1. Hard (3.58 stars, 377 notes)
2. Normal (2.17 stars, 214 notes)

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
02:33:251 ~ 02:43:464 - standard soft whistle seems to fit this part, maybe try it? i tried it
03:44:741 ~ end - ^
not sure I get all the volume changes 0.0 it seems to work fine, but some parts aren't consistent, example [Hard] diff 02:14:581 (4) - is 18% but 03:28:624 (2) - is 20%. also, for example here 00:41:868 (3) - is a 6% and I can't find another 6% in the map @_@
try to make it consistent plz, using increments like 5%, 10%, 15% etc. could help Well.. i didn't think about those are been problem.. so i fixed Thx
to clarify, the actual volume changes are a good idea so definitely keep them , just make sure the volumes you're using stay consistent through the map. o.o

[Normal]
00:58:783 (1) - remove NC, no need for a combo with just 1 note in it Yes~
[Hard]
02:27:347 (2) - stack properly plz Yes~
02:43:464 (4,1) - switch NC for vocal Yes~
02:58:464 (4) - maybe CTRL+J? imo before is good at looking
03:54:953 (1) - if you listen at 25% you'll find this slider is off 0.0 not sure what to suggest instead though i fixed at 5% just piano's voice
nice map
sorry I couldn't find more cause it's an easier map > <
star ~ good luck

bigfrog wrote:

hello
from my queue

[General]
i think you can used grid 4 to compose,it'll be more tidy

[Normal]
00:33:251(1) more bend.just like 00:34:209(2) OK!
01:01:336(1) x436 y200 OK!
01:26:868(1) not surround perfect OK!
02:05:166(1) try this

before is looked good imo:D
03:10:273(3,4,1) this

i didn't know which is different with before..
03:29:421(1) stack 03:26:868(1)'s tail OK!

[Hard]
00:47:294(5) x96 y192 OK!
00:49:847(1) try not to let this slide there are so many turning points? um.. i like this. so didn't change:3
01:12:187(2) x228 y224 ~~..~~
01:17:294(2) try this

i like the before.
01:27:507(2) surround 01:26:868(1)'s tail ~~..~~
01:33:251(2,3,4,5,6) this

~~..~~
01:36:443(2) stack 01:34:528(6) and move the next note to correct place (1.40x) also try to make a triangle(just my suggestion) ~~..~~
01:49:528(4) x372 y212 ~~..~~
02:10:273(3) two grid right OK!
02:56:230(1) try to surround 02:54:634(2) head perfect and let 02:57:187(2) still stack this slider tail
02:57:507(3,4) try this please

03:11:549(1) more bend just like 03:12:507(3) or opposite OK!
03:18:890(3) one grid right
03:45:379(3,4) parallel 03:44:741(1,2) previous is good to me
03:54:953(1) i think it's 1/4 beat slider... um.. i heard 1/3

that all!!
this is a good song

Good Luck!!~~

HelloSCV wrote:

Normal

안쓰는 초록색선을 빼면 여긴 딱히 없네요 많이 없앴습니다~

Hard

00:10:273 (1) - 여기도 휘슬 들어가면 좋을꺼 같아요 Fixed
01:44:102 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요 Fixed
01:57:507 (4) - 뉴콤보 추가 Fixed
02:32:453 (1,1) - 여기 뉴콤보는 딱히 필요해보이진 않아요 Fixed
03:36:762 (3) - HP바에 아주살짝 닿는거 같아요 Fixed
03:54:953 (1) - 리핏은 필요없는거 같아요Fixed

개인적으로 히트사운드들이 소리가 너무 작은거 같아요, 노래 분위기 살리시려는건 알겠는데 그래도 볼륨을 조금 높이시는게 어떨까요?
노말은 모든라인 5%씩올렸구요, 하드는 그대로 냅뒀어요 !~ 힛사는 거둘뿐이라고 생각해서요.. 노래에 맞춰줘야한다구 생각해요.

Natsu wrote:

HI~ enlxodutls from my random queue

General:

1. Timing is wrong the correct BPM is 108.17 (you will need to resnap all and remake some sliders) i request timing check to expert and he said bpm is between 94 ~ 94.005..
2. Remove Rizuka from tags is already on the artist Fixed!
3. all that kiai fountains are not rankables cuz are unnecesary and the song dont fit with they plas remove they (all the green lines inside kiai) also the others are in my opinion also unecesary since they just up and down the volume in 1% or 2% more maybe remove and use a consistent volume in all the song? around 30% in normal parts and 40% on kiai is good enought volume has been fixed stable. and added kiai times before the previous part.

Hard

1. I agree with your hp5 but ar8 dont fit this map use AR 7 Also OD5 dont fit use OD6 did't up OD6 but change AR to 7
2. 00:29:421 this slider shape look really bad seriously try to make it symetrical.
3. 00:32:294 (6) - this other shape look bad too try to make it just with 3 points also you can try to stack the tail with 00:30:698 just for better map design
4. 00:34:528 (5,1) - how a player can notices this on first play since the overlap is very bad try to 00:35:804 get dont hidden by previous slider make it clean the music is so relaxin and this pattern dont fit with it
5. 00:49:847 remove whistle and finish on the tail fit alot
6. 01:08:996 add a circle here then start the spinner 01:09:155 in this form you gonna follow better the melody :3
7. 01:42:507 maybe move this since look really bad cuz previous slider is touching it :/
8. 01:31:975 finish head something is strange for me ..
9. 01:49:528 (4,1) - try to stack (4) on 1 tail gonna look and play better
10. 02:57:507 (3,4) - this is not rankable since the 3 slider is overlaping almost all the next o.o try another pattern plz or just up (4) maybe x:264 y:112
11. 03:00:698 (1,2) - stack they 2 better actually is really confuse to get accurate in to it cuz the distance you use is not the best i suggest you use the correctly distance or stack they second sound and play alot better also follow the music
12. 03:10:273 (3,1) - same overlap here look really confuse try to make this clean

all the circles and sliders has the potential of music's curve and i fit them right(just my opinion). so i didn't fix many but after seeing your mod somes are fixed to looked good

Hard:

1. AR6 dont fit this diff use AR 5 or AR 4 maybe 5 gonna be fine Fixed to change 5
2. this diff got alot of inconsistencys in space try to use the same distance in all the beats since this is a normal should be in that way
3. 00:51:124 finish on the head i dont think the finish is not fit in this music..
4. 01:31:975 ^ this either
5. 00:47:932 (3,4) - plz dont hidde circles in the slider in normal/easy diffs new players cant read this Fixed!

Im sorry for the short mod but i cant mod this properly with a wrong timing if you are unsure about my bpm you can ask a timing expert if you have some questions you can ask me ingame :3

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~enlxodutls


[Normal]



AI모드 확인해주세요! 체크완료

[Hard]



이것도 AI모드 확인점!! 체크완료

00:35:804 (1) - 가리는것같아요 .. 바꿔주시면 좋겟어요 .. 가리지 않게.. 의도해서 넣은거라..

00:51:443 (2) - ^ ( 위와같음 ) 위와같음

02:27:347 (2,3) - 겹치는것 보다는 펴주는게 더 좋을꺼같아요!! Fixed!

02:57:187 (2) - x144 y136 으로 해줘도 좋을것 같아요! Fixed!

03:11:549 (1) - x320 y192 겹치는것같으니 이쪽으로 옴겨주시는게 더 좋아보여요!! 다음노트들과도 어울린거같구요!! Fixed!

03:30:379 (5) - 멈춰있으면 플레이하다가 놀랄꺼같네요 .. 가만히있는거보단 이동시켜주는게 더좋을꺼같음! 잘어울리는거같아서ㅋ

1. 00:29:421 (2) - S:C3보다 C1으로해서 시작부분에 휘슬 넣긔
2. 00:49:847 (1,2) - 1번 보다 2번에 뉴콤보?
3. 01:29:421 (1) - 이런 모양으로
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:36:443 (2) - S:C1의 클랩이 나아보입니다
5. 02:16:655 (2) - 슬라이더 포인트들이 기괴하군요^^
6. 02:31:975 (2) - 갑작스런 휘슬소리, 쬐금 어색하네요

1. 01:12:187 (2) - 애로우에다가 S:C3의 히트사운드를 넣긔
2. 01:36:443 (2) - S:C1 의 휘슬
3. 03:00:060 (5) - 휘슬
4. 03:00:698 (1) - 클랩
5. 03:21:762 (5) - 휘슬이 갑작스러워요 휘슬 제거
6. 03:25:592 (3) - 뉴콤보
7. 03:46:017 - 노트추가?

pife1 wrote:

Hi:
Could silence the sliders: http://puu.sh/47h8I.wav Thanks i put them in
In the Normal:
Circle size: 3 Ok.
01:01:336 (1,2) - Here look a bit weird because first we have a curved slider 01:01:336 (1), but suddenly appears 01:02:613 (2), also the two are not aligned but there's no problem imo..
Image

02:38:358 (1,2) - Could change these sliders some like: i like the form of windmill
Image

And 02:40:911 (1,2) - Could change these sliders some like: ^
Image

02:43:464 (1) - also please i fixed the tick but did not remove.
Image

In Hard
00:52:400 (4) - Move to X:192 Y:296 i tried but i find no reason to fix..
00:54:953 (4) - Move to X:480 Y:208 either.
00:56:709 (2,3) - I suggest replace these notes for a straight slider because 00:56:709 (2) you use a blue note and 00:57:187 (3) use the red note, and that tend precipitate to hit the next note, don't forget the snap they will hit easily at twice play :p
00:57:985 (2,3) - ^
00:59:262 (2,3) - ^
01:00:538 (2,3) - ^
01:56:709 (2,3) - ^
02:33:570 (2) - Move to x:370 y:93 i tried but i find no reason to fix..
02:33:890 (3) - ^ x:300 y:162
02:34:209 (4) - ^ x:230 y:231
03:01:336 (2) - ^ x:117 y:234

In the coordinates you can use the shif to align them

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.


[General]
(I find the beatmap and song good, so I shot a star.) Gooooood XD Thx!
(The name of the MP3 file is ".mp3"?..) oOps.. and i must change it?
(So many timming points..) :p
(This map is 4 min long, consider add a break time somewhere.) i cant find that time ..

[Normal]
Well done!
(Circle Size +1?) i fixed it prev mod
01:02:613 (2) - (I find the slider here not beautiful, try use easier Bezier-curve slider with 2 white points.) this slider.. make trouble many time,, so i fixed new slider and note
01:17:932 (3) - Split it? no reason..

[Hard]
(Use more sliders instead of circles.)
(OD-1?)
00:51:443 (2) - Do not hide object under slider. i file this prev note 00:49:209 (3) -

Good map, good luck.

TaMul wrote:

m4m~
곡이 너무 졸려요 D:

[Normal]

1. 00:29:421 (2) - S:C3보다 C1으로해서 시작부분에 휘슬 넣긔 Ok.
2. 00:49:847 (1,2) - 1번 보다 2번에 뉴콤보? Ok.
3. 01:29:421 (1) - 이런 모양으로 이미지가업숑ㅋㅋ 대신 다른슬라이더로 바꿨어요
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:36:443 (2) - S:C1의 클랩이 나아보입니다 hm..
5. 02:16:655 (2) - 슬라이더 포인트들이 기괴하군요^^ Ok.
6. 02:31:975 (2) - 갑작스런 휘슬소리, 쬐금 어색하네요 Ok.

[Hard]

1. 01:12:187 (2) - 애로우에다가 S:C3의 히트사운드를 넣긔 Ok.
2. 01:36:443 (2) - S:C1 의 휘슬 Ok.
3. 03:00:060 (5) - 휘슬 별로인거같아여
4. 03:00:698 (1) - 클랩 ^
5. 03:21:762 (5) - 휘슬이 갑작스러워요 휘슬 제거 Ok.
6. 03:25:592 (3) - 뉴콤보 Ok.
7. 03:46:017 - 노트추가? 이상하기두하구.. 앞뒤랑 통일시켜갈래요

mintong89 wrote:

hi from M4M

Black: Normal suggestion
Red: Unrankable issue / Highly Suggestion

[General]
Honestly i think timing is wrong, in this cases you need a expert timing'er to check timing.
At your folder i found a hitsound call "soft-hitfinish 2.wav", if you have use it should be rename as "soft-hitfinish2.wav" fixed!
Background should not as png-format.[/color] i knew but should i change that?
Close "Letterbox during breaks" please, it's doesn't fit at this maps. i don't know what is this..

[Hard]

00:29:421 (5) - it will more pretty if you make slider like this. Ok.

SPOILER

00:31:017 (2,6) - make a blanket? hm..
00:37:400 (6) - this slider's pattern looks ugly, consider make new one. Ok.
00:44:102 (3) - ^ Ok.
00:52:719 (5) - ^ Ok.
00:55:273 (5) - ^ Ok.
01:16:655 (1,2) - make this will looks more pretty and clean? Ok.

SPOILER

01:26:868 (1,2,3) - if you make like this it will be have a better flow, don't always make same spacing please.hm..

SPOILER

01:31:975 (1) - again, i think these slider is little ugly. use current 3-point curve slider? Ok.
01:42:507 (1) - make it far a bit with 01:40:911 (3) - please, it's almost stacked and looks messy. Ok.
01:49:847 (1,2) - these shape didn't same or don't fit each other. Ok.

the placement of this maps is little messy and weird, but hitsound is great.

Normal is fine for me
Good Luck!

pife1 wrote:

No kudos for this:
Talking of hard, to find these coordinates you have to active the snap grid and snap distance in editor, then choose the object and keep press "shift" move with the mouse and appear a white transparent line, between of the objects
Image:

vahn10 wrote:

offset:-21 from the original offset

Great it's perfect
Thanks!

MetalJo wrote:

~ Mod from Queue ~

[Normal]

01:03:869 (1) - Don't like the curve of that slider. A normal curve is looking way better here. ok.
01:06:422 (1,2) - Replace (2) with an X and Y flipped version of (1) and CTRL+G it so taht it looks like this: changed other flow

Screenshot

01:39:932 (1) - Redesign that slider. Don't like that curve. ok.
02:40:890 (1) - This slider overlaps a little bit with the one before (2), put a little distance there. (There are more of these but I think i don't have to note them all) all is same. before (1),(2) and this(1),(2)
03:26:847 (1) - Imo opinion not so good looking slider o:


[Hard]

00:34:507 (5) - I don't like the look of this slider..it looks creative but not that good.
00:39:613 (5) - Same thing
02:58:443 (4) - Move this one a little but downwards.
03:00:677 (1) - Map the blue tick before this one. How about a short slider from blue to white?

03:05:624 (2,3,1) - Don't like how (2) and (1) overlap:

Screenshot

I know the silhouette of (2) is just seen in the Edit but it's still looking weird in gameplay in my opinion.

03:08:975 (1) - Change (1) to something that isn't touching (3)
03:13:124 (1,2,3,4) - Change the Distances.
03:54:932 (1) - As AiMod already pointed out: The end of the slider isn't snapped. there's no problem..

[That's it for this mod. I hope it helps you and good luck with you mapset ]

1. I tried to search something about this song on internet but I found nothing. I just found the artist's name but are you sure that the song's name is correct? If yes could you show me the source where you got it? Thanks ;3
   
2. What about to use this whistle http://puu.sh/4r3zw.rar for sounds you can hear on 01:17:911 / 01:20:464 and so on, same for sliderticks on 01:30:677

1. 00:28:124 (1,2) - The new rhythm is starting from the next downbeat. According to this I would reduce the spacing between this two sliders till 0.40 like you did for the whole previous part. 1.40x spacing should start from 00:30:677 (1) when the rhythm changes.
2. 00:37:698 (3,1) - I don't agree about using this stack to be honest. It could confuse player being the easiest diff of the mapset because all the previous (and next as well) parts, are mapped in 1/2. According to this, I highly suggest you to unstack these two elements to avoid confusion.
3. 00:40:571 (1,2) - I didn't get this rhythm, it's totally different from the rest. This slider should start 1/2 late (on the next downbeat) moving the next (2) circle as well of 1/2 later on the timeline. What about to use this rhythm instead puu.sh/4r3q6.jpg fits much better this part
4. 00:51:103 (1) - Finish on this slider's head? IMO it sounds pretty nice
5. 01:39:932 (1) - Ugly slider, make something better pls
6. 01:57:166 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it on (2)
7. 02:12:805 (2) - New combo to keep consistency with 02:15:358 (1)
8. 02:15:358 (1,2) - I would curve the slider (2) in a different way because it's covered by the previous slider and it's ugly and it doesn't flow well.
9. 02:33:230 (1) - SC2 clap like the next 02:35:783 (1)
10. 02:58:443 (3) - This slider follows nothing and drum sound on reverse arrow you used has no sense to exist. The drum sound should go on the first slidertick so this rhythm would fix your problem actually: http://puu.sh/4rkzJ.jpg
11. 03:16:315 (3) - Again, this slider sounds bad. Use a single circle here and create an 1/2 slider on the next downbeat, I mean at 03:16:634
12. 03:24:294 (2) - New combo, I already explained why on the previous part above

1. 00:34:507 (5,1) - That circle is totally covered by the previous slider and it means it's unrankable actually. Fix it.
2. 00:34:507 (5) - There should be a circle here, and the slider should start on the next 1/2 tick with an 1/1 slider like you did for 00:31:954 (5,6). Obviously this is the same thing for 00:39:613 (5) and so on.
3. 00:40:890 - There should be a note here on this downbeat
4. 01:47:273 (1,2) - What is rhis random sudden jump? Same for 02:52:060 (2,3)
5. 02:22:220 (2) - This circle fits nothing, vocal sound is on the next white tick
6. 02:58:443 (4) - There is drum sound on the next downbeat. Move this circle on the next 1/2 tick (downbeat) removing the repeat and adding a circle on 02:58:443
7. 03:16:315 (1) - Same here.
8. 03:21:422 (4,5) - This random jump is unconfortable to play. I would avoid it honestly, I don't see a reason to make a jump here

Chewin wrote:

hello

General

1. I tried to search something about this song on internet but I found nothing. I just found the artist's name but are you sure that the song's name is correct? If yes could you show me the source where you got it? Thanks ;3 it is still being informed on http://www.voltagenation.com/planet/ i also know about Japanese and it's not correct word. but this song was named "うつくし"
   
2. What about to use this whistle http://puu.sh/4r3zw.rar for sounds you can hear on 01:17:911 / 01:20:464 and so on, same for sliderticks on 01:30:677 ok i'll try it

Normal

• ◾00:28:124 (1,2) - The new rhythm is starting from the next downbeat. According to this I would reduce the spacing between this two sliders till 0.40 like you did for the whole previous part. 1.40x spacing should start from 00:30:677 (1) when the rhythm changes. it because there's no spacing to persist steady distance snap. that's why i put x0.4 but this two slider has spacing that i can locate correct distance
  ◾00:37:698 (3,1) - I don't agree about using this stack to be honest. It could confuse player being the easiest diff of the mapset because all the previous (and next as well) parts, are mapped in 1/2. According to this, I highly suggest you to unstack these two elements to avoid confusion. ok!
  ◾00:40:571 (1,2) - I didn't get this rhythm, it's totally different from the rest. This slider should start 1/2 late (on the next downbeat) moving the next (2) circle as well of 1/2 later on the timeline. What about to use this rhythm instead puu.sh/4r3q6.jpg fits much better this part
  ◾00:51:103 (1) - Finish on this slider's head? IMO it sounds pretty nice ok!
  ◾01:39:932 (1) - Ugly slider, make something better pls ok!
  ◾01:57:166 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it on (2) ok!
  ◾02:12:805 (2) - New combo to keep consistency with 02:15:358 (1) ok!
  ◾02:15:358 (1,2) - I would curve the slider (2) in a different way because it's covered by the previous slider and it's ugly and it doesn't flow well. ok!
  ◾02:33:230 (1) - SC2 clap like the next 02:35:783 (1) ok!
  ◾02:58:443 (3) - This slider follows nothing and drum sound on reverse arrow you used has no sense to exist. The drum sound should go on the first slidertick so this rhythm would fix your problem actually: http://puu.sh/4rkzJ.jpg this song.. imo has many dragging sounds.. so i displayed those sounds.. should i fix it? if yes you are, i'll fix it
  ◾03:16:315 (3) - Again, this slider sounds bad. Use a single circle here and create an 1/2 slider on the next downbeat, I mean at 03:16:634
  ◾03:24:294 (2) - New combo, I already explained why on the previous part above ok!

Hard

1. 00:34:507 (5,1) - That circle is totally covered by the previous slider and it means it's unrankable actually. Fix it. ok!
2. 00:34:507 (5) - There should be a circle here, and the slider should start on the next 1/2 tick with an 1/1 slider like you did for 00:31:954 (5,6). Obviously this is the same thing for 00:39:613 (5) and so on.
3. 00:40:890 - There should be a note here on this downbeat
4. 01:47:273 (1,2) - What is rhis random sudden jump? Same for 02:52:060 (2,3) fixed 01:47:273 (1,2) - but 02:52:060 (2,3) i think this is downbeat that's reason for jump
5. 02:22:220 (2) - This circle fits nothing, vocal sound is on the next white tick changed other rhythm
6. 02:58:443 (4) - There is drum sound on the next downbeat. Move this circle on the next 1/2 tick (downbeat) removing the repeat and adding a circle on 02:58:443
7. 03:16:315 (1) - Same here.
8. 03:21:422 (4,5) - This random jump is unconfortable to play. I would avoid it honestly, I don't see a reason to make a jump here ok!

That's it, I hope it helped you.
This mapset still needs some more work, good luck with it!