1. Another (5 stars, 816 notes)
2. Beginner (1.95 stars, 155 notes)
3. Easy (3.24 stars, 203 notes)
4. Hard (5 stars, 472 notes)
5. Hyper (5 stars, 741 notes)
6. Normal (4.71 stars, 309 notes)

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476,336,113677,6,0,B|450:238|326:224|269:264|256:320|254:369|209:410|70:403|36:304,1,540

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Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod

[Another]
00:00:344 - suggest volume - 70% change to 60%
00:26:843 (7) - slightly move right so not overlapped by 00:26:010 (3) - fixed
00:34:927 (5,1) - slightly increase spacing to 0.2x. it will make the consistency.
01:16:677 (3,4,5) - and simillar: I don't quite like this tiny spacing as it is not so fun. maybe stacking ar spacing x0.3 is better.
01:20:677 (3,4) - 3 align to 4's flow
01:50:260 (2) - move to x:285 y:58 so it's on 3's track.
01:53:677 (1) - not so smooth. try this: fixed

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476,336,113677,6,0,B|450:238|326:224|269:264|256:320|254:369|209:410|70:403|36:304,1,540

02:15:010 (3,4,5,6) - I think this spacing is tricky, especially in a heavy overlapping situation.

[Hard]
01:04:927 (2,3,4) - suggest manual stack. currently the notes are under slider track which makes them hard to read.
01:15:010 (1,2) - I think 1/1 sliders suit better
02:15:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is too tricky for hard imo.

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This pattern or all sliders should be better.
02:24:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 3 under 2, 5 under 4, 7 under 6. this reads better.

[Normal]
suggest AR+1, since you have 180 bpm 1/2

[Easy]
suggest AR+1

Good luck~

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

Easy

01:41:676 (3) - unsnapped -aimod fix

Normal

just 1 thing, it will be better if you add NCs on every 2nd long white tick fix

Hard

01:46:843 (5) - add finish on end like you did on 00:45:510 (4) - this fix
01:52:510 (2) - maybe need finish fix
01:57:677 (1,2) - how about placing notes in 1/1 beat? i mean like this puush has broken uguu well pm to me if you don't know what is this mean be cause of my bad english lol
02:30:509 (2) - clap fix

Insane

00:10:843 (10) - maybe need clap here? fix
01:16:010 - 01:16:093 - 01:16:177 - not used green lines I forgot volume setting
01:57:455 (6,7) - i'd rather stack these notes with 01:57:343 (5) - this, since they are look like 1/4 beat and maybe can cause confusing little ( i know you didn't stack 02:00:121 (9) - this too but this feels fine )
02:38:843 (5) - missed clap? fixed

maybe you can delete some useless green lines on low diffs

but still awesome diffs with awesome song lol good luck~

ts8zs wrote:

[Another]
Why don't use CS4?
00:02:510 (8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/935899
00:04:177 (10) - 492,340?
00:05:177 (8,9) - change to a slider?
00:50:566 (8) - Ctrl+G
02:43:009 (4) - Ctrl+G
[Hard]
Nothing
[Normal]
Nothing
[Easy]
Nothing
This map is ready for rank:3

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on general, tags, etc.

[Easy]
02:14:343 (7,1) - This antijump is forbidden on Easy/Normal diffs. Newbies will easily click the (1) so earlier and break combo here. You can fix it doing like >>> http://puu.sh/47u4W.jpg <<< ^^

[Normal]
01:38:343 (4) - You could make it a bit curver, either as a blanket like >> http://puu.sh/47urK.jpg << or a curvy one pointing to the head of the next slider as >> http://puu.sh/47uuI.jpg <<
01:50:343 (2) - Make the curve a bit more evident by moving the middle point by 1 grid up.
♥ 02:03:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Good and nice button panel and zigzag flow ♥
02:42:343 (1) - Why not silence the slider's end (a pair of muting green timing lines around the slider end should be sufficient)

[Hard] * a.k.a. Insane!
01:55:260 (2,3,4) - You can make a improvement here unifying pattern and sound effects... just silencing the end of these sliders.
01:56:593 (2,3,4) - ^
02:00:593 (2,3,4) - ^
02:01:927 (2,3,4) - ^
02:13:010 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:42:343 (3) - Same idea as [Normal] diff.

[Another] * a.k.a. Extra
♥ Nice