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Jikson[m9]

Akemi_Homura wrote:

  • [Jik's Ura Oni]

  1. 00:23:170 (94) - change to k~ I can hear loud piano sound here. fixed
  2. 00:32:570 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,19,150) - How about this~? I changed to k loud drum sounds. No change. The whole stream of dons have meaning here.
  3. 01:18:170 (305) - change to k. same beat with 01:11:770 (372) fixed
  4. 01:38:770 (17) ~ 01:41:970 (38) - How about this pattern~? I think It's more follow music. just look k fixed. I like this
Thanks for your valuable mod!
http://puu.sh/8RqNL.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated.
mliencheng
Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


00:02:370 k
00:02:970 k
00:56:170 k
01:04:170 k
01:14:370 K
02:19:770 k
02:28:570 k
02:48:370 k
02:51:570 k
03:09:370 D
00:25:170 k
00:28:370 k
00:34:370 D
00:35:670 k
01:13:170 K
02:18:970 k
02:22:370 d
03:22:370 K
03:22:770 K
03:33:970 K
00:34:170 k
00:59:770 K
02:39:170 k
02:42:370 k
03:09:370 D
03:35:170 K
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


00:02:370 k fixed
00:02:970 k fixed
00:56:170 k no change as the vocal pitch is lower than 00:55:570 (221,222) -
01:04:170 k fixed
01:14:370 K remain unchanged. 55 has the highest pitch among 01:14:370 (54,55,56) -
02:19:770 k no change, since it has a lower pitch than 02:19:970 (32) -
02:28:570 k no change because of pattern consistency
02:48:370 k fixed
02:51:570 k the current pattern could show a better contrast to the upcoming 02:52:770 (149,150,151) -
03:09:370 D K could fit the high-pitched electric guitar well
00:34:170 k no change. Snares occur at 00:33:770 (163,164) -
00:59:770 K fixed
02:39:170 k fixed
02:42:370 k fixed
03:09:370 D refer to Oni
03:35:170 K ^
Thanks for your mod~ :)
_todestrieb
Hi, from my modding queue.

Kantan
00:36:370 (55) - k
01:05:170 (5) - ^
01:57:370 (94) - K....?
02:11:570 (117) - d
02:28:370 (29) - k

Futsuu
00:06:370 (9,10) - k
00:22:770 (46) - ^
00:55:770 (119) - d
00:56:570 (121) - k
01:20:170 (44) - ^
01:44:770 (97) - D
03:06:770 (109) - k

Muzukashii
00:06:370 (19) - k
00:19:170 (57) - There's no slider tick at the end
01:09:570 (23) - D
01:50:170 (143) - k
02:56:970 (119) - ^
03:14:370 (168) - ^
03:50:370 (276) - ^

Oni
00:06:370 (23) - d
00:19:770 (76) - ^
00:22:770 (86,87) - reverse
00:54:970 (219) - k
01:44:770 (181) - D
01:47:770 (191,192) - reverse
02:05:170 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd would fit the song imo
02:46:770 (139) - Doesn't fit
03:14:370 (226) - k
03:21:870 (251) - d
04:02:170 - Add a note for the guitar.

Inner Oni
00:06:370 (25) - k
00:30:470 (148) - d
00:35:970 (176) - ^
01:06:370 (19) - ^
01:28:570 (131) - ^
01:44:570 (198) - d
02:01:870 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - Out of topic, this part is so great.
02:21:870 (53) - I don't think this is needed
02:25:870 (69) - k
02:33:170 (108) - ^
02:38:770 (139,142) - reverse
03:14:170 (258) - k
03:21:870 (293) - d
04:05:270 (537) - k..? Do it if you want

Jik's Ura Oni
General : Only 67 notes more than Inner Oni. How about just Jik's Inner Oni?
00:00:770 (3) - k
00:33:770 (148,149) - ^
00:35:270 (154) - ^
00:40:070 (190) - d
01:12:370 (374,375) - ^
01:15:370 (387) - D
01:23:770 (439) - k
01:29:070 (473) - Move to 01:29:170 -
01:44:770 - just slider plz
02:04:870 (81) - k
02:30:770 (228,233) - d
03:04:970 (56,59) - ^
03:21:570 (126,127,128,129) - k
03:23:970 (133) - K
03:50:170 (303,304) - k
04:01:570 (22,24) - ^
04:04:170 (37) - ^
04:05:370 (43,44) - You can make it 1/6 stream, because it works.

This took me an hour
Probably the longest fucking mod I've ever done
Jikson[m9]

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


00:25:170 k
00:28:370 k
00:34:370 D
00:35:670 k
01:13:170 K <--
02:18:970 k
02:22:370 d
03:22:370 K
03:22:770 K
03:33:970 K<--
All fixed except the marked two, thanks!
Jikson[m9]

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Jik's Ura Oni
General : Only 67 notes more than Inner Oni. How about just Jik's Inner Oni?
00:00:770 (3) - k done
00:33:770 (148,149) - ^ nochange
00:35:270 (154) - ^ nochange
00:40:070 (190) - d changed together with previous one
01:12:370 (374,375) - ^ only changed 374
01:15:370 (387) - D nochange
01:23:770 (439) - k nochange
01:29:070 (473) - Move to 01:29:170 - changed with the next one
01:44:770 - just slider plz 1/4 slider is difficult to hit here so I chose spinner
02:04:870 (81) - k done
02:30:770 (228,233) - d changed
03:04:970 (56,59) - ^ done
03:21:570 (126,127,128,129) - k no change
03:23:970 (133) - K done
03:50:170 (303,304) - k nochange
04:01:570 (22,24) - ^ done
04:04:170 (37) - ^ done
04:05:370 (43,44) - You can make it 1/6 stream, because it works. I doubt...
OK thanks

http://puu.sh/9EY1B/32f7441a4c.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Kantan
00:36:370 (55) - k Retained to keep it consistent to 00:39:570 (61) -
01:05:170 (5) - ^ no change because of the drop in vocal pitch .
01:57:370 (94) - K....? change 01:56:570 (93) - to K instead.
02:11:570 (117) - d k is used to map the snare.
02:28:370 (29) - k same as 01:05:170 (5) -

Futsuu
00:06:370 (9,10) - k fixed
00:22:770 (46) - ^ nope, the sound is identical to 00:22:370 (45) -
00:55:770 (119) - d Taking 00:56:170 (120,121) - into consideration, k would be fine imo.
00:56:570 (121) - k It has the same vocal pitch as 00:56:170 (120) - , so no change.
01:20:170 (44) - ^ fixed
01:44:770 (97) - D The background sound is softer than that in 01:46:370 (100) - , so d would be better.
03:06:770 (109) - k fixed

Muzukashii
00:06:370 (19) - k The instrument there has a lower pitch than 00:05:970 (17) - , so d could fit.
00:19:170 (57) - There's no slider tick at the end Umm... how to fix it? In fact I think it doesn't matter.
01:09:570 (23) - D fixed
01:50:170 (143) - k fixed
02:56:970 (119) - ^ no change. The pitch is lowest among 02:56:370 (117,118,119,120,121,122) -
03:14:370 (168) - ^ The pitch of the instrument goes down, so d is fine imo.
03:50:370 (276) - ^ no change, same pitch as 03:50:170 (275) -

Oni
00:06:370 (23) - d refer to Muzukashii
00:19:770 (76) - ^ k is fine imo, as it fits the snare.
00:22:770 (86,87) - reverse remain unchanged to keep it consistent to 00:22:370 (84) -
00:54:970 (219) - k fixed
01:44:770 (181) - D fixed
01:47:770 (191,192) - reverse The vocal at 01:47:970 (192) - is high-pitched, so no change.
02:05:170 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd would fit the song imo changed 02:05:570 (262) - as K instead.
02:46:770 (139) - Doesn't fit Why?
03:14:370 (226) - k refer to Muzukashii
03:21:870 (251) - d I'll keep the kkk first and seek further opinion.
04:02:170 - Add a note for the guitar. added d there.

Inner Oni
00:06:370 (25) - k refer to Muzukashii
00:30:470 (148) - d fixed
00:35:970 (176) - ^ k would be better for the strong cymbal
01:06:370 (19) - ^ k could fit the relatively high-pitched vocal in a way better.
01:28:570 (131) - ^ It is already a don.
01:44:570 (198) - d I keep mine here as both are okay imo.
02:01:870 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - Out of topic, this part is so great. Nice to hear that~
02:21:870 (53) - I don't think this is needed fixed
02:25:870 (69) - k I think the snares start at 02:25:970 -
02:33:170 (108) - ^ d would be better, as it has the same vocal pitch as 02:34:570 (114) -
02:38:770 (139,142) - reverse no change, as high-pitched vocal occurs at 02:39:170 (141) -
03:14:170 (258) - k pitch mapping for the vocal, no change here.
03:21:870 (293) - d same as Oni
04:05:270 (537) - k..? Do it if you want d could result in a better flow.
OK thanks Do you know how many hours did I spend for the set?

And Updated~
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.
[Kantan]

  • uum,Good. Nothing to say for this time but I guess this is hard.
    Break times over divisor 2/1 are very few , and I felt density is even flat yet.

    I recommend you to change on this density. http://puu.sh/agvdI/a2747abf80.zip
    I will come again after check your response.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:970 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - uum, I recommend to change the strategy to follow simple. These sounds little and I think its not important to follow on this density as futsuu. How about this?
  2. 00:28:370 (57) – delete?
  3. delete finisher 00:46:170 (3) –lol ,
  4. and if can, 00:45:570 (1) – too. looks hard to play as futsuu..?
  5. 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) - notes>>stream , stream >>>notes sounds better as Vocal slar.but you put 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36) - notes to follow drums. So I recommend to (1) spiiner change to finisher K for decreasing uncomfortable.
  6. 01:21:370 (48) - k ?, same as 01:08:570 (15) -, 01:15:170 (32) - . kd>>dk>>kd>dk…
  7. 01:56:570 (127) – delete the finisher? , same as 1st phrase.
  8. 02:11:770 (1) – same as 1st phrase.
  9. 02:31:370 (47,48) – same as 1st phrase.
  10. 02:41:970 (68) – delete, or change k? no bass drums. sounds better than don imo.
  11. 03:12:770 (121,122,123) – delete these finishers.
  12. 03:41:770 (184,185) – change to kk?
  13. 03:49:170 (199) – add don here?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:170 (4,5,6,7) - listening only 4567, weird for me this (7) k. I think the reason is k makes to cut as previous phrase atmosphere . Try to change Either suggestions?
    A. 00:07:970 (3) – change to k. can linked 00:09:170 (7) –k sound.
    B. 00:09:170 (7) – move to 00:10:170 (10) - and, 00:09:370 (7) – change k same as 00:08:570 (5) - this k.
    C. 00:09:170 (7) – delete or move to 00:10:170 (10) - , and change 00:09:570 (9) -  k.
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  2. 00:20:170 (8) – delete this ?
  3. 00:32:170 (47,48,49) – kd*d >> dkdd ? or kddd?
  4. 01:01:370 (1) – same as Futsuu.
  5. 01:33:970 (98) – same as 1st phrase.
  6. 02:03:570 (181,182) - swap , same as 02:00:770 (175) – d, that follows 02:03:770 (182) - tinpani .
  7. 02:11:970 (1) – delete ?
  8. 02:57:170 (120) - k…?
  9. 03:00:370 (131) - ^?
  10. 03:10:570 (162) – add d?
  11. 03:21:170 (185,186,187) - how about additions divisor 1/2 note ? like… ddkkk
  12. 03:54:770 (291) – same as others.
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:170 (47) - add don? plays better , I guess.
  2. 00:13:770 (52) – delete? same as00:07:370 -.
  3. 00:41:770 (167) – add d? sounds not cut perfective.
  4. 01:27:170 (111,112,113,114) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ?
  5. 01:31:370 (128) - k? no bass sound.
  6. 01:41:370 (165) – add don.
  7. 01:41:770 (167) – delete?
  8. 02:00:370 (1,2,3,4) – kkd,d … uum Either?
    A. (2,3) delete?
    B. (1,2,3,4,) kkd,d >>k,ddd ?
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  9. 02:04:570 (256) – add don?, feels lonely a bit.
  10. 02:41:770 (130,131) – change k?
  11. 02:56:070 (163) - k?
  12. 02:58:970 (174,175,176,177) – k,kdd> kkd,d ? how about?
  13. 03:17:770 (232) – delete ? for back sound slar.
  14. 03:21:870 (250) – delete? unnecessary imo
  15. 03:52:170 (385) - k?
[Inner Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. 00:06:670 (27) - I think you can add d? for harp.
  3. 00:28:770 (140) – don?
  4. 01:01:070 (305) – add don? make up more power~.
  5. 01:03:470 (4) – add don?
  6. 01:12:770 (57) - k? or 01:12:670 (56) - ?
  7. 02:00:470 (296) – delete this? , unnecessary imo
  8. 02:02:670 (308) - ^ not sound …?
  9. 02:11:470 (355) – add don?
  10. 02:17:370 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkddk? Or kkdkk ?
  11. 02:37:570 (129,130,131,132) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? more increasing vocal power.
  12. 02:49:570 (165,166,167) – k,d,k? just my opinion. More smoother?
  13. 03:17:570 (269) – finisher?
  14. good Inner~ :D
[Jik’s Ura Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
  3. 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
  4. 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
  5. since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
  6. 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
  7. 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
  8. 00:53:870 (265) -^
  9. 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
  10. 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
  11. 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
  12. 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
  13. 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
  14. 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
  15. 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
  16. 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
  17. and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
  18. 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
  19. 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
  20. 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
  21. 03:28:770 (165) - k?
  22. 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
  23. 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.
ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.
[Kantan]

  • uum,Good. Nothing to say for this time but I guess this is hard.
    Break times over divisor 2/1 are very few , and I felt density is even flat yet.

    I recommend you to change on this density. http://puu.sh/agvdI/a2747abf80.zip
    I will come again after check your response. Hmm... To be honest the Kantan is not very hard, as 2/1 breaks are everywhere. (e.g. 01:03:570 (2) - ; 01:41:170 (67) - ; 02:47:170 (58) - , etc.) Anyway, I'll seek further opinion about this.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:970 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - uum, I recommend to change the strategy to follow simple. These sounds little and I think its not important to follow on this density as futsuu. How about this? I think 1/2 k d and d k is not very hard for Futsuu, so I would like to keep them.
  2. 00:28:370 (57) – delete? ^
  3. delete finisher 00:46:170 (3) –lol , fixed
  4. and if can, 00:45:570 (1) – too. looks hard to play as futsuu..? The stressed sound is so prominent that it cannot be ignored, so no change here.
  5. 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) - notes>>stream , stream >>>notes sounds better as Vocal slar.but you put 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36) - notes to follow drums. So I recommend to (1) spiiner change to finisher K for decreasing uncomfortable. I think the spinner serves as a good transition to the kiai time and sounds good, so I would like to keep it.
  6. 01:21:370 (48) - k ?, same as 01:08:570 (15) -, 01:15:170 (32) - . kd>>dk>>kd>dk… fixed
  7. 01:56:570 (127) – delete the finisher? , same as 1st phrase. fixed
  8. 02:11:770 (1) – same as 1st phrase. same as 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) -
  9. 02:31:370 (47,48) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
  10. 02:41:970 (68) – delete, or change k? no bass drums. sounds better than don imo. changed to k.
  11. 03:12:770 (121,122,123) – delete these finishers. no change, as they need to be emphasized.
  12. 03:41:770 (184,185) – change to kk? changed to d k.
  13. 03:49:170 (199) – add don here? It sounds good, fixed.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:170 (4,5,6,7) - listening only 4567, weird for me this (7) k. I think the reason is k makes to cut as previous phrase atmosphere . Try to change Either suggestions? Applied option A+C
    A. 00:07:970 (3) – change to k. can linked 00:09:170 (7) –k sound.
    B. 00:09:170 (7) – move to 00:10:170 (10) - and, 00:09:370 (7) – change k same as 00:08:570 (5) - this k.
    C. 00:09:170 (7) – delete or move to 00:10:170 (10) - , and change 00:09:570 (9) -  k.
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  2. 00:20:170 (8) – delete this ? fixed
  3. 00:32:170 (47,48,49) – kd*d >> dkdd ? or kddd? changed 00:32:770 (99) - as k instead.
  4. 01:01:370 (1) – same as Futsuu. refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
  5. 01:33:970 (98) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
  6. 02:03:570 (181,182) - swap , same as 02:00:770 (175) – d, that follows 02:03:770 (182) - tinpani . fixed
  7. 02:11:970 (1) – delete ? refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
  8. 02:57:170 (120) - k…? fixed
  9. 03:00:370 (131) - ^? ^
  10. 03:10:570 (162) – add d? fixed
  11. 03:21:170 (185,186,187) - how about additions divisor 1/2 note ? like… ddkkk It sounds good, fixed
  12. 03:54:770 (291) – same as others. fixed using option A.
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:170 (47) - add don? plays better , I guess. fixed
  2. 00:13:770 (52) – delete? same as 00:07:370 -. fixed
  3. 00:41:770 (167) – add d? sounds not cut perfective. fixed
  4. 01:27:170 (111,112,113,114) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? fixed
  5. 01:31:370 (128) - k? no bass sound. It seems to be fine, fixed.
  6. 01:41:370 (165) – add don. fixed
  7. 01:41:770 (167) – delete? ^
  8. 02:00:370 (1,2,3,4) – kkd,d … uum Either? Applied option B.
    A. (2,3) delete?
    B. (1,2,3,4,) kkd,d >>k,ddd ?
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  9. 02:04:570 (256) – add don?, feels lonely a bit. fixed
  10. 02:41:770 (130,131) – change k? remain unchanged, k d d k suits the vocal pitch.
  11. 02:56:070 (163) - k? fixed
  12. 02:58:970 (174,175,176,177) – k,kdd> kkd,d ? how about? fixed
  13. 03:17:770 (232) – delete ? for back sound slar. fixed
  14. 03:21:870 (250) – delete? unnecessary imo fixed
  15. 03:52:170 (385) - k? fixed
[Inner Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. 00:06:670 (27) - I think you can add d? for harp. fixed
  3. 00:28:770 (140) – don? no change, as the sound is similar to 00:25:970 (125,126) -
  4. 01:01:070 (305) – add don? make up more power~. fixed
  5. 01:03:470 (4) – add don? fixed
  6. 01:12:770 (57) - k? or 01:12:670 (56) - ? changed the former.
  7. 02:00:470 (296) – delete this? , unnecessary imo fixed
  8. 02:02:670 (308) - ^ not sound …? Nope. It pairs with 02:01:870 (303,304) - so that the patterns could be more balanced.
  9. 02:11:470 (355) – add don? fixed
  10. 02:17:370 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkddk? Or kkdkk ? changed to kkddk.
  11. 02:37:570 (129,130,131,132) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? more increasing vocal power. fixed
  12. 02:49:570 (165,166,167) – k,d,k? just my opinion. More smoother? Comparing 02:48:770 (164,166) - , 166 is higher-pitched than 164, so d k d is preferred.
  13. 03:17:570 (269) – finisher? fixed
  14. good Inner~ :DNice to hear that~ :D

ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod JuDa~ :)
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Hello again here's my poor mod again

the diff it's fine
00:09:201 - d
00:15:570 - ^
00:51:970 (112) - D
02:02:370 (138) - D
00:57:370 - d
00:57:570 (173) - move to 00:57:770 -
01:33:170 - d
01:34:970 - d
02:07:770 - d
02:07:970 (197) - move to 02:08:170 -
03:56:170 - d
03:56:170 - d
01:37:470 - maybe d

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Q____X wrote:

Hello again here's my poor mod again

the diff it's fine
00:09:201 - d Leaving a break here would be better.
00:15:570 - ^ ^
00:51:970 (112) - D As cymbal sound is absent, d is enough imo.
02:02:370 (138) - D ^
00:57:370 - d fixed
00:57:570 (173) - move to 00:57:770 - fixed
01:33:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.
01:34:970 - d ^
02:07:770 - d fixed
02:07:970 (197) - move to 02:08:170 - fixed
03:56:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.
03:56:170 - d It is already a don.
01:37:470 - maybe d no change, as I want to make this Oni easier.

Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]

JUDYDANNY wrote:

[Jik’s Ura Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
  3. 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
  4. 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
  5. since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
  6. 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
  7. 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
  8. 00:53:870 (265) -^
  9. 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
  10. 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
  11. 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
  12. 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
  13. 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
  14. 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
  15. 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
  16. 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
  17. and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
  18. 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
  19. 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
  20. 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
  21. 03:28:770 (165) - k?
  22. 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
  23. 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.
ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Almost all fixed, except some was changed in my own way to meet the mod. Thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/bd7A1/63d62c8365.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated!
K-2
Hi~
I'm Lunaris Filia, mapping beginner 8-)
I will do my best 8-)

00:09:570 d k d k
00:53:170 d k d k d
03:36:770 k
How about moving 00:08:770 -> 00:08:570? (I think it sounds suitably)
00:30:770 k d k (I think snare sound is appropriate)
01:33:370 d
01:33:570 delete
01:33:770 d (I think it sounds suitably)
01:39:170 k d k k or k d d k ?
02:18:770 d
02:37:370 k
03:14:170 k (I think snare sound is appropriate)
03:14:770 d
00:15:170 delete
00:15:370 k d k d kkd ?
01:11:770 d
01:11:970 move to 01:12:170
01:44:770 I think this spinner is too short.
02:47:970 k

u's is so great!
Septembre
Oni : 00:08:170 (31) - out of rythm I think
and maybe add note here : 00:08:370 (32) -

No kudo
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Finally managed to revive the map. This set will be reduced to a 5-difficulty one after readjustment of difficulty spread.
_todestrieb
Wow I remember modding this mapset. Why isn't it not ranked yet?
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
I'm Lunaris Filia, mapping beginner 8-)
I will do my best 8-)

00:09:570 d k d k fixed
00:53:170 d k d k d changed to d k d k k instead.
03:36:770 k fixed
00:15:170 delete
00:15:370 k d k d kkd ?
01:11:770 d
01:11:970 move to 01:12:170
01:44:770 I think this spinner is too short. fixed
02:47:970 k fixed

u's is so great!
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Septembre wrote:

Oni : 00:08:170 (31) - out of rythm I think There is a sound.
and maybe add note here : 00:08:370 (32) -

No kudo
Thanks for the check~
neonat
Kantan

I think reducing the amount of finishes here in this difficulty would be better, especially the more denser areas, where there are consecutive 1/1 beats instead 1.5~2 beats apart, but other than that I felt that you should have had those impacts and finishes on 01:09:570 (9) - 02:19:970 (9) - 03:01:570 (59) - 03:30:370 (99) - instead

Futsuu

00:09:570 (16) - shift to 00:09:370
00:15:970 (30) - shift to 00:15:770 - it lands better on the music here
01:20:970 (44) - k instead?
01:34:370 (70) - shift to 01:34:170
01:40:770 (84) - ^
03:01:570 (92) - finish
03:55:170 (203) - shift to 03:54:970
04:01:570 (217) - ^

Muzukashii

00:31:570 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - try dk k kd k, I think that works nicer

Oni

03:02:770 (197) - d instead?

Inner Oni

00:08:570 - should have an object here like a d so that the rhythm here does not feel incomplete, the rest of the song you made it along with the music, but this part feels detached
00:15:170 (50) - shift to 00:15:370 and it can either be d or k
00:27:170 (110) - change to k, have it differ from 00:26:770 (109)
01:22:370 (430) - finish?
02:09:370 (110) - I don't think the finish should be here, rather it should be at 02:08:770 (107)
02:32:770 (246) - finish?
03:43:170 (260) - ^


Good Luck
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