Mod request /
[Oni]
02:11:770 (307) - please make the same as 01:01:370 (1), or make it same as here, just dont leave it different.
01:12:370 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - just some suggestions - maybe make it like kdd kdk kdD K D(image, imo this fit the pitch of vocal and the instrument behind better.
02:22:770 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) -
03:33:170 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - same as this two
01:21:770 (93,94,95) - imo dkd would be better, as i would put this 6 sentence into front(1,3,5) and back(2,4,6) group, the sound at the front group among the 3 sentence is actually the same with different pitch, so i would make them the same. (i originally don't want to say this, but i found you did this in muzu, and i thought this is better.)
02:32:170 (95,96,97) - ^
03:42:570 (371,372,373) - ^
03:12:370 (235) - delete? as this note have no vocal and can emphasize the sound on k better
04:04:770 (480) - k?
[Muzu]
00:16:370 (57) - imo change it to k and add d at 00:16:570 fits the melody better.
01:12:370 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - same as oni
02:07:170 - add d here
02:11:770 (264) - same as oni
02:47:970 (127,128,129) - i prefer making like oni -> k d d
[Futsuu]
02:11:770 (198) - actually to me it's same as the "start" as the first part... but if you really dont want to change just ignore me orz
[Kantan]
looks good~
good luck
[Oni]
02:11:770 (307) - please make the same as 01:01:370 (1), or make it same as here, just dont leave it different.
01:12:370 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - just some suggestions - maybe make it like kdd kdk kdD K D(image, imo this fit the pitch of vocal and the instrument behind better.
02:22:770 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) -
03:33:170 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - same as this two
01:21:770 (93,94,95) - imo dkd would be better, as i would put this 6 sentence into front(1,3,5) and back(2,4,6) group, the sound at the front group among the 3 sentence is actually the same with different pitch, so i would make them the same. (i originally don't want to say this, but i found you did this in muzu, and i thought this is better.)
02:32:170 (95,96,97) - ^
03:42:570 (371,372,373) - ^
03:12:370 (235) - delete? as this note have no vocal and can emphasize the sound on k better
04:04:770 (480) - k?
[Muzu]
00:16:370 (57) - imo change it to k and add d at 00:16:570 fits the melody better.
01:12:370 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - same as oni
02:07:170 - add d here
02:11:770 (264) - same as oni
02:47:970 (127,128,129) - i prefer making like oni -> k d d
[Futsuu]
02:11:770 (198) - actually to me it's same as the "start" as the first part... but if you really dont want to change just ignore me orz
[Kantan]
looks good~
good luck