clusters here. Also no large note across these for consistency.

01:01:462 (2) - Remove for consistency
01:11:252 (3,4) - Remove for consistency
01:12:199 (1) - Small for consistency
01:13:778 (2,1) and 01:16:305 (3,4) - Not significant enough to guarantee notes in Kantan
01:17:726 and 01:25:305 - Add a note and make all four the same color (either all large or all small). The rhythm for the last two notes are too complicated to grasp without it.
01:24:199 (2) - Remove for consistency

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Kantan
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (1) and 00:21:673 (1) and 00:41:883 (1) and 00:46:936 (1) and 00:51:989 (1) and 01:02:094 (4) and 01:09:673 (1) and 01:12:199 (1) and 01:19:778 (1)
00:40:620 (1,2) - Large for emphasis
00:41:252 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:50:726 (3,4) - Large for emphasis
00:51:673 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:56:410 (2) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:58:462 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 00:58:305~
00:59:252~ and 01:09:357~ - Missed the main point of the part. Consider

01:01:778 (3) - Add as stepping up of difficulty.
01:05:094 (2,3,1) - All large for emphasis.
00:58:462 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 00:58:305~
01:08:094 (1) - Remove for consistency
01:08:568 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 01:08:410~
01:11:568 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:21:357 (2) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:23:883 (2,1,1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:25:305 (2) - Katsu for consistency, and preferably make 01:24:831 (1,2,3,1) all large as stepping up of difficulty

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Muzukashii
:!: Basically stuffing notes in constant 1/2 clusters everywhere, with little to no regard of agreement with the music.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (2) - 00:16:462 (1) - 00:41:883 (1) - 00:46:936 (1) - 00:51:989 (2) - 01:02:094 (1) - 01:09:673 (1) - 01:19:778 (1) -
00:05:073 (2) - 1/4 early, on the red tick, for agreement.
00:10:620~ Remove 00:10:699 (3,4) and 00:10:620 (2) and 00:10:936 (1) and 00:11:094 (1) all large dons, leading to better agreement and emphasis.
00:15:989 (1) - Remove for agreement. Consequently change 00:16:147 (2,1,1) kkd for consistency.
00:20:094 (1) - Remove for agreement.
01:05:094 (1,1,1) - All large for emphasis
01:17:252~ and 01:24:831~ - Missing the point: you are using the coverage of the background but pattern responding to the vocal. Consider:
***(3) (5) (7) are large.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Oni
:!: Basically stuffing notes in 1/4 clusters everywhere, with little to no regard of agreement with the music.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note.
:idea: Dude your map is tiring. Refer to commentary on above diffs and make similar changes, because the main idea mostly also apply here.
posted

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
:!: Three pages and no one mentioned Haruna Luna's name in Japanese should be 春奈るな?
:!:Timing: Single 190BPM section from 3989.
:idea: Diverging sources exists on whether there should be a colon among "Monogatari Series: Second Season".
:idea: Move background image ~25 pixels down
:idea:Personally despise Kantan and Futsuu having slower HS if the song is not exceptionally fast (like 225+ BPM)
:idea: Do for the modders: do not use flashy combo colors in a Taiko map. It will not be reflected anyway.
:!: A bad use of large notes across all difficulties. The utility of the large note is to emphasize heavier notes and keystone parts of the music, not as an opening strike. You have basically reverted the whole idea. More below.

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Kantan
:idea: A little too hefty than the typical Kantan.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (1) and 00:21:673 (1) and 00:41:883 (1) and 00:51:989 (1) and 01:02:094 (3) and 01:09:673 (1) and 01:12:199 (1) and 01:19:778 (1)
00:20:252 (2) - Make this large and the legacy is enough for 00:21:041 (3) to be removed
00:30:515 (1,2) - Background not significant enough to guarantee notes in Kantan
00:40:620 (1,2) - Large for emphasis
00:50:726 (2,3) - Large for emphasis
00:51:989~ and 01:02:094~ - Consider this if you are OK with 1-beat clusters here. Also no large note across these for consistency.

01:01:462 (2) - Remove for consistency
01:11:252 (3,4) - Remove for consistency
01:12:199 (1) - Small for consistency
01:13:778 (2,1) and 01:16:305 (3,4) - Not significant enough to guarantee notes in Kantan
01:17:726 and 01:25:305 - Add a note and make all four the same color (either all large or all small). The rhythm for the last two notes are too complicated to grasp without it.
01:24:199 (2) - Remove for consistency

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Kantan
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (1) and 00:21:673 (1) and 00:41:883 (1) and 00:46:936 (1) and 00:51:989 (1) and 01:02:094 (4) and 01:09:673 (1) and 01:12:199 (1) and 01:19:778 (1)
00:40:620 (1,2) - Large for emphasis
00:41:252 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:50:726 (3,4) - Large for emphasis
00:51:673 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:56:410 (2) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
00:58:462 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 00:58:305~
00:59:252~ and 01:09:357~ - Missed the main point of the part. Consider

01:01:778 (3) - Add as stepping up of difficulty.
01:05:094 (2,3,1) - All large for emphasis.
00:58:462 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 00:58:305~
01:08:094 (1) - Remove for consistency
01:08:568 - Note and same color across the 1/2 cluster from 01:08:410~
01:11:568 (1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:21:357 (2) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:23:883 (2,1,1) - Remove. Not significant enough to guarantee a note in Futsuu
01:25:305 (2) - Katsu for consistency, and preferably make 01:24:831 (1,2,3,1) all large as stepping up of difficulty

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Muzukashii
:!: Basically stuffing notes in constant 1/2 clusters everywhere, with little to no regard of agreement with the music.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note. Small for:
00:11:568 (2) - 00:16:462 (1) - 00:41:883 (1) - 00:46:936 (1) - 00:51:989 (2) - 01:02:094 (1) - 01:09:673 (1) - 01:19:778 (1) -
00:05:073 (2) - 1/4 early, on the red tick, for agreement.
00:10:620~ Remove 00:10:699 (3,4) and 00:10:620 (2) and 00:10:936 (1) and 00:11:094 (1) all large dons, leading to better agreement and emphasis.
00:15:989 (1) - Remove for agreement. Consequently change 00:16:147 (2,1,1) kkd for consistency.
00:20:094 (1) - Remove for agreement.
01:05:094 (1,1,1) - All large for emphasis
01:17:252~ and 01:24:831~ - Missing the point: you are using the coverage of the background but pattern responding to the vocal. Consider:
***(3) (5) (7) are large.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Oni
:!: Basically stuffing notes in 1/4 clusters everywhere, with little to no regard of agreement with the music.
:!: Bad use of large notes, for you start every section of the song with one, hence diminishing the emphasizing power of the large note.
:idea: Dude your map is tiring. Refer to commentary on above diffs and make similar changes, because the main idea mostly also apply here.
thanks for mod~
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