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Jikson[m9]
我有好Q多野想改 sosad
IamKwaN
隨心所欲吧少年
Jikson[m9]
Chur final中,898
IamKwaN
Chur project, assignment, debate中
898 too
Coro
Taiko mod~

All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
Consider raising hitsound volume in some places? It's a bit hard to hear.

[Futsuu]
00:22:370 (45) - k
00:29:170 (60) - k

[Muzukashii]
nothing~

[Oni]
00:06:970 (27) - d

[Inner Oni]
nothing~

[Jik's Ura Oni]
nothing~

very nice map~
good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~

All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
Consider raising hitsound volume in some places? It's a bit hard to hear. um... any examples?

[Futsuu]
00:22:370 (45) - k fixed
00:29:170 (60) - k fixed

[Muzukashii]
nothing~

[Oni]
00:06:970 (27) - d The drum hits are identical, remain unchanged.

[Inner Oni]
nothing~

[Jik's Ura Oni]
nothing~

very nice map~ Thanks~
good luck for rank~
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]
琴日係irc俾左個latest version Nardo,收唔收到?
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Jikson[m9] wrote:

琴日係irc俾左個latest version Nardo,收唔收到?
收到, 已update
DenoisoGoiso
Might i mod this night. BE SURE THAT YOU ONLINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should online at 23:00 PM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also star >:3
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Might i mod this night. BE SURE THAT YOU ONLINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should online at 23:00 PM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also star >:3
Thanks for your star~ I'm able to be online up to 23:30 on 14/1

Edit: You can post the mod here anytime. :3 I will check it afterwards.
DenoisoGoiso
beb
i'm too lazy C:~ i was really busy D:

[General]
  1. All is fine. i think generals is ready for ranking.

I didn't use my modding template. this is just little mod anyways not helping you more again, >:D

[Kantan]
  1. 00:29:570 (46) - Kat? this is so empty, read the pitches more.
    00:36:370 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - This objects really weird for me about the pitch. i suggest you to change it to d d k__k d d
    01:21:170 (35) - Kat? this is higher too instead before object.
    02:32:370 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - You are using k d k so many, consider make new style pattern. really boring at playing.
    03:42:770 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ^
[Fuutsu]
  1. Clean.
[Muzu (it's short because my lazy)]
  1. 02:28:370 (48,49) - Swap? (49) still higher than (48).
[Oni]
  1. 00:19:370 (72,73) - Delete kat? seems too many kat here, and these note is lower.
Shit, can't mod inner onis :OO
I think it's really good. Call bat please! :D
Also, Good luck~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

beb
i'm too lazy C:~ i was really busy D:

[General]
  1. All is fine. i think generals is ready for ranking.

I didn't use my modding template. this is just little mod anyways not helping you more again, >:D

[Kantan]
  1. 00:29:570 (46) - Kat? this is so empty, read the pitches more. fixed
    00:36:370 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - This objects really weird for me about the pitch. i suggest you to change it to d d k__k d d changed to d d k, k d k
    01:21:170 (35) - Kat? this is higher too instead before object. no change
    02:32:370 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - You are using k d k so many, consider make new style pattern. really boring at playing. changed the pattern to k d, k k d, k k d, d k d d k
    03:42:770 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ^ ^


[Fuutsu]
  1. Clean.
[Muzu (it's short because my lazy)]
  1. 02:28:370 (48,49) - Swap? (49) still higher than (48). no change as I followed the drum
[Oni]
  1. 00:19:370 (72,73) - Delete kat? seems too many kat here, and these note is lower. I think these kats fit.
Shit, can't mod inner onis :OO
I think it's really good. Call bat please! :D
Also, Good luck~
Thanks for the mod~ :)
Nofool
My first mod is done !_!
First mod so I'm not experienced n_n ofc don't take this mod too seriously, I'm just training...
Everything looked already perfect... so I mostly suggested some k/d changes that sounded good to me (with the voices mostly).
I hope it'll be a bit usefull.

[Kantan]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (7) K instead of D ?
    00:53:570 (87,88) d k instead of k d ?
    01:13:170 maybe add k ?
    01:31:570 (52) remove ?
    02:03:970 (108,109) d k instead of k d ?
    02:23:570 same as 01:13:170
    03:33:970 ^
[Futsuu]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (11) K instead of D ?
    00:38:570 (80) k instead of d ?
    00:46:570 (100) ^
    00:48:770 (106) ^
    00:52:770 (112) d instead of k ?
    00:55:570 (117,118) dk instead of kd ?
    00:59:570 (128,129) dk instead of kd ?
    01:15:170 (32) D instead of K ?
    01:48:970 (107) k instead of d ?
    01:55:570 (124) d instead of k ?
    02:09:170 (152,153,154,155,156)) dk instead of kd, or kd kdK instead of kd dkD ?
    02:24:770 (30,31) K D instead of D K ?
    03:35:170 (168,169) ^
    03:41:370 (183,184,185,186) ddk k instead of dkk d ?
[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (22) K instead of D ?
    00:15:370 (46,47,48) k d k instead of d k d ?
    01:09:970 (24) d insteak of k ?
    01:15:170 (39) D instead of K ?
    01:40:170 (114,115,116) same as 00:15:370
    01:56:970 (163) d instead of k ?
    02:25:570 (40) same as 01:15:170
    02:26:970 (43) d instead of k ?
    03:24:370 (186) ^
    03:35:970 (224) same as 01:15:170
    03:37:370 (227) same as 02:26:970
    03:48:370 (264,265) d k instead of k d ?
    03:59:570 (296) d instead of k ?
    04:00:970 (300,301,302) same as 00:15:370
[Oni]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (28) K instead of D ?
    00:16:770 (63) remove ?
    00:49:370 (195,196) k d instead of d k ?
    01:47:170 (185) k instead of d ?
    01:48:970 (192) ^
    01:56:970(223) ^
    02:11:170 (279,280,281) k k d instead of d d k (it sounds cool as k k d 8D)
    02:13:370 (1) remove ?
    02:41:970 (127) k instead of d ?
    03:23:770 (251) ^
    03:24:570 (255) d instead of k ?
    04:04:670 (428) k instead of d ?
[Inner Oni]
SPOILER
  • 00:11:370 (48) d instead of k ?
    00:23:570 (106,107) k k instead of d d ?
    00:28:770 (131,132) d d instead of k k ?
    00:33:770 (155) d instead of k and then ↓
    00:34:170 (157) k instead of d ?
    00:37:370 (175,176) k d instead of d k ?
    00:43:770 (205) k instead of d ?
    00:51:770 (244) ^
    00:52:370 (246) ^
    00:56:170 (266,267,268,269) k d k k instead of d k d d ?
    01:03:370 (3) d instead of k ?
    01:14:370 (59) K d k instead of D k d ?
    01:25:370 (111) k instead of d ?
    01:39:770 (174) d instead of k ?
    01:56:970 (248) ^
    02:03:170 (273) ^
    02:06:970 (290) ^
    02:14:170 (5) ^
    02:24:770 (63) same as 01:14:370
    02:26:570 (73,74) k d instead of d k ?
    02:33:770 (106) k instead of d ?
    02:41:970 (142) ^
    03:04:970 (216,217) k d instead of d k ?
    03:24:170 (291,292) ^
    02:28:770 (318) k instead of d and then ↓
    03:29:370 (321) d instead of k ?
    03:34:170 (342,343) k d instead of d k ?
    03:35:170 (346,347,348) same as 01:14:370
    03:36:970 (355,356) same as 02:26:570
    03:40:170 (370) k instead of d ?
    03:44:170 (388) ^
Thanks for having proposed me this map Nardo n_n
Oh and I forgot that you don't have to explain why you refuse something ! Do it if you don't mind but don't waste your time hue
And here's is the Jikson[m9]'s one ! (as I told to Nardo, don't take it too sriously :c)

[Jik's Ura Oni]
SPOILER
  • 00:14:570 (47) k instead of d ?
    00:15:970 (53) ^
    00:23:970 (97) k ddk instead of d ddk ?
    00:25:170 (103) k instead of d ?
    00:27:170 (113) same as 00:23:970
    00:27:970 (117,118,119) k d k instead of d d d ?
    00:34:370 (151) k instead of d ?
    01:01:170 (309) d instead of k ?
    01:07:970 (349) ^
    01:08:570 (353) k instead of d ?
    01:11:570 (371,372,373) d k k instead of k k d ?
    01:12:970 (377,378) d d instead of D D ?
    01:13:570 (379,380,381) k k k instead of K K K ?
    01:14:370 (382,383,384,385,386,387,388) D d D d K k k instead of D D D D K K K ?
    01:17:970 (404,405) d k instead of k d ?
    01:57:370 (50) K instead of D ?
    02:08:970 (106) remove ?
    02:09:570 (111) d instead of k ?
    02:19:170 (167) remove this k or add another k at 02:19:370 ?
    02:23:370 (189,190) same as 01:12:970
    02:23:970 (190,191,192) same as 01:13:570
    02:24:770 (194,195,196,197,198,199,300) same as 01:14:370
    02:28:570 (217,218) k d instead of d k ?
    03:02:270 (40) remove ?
    03:09:370 (86) K instead of D ?
    03:10:970 – 03:16:570 It looks like you are mostly following the voice on this part, maybe drums are enough, it feels a bit over mapped at least. (it’s only my inexperienced personnal feeling ;_;)
    03:33:770 (199,200) same as 01:12:970
    03:34:370 (201,202,203) same as 01:13:570
    03:35:170 (204,205,206,207,208) D d D d K instead of D D D D K ?
    03:38:770 (225,226) d k instead of k d ?
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

My first mod is done !_! (The Jik's Ura Oni is missing atm sorry)
First mod so I'm not experienced n_n ofc don't take this mod too seriously, I'm just training...
Everything looked already perfect... so I mostly suggested some k/d changes that sounded good to me (with the voices mostly).
I hope it'll be a bit usefull.

[Kantan]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (7) K instead of D ?
    00:53:570 (87,88) d k instead of k d ? fixed
    01:13:170 maybe add k ? This will form a long stream of 1/1 notes, which is a bit hard for Kantan.
    01:31:570 (52) remove ? fixed
    02:03:970 (108,109) d k instead of k d ? fixed
    02:23:570 same as 01:13:170
    03:33:970 ^
[Futsuu]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (11) K instead of D ?
    00:38:570 (80) k instead of d ? fixed
    00:46:570 (100) ^
    00:48:770 (106) ^
    00:52:770 (112) d instead of k ? I followed the snare drum.
    00:55:570 (117,118) dk instead of kd ? ^
    00:59:570 (128,129) dk instead of kd ? ^
    01:15:170 (32) D instead of K ?
    01:48:970 (107) k instead of d ? fixed
    01:55:570 (124) d instead of k ?
    02:09:170 (152,153,154,155,156)) dk instead of kd, or kd kdK instead of kd dkD ?
    02:24:770 (30,31) K D instead of D K ? D K suits the pitch difference imo
    03:35:170 (168,169) ^
    03:41:370 (183,184,185,186) ddk k instead of dkk d ? changed to dkd d instead
[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (22) K instead of D ?
    00:15:370 (46,47,48) k d k instead of d k d ? d k d could fit the snares
    01:09:970 (24) d insteak of k ?
    01:15:170 (39) D instead of K ?
    01:40:170 (114,115,116) same as 00:15:370
    01:56:970 (163) d instead of k ? fixed
    02:25:570 (40) same as 01:15:170
    02:26:970 (43) d instead of k ? fixed
    03:24:370 (186) ^
    03:35:970 (224) same as 01:15:170
    03:37:370 (227) same as 02:26:970 fixed
    03:48:370 (264,265) d k instead of k d ?
    03:59:570 (296) d instead of k ? k is for snare consistency as the sound is obvious
    04:00:970 (300,301,302) same as 00:15:370 ^
[Oni]
SPOILER
  • 00:07:170 (28) K instead of D ?
    00:16:770 (63) remove ?
    00:49:370 (195,196) k d instead of d k ?
    01:47:170 (185) k instead of d ?
    01:48:970 (192) ^ fixed
    01:56:970(223) ^ fixed
    02:11:170 (279,280,281) k k d instead of d d k (it sounds cool as k k d 8D) fixed
    02:13:370 (1) remove ?
    02:41:970 (127) k instead of d ?
    03:23:770 (251) ^
    03:24:570 (255) d instead of k ?
    04:04:670 (428) k instead of d ? fixed
[Inner Oni]
SPOILER
  • 00:11:370 (48) d instead of k ? fixed
    00:23:570 (106,107) k k instead of d d ? fixed
    00:28:770 (131,132) d d instead of k k ?
    00:33:770 (155) d instead of k and then ↓
    00:34:170 (157) k instead of d ?
    00:37:370 (175,176) k d instead of d k ? fixed
    00:43:770 (205) k instead of d ?
    00:51:770 (244) ^ fixed
    00:52:370 (246) ^
    00:56:170 (266,267,268,269) k d k k instead of d k d d ? changed to d k k d instead
    01:03:370 (3) d instead of k ?
    01:14:370 (59) K d k instead of D k d ? D K D is nice imo
    01:25:370 (111) k instead of d ? fixed
    01:39:770 (174) d instead of k ?
    01:56:970 (248) ^
    02:03:170 (273) ^
    02:06:970 (290) ^ fixed
    02:14:170 (5) ^
    02:24:770 (63) same as 01:14:370
    02:26:570 (73,74) k d instead of d k ?
    02:33:770 (106) k instead of d ?
    02:41:970 (142) ^ fixed
    03:04:970 (216,217) k d instead of d k ? fixed
    03:24:170 (291,292) ^
    02:28:770 (318) k instead of d and then ↓
    03:29:370 (321) d instead of k ?
    03:34:170 (342,343) k d instead of d k ?
    03:35:170 (346,347,348) same as 01:14:370
    03:36:970 (355,356) same as 02:26:570
    03:40:170 (370) k instead of d ? fixed
    03:44:170 (388) ^
Thanks for having proposed me this map Nardo n_n
Oh and I forgot that you don't have to explain why you refuse something ! Do it if you don't mind but don't waste your time hue
(I'll edit later to add the Jikson[m9]'s difficulty mod)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]

Nofool wrote:

[Jik's Ura Oni]
  • 00:14:570 (47) k instead of d ? it matces the pitch so no.
    00:15:970 (53) ^ ^
    00:23:970 (97) k ddk instead of d ddk ? sounds wierd if k hmm
    00:25:170 (103) k instead of d ? ^
    00:27:170 (113) same as 00:23:970 ^
    00:27:970 (117,118,119) k d k instead of d d d ? ^
    00:34:370 (151) k instead of d ? seems will weaken the K afterwards...
    01:01:170 (309) d instead of k ? I'll take this in to consideration
    01:07:970 (349) ^ fixed
    01:08:570 (353) k instead of d ? fixed
    01:11:570 (371,372,373) d k k instead of k k d ? pitch issue
    01:12:970 (377,378) d d instead of D D ?
    01:13:570 (379,380,381) k k k instead of K K K ?
    01:14:370 (382,383,384,385,386,387,388) D d D d K k k instead of D D D D K K K ?
    I like this part
    01:17:970 (404,405) d k instead of k d ? does not match the d k afterwards
    01:57:370 (50) K instead of D ? fixed
    02:08:970 (106) remove ? I copied the first part as a correction
    02:09:570 (111) d instead of k ? ^
    02:19:170 (167) remove this k or add another k at 02:19:370 ? I did both :D
    02:23:370 (189,190) same as 01:12:970 ^
    02:23:970 (190,191,192) same as 01:13:570 ^
    02:24:770 (194,195,196,197,198,199,300) same as 01:14:370 ^
    02:28:570 (217,218) k d instead of d k ? same as 02:19:170
    03:02:270 (40) remove ? I added that for sake of difficulty
    03:09:370 (86) K instead of D ? fixed
    03:10:970 – 03:16:570 It looks like you are mostly following the voice on this part, maybe drums are enough, it feels a bit over mapped at least. (it’s only my inexperienced personnal feeling ;_;) I don't think it is overmapped, but I made some changes to fit both the voices and drum
    03:33:770 (199,200) same as 01:12:970 ^
    03:34:370 (201,202,203) same as 01:13:570 ^
    03:35:170 (204,205,206,207,208) D d D d K instead of D D D D K ? ^
    03:38:770 (225,226) d k instead of k d ? unchanged
Thanks for your mod!! Did some valuable changes

http://puu.sh/6rOMn.osu
Kurodragon_old
Kantan
00:06:770 (6) - Delete
00:13:570 (18) - ^
00:19:170 (27) - ^
00:46:170 (77) - OMG!!! Delete delete please :o
01:20:370 (33,34,35) - kdk
01:37:570 (61) - Delete
01:56:570 (95) - :o delete
03:17:370 (102) - :o :o :o :o delete :o :o :o

Futsuu
Its ok

Muzukashii
01:58:770 (169) - k

I dont mod onis, iner onis or ura onis D:
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Kurodragon wrote:

Kantan
00:06:770 (6) - Delete fixed
00:13:570 (18) - ^ fixed
00:19:170 (27) - ^ no change. The vocal is better to be mapped.
00:46:170 (77) - OMG!!! Delete delete please :o changed this part in another way that is easier to follow.
01:20:370 (33,34,35) - kdk I think the current one could fit the vocal.
01:37:570 (61) - Delete deleted 01:38:370 - instead.
01:56:570 (95) - :o delete did similar fixes as 00:46:170 (77) -
03:17:370 (102) - :o :o :o :o delete :o :o :o fixed

Futsuu
Its ok

Muzukashii
01:58:770 (169) - k I think the pitch is the same as 01:58:570 (168) - no change.

I dont mod onis, iner onis or ura onis D:
Thanks for your mod~ :)
ts8zs
[Inner]
00:02:970 (12) - k
00:54:470 (266) - k
01:23:370 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - dkk kdk dkk kdk
>01:26:970 (119) - k
03:09:370 (243) - D
03:14:170 (258) - k? because 03:17:370 (269) -
03:35:570 (362,363) - D K
04:02:170 (518) - k
[Oni]
00:02:270 (7,8) - kk
00:53:770 (212) - d
01:33:370 (135) - d
[Jik's Ura Oni]
00:33:770 (148,149) - kk
00:40:170 (191) - k?
02:07:770 (101) - d?
03:17:770 (111,112,113) - d d d?
[Muzu]
00:02:970 (8) - k?
03:02:970 (137) - k
03:03:370 (138) - k
03:35:570 (226) - D
再骗要断电断网了……就酱
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

[Inner]
00:02:970 (12) - k fixed
00:54:470 (266) - k fixed
01:23:370 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - dkk kdk dkk kdk changed to dkk dkk dkk kdk instead.
>01:26:970 (119) - k no change as the vocal pitch does not increase greatly.
03:09:370 (243) - D K is used for the high-pitched electric guitar.
03:14:170 (258) - k? because 03:17:370 (269) - I mapped this as k before. But I found that 03:14:170 (258) actually has lower vocal pitch than 03:17:370 (269)
03:35:570 (362,363) - D K I followed the vocal.
04:02:170 (518) - k The pitch of the instrument goes down, so I keep d here.
[Oni]
00:02:270 (7,8) - kk no change, as it has lower pitch than 00:00:670 (2,3) -
00:53:770 (212) - d fixed
01:33:370 (135) - d no change. To keep it consistent to 00:08:570 (32) and 03:54:170 (393) -
[Muzu]
00:02:970 (8) - k? fixed
03:02:970 (137) - k fixed
03:03:370 (138) - k fixed
03:35:570 (226) - D refer to Inner Oni
再骗要断电断网了……就酱
Thanks for your mod~ :)
lovekotori
加油(///▽///)LoveLive<333 :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

lovekotori wrote:

加油(///▽///)LoveLive<333 :)
謝謝~ >///<
Akemi_Homura
Hi~~! Nardo~! :3
From Simple Taiko Modding Queue >w</~!
sorry for delay~ :/

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. Fine~! :3

  • [Jik's Ura Oni]
  1. 00:23:170 (94) - change to k~ I can hear loud piano sound here.
  2. 00:32:570 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,19,150) - How about this~? I changed to k loud drum sounds.
  3. 01:18:170 (305) - change to k. same beat with 01:11:770 (372)
  4. 01:38:770 (17) ~ 01:41:970 (38) - How about this pattern~? I think It's more follow music. just look k

  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:48:370 (237) - change to k~?
  2. 01:57:770 (258) ~ 01:58:770 - How about change like this~? It's smae pattern with 00:47:370 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237).
  3. 02:25:970 (70) - k~? so make kkkdddk.
  4. 03:05:770 (228) - change to k~! kkd dkk.

  • [Oni]
  1. 00:28:070 - add d here~? so make same rhythm with 01:51:270.
  2. 02:56:070 - add d here~? then you can make symmetry pattern like this.

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:570 (66) - change to k. so make dkkd.
  2. 01:07:770 (17) - k here~?
  3. 02:55:370 - add d here~? I think it's more easy to follow.(because sounds of this part is 1/4)
  4. 02:58:570 - same here~!
  5. 03:01:770 - ^

Futsuu and Kantan is really nice~! I can't find any issue.

It's really nice song and map~!
GL to Rank~!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~! Nardo~! :3
From Simple Taiko Modding Queue >w</~!
sorry for delay~ :/

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. Fine~! :3

  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:48:370 (237) - change to k~? no change, as the pitch of guitar is the same as 00:48:170 (236) -
  2. 01:57:770 (258) ~ 01:58:770 - How about change like this~? It's smae pattern with 00:47:370 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237).
    fixed except 264
  3. 02:25:970 (70) - k~? so make kkkdddk. changed to ddkkkkd, like the one in the first kiai.
  4. 03:05:770 (228) - change to k~! kkd dkk. no change. d could follow the bass better.

  • [Oni]
  1. 00:28:070 - add d here~? so make same rhythm with 01:51:270. OK
  2. 02:56:070 - add d here~? then you can make symmetry pattern like this.
    fixed

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:570 (66) - change to k. so make dkkd. fixed
  2. 01:07:770 (17) - k here~? OK
  3. 02:55:370 - add d here~? I think it's more easy to follow.(because sounds of this part is 1/4) fixed
  4. 02:58:570 - same here~! ^
  5. 03:01:770 - ^ ^

Futsuu and Kantan is really nice~! I can't find any issue.

It's really nice song and map~!
GL to Rank~!
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]

ts8zs wrote:

[Jik's Ura Oni]
00:33:770 (148,149) - kk Nochange. 考慮變成kk後譜面的樣子
00:40:170 (191) - k? No change
02:07:770 (101) - d? fixed
03:17:770 (111,112,113) - d d d? 同第一個
Thanks
file will be updated together with the next mod
Jikson[m9]

Akemi_Homura wrote:

  • [Jik's Ura Oni]
  1. 00:23:170 (94) - change to k~ I can hear loud piano sound here. fixed
  2. 00:32:570 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,19,150) - How about this~? I changed to k loud drum sounds. No change. The whole stream of dons have meaning here.
  3. 01:18:170 (305) - change to k. same beat with 01:11:770 (372) fixed
  4. 01:38:770 (17) ~ 01:41:970 (38) - How about this pattern~? I think It's more follow music. just look k fixed. I like this
Thanks for your valuable mod!
http://puu.sh/8RqNL.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated.
mliencheng
Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


Oni
00:02:370 k
00:02:970 k
00:56:170 k
01:04:170 k
01:14:370 K
02:19:770 k
02:28:570 k
02:48:370 k
02:51:570 k
03:09:370 D



Jik's Ura Oni
00:25:170 k
00:28:370 k
00:34:370 D
00:35:670 k
01:13:170 K
02:18:970 k
02:22:370 d
03:22:370 K
03:22:770 K
03:33:970 K



Inner Oni
00:34:170 k
00:59:770 K
02:39:170 k
02:42:370 k
03:09:370 D
03:35:170 K
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


Oni
00:02:370 k fixed
00:02:970 k fixed
00:56:170 k no change as the vocal pitch is lower than 00:55:570 (221,222) -
01:04:170 k fixed
01:14:370 K remain unchanged. 55 has the highest pitch among 01:14:370 (54,55,56) -
02:19:770 k no change, since it has a lower pitch than 02:19:970 (32) -
02:28:570 k no change because of pattern consistency
02:48:370 k fixed
02:51:570 k the current pattern could show a better contrast to the upcoming 02:52:770 (149,150,151) -
03:09:370 D K could fit the high-pitched electric guitar well

Inner Oni
00:34:170 k no change. Snares occur at 00:33:770 (163,164) -
00:59:770 K fixed
02:39:170 k fixed
02:42:370 k fixed
03:09:370 D refer to Oni
03:35:170 K ^
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Akiyama Mizuki
Hi, from my modding queue.

Kantan
SPOILER
00:36:370 (55) - k
01:05:170 (5) - ^
01:57:370 (94) - K....?
02:11:570 (117) - d
02:28:370 (29) - k

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:06:370 (9,10) - k
00:22:770 (46) - ^
00:55:770 (119) - d
00:56:570 (121) - k
01:20:170 (44) - ^
01:44:770 (97) - D
03:06:770 (109) - k

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:06:370 (19) - k
00:19:170 (57) - There's no slider tick at the end
01:09:570 (23) - D
01:50:170 (143) - k
02:56:970 (119) - ^
03:14:370 (168) - ^
03:50:370 (276) - ^

Oni
SPOILER
00:06:370 (23) - d
00:19:770 (76) - ^
00:22:770 (86,87) - reverse
00:54:970 (219) - k
01:44:770 (181) - D
01:47:770 (191,192) - reverse
02:05:170 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd would fit the song imo
02:46:770 (139) - Doesn't fit
03:14:370 (226) - k
03:21:870 (251) - d
04:02:170 - Add a note for the guitar.

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:06:370 (25) - k
00:30:470 (148) - d
00:35:970 (176) - ^
01:06:370 (19) - ^
01:28:570 (131) - ^
01:44:570 (198) - d
02:01:870 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - Out of topic, this part is so great.
02:21:870 (53) - I don't think this is needed
02:25:870 (69) - k
02:33:170 (108) - ^
02:38:770 (139,142) - reverse
03:14:170 (258) - k
03:21:870 (293) - d
04:05:270 (537) - k..? Do it if you want

Jik's Ura Oni
SPOILER
General : Only 67 notes more than Inner Oni. How about just Jik's Inner Oni?
00:00:770 (3) - k
00:33:770 (148,149) - ^
00:35:270 (154) - ^
00:40:070 (190) - d
01:12:370 (374,375) - ^
01:15:370 (387) - D
01:23:770 (439) - k
01:29:070 (473) - Move to 01:29:170 -
01:44:770 - just slider plz
02:04:870 (81) - k
02:30:770 (228,233) - d
03:04:970 (56,59) - ^
03:21:570 (126,127,128,129) - k
03:23:970 (133) - K
03:50:170 (303,304) - k
04:01:570 (22,24) - ^
04:04:170 (37) - ^
04:05:370 (43,44) - You can make it 1/6 stream, because it works.

This took me an hour
Probably the longest fucking mod I've ever done
Jikson[m9]

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods :)


Jik's Ura Oni
00:25:170 k
00:28:370 k
00:34:370 D
00:35:670 k
01:13:170 K <--
02:18:970 k
02:22:370 d
03:22:370 K
03:22:770 K
03:33:970 K<--
All fixed except the marked two, thanks!
Jikson[m9]

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Jik's Ura Oni
SPOILER
General : Only 67 notes more than Inner Oni. How about just Jik's Inner Oni?
00:00:770 (3) - k done
00:33:770 (148,149) - ^ nochange
00:35:270 (154) - ^ nochange
00:40:070 (190) - d changed together with previous one
01:12:370 (374,375) - ^ only changed 374
01:15:370 (387) - D nochange
01:23:770 (439) - k nochange
01:29:070 (473) - Move to 01:29:170 - changed with the next one
01:44:770 - just slider plz 1/4 slider is difficult to hit here so I chose spinner
02:04:870 (81) - k done
02:30:770 (228,233) - d changed
03:04:970 (56,59) - ^ done
03:21:570 (126,127,128,129) - k no change
03:23:970 (133) - K done
03:50:170 (303,304) - k nochange
04:01:570 (22,24) - ^ done
04:04:170 (37) - ^ done
04:05:370 (43,44) - You can make it 1/6 stream, because it works. I doubt...
OK thanks

http://puu.sh/9EY1B/32f7441a4c.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Kantan
SPOILER
00:36:370 (55) - k Retained to keep it consistent to 00:39:570 (61) -
01:05:170 (5) - ^ no change because of the drop in vocal pitch .
01:57:370 (94) - K....? change 01:56:570 (93) - to K instead.
02:11:570 (117) - d k is used to map the snare.
02:28:370 (29) - k same as 01:05:170 (5) -

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:06:370 (9,10) - k fixed
00:22:770 (46) - ^ nope, the sound is identical to 00:22:370 (45) -
00:55:770 (119) - d Taking 00:56:170 (120,121) - into consideration, k would be fine imo.
00:56:570 (121) - k It has the same vocal pitch as 00:56:170 (120) - , so no change.
01:20:170 (44) - ^ fixed
01:44:770 (97) - D The background sound is softer than that in 01:46:370 (100) - , so d would be better.
03:06:770 (109) - k fixed

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:06:370 (19) - k The instrument there has a lower pitch than 00:05:970 (17) - , so d could fit.
00:19:170 (57) - There's no slider tick at the end Umm... how to fix it? In fact I think it doesn't matter.
01:09:570 (23) - D fixed
01:50:170 (143) - k fixed
02:56:970 (119) - ^ no change. The pitch is lowest among 02:56:370 (117,118,119,120,121,122) -
03:14:370 (168) - ^ The pitch of the instrument goes down, so d is fine imo.
03:50:370 (276) - ^ no change, same pitch as 03:50:170 (275) -

Oni
SPOILER
00:06:370 (23) - d refer to Muzukashii
00:19:770 (76) - ^ k is fine imo, as it fits the snare.
00:22:770 (86,87) - reverse remain unchanged to keep it consistent to 00:22:370 (84) -
00:54:970 (219) - k fixed
01:44:770 (181) - D fixed
01:47:770 (191,192) - reverse The vocal at 01:47:970 (192) - is high-pitched, so no change.
02:05:170 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd would fit the song imo changed 02:05:570 (262) - as K instead.
02:46:770 (139) - Doesn't fit Why?
03:14:370 (226) - k refer to Muzukashii
03:21:870 (251) - d I'll keep the kkk first and seek further opinion.
04:02:170 - Add a note for the guitar. added d there.

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:06:370 (25) - k refer to Muzukashii
00:30:470 (148) - d fixed
00:35:970 (176) - ^ k would be better for the strong cymbal
01:06:370 (19) - ^ k could fit the relatively high-pitched vocal in a way better.
01:28:570 (131) - ^ It is already a don.
01:44:570 (198) - d I keep mine here as both are okay imo.
02:01:870 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - Out of topic, this part is so great. Nice to hear that~
02:21:870 (53) - I don't think this is needed fixed
02:25:870 (69) - k I think the snares start at 02:25:970 -
02:33:170 (108) - ^ d would be better, as it has the same vocal pitch as 02:34:570 (114) -
02:38:770 (139,142) - reverse no change, as high-pitched vocal occurs at 02:39:170 (141) -
03:14:170 (258) - k pitch mapping for the vocal, no change here.
03:21:870 (293) - d same as Oni
04:05:270 (537) - k..? Do it if you want d could result in a better flow.
OK thanks Do you know how many hours did I spend for the set?

And Updated~
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.


To “ Nardo”
[Kantan]

  • uum,Good. Nothing to say for this time but I guess this is hard.
    Break times over divisor 2/1 are very few , and I felt density is even flat yet.

    I recommend you to change on this density. http://puu.sh/agvdI/a2747abf80.zip
    I will come again after check your response.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:970 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - uum, I recommend to change the strategy to follow simple. These sounds little and I think its not important to follow on this density as futsuu. How about this?
  2. 00:28:370 (57) – delete?
  3. delete finisher 00:46:170 (3) –lol ,
  4. and if can, 00:45:570 (1) – too. looks hard to play as futsuu..?
  5. 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) - notes>>stream , stream >>>notes sounds better as Vocal slar.but you put 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36) - notes to follow drums. So I recommend to (1) spiiner change to finisher K for decreasing uncomfortable.
  6. 01:21:370 (48) - k ?, same as 01:08:570 (15) -, 01:15:170 (32) - . kd>>dk>>kd>dk…
  7. 01:56:570 (127) – delete the finisher? , same as 1st phrase.
  8. 02:11:770 (1) – same as 1st phrase.
  9. 02:31:370 (47,48) – same as 1st phrase.
  10. 02:41:970 (68) – delete, or change k? no bass drums. sounds better than don imo.
  11. 03:12:770 (121,122,123) – delete these finishers.
  12. 03:41:770 (184,185) – change to kk?
  13. 03:49:170 (199) – add don here?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:170 (4,5,6,7) - listening only 4567, weird for me this (7) k. I think the reason is k makes to cut as previous phrase atmosphere . Try to change Either suggestions?
    A. 00:07:970 (3) – change to k. can linked 00:09:170 (7) –k sound.
    B. 00:09:170 (7) – move to 00:10:170 (10) - and, 00:09:370 (7) – change k same as 00:08:570 (5) - this k.
    C. 00:09:170 (7) – delete or move to 00:10:170 (10) - , and change 00:09:570 (9) -  k.
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  2. 00:20:170 (8) – delete this ?
  3. 00:32:170 (47,48,49) – kd*d >> dkdd ? or kddd?
  4. 01:01:370 (1) – same as Futsuu.
  5. 01:33:970 (98) – same as 1st phrase.
  6. 02:03:570 (181,182) - swap , same as 02:00:770 (175) – d, that follows 02:03:770 (182) - tinpani .
  7. 02:11:970 (1) – delete ?
  8. 02:57:170 (120) - k…?
  9. 03:00:370 (131) - ^?
  10. 03:10:570 (162) – add d?
  11. 03:21:170 (185,186,187) - how about additions divisor 1/2 note ? like… ddkkk
  12. 03:54:770 (291) – same as others.
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:170 (47) - add don? plays better , I guess.
  2. 00:13:770 (52) – delete? same as00:07:370 -.
  3. 00:41:770 (167) – add d? sounds not cut perfective.
  4. 01:27:170 (111,112,113,114) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ?
  5. 01:31:370 (128) - k? no bass sound.
  6. 01:41:370 (165) – add don.
  7. 01:41:770 (167) – delete?
  8. 02:00:370 (1,2,3,4) – kkd,d … uum Either?
    A. (2,3) delete?
    B. (1,2,3,4,) kkd,d >>k,ddd ?
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  9. 02:04:570 (256) – add don?, feels lonely a bit.
  10. 02:41:770 (130,131) – change k?
  11. 02:56:070 (163) - k?
  12. 02:58:970 (174,175,176,177) – k,kdd> kkd,d ? how about?
  13. 03:17:770 (232) – delete ? for back sound slar.
  14. 03:21:870 (250) – delete? unnecessary imo
  15. 03:52:170 (385) - k?
[Inner Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. 00:06:670 (27) - I think you can add d? for harp.
  3. 00:28:770 (140) – don?
  4. 01:01:070 (305) – add don? make up more power~.
  5. 01:03:470 (4) – add don?
  6. 01:12:770 (57) - k? or 01:12:670 (56) - ?
  7. 02:00:470 (296) – delete this? , unnecessary imo
  8. 02:02:670 (308) - ^ not sound …?
  9. 02:11:470 (355) – add don?
  10. 02:17:370 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkddk? Or kkdkk ?
  11. 02:37:570 (129,130,131,132) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? more increasing vocal power.
  12. 02:49:570 (165,166,167) – k,d,k? just my opinion. More smoother?
  13. 03:17:570 (269) – finisher?
  14. good Inner~ :D

To “Jikson"
[Jik’s Ura Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
  3. 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
  4. 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
  5. since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
  6. 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
  7. 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
  8. 00:53:870 (265) -^
  9. 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
  10. 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
  11. 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
  12. 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
  13. 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
  14. 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
  15. 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
  16. 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
  17. and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
  18. 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
  19. 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
  20. 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
  21. 03:28:770 (165) - k?
  22. 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
  23. 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.
ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.


To “ Nardo”
[Kantan]

  • uum,Good. Nothing to say for this time but I guess this is hard.
    Break times over divisor 2/1 are very few , and I felt density is even flat yet.

    I recommend you to change on this density. http://puu.sh/agvdI/a2747abf80.zip
    I will come again after check your response. Hmm... To be honest the Kantan is not very hard, as 2/1 breaks are everywhere. (e.g. 01:03:570 (2) - ; 01:41:170 (67) - ; 02:47:170 (58) - , etc.) Anyway, I'll seek further opinion about this.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:970 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - uum, I recommend to change the strategy to follow simple. These sounds little and I think its not important to follow on this density as futsuu. How about this? I think 1/2 k d and d k is not very hard for Futsuu, so I would like to keep them.
  2. 00:28:370 (57) – delete? ^
  3. delete finisher 00:46:170 (3) –lol , fixed
  4. and if can, 00:45:570 (1) – too. looks hard to play as futsuu..? The stressed sound is so prominent that it cannot be ignored, so no change here.
  5. 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) - notes>>stream , stream >>>notes sounds better as Vocal slar.but you put 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36) - notes to follow drums. So I recommend to (1) spiiner change to finisher K for decreasing uncomfortable. I think the spinner serves as a good transition to the kiai time and sounds good, so I would like to keep it.
  6. 01:21:370 (48) - k ?, same as 01:08:570 (15) -, 01:15:170 (32) - . kd>>dk>>kd>dk… fixed
  7. 01:56:570 (127) – delete the finisher? , same as 1st phrase. fixed
  8. 02:11:770 (1) – same as 1st phrase. same as 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) -
  9. 02:31:370 (47,48) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
  10. 02:41:970 (68) – delete, or change k? no bass drums. sounds better than don imo. changed to k.
  11. 03:12:770 (121,122,123) – delete these finishers. no change, as they need to be emphasized.
  12. 03:41:770 (184,185) – change to kk? changed to d k.
  13. 03:49:170 (199) – add don here? It sounds good, fixed.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:170 (4,5,6,7) - listening only 4567, weird for me this (7) k. I think the reason is k makes to cut as previous phrase atmosphere . Try to change Either suggestions? Applied option A+C
    A. 00:07:970 (3) – change to k. can linked 00:09:170 (7) –k sound.
    B. 00:09:170 (7) – move to 00:10:170 (10) - and, 00:09:370 (7) – change k same as 00:08:570 (5) - this k.
    C. 00:09:170 (7) – delete or move to 00:10:170 (10) - , and change 00:09:570 (9) -  k.
    └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
  2. 00:20:170 (8) – delete this ? fixed
  3. 00:32:170 (47,48,49) – kd*d >> dkdd ? or kddd? changed 00:32:770 (99) - as k instead.
  4. 01:01:370 (1) – same as Futsuu. refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
  5. 01:33:970 (98) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
  6. 02:03:570 (181,182) - swap , same as 02:00:770 (175) – d, that follows 02:03:770 (182) - tinpani . fixed
  7. 02:11:970 (1) – delete ? refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
  8. 02:57:170 (120) - k…? fixed
  9. 03:00:370 (131) - ^? ^
  10. 03:10:570 (162) – add d? fixed
  11. 03:21:170 (185,186,187) - how about additions divisor 1/2 note ? like… ddkkk It sounds good, fixed
  12. 03:54:770 (291) – same as others. fixed using option A.
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:170 (47) - add don? plays better , I guess. fixed
  2. 00:13:770 (52) – delete? same as 00:07:370 -. fixed
  3. 00:41:770 (167) – add d? sounds not cut perfective. fixed
  4. 01:27:170 (111,112,113,114) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? fixed
  5. 01:31:370 (128) - k? no bass sound. It seems to be fine, fixed.
  6. 01:41:370 (165) – add don. fixed
  7. 01:41:770 (167) – delete? ^
  8. 02:00:370 (1,2,3,4) – kkd,d … uum Either? Applied option B.
    A. (2,3) delete?
    B. (1,2,3,4,) kkd,d >>k,ddd ?
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  9. 02:04:570 (256) – add don?, feels lonely a bit. fixed
  10. 02:41:770 (130,131) – change k? remain unchanged, k d d k suits the vocal pitch.
  11. 02:56:070 (163) - k? fixed
  12. 02:58:970 (174,175,176,177) – k,kdd> kkd,d ? how about? fixed
  13. 03:17:770 (232) – delete ? for back sound slar. fixed
  14. 03:21:870 (250) – delete? unnecessary imo fixed
  15. 03:52:170 (385) - k? fixed
[Inner Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. 00:06:670 (27) - I think you can add d? for harp. fixed
  3. 00:28:770 (140) – don? no change, as the sound is similar to 00:25:970 (125,126) -
  4. 01:01:070 (305) – add don? make up more power~. fixed
  5. 01:03:470 (4) – add don? fixed
  6. 01:12:770 (57) - k? or 01:12:670 (56) - ? changed the former.
  7. 02:00:470 (296) – delete this? , unnecessary imo fixed
  8. 02:02:670 (308) - ^ not sound …? Nope. It pairs with 02:01:870 (303,304) - so that the patterns could be more balanced.
  9. 02:11:470 (355) – add don? fixed
  10. 02:17:370 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkddk? Or kkdkk ? changed to kkddk.
  11. 02:37:570 (129,130,131,132) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? more increasing vocal power. fixed
  12. 02:49:570 (165,166,167) – k,d,k? just my opinion. More smoother? Comparing 02:48:770 (164,166) - , 166 is higher-pitched than 164, so d k d is preferred.
  13. 03:17:570 (269) – finisher? fixed
  14. good Inner~ :D Nice to hear that~ :D

ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod JuDa~ :)
Q____X
Hello again here's my poor mod again

kantan
the diff it's fine

Futsuu
00:09:201 - d
00:15:570 - ^
00:51:970 (112) - D
02:02:370 (138) - D

Muzukashii
00:57:370 - d
00:57:570 (173) - move to 00:57:770 -
01:33:170 - d
01:34:970 - d
02:07:770 - d
02:07:970 (197) - move to 02:08:170 -
03:56:170 - d

Oni
03:56:170 - d
01:37:470 - maybe d

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Q____X wrote:

Hello again here's my poor mod again

kantan
the diff it's fine

Futsuu
00:09:201 - d Leaving a break here would be better.
00:15:570 - ^ ^
00:51:970 (112) - D As cymbal sound is absent, d is enough imo.
02:02:370 (138) - D ^

Muzukashii
00:57:370 - d fixed
00:57:570 (173) - move to 00:57:770 - fixed
01:33:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.
01:34:970 - d ^
02:07:770 - d fixed
02:07:970 (197) - move to 02:08:170 - fixed
03:56:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.

Oni
03:56:170 - d It is already a don.
01:37:470 - maybe d no change, as I want to make this Oni easier.

Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]

JUDYDANNY wrote:

To “Jikson"
[Jik’s Ura Oni]
  1. 1st playing~
  2. uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
  3. 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
  4. 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
  5. since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
  6. 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
  7. 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
  8. 00:53:870 (265) -^
  9. 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
  10. 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
  11. 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
  12. 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
  13. 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
  14. 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
  15. 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
  16. 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
  17. and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
  18. 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
  19. 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
  20. 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
  21. 03:28:770 (165) - k?
  22. 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
  23. 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.
ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck! :D
Almost all fixed, except some was changed in my own way to meet the mod. Thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/bd7A1/63d62c8365.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated!
K-2
Hi~
I'm Lunaris Filia, mapping beginner 8-)
I will do my best 8-)

Oni
00:09:570 d k d k
00:53:170 d k d k d
03:36:770 k

Inner Oni
How about moving 00:08:770 -> 00:08:570? (I think it sounds suitably)
00:30:770 k d k (I think snare sound is appropriate)
01:33:370 d
01:33:570 delete
01:33:770 d (I think it sounds suitably)
01:39:170 k d k k or k d d k ?
02:18:770 d
02:37:370 k
03:14:170 k (I think snare sound is appropriate)
03:14:770 d

Jik's Ura Oni
00:15:170 delete
00:15:370 k d k d kkd ?
01:11:770 d
01:11:970 move to 01:12:170
01:44:770 I think this spinner is too short.
02:47:970 k

u's is so great!
Septembre
Oni : 00:08:170 (31) - out of rythm I think
and maybe add note here : 00:08:370 (32) -

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