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ChouCho - starlog (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Edd
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Edd
Hi, here for your timing request. Simply replace the timing points you already have in your .osu file with these:

[TimingPoints]
941,357.142857142857,4,2,0,100,1,0
85226,324.324324324324,4,2,0,100,1,0
86521,357.142857142857,4,2,0,100,1,0

The change back to 168 bpm at the end probably isn't needed but it's there anyways if you want it.

Good luck with the mapping! ^^
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Wow, Choucho. I like her. I sugguest you ChouCho into Choucho
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy

Oyatsu wrote:

Wow, Choucho. I like her. I sugguest you ChouCho into Choucho
I'll discuss this one with a BAT
EDIT: Err... It's ChouCho I guess o-o
Last edited by xChippy , edited 1 time in total.
Maury MZKRO
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Maury MZKRO
GREAT :D !!
qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
qoot8123
hi~could i make taiko diffs for this song ? :)
xChippy
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xChippy

qoot8123 wrote:

hi~could i make taiko diffs for this song ? :)
Sure~ :3
qoot8123
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qoot8123
finished~
oni~http://puu.sh/3FtEX.osu
muzu~http://puu.sh/3FtEq.osu
xChippy
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xChippy
updated~
Umi
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Umi
SPOILER

✌('ω')✌
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Ah xChippy, Also add (TV Size). ^^
I like ChouCho but because you, I hate you ><

EDIT: Sorry xChippy, I don't receive kudosu when I don't mod ^^

Osu! needs more ChouCho

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xChippy
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xChippy
Omg... fixed =w=
Umi
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Umi
try number 2 xD

(╯°□°)╯︵
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:「starlog」(TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:-Umi-'s Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Fate Kaleid.avi"
0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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4289,-100,4,2,2,80,0,0
8217,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
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58185,-100,4,2,3,70,0,1
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85005,363.636363636364,4,2,1,40,1,0
85550,428.571428571429,4,2,1,40,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 171,86,86
Combo2 : 255,0,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Let's go to Pending =w=~
Gimme the mods =w=
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623


request via PM
I've to skip taiko diffs since I cant mod taiko ;w; sorry!

General

  1. consider adding "op" in tags? :D
  2. put the guest diff mapper's names in the tags o/

Easy

  1. 00:17:860 (3) - how about follow the beat instead of vocal? A bit weird imo :?
  2. 00:34:970 (4) - ^
  3. 00:25:003 (1) - move the last anchor point 2 grid left
  4. 01:00:685 (2,3,4) - you used 1/2 to follow vocal at 01:01:399 (4) , but you chose to follow the beat at 01:17:827 (3,4) , try to consist them will be better imo :D

-Umi-'s Normal

  1. 00:12:146 (4) - idk if you like this slider or not, just suggestion to make the blanket more notable :)
    SPOILER
  2. 00:15:003 (1,2) - put finish at the head on these sliders
  3. 00:16:432 (1) - whistle
  4. 00:27:828 (1) - finish
  5. 00:40:863 (2) - ^at tail
  6. 00:47:827 (2,2) - whistle on these sliders' head? without anything is boring ('~' )
  7. 00:50:327 (4) - clap?
  8. 00:55:685 (4) - how about stacking the tail with 00:54:256 (2)

Xinely's Hard

  1. 00:04:289 (2) - NC here instead of 00:03:575 (1)?
  2. 00:13:396 (5,6,1) - put it lower will be better imo. Since 00:13:396 (5,6) touched 00:12:860 (4) while playing ('w' )
  3. 00:15:717 (4) - move the last anchor 2 grid left to make a perfect blanket
  4. 00:15:717 (4) - make it like this ?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:49:970 (3) - NC?
  6. 01:03:363 (4) - stack with 01:04:613 (4) ?
  7. 01:22:113 (1) - last anchor 1 grid up
  8. 01:24:256 (3) - NC here instead of 01:23:542 (1)

Insane

  1. 00:07:860 (1,2) - make the finish consist with 00:05:003 (1,2) ?
  2. 00:15:182 (7) - NC?
  3. 00:31:399 (4,5) - Melody isnt changed here, this big jump seems weird, shorten the distance maybe?
  4. 00:37:649 (6) - NC?
  5. 00:49:970 (6) - ^
  6. 01:15:506 (9) - Ctrl + G? its fit for a jump (=w=)b
  7. 01:25:550 (3) - NC here seems the BPM changed

Go Go xChippy!! o/
SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT~~!!!
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Umi

happy623 wrote:

-Umi-'s Normal

  1. 00:12:146 (4) - idk if you like this slider or not, just suggestion to make the blanket more notable :)
    SPOILER
  2. 00:15:003 (1,2) - put finish at the head on these sliders
  3. 00:16:432 (1) - whistle
  4. 00:27:828 (1) - finish
  5. 00:40:863 (2) - ^at tail
  6. 00:47:827 (2,2) - whistle on these sliders' head? without anything is boring ('~' ) not for me >.<
  7. 00:50:327 (4) - clap?
  8. 00:55:685 (4) - how about stacking the tail with 00:54:256 (2)

    Fixed the rest :3
thx for mod o/

Here my diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:「starlog」(TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:-Umi-'s Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening
BeatmapID:277543
BeatmapSetID:103552

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Fate Kaleid.avi"
0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

happy623 wrote:



request via PM
I've to skip taiko diffs since I cant mod taiko ;w; sorry!

General

  1. consider adding "op" in tags? :D
  2. put the guest diff mapper's names in the tags o/
all fixed =w=, lol... forgot the names x)

Easy

  1. 00:17:860 (3) - how about follow the beat instead of vocal? A bit weird imo :?
  2. 00:34:970 (4) - ^
  3. 00:25:003 (1) - move the last anchor point 2 grid left
  4. 01:00:685 (2,3,4) - you used 1/2 to follow vocal at 01:01:399 (4) , but you chose to follow the beat at 01:17:827 (3,4) , try to consist them will be better imo :D
all fixed


Insane

  1. 00:07:860 (1,2) - make the finish consist with 00:05:003 (1,2) ?
  2. 00:15:182 (7) - NC?
  3. 00:31:399 (4,5) - Melody isnt changed here, this big jump seems weird, shorten the distance maybe?
  4. 00:37:649 (6) - NC? here I'm trying to keep it consistent so nope ><
  5. 00:49:970 (6) - ^
  6. 01:15:506 (9) - Ctrl + G? its fit for a jump (=w=)b
  7. 01:25:550 (3) - NC here seems the BPM changed
fixed the rest (o.o)/

Go Go xChippy!! o/
SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT~~!!!
Thank you very much for the mod and star happy623~!!! (^^)/
and.. updated Umi's diff~ =w=
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
some irc stuff
01:46 xChippy: yo~ =w=
01:47 jonathanlfj: yeah
01:48 xChippy: meeh just bored =w=
01:50 jonathanlfj: i just lost a mod
01:50 xChippy: o-o
01:50 jonathanlfj: im trying to rewrite it with what i still could remember
01:51 xChippy: err how do you lose a mod o-o
01:52 jonathanlfj: i pressed back space and lost all my edits
01:53 xChippy: o-o
02:32 jonathanlfj: ok im finally done
02:32 jonathanlfj: fml
02:32 xChippy: lol =w=
02:32 xChippy: I'm finally done:
02:32 *xChippy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/272815 ChouCho - starlog [Insane]]
02:32 xChippy: =w=
02:32 jonathanlfj: dat bg
02:33 xChippy: ye o-o?
02:33 jonathanlfj: no its just cool
02:33 xChippy: oh =w=
02:35 xChippy: Timing is off =w=
02:35 xChippy: clap sound very off
02:35 jonathanlfj: timing is fine
02:35 xChippy: clap sounds off tho in the beginning o-o
02:35 jonathanlfj: its the non intuitive rhythm change that im worrying abt
02:37 jonathanlfj: but thats the song what u need is better placements to indicate them
02:37 jonathanlfj: well 98% with HD the timing should be fine
02:37 xChippy: I suck at placements =w=
02:38 jonathanlfj: 00:10:003 (6,1,2) -
02:38 jonathanlfj: NC should be on 00:10:003 (6) - to indicate rhythm change
02:38 xChippy: ops =w=
02:39 jonathanlfj: 00:27:828 (1) - move ur red line here
02:39 jonathanlfj: this is the down beat
02:40 jonathanlfj: or add one there since u need the one at 00:27:471 (3) anyways
02:40 jonathanlfj: and then u probably have to rest ur NC patterns
02:41 xChippy: okay :3
02:42 jonathanlfj: 00:32:828 (9,1) - this requires memorization for hidden which i am not a fan of
02:42 jonathanlfj: do some manual stacking
02:42 jonathanlfj: 00:57:738 - add a note here
02:43 jonathanlfj: 01:02:113 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - where art thou claps?
02:43 xChippy: forgot them =w=
02:43 jonathanlfj: 01:07:649 (1) - take off NC and place at 01:07:828 (2) -
02:44 jonathanlfj: u know why
02:44 xChippy: the distance
02:44 xChippy: o-o?
02:44 jonathanlfj: the rhythm change
02:44 jonathanlfj: 3/4 -> 1/2
02:44 jonathanlfj: and you made the the same distance
02:44 jonathanlfj: you need to place NCs correctly or else they are basically unreadable on first attempt
02:44 xChippy: woops you're right =w=
02:45 xChippy: okay >w>
02:45 jonathanlfj: have u fixed the red line?
02:45 xChippy: yep
02:45 xChippy: one at 00:27:471
02:45 jonathanlfj: ok i need to find u a new timing for the end
02:45 xChippy: other at the downbeat
02:57 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/3FHCt.zip
02:57 jonathanlfj: just copy the timing sections over to ur diff
02:58 jonathanlfj: and ur initial offset is fine dont worry
02:58 jonathanlfj: unless ur diff is like OD5 or something
03:00 xChippy: done~
03:00 jonathanlfj: kool
will do a full mod when i come back from vacation :3
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Suggest you add .5~1 seconds more of lead-in time to all difficulties.
  2. Better to end last Kiai time at 01:19:256 -
  3. Try to add some more tags that are related to the anime.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:646 (1) - Add clap.
  2. 00:07:414 - There should be a note here.
  3. 00:21:432 - Add whistle.
  4. 00:22:146 (1,2) - Switch new combo between these two notes.
  5. 00:32:828 (8,1) - Stack (1) under (8), also switch new combo between these two notes 00:33:542 (1,2) -
  6. 00:56:399 - Change whistle to finish.
  7. 01:01:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either put your custom clap or normal default hitsounds here. Soft is too quite and doesn't match music.
  8. 01:13:542 - Change whistle to finish.
  9. 01:18:899 - Volume should remain at 80% here.
  10. 01:25:005 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be more consistent for better play-ability.

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:01:610 (3,2) - Probably sounds better with default whistles instead.
  2. 01:07:113 (2,3,4) - Better not to do this here... This difficulty is already quite hard for a Hard.
  3. 01:19:256 - Same as Insane. Volume should continue to be at 80% here.

[-Umi-'s Normal]
  1. 00:03:217 (1,1) - Spinner is really too short for a Normal, slider is too soon after the spinner as-well.
  2. 00:05:003 - Better to change from whistle to finish.
  3. 00:08:396 - Volume should be 80%.
  4. 00:12:682 - Volume should be 80%.
  5. 00:14:110 - Volume should be 80%.
  6. 01:28:978 - At an inherited timing point here with soft 05% volume.

[Easy]
  1. 01:24:613 (4) - Should end at 01:24:792 -

Good luck~
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael
hey xChippy and qoot8123 >w<// here the mods that you request to me at our modding queue

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:360 (53,54) - kat and don here. because i saw that you used k d d d k pattern from 00:05:003 (10) - until 00:09:646 (29) - and 00:11:075 (34) - until 00:14:646 (48) - C: so, to make it be harmonious, change 00:15:360 (53) - to be kat and 00:15:539 (54) - to be don. btw, you used kat and don too at Oni diff
    *note : but if you want to used kat at 00:15:539 (54) - because the pitch sound at there is higher than 00:15:360 (53) - , okay no problem :D it's up to you
  2. 01:19:256 (292) - add finish here ;)
sorry for the poorest mod ever ;w; seriously i can't find anything else.
I LOVE YOU QOOT LOL
here take my star ~ star is duly given ;)
goodluck~!! >w<
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Shoot all star I have now. I will mod asap. I love ChouCho :D
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Wow, I would have never thought for a reply this early...
Also, sorry for the late-ish mod, I have a huge headache and it still hurts right now.

General

  1. The ends of the final kiai time are inconsistent in between Xinely's and the other diffs. I highly recommend following Xinely's time of 01:19:256
  2. Add a silent hitsound for the soft-sliderslide 3 (especially) and 4 (if needed).
  3. 01:26:407 - Instead of a sudden volume change (which doesn't even happen in all of the diffs), do a diminuendo starting from this point to the end of the spinner.
  4. Is it just me or the timing is off near the beginning then magically becomes on time before the next uninherited timing section?


Easy

  1. 01:24:613 (4) - Snap the end of this slider to the red tick before it to make it sound closer to the music.

-Umi-'s Normal

  1. 00:27:503 (4) - Snap the circle to the new uninherited time section

Xinely's Hard

  1. 00:03:575 (1) - This slider sounds awkward by itself, so you have one of three options: Make it a long slider, a hold slider, or make it softer.
  2. 00:26:253 - I would prefer it if the notes were like [img=http://puu.sh/3HRPF.jpg]this[/img] instead with the whistle on 00:26:967 and the clap on 00:26:789 removed.
  3. 00:30:149 - add a note here?
  4. 00:34:792 (4) - It looks weird if it's THAT close to the slider before it. I recommend moving it to the right 2 grids and up 1.

Insane

  1. 00:22:503 (2,3) - I think it's best to not put a jump in between these notes, unnecessary IMO
  2. 00:38:720 (10) - It would look better if this note and the end and beginning of the sliders before and after it make a line, so put this note on x:156 y: 304
  3. 01:21:756 (1) - Make this slider form more of a right angle with the formations before it. The end of the slider should be 2 grids up.

Great job!
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Taiko mod as requested from the Malaysian Taiko Queue

[Oni]
  1. 00:06:432 (14) - this circle better move it here 00:06:967 (16) - , you should put a gap here because you did it at 00:07:860 (23) -
  2. 00:13:575 (54) - change this to k
  3. 00:21:610 () - add a circle here, so you can stop making repetitive 3 circles pattern.
  4. 00:29:971 (121) - this circle should be here 00:29:792 (121) - and add a circle at 00:30:149 () - the current beat here always ends at red tick, you might need to hear that carefully :3
  5. 00:36:399 () - add a circle here would sounds better :3
  6. 01:06:935 (326,327,328) - make this as kkd?
  7. 01:09:792 (341,342,343) - make this as kdk, make it consistent first and after that kkk, you can change the pattern :3
  8. 01:12:470 (363) - this would be better if k
  9. 01:17:649 (393,394,395) - make this as kkd, so you can get consistent with hitsounds pattern before.
  10. 01:18:899 (403) - sounds better as k
  11. 01:21:220 () - add a circle here
  12. 01:21:935 (418,419,420) - change this to ddd to emphasize the vocal, ddk sounds kinda weird.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:610 () - add a circle,same reason as oni
  2. 00:29:256 (102) - move this to 00:29:078 (102) - and add a circle at 00:29:435 () -
  3. 00:32:113 (113) - ^ same
  4. 00:36:935 () - add a circle here, the sudden gap doesn't sounds good.
  5. 01:04:256 (235) - move to 01:04:077 (235) - and add a circle at 01:04:435 () -
  6. 01:21:577 () - add a circle here
  7. 01:22:113 (305) - remove k here sounds better
  8. You should try and add some triplet, this muzu is kinda easy :p
all the best~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Suggest you add .5~1 seconds more of lead-in time to all difficulties.
  2. Better to end last Kiai time at 01:19:256 -
  3. Try to add some more tags that are related to the anime.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:646 (1) - Add clap.
  2. 00:07:414 - There should be a note here.
  3. 00:21:432 - Add whistle.
  4. 00:22:146 (1,2) - Switch new combo between these two notes.
  5. 00:32:828 (8,1) - Stack (1) under (8), also switch new combo between these two notes 00:33:542 (1,2) -
  6. 00:56:399 - Change whistle to finish.
  7. 01:01:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either put your custom clap or normal default hitsounds here. Soft is too quite and doesn't match music.
  8. 01:13:542 - Change whistle to finish.
  9. 01:18:899 - Volume should remain at 80% here.
  10. 01:25:005 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be more consistent for better play-ability.


[Easy]
  1. 01:24:613 (4) - Should end at 01:24:792 -

Good luck~

Chamle wrote:

Wow, I would have never thought for a reply this early...
Also, sorry for the late-ish mod, I have a huge headache and it still hurts right now.

General

  1. The ends of the final kiai time are inconsistent in between Xinely's and the other diffs. I highly recommend following Xinely's time of 01:19:256
  2. Add a silent hitsound for the soft-sliderslide 3 (especially) and 4 (if needed).
  3. 01:26:407 - Instead of a sudden volume change (which doesn't even happen in all of the diffs), do a diminuendo starting from this point to the end of the spinner.
  4. Is it just me or the timing is off near the beginning then magically becomes on time before the next uninherited timing section?


Easy

  1. 01:24:613 (4) - Snap the end of this slider to the red tick before it to make it sound closer to the music.

Insane

  1. 00:22:503 (2,3) - I think it's best to not put a jump in between these notes, unnecessary IMO
  2. 00:38:720 (10) - It would look better if this note and the end and beginning of the sliders before and after it make a line, so put this note on x:156 y: 304
  3. 01:21:756 (1) - Make this slider form more of a right angle with the formations before it. The end of the slider should be 2 grids up.
All fixed in both mods~ :3, Thank you very much for the mods Kiiwa and Chamle~! ^^
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123
SPOILER

HeatKai wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from the Malaysian Taiko Queue

[Oni]
  1. 00:06:432 (14) - this circle better move it here 00:06:967 (16) - , you should put a gap here because you did it at 00:07:860 (23) -
  2. 00:13:575 (54) - change this to k
  3. 00:21:610 () - add a circle here, so you can stop making repetitive 3 circles pattern.
  4. 00:29:971 (121) - this circle should be here 00:29:792 (121) - and add a circle at 00:30:149 () - the current beat here always ends at red tick, you might need to hear that carefully :3
  5. 00:36:399 () - add a circle here would sounds better :3
  6. 01:06:935 (326,327,328) - make this as kkd?
  7. 01:09:792 (341,342,343) - make this as kdk, make it consistent first and after that kkk, you can change the pattern :3
  8. 01:12:470 (363) - this would be better if k
  9. 01:17:649 (393,394,395) - make this as kkd, so you can get consistent with hitsounds pattern before.
  10. 01:18:899 (403) - sounds better as k
  11. 01:21:220 () - add a circle here
  12. 01:21:935 (418,419,420) - change this to ddd to emphasize the vocal, ddk sounds kinda weird.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:610 () - add a circle,same reason as oni
  2. 00:29:256 (102) - move this to 00:29:078 (102) - and add a circle at 00:29:435 () -
  3. 00:32:113 (113) - ^ same
  4. 00:36:935 () - add a circle here, the sudden gap doesn't sounds good.
  5. 01:04:256 (235) - move to 01:04:077 (235) - and add a circle at 01:04:435 () -
  6. 01:21:577 () - add a circle here
  7. 01:22:113 (305) - remove k here sounds better
  8. You should try and add some triplet, this muzu is kinda easy :p
all the best~
almost fixed~
thx>w<

SPOILER

mingmichael wrote:

hey xChippy and qoot8123 >w<// here the mods that you request to me at our modding queue

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:360 (53,54) - kat and don here. because i saw that you used k d d d k pattern from 00:05:003 (10) - until 00:09:646 (29) - and 00:11:075 (34) - until 00:14:646 (48) - C: so, to make it be harmonious, change 00:15:360 (53) - to be kat and 00:15:539 (54) - to be don. btw, you used kat and don too at Oni diff
    *note : but if you want to used kat at 00:15:539 (54) - because the pitch sound at there is higher than 00:15:360 (53) - , okay no problem :D it's up to you
  2. 01:19:256 (292) - add finish here ;)
sorry for the poorest mod ever ;w; seriously i can't find anything else.
I LOVE YOU QOOT LOL
here take my star ~ star is duly given ;)
goodluck~!! >w<
fixed some
thanks>w<

oni~http://puu.sh/3HYuC.rar
muzu~http://puu.sh/3HYul.rar
Hanabi
Hanabi
Hi~ from my queue

[Xinely's Hard]
00:04:467 (3) - maybe straight slider will be better
00:10:003 (3) - how about this shape
image
00:15:717 (4) - ctrl + g
00:46:042 (3) - ^
00:49:970 (3) - NC\
01:03:542 (1) - strange slider. ctrl + g
01:04:613 (4) - ^
01:15:506 (2,3) - you'd better change the order like
image
01:16:220 (4,2) - overlap
01:24:792 (4,1) - seperate them exactly


[Insane]
there's some long combo at KIAI time. Use more NC imo
00:07:325 (5) - NC
00:20:539 (5,6) -
UMM..
00:25:003 (1) - ctrl +g
00:29:078 (5) - NC
00:33:542 (9,2) - overlap
01:16:042 (10) - ctrl + g


GL ;)
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Hi, xChippy ( Really I'm here because ChouCho. Not you =w=)
Execpt I like Duca, I still like ChouCho. So,

Osu! needs more ChouCho

[General]
I sugguest you finish kiai time at 01:24:256 - . Seems you are fals in kiai time. Let fix it. Rhythm you make after kiai is unchange, Why end kiai?

[Isane]
00:05:539 (2) - I think remove finish at begin will better about hitsound. Really I feel alittle weird because finish here
00:07:325 (8) - NC? Right? It is a other rhythm diffirent with 00:07:146 (7) -
00:10:717 - I suggest you add note. I feel empty this be too ugly about rhythm. And other diff is full here. Let add and feel
00:09:646 (5,1,2,3) - 1 boring hitsound . 4 finish in 4 notes. I don't think it is fine
00:33:542 (9,1) - Too near. I think you should creat a true distance to also make 00:34:256 (2) - stack with 00:33:542 (9) -
00:36:220 (1) - Try add finish at begin
00:37:649 (1) - NC. Too long for 1 rhythm not be stream
00:57:827 (8) - NC here. Not at 00:59:256 (1) . 01:00:685 (11) - NC if you fix previous. 01:01:577 (1) - Remove NC
01:03:363 (4) - Can you make curved slider? Better: http://puu.sh/3I7sr.jpg
01:07:381 (2) - Also add finish. I think so
01:09:256 (8) - NC at this. Let hear vocal careful
01:26:300 (3) - Whistle will better

[Xinely's Hard]
00:01:610 (3,2) - I sugguest you remove whistle. Too noisy @@
00:13:396 (5,6,1) - Try test play and you will see these are too near with 00:12:860 (4) -
00:26:789 (3) - This slider end at 00:26:967 - will more beautiful about hitsound and rhythm
00:40:327 (4) - Make this stack perfect with 00:38:720 (4) -
01:07:381 (3,4) - It maed me die. Try (4) start at 01:07:381 - and end at 01:07:649 -
01:18:542 (3) - Try add finish at end
01:25:550 (2) - Add whistle and remove whistle at 01:25:978 (3) -

[-Umi-'s Normal]
00:01:075 (2) - Can you change whistle at begin into at end? I feel other diff is so and it is good
00:02:503 (2) - ^
00:02:503 (2) - Finish instead of whistle will better
00:26:432 (3) - Can you make other to not stack with 00:25:003 (1) -
00:36:399 (4,1) - NC at (4) not at (1)
00:47:827 (2) - add finsih at begin
00:49:077 (2) - ^
01:07:113 (1) - Remove NC, and NC at 01:07:827 (2) - . Kiai time starts again, Why not NC? and you make NC wrong

[Easy]
01:00:685 (2) - End at 01:01:577 - . To sensible with vocal
01:24:613 (4) - Try NC

Anyway, I still hate you Why don't call me GD just only this time. Let see. This is ChouCho. Oh God, I hope it ranked soon. I need ranked soon to I can make 2nd rank for this map ^^ :D
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Oyatsu wrote:

Hi, xChippy ( Really I'm here because ChouCho. Not you =w=)
Execpt I like Duca, I still like ChouCho. So,

Osu! needs more ChouCho

[General]
I sugguest you finish kiai time at 01:24:256 - . Seems you are fals in kiai time. Let fix it. Rhythm you make after kiai is unchange, Why end kiai?
Kia ends there cuz the section ends there also this way it wouldn't contradict the first kia cuz it ends at the same sound. otherwise it would have been a huge kia
[Isane]
00:05:539 (2) - I think remove finish at begin will better about hitsound. Really I feel alittle weird because finish here fixed
00:07:325 (8) - NC? Right? It is a other rhythm diffirent with 00:07:146 (7) - fixed
00:10:717 - I suggest you add note. I feel empty this be too ugly about rhythm. And other diff is full here. Let add and feel Nope I want the violin to have a huge impact here
00:09:646 (5,1,2,3) - 1 boring hitsound . 4 finish in 4 notes. I don't think it is fine did something else
00:33:542 (9,1) - Too near. I think you should creat a true distance to also make 00:34:256 (2) - stack with 00:33:542 (9) - did something else
00:36:220 (1) - Try add finish at begin nope don't see why
00:37:649 (1) - NC. Too long for 1 rhythm not be stream fixed
00:57:827 (8) - NC here. Not at 00:59:256 (1) . 01:00:685 (11) - NC if you fix previous. 01:01:577 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:03:363 (4) - Can you make curved slider? Better: http://puu.sh/3I7sr.jpg fixed
01:07:381 (2) - Also add finish. I think so fixed
01:09:256 (8) - NC at this. Let hear vocal careful fixed
01:26:300 (3) - Whistle will betterfixed

[Easy]
01:00:685 (2) - End at 01:01:577 - . To sensible with vocal fixed
01:24:613 (4) - Try NC fixed

Anyway, I still hate you Why don't call me GD just only this time. Let see. This is ChouCho. Oh God, I hope it ranked soon. I need ranked soon to I can make 2nd rank for this map ^^ :D =w=
Thanks for the mod Oyatsu~ =w=/

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ from my queue


[Insane]
there's some long combo at KIAI time. Use more NC imo
00:07:325 (5) - NC fixed
00:20:539 (5,6) -
UMM..
like the one I have more =w=
00:25:003 (1) - ctrl +g fixed
00:29:078 (5) - NC nope
00:33:542 (9,2) - overlap fixed
01:16:042 (10) - ctrl + g don't really like it =w=


GL ;)
Thanks for the mod Sana :3~!
Also updated Umi"s diff~
Last edited by xChippy , edited 2 times in total.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
thx for mod everyone :3

here my diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:「starlog」(TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:-Umi-'s Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
BeatmapID:277543
BeatmapSetID:103552

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Fate Kaleid.avi"
0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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4289,-100,4,2,2,80,0,0
8217,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
8396,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
12503,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
12682,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
13932,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
14110,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
16432,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
27471,357.142857142857,4,2,2,60,1,0
27828,357.142857142857,4,2,2,60,1,0
31756,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
31935,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
39256,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
50685,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
56756,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
56935,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
58185,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
58363,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
62113,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
67828,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
72470,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
72649,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
73899,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
74077,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
75327,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
75506,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
79256,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
85005,363.636363636364,4,2,1,40,1,0
85550,428.571428571429,4,2,1,40,1,0
86407,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
87264,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
88121,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
88978,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 171,86,86
Combo2 : 255,0,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128

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Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
Hi~ From queue.

[General]


  1. Timing is have some problem,you should ask bat to test it.


    Timing consult

    Timing
    704,357.142857142857,4,2,0,100,1,0
    27472,357.142857142857,4,2,2,60,1,0
    27829,357.142857142857,4,2,2,60,1,0
    62118,357.142857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
    84975,379.746835443038,4,2,2,60,1,0
    85544,434.782608695652,4,2,2,60,1,0
    86284,508.474576271186,4,2,2,60,1,0

---------------------------------------------------------

[Normal]


  • Useless Green line
    1. Fine.


    Rhythm

  • 01:07:470 - Add a note ?

Sound Effect

Fine.


---------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

  • Useless Green line
    1. None.


    Rhythm

  • 01:02:113 (1,2) - Shape is bad.
  • 01:03:899 (2) - Flow is bad, change the direction.

Sound Effect

00:20:360 - clap??? add this sound effect plz ._.


--------------------------------------------------------

[Insane]


    1. AR-1 HP-1

    Useless Green line

  • None.

Rhythm

00:06:075 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is werid, cirvle 4 should in 00:06:432 - and this jump is good,but your rhythm is weird imo.00:24:646 (9,10,1) - Flow is not well
00:30:149 (10,2) - NC switch.
00:33:363 - Add a note?00:35:328 (7,8) - ctrl + g ?
00:36:042 (1,2,3) - I think this place should use circle circle slider(1/2)
00:38:720 (11,2) - NC switch.
00:41:399 (1,3) - NC switch.
00:44:256 (11,2) - NC switch.
00:47:470 (1,2) - Read map is have a few hard
00:49:613 (1,2) - NC switch.
00:53:006 (1,4) - NC switch.
00:55:685 (1,2) - NC switch.
01:02:113 (7) - NC
01:10:149 (1,2) - NC switch.
01:14:613 (1,2) - NC switch.
01:16:399 (5) - NC
01:17:827 (10,1) - NC switch.
01:20:327 (1,2) - NC switch.
01:21:756 (1,2) - NC switch.

Your NC style is not fit in defult NC style , I think NC is a new rhythm in combo ,not a toy.If you NC it on purpose ,and miss my nc switch.



Sound Effect

None.
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi.

[General]

This Title name starlog, not「starlog」 you remove ->「」
First red line offset -8 (710) and Third red line offset +12 (27840)


[Easy]

00:04:289 This green line is unnecessary, remove please.
00:31:411 (1,2) Hmm.. (1) slider end blanket ?
00:50:697 (1) This is slider unbalance, i think this slider end move x:156 y:132 is better imo.
01:28:871 (1) You mistake this spinner end, you move spinner 01:28:978


[-Umi-'s Normal]


00:05:539 (2) I think this slider change curve slider and (3) slider point blanket is better imo.
SPOILER
00:11:432 (3,4) Hmm.. This slider too change curve slider?
SPOILER
01:02:113 (1,2) This is two slider flow bad, i think more improve flow here.
SPOILER
01:04:970 (2,3) Please change the direction of the curve slider, I suggest this slider pattern flow.
SPOILER


[Xinely's Hard]


00:03:575 (1) Hmm I don't understand this rhythm, Here a certain rhythm can not be heard.
00:13:217 (4,5,6,1) This is pattern more improve blanket please.
00:26:789 (3) I don't hear clap sound and this part really quiet, remove clap
00:54:970 (4,1) Why you used this jump? it's really big jump and confuse.
This is not insane diff, you change this jump pattern.


[Insane]

00:15:360 (2) add clap.
00:25:092 (3,4) This is two slider flow really bad. it's playing confuse imo.
so I suggest this slider pattern flow.
SPOILER
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thanks for the mods I'll respond to them soon~
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Hey mod from my Queues



General
  • • seem fine

Easy
  • • 00:05:985 - move this Inherited Point to 00:06:075 and add one on 00:06:164 (S2). like you can hear if you add Inherited Point like the current one then you always hear claps at every white lines and it shouldnt be like that... well sorry for my bad english xD here is my suggestion to add the Inherrited Points.
    SPOILER

    x S3
    x S2
    x here you can add claps only no need to add Inherited point
    • wel I hope you get what I mean >< if not you can ask me in-game again if you see me on or I can do it for you if you want. Just say it.
    • 00:10:003 (3) - I think finish at the begin only is enough. the current finish sounds are ugly tbh
    • 00:37:113 (2) - remove finish at the end
    • 01:09:255 (2) - this slider-end is unsnapp
    • 01:24:256 (3) - add NC here and remove on the next one

-Umi-'s Normal
  • • 00:29:613 - may add a circle with clap here?
    nice Diff tho

well that's all what I have to say here ><
sorry for my noob mod ;A; good luck with ranked ~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey mod from my Queues



General
  • • seem fine

Easy
  • • 00:05:985 - move this Inherited Point to 00:06:075 and add one on 00:06:164 (S2). like you can hear if you add Inherited Point like the current one then you always hear claps at every white lines and it shouldnt be like that... well sorry for my bad english xD here is my suggestion to add the Inherrited Points.
    SPOILER

    x S3
    x S2
    x here you can add claps only no need to add Inherited point
    • wel I hope you get what I mean >< if not you can ask me in-game again if you see me on or I can do it for you if you want. Just say it. fixed it =w=
    • 00:10:003 (3) - I think finish at the begin only is enough. the current finish sounds are ugly tbh fixed
    • 00:37:113 (2) - remove finish at the end fixed
    • 01:09:255 (2) - this slider-end is unsnapp fixed
    • 01:24:256 (3) - add NC here and remove on the next one fixed

well that's all what I have to say here ><
sorry for my noob mod ;A; good luck with ranked ~
Thanks for the mod Baka_Ai lol =w=~

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi.

[General]

This Title name starlog, not「starlog」 you remove ->「」
First red line offset -8 (710) and Third red line offset +12 (27840)


[Easy]

00:04:289 This green line is unnecessary, remove please.
00:31:411 (1,2) Hmm.. (1) slider end blanket ? errr don't understand this one o-o
00:50:697 (1) This is slider unbalance, i think this slider end move x:156 y:132 is better imo.
01:28:871 (1) You mistake this spinner end, you move spinner 01:28:978
fixed the rest~

[Insane]

00:15:360 (2) add clap.
00:25:092 (3,4) This is two slider flow really bad. it's playing confuse imo.
so I suggest this slider pattern flow.
SPOILER
fixed all~
Thanks for the mod Gloria Guard~ :3/
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445 
[TimingPoints]
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85561,419.58041958042,4,2,0,100,1,0
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Charles445 wrote:

[TimingPoints]
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84995,377.358490566038,4,2,0,100,1,0
85561,419.58041958042,4,2,0,100,1,0
Fixed the timing~ Thanks Charles :3~! (^.^)/
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey mod from my Queues



-Umi-'s Normal
  • • 00:29:613 - may add a circle with clap here? fixed
    nice Diff tho thx ^^
thx for mod Dark_Ai :3

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi.

[-Umi-'s Normal]


00:05:539 (2) I think this slider change curve slider and (3) slider point blanket is better imo. Fiixed
SPOILER
00:11:432 (3,4) Hmm.. This slider too change curve slider? Fiixed
SPOILER
01:02:113 (1,2) This is two slider flow bad, i think more improve flow here. i don't think so :o
SPOILER
01:04:970 (2,3) Please change the direction of the curve slider, I suggest this slider pattern flow. Fiixed
SPOILER
thx for mod Gloria Guard :D

here my diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:-Umi-'s Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
BeatmapID:277543
BeatmapSetID:103552

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Fate Kaleid.avi"
0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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87239,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
88078,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
88917,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 171,86,86
Combo2 : 255,0,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128

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60,232,16781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,140,17138,2,0,P|212:108|276:140,1,120
320,200,17853,2,0,P|212:228|164:200,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,140,19638,6,0,P|232:76|96:24,1,180
128,140,20531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,20888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,172,21781,2,0,L|404:124,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,22495,6,0,B|232:96|232:96|212:104|200:116|188:132|180:164,2,120
396,124,23567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,240,23924,2,0,B|304:240|304:240|232:276,1,120
132,256,24638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,24995,6,0,B|276:152|292:152|360:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,300,27495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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340,192,28567,2,0,P|264:180|208:208,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,29103,2,0,P|144:268|88:240,1,120
52,228,29638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,184,29817,2,0,B|8:92|152:204|152:92,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,30710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,31067,6,0,B|192:312|224:324|268:324|268:324|336:324,2,180,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,32317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,152,32495,2,0,B|192:132|216:116|248:116|248:116|296:116,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,33210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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460,184,34281,6,0,P|364:144|332:152,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,40,34995,2,0,P|244:96|232:144,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,196,35531,2,0,P|232:264|148:336,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,36424,6,0,L|8:288,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,37138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,84,37495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,84,37674,2,0,L|352:84,1,120
424,176,38387,2,0,B|432:216|432:216|408:296,1,120
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120,148,40884,2,0,P|232:160|296:204,1,180,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,268,41777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,268,42134,6,0,B|336:320|276:304|276:304|256:324|208:332,2,180,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,244,43740,2,0,B|248:204|304:216|304:216|340:180|388:180,1,180,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,44633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,92,44990,6,0,P|192:104|116:48,2,180,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,46240,2,0,P|356:168|356:244,1,120
316,276,46775,2,0,P|260:288|192:272,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,47490,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,104,47847,2,0,P|268:80|360:120,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,48740,6,0,L|392:260,1,60
340,280,49097,2,0,P|240:304|152:264,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,49990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,196,50704,6,0,P|320:200|372:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,120,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,64,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,184,52138,2,0,P|416:228|472:244,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,120,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,64,53566,6,0,L|232:32,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,64,56423,6,0,P|140:200|160:304,1,240
265,255,57495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,316,57852,6,0,B|412:276|412:276|488:284|516:204,2,180,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,255,59280,2,0,L|128:256,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,59816,2,0,P|148:132|112:36,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,140,60709,2,0,P|28:232|44:260,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,96,61602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,256,62138,6,0,P|260:256|300:240,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,62673,2,0,P|320:168|352:40,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,164,63923,2,0,P|140:172|120:228,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,312,64637,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,312,64995,2,0,P|332:240|376:216,1,120
420,192,65530,2,0,P|464:120|420:20,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,32,66245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,184,68566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,68923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,76,69280,6,0,B|248:140|248:140|193:183,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,84,79280,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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288,148,82673,2,0,B|348:184|348:184|468:184,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,83923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,164,84280,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Xivaxi
133 posts
Joined November 2011
Xivaxi
Greetings! From my queue!
[Insane]
00:02:142 (4) - Would feel nice if this was spaced a little further away given the strong break in the music ( I know it's just following distance snap, but still )
00:04:996 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels like it's trying to be circular, but it's not, and is just flat. Either make these curves stronger to give a stronger circular flow in here, or curve these the opposite direction to give it a more interesting feel while still following the flat-lines.
Opposite'd

00:11:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels and looks weird. I suggest:
  • 00:11:067 (1) - Make straight
    00:11:603 (2) - Line up following 1
    00:11:781 (3) - Blanket 2
    00:12:317 (4) - Blanket 3's end stronger
    00:12:674 (5) - Blanket 4's end stronger
Pic

00:13:745 (1) - x:182 y:77 to blanket cleaner and blanket this end by the other slider
00:16:424 (1) - Remove NC (optional) and 00:16:781 (2) - Add NC here instead (less optional) this depends largely on whether or not you want that added NC from the note following the triple, but the music makes a break and starts a new line, and so demands a new NC on the second note there.

00:16:781 (2,3) - Like the notes at the beginning, these feel bad because they're curved, but not curved enough to flow well - curve them the opposite direction, or curve them stronger to create a stronger circular flow
00:28:567 (3,4) - These should be swapped on the timeline, slider first to follow the held vocal, then circle after.
00:32:853 (10) - This note feels really awkward, I think because the note start is at such a stark contrast from the previous several note's downward direction, with no indication in the music. I suggest the following change to pattern:
  • 00:32:853 (10) - CTRL G, then x:255 y:321 follows from the downward flow better
    00:33:388 (11) - x:99 y:245
    00:33:567 (12) - Stacked on 10's head - completing a triangle with these three notes and smoothly looping back around into the next pattern (though you might have to mess with distance a bit)
Pic
00:54:459 (4) - x:202 y:108 for a cleaner triangle
00:57:495 (5,6,7) - Triple feels out of place, the triples in the rest of the patterns fall right before the start of the next measure, whereas this starts a beat early. I don't know if this was intentional, but I'd just remove this, or just bump it back a measure

[Hard]
00:06:781 (2,3,1,2) - Smoother curve here (additionally, you can also curve these a bit stronger to match the curve of 00:06:246 (1) ,though this is optional, I just think it'd feel nicer)
00:09:995 (3) - Claps on all (or at least the first two) beats of this (or finishes, or both)
00:11:067 (2,5) - Make these perfect mirrors, the look a little off-center
00:15:531 (3) - x:92 y:363 or so to match the distance better and create a nice triangle. Before, the distance decrease didn't really match the increase in intensity of the bgm and felt really weird :(
00:39:278 (1) - Clap on head, remove clap on tail
00:39:813 (2) - Clap on head
00:40:527 (1) - Clap on tail
00:41:063 (2) - Remove clap
00:41:420 (4) - Clap on head
00:42:491 (2) - Remove clap
00:42:669 (3) - Clap on head
01:03:566 (1,2) - Either curve 1 the opposite direction or Ctrl-G 2, the break in flow here doesn't make sense
01:08:745 (3) - 3rd point x:143 y:213 to blanket cleaner
01:23:745 (2) - Make this a mirror of 01:23:209 (3) - , or vice versa
01:24:816 (4,1) - Make sure the distance here is the same as the distance 01:24:280 (3,4) - Here, despite the tempo change. It's just ugly otherwise.

[Normal]
00:04:996 (1) - Clap on tail
00:05:531 (2) - Make this a mirror'd copy of 00:04:996 (1)
00:31:067 (1,2,3) - Either make a stronger curve between these notes with 1 and 3 on the same x plane, or make them all straight on the same x plane.
01:01:602 (5) - Missing some sort of hitsound, Clap maybe?
01:04:995 (2) - Clap on tail
01:11:423 (4) - Ctrl G this to flow smoother, and then 01:12:138 (1) - Ctrl G this to fix the distance, and optionally, 01:13:566 (3) - Ctrl G this as well to keep the same pattern as before, just in reverse
01:18:566 (2) - The tail is missing some sort of hitsound. Whistle? or I dunno, it feels empty
01:16:423 (2,3) - Make these more similar to eachother (either make 2 more curvy, or make 3 less curvy)
01:24:280 (1) - x:192 y:173 and 01:24:637 (2) - x:276 y:259 for a cleaner pattern

[Easy]
00:17:860 (3) - Make this curved like 00:19:289 (1)
00:29:256 (3) - Either curve this more, and optionally in the other direction, or make this perfectly straight. Right now it looks kind of sloppy
I can't find much else wrong with this diff, gj

Good luck!
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Xivaxi wrote:

Greetings! From my queue!
[Insane]
00:02:142 (4) - Would feel nice if this was spaced a little further away given the strong break in the music ( I know it's just following distance snap, but still ) prefer this one, don't want a jump in this soft section
00:04:996 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels like it's trying to be circular, but it's not, and is just flat. Either make these curves stronger to give a stronger circular flow in here, or curve these the opposite direction to give it a more interesting feel while still following the flat-lines. did some adjustment on the curves
Opposite'd

00:11:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels and looks weird. I suggest: fixed
  • 00:11:067 (1) - Make straight
    00:11:603 (2) - Line up following 1
    00:11:781 (3) - Blanket 2
    00:12:317 (4) - Blanket 3's end stronger
    00:12:674 (5) - Blanket 4's end stronger
Pic

00:13:745 (1) - x:182 y:77 to blanket cleaner and blanket this end by the other slider fixed
00:16:424 (1) - Remove NC (optional) and 00:16:781 (2) - Add NC here instead (less optional) this depends largely on whether or not you want that added NC from the note following the triple, but the music makes a break and starts a new line, and so demands a new NC on the second note there.fixed

00:16:781 (2,3) - Like the notes at the beginning, these feel bad because they're curved, but not curved enough to flow well - curve them the opposite direction, or curve them stronger to create a stronger circular flow Curve is fine as it is tho o-o, dont want to make them tooo curvy
00:28:567 (3,4) - These should be swapped on the timeline, slider first to follow the held vocal, then circle after.
00:32:853 (10) - This note feels really awkward, I think because the note start is at such a stark contrast from the previous several note's downward direction, with no indication in the music. I suggest the following change to pattern: consider
  • 00:32:853 (10) - CTRL G, then x:255 y:321 follows from the downward flow better
    00:33:388 (11) - x:99 y:245
    00:33:567 (12) - Stacked on 10's head - completing a triangle with these three notes and smoothly looping back around into the next pattern (though you might have to mess with distance a bit)
Pic
00:54:459 (4) - x:202 y:108 for a cleaner triangle fixed
00:57:495 (5,6,7) - Triple feels out of place, the triples in the rest of the patterns fall right before the start of the next measure, whereas this starts a beat early. I don't know if this was intentional, but I'd just remove this, or just bump it back a measure fixed


[Easy]
00:17:860 (3) - Make this curved like 00:19:289 (1) did my own changes o-o since it would kill the blanket o-o
00:29:256 (3) - Either curve this more, and optionally in the other direction, or make this perfectly straight. Right now it looks kind of sloppy went for straight~
I can't find much else wrong with this diff, gj

Good luck!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
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Insane:
00:06:960 (7) - Kind of odd jump to be having here
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - This is really hard to read, especially since it has the same spacing as the end of the previous combo. It's really hard to tell that there's even a spacing change
00:21:067 (8) - Flow of this is really weird. (7) wants me to go sort of upward but I'm forced to go down because of this slider
00:29:638 (7,8,9,1) - Why are there jumps here on this really insignificant transition part
00:32:138 (9) - NC?
01:26:400 (3) - This note is mapped to the bass drum instead of the actual impact, so it sounds really wrong

Hard:
Tick Rate 2
00:53:566 (1,2,3) - Make these curves more symmetrical
01:03:923 (2) - This placement feels really awkward to play

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine

I'm a bit bothered by the insane not fitting the music very well but it's still a good map
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

CDFA wrote:

Log those stars

Insane:
00:06:960 (7) - Kind of odd jump to be having here errr consider rearranging
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - This is really hard to read, especially since it has the same spacing as the end of the previous combo. It's really hard to tell that there's even a spacing change
00:21:067 (8) - Flow of this is really weird. (7) wants me to go sort of upward but I'm forced to go down because of this slider
00:29:638 (7,8,9,1) - Why are there jumps here on this really insignificant transition part
00:32:138 (9) - NC?
01:26:400 (3) - This note is mapped to the bass drum instead of the actual impact, so it sounds really wrong
fixed the rest
I'm a bit bothered by the insane not fitting the music very well but it's still a good map
do you mean the jumps etc, or the rythm o-o?, either way I'll see what I can do to fix it up.
Thanks for the mod CDFA~ (^.^)/
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