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IOSYS - Alice Dere
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BPM 128
Сделано очень хорошо. Классный скин.
На некоторых местах что-то с таймингом...
Много место без хитсаундов вообще... Но можно так и оставить.
[Hard]
Довольно простой хард.
00:40:79 (11) - Новое комбо.
00:53:95 (1) - Убери новое комбо?
00:55:83 (9) - Хлопок?
01:00:53 (11) - Я думаю, что слайдер должен заканчиваться сдесь 01:02:09 (1/6)
01:02:88 (12) - Новое комбо.
01:03:23 (x) - Ноту сюда?
01:04:29 (4) - Новое комбо.
01:47:34 (1,2,1,2) - Свистки?
01:51:10 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:53:68 (x) - Ноту?
01:54:85 (1,2,1,2) - Свистки?
02:15:47 (8) - Новое комбо?
02:16:41 (1) - Хлопок?
02:17:35 (1) - ^
02:18:29 (4) - Свисток?
02:32:85 (1,2) - Спейсинг?
02:37:78 (1) - Финиш?
02:42:24 (3) - Хлопок.
02:42:95 (5) - Хлопок на конец слайдера.
03:04:21 - С этого момента классно сделал.
03:04:93 (4) - Свисток.
03:05:87 (4) - ^
03:07:75 (8) - ^
03:08:71 (4) - ^
03:09:65 (4) - ^
03:11:53 (8) - ^
03:12:47 (4) - ^
03:13:41 (4) - ^
03:15:29 (8) - ^
Звезда.
Сделано очень хорошо. Классный скин.
На некоторых местах что-то с таймингом...
Много место без хитсаундов вообще... Но можно так и оставить.
[Hard]
Довольно простой хард.
00:40:79 (11) - Новое комбо.
00:53:95 (1) - Убери новое комбо?
00:55:83 (9) - Хлопок?
01:00:53 (11) - Я думаю, что слайдер должен заканчиваться сдесь 01:02:09 (1/6)
01:02:88 (12) - Новое комбо.
01:03:23 (x) - Ноту сюда?
01:04:29 (4) - Новое комбо.
01:47:34 (1,2,1,2) - Свистки?
01:51:10 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:53:68 (x) - Ноту?
01:54:85 (1,2,1,2) - Свистки?
02:15:47 (8) - Новое комбо?
02:16:41 (1) - Хлопок?
02:17:35 (1) - ^
02:18:29 (4) - Свисток?
02:32:85 (1,2) - Спейсинг?
02:37:78 (1) - Финиш?
02:42:24 (3) - Хлопок.
02:42:95 (5) - Хлопок на конец слайдера.
03:04:21 - С этого момента классно сделал.
03:04:93 (4) - Свисток.
03:05:87 (4) - ^
03:07:75 (8) - ^
03:08:71 (4) - ^
03:09:65 (4) - ^
03:11:53 (8) - ^
03:12:47 (4) - ^
03:13:41 (4) - ^
03:15:29 (8) - ^
Звезда.
[Hard]:
00:34:05 (1) - Suggestion: Perhaps reverse selection this so the cursor will be facing up instead of down. It'll not interrupt the flow or trail of the combo pattern that way. :3
01:02:88 (12,13) - You can easily make this a jump. (If you want) Also, new combo at 12?
01:04:29 (14) - New combo.
02:32:85 (1,2) - You can easily make this a jump. (If you want)
04:22:79 (1) - Place on white tick ahead?
04:41:74 (17) - New combo. Storyboard is cute~
Watch out for the length of the song. You might get a really, really high maximum score. Songs shouldn't really be this long...but that's okay. :<
You should some difficulty action, just like that one jumps part. That was cool. ^^
I don't think you need all those timing sections. The other Alice > Dere map by Nya has only one timing section, for example. I don't believe IOSYS songs have strange timings anyway. Try tieff's 128~
Star.
00:34:05 (1) - Suggestion: Perhaps reverse selection this so the cursor will be facing up instead of down. It'll not interrupt the flow or trail of the combo pattern that way. :3
01:02:88 (12,13) - You can easily make this a jump. (If you want) Also, new combo at 12?
01:04:29 (14) - New combo.
02:32:85 (1,2) - You can easily make this a jump. (If you want)
04:22:79 (1) - Place on white tick ahead?
04:41:74 (17) - New combo. Storyboard is cute~
Watch out for the length of the song. You might get a really, really high maximum score. Songs shouldn't really be this long...but that's okay. :<
You should some difficulty action, just like that one jumps part. That was cool. ^^
I don't think you need all those timing sections. The other Alice > Dere map by Nya has only one timing section, for example. I don't believe IOSYS songs have strange timings anyway. Try tieff's 128~
Star.
Both difficulties play great. My only real comment is that some parts in Hard are barren of hitsounds. You might want to see about adding a few more here and there to keep it interesting throughout the entire map.
Good maps! Since this is in WIP, I take it you're doing more difficulties. I look forward to those, too!
Starred!
Good maps! Since this is in WIP, I take it you're doing more difficulties. I look forward to those, too!
Starred!
Offset: 7991?
I'm pretty sure it's a bit early, but I can't precisely get by how much. That's the offset I'm getting.
I'm pretty sure it's a bit early, but I can't precisely get by how much. That's the offset I'm getting.
cause im not good at modding i may not find much stuff...
[Hard]
02:05:64 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is different if u look at 02:10:79 (1,2,3,4,5)
and a few spinners may be a little to long (just my opionion)
Really good anyway.
Have a Star
[Hard]
02:05:64 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is different if u look at 02:10:79 (1,2,3,4,5)
and a few spinners may be a little to long (just my opionion)
Really good anyway.
Have a Star
Suki desu!!! Nyan :3
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im sure you know you need an Easy diff too so im not gonna bug you on that
[Hard]
00:13:61 (4) - stacking
01:53:92 (2) - stacking
02:45:25 (1) - move 1/4 earlier
04:37:98 (9) - new combo
i dont agree with the kiai
04:41:73 (17) - new combo
[tieff]
overmapped much? ah well
00:57:43 (6) - alignment
01:08:21 (2,3) - sounds/feels bad
02:21:57 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]
00:13:61 (4) - stacking
01:53:92 (2) - stacking
02:45:25 (1) - move 1/4 earlier
04:37:98 (9) - new combo
i dont agree with the kiai
04:41:73 (17) - new combo
[tieff]
overmapped much? ah well
00:57:43 (6) - alignment
01:08:21 (2,3) - sounds/feels bad
02:21:57 (2,3) - ^
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Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [tieff's Beat].osu
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [tieff's Beat].osu
Topic Starter
Thanks for stars and help.Fix.
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Kirby's Easy].osu
I'll handle all other SB changes later. I'm pretty sure we need to have that Danger! Jumping! part exclusive to [Hard].
I'll handle all other SB changes later. I'm pretty sure we need to have that Danger! Jumping! part exclusive to [Hard].
Replace your current things with the following attachments.
Now your storyboard is exclusive to certain difficulties~
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Kirby's Easy].osu
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Hard].osu
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]).osb
Now your storyboard is exclusive to certain difficulties~
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Kirby's Easy].osu
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Hard].osu
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]).osb
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star～ ( ´∀｀)つ ☆
Topic Starter
<3 Nyaaa~ Thanks you!orioncomet wrote:
star～ ( ´∀｀)つ ☆
Waw, it was very cool, creative Hits! *-*
Could put the video too, would be nice! xD
go star!!
Could put the video too, would be nice! xD
go star!!
Fixed Burai Sliders.
You fixed the storyboard, right? :3
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Kirby's Easy].osu
You fixed the storyboard, right? :3
Download: IOSYS - Alice Dere ([DBF]) [Kirby's Easy].osu
Hard:
Shorten this to where tieff's beat ends. Add more hitsounds, too. Large sections of the map have very little to none.
00:17:36 (5) - New combo.
00:18:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:21:11 (5) - New combo.
00:22:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:86 (4) - New combo.
00:25:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:28:61 (5) - New combo.
00:29:55 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:99 (9) - New combo.
00:40:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:74 (7) - New combo.
00:52:28 (14) - New combo.
00:56:27 (1) - Shorten to 1/1, new combo, add notes after.
01:03:30 (2) - Stack under 1 or fix spacing.
01:15:49 (2) - Remove.
01:20:17 (1) - Remove new combo. Not stacked properly?
01:21:11 (1) - Remove new combo. Not stacked properly?
01:48:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:59:55 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:02:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:24 (7) - New combo.
02:04:70 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:10:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:74 (7) - New combo.
02:15:49 (4) - New combo.
02:16:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:21:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:22:28 (11) - New combo.
02:23:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:24:86 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:26:50 (2) - New combo.
02:33:30 (2) - Stack under 1.
02:51:58 (1) - Remove new combo.
Shorten this to where tieff's beat ends. Add more hitsounds, too. Large sections of the map have very little to none.
00:17:36 (5) - New combo.
00:18:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:21:11 (5) - New combo.
00:22:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:86 (4) - New combo.
00:25:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:28:61 (5) - New combo.
00:29:55 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:99 (9) - New combo.
00:40:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:74 (7) - New combo.
00:52:28 (14) - New combo.
00:56:27 (1) - Shorten to 1/1, new combo, add notes after.
01:03:30 (2) - Stack under 1 or fix spacing.
01:15:49 (2) - Remove.
01:20:17 (1) - Remove new combo. Not stacked properly?
01:21:11 (1) - Remove new combo. Not stacked properly?
01:48:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:59:55 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:02:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:24 (7) - New combo.
02:04:70 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:10:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:74 (7) - New combo.
02:15:49 (4) - New combo.
02:16:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:21:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:22:28 (11) - New combo.
02:23:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:24:86 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:26:50 (2) - New combo.
02:33:30 (2) - Stack under 1.
02:51:58 (1) - Remove new combo.
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<3
Big bump but this is too awesome to be ignored
Kirby's
Really long for an easy but I guess that's not a big problem.. Also confusing spacing for new players, like
04:11:27 (1,1)
but no real matter.. I guess?
Hard
00:07:99 (1) - O.o this jump is weird!
00:17:36 (5,6) - I think all those sliders should be clapped at the end. Sounds good with the song :3
tieff
Jumps are incredibly weird but I really love this diff <3 hitsounds, well placed streams, all that.~~
Awesome.
Big bump but this is too awesome to be ignored
Kirby's
Really long for an easy but I guess that's not a big problem.. Also confusing spacing for new players, like
04:11:27 (1,1)
but no real matter.. I guess?
Hard
00:07:99 (1) - O.o this jump is weird!
00:17:36 (5,6) - I think all those sliders should be clapped at the end. Sounds good with the song :3
tieff
Jumps are incredibly weird but I really love this diff <3 hitsounds, well placed streams, all that.~~
Awesome.
Star
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Star'd
Star.
I really like the jumping section of Hard, but it wasn't as hard as I expected coming from such a warning..
I really like the jumping section of Hard, but it wasn't as hard as I expected coming from such a warning..
Topic Starter
Hi all, i remake hard. full.
also thanks for stars <3
also thanks for stars <3
Cute 