Momochikun wrote:

Hello ~
Sorry for late T-T.. then,
As requested~

[General]

1. Remove BGM from tags ? i seen no ranked map with this tag lol..
2. Add audio lead just like the modders above said^

[Muse Insane]

1. Use HP+1, since the minimal difficullty for Insane diff is 7, it'll be more better if you add +1 on OD or AR
2. Also the placement on this diff looks too random. Even is this a instrumental sound, it's not necessary to do this. Don't know it's your mapping style or what.. but i seen many nazi things in this diff, pointing them all will be very difficult, so i'll just said anything that catch my attention
3. 00:01:003 (4) - NC here.. because the instrument is started here and ofc the long white tick that's called downbeat is also start from here
4. 00:04:695 (5) - Use 1 grid down to be linear with (3) so it'll make a better pattern, don't forget to replace (4) too
5. 00:07:695 (5) - I think the slider is better to start here 00:07:464 to follow the music
6. 00:11:156 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:11:387 (5,2) - The note is behind the slidertrack, recommend to rearrange this pattern. though +AR will be more make it readable. But rearrange pattern is more recommended
8. 00:14:157 (1) - A short time spinner here is really unpredictable, the auto is only got 1000 point bonus though. IMO this is too suddenly and can make players got 100 or worst it'll break their combo
9. 00:15:772 (3) - Add finish on the start of the slider, also would you add NC ? the new phase of the song is started here. if you want to keep consistency or what.. just let it xD
10. 00:26:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Clap missing here ? add it please..
11. 00:27:080 (4,8) - Really bad flow for me the next note is behind the slider end and this placement looks so bad.. suggest Ctrl + G will make it smoothier and better flow..
12. 00:47:157 - Kiai start here. don't forget to add NC
13. 00:50:157 (4,1) - Stack is better.. the overlap looks really bad for me. Since the (1) note is allready visible before the (4) dissapeared.
14. 00:55:464 (3,4) - Make them same symmetrical like (1) and (2) ? i think this pattern is wrong. and the slider looks fail
15. 01:02:387 - Kiai reset start here.. NC is better too

Many jumps after this.. orz. Sorry to say, but it will really need more practice

[Eru Jazz Insane]

1. The NC pattern on this diff is really unpredictable, try make it consistent please.The rhytm is not really consistent too, it'll be better if you dont use triplet when the music doesn't ask you to do it. It'll sound overmapped for me.
2. 00:13:233 (4,5) - Remove whistle from the slider body, it sounds really awkward. Just add it on the start and the end
3. 00:15:772 (1,3) - 2 grid down on (1) so they not overlapped, not really recommended for this >.<
4. 00:19:926 (1) - Why NC ? this is not unnecessary after all.. Better delete it
5. 00:22:926 (6) - Remove the reverse and add more 1/2 slider will make a better rhytm, Try it ~
6. 00:27:195 (5) - Remove whistle from slider body, same as before
7. 00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Unsnapped stream.. what is this ? do you use 1/3 or what.. -_-
8. 00:36:310 (1,2) - What's with this ? really bad and it's not even make a sense.. it's really recommended to make a normal SV, but if you really don;t want to do it, just do what i told below
9. 00:37:233 (3) - NC for changed SV..
10. 00:40:926 (2) - ^

[Hard]

1. The normal hitsounds you used here seems doesn't fit, at least soft clap will fit it better, though it'll be good if you used another custom clap that fit this song
2. 00:01:695 (5,1) - Bad jump.. break the flow, Better use spacing at 5 to make jump or just fix to a normal spacing
3. 00:13:464 (6,7) - Overlapped.. orz, 1 - 2 grid up at (7)
4. 00:28:695 (8) - Silent hit ?.. unrakable lol
5. 00:47:157 - Finish on the slider end for chorus
6. 00:47:157 - Kiai start here. don't forget to add NC
7. 01:02:387 - Kiai reset start here.. NC is better too

Really.. it's need more that i got but i don't said it. Rather than a huge of detailed mod, sorry, but i recommend you to remapp this T-T

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue

EASY

00:02:849 (3) - why don't copy/paste the previous slider and make this pattern perfectly symmetric? just if you want, it's ok also as it is
00:04:233 (4,1) - make them exactly at the same high
00:28:695 (5) - it's just a suggestion but maybe it's better don't leave this stright form for this slider, maybe you can try to make the first part stight and the final part curve, and then a blancket with the next note, like this:

SPOILER

00:58:695 (1) - I think is better to move in in a way to make it stacked with 00:56:387 (3) -
01:08:387 (1,2) - make a better blancket
01:33:310 (1,2) - can you place them exactly on the y axe XD just to be precise

NORMAL

00:06:541 (2) - move it to make a blancket with 00:05:157 (1) -
00:58:695 (2) - stack it with 00:56:849 (4) - ?
01:03:772 (5) - delete this and copy/paste the form of the previous one, then ctrl+H and ctrl+G
01:07:464 (6) - maybe move it one grid down and one right, so that together with 01:06:080 (3,4,5) - will make a better form
01:08:387 (1) - and maybe it's better if you keep the distance for this slider
01:26:849 (6,2) - stack them?
01:49:003 (3) - move 1 grid right, so the pattern will be the same as 01:49:926 (4,5) -
01:54:080 (1) - for this spinner maybe it's better if you add a green line to decrease the volume of the hitsound since at the end the volume of the song also decrease. in this way there'll not be too much difference between the song and the hitsounds volumes

HARD

00:01:002 (4,5) - stack them perfectly, maybe deselect grid snapping
00:02:848 (5,2) - stack them
00:04:003 (3,1) - ^
00:13:926 (7) - change this slider inclination in a way that it won't touch 00:13:464 (6) -
00:30:541 (1,2) - stack perfectly
00:33:310 (5,1) - ^
00:36:080 (4,1) - make a better blancket
00:43:926 (3) - you can do 2 things here: or you copy/paste the previous slider and then flip it vertically. or you try to make this more symmetric with the previous one, maybe moving it 1 or 2 grids left imo
00:53:157 (6) - I think also in this case you should be more carefull of the pattern and placement. if you delete this, and then copy/paste the previous slider and then flip it orizontally, than you'll have something like this:

SPOILER

00:09:541 (4,8,1) - stack them better

well some things I would say about your map is that maybe you can try to be more carefull to patternss and notes placement. I gave you some examples of how to improve it so you can try something in base of them if you want. another thing that I noticed is that in hard diff there are quite always short sliders. try instead to change some times and make some longer sliders when the music permit it. in this way the map will have more different patterns and will be also funnyer to play

MUSE'S INSANE

00:13:233 (6) - maybe you can try to make it more symmetric to all these other notes. maybe try to disable grid snapping and place it in a better way
00:23:849 (3,4) - I think here, or you stack them with the previous notes as you did here 00:22:926 (1,5) - . or you move 00:24:310 (5) - one grid down.
00:37:233 (3,4,5) - also here you can try to make a better blancket with the previous slider, or using grid level 4, or disabling grid snapping
00:38:849 (3,1,2) - stack them perfectly
00:44:618 (5,6,7) - place it at the center of the square

that's all. good luck with this map

yachiru4 wrote:

Hi from my queue!


Pretty nice, but there was a screwed up DS somewhere in the song...I can't seem to remember where.

Didn't pass both Insane modes, but I enjoyed playing Muse's Insane more, since it's flow looked better. btw you can only have 1 Insane diff in a mapset.

Cheers!

baldrace wrote:

Hi~Hi~ from my queue
reply to m4m req >.</~~~~~~~~~~~~~

General
you need more working in your map.
you need better blanket and perfect Symmetric
when you make a blanket,turn off grid snap
you need change all illogical spacing
try to use NC more regularly
hitsound is a bit randomly placed..
I'm sure many modders before had told you about these things.

Easy
00:01:003 (1,2,3) - make them perfectly Symmetric

SPOILER

00:21:310 (1) - distance
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - make this blanket perfect
00:49:003 (3) - distance
01:35:157 (3) - ^
after this object,you have no reason to change the spacing snap.use x1.0 plz
spacing is a mess,don't change spacing snap.check all your objects.

Normal
same problems as easy.check spacing
00:55:926 (3,4,1) - you should make blanket like this perfect
00:59:157 (3,1,2) - this is ugly...try another pattern may be better
01:02:849 (4,5) -they should have same shape,you can use ctrl c and ctrl v

Hard
remember that even in hard or insane,you need to use logical spacing to make diff tidy and playable
00:46:925 (3) - the sv changed after this.. bgm don't have a big change,so I suggest you not to change sv

I personally don't like so……symmetric insane diffs...
Plz make full use of the map,don't only snap objects around the middle of the map
Muse's Insane
00:27:541 (5,6,7) - wht not delete these and ctrl c ctrl v 00:26:618 (1,2,3) - here,than ctrl J
00:36:541 (7) - do some rotate and make it Symmetric with 00:37:695 (1) - and00:37:233 (1,2,3) -
00:38:849 (3,4,5) - these 3 notes are not symmetric try to use this more

SPOILER

00:51:080 (1,2,3) - not symmetric and there are many other parts you can find out yourself

EruJazz's Insane
01:01:926 (2,3) - stack them perfectly

cute song and diffs
learning more from ranked maps is necessary
especially hit sound and patterns.
good luck~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi ^^ just dropping by here for a re-check to see how well you've improved!

[Easy]

1. AR -1

00:01:003 (1,2,3) - Try placing these more in the center of the map, makes a better symmetry ^^
*note You may need to move a few notes after this.
00:20:387 (3) - Remove normal hitsound, it breaks the pattern
00:26:849 (2) - Change default hitsounds to Normal. 00:26:387 - After this, what happened to the Normal hitsounds pattern? D:
00:30:541 (1) - Add finish :3
00:37:003 (3) - Remove clap on the head.
00:47:157 (1) - Add finish?
01:01:926 (1) - ^ On the reverse.
01:15:772 (3) - ^ On the tail.
01:19:464 (4,1,2,3) - Try to center these more?
01:49:003 (5) - first objects appearing in Kai time should always be a NC

Stills looks good as before ^^ Only some small hitsound suggestions noted here.

[Normal]
00:13:003 (4) - NC
00:20:387 (4) - or 00:20:849 (5) - should be a NC, still trying to figure out which :S
00:21:772 (3) - Change the default hitsounds on the reverse to Normal as you have previously done like this:

00:28:695 (1) - Add whistle or finish?
01:02:387 (3) - Add whistle?
01:25:464 (4) - NC
01:30:080 (4) - ^

Nice:P

[Hard]
00:13:003 (5) - NC
00:28:003 (5) - ^
00:46:464 - 01:08:387 Continue that Normal-hitsound pattern?
01:10:463 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:11:386 (2) - ^ Try not to overuse this hitsounds x.x
01:35:387 (5) - NC

Same comment as Easy

[EruJazz's Insane]
00:05:156 (1) - Not a good, jump, this note should be placed closer to 00:05:387 (2) - , since the timing between them is shorter then 00:04:233 (5,1) -
00:10:464 (1,2,3,4) - Not a very pretty flow.

00:22:926 (6) - NC
00:27:195 (5) - ^
00:41:387 (4) - The tail looks funny :3 You should just creat a curved slider with only one point.
00:49:464 (5) - NC
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:22:003 (6) - ^
01:27:541 (7) - ^
01:33:310 (4) - ^
01:48:541 (2) - Add whistle?

Although there's a few minor issues with the flow left, and some hitsounds are questionable apart from that wow! Looks way better now Good job!

[Muse's Insane]
00:13:233 (6) - NC
00:13:233 (6,7,8) - Can you flip these objects vertically, it's really crowded :S
00:47:618 (2) - Remove clap,try not to overuse this hitsound.
00:48:541 (4) - ^
00:51:772 (3) - ^
00:53:849 (6) - If you listen carefully,y you'll hear a clap that should be on the head and tail of this slider.
00:54:541 (7) - NC
00:58:695 (2) - Remove clap
00:59:618 (4) - ^
01:05:618 (2) - NC
01:05:618 (2,4) - Add claps on their heads.
01:19:695 (5,6,7) - Add clap on these.
01:27:080 (3,4,5) - ^
01:30:772 (5,6,7) - ^

Looks okay :/ the flow's a bit questionable, but the hitsounds sounds a bit confusing, not really going in a consistent pattern. Definitely needs work for this.

Hope this helps~! ^^

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Your KIAI is wrong in my opinion =.=
And please make your KIAI same with all diffs

00:54:426 - KIAI ends here not 00:54:080 -
01:02:387 - KIAI should just end here and nothing more behind and remove those blank timings in front like 01:00:080 -
01:33:310 - KIAI starts here (remains)
01:55:464 - and ends here

[Easy]
This slider speed and placement could be a normal
IMO easy should follow almost full DS (distance snap)
00:02:849 - Whistle instead of clap
00:05:157 (2,3) - Make this place like the picture below so both sliders don't stick together

00:12:541 (1,2) - Try to make this DS
00:15:772 (1) - The DS is not enough and it's not on the flow. Try Ctrl+H / Ctrl+J
00:47:157 (1) - Stack on 00:47:618 (2) - while following DS
00:54:541 (1) - DS this if possible
00:58:695 (1) - Stack with 00:56:387 (3) - to make it more tidy
01:08:387 (1) - DS, this one is too close to previous note
01:17:157 (1) - Too far, this is likely a jump

[Normal]
Try to use small grid, the inconsistent DS is not nice here
00:05:157 (1) - DS
01:01:003 (1) - Too close, try to DS
01:02:849 (4) - Out of flow
01:26:387 (2) - Too close, remain the previous DS or this will look like 3 fast hits

[Hard]
Stack more to make it tidier
00:08:387 - There's no point slowing down the SV here and the DS is too close
00:15:310 (2) - Remain 1.0x DS
00:15:080 - There's no KIAI here but you speed it up again...
00:19:464 - Remove normal hitsound
00:20:387 - Remove normal hitsound too
00:21:772 (4) - Add hitsound
00:28:695 (4) - Stack with 00:28:233 (2) -
00:29:157 - Hitsound
00:30:080 - ^
00:31:464 (2) - Hold shift and stack perfectly
00:34:233 (1) - ^
00:34:695 (2,3) - This is a strange pattern
00:38:849 (4,1) - ^
00:44:618 - Make spinner starts here
00:52:464 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:53:849 (7) - This jump is not relating with previous DS and too far
00:56:618 (2,3) - This stack will make strange flow
01:03:541 (1) - Too close with next slider
01:14:387 - Add circle
01:21:772 (5,6) - Blanket
01:27:079 (1) - Remove this, looks like extra hit
01:33:310 - Put somemore hitsounds starts from here
01:40:464 - The DS is too close, try 0.9x or 1.0x DS (prefer 1.0)
01:46:926 (1,2,3) - Make them stack with 01:45:541 (2,3,4) -
01:48:310 (6) - Ctrl+J
01:50:387 (4) - Ctrl+G or this is just making confuse
01:51:541 (1,2) - Avoid this pattern
01:53:618 (5) - Make it placed on the middle line

[EruJazz's Insane]
Seems fine

Hope my mods help :3

Zekmer wrote:

Hi and sorry for the late mod. Well then let's start!

[Modding time!]

[General]
Nothing wrong here.


[Easy]
All good

[Normal]
All good

[Hard]
All good

[Insane]
All good


[Summary]
This is a great map, I can't point out anything major so I can't really contribute to improving this one. (I usually mod maps with lots of major issues, like WIP's ect. And this seems cleaned up by other mods so yeah I can't do much here )

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, mod from my "non-japanese" queue.

General

01:01:926 - , 01:33:310 - , 01:41:157 - This kiai isn't really needed. It is too much and the main part already has kiai. It's a little abusive to have so much kiai for a short song.

Easy

- 00:21:310 (1,2) - Mentioning for the next time; the flow is bad here because the slider is curved and the next element is upwards, so you have to change the way your natrual movements go. This is especially important for new players so they can practice the clicking better at first and then focus on movments.

00:20:849 (4,1) - Almost 1,1x spacing when your spacing is 1,0x. Easy fix
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - You could blanket this better

Normal

00:03:772 (1) - Here is a spacing difference of 0,9 to the normal spacing, so you have 0,9 to much. Easy fix again.
00:07:003 (3) - , 00:13:003 (1) - , 00:18:541 (1) - , 00:45:310 (4,5) - Here is also a small spacing change.
00:58:695 (2,3,4) - This is very clustered and hard to play imo. You should keep each element a little more space so its more playable. Also the spacing 00:58:695 (2,3) - here is wrong.
01:49:003 (3,4) - Spacing

Hard

- I really think the slider speed changes are not needed. Its very confusing to notice and play. you have 0,8 which is totally unneeded. Best to remove them.

00:04:233 (4,5) - , 00:05:387 (7,1) - Spacing doesn't fit to the others. You should keep consistant spacing.
00:06:772 (4,5) - Spacing. You should keep it normal or else it's played as 1/4, since it looks like it.
00:07:926 (6) - Too close to previous element.
00:25:464 (5,1,2) - Make normal spacing between
00:28:003 (1,2,3) - Keep this normal spacing
00:39:310 (1,2) - Spacing doesn't fit to previous and following spacing, make it normal.
00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistant
00:46:926 (3,4) - , 00:47:617 (5,1) - Spacing mistake
00:48:310 (2,3) - , 00:49:233 (1,2) - , 00:51:541 (1,2) - You should make it 1,5x spacing like you did here too 00:47:617 (5) - . Don't use such random spacing please. You can make jumps but then make them readable and consistant to other spacing.
00:49:925 (3,4,5) - Spacing is above 1,1x, almost 1,2x. Fix this please.
00:53:157 (6,7) - Spacing is 2,5x. This is a lot for a Hard difficultie.

Your combo pattern is really messed up. In the middle of each part you start using NC, which is wrong.
00:01:925 (2) - , 00:02:849 - , ... 00:17:618 - , 00:19:464 - , 00:21:310 - , 00:23:157 - NC should be here
I'd say you make longer combos. It fits the song better. For example: http://puu.sh/4XqFG.jpg (00:05:618 (4) - starting point)

A lot contradictions with your spacing here, try to improve them more and accept my mentioned ones. It will help you. Some don't make sense at all and are really random placed.

Insane

- Comboing is random, you should recombo them (long or short combos).
- Kiai isn't the same as the other difficulties.

00:01:003 (4,1) - The spacing is almost the same as 00:00:772 (3,4) - , which might lead to confusion while playing. The usage of same spacing from a 1/2 pattern for a 1/1 pattern is not good. You could simply just move the first combo pattern lower.
00:01:926 (2,1) - This big jump with 2x spacing and then 00:02:849 (2,1) - this spacing which doesn't fit to your others.
00:03:310 (1,2) - Same mistake as above. The almost same spacing (00:02:849 (2,1) - which is normal spacing) is used and can lead to confusion.
00:03:772 (4,5) - Again.

Try to fix up the spacing which is really werid at places. Especially at the beginning it doesn't make sense at all and doesn't fit to the soft song.

If you need further help on how to fix things, contact me.