pieguy1372 wrote:

[Servant x Akareh]
soft claps seem too loud for most of the song for me @_@ for example, start ~ 00:27:879 - and 00:29:479 ~ 00:40:679 - try using soft whistle or normal-hitnormal instead, clap every 1/1 sounds weird, same goes during the kiai o.o imo it's best to use claps to carry the beat and not to match vocals or other instruments, in this case add clap on 2nd and 4th beats in a measure is fine... I lowered the sound volume of the hitsounds, I really suck at placing them so I'll leave it as is until someone gives more accurate suggestions on this. Thanks for checking, tho.
00:29:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is really unexpected 0.0, perhaps try this rhythm http://puu.sh/3Gsnz.jpg Fixed
01:24:979 (2,3) - maybe try using jump here, it's the end of the song so it might fit It would fit, but I think that stack there also fits well for the ending, no change, sorry.

pieguy1372 wrote:

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hi, from my queue

[Normal]

1. spacing is weird, it's mostly fine but some parts are spaced wrong e.g. 00:00:679 (1,2,3) - is too close, 00:02:279 (4,5) - this 1/1 is farther than all the others, 00:26:279 (2,3,4,5) - not equidistant, etc. go through and fix spacing plz Fixed
2. no hitsounds, add hitsounds plz. for example soft finish would fit places here 00:03:079 (5) - where there's a cymbal or places like 00:19:479 (4) - where there's more emphasis on a certain note. try looking at some ranked maps to see the use of hitsounds there and creating something like that.. Done. Added soft-hitclap & soft-hitwhistle

00:58:279 (4) - add NC Done
01:14:679 (7) - add NC to match the next part Done
01:24:679 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are too hard to get for newbies, use a repeat slider instead plx Ok

[Hard]
same spacing & hitsound problem as [Normal], btw I recommend 1.1x or 1.2x spacing for this diff Ok, 1.2x it is
00:24:479 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3Gs0f.jpg use this rhythm plz, the way it is now is really unnatural Agreed
00:47:079 (1) - http://puu.sh/3Gs2v.jpg ? Yep. Also agree
00:54:179 (9) - move 1/4 earlier then add note at 00:54:479 - ? Yeah. Sounds better
00:58:279 (4) - add NC for new section Done
01:19:279 (5) - remove 1 repeat and add note at 01:19:879 - plz, feels more natural to play imo Okey dokey

[Insane]
same hitsound problem as [Norma] & [Hard] Added. Same with other diffs
most of the jumps are pretty good, but if you're not using a jump it's good to keep a consistent spacing like 00:04:279 (2,3) - is spaced too close, 00:26:879 (2,3) - too close, 00:45:279 (7,8,9) - is too far (not sure if that's intended jump or not but you've got the idea), plz go and fix it. ofc keep any notes you intended to be jumps, most of the jumps are pretty fun Fixed all
00:35:879 (2) - this slider isn't comfortable to play, maybe make a stream here like the others? Done
00:45:479 (8,1) - switch NCs for new measure Done

[Servant x Akareh]
soft claps seem too loud for most of the song for me @_@ for example, start ~ 00:27:879 - and 00:29:479 ~ 00:40:679 - try using soft whistle or normal-hitnormal instead, clap every 1/1 sounds weird, same goes during the kiai o.o imo it's best to use claps to carry the beat and not to match vocals or other instruments, in this case add clap on 2nd and 4th beats in a measure is fine...
00:29:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is really unexpected 0.0, perhaps try this rhythm http://puu.sh/3Gsnz.jpg
01:24:979 (2,3) - maybe try using jump here, it's the end of the song so it might fit

hitsounds & also spacing in [Normal] & [Hard] can be improved a lot, hope this helps until then good luck ~

Thanks for the mod! Greatly appreciated

neonat wrote:

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General

servant x service and kayano ai do not need to be in the tags, they are already in the metadata (source and artist) Ok
If Ai Kayano, Mai Nakahara and Aki Toyosaki are all the singers for the song, why is Ai Kayano the only one in the Artist box? http://vimeo.com/69719362 Hence, 'et al.' I could add the others but then the title in osu would be rather long
You can put めいあいへるぷゆー? (TV Size) for the title. Meh
Akareh did a guest difficulty right? put Akareh into the tags to acknowledge the guest mapper Done

Hard

00:26:879 (7,8) - they are not directly below the end of 00:26:279 (6) Done
00:44:679 (6) - not covered as well Fixed
00:45:479 (10) - start the new combo here instead of 00:47:079 (1) Yup
00:48:679 (4) - NC here instead of 00:50:079 (1) Sure thing

Insane

00:01:679 (3) - this note is not following any music, it should be move to 000:01:579 where the vocal is Sure
00:11:379 (4) - not perfectly hidden Fixed. I think...
00:23:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the stream evenly spaced Was distance snapped but I moved it a little
00:39:079 (2) - NC here instead of 00:38:679 (1) Done
01:06:279 (2) - add a whistle for more emphasis Ok
01:06:679 (4) - ^ Yep
01:07:079 (1) - ^ on the start of the slider Yep
01:08:879 (3) - move to 01:08:779 - the vocals are here instead of where it is now Fixed

Servant x Akareh

00:49:079 (3) - shorten to end at 00:49:379
00:49:679 (5) - move to start at 00:49:479 and end at 00:49:679 and remove the clap at the end of slider
00:49:579 (4) - shift to 00:49:879 and put a clap
Nice difficulty

Good luck

Thanks for the mod neonat! Quite helpful

neonat wrote:

Servant x Akareh

00:49:079 (3) - shorten to end at 00:49:379
00:49:679 (5) - move to start at 00:49:479 and end at 00:49:679 and remove the clap at the end of slider
00:49:579 (4) - shift to 00:49:879 and put a clap
Nice difficulty

Good luck

Deni wrote:

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Hi, Random Mod!

unrankable: You must fix this for the rankability of your map
bolded: strong suggestion
normal: suggestion
italic: comment

General

I don't think this difficulty spread is rankable. Consider adding an easy difficulty. I'll try to get one

I can hear that you used hitsounds at good spots but at some parts there are none. Try to add some more!

Your combo colours are inconsistent. If this is not intended, fix it! Fixed. That's weird...

Inconsistency in combo colours

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 234,255,0
Combo3 : 127,255,0
Combo4 : 255,0,0

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 234,255,0
Combo3 : 127,255,0
Combo4 : 255,0,0

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 234,255,0
Combo3 : 127,255,0
Combo4 : 255,15,15

- [Servant x Akareh] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 234,255,0
Combo3 : 127,255,0
Combo4 : 255,0,0

Your tags are inconsistent too, they have to be the same in every difficulty! Fixed. I don't know what happened there. Something must've happened when copying over the japanese

Akareh wrote:

Backgrounds should be either 800x600 or 1024x768.

It's not like that anymore, backgrounds can now have a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Even using images with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

Easy

Imo Grid Level 4 is the best for mapping. Consider using it while mapping.

1. 00:01:879 (3,4) - The transition between these two is not so well done, you can improve it by moving (4) up and rotating (4) ->(CTRL;SHIFT;R) a little bit to the left (Selection Centre). Don't forget to move the next slider (5) too. Like this: (Example in Box) Yep. Fixed
   
   Pattern Example

   
   
   
2. 00:03:079 (5) - A finish at the end of this slider would fit much more than the clap imo. You can hear there's also a finish in the music! Ok
   
3. 00:13:079 (1) - Clap at the end of this slider will fit pretty well because you used it at the end of 00:08:679 (1) - this spinner too. Agreed. Accidentally missed this one
   
4. 00:21:479 (2,3,4,5) - This plays and looks linear, why don't you try to make this more exciting and creative by moving these objects a bit? Like this for example: (Example and Coordinates in Box) Alright, fair enough
   
   Pattern Example 2

   
   
   (2) is at x:104 y:320 ; (3) at x:196 y:280 ; (4) at x:124 y:212 ; (5) at x:304 y:216
5. 00:26:279 (3) - Consider moving this slider a bit to the left (x:76 y:220) for a better spacing / flow. Done
   
6. 00:30:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty much the same as mentioned at 00:21:479 (2,3,4,5) - . They are all in a row, try to make it more creative and fun to play! Ok
   
7. 01:24:679 (1,2,3) - I found these 3 circles difficult to hit since there's no real rhythm anymore. 01:24:679 (1,2) - Swapping these two circles with a slider from 01:24:679 - to 01:25:279 - will work! Agree. Easier diffs really limit things..

Hard

You've mapped a lot to the voice, would be better if you mapped a bit more to the instruments.
A consistent spacing would improve this difficulty a lot. Usually you just turn distance spacing off for jumps or special parts.

1. 00:03:079 (5) - Finish at the end of this slider will fit much more than the clap. You can here that there's a finish in the song! Done
   
2. 00:07:079 (6,7) - Distance between them is too short imo if you compare it to the previous spacing. Increase it to around 1.20x. It will play better. Roger
   
3. 00:14:279 (2,3,4) - The spacing of them looks and plays a bit weird. Why don't you just use a normal pattern like this: (Example in Box) Fixed
   
   Pattern Example

   
4. 00:15:279 - to 00:16:479 - Why such a random gap here? Fill it with some hitobjects or a spinner. Leaving a gap will break the rhythm. And it's not like there's nothing in that gap you could map to. Ok, added spinner. Though I originally thought the spinner would be too quick
   
5. 00:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is very inconsistent in this part. It could confuse the player because they all have the same distant in the rhythm. Would be better if you move them with Distance Snap enabled for a consistent spacing. Like I did here: (Example in Box with DS: ~1.20x) Fixed
   
   Spacing Example

   
   
6. 00:28:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's like the reverse of 00:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - . You made the spacing look consistent but you have to hit the circles in a different rhythm each time. It's confusing especially between 00:28:279 (2,3) - these two. Try to map more with distant snap enabled, I would only turn it off for jumps in a Hard difficulty. Fixed
   
7. 00:39:079 (6,7) - The overlap between them doesn't look good. Something like this will play and look a lot better: (Example and Instruction in Box) Ok
   
   Pattern Example 2

   
   Take the first slider, press CTRL+C, CTRL+V then you have it again. After that press CTRL+H , CTRL+J then move it with Distance Snap enabled and you have the same pattern as shown in the picture.
8. 00:55:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This might be too insane for a Hard difficulty. If someone else mentions this consider making it easier. Hmm. Have to challenge people somehow
   
9. 00:58:279 (1) - The finish at the end of this slider doesn't fit very well. Removing would be better. Oops my mistake.
   
10. 00:57:479 (3,1) - Again, why is the distance between them so close? Consider increasing it to around 1.00x ~ 1.20x Fixed
    
11. 01:03:879 (5,1) - They are overlapping which doesn't look so well. Shaping (1) like this: (Example in Box) would fix the problem and look and play a lot better. Alright
    
    Slider Example

    

Sorry, I have to go so I can't finish this mod now. Will finish it tomorrow don't worry!

Deni wrote:

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Part 2 of my first mod.

unrankable: You must fix this for the rankability of your map
bolded: strong suggestion
normal: suggestion
italic: comment

General

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Thanks so much modding even though I didn't contact you! Helps a great deal

I'll give kd when you say it's finished

Ok. Don't give me kudosu for both parts, only for my first modding part.

Insane

I really suggest you to remove the unnecessary stacks and streams I mentioned. I know some people do that and get their map ranked but I think it's just overmapped sometimes and people should map to the music and not to anything else.

1. 00:03:579 (4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't fit at all, it's not mapped to the song. Consider removing it and swapping it with something else if you don't want your map to be overmapped. Fixed. Deleted 4, 5, 6. Same with end part of song.
   
2. 00:03:879 (7) - A finish at this position would fit much more than the clap imo. You can hear there's also a finish in the music! Ok
   
3. 00:04:679 (3,4) - The end of the slider and the following circle are not perfectly stacked, if this is not intended fix it.Ok, tried
   
4. 00:09:679 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - The combo'ing at this stream is a bit strange, I would add a NC at 00:09:679 (6) - and remove the NC from 00:09:879 (1) - this circle. Will play and look much better! Fixed
   
5. 00:31:079 (2,3) - I think I know what you wanted to do here, but moving (3) a bit up / to the left -> x:36 y:256 will look and play better! (Example in Box) Agreed, thanks
   
   Pattern Example

   
6. 00:39:079 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could look better if you move them a bit apart so that they are not overlapping strange anymore, like this: (Example in Box) Indeed, looks much better
   
   Pattern Example 2

   
   
   
   You can make it look like this if you just enable your Distance Snap with 1.2x.
7. 00:44:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, these two stacks aren't mapped to the music! Putting random stacks and streams in a map makes it overmapped, which is not good. I know some people do this and get their map ranked, but maps should be mapped to the music. Not to anything else.
   You can fix this by deleting the circles on the blue tick here. Fixed
   
8. 00:57:679 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pretty much the same with this stream as mentioned above. Only map to the beat/voice you can hear. There was some xylophone or something there, but deleted anyway. Plays better.
   
9. 01:02:279 (5,6,7,8,9) - This stream & slider combination would actually fit to the music if you delete 01:02:379 (6) - . After you did that, move 01:02:479 (6,7,8) - a bit apart from (5). This would be more enjoyable to play. Done
   
10. 01:08:779 (3) - I think this circle should be on the red tick instead of the blue because your current version would confuse the player -> between 01:08:079 (2,3) - them there's also a little gap so the player will automatically hit 01:08:779 (3) - this circle later. It was originally like that, then someone suggested to change it. I'll change it back like you said (also at the start of the song).
    
11. 01:17:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is almost correct, the first circle has to be at the blue tick before ( 01:16:979 - ) and then it would fit perfectly to the music. But don't forget to move the circles after the first one a bit apart. Fixed
    
12. 01:23:479 (4) - This slider doesn't fit quite well to the rhythm in the song. Consider deleting it and placing the following objects there:
    01:23:379 - Circle
    Slider from 01:23:579 - to 01:23:679 - .
    This will fit perfectly to the music. All fixed!

That's it! Please think about every suggestion I made.

If you have any question just ask me ingame or via forum pm!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

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Mod~

[Easy]
So Bad plz remap it

[Normal]
00:03:879 - Why Break?
Where your Hitsound?
01:09:079 (3,5) - overlap

[Hard]
00:12:079 (5,6) -
00:21:279 (2) - Delete NC And add NC on 00:21:079 (1) -
01:01:479 (1,4) - Overlap they
01:04:679 (1) - blanket
01:19:879 (6) - Add NC
01:20:479 (1) - Delete NC
01:20:679 (2) - Add NC

615915887 wrote:

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let's continue

M4M(Although you have already mod my map )

Is this a new anime from A1 picture?

General
Disable count down because your lead in is too short.

Normal
Maybe the CS is too small for a normal diff
the DS have to be opened all the time,I'm not sure the small break like 00:19:879 to 00:21:079 should follow the distance or not,i'm not expert at this
00:18:279(2) better not stack in Normal diff especially ANIME songs
01:08:479(2) ^
01:09:479(4) ^
01:13:479(5) ^
00:10:279 the spinner is too close to the next hit object in Normal diff
01:17:479 ^
the rest of the map is good

Hard
00:04:679 (2) make this more away from the previous one
00:05:679(1) ^
00:07:079(6) NC(maybe)
00:10:679(1) make this more away from the previous one
00:13:479(9) Since this diff hasn't got a fixed distance per beat,better stack with the previous one
00:21:079(7) Move it to 256,60 (sorry my puush doesn't work)
00:28:679(3,4,5) it might be confusing just stack 2 of them
00:50:879(2) too close from the previous
00:55:379(3,4) maybe exchange them is better
01:11:879(2) make this more away from the previous one
01:13:479 (3) ^
01:24:679 (2) ^
01:14:279 (6) NC

regret my bad english

Insane
don't expect a good mod on insane,i'm not good at it
00:16:879 (3) move it to 256,128
00:19:479 (4) ctrl + g
00:23:279 (3) move it to 92,152
00:26:679 (1) stack on the end of the slider
00:46:479 (4,5,6,7) a little bit confusing, maybe a square is better

that's all
good song and good map

Deni wrote:

Part 2 of my first mod.

unrankable: You must fix this for the rankability of your map
bolded: strong suggestion
normal: suggestion
italic: comment

Servant x Akareh

1. 00:08:879 (1) - This drum-thingy in the background isn't actually a consistent stream. It would be good if you could change this part into something else but it's not that important. I think this one is fine
   
2. 00:15:279 (1) - Same goes with this stream. You can clearly here that for example at 00:15:379 (2) - this circle that there's not even a hit in the song. That where the drum starts o.O
   
3. 00:24:379 (7,8) - Delete these two circles since they are not mapped to anything in the music. ok
   
4. 00:31:079 (10) - What about adding a new combo here as you did at 00:34:279 (1) - ? ok
   
5. 00:45:379 (10) - Deleting this circle would fit better to the music/rhythm imo. ok
   
6. 00:56:579 (9) - I don't see a reason to place this circle here. Consider deleting it. ok
   
7. 01:00:979 (10) - Same as mentioned at 00:45:379 (10) - . There's no hit at this position. ok, changed the pattern also a bit.
   
8. 01:04:279 (10,11,12,13) - A wild stream appears! Doesn't fit to the music again. tweaked up a bit.
   
9. 01:07:279 (9,10,11) - Just for example, this stack fits because there's actually a little melody in the song that it's mapped to.
   
10. 01:16:079 (1) - Same as mentioned at 00:08:879 (1) - . same as mentioned there
    
11. 01:22:479 (1) - Same as mentioned above. ^

That's it! Please think about every suggestion I made.

If you have any question just ask me ingame or via forum pm!

Chronotakular wrote:

[Servant x Akareh]
-I can pass this map, it's a bit easier than insane in my opinion, but don't expect anything great from this mod as well.

The four long chains (I'm normally pretty good at chains) in this song (00:08:879, 00:15:279, 01:16:079, and 01:22:479) might be just a little too far apart note to note. I really do mean just a little. 0.1 back on the distance snap would be perfect, for me anyways. I'll consider this but since it' perfect for me I won't change it yet

00:11:679 (6) I would move either this, or the slider after it to a different location, due to the small break. I think it fits well creating an antijump there.
00:26:279 (7,8) This part is really hard. Consider doing something like this, to make it just a little bit easier: Fixed, but changed it a little.
00:36:879 (7) Due to the amount of stacks already here, this note is extremely hard to read. I didn't even know it was there until around my sixth or so play through. nah, that's fine.
01:06:079 (5) I have no idea why, but this note was throwing me off a lot. Perhaps move it off the slider? That's perfect for me, but I'll consider it.
01:12:479 (5) Same as the 00:11:679 comment. Same comment as above.
01:24:979 (2,3,4,5,6) Consider moving these notes off of the stack. Commented on another mod, I think it fits well right there for the ending.

Well, that's all I have for you. This was my first mod, so as long as one of my suggestions is taken, consider me a happy camper! Thanks again for your mod!

Chronotakular wrote:

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Thanks for modding my map! As promised, here I am, returning the favor!
I am also new, so don't expect much as well!

[Easy]
00:55:679 I feel like this spinner isn't here for very long. This might be difficult for new players. Something to think about.

[Normal]
I played this 12 times (yes, I counted) and with the current version, I didn't have a problem hitting any of the notes. Nothing struck me as off beat or odd.

[Hard]
Just a suggestion (Heck, I guess all of these are suggestions), but at some of the more intense parts, such as 00:17:579, instead of using two quick circles, consider a small slider.

00:00:679 (1,2,3) Consider moving these further apart.
00:54:479 (10,11,12) These are hard to read. Consider un-stacking them, perhaps?
00:55:479 through 00:56:679 is extremely hard to read. I think is due to the notes all being in a circle with no clear direction. [After playing this a few times more, I got the hang of it, however, it is still something you might want to consider.]
01:07:879 (1,2,3) The sliders at the beginning of the song have the same issue as the ones here, these are, if anything, a bit worse, due to the sudden change in the beat.
01:19:279 (3,4,5) The slider (5) has a similar spacing to notes 3 and 4, due to the similar gap, I found myself hitting it early a lot of the time.

[Insane]
-This is just out of my skill range, but I gave it a shot anyways

00:34:079 - 00:35:679 Again, this could be me being bad at this game (hehe), but you might want to consider making the gap between the notes that are in the center, and the notes that are not in the center, consistently smaller.
00:40:879 (1,2,3) This is a pretty big gap, which is fine. However, there is a smaller gap from note 2 to 3, as well as a break, and this caused me to normally hit note 3 early. So, might I suggest making the gap between notes 1 and 2 smaller, and/or the gap from note 2 to 3 bigger.
01:17:679 (1) This note was throwing me off. I guess I subconsciously expect a small break after the clap before it. Consider removing it?

[Servant x Akareh]
-I can pass this map, it's a bit easier than insane in my opinion, but don't expect anything great from this mod as well.

The four long chains (I'm normally pretty good at chains) in this song (00:08:879, 00:15:279, 01:16:079, and 01:22:479) might be just a little too far apart note to note. I really do mean just a little. 0.1 back on the distance snap would be perfect, for me anyways.

00:11:679 (6) I would move either this, or the slider after it to a different location, due to the small break.
00:26:279 (7,8) This part is really hard. Consider doing something like this, to make it just a little bit easier:
00:36:879 (7) Due to the amount of stacks already here, this note is extremely hard to read. I didn't even know it was there until around my sixth or so play through.
01:06:079 (5) I have no idea why, but this note was throwing me off a lot. Perhaps move it off the slider?
01:12:479 (5) Same as the 00:11:679 comment.
01:24:979 (2,3,4,5,6) Consider moving these notes off of the stack.

Well, that's all I have for you. This was my first mod, so as long as one of my suggestions is taken, consider me a happy camper! Thanks again for your mod!

1. 00:00:879 (1) - start at 00:00:679 - For Easy, 1/2 start is a little confusing
2. 00:04:679 (1,2) - the following rhythm is better, I think
   
3. 00:26:279 (1) - awkward shape? How about the following?
   
   SPOILER

   

   212,280,26279,6,0,B|155:236|97:280|97:280|106:208|36:177,2,250,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:54:279 (1,1) - How about this?
   
5. 01:13:879- add a note
6. 01:15:879 (3) - end at 01:17:079

1. CS -1, HP AR OD -1~-2
2. 00:01:279 (2) - move to 00:01:479
3. 00:57:879 (3,1) - avoiding stack is better
4. 01:08:479 (2) - move to 01:08:679

1. HP AR -1
2. 00:20:479 (4,5,6,1,2) - it is hard to see because notes are concentrated. I recommend to remap it
3. 00:28:879 (4,5) - avoiding stack is better
4. 00:34:279 (1,2,3,4,1) - How about regular pentagonal pattern?
   
   SPOILER

   

   344,280,34279,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   400,106,34679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   457,281,35079,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   309,173,35479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   492,173,35879,5,4,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:54:179 (9,10,11,12) - avoiding stack is better, I think
6. 01:00:479 (8) - move to 01:00:379

1. 00:54:879 (4,2) - stack correctly

1. 00:05:679- clap
2. 00:06:879 (10) - ^
3. 00:07:479- ^
4. 00:08:479 (5) - ^
5. 00:12:279- ^
6. 00:13:279 (4) - ^
7. 00:14:879 (9) - ^
8. 00:55:579- ^
9. 00:56:479- ^
10. 00:56:679- ^
11. 01:13:079 ^
12. 01:15:679 (5) - ^
13. 01:19:479- ^
14. 01:20:479 (9) - ^
15. 01:22:079- ^
16. 01:25:879 (6) - ^

RandomEffect wrote:

Mod

From my queue~

[Normal]

1. CS -1, HP AR OD -1~-2 HP -1
2. 00:01:279 (2) - move to 00:01:479 Doesn't really work for me.
3. 00:57:879 (3,1) - avoiding stack is better Ok
4. 01:08:479 (2) - move to 01:08:679 Same as before.

[Hard]

1. HP AR -1 I think it's fine. I won't change unless someone else says otherwise.
2. 00:20:479 (4,5,6,1,2) - it is hard to see because notes are concentrated. I recommend to remap it Altered slightly.
3. 00:28:879 (4,5) - avoiding stack is better Sure
4. 00:34:279 (1,2,3,4,1) - How about regular pentagonal pattern? Moved around a bit.
   
   SPOILER

   

   344,280,34279,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   400,106,34679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   457,281,35079,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   309,173,35479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   492,173,35879,5,4,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:54:179 (9,10,11,12) - avoiding stack is better, I think Fixed
6. 01:00:479 (8) - move to 01:00:379 Maybe not.. it use to be like this.

[Insane]

1. 00:54:879 (4,2) - stack correctly Fixed.

Nice song!
~Good Luck~

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

1. Maybe, Kiai Time is a same any difficult.
2. add kiai time? (your choice.)00:03:879 ~ 00:16:479 Maybe not.
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888089 too small Character. I don't want the combo burst pics to be obstrusive

Normal

1. Check Distance.
2. 00:28:679 (5) - move (212,72) Fixed
3. 00:29:079 (6) - move (284,136) (288, 136)
4. 00:45:479 (1) - NC. Ok
5. 00:54:279 (5) - move y-152. Done
6. 00:57:879 (3) - move (360,40) It's fine

Hard

1. 00:54:179 (9) - NC. Meh

Insane

1. 00:03:879 (4,1) - "4" note. NC. "1"note remove NC. Hmm. Seems fine though.
2. 00:21:479 (2,3) - overlap. Fixed
3. 00:57:679 (4,5) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888068 Tweaked. But didn't use star formation.
4. 01:16:979 (4) - remove NC. I think NC helps here.

kelvinli wrote:

Mod

Hi. M4M Request

[General]
Carefully look at the diff names below

[Insane]
It is bland to play this diff without/a few hitsounds, especially when they can be attended while they did not.Your choice of whistle is fantastic, but I can hardly see you using it anywhere
00:04:679 (3) - Extend it by a blue tick feels better imo Nah. It's the same for the rest of the song. The end of the slider gets the drum in.
00:04:279 (2,3,4) - Might try on this pattern, it has a double oval flow(Remember to shape the sliders):

SPOILER

00:05:879 (3,4) - Minor overlaps here, you'd better space them out or make them curved Fixed.
00:07:479 (4,5) - The formation of these two doesn't look good. Maybe parallel? Changed into curves.
00:09:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Re-arrange the streams so they are more close to a curve. Fixed.

SPOILER

00:11:679 (5,6,7) - you'd better keep their spacing identical, since the lyrics/ba-ba thingy does not suggest a jump Ok, my bad.
00:18:679 (2) - Ctrl+G for this one, plays more natural Ok.
00:39:879 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for these two for the same sake as above. You might also want to reflect 00:40:879 (1,2,3,4,5) horizontally if you want No to both.
00:55:779 (1) - I don't see any reason to NC this. Remove it? I think it helps!
00:57:079 (1,2,3,4) - you can make it inclined to snap out from generic squares- Fine as is.

SPOILER

01:19:879 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for (3) and then move (4) at the end of (3)'

[Hard]
This diff is way more intuitive. However it is still bland with the lack of hitsounds
OD +1? Done.
Tick rate -1, I don't the reason of being 2 Fixed.
00:05:679 (1,2,3) - The player might have a hard time to click on circles on the edges. Not necessary to move them, though
Due to the way you mapped the beginning, you could add a whole lots of sliders and make sliders patterns. Some of below will mention it.
00:06:279 (3,4) - How about this? Fixed.

SPOILER

00:07:879 (6) - Just try to stay away from edges Tweaked a bit.
00:11:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - Circles on blue tick is weird. With the patterns of the next 2 sliders, you may: It's fine as it is.

SPOILER

00:19:279 (4,3) - Because these two overlaps, you might consider moving the (latter)entire pattern away Tweaked.
00:20:079 (3,2) - ^, if you done so you would have abort the latter symmetrical pattern. But is still better over overlaps isn't it?
00:22:279 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing with others causes confusion Spaced 5 and 6 apart a little.
00:39:679 (7,8) - ^, even though it is not that confusing, it will look consistent anyway Fixed.
00:44:679 (6) - This hidden note is sort of unpredictable. Try the following? Fixed.

SPOILER

00:47:779 - add note? Ok.
00:55:779 (1) - unreasonable NC, like in Insane I think it helps.
01:00:479 (8) - snap this back by a blue tick It used to be like that, but just sounds weird.
01:00:679 (9,1) - Confusing spacing is confusing, there should not be any jumps around Ok.
01:04:679 (1) - Nazi, just do a little bit shaping: Perfect now.

SPOILER

01:12:479 (4) - Maybe it is just that I don't like right-angles. Anyway, move this to the right by some grids? Tweaked.
Or you might want to turn them into sliders
01:19:879 (1) - According to ranking rules no notes should be hidden under slider reverse Really? Didn't know that. Fixed anyway.

[Normal]
Still, hitsounds
Tick Rate -1 Fixed.
00:05:479 (4,3) - minor overlaps, still space them for god's sake Sorry...
00:24:279 (1) - Avoid edges especially in Normal/Easy diffs They can deal with it.
00:51:879 (1,2,3,4) - It might be too harsh for weaker players since they are not adapted to 1 1/2 distance. Sliders instead? Leave this for now.

Nice

Ignore if you don't feel good about any of them
Good Luck

CPLs wrote:

why don't type the artist name all to artist column? it's not too long anyway (only 3 is ok)

vahn10 wrote:

M4M

General Things

00:58:279 - first kiai starts Fixed. This was only an issue for [Normal]
01:07:679 - remove kiai endI think the end of kiai time is justified here

Normal

00:55:079 (6) - Turn this into a spinner Ok. Fixed.

1. Do not follow the vocal to make the whole map, it's boring and lack interests
2. Try to make arrangement more beautiful, like this (example from Hard diff)
   
   SPOILER

   blanket
   
   
   trangle
   
   
   five-pointed star
   
3. Make good use of slider
4. You can consult other maps (like wcx19911123's maps)
5. reduce the overlap of note

Azure wrote:

...

Hello, from popner's modding team
cute song :3

[General]
well..here, I want to give you some suggestions :

1. Do not follow the vocal to make the whole map, it's boring and lack interests I actually think the converse is true... as long as you still take into account the beat. The hit sounds prove it. Also, there are no instruments playing during the first part of each verse.
2. Try to make arrangement more beautiful, like this (example from Hard diff) Fair enough. Moved some things around.
   
   SPOILER

   blanket
   
   
   trangle
   
   
   five-pointed star
   
3. Make good use of slider
4. You can consult other maps (like wcx19911123's maps)
5. reduce the overlap of note

Your hitsound is good ->

send me form-pm when you check the following points, then I will mod it

apaffy wrote:

Mod

this show looks kind of weird awesome :3 from the video lol
also, from queue, etc
Colour-coded modding:

Red is unrankable. You must fix this.
Orange is highly suggested. These are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
Everything in normal black is personal opinion. You are free to take this advice or ignore it.

[Insane]
00:02:879 (1,2) - i don't think these really need to be there I think it's fine. I'll change it if someone else mentions it.
00:06:579 (5,6,7) - clap? Maybe, but works fine now.
00:10:279 (7) - new combo should be here instead of next note Fixed.
00:10:279 (7,1,2) - inconsistent spacing on 1 Huh?
00:11:879 (6) - NC? Maybe.
00:16:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is spaced inconsistently Fixed.
00:19:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo disable grid snap and manually stack What's the difference?
00:22:879 (7,1) - I don't think you need to jump away from 7, just use standard distance snap Fixed.
00:30:079 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing on 6 (notes proceeding it are all 1.04) Fixed.
00:32:279 (5,1) - Again, I don't think it's really necessary to jump away from the proceeding pattern. I just don't think the music warrants it. Fixed.
NC section

00:34:479 (1) - delete NC
00:34:679 (2) - NC
00:34:879 (1) - delete NC
00:35:079 (2) - NC
00:35:279 (1) - delete NC
00:35:479 (2) - NC
00:35:679 (1) - delete NC
00:35:879 (2) - NC Fixed all~

basically, just shift everything right one; think it would match the music better
01:03:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern plays kind of weird, but it would help if 5, 6, 7, 8 wasn't stacked It's fine for now.

other than that, looked alright
good luck~

CDFA wrote:

Mod

(\__/)
(='.'=)
(")_(")

Insane:
Just gonna make a general comment on the hitsounds, make sure the claps go on 2 and 4. It's also a bit hard to hear Ehh? Claps on 2and 4? Also, I think the claps are incredibly audible (to me anyway).

Hard:
Same comment with the hitsounds
01:03:879 (5) - Maybe CTRL + G on (5) and (6). With the way these jumps are placed, I'm expecting to move a different way in each jump, and I'm forcing myself to go to (5) Might consider changing.

Normal:
01:17:879 (1) - Consider maybe deleting this to give normal players more time in between the spinner and the next note Well this happens on more than one occasion in this diff. For now I'll leave it.

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

SPOILER

[Servant x Akareh]

1. 00:05:679- clap
2. 00:06:879 (10) - ^
3. 00:07:479- ^
4. 00:08:479 (5) - ^
5. 00:12:279- ^
6. 00:13:279 (4) - ^
7. 00:14:879 (9) - ^
8. 00:55:579- ^
9. 00:56:479- ^
10. 00:56:679- ^
11. 01:13:079 ^
12. 01:15:679 (5) - ^
13. 01:19:479- ^
14. 01:20:479 (9) - ^
15. 01:22:079- ^
16. 01:25:879 (6) - ^

Everything fixed here.

Losertic wrote:

SPOILER

Servant x Akareh

1. 00:26:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change pattern. umm... not good this song part. this part is fine for me
2. 01:14:879 (2) - move (144,136) ok
3. 01:15:079 (3) - move (155,264) ok
4. 01:25:879 (6) - add whistle. ok

kelvinli wrote:

SPOILER

Hi. M4M Request

[Servant x Akareh]
00:03:879 (7,1) - swap NC ok
00:10:079 (13) - move it downwards to enclose the circle It's like that on purpose
00:15:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'd say this stream is pretty hard to follow I can follow it fine, but I'll reduce the DS by 0.1x
00:21:479 (2) - Ctrl+G? So it flows directly without sudden turns ok
00:24:279 (6,1) - I don't understand the reasons of existence of this anti-jump. If you want to keep it anyway, add note @00:24:479 added note
00:27:679 (8,1) - ^ I don't understand what you mean here.
00:28:679 (3,4,5) - Why is 1/4 sliders ever needed here? Ordinary circles will do its work. I'll change this if someone else points it, but I see those fine.
00:41:479 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:48:279 (10) - Move this directly north to (9) to prevent the overlaps If I do that I'll break the pattern there, so no.
01:14:879 (2) - Stack with 01:13:779 (8) - ? ok
01:14:279 (1,3) - Stack them properly ok
01:16:479 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - still un-followable changed that stream and spaced the next notes a bit.
Good Luck [/notice][/box]

apaffy wrote:

SPOILER

[Servent x Akareh]
There's inconsistent distance snap all over this diff, so I sort of stopped noting them after a while

00:00:679 (1,2,3) - I know you've already got claps all over the map, but imo I would finish or clap all three of these I'll consider it.
00:04:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - There's some really inconsistent spacing going on here (and it's not like you're jumping or anything). I think i fixed it now.

1. 00:08:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The first three notes' distance snap are kind of off (like 1.14, 1.17, 1.19) might want to make those more even with the rest (1.21) that's weird, I distance snapped all streams but I'll resnap it.
2. 00:15:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

i dunno how I feel about 1.2x spaced streams but it's only 150 bpm so I guess it's not that bad.
00:10:079 (13) - The stream was a pretty circle then the last note looks really ugly this was on purpose, but I'll guess I'll change it.
00:10:279 (1) - inconsistent spacing here, not really necessary to jump away from that stream ok
00:10:679 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing, please pick a distance snap and stick with it ok
00:33:879 (6,7,8,1) - I dislike pause stacks like these, especially short pauses. I would not put 1 under 6,7, 8. That's fine
00:35:479 (4) - click on note two, ctrl-c, and then go to four's spot on the time line and ctrl-v, ctrl-h; you'll get a perfect horizontal mirror of note two ok
00:35:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't really like all this stacking here, but it would require remapping a lot of patterns so I'll leave it up to you I'll consider changing but I've seen those in a lot of maps so I don't see a problem with them.
00:39:079 (7,8) - these could interlock better, looks weird right now changed a bit
00:51:879 (1) - really dislike the pause; I would space it out nah, it's fine
01:16:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - the first two weren't bad but the spacing in this stream is all over the place, please fix it changed that pattern a bit on other mod, hope it's better now.
01:25:679 (4,5,6) - there's nothing really in the music to suggest that there should be a triplet here [/color]

CDFA's mod was already fixed on other mods, thanks anyway.


Tell me if I forgot someone's mod, please. diff here

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

[General Things]
Really, I'm in doubt about audio quality, although it's rankable (maybe due to the singer voices feels too underlying, but it's not in case). Well, it passed in my test and I approved.

[Rainbow's Easy]
00:39:079 (1,2) - I'm afraid with this transition here, since the player will be tempted to click the (2) a bit early (or as soon as it appears). Doing something like this >> http://puu.sh/3QEfQ.jpg << may help us prevent this.

[Normal]
♥ Nice. I'd tested in CtB too.

[Hard]
* Fine too. Just feel you may replace some triplets -- like 00:16:679 (1,2,3) -- with kick sliders like this -- http://puu.sh/3QEJ2.jpg (the one at bottom right, with the arrow)

00:42:979 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - This part could have a better flow if:
→ make 00:41:679 (4,5,4,5) like this >> http://puu.sh/3QEVh.jpg
→ make 00:44:679 (6,7,8,9) like this >> http://puu.sh/3QEWw.jpg and
→ make 00:45:479 (1,2) like this >> http://puu.sh/3QEYy.jpg (with 00:45:479 (1) at same position as 00:45:079 (8) )

00:55:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Movements (flow) seems a bit confusing/complex here. You could also play with 1/4 sliders here imo.

[Insane]
00:31:879 (4) - Move to x:124 y:160 and ...
00:32:279 (5) - ...move to x:124 y:152 for a bit more symmetrical pattern with the prior ones at 00:31:079 (2,3)

00:39:079 (1,2,3,4) - A better flow if you:
→ grab this one 00:39:879 (3) and do Ctrl+G
→ grab this other 00:40:279 (4) and do Ctrl+G
→ make (3) overlap with (1) like this >> http://puu.sh/3QFxq.jpg << and
→ make (4) overlap with (2) like this >> http://puu.sh/3QFzk.jpg

[Servant x Akareh]
♥ Nice too