Ayu wrote:
Request from ~splorg~ modding queue.Umi's Normal
- 00:12:138 (4) - Weird slider, doesn't really fit the music. Just use a normal slider. I made this shape to make more readable the blanket
00:15:531 (2) - Looks like a wave slider gone wrong. Just do it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/909655 fixed
00:23:924 (3) - Looks weird in the form of the pattern itself and doesn't really fit the music, as the slider suggests something sharp while the music is smooth. remap this part
00:26:424 (1) - Make a better slider here, something like an arc or a wave/wiggle and use a kickback, something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/909663 no
00:29:817 (5) - Like mentioned before, the slider doesn't look good. Just do a normal wave/wiggle. Why ?
00:49:097 (2) - Blanket this around (3)/(4)'s approach circle. Fixed
01:09:280 (1,2) - Like I've said before, sharp sliders but smooth music. Just use curves. Fixed
01:12:138 (1,3) - Both blanket's aren't really any good, the slider starts and ends are too far away. Just place it according to the approach circle.Fixed
Did not like this Normal at all, seems like the creator never intended to put all his effort in it and create a real masterpiece. Most patterns just look lousy and it can use waaay more work. Well sorry if you don't like my diff, nothing else to say.
Thx for mod !Konei wrote:
Yooo, from my Queue.
[-Umi-'s Normal]
- 00:12:138 (4) - This shape looks unpolished, either make it a bit neater or try to blanket it with 3. same as previous mod
- 00:15:531 (2) - This shape doesnt look too good either, consider to redo it? fixed
- 00:59:816 (2) - Try to make the blanket with 3 neater, it can be improved quite a bit. no change
- 01:06:245 (4) - There is a really strong vocal you should emphasize, so how about adding a whistle? Sounds really good and you don't use it too often. fixed
- 01:07:138 (6) - Try to replace the whistle on the start with a clap? That will make the following whistles more special. fixed
- 01:16:959 (3) - Ehh, this can be improved a lot aswell, don't make it too curvy, it will look wry and wont play that good. Look if you like below suggestion :> Fixed
here my diff
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
BeatmapID:277543
BeatmapSetID:103552
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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