[General]
Romanized phrases should show how it is pronounced, by which i mean Source should be "Genei o Kakeru Taiyou".
- I'm not 100% sure about this, cause "wo" is way more familiar than "o". I don't mind at all even if you'd like to keep it unchanged.
[Insane]
Slider tick rate 2 is kinda pointless in this difficulty and it isn't consistant throughout difficulties.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:30:975 (1,2) - Add more notes or use shorter sliders for this section? corresponding to 00:33:344 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
01:13:291 (3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow good imo because of its angle. How about rearranging it like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106295601:21:581 (3) - Remove this finish and add it to 01:21:502 (2) - instead? A finish on a blue tick doesn't sound good to me.
01:22:133 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream curved and it'll flow better imo.
01:24:975 (6) - Feels too close to the previous slider to me, a jump here would be great.
それと短い譜面だからOD+1してもいいんじゃないかなーと思ったり、好みなのでお任せしますが。
[Hard]
The video isn't played in this difficulty.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:18:186 (5,6,1) - Suggested rhythm:
http://puu.sh/50J0v.jpg by pausing here the guitar sound will be more emphasized imo.
00:29:081 (3,4,5) - Scale the spacing up a little so it makes a small jump? it fits better with the melody and instruments imo. For example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106301701:02:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is somewhat boring and repetitive to me because all of them are 1/2. How about using more 1/4 or 1/1 in order to diversify it? Same for 01:05:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
01:22:765 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'd remove all of these finishes if i were you because it's way too loud. And also by doing this the original melody can be more emphasized imo.
[Normal]
00:19:291 - Add a note here for a better transition and flow. Complicating rhythm before new stanza would be nice imo.
00:42:344 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/1 and add a note to where the slider end originally was in order to follow the vocal which should be emphasized the most in the chorus section.
00:49:291 (4) - Looks too random imo. How about rearranging it like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063054[Easy]
00:45:502 (5) - This slider should be more curved to blanket the next slider better.
http://puu.sh/50Jzd.jpg01:10:133 (1,2) - Each of these sliders should be shortened by 1/1 beat respectively imo because they are conflicting with the vocal.
Call me back for recheck!