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Thanks for your mod~Lunaris Filia wrote:
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I'm Lunaris Filia, mapping beginner
I will do my bestOni00:09:570 d k d k fixed
00:53:170 d k d k d changed to d k d k k instead.
03:36:770 k fixedJik's Inner Oni00:15:170 delete
00:15:370 k d k d kkd ?
01:11:770 d
01:11:970 move to 01:12:170
01:44:770 I think this spinner is too short. fixed
02:47:970 k fixed
u's is so great!
Thanks for the check~Septembre wrote:
Oni : 00:08:170 (31) - out of rythm I think There is a sound.
and maybe add note here : 00:08:370 (32) -
No kudo
Thanks for your mod~neonat wrote:
Kantan
I think reducing the amount of finishes here in this difficulty would be better, especially the more denser areas, where there are consecutive 1/1 beats instead 1.5~2 beats apart, but other than that I felt that you should have had those impacts and finishes on 01:09:570 (9) - 02:19:970 (9) - 03:01:570 (59) - 03:30:370 (99) - instead Rearranged the use of finishes accordingly.
Futsuu
00:09:570 (16) - shift to 00:09:370 Hmm... I think the current position could result in a smoother flow.
00:15:970 (30) - shift to 00:15:770 - it lands better on the music here ^
01:20:970 (44) - k instead? Too many kats would lower the impact of the current ones, so it would be better to keep it as don.
01:34:370 (70) - shift to 01:34:170 same as 00:09:570 (16) -
01:40:770 (84) - ^ ^
03:01:570 (92) - finish fixed
03:55:170 (203) - shift to 03:54:970 same as 00:09:570 (16) -
04:01:570 (217) - ^ ^
Muzukashii
00:31:570 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - try dk k kd k, I think that works nicer The current pattern could follow the changes of vocal pitch in a way better imo.
Oni
03:02:770 (197) - d instead? fixed
Checking on behalf of Jikson as authorized.
Inner Oni
00:08:570 - should have an object here like a d so that the rhythm here does not feel incomplete, the rest of the song you made it along with the music, but this part feels detached Retained for break consistency as 00:07:770 -
00:15:170 (50) - shift to 00:15:370 and it can either be d or k fixed
00:27:170 (110) - change to k, have it differ from 00:26:770 (109) It would be better to keep the note consistent to the previous 00:23:970 (94) -
01:22:370 (430) - finish? fixed
02:09:370 (110) - I don't think the finish should be here, rather it should be at 02:08:770 (107) fixed
02:32:770 (246) - finish? fixed
03:43:170 (260) - ^ ^
Good Luck
JUDYDANNY wrote:
or JUST MY OPINION.
- No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.
Thanks for your mod JuDa~JUDYDANNY wrote:
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Inner Oni needs more improvement and consistency… orzSymbol meaning
| >> Little question and small suggestion.
>> idea lolor JUST MY OPINION.
- >> Normal suggestion.
Big text >> Strong suggestion.
>> Questionable imo.
>>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.
[Timing][Kantan]
Maybe rise up more +10%.
Vocal and accompaniment sounds loud. Done.[Futsuu]
- 00:59:770 (75,76,77,1) - how about? spinner > finish seems better with vocal finish ww. Hmm, I would prefer the current arrangement as the spinner could accompany the guitar starting from 01:01:370 -
- 1. 00:59:770 (75,76,77) - remove
2. 01:01:370 (1) - move to 00:59:770 - .
3. 01:01:370 - add note with finish!! and rise up the volume (80%?)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7384495- 02:10:170 (90,91,92,1) - same -> same as ^
If you agree, try to reconsider other diffs too.[Muzukashii]
- 03:13:770 - add k? seems lack of hit sound and the 2nd similar patterns appeared them. fixed
- 03:14:170 - ^? or 03:17:370 - remove? Applied the former.
- 03:18:170 (129) - , 03:19:770 - try to move ½ right (or 3/2 left?) . it seems better with play on-beat( white-tick lines). Hmm, retained to follow the vocals there.
00:22:370 (44,45,46) - , 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - only twice appeared 1/2 -triplet, but I think you can add more (to adjust the sounds pressure).
- 00:10:170 - add k , 00:16:570 - add d ? to enhance the trumpet. fixed
- 01:34:970 - , 01:41:370 - ^ ^
- 03:55:770 - , 04:02:170 - ^ ^
- 00:48:170 - add d? the role is like 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - . No change here for the spread.
- 01:58:570 - ^? ^
- 03:10:570 - ^? ^
[Oni]
- 03:50:270 - try add d? to enhance the more drum rolls. fixed
- 00:12:770 (39,40) - not K only? if changed , 00:12:170 - how about add d too? ^
- 01:37:570 (116,117) - ^ ^ and fixed 03:57:570 - as well.
[Inner Oni]
Seems ok to me.Good luck (¦3[___]
- 00:03:370 - change to d? to different sound with back-sound appeared. fixed
- 00:09:470 - remove? No change here to keep the complexity.
- 00:10:170 - add k? Retained to keep a consistent break like 00:10:970 and 00:11:770 -
- 00:22:170 (85,86,87) - maybe change to k-dd ,and 00:22:770 - change to k seems better with plays pitch. fixed
- 00:23:070 (90,91) - kd? 00:23:170 (91,92,93) - k-d-d seems … weired with vocal ^
- 00:38:670 - remove? feel a bit over. ^
- 00:41:870 (199,200) - dk? 00:41:970 (200,201) - k-d seems better with guitar tone. ^
- 00:46:970 - D? any sounds pitch are different from 00:45:570 - ,00:46:170 - . ^
- 01:00:770 - d seems better to make a balance with bass. ^
- 01:02:870 - maybe not bad to add k? fixed
- 01:15:670 - ^ I guess he wanted to keep the triplet dynamic, but fixed to make it more interesting to play.
- 01:04:770 - k? not lower vocal pitch. fixed
- 01:20:970 - change to d to make a balance? (different the sounds with any accompaniment sounds and vocals) ^
- 01:21:370 - ^? ^
- 01:23:770 - k the linked with 01:22:170 (430) - on vocal. ^
- 01:29:770 - maybe not bad to add k to make the smoother. ^
- 01:31:170 (483,484) - change to d? different from 2nd kiai colors. seems weird...uum..;; I think this is due to the difference in lyrics. Fixed.
JUDYDANNY wrote:
or JUST MY OPINION.
- No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.
- 02:13:270 - add k? fixed
- 02:15:170 - change k? ^
- 02:26:070 - add k? same as 01:15:670 -
- 02:31:370 (239,241) - change to d? fixed
- 02:34:170 - change to k? ^
- 02:41:970 (305,306) - change to k? ^
- 02:51:370 - remove ? feel a bit over. ^
- 02:57:170 - add k , 02:57:870 - move to 02:57:470 - , 02:57:670 - add k?
seems monotone ¼-triples, instrumental needs to make more variation imo. Nice.- and, 03:00:370 - add k , 03:00:570 - ~~~ make the 1/4 -5plot d-kkddk? ^
- and, 03:03:570 - add k, 03:03:870 - add d, 03:04:270 - change to k? ^
- 03:17:570 - change to normal d same as 03:19:170 - . Done.
- 03:25:570 - change to k? fixed
- 03:28:770 - change to d? ^
- 03:36:470 - add k. same as 01:15:670 -
- 03:41:770 (256) - ,03:42:170 - change to d. fixed
- 03:44:570 - change to k? ^
- 03:52:370 (326,327) - change to k? ^
- 03:55:970 - make a shorter spinner and , add ¼ triple ddd, same as Intro. ^
- 03:56:770 - , 03:57:570 - ,same. ^
- 03:58:170 - , 03:58:570 - add d. same as Intro. ^
- 04:00:370 (22,23,24,25) - change to ddk-”remove”. same as Intro. Okay.
Almost fixed with some additional changes to make the flow smoother. Thanks again :3JUDYDANNY wrote:
Rererecheck inner.suggestions
- 00:10:170 - suggest to add k...? its too closed. Remain unchanged to keep it consistent with the stand alone ddd k at 01:35:170 and 03:55:970 -
About 01:46:370 - ~ 01:59:170 - comparing with 00:35:970 - ~ 00:48:770 - ,
Its too airy dense. Agreed.
- 01:46:970 - , 01:47:770 - , add k the gap with 1st.
- 01:48:170 - add 1/4 triple ddk, same reason.
- 01:48:770 - change to d,01:49:070 - move to 01:48:670 - ? same reason.
- 01:49:370 - change k? small suggestion, plays better imo.
- 01:50:170 - add k , 01:50:970 - add d? same reason.
- 01:51:370 - add 1/4 triple.....ddk or kkk?
- →if apply kkk, 01:51:770 - add d , 01:51:970 (37,38,39) - change kkd?
http://puu.sh/v12NH/eb340763c9.jpg
→if apply ddk, 01:51:770 - add k , 01:52:270 - move to 01:51:870 - (+ change k too)?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676791
- 01:53:370 - , 01:54:170 - add k,
- 01:54:370 - change to d, 01:54:570 - add 1/4 triple ddk.
- 01:55:470 - remove and ,01:54:970 - add 1/4 triple... dkddd like 1st.
- 01:55:770 - change k, 01:56:270 - add k, 01:56:770 - remove? like 1st? fixed
- 00:45:470 (60,61) - change to...(remove, finisher)?
- 02:08:570 - add k, same 1st. and 02:08:270 - add k too? just small suggestion but it looks a bit bored 1/2 kkkk.
- 02:10:970 - add d, 02:11:170 - change to k? to make a similar dense like 1st. Its following the guitar...? maybe?
- 02:11:570 - change to k? the drum.. percussion sounds up.
- 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe change to 5plet ddkkd seems better?
- ※1st 00:59:370 (6,7,8) - k-d-k → 01:00:970 (14,15,16) - kkd
※2nd 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8,9) - ddkkd→ 02:11:370 (15,16,17) - ddk- 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - add d? 3times 1/4 seems a bit bored, Its needed more power imo.
- 01:20:070 - , 02:30:470 - add d? same.
- 02:39:170 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - prefer imo the colors lol,
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676908 Done- 03:49:770 - add d, 03:50:570 - add k , 03:50:970 (325,326) - change kk? same reason, and drums sounds noisy. It needs more power.
- 02:53:570 (1) - maybe seems better to put the circles.
how about"K-dK-dK" ? fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676869- 03:10:970 - remove and from 03:10:370 - ,add 1/2 triple KDD? Changed something different to focus on the vocal and add variation.
- 03:11:170 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
This is not enough to following the accompaniment . Suggest to no use the finish and focus the vocal?
- @Finishers: change to normal?
- @some kats: change to don?
e.g. 03:11:370 - ,03:12:770 (102,103,104) - , 03:14:370 - , 03:15:970 - ?- 03:18:770 - add d? the different sounds snare.
- 03:21:170 (133,134,135,136,137) - kkdkk? build up to next K-K-K. Good idea.
- 03:23:770 - add d...? maybe it plays better as single diff imo,
- 03:31:270 - , 03:40:870 - add d? same reason 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - .
Thanks for your mod tasuke~tasuke912 wrote:
sorry for late
[ General][ Futsuu]
- 00:05:770 - Taiko doesn't sound clear because of drums. I suggest adding a line (70~80%) here. fixed
[ Muzukashii]
- 02:41:570 (66,67) - should be removed for consistency with other kiais. fixed
[ Inner Oni]
- 01:31:170 (97) - 02:41:570 (97,98) - 03:51:970 (295) - It seems like that vocals emphasize on upbeat rather than downbeat, so these 1/1 rhythms are kinda weird to me. I suggest removing them. Alright.
- 00:00:770 - Change the hitsound volume as well as other difficulties. Done.
- 00:07:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is questionable to me. Do you think it appropriate, Nardo? I think it is somewhat improvised by the mapper. Changed to something else in attempt to interpret the music better.
- 01:30:770 (479) - 02:41:170 (323) - 03:51:570 (328) - Overemphasized notes fixed
- 03:08:570 (89,90,91,92) - placing of finishers seems uncomfortable. no need normal notes there. ^
- 01:28:470 (466) - there is no drum sound. Deleted the note there.
- 02:38:870 (309) - ^ ^
- 03:07:270 (80) - ^ ^
- 03:48:870 (308) - ^ ^
- 03:07:470 (82,83) - Color should be reversed considering drums. fixed
Additional changes have been made for the pattern from 03:49:770 to 03:51:170 -