u's - START:DASH!! [Taiko]

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Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Rererecheck inner.
  1. 00:10:170 - suggest to add k...? its too closed. Remain unchanged to keep it consistent with the stand alone ddd k at 01:35:170 and 03:55:970 -

    About 01:46:370 - ~ 01:59:170 - comparing with 00:35:970 - ~ 00:48:770 - ,
    Its too airy dense. Agreed.

    1. 01:46:970 - , 01:47:770 - , add k the gap with 1st.
    2. 01:48:170 - add 1/4 triple ddk, same reason.
    3. 01:48:770 - change to d,01:49:070 - move to 01:48:670 - ? same reason.
    4. 01:49:370 - change k? small suggestion, plays better imo.
    1. 01:50:170 - add k , 01:50:970 - add d? same reason.
    2. 01:51:370 - add 1/4 triple.....ddk or kkk?
    1. 01:53:370 - , 01:54:170 - add k,
    2. 01:54:370 - change to d, 01:54:570 - add 1/4 triple ddk.
    3. 01:55:470 - remove and ,01:54:970 - add 1/4 triple... dkddd like 1st.
    4. 01:55:770 - change k, 01:56:270 - add k, 01:56:770 - remove? like 1st? fixed
  2. 00:45:470 (60,61) - change to...(remove, finisher)?
  3. 02:08:570 - add k, same 1st. and 02:08:270 - add k too? just small suggestion but it looks a bit bored 1/2 kkkk.
  4. 02:10:970 - add d, 02:11:170 - change to k? to make a similar dense like 1st. Its following the guitar...? maybe?
  5. 02:11:570 - change to k? the drum.. percussion sounds up.
  6. 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe change to 5plet ddkkd seems better?
    •  ※1st 00:59:370 (6,7,8) - k-d-k → 01:00:970 (14,15,16) - kkd
       ※2nd 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8,9) - ddkkd→ 02:11:370 (15,16,17) - ddk
  7. 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - add d? 3times 1/4 seems a bit bored, Its needed more power imo.
  8. 01:20:070 - , 02:30:470 - add d? same.

  9. 02:39:170 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - prefer imo the colors lol,
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676908 Done
  10. 03:49:770 - add d, 03:50:570 - add k , 03:50:970 (325,326) - change kk? same reason, and drums sounds noisy. It needs more power.

  11. 02:53:570 (1) - maybe seems better to put the circles.
    how about"K-dK-dK" ? fixed
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676869

  12. 03:10:970 - remove and from 03:10:370 - ,add 1/2 triple KDD? Changed something different to focus on the vocal and add variation.
  13. 03:11:170 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
    This is not enough to following the accompaniment . Suggest to no use the finish and focus the vocal?
    1. @Finishers: change to normal?
    2. @some kats: change to don?
      e.g. 03:11:370 - ,03:12:770 (102,103,104) - , 03:14:370 - , 03:15:970 - ?
  14. 03:18:770 - add d? the different sounds snare.
  15. 03:21:170 (133,134,135,136,137) - kkdkk? build up to next K-K-K. Good idea.
  16. 03:23:770 - add d...? maybe it plays better as single diff imo,
  17. 03:31:270 - , 03:40:870 - add d? same reason 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - .
Almost fixed with some additional changes to make the flow smoother. Thanks again :3
JUDYDANNY
Inner Oni improved a lot , and the set looks fine.
Ooooolder map revived as rank.
Bubbled~
Gezoda
about time lmfao

you came a long way from this boi
tasuke912
sorry for late :?

[ General]
  1. 00:05:770 - Taiko doesn't sound clear because of drums. I suggest adding a line (70~80%) here.


[ Futsuu]
  1. 02:41:570 (66,67) - should be removed for consistency with other kiais.


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:31:170 (97) - 02:41:570 (97,98) - 03:51:970 (295) - It seems like that vocals emphasize on upbeat rather than downbeat, so these 1/1 rhythms are kinda weird to me. I suggest removing them.


[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:770 - Change the hitsound volume as well as other difficulties.
  2. 00:07:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is questionable to me. Do you think it appropriate, Nardo?
  3. 01:30:770 (479) - 02:41:170 (323) - 03:51:570 (328) - Overemphasized notes
  4. 03:08:570 (89,90,91,92) - placing of finishers seems uncomfortable. no need normal notes there.

  5. 01:28:470 (466) - there is no drum sound.
  6. 02:38:870 (309) - ^
  7. 03:07:270 (80) - ^
  8. 03:48:870 (308) - ^
  9. 03:07:470 (82,83) - Color should be reversed considering drums.
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

sorry for late :?

[ General]
  1. 00:05:770 - Taiko doesn't sound clear because of drums. I suggest adding a line (70~80%) here. fixed


[ Futsuu]
  1. 02:41:570 (66,67) - should be removed for consistency with other kiais. fixed


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:31:170 (97) - 02:41:570 (97,98) - 03:51:970 (295) - It seems like that vocals emphasize on upbeat rather than downbeat, so these 1/1 rhythms are kinda weird to me. I suggest removing them. Alright.


[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:770 - Change the hitsound volume as well as other difficulties. Done.
  2. 00:07:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is questionable to me. Do you think it appropriate, Nardo? I think it is somewhat improvised by the mapper. Changed to something else in attempt to interpret the music better.
  3. 01:30:770 (479) - 02:41:170 (323) - 03:51:570 (328) - Overemphasized notes fixed
  4. 03:08:570 (89,90,91,92) - placing of finishers seems uncomfortable. no need normal notes there. ^

  5. 01:28:470 (466) - there is no drum sound. Deleted the note there.
  6. 02:38:870 (309) - ^ ^
  7. 03:07:270 (80) - ^ ^
  8. 03:48:870 (308) - ^ ^
  9. 03:07:470 (82,83) - Color should be reversed considering drums. fixed

    Additional changes have been made for the pattern from 03:49:770 to 03:51:170 -
Thanks for your mod tasuke~ :)
tasuke912
Re-bubbled!
JUDYDANNY
A little changed @Muzukashii and Inner Oni.
The set looks fine, ready!

Qualified!
bbj0920
holy :o
Akemi_Homura
Finally...! gratz~~! ><
Surono
old map demmmm, gratz XD
toara_fict
Finally...!!!!
Ankanogradiel
gratss
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